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Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera (TV Size)

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YoshinoSakura
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年5月9日星期五 at 22:43:46

Artist: Kon Natsumi
Title: Niji no Kakera (TV Size)
Source: 一週間フレンズ。
Tags: opening Isshuukan Friends. 615915887 One_Week_Friends
BPM: 132
Filesize: 20707kb
Play Time: 01:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.01 stars, 79 notes)
  2. Forever Friend (4.8 stars, 220 notes)
  3. Normal (3.55 stars, 102 notes)
Download: Kon Natsumi - Niji no Kakera (TV Size)
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一周的朋友,一生的炮友
/me runs >.<
Check ED by me.

(Skin)Special thanks for v72807647's skin and LZCSC's help!
ZZHBOY
615你好
[General]
第二个难度和第三个难度感觉难度差有些大 适当考虑增大第二个难度的难度
01:30:283 - 也许这里就可以结束了
[Non Friend]
00:12:556 (1) - 没必要用红描点而且影响flow和美观 像这样可能好些01:10:737 - add finish?
[One week friend]
00:28:465 (3,1) - 修一下blanket
00:30:737 (1,2) - ^
00:33:919 (3,1) - 不建议N难度里放这种排列...
01:10:737 - 建议finish因为后半段都是4拍一finish(思考
[Forever Friend]
00:13:237 (4,1) - 故意留小ds的话建议稍微让ds大一点点
00:26:647 (3) - 没有特殊需求就算是I也最好保持前后ds一致
00:27:101 (1,2) - 修下blanket
01:02:328 (2,3) - 没有特殊需求建议不要这种在不头不尾的地方overlap
01:10:737 - 建议finish理由同N
01:16:419 - 这里漏音比较明显
美丽
Mint
Hey~ from #modreq

[General]
lovely map :)
maybe add the tag "One Week Friends" (english name)


[Non Friend]
00:32:556 (3) - maybe face the other way for a better flow? http://puu.sh/8lz1E.jpg
SPOILER
428,180,32556,2,0,P|408:244|408:340,1,150,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[One Week Friend]
00:59:828 (1) - maybe move the last slider a bit to make a sort of blanket with 01:00:965 (2)

[Forever Friend]
01:02:328 (2,3) - i don't really like this overlap, change if you want i moved it to (x144,y344)
01:15:965 (4) - move to x256,y216 (blanket)

Great map! - sorry for my noob mod, hope it helped! ;)
Here's a star ~
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

ZZHBOY wrote:

615你好
[General]
第二个难度和第三个难度感觉难度差有些大 适当考虑增大第二个难度的难度 明天加大难度。今天累死惹
01:30:283 - 也许这里就可以结束了 准确计算结束时间
[Non Friend]
00:12:556 (1) - 没必要用红描点而且影响flow和美观 像这样可能好些爷爷我才学习的新滑条01:10:737 - add finish?木有必要
[One week friend]
00:28:465 (3,1) - 修一下blanket
00:30:737 (1,2) - ^ 唔。。这个太大了懒动
00:33:919 (3,1) - 不建议N难度里放这种排列...那怎么增加难度
01:10:737 - 建议finish因为后半段都是4拍一finish(思考 明明就是二分拍,而且根据音乐加
[Forever Friend]
00:13:237 (4,1) - 故意留小ds的话建议稍微让ds大一点点这个是手动计算stack你zz啊
00:26:647 (3) - 没有特殊需求就算是I也最好保持前后ds一致。。
00:27:101 (1,2) - 修下blanket
01:02:328 (2,3) - 没有特殊需求建议不要这种在不头不尾的地方overlap 抄梗
01:10:737 - 建议finish理由同N 同上
01:16:419 - 这里漏音比较明显 fixed
美丽

appleeaterx wrote:

Hey~ from #modreq

[General]
lovely map :)
maybe add the tag "One Week Friends" (english name) nice idea


[Non Friend]
00:32:556 (3) - maybe face the other way for a better flow? http://puu.sh/8lz1E.jpg nope
SPOILER
428,180,32556,2,0,P|408:244|408:340,1,150,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[One Week Friend]
00:59:828 (1) - maybe move the last slider a bit to make a sort of blanket with 01:00:965 (2) fixed

[Forever Friend]
01:02:328 (2,3) - i don't really like this overlap, change if you want i moved it to (x144,y344) sorry
01:15:965 (4) - move to x256,y216 pattern changed(blanket)

Great map! - sorry for my noob mod, hope it helped! ;)
Here's a star ~
thx for your mod and star~
Raisa12
Hi!
From #Modreqs

[Non Friend]

00:50:965 (3) - suggestion,and if you just put a simple slider here, it would be easier for beginners I say http://puu.sh/8lCBo.jpg
00:45:283 (1) -do this http://puu.sh/8lDEG.jpg

[One Week Friend]

00:12:556 - try this? http://puu.sh/8lDmA.jpg sounds better ...
00:28:919 (1) - and if you move the slider to end anchor x:312 y:176
00:30:056 (2) - try to better layer
01:04:601 (2) - add whistle on the head slider

[Forever Friend]

this is nice for me


my mod is poor lol
Nice song
good luck with your map ~
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

Raisa12 wrote:

Hi!
From #Modreqs

[Non Friend]

00:50:965 (3) - suggestion,and if you just put a simple slider here, it would be easier for beginners I say actually i sont want to miss the drumshttp://puu.sh/8lCBo.jpg
00:45:283 (1) -do this there's no reason for a 3/2 sliderhttp://puu.sh/8lDEG.jpg

[One Week Friend]

00:12:556 - try this? http://puu.sh/8lDmA.jpg sounds better ...good idea
00:28:919 (1) - and if you move the slider to end anchor x:312 y:176 fixed in other mod,but cant upload map :o
00:30:056 (2) - try to better layer ^
01:04:601 (2) - add whistle on the head slider fixed

[Forever Friend]

this is nice for me


my mod is poor lol
Nice song
good luck with your map ~
thx~
AsprikaQ
M4M from queue.

All suggestion.

[General]

- Uncheck the Letterbox in song setup for all diff.
- For the ending slider, maybe use the custom hitsound to completely silence the slider.

[Non Friend]

00:30:737 (1) - This hit the hp-bar a bit. I think it's in unrankable issue.
00:39:601 (3) - Add Finish at head?
01:13:919 (3) - I thinks it's way too high to put it up there

[One Week Friend]

00:38:010 (1) - This part compare to what is in [Non Friend] seems much easier but then [One Week Friend] suppose to be more diffucult
because it's Normal diff for the mapset.
01:20:510 (2) - Whistle for all part?
01:24:601 (2) - Move to 01:24:374 ?
00:48:010 (4) - Almost touch hp-bar
00:53:692 (2) - Add whistle at head?
01:03:465 (1) - Use Finish instead?
01:16:874 (4) - Move up somewhere. It's too low off the screen i think


[Forever Friend]

- HP Drain +1?

00:23:351 (7) - Add note?
00:38:010 (1) - Remove Clap <- I think it sounds better if you try follow the pattern I guide here.
00:39:374 (4) - ^
00:41:647 (1) - ^ at tail
00:42:556 (3) - ^ at tail
01:02:328 (2) - Blanket for 01:03:010 (3) ?

That's all I can see. Jia you :)
Sellenite
from BMT
大家好,我是ZZH

[Non Friend]
00:34:828 绿线调成40%
00:39:601 (3,2) - 一个跟歌唱一个跟鼓点觉得怪怪的
00:49:828 (2) - 头取消clap
00:50:283 加40% SC4

[One Week Friend]
00:03:692 (1) - 取消NC
中途有很多一两个就NC的我觉得没必要啊,看着修一修吧
00:38:010 - 00:43:237 偷懒,居然比easy空
00:54:374 (1) - 取消NC,与后面保持一致

[Forever Friend]
00:38:465 取消clap
00:39:828 (1) - 头clap转为whistle
00:42:101 取消clap
00:45:283 (1) - 头取消clap,虽然BGM有类似的音但加上clap实在太吵了

音效觉得调了之后还是比较满意的,不喜欢就不要改辣
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

AsprikaQ wrote:

M4M from queue.

All suggestion.

[General]

- Uncheck the Letterbox in song setup for all diff.
- For the ending slider, maybe use the custom hitsound to completely silence the slider.

[Non Friend]

00:30:737 (1) - This hit the hp-bar a bit. I think it's in unrankable issue.tested,and no problem
00:39:601 (3) - Add Finish at head? needn't
01:13:919 (3) - I thinks it's way too high to put it up there just follow the distant snap

[One Week Friend]

00:38:010 (1) - This part compare to what is in [Non Friend] seems much easier but then [One Week Friend] suppose to be more diffucult
because it's Normal diff for the mapset. cuz i'm just lazy :o
01:20:510 (2) - Whistle for all part?fixed
01:24:601 (2) - Move to 01:24:374 ? changed
00:48:010 (4) - Almost touch hp-bar actually it doesn't matter
00:53:692 (2) - Add whistle at head?fixed
01:03:465 (1) - Use Finish instead?nope
01:16:874 (4) - Move up somewhere. It's too low off the screen i think it's okay imo


[Forever Friend]

- HP Drain +1?it will be the same as normal

00:23:351 (7) - Add note? i didn't follow the sound you've mentioned..
00:38:010 (1) - Remove Clap <- I think it sounds better if you try follow the pattern I guide here.
00:39:374 (4) - ^
00:41:647 (1) - ^ at tail
00:42:556 (3) - ^ at tail good suggestion,but i'm just following the music.you can delete all notes and listen
01:02:328 (2) - Blanket for 01:03:010 (3) ?nope sorry

That's all I can see. Jia you :)

Sellenite wrote:

from BMT
大家好,我是ZZH

[Non Friend]
00:34:828 绿线调成40%
00:39:601 (3,2) - 一个跟歌唱一个跟鼓点觉得怪怪的 我也这么局的。。
00:49:828 (2) - 头取消clap
00:50:283 加40% SC4腻害

[One Week Friend]
00:03:692 (1) - 取消NC我柑橘去了就太多了
中途有很多一两个就NC的我觉得没必要啊,看着修一修吧 一个大姐一个nc
00:38:010 - 00:43:237 偷懒,居然比easy空 我是懒比
00:54:374 (1) - 取消NC,与后面保持一致

[Forever Friend]
00:38:465 取消clapfixed
00:39:828 (1) - 头clap转为whistle
00:42:101 取消clap
00:45:283 (1) - 头取消clap,虽然BGM有类似的音但加上clap实在太吵了

音效觉得调了之后还是比较满意的,不喜欢就不要改辣
谢谢mod啦
thx for your mod
smallboat
quick mod

[General]

COMBO COLOR 三種顏色似乎過於相似,尤其是1跟2,看出來有什麼區別,你可以把一種換成BG裡領帶的鮮明顏色可以做對比。

[Non Friend]

沒什麼槽點。

01:24:601 (4) - 01:22:783 (2,3) 照前面這樣聽的話,這個whistle應該是在尾的?

[One Week Friend]

00:15:510 (2) - 頭應該能加個whistle跟個vocal? 前後都加這樣。
00:33:919 (3,1) - 個人覺得不好看
00:38:010 (1) - 這段怎那麼空,我覺得還可以放點not和slider之類的。
00:41:647 (1) - 重音忘了finish?
01:23:692 (1) - 間距?

[Forever Friend]

00:02:783 (1) - NC別這麼濫用,這邊消NC。一大白線固定加一次。
00:04:601 (1) - ^
00:39:828 (1) - 明明可以跳 怎不移到(488|168)?
00:43:919 (2) - 也別跟前面這樣擠 移到(368|296) 保持1.4x DS? 順便跳。
00:49:828 (4,1) - 感覺這FLOW不順手。

GL。
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

smallboat wrote:

quick mod

[General]

COMBO COLOR 三種顏色似乎過於相似,尤其是1跟2,看出來有什麼區別,你可以把一種換成BG裡領帶的鮮明顏色可以做對比。根据bg的颜色调的,我觉得用bg里较少出现的颜色不适合

[Non Friend]

沒什麼槽點。

01:24:601 (4) - 01:22:783 (2,3) 照前面這樣聽的話,這個whistle應該是在尾的? 现在听起来更好啦

[One Week Friend]

00:15:510 (2) - 頭應該能加個whistle跟個vocal? 前後都加這樣。
00:33:919 (3,1) - 個人覺得不好看改了一下
00:38:010 (1) - 這段怎那麼空,我覺得還可以放點not和slider之類的。懒比啦
00:41:647 (1) - 重音忘了finish?fixed
01:23:692 (1) - 間距?故意的

[Forever Friend]

00:02:783 (1) - NC別這麼濫用,這邊消NC。一大白線固定加一次。船爷教训的是
00:04:601 (1) - ^ 船爷英明
00:39:828 (1) - 明明可以跳 怎不移到(488|168)?
00:43:919 (2) - 也別跟前面這樣擠 移到(368|296) 保持1.4x DS? 順便跳。
00:49:828 (4,1) - 感覺這FLOW不順手。all fixed

GL。
谢船爷
jonathanlfj
double kill

[General]
all hitburst dimensions must be 256*256
combo bursts have to be scaled down to template skin dimensions, so 767 pixels in height would do (width is already smaller so thats fine)
missing skin elements
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png
spinner-background.png
spinner-circle.png
spinner-approachcircle.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png
ready.png
go.png
cursortrail.png
hit100k.png
hit300k.png
hit300g.png
score-comma.png

[Easy]
00:18:010 (2) - shorten this to 00:18:692, keeps consistent with 00:32:556 (3)
00:36:647 (1) - unnecessary NC
00:41:647 (1,2) - should make this consistent with how you followed the vocals in the previous verse: 00:52:556 (1) - i think there is an overuse of whistles in the kiai, try removing all the whistles that land on the 4th white tick (00:53:919, 00:55:737, etc.)
01:30:283 - spinner should end here, apply to all diffs

[Normal]
some of the NCs are too frequent in this diff, should keep it consistently at NC every two measures (so remove NC on 00:03:692 (1), 00:10:737 (1), 00:14:374 (1), etc.)
00:02:783 (3,1) - spacing inconsistency here
00:31:192 (2) - feels a bit weird skipping over the vocals here, try this instead: 00:52:556 (1) - again, too many whistles for the kiai, you can remove ones on positions like 00:56:533 and 00:57:783
01:19:828 (1) - the end should snap to 01:20:169
01:22:783 (3,1) - spacing again, it seems that you did this intentionally but it might throw off some weaker players

[Hard]
consider using AR7 for this, it follows the flow of the map better
00:08:465 (4) - forgot a clap here
00:38:010 (1) - this sounds like it should be a jump judging from the transition in the music, so try placing it in a way similar to 00:39:601 (5,1)
00:45:283 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a gradual volume increase would suit this section well and not make the whistles sound as disturbing
00:52:556 (1) - same treatment for whistles as the normal diff
00:57:783 (4,1) - is the minor spacing change here intentional?
01:16:647 (2,3) - ^
01:18:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - volume increase technique like suggested in 00:45:283 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)

thats about all, 有什么问题游戏里pm我
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

jonathanlfj wrote:

double kill

[General]
all hitburst dimensions must be 256*256
combo bursts have to be scaled down to template skin dimensions, so 767 pixels in height would do (width is already smaller so thats fine)deleted
missing skin elements
approachcircle.png
reversearrow.png
spinner-background.png
spinner-circle.png
spinner-approachcircle.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png
ready.png
go.png
cursortrail.png
hit100k.png
hit300k.png
hit300g.png
score-comma.png
fixed

[Easy]
00:18:010 (2) - shorten this to 00:18:692, keeps consistent with 00:32:556 (3) ok
00:36:647 (1) - unnecessary NC fixed
00:41:647 (1,2) - should make this consistent with how you followed the vocals in the previous verse:
SPOILER
changed
00:52:556 (1) - i think there is an overuse of whistles in the kiai, try removing all the whistles that land on the 4th white tick (00:53:919, 00:55:737, etc.)i would like to keep that sorry
01:30:283 - spinner should end here, apply to all diffs fixed

[Normal]
some of the NCs are too frequent in this diff, should keep it consistently at NC every two measures (so remove NC on 00:03:692 (1), 00:10:737 (1), 00:14:374 (1), etc.)
00:02:783 (3,1) - spacing inconsistency herefinally..
00:31:192 (2) - feels a bit weird skipping over the vocals here, try this instead: changed
00:52:556 (1) - again, too many whistles for the kiai, you can remove ones on positions like 00:56:533 and 00:57:783sorry for that
01:19:828 (1) - the end should snap to 01:20:169it's the same with hard diff
01:22:783 (3,1) - spacing again, it seems that you did this intentionally but it might throw off some weaker players

[Hard]
consider using AR7 for this, it follows the flow of the map betteras insane fits for ar8,ar7 for hard is better
00:08:465 (4) - forgot a clap herefixed
00:38:010 (1) - this sounds like it should be a jump judging from the transition in the music, so try placing it in a way similar to 00:39:601 (5,1) changed
00:45:283 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a gradual volume increase would suit this section well and not make the whistles sound as disturbing make some attempt but not apparent enough
00:52:556 (1) - same treatment for whistles as the normal diff >.<
00:57:783 (4,1) - is the minor spacing change here intentional?
01:16:647 (2,3) - ^just a mistake..fixed
01:18:010 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - volume increase technique like suggested in 00:45:283 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)^

thats about all, 有什么问题游戏里pm我
鞋鞋理发匠
jonathanlfj
you still need to fix your hitburst dimensions to 256*256

score-comma1.png needs to be renamed to score-comma.png to work properly

thats about all after that i can bubble

EDIT: Looks good now

Bubbled~
Kenezz
Hi there, random mod o3o

[General]
  1. You have two unused images files: pause-replay.png and play-unranked.png, delete them please. Also the section fail/pass.png are needless because the map don't have breaks.
  2. Disable the letterbox during breaks and the widescreen support in all difss (no breaks or sb in the map).
[Easy]
  1. I think 40% of volume at the first part is too low, at least use 50% or maybe more, now is hard to hear the hitsounds.
  2. 00:30:737 (1) - Maybe remove the whistle at the start, I think is needless since the finish sounds louder than one whistle.
  3. 00:59:828 (1) - Same here.
  4. 01:05:283 (2) - ^ The whistle can't be heard, for that is needless.
  5. 01:07:101 (1) - Same, finish is enough 01:14:374 (1) - here and here too 01:18:010 (1).
  6. Cute easy o3o
[Normal]
  1. Same suggestion about the volume here and with those finish/wisthe beats.
  2. 00:39:828 (1) - Add finish at the start.
  3. 00:52:328 (1) - This circle is so confusing because is placed in the red tick following the voice and to the rookie players would be hard to read since 1) You follow the voice before 2) Is the first stack in the map, yes, this is a factor. Then I suggest remove this circle and with this way emphasize the begin of the chorus too.
  4. 01:06:874 (5) - Here works fine because is very predictable after the previous slider. Plus: If you want to be consistent with the previous part like this, then remove this circle (this is very optional)
  5. 01:18:010 (1,2) - Maybe move these slider slightly up to avoid this overlap, then http://puu.sh/8zBHQ.jpg, I I mean this because is a little different in comparison with the others.
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:692 (1) - Remove the new combo or add new combo here 00:17:328 (5) try to be consistent with your own patterns.
  2. 00:39:828 (1) - Add finish at the start.
  3. 00:52:556 (1) - I think the new combo is needless since this nc pattern 00:52:556 (1,2,3,4) follows the voice and the triplet too.
  4. 01:20:510 (2) - This stack could be a bit confusing because all the before circles/sliders have a spacing of 1/2~1/2 between them, maybe add a properly distance and avoid the stack.
That's all, very clean mapset, just check those images of the skin please.
Good luck then o/
jonathanlfj
Yoshino-Sakura: feel free to apply the mod above i can rebubble afterwards
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

Kenezz wrote:

Hi there, random mod o3o

[General]
  1. You have two unused images files: pause-replay.png and play-unranked.png, delete them please. Also the section fail/pass.png are needless because the map don't have breaks.delete another 2 pictures
  2. Disable the letterbox during breaks and the widescreen support in all difss (no breaks or sb in the map).fixed
[Easy]
  1. I think 40% of volume at the first part is too low, at least use 50% or maybe more, now is hard to hear the hitsounds.the finish and whistle is aloud enough though
  2. 00:30:737 (1) - Maybe remove the whistle at the start, I think is needless since the finish sounds louder than one whistle. ok
  3. 00:59:828 (1) - Same here.fixed
  4. 01:05:283 (2) - ^ The whistle can't be heard, for that is needless.
  5. 01:07:101 (1) - Same, finish is enough 01:14:374 (1) - here and here too 01:18:010 (1).all fixed
  6. Cute easy o3o >////<
[Normal]
  1. Same suggestion about the volume here and with those finish/wisthe beats.
  2. 00:39:828 (1) - Add finish at the start.same as insane
  3. 00:52:328 (1) - This circle is so confusing because is placed in the red tick following the voice and to the rookie players would be hard to read since 1) You follow the voice before 2) Is the first stack in the map, yes, this is a factor. Then I suggest remove this circle and with this way emphasize the begin of the chorus too.ok i agree
  4. 01:06:874 (5) - Here works fine because is very predictable after the previous slider. Plus: If you want to be consistent with the previous part like this, then remove this circle (this is very optional)no remove here ;)
  5. 01:18:010 (1,2) - Maybe move these slider slightly up to avoid this overlap, then http://puu.sh/8zBHQ.jpg, I I mean this because is a little different in comparison with the others.fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:13:692 (1) - Remove the new combo or add new combo here 00:17:328 (5) try to be consistent with your own patterns.fixed
  2. 00:39:828 (1) - Add finish at the start.there's no finish in the mp3 actually
  3. 00:52:556 (1) - I think the new combo is needless since this nc pattern 00:52:556 (1,2,3,4) follows the voice and the triplet too.ok
  4. 01:20:510 (2) - This stack could be a bit confusing because all the before circles/sliders have a spacing of 1/2~1/2 between them, maybe add a properly distance and avoid the stack.I can't find a better way to fix this :o
That's all, very clean mapset, just check those images of the skin please.
Good luck then o/
jonathanlfj
good catch on the skin files, need to study more on map skins ><

Rebubbled~
LunarSakuya
<3

General
- Uncheck "Widescreen Support", there is no SB


Easy
00:05:283 (1) - Finish on tail, i hear cymbals in the bgm~

Normal
01:05:283 (3) - I feel like the angle here is a bit sharp, not a big deal but could be a little trippy with direction xD For example, 01:12:556 (3) - is better because you can see the slider border more clearly around the angle

Forever Friend
01:19:828 (1) - Try Ctrl + G, this would be better flow from the previous note imo
01:24:601 (1) - Move this back to the white tick. (something like that xD) The guitar (?) seems to be very dominating here and players may be tempted to play it imo

very cute map, i love the bubbles www
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

LunarSakuya wrote:

<3

General
- Uncheck "Widescreen Support", there is no SB


Easy
00:05:283 (1) - Finish on tail, i hear cymbals in the bgm~fixed

Normal
01:05:283 (3) - I feel like the angle here is a bit sharp, not a big deal but could be a little trippy with direction xD For example, 01:12:556 (3) - is better because you can see the slider border more clearly around the angle changed a bit

Forever Friend
01:19:828 (1) - Try Ctrl + G, this would be better flow from the previous note imo fixed
01:24:601 (1) - Move this back to the white tick. (something like that xD) The guitar (?) seems to be very dominating here and players may be tempted to play it imo sorry i like the bubble voice there and I have to keep in consistance with other diffs :)

very cute map, i love the bubbles www
thx for mod
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