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Nakamura Meiko - Across the Destiny [OsuMania]

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richardfeder
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年6月4日 at 20:07:44

Artist: Nakamura Meiko
Title: Across the Destiny
Source: BALDRSKY DiveX "DREAM WORLD"
Tags: GIGA BALDR SKY L-Minatsu simple_star bruce
BPM: 126
Filesize: 9378kb
Play Time: 06:14
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dream World - 8Key (4.64 stars, 4902 notes)
Download: Nakamura Meiko - Across the Destiny
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thank you for your support!

Standard difficulty by Tsukuyomi rip 鸽了;w;

BG也忘记找了 先将就着用吧..

Dream World by me and Bruce. ☆12↓
00:00:000~02:25:274 me
02:25:274~03:49:084 Simple_star
03:49:084~05:26:227 me
05:26:227~06:14:032 Simple_star

Kinomi
Best song ever

儚い日々 积もっていく 【虚幻的流年 慢慢沉淀】
淡く広がる草原に 【蔓延在这片广阔的草原】
风が吹いて 胸に眠るドア叩く 【风儿吹过 由此叩响了沉睡的心扉】
今 辉きだす 散らばっていた 【现在 散发出的耀眼光芒】
思いつないていく 【唤起了心中的回忆】
强くないから一つになるために 【一定是为了变得更加坚强】
共に生きた证は瞳の奥 【与你一同存在的证明是这眼眸深处】
响いて焼け付いたままで 【传递的共鸣】
Search for self ただ伸ばしても 届かない光 【Search for self 即使伸手也触碰不到光芒】
震える唇 暖かな手がなぞって 【颤抖的嘴唇 温暖的手轻轻触碰】
Search for you 振り返るたび 胸缔め付けられてく 【Search for you 每每回首 内心的纠结】
梦の欠片が重なり合う世界で 【化为梦的碎片与这个世界相互重合】
风が揺らぎ 见上げた空 【清风拂过 抬头仰望天空】
必然を生きた道さえ 【去往必然存在的生活道路】
変わらぬ朝 いつもの声て目覚める 【一成不变的早晨 一如既往的被你叫醒】
ただ 时が経って 景色が去り 【只是 时间流逝 岁月变迁】
匂いも 残らない今も 【连味道也所剩无几 但现在】
なぜだか不思议と懐かしく 【不知为何如此强烈的怀念】
肿れた伤にふわりとベールをかけ 【用纱布轻轻的蒙好肿起的伤口】
痛みの焦燥を消した 【疼痛的焦躁早已消除】
Fly to the world 煌く翼 涙も束ねて 【Fly to the world 闪光的翅膀 连同泪水潸然而落】
いくつもの轨迹 残して次の空へと 【留下无数的轨迹 去往另一片天空】
Cry with pain 纺いだ勇気 振り绞り羽ばたいて 【Cry with pain 交织的勇气 化为力量展翅高飞】
时の狭间で声枯らして叫んだ 【在时间的缝隙中竭尽全力呼喊着】
「ほら」 移ろう空 【「看啊」 推移的天空】
融けて 揺れて 【在消融 在摇曳】
「ほら」 覆い隠す前に 解るでしょう? 【「看啊」 因为之前都遮蔽了 你懂了吧?】
「前へ」 逃さないで この一瞬 【 不要错过了「前方」 这一瞬间 】
そう 希望を手に 【是啊 希望就在手中】
Search for self 色褪せた梦 一人で见つめて 【Search for self 独自一人凝视这褪色的梦想】
渗む透明な 涙さえも乾いてく 【就连渗出透明的泪水 也快风干】
Search for you ただ探してた 二人で居たい理由を 【Search for you 为了寻找 两人在一起的理由】
伤を伴うその数だけ爱しい... 【伴随伤痛以及这些数不尽的爱...】
Search for self ただ伸ばしても 届かない光 【Search for self 即使伸手也触碰不到光芒】
震える唇 暖かな手がなぞって 【颤抖的嘴唇 温暖的手轻轻描绘着】
Search for you 触れ合う心 一つに融けあって 【Search for you 碰撞的心灵 一定能将其融化】
梦の欠片が重なり合う世界で 【化为梦的碎片与这个世界相互重合】
ここに记そう 轨迹を 【是的 留于此处的轨迹】
靡く风 乗せて消えた... 【随着风儿 直到消逝...】
Akasha-
I Love this song >w<
I wish I can join with you ><
Topic Starter
richardfeder

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

I Love this song >w<
I wish I can join with you ><
Thanks for you star >///<
Bruce
天国的STD(
Topic Starter
richardfeder

Simple_Star wrote:

天国的STD(
不急啊 反正mania BAT也都飞升了hhhhhh mod都不知道找不找的齐
Edit: 要不要再来一首啊ww
Bruce

richardfeder wrote:

Simple_Star wrote:

天国的STD(
不急啊 反正mania BAT也都飞升了hhhhhh mod都不知道找不找的齐
Edit: 要不要再来一首啊ww
来 都来 反正BAT美丽了 多屯点以后有用√
dosyeru
these are just suggestions.

column SP 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
richardfeder
  1. 00:00:513 (513|0) - remove?
  2. 00:15:036 (15036|0) - move to 00:15:274. I understand what's the purpose, but SP note at 00:15:274 is more understandable in playing.
  3. 00:15:989 - remove a note from these 3 notes? or add a note 00:16:465 ?
  4. 00:30:274 (30274|4,30512|6,30989|4,31227|6,31703|4,31941|6,32417|4,32655|6) - move these to the right by one column?
    these sounds are the same as 00:29:560 (29560|5,29798|7) -
  5. 00:37:536 (37536|2) - remove?
  6. 00:37:655 (37655|6) - move to the left by one?
  7. 01:20:274 (80274|4,80393|4) - move to 1
  8. 01:15:036 (75036|6,75274|6) - move to the left by one?
  9. 01:32:179 (92179|4) - move to 1?
  10. 01:32:655 (92655|2) - move to 3, and add a note at 6?
  11. 01:32:893 (92893|3) - move to 1
  12. 01:33:608 - add a note at 1?
  13. 01:37:893 - add a note at 1?
  14. 01:38:132 - ^
  15. 02:00:632 (120632|5) - move to 3?
  16. 02:01:346 (121346|4) - move to 3?
  17. 02:08:370 - add notes? I actually hear piano sounds here,
  18. 02:25:274 - add a note at SP to follow crash?


Simple_star
  1. 02:25:274 - add a note at SP to follow crash?
  2. 02:25:751 (145751|0) - move to 02:25:989 ?
  3. 02:26:227 (146227|0) - remove?
  4. 02:28:489 (148489|2) - move this to 1? I think there's no strong sound to map jack here
  5. 02:29:798 (149798|5) - move to 3 to follow piano pitch?
  6. 02:33:608 (153608|7) - move to 6? ^
  7. 02:41:465 (161465|5,161465|7) - move one of them to 1 or 3 to make a jack to follow bass drum?
  8. 02:42:417 (162417|0) - from here, move notes following snare drums at SP lane to 1 to 7 column, so that you can make contrast.
    first section (02:27:179 to 02:42:417) is low density of notes with scratch notes, but next section, from 02:42:417 to 02:57:655, is higher density of notes without SP notes. this is my preference tho.
  9. 02:56:822 - add a note at 2?
  10. 03:00:036 - add a note if you like to follow piano?
  11. 03:00:512 - add a note at SP to represent synth?
  12. 03:13:727 (193727|1) - move to 2?
  13. 03:13:727 (193727|3) - move to 5?
  14. 03:13:727 (193727|6) - move to 7?
  15. 03:26:346 - add a note at 4?
  16. 03:26:584 - ^?
  17. 03:29:560 - add a note at SP?
  18. 03:37:655 (217655|0) - remove?
  19. 03:44:917 - add a note at 5?
  20. 05:56:703 - add a note at SP
  21. 05:58:608 (358608|0) - move to 1?
  22. 06:00:512 (360512|0) - ^?
  23. 06:02:417 (362417|0) - move to 2?
  24. 06:04:322 (364322|0) - move to 1?
  25. 06:08:132 (368132|0) - move to 1?
    if these notes at SP follow piano sounds.
  26. 06:14:045 (374045|0) - remove?


some feedbacks from my BMS friends.
first half of this map follows music well, and some parts in next half of this map has challenging patterns that are really fun to play.
those differences make this map fun! they enjoyed playing <3
but some of them worried about its difficulty gap between first half and next half.
they suggested adding a little jacks if it's possible in 1st chorus, from 01:39:560 to 02:11:941.
so that the gap may be decrease.

all of my friends I asked test-play said this was well-designed. it is myself included <3
Topic Starter
richardfeder

dosyeru wrote:

these are just suggestions.

column SP 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
richardfeder
  1. 00:00:513 (513|0) - remove?OK
  2. 00:15:036 (15036|0) - move to 00:15:274. I understand what's the purpose, but SP note at 00:15:274 is more understandable in playing.yeah I understand your point but I still prefer current placement. I will make the change if more people point this out.
  3. 00:15:989 - remove a note from these 3 notes? or add a note 00:16:465 ?yes my fault! added
  4. 00:30:274 (30274|4,30512|6,30989|4,31227|6,31703|4,31941|6,32417|4,32655|6) - move these to the right by one column?
    these sounds are the same as 00:29:560 (29560|5,29798|7) -sure
  5. 00:37:536 (37536|2) - remove?nope. guitar+piano >,<
  6. 00:37:655 (37655|6) - move to the left by one?oh yes
  7. 01:20:274 (80274|4,80393|4) - move to 1x that's how we get rating 1 lol
  8. 01:15:036 (75036|6,75274|6) - move to the left by one?I move 01:15:036 (75036|5) -
  9. 01:32:179 (92179|4) - move to 1?piano goes like this:01:31:941 (91941|5,92179|4,92417|6,92655|2) - so no for pitch
  10. 01:32:655 (92655|2) - move to 3, and add a note at 6?^
  11. 01:32:893 (92893|3) - move to 1x
  12. 01:33:608 - add a note at 1?x actually only planning on mapping piano+crash here
  13. 01:37:893 - add a note at 1?
  14. 01:38:132 - ^yes both two is acceptable and looks fun \:D/
  15. 02:00:632 (120632|5) - move to 3?x
  16. 02:01:346 (121346|4) - move to 3?yes legit mini jack \:D/
  17. 02:08:370 - add notes? I actually hear piano sounds here, I don't think so I actually map this with accompaniment and I don't think there is piano sound :p
  18. 02:25:274 - add a note at SP to follow crash?yes!


some feedbacks from my BMS friends.
first half of this map follows music well, and some parts in next half of this map has challenging patterns that are really fun to play.
those differences make this map fun! they enjoyed playing <3
but some of them worried about its difficulty gap between first half and next half.
they suggested adding a little jacks if it's possible in 1st chorus, from 01:39:560 to 02:11:941.
so that the gap may be decrease.yeah sure. i rearrange some pattern in order to make the gap smaller. Thanks!

all of my friends I asked test-play said this was well-designed. it is myself included <3Thank you! <3
Thanks for your help! I really appreciate it >,<
imariL
Column 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[Dream World]

02:08:608 (128608|0) - delete or add note 0 at 02:09:560
02:27:060 (147060|0) - I don't think this note is necessary at here, delete this
03:09:798 - add at 0, you already added notes at 03:09:084 , 03:10:274 , and 03:10:751
04:41:822 (281822|3) - move to 1
05:41:465 - add at 0

[Across the Destiny]

Offset is wrong, Try to use 513, same offset with o!m. I used offset 513 when I modded this map, so please fix offset first.

00:03:370 (5) - Try to delete this note. If you delete this note, you should rearrange pattern this part
00:41:822 (7,8,9,10) - Not bad, but try to reduce each notes' distance

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
richardfeder

Chocoliti wrote:

Column 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[Dream World]

02:08:608 (128608|0) - delete or add note 0 at 02:09:560yes added
04:41:822 (281822|3) - move to 1x that's how we get rating 1 /me run
Thank you!
Bruce
Thanks Chocoliti and dosyeru~

Chocoliti:All Fixed

dosyeru:
06:00:512 (360512|0) - ^?
06:02:417 (362417|0) - move to 2?
06:04:322 (364322|0) - move to 1?
06:08:132 (368132|0) - move to 1?
if these notes at SP follow piano sounds.
06:14:045 (374045|0) - remove?
These are not fixed

Diff: http://puu.sh/9xz7b/d0330ccbfa.osu
Topic Starter
richardfeder
Update~
yoshilove
Draining time: 6:13 single diff plz don't bite me

meowwwwwwwww!!

(2min*6diff = 12min)
(6min*1diff = 6min) yey!!

column : 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
ok IIDX style

7+1
[Dream World]
00:00:513 (513|0) - remove ???? (~ I don't know this SPnote)
00:22:179 (22179|4) - move to 1 ~ 1bass 1bass!?!? 4?? do~suru?!?!?
00:53:608 - add note to 1
01:07:179 - ^
01:16:465 - ^

01:37:536 (97536|3,97655|5,97774|4) - remove? (It's sound is very small)
01:43:132 - add note to 1
01:58:370 - ^

03:14:679 (194679|3,194679|6,194798|2,194798|5) - remove? (It's sound is very small)

03:20:274 - add note to 1
03:35:512 - ^
03:43:132 - ^

04:59:798 - ^
05:12:655 - ^
05:29:798 - ^
05:42:655 (342655|1) - remove

wakaranai----- ><

EDIT :
Can't put all bass on 1 /.\ if I do so -> star rating 1 (run

aaaawww ok I see. ~~
Topic Starter
richardfeder

yoshilove wrote:

Draining time: 6:13 single diff plz don't bite me

meowwwwwwwww!!

(2min*6diff = 12min)
(6min*1diff = 6min) yey!!

column : 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
ok IIDX style

7+1
[Dream World]
00:00:513 (513|0) - remove ???? (~ I don't know this SPnote) yes btw why is it here /.\ already fixed by mod above I think
00:22:179 (22179|4) - move to 1 ~ 1bass 1bass!?!? 4?? do~suru?!?!?actually missing a bass here added on 1 www
00:53:608 - add note to 1x intentionally put it on 3
01:07:179 - ^
01:16:465 - ^

01:37:536 (97536|3,97655|5,97774|4) - remove? (It's sound is very small)sure
01:43:132 - add note to 1
01:58:370 - ^x ^

03:14:679 (194679|3,194679|6,194798|2,194798|5) - remove? (It's sound is very small)sure

03:20:274 - add note to 1
03:35:512 - ^
03:43:132 - ^x ^

04:59:798 - ^
05:12:655 - ^
05:29:798 - ^x ^
Can't put all bass on 1 /.\ if I do so -> star rating 1 (run

wakaranai----- >< ><
Thank you!

Edit:And Thank you guys for stars \:D/
shionelove
Hi~from queue
column S1234567

[Dream World]
00:07:893 (7893|3) - move to 2?
00:44:322 (44322|0,45036|0) - hmm this splash cymbal shouldn't S?
01:05:989 (65989|1) - move to 2
01:07:179 - add 1
01:07:893 (67893|0,68608|0) - delete
01:19:620 (79620|1) - delete
01:19:322 (79322|0) - delete?
01:23:846 (83846|1) - move to 2
01:29:798 (89798|0) - delete
01:38:846 (98846|0) - move to 01:39:084
01:52:774 - add 1
01:53:608 (113608|0) - delete or move to 01:53:846
02:01:941 (121941|1) - add S
02:10:632 (130632|3,130751|5,130870|4,130989|6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2046449
02:23:608 - add 1
02:48:132 (168132|0,168846|0,169322|0,169798|0) - delete?
02:56:941 (176941|3) - conflict 01:19:679 (79679|2,79739|3) -
03:06:108 (186108|1) - move to 6?
03:15:989 (195989|0) - move to 03:16:227
03:29:441 (209441|5,209798|6) - move to 6 7?
03:46:227 (226227|3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2046528(Insane Techniques style)
03:48:608 (228608|1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2046597 ?

Good Luck meow
Topic Starter
richardfeder

hutunohito wrote:

Hi~from queue
column S1234567

[Dream World]
00:07:893 (7893|3) - move to 2?x 3 is better imo
00:44:322 (44322|0,45036|0) - hmm this splash cymbal shouldn't S?I think it's OK tho
01:05:989 (65989|1) - move to 2sure
01:07:179 - add 1sure
01:07:893 (67893|0,68608|0) - deletex guitar
01:19:620 (79620|1) - deleteoh yea
01:19:322 (79322|0) - delete?nope cymbal tho sound a little bit small
01:23:846 (83846|1) - move to 2x
01:29:798 (89798|0) - delete^^
01:38:846 (98846|0) - move to 01:39:084 intro actually starts here but it comes to more audible at 01:39
01:52:774 - add 1x how we get rating one lol add at 2
01:53:608 (113608|0) - delete or move to 01:53:846 still cymbal
02:01:941 (121941|1) - add Sk
02:10:632 (130632|3,130751|5,130870|4,130989|6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2046449x 02:10:512 - no sound on the lame we are following actually
02:23:608 - add 1sure
02:48:132 (168132|0,168846|0,169322|0,169798|0) - delete?

Good Luck meow
Thank you!
pocket-Gao
哈咯PC哥0 0 std不会只能mod mania
Dream World
00:15:036 (15036|0) - 不明意图,这里我仔细听,把声音调超大都没听出什么东西....,移到00:15:751 这里吧
00:20:036 刚开始不要太难,况且你加了clap和whistle
00:24:917 加一note,摆成楼梯吧
00:35:393 听了好几遍,还是加一note连贯
00:43:489 (43489|5) - 没听出连贯的音(我耳朵不好吗> >?)
00:44:322 与 00:44:798 音想对应,感觉00:44:798 (44798|6,44798|1,44798|4,44798|7) - 这几个有点胡摆了
00:45:592 (45592|3,45671|2) - 这里6分拍改成从左到右的顺手随手楼梯吧,毕竟变拍了
00:49:917 加一到两个note,用不用连点随你的作图风格

01:16:703 (76703|5,76822|4,76941|3) - 感觉不适合楼梯,叉开摆放
01:19:858 加一note,推荐依然放在3道
01:21:465 (81465|2) - 与 01:21:584 很明显该摆成楼梯嘛...还是说我耳朵又坏了> >? :cry:
01:27:417 (87417|1) - 这里抓了前面为啥不抓....?
01:34:560 这一段该觉要调整下,比如6分拍啥的...?
01:36:822 到 01:37:298 不用楼梯吧....交替摆放感觉比较好些
01:41:584 和 01:41:822 加note连贯感觉打起来才爽
01:43:132 (103132|2,103132|4,103251|6) - 这里以往前的风格适当连点吧 相应01:42:893 (102893|5) - 移到第五道

02:06:227 到 02:07:060(02:08:132)把楼梯换成左右交替或对拍吧,全曲一个风格的楼梯摆放会有些疲劳感的
02:18:846 (138846|5,138846|1,138846|3,138965|4,138965|2,139084|1,139084|3) - 偏难了
02:39:084 这前后也感觉偏难了一丁点,把02:38:965 (158965|7,159084|5,159084|6) - 都向←移一个位置好读些吧
02:46:584 (166584|5) - 配合BG,移动到第四道,相应后面改一下
03:18:132 (198132|1,198370|1,198608|1,198846|1,199084|1,199322|1,199560|1,199798|1,200036|1) - 无名指好累啊 :cry: :cry:
02:50:036 到 02:50:512 难度是不是有点夸张了 :cry:
02:54:084 (174084|5) - 换到第四道吧,因为和后面没连贯desu

03:02:655 故意3个note吗?
03:05:989 (185989|1,186108|1,186227|1) - 移到4,6道如何?相应

04:26:941 (266941|7,267060|5,267060|6,267179|7) - 我想说这样摆会不会很卡手 :o
04:51:346 (291346|2) - & 05:23:727 (323727|2) - :大家好,我们是价值200分值的note哟 :) 想提升我的价值把排列改一下吧 8-)
05:31:346 加一note
05:38:965 和 05:39:203 请加note连贯
05:40:989 加音效
05:50:393 加一note
05:55:155 和 05:54:917 加note连贯.感觉乃后面漏了好多呢 :(

整个mod感觉混入很多个人的想法吧...基础也不行...总的来说我太渣了
没意义的就可以无视哈 :D
Topic Starter
richardfeder

pocket-Gao wrote:

哈咯PC哥0 0 std不会只能mod mania
[box=Dream World]00:15:036 (15036|0) - 不明意图,这里我仔细听,把声音调超大都没听出什么东西....,移到00:15:751 这里吧这个事intro
00:20:036 刚开始不要太难,况且你加了clap和whistle啊这里其实还好 音比较明显所以还是写了
00:24:917 加一note,摆成楼梯吧没音啦
00:35:393 听了好几遍,还是加一note连贯
00:43:489 (43489|5) - 没听出连贯的音(我耳朵不好吗> >?)00:42:417 (42417|4,42536|5,42655|6,42774|4,43132|4,43251|5,43370|3,43489|5) - 这些哦 你可以再听听看
00:44:322 与 00:44:798 音想对应,感觉00:44:798 (44798|6,44798|1,44798|4,44798|7) - 这几个有点胡摆了不一样的 明显的多了clap而且贝斯在往上走
00:45:592 (45592|3,45671|2) - 这里6分拍改成从左到右的顺手随手楼梯吧,毕竟变拍了x 一个是音高 还有一个是铺开了空间不够
00:49:917 加一到两个note,用不用连点随你的作图风格no 这个是绝对不加的

01:16:703 (76703|5,76822|4,76941|3) - 感觉不适合楼梯,叉开摆放01:16:703 (76703|5,76822|4,76941|3,77060|5,77179|4,77298|3,77417|5,77536|4,77655|3) - 这几个明显的3连必须是楼梯啊
01:19:858 加一note,推荐依然放在3道没音
01:21:465 (81465|2) - 与 01:21:584 很明显该摆成楼梯嘛...还是说我耳朵又坏了> >? :cry:
01:27:417 (87417|1) - 这里抓了前面为啥不抓....?如果说的是hithat的话有哦
01:34:560 这一段该觉要调整下,比如6分拍啥的...?...?哪里来的6分拍...?
01:36:822 到 01:37:298 不用楼梯吧....交替摆放感觉比较好些01:36:703 (96703|6,96703|4,97060|5,97060|7) - piano 这两个是fix的所以不可能调 而且现在这个颇顺手了
01:41:584 和 01:41:822 加note连贯感觉打起来才爽好吧非好说也是有音的 加了
01:43:132 (103132|2,103132|4,103251|6) - 这里以往前的风格适当连点吧 相应01:42:893 (102893|5) - 移到第五道这如何连点 之前连点都是吉他连点这里听不出来啦

02:06:227 到 02:07:060(02:08:132)把楼梯换成左右交替或对拍吧,全曲一个风格的楼梯摆放会有些疲劳感的x
02:18:846 (138846|5,138846|1,138846|3,138965|4,138965|2,139084|1,139084|3) - 偏难了低bpm小裤衩啦

04:26:941 (266941|7,267060|5,267060|6,267179|7) - 我想说这样摆会不会很卡手 :o 啊 放心 这个bpm不会的
04:51:346 (291346|2) - & 05:23:727 (323727|2) - :大家好,我们是价值200分值的note哟 :) 想提升我的价值把排列改一下吧 8-) 唔 我个人不是很想动这个

整个mod感觉混入很多个人的想法吧...基础也不行...总的来说我太渣了lol 不要虚
感谢!
Kawawa
Hello~

mania mod think about,

00:21:465 - S-key note move -> Leftshift
00:21:703 - ^
00:22:179 - ^
00:33:608 - Long note change (~00:34:322)
01:11:822 - Leftshift note move -> D
01:55:751 - S-key note move -> Leftshift
02:05:036 - Leftshift note move -> D
04:23:370 - 1add(Leftshift)
04:24:322 - ^
04:25:274 - ^
04:28:132 - ^
04:37:655 - ^
04:38:132 - Leftshift note move -> F
04:40:989 - 1add(Leftshift)
04:41:465 - ^
04:41:941 - ^
04:42:417 - ^
04:42:893 - ^
04:43:370 - ^
05:10:512 - ^

Finally, 02:35:751 - note_snap error
and, Source, tag check plz
ctrl+shift+A check it

Good luck XD
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