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Uchida Maaya - Soushou Innocence

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Kinomi
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Kinomi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年11月3日 at 12:30:31

Artist: Uchida Maaya
Title: Soushou Innocence
Source: 悪魔のリドル
Tags: akuma no riddle opening EmingK Fycho Laurier yf_bmp baldrace
BPM: 205
Filesize: 10087kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. EmingK's Easy (1.64 stars, 109 notes)
  2. Normal (2.23 stars, 148 notes)
  3. yf's Insane (4.76 stars, 352 notes)
  4. Another (5.05 stars, 386 notes)
  5. Fycho's Hard (3.28 stars, 269 notes)
  6. Laurier's Extra (5.02 stars, 374 notes)
Download: Uchida Maaya - Soushou Innocence
Download: Uchida Maaya - Soushou Innocence (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#8 ranked map
有个很有钱的富豪，一天回家，进屋的时候发现他的爱犬被人杀了，他痛苦流涕，大声哭喊。
这时，一个蒙面男子说话了：有人花大价钱让我取你狗命。
悪魔のリドル OP
http://puu.sh/8MJrV.rar insane by 615
Last edited by Kinomi , edited 42 times in total.
gxytcgxytc
200 posts
Joined May 2011
gxytcgxytc
有个很有钱的富豪，一天回家，进屋的时候发现他的爱犬被人杀了，他痛苦流涕，大声哭喊。
这时，一个蒙面男子说话了：有人花大价钱让我取你狗命。
AIR
1,577 posts
Joined November 2012
AIR
[General]

offset+14


[Assassination]

  1. 00:00:983 (1) - 这里的音非常轻，减速或者消音连打
  2. 00:01:422 (2) - 有些漏音，结尾到蓝线
  3. 00:04:495 (1,2,3) - 音效不够重，打起来略软
  4. 00:12:105 (1) - 00:10:641 (5,6) - 叠好
  5. 00:15:924 (3) - ctrl+g
  6. 00:22:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 可以更有动感，拉长条可惜了
  7. 00:23:826 (1) - 后面是减速条，这里建议单点做成跳
  8. 00:26:753 (3,4) - 换单点
  9. 00:28:143 - 漏音
  10. 00:28:363 (8,1) - 接重音，拉开更有表现力，8结尾是重音也建议改改，同样这里00:33:192 (1) -
  11. 00:31:143 (3) - 00:36:558 (6) - 这一段有几个3/4结尾需要到蓝线
  12. 00:41:387 (1,2) - ↑
  13. 00:44:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议单点http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1541905
  14. 00:45:924 (8,1,2,3,4) - 颤音不错，建议上0108那样的条，比如这里00:09:192 (1) -
  15. 00:54:851 (2) - 00:53:094 (1) - 叠好
[Fycho's Hard]

  1. 00:04:788 (3) - 建议向后移到白线，别管那个鼓点，节奏不好把握至少和前面对上
  2. 00:08:593 (1) - 建议换单点接半拍条
  3. 00:35:533 (1) - 00:33:924 (2) - 叠好
  4. 00:35:387 (5,1) - 重叠，不美观，可以叠到4开头
  5. 00:31:363 - 00:34:582 - 00:36:338 - 这一段几个3/4，用折返遮一下？
  6. 00:36:558 (1,2,3,4) - 试下
  7. 00:45:777 (3,1,2) - 这一段来个长条比较赞
  8. 01:08:753 (2,3) - 建议2换单点接3
烤老板这个要不要GD;w;
Kinomi
1,220 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Kinomi

ids wrote:

[General]

offset+14 offset应该没问题吧加了不准了


[Assassination]

  1. 00:00:983 (1) - 这里的音非常轻，减速或者消音连打 我感觉有打击好点
  2. 00:01:422 (2) - 有些漏音，结尾到蓝线 这里不管vocal啊，拉长了很难受
  3. 00:04:495 (1,2,3) - 音效不够重，打起来略软 3换了normal
  4. 00:12:105 (1) - 00:10:641 (5,6) - 叠好 没要叠
  5. 00:15:924 (3) - ctrl+g 原来这样挺好
  6. 00:22:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 可以更有动感，拉长条可惜了

    我觉得这1/1挺合适啊
  7. 00:23:826 (1) - 后面是减速条，这里建议单点做成跳 这里只要减速的那个做成跳就行了，这个note适合前面的一组的
  8. 00:26:753 (3,4) - 换单点 为啥。。这里就是1/2滑条组
  9. 00:28:143 - 漏音 不管vocal啦
  10. 00:28:363 (8,1) - 接重音，拉开更有表现力，8结尾是重音也建议改改，同样这里00:33:192 (1) - 这里要一个急停的感觉，叠着也不至于太难
  11. 00:31:143 (3) - 00:36:558 (6) - 这一段有几个3/4结尾需要到蓝线
  12. 00:41:387 (1,2) - ↑ 不管vocal啊，这边鼓点是1/2，打起来awful那就不用3/4
  13. 00:44:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 建议单点http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1541905 有连打音，嘛，还是改了下
  14. 00:45:924 (8,1,2,3,4) - 颤音不错，建议上0108那样的条，比如这里00:09:192 (1) - 好
  15. 00:54:851 (2) - 00:53:094 (1) - 叠好没要叠

烤老板这个要不要GD;w;不要了，低难度怎么没摸，和高难度一样需要mod的
ffstar
513 posts
Joined October 2011
ffstar
[Assassination]
00:22:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 其实这个有点偏离节奏，你的图基本上有跟vocal，但这里有vocal是在slider间的（当然你还刻意放红节点让它稍微跟了vocal一下）。建议你把它弄得更有创意一些（其他的很有创意，这里稍微有些闷）给你一些意见：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542049

 136,328,22495,6,0,L|236:328,1,90
316,328,22788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,256,22934,2,0,L|152:256,1,90
316,328,23227,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,328,23373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,256,23519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,216,23593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,172,23666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
00:45:471 (5,6,7) – 你的1/4 sliders放得不太好。个人觉得把节奏换成http://puu.sh/8lsCP.jpg 会比较好，这样的话那两个1/4 sliders 很明显是跟vocal (desuka) 你试试看放慢25%听
00:59:958 (1) – x:181 y:179 让他叠好
01:08:007 (1) – 有点歪了，最后的节点 x:166 y:295
01:13:056 (1) – 为何不要停在01:15:617 - ？ @@ （不过感觉你是故意的）
01:24:544 – 这里加一个note？叠在01:24:251 (1) – slider end？

[Fycho's Hard]
00:16:641 (4,1) - 先slider才cirlce？感觉比较好 （不过你好像在跟white tick ;w;）
00:34:349 (1,2) - 这里打的时候有点尴尬，因为vocal在slider end，http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542120 这样比较好
01:13:056 (1) - 如同insane diff

[Normal]
01:09:324 (2,3) - 呃，不太好叻。01:09:178 - 这里加一个circle，然后把01:09:324 (2) - 移到01:09:471 -
01:15:471 - 把这个break拉前到01:15:324 - ？看图，不太会解释>< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542213
01:24:690 (1,1) - 好像有点难

[ZZH's Easy]
00:54:544 (4) - NC

很好，个人很喜欢insane和hard的00:23:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个part，排版很美！
Kinomi
1,220 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Kinomi

ffstar0716 wrote:

[Assassination]
00:22:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 其实这个有点偏离节奏，你的图基本上有跟vocal，但这里有vocal是在slider间的（当然你还刻意放红节点让它稍微跟了vocal一下）。建议你把它弄得更有创意一些（其他的很有创意，这里稍微有些闷）给你一些意见：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542049
这里本来就是有意放松一下，先不改
00:45:471 (5,6,7) – 你的1/4 sliders放得不太好。个人觉得把节奏换成http://puu.sh/8lsCP.jpg 会比较好，这样的话那两个1/4 sliders 很明显是跟vocal (desuka) 你试试看放慢25%听 之前改了
00:59:958 (1) – x:181 y:179 让他叠好 好
01:08:007 (1) – 有点歪了，最后的节点 x:166 y:295 没啊
01:13:056 (1) – 为何不要停在01:15:617 - ？ @@ （不过感觉你是故意的） 我感觉拉到这比较带感
01:24:544 – 这里加一个note？叠在01:24:251 (1) – slider end？ 拉远了点距离

[Normal]
01:09:324 (2,3) - 呃，不太好叻。01:09:178 - 这里加一个circle，然后把01:09:324 (2) - 移到01:09:471 - 好
01:15:471 - 把这个break拉前到01:15:324 - ？看图，不太会解释>< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542213 拉了break就没了
01:24:690 (1,1) - 好像有点难 先这样放着

[ZZH's Easy]
00:54:544 (4) - NC 好

很好，个人很喜欢insane和hard的00:23:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个part，排版很美！谢谢！
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
QvQ....明天就po

EDIT: 做好啦! http://puu.sh/8o5rc.zip
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
http://puu.sh/8qWhs.osu
hea

http://puu.sh/8qWrQ.zip
hit sounds
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Hi~

General:

  1. this video can be considered NSFW, take a look at : 01:10:056
  2. about the ¨Another¨ diff name is mostly used for beatmania related songs, there is nothing wrong with keeping it, just saying
  3. Inconsistency in combo colours
  4. Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks
Another:

  1. 00:03:617 (2,4) - nazi, stack this properly
  2. 00:09:178 (1) - this slider shape is not rankable anymore, since you're manipulating the slider velocity with all these anchors, change this for a normal slider shape instead
  3. 00:11:080 (1,1,1) - this combo spam is not even necessary, since you're not changing SV or spacing there, also this is easyly readable without the NC spam, due to this innecesary NC the HP drain of the whole diff is being affected by that.
  4. 00:06:690 (1,1) - ^
  5. 00:14:300 (1,2,3,5) - if you're aiming for a blanket here, try to improve it, actually doesn't look nicely in game
  6. 00:15:032 (1,3) - 00:15:617 (1,3) - 00:16:349 (2,3) - same as above, maybe you can call me nazi, but is better if all look perfect ♥
  7. 00:16:788 I like the extended sliders, but this one is not rhythmical correct, since you can clearly hear music and vocals in 00:16:934 -, that's why a 1/2 slider will follow the song better. For example the one at 00:18:397 (2) - sound pretty nice, cause the vocal keep a hold feeling but not the one at 00:16:788
  8. 00:18:910 (5) - I suggest you to remove this circle, since is not following nothing in the music
  9. 00:22:568 ^
  10. 00:27:544 (2) - ^
  11. 00:29:007 (3) - ^ , there are some more, but I think you can find them by yourself
  12. 00:43:422 (4,3) - same as 00:03:617
  13. 00:46:934 (4) - this slider shape is not rankable anymore, since you're manipulating the slider velocity with all these anchors, change this for a normal slider shape instead
  14. 00:47:373 when you change the slider above be sure to end it in 00:47:373 -, were the vocals end
  15. 01:13:056 this spinner doesn't fit the music IMO, also if you're following the vocals it end so early actually, I prefer if you map the vocals like Laurier did
  16. 01:17:373 (3) - same as 00:16:788 -, the music is clearly 1/2, that's why your extended slider doesn't fit the song in this point.
  17. 01:20:154 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - same as 00:11:080
  18. 01:21:763 another slider with a no rankable shape, refer to 00:46:934
Laurier's Extra:

  1. 00:02:447 (5,3) - stack this properly, unless it's on purpose
  2. 00:07:862 remove the NC is not even necessary, this jumps are easily readable without the spam, plus you're not using one in 00:08:301 (3) - for consistency, is better if you just remove the one at 00:07:862 (1) -
  3. 00:13:569 same as above, this kind of patterns doesn't need NC to make them readables.
  4. 00:17:958 (1,2) - is this 0.10 stack on purpose? if not stack it properly pls
  5. 00:37:861 (1) - this NC is also unnecessary, since the antijump is readable enought with the one at 00:38:154 (1) -
  6. 00:49:276 ^
  7. 00:53:374 (1,1) - ^
  8. 01:25:569 (1) - ^
yf's Insane:

  1. 00:02:300 (6,7) - nazi, stack this properly ;)
  2. 00:04:788 - not a fan of the slider shape, I guess you can do a better one, also it should be NC due to the SV change
  3. 00:12:032 (4) - nothing in the music, I suggest you to remove this circle, since is very noticeable that it is not following nothing <:
  4. 00:12:397 (2) - I like the extended sliders, but this one is not rhythmical correct, since you can clearly hear music in 00:12:544, that's why a 1/2 slider will work better with the song.
  5. 00:12:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this part sound a bit overmapped, if you listen to 25% or 50%, try this rhythm instead:
    SPOILER
  6. 00:23:227 (1,2,3) - use the same spacing between them, for a more comfortable gameplay
  7. 00:27:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - yup I can't listen a constant 1/4 there, try to listen again to the music here, my suggestion:
    SPOILER
  8. 00:30:690 (1,2,3) - stack this properly
  9. 00:37:422 (2,3) - the transition between the objects feel a bit forced here, try to make a more comfortable cursor movement here
  10. 00:44:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as 00:12:983 -, I guess you can remove the objects and listen to 25% for a more accurate rhythm
  11. 00:49:202 (2) - this need to be NC due to the big SV change
  12. 00:55:495 (6) - nothing in the music here, will be better if you remove this circle for a better representation of the music
  13. 01:13:056 (1) - same as another
  14. 01:21:763 same as 00:49:202
Fycho's Hard:

  1. 00:22:495 (1) - I keep a bad feeling from this slider, since it is broking the drums line not a major issue, but I feel a repeat slider will represent better the music at this point, like:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:04:641 (3,1) - lol nazi, stack this properly
  3. 00:31:715 (4,1) - ^ you have some more like this one, they don't affect the gameplay but I'm very picky about minor stuff
  4. 00:47:373 maybe do you want to delay the break a bit here, drag it to 00:47:373 - will make a cool effect with the song IMO
    SPOILER
  5. 01:13:056 (1) - same as another, I don't like the spinner I preffer a break or mapping the vocals like Laurier did, if you really like the spinner here, end it at 01:15:910 -, with the last vocal hit, IMO
Normal:

  1. HP +1 (4) for better diff spread
  2. 00:14:446 (1,2) - the transition between the objects feel a bit forced here, try to make a more comfortable cursor movement here, take in consideration most of normal players are mouse users, that's why this placement is not friendly for them IMO
  3. 00:42:544 (1,2,3,4) - try a perfect square here? using the tool, or maybe just me hue
  4. 00:47:373 the break should be delayed to here 00:47:373 -, since there is the place where the vocals and music end
  5. 01:13:056 this break should not be delayed IMO, since the ¨a cappella¨ section is too long for this
ZZH's Easy:

  1. to be honest, I don't like your spacing choose even the 1/1 gaps look overlapped, I guess this can be stressful for new players
    SPOILER
  2. 00:14:446 too close after a spinner, new players need more recovery time after it
  3. 01:07:715 this NC is not even necessary
  4. well the amount of overlaps due to the spacing choose can be confused for new players IMO
GL :D
Kinomi
1,220 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Kinomi

Natsu wrote:

Hi~

General:

  1. this video can be considered NSFW, take a look at : 01:10:056 i think it is safe,many animes have this kind of scenes
  2. about the ¨Another¨ diff name is mostly used for beatmania related songs, there is nothing wrong with keeping it, just saying yes...may change later
  3. Inconsistency in combo colours fy use new color to show sv change
  4. Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks fix
Another:

  1. 00:03:617 (2,4) - nazi, stack this properly k
  2. 00:11:080 (1,1,1) - this combo spam is not even necessary, since you're not changing SV or spacing there, also this is easyly readable without the NC spam, due to this innecesary NC the HP drain of the whole diff is being affected by that.
  3. 00:06:690 (1,1) - ^
    waiting for more suggestions
  4. 00:14:300 (1,2,3,5) - if you're aiming for a blanket here, try to improve it, actually doesn't look nicely in game
  5. 00:15:032 (1,3) - 00:15:617 (1,3) - 00:16:349 (2,3) - same as above, maybe you can call me nazi, but is better if all look perfect ♥
    k
  6. 00:16:788 I like the extended sliders, but this one is not rhythmical correct, since you can clearly hear music and vocals in 00:16:934 -, that's why a 1/2 slider will follow the song better. For example the one at 00:18:397 (2) - sound pretty nice, cause the vocal keep a hold feeling but not the one at 00:16:788 vocal end at blue line actually
  7. 00:18:910 (5) - I suggest you to remove this circle, since is not following nothing in the music this follow the guita
  8. 00:22:568 ^
  9. 00:27:544 (2) - ^
  10. 00:29:007 (3) - ^ , there are some more, but I think you can find them by yourself
    these triplets are made to make the rhythm more sonsistant and awesome
  11. 00:43:422 (4,3) - same as 00:03:617 k
  12. 01:13:056 this spinner doesn't fit the music IMO, also if you're following the vocals it end so early actually, I prefer if you map the vocals like Laurier did
  13. 01:17:373 (3) - same as 00:16:788 -, the music is clearly 1/2, that's why your extended slider doesn't fit the song in this point. change

    the slider shape, i whink they are rankable, because sv is consistant

    Normal:

    1. HP +1 (4) for better diff spread k
    2. 00:14:446 (1,2) - the transition between the objects feel a bit forced here, try to make a more comfortable cursor movement here, take in consideration most of normal players are mouse users, that's why this placement is not friendly for them IMO changed
    3. 00:42:544 (1,2,3,4) - try a perfect square here? using the tool, or maybe just me hue i think it is fine
    4. 00:47:373 the break should be delayed to here 00:47:373 -, since there is the place where the vocals and music end k
    5. 01:13:056 this break should not be delayed IMO, since the ¨a cappella¨ section is too long for this idk,currently keep it


GL :D
thanks for mod!
waxman
467 posts
Joined February 2012
waxman
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[General]
01:13:056 (1) - According to 01:26:666 (1), this vol. is 5% tho. But I think the sound of the slider on tail is low. It's not the end of the song. So I wanna suggest increasing the vol. to 15%. Btw Normal diff's 00:44:885 (1) vol. is 60% tho. But I'm just taking about 01:13:056 (1). Maybe it's not related....


[Another]
00:00:398 (1,2,3,4) - I recommended regular spacing or change them to like yf's one. because this is the beginning of song. only 1 second lol. I'm pretty sure these players will retry pretty hard early.
00:11:080 (1,1,1) - I don't like those stacks tho. this is your style. so I can't do anything.
00:18:397 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing is wrong. There is 1 stanza in 00:18:690 (3,4). but you can say it's intentional. yes, that's right. I recommended my idea.

00:29:812 (1) - delete NC. You placed sliders like 00:29:812 (1,2). They are same as 00:29:227 (5,6).
00:30:397 (3) - NC here.

00:45:910 (8,1) - (High recommended)Overmapped a bit. too far. I wanna suggest this one. 00:45:763 (7,8) - move to x:432 y:88
00:58:349 (3,4,5,6,1) - (High recommended) Decrease spacing. These spacing is not necessary. because SV of 00:58:934 (1) is slower than 00:58:349 (3).
01:26:593 (4) - There is no issue, but I recommended NC. because I prefer my idea. :D


[Fycho's Hard]
00:12:690 (3,4) - decrease distance pls? According to 00:12:105 (1,2,3).
01:19:129 (2) - This overlapping is strange to me. because you didn't overlap until - 01:18:690 (1).


[Laurier's Extra]
日本語書きやすい～＾＾
00:08:593 (1,2) - このスペーシング00:08:739 (2,3,4,5)と比べると狭いかなぁって思いました。良かったら広くしてくださ～い＾＾
00:14:008 (2,3) - ちょっと遠すぎる?　00:13:862 (1,2)より広くするのはいいアイディアだけども・・・

やっぱ日本人のmappingはいいね。中国人のmappingは優しさが感じられないwwwwwww


[Normal]
Nothing. :D


[yf's Insane]
00:14:300 (8) - Finish? Though I can add it on my editing mode I can't hear.... What happened?
01:13:056 (1) - hmm... no sound? Finish or Clap? on tail


[ZZH's Easy]
Nothing. :D

GOOD LUCK!
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp

Natsu wrote:

yf's Insane:

  1. 00:02:300 (6,7) - nazi, stack this properly ;) √
  2. 00:04:788 - not a fan of the slider shape, I guess you can do a better one, also it should be NC due to the SV change
  3. 00:12:032 (4) - nothing in the music, I suggest you to remove this circle, since is very noticeable that it is not following nothing <:
  4. 00:12:397 (2) - I like the extended sliders, but this one is not rhythmical correct, since you can clearly hear music in 00:12:544, that's why a 1/2 slider will work better with the song. √
  5. 00:12:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this part sound a bit overmapped, if you listen to 25% or 50%, try this rhythm instead:√
    SPOILER
  6. 00:23:227 (1,2,3) - use the same spacing between them, for a more comfortable gameplay √
  7. 00:27:324 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - yup I can't listen a constant 1/4 there, try to listen again to the music here, my suggestion: concentrated drums here :O
    SPOILER
  8. 00:30:690 (1,2,3) - stack this properly √
  9. 00:37:422 (2,3) - the transition between the objects feel a bit forced here, try to make a more comfortable cursor movement here
  10. 00:44:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as 00:12:983 -, I guess you can remove the objects and listen to 25% for a more accurate rhythm concentrated drums here :O
  11. 00:49:202 (2) - this need to be NC due to the big SV change √
  12. 00:55:495 (6) - nothing in the music here, will be better if you remove this circle for a better representation of the music √
  13. 01:13:056 (1) - same as another √
  14. 01:21:763 same as 00:49:202
Thank you Natsu!ww

To waxman: Nothing fixed but thank you!
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osu file format v12

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[Metadata]
Title:Soushou Innocence (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:創傷イノセンス (TV Size)
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:内田真礼
Creator:Tsukuyomi
Version:yf's Insane
Source:悪魔のリドル
Tags:akuma no riddle opening ZZHBOY Fycho Laurier yf_bmp
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Kinomi
1,220 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Kinomi

waxman wrote:

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[General]
01:13:056 (1) - According to 01:26:666 (1), this vol. is 5% tho. But I think the sound of the slider on tail is low. It's not the end of the song. So I wanna suggest increasing the vol. to 15%. Btw Normal diff's 00:44:885 (1) vol. is 60% tho. But I'm just taking about 01:13:056 (1). Maybe it's not related....
delete that line in normal

[Another]
00:00:398 (1,2,3,4) - I recommended regular spacing or change them to like yf's one. because this is the beginning of song. only 1 second lol. I'm pretty sure these players will retry pretty hard early. i think it's fine, since i test many times and seldom missed
00:11:080 (1,1,1) - I don't like those stacks tho. this is your style. so I can't do anything. :p
00:18:397 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing is wrong. There is 1 stanza in 00:18:690 (3,4). but you can say it's intentional. yes, that's right. I recommended my idea.
i feel nothing strange about it..
00:29:812 (1) - delete NC. You placed sliders like 00:29:812 (1,2). They are same as 00:29:227 (5,6).
00:30:397 (3) - NC here.
i add NC by following down beat
00:45:910 (8,1) - (High recommended)Overmapped a bit. too far. I wanna suggest this one. 00:45:763 (7,8) - move to x:432 y:88 when clicking that kick slider,you just need to click the slider's head and don't need to move, so the real spacing is small
00:58:349 (3,4,5,6,1) - (High recommended) Decrease spacing. These spacing is not necessary. because SV of 00:58:934 (1) is slower than 00:58:349 (3). i think it is fine, but i will wait for more suggestions
01:26:593 (4) - There is no issue, but I recommended NC. because I prefer my idea. :D ok

GOOD LUCK!
thanks for mod!
update yf's diff
Kyoushi-kun
24 posts
Joined April 2014
Kyoushi-kun
Hey! THERE are too much "wrongs" in your map. The offset is +14 . I can't S it. :(
Kinomi
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Kinomi
ok,offset+14
Fycho
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2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho

ids wrote:

[Fycho's Hard]

  1. 00:04:788 (3) - 建议向后移到白线，别管那个鼓点，节奏不好把握至少和前面对上
  2. 00:08:593 (1) - 建议换单点接半拍条 这里换成了滑条加单点
  3. 00:35:533 (1) - 00:33:924 (2) - 叠好
  4. 00:35:387 (5,1) - 重叠，不美观，可以叠到4开头
  5. 00:31:363 - 00:34:582 - 00:36:338 - 这一段几个3/4，用折返遮一下？
  6. 00:36:558 (1,2,3,4) - 试下
  7. 00:45:777 (3,1,2) - 这一段来个长条比较赞
  8. 01:08:753 (2,3) - 建议2换单点接3
烤老板这个要不要GD;w;

ffstar0716 wrote:

[Fycho's Hard]
00:16:641 (4,1) - 先slider才cirlce？感觉比较好 （不过你好像在跟white tick ;w;）这里fixed，为了前后统一跟乐器音

00:34:349 (1,2) - 这里打的时候有点尴尬，因为vocal在slider end，http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1542120 这样比较好
01:13:056 (1) - 如同insane diff fixed，我改了时间点
很好，个人很喜欢insane和hard的00:23:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这个part，排版很美！

Natsu wrote:

Fycho's Hard:

  1. 00:22:495 (1) - I keep a bad feeling from this slider, since it is broking the drums line not a major issue, but I feel a repeat slider will represent better the music at this point, like:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:04:641 (3,1) - lol nazi, stack this properly ok
  3. 00:31:715 (4,1) - ^ you have some more like this one, they don't affect the gameplay but I'm very picky about minor stuff ok
  4. 00:47:373 maybe do you want to delay the break a bit here, drag it to 00:47:373 - will make a cool effect with the song IMO Have you have a test when you changed this break time? It would make the break time disappear, break time can't be too short
    SPOILER
  5. 01:13:056 (1) - same as another, I don't like the spinner I preffer a break or mapping the vocals like Laurier did, if you really like the spinner here, end it at 01:15:910 -, with the last vocal hit, IMO
GL :D

Thanks ids, ffstar0716, Natsu and waxman, only fixed what I pointed. For more reasons please find me in-game or send me a Forum PM.

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[Insane]
00:05:958 (5) - 沒加自定義clap簡直無情啊...
00:26:154 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡可以做點變化 比方說四個slider方向不一樣這樣
00:38:154 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - copy and paste 好明顯
話說最後那段減速怎麼回事 我被坑到了<_<

[Another]
我老是覺得叫another怪怪的
00:01:729 (3,4,5) - 這flow不順啊,主要是(3)太彆扭了點到(5)的時候不爽
00:04:655 (2,3) - 柑橘spacing可以弄大很多 現在是(1)跳到(2)那個位置的spacing比較大 感覺這裡可以改下來配合歌曲
00:11:094 (1,1,1) - 這個其實挺合歌的可惜點擊感一般
00:15:631 (1,2,3) - 這組不科學啊;w; 另外三組明明沒跳!!
00:19:436 (2,3,1) - 這個flow我感覺一般,但是不改也沒關係啦
00:22:655 (3) - 直接無視vocal那音好像不太好,拆開吧
00:45:777 (7,8) - 簡直無情 居然重疊了讀不了
01:11:021 (3) - 這個太坑了
01:19:875 (4,1,1) - 同
01:21:777 (1) - 好評
01:26:314 (3,1) - 敢不敢不重疊
你太鬼畜了,我都嚇哭了

[Extra]
00:03:339 (4,5) - ummmm it's kinda ugly to me but it's okay if you don't want to change this
00:04:802 (1) - This one is way too slow
00:13:730 (2,3) - I would suggest not to stack this one as it should be kind of jumpy in the music
00:17:973 (1,2,3,4) - oooooo this one is tricky, interesting
00:28:217 (5,6) - the spacing can be bigger to improve the flow
00:49:290 (1,2) - it is too noisy to me lol maybe changing (1) into circle would be better

就這樣吧
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
嗨 BBQ。

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.yf's Insane 沒有插入影片video offset.
2.yf's Insane 的Combo color與其他難度不一致

[ZZH's Easy]

00:32:021 (4) - 錯過一個重音finish。
00:42:265 (3) - ^
00:42:851 (4) - 這邊是音樂急湊的部分，可以加個note上去，比較適合音樂起伏。
00:44:021 (5) - ^
00:49:582 (2) - 錯過一個重音finish。(雖然聽不太出來，建議還是加了)
00:50:168 (1) - 移到前面白線然後加個reverse比較適合vocal。
01:00:119 (2) - 開頭的N音效這樣聽起來有點突兀，不如換成whistle試試?
01:05:972 (3) - 2次大白一NC，所以這個NC一下，然後 01:07:729 (1) 取消NC。
01:10:655 (4) - NC，理由同上。
01:18:265 (1,2,3) - 應該可以24whistle這裡。
01:21:192 (1) - 為何不疊好，看起來很粗糙亂擺。
01:23:826 (4) - 這邊也是急湊的部分也漏個note。
01:26:314 (1) - 建議開頭在這裡 01:26:607 比較好，01:26:314有個點加個note。另外我覺得結尾是在白線，不是紅線。

Done，美觀還要加強。

[Normal]

00:27:631 (4) - 照這樣聽人聲加whistle的話，這邊開頭加個whistle應該較好?
00:30:119 (5,6) - 這2個跟的人聲好像怪怪，白線無人聲卻放了節奏，不如改成這樣完全跟人聲:
SPOILER
00:33:192 (1) - 錯過一個重音finish。(雖然聽不太出來，建議還是加了)

[Fycho's Hard]

00:46:948 (4) - 我覺得放到(277|281)做個三角形比overlap還比較美觀。

[yf's Insane]

00:26:168 (1,2,3,4) - 試著使每一個長條做個變速梗? (1.10 1.20 1.30 1.40這四種速度)，聽vocal這裡很適合變速。
00:31:436 (5,6) - 因為00:29:241 (3,6,7) - 這邊跟人聲都放紅線，唯獨這個人聲怎麼在尾端 ? 這兩個ctrl+g吧，這樣玩的比較自然，注意音效。
00:40:217 (1,2,3,4) - 同 00:26:168
01:01:290 (1) - 是不是忘了加重音finish
01:03:631 (1) - ^
01:05:972 (1) - 或許尾端能疊好。
01:25:582 (1,2) - 這邊1/4滑條跳是2.5x間距好像很遠容易miss，放近點?

[Laurier's Extra]

沒啥問題 不挑細節了 = Nothing。

[Another]

00:05:533 (2) - 尾部疊一下保持美觀?
00:26:753 (3) - Ctrl+H有點歪了。
00:52:948 (7) - 6到7好像有點扭，不如丟到(462|215)看看?
01:08:607 (4) - 前面(1)有變速，這邊(4)是不是忘了NC?
01:19:875 (4,1,1) - 3個同一組的吉他聲，我覺得應該也能搞的變速梗做0.10漸變速度，就這樣速度過去有點沒cool。
01:22:509 (4,5) - 聽吉他聲似乎能大跳?

[Other]

好圖!
看了BBQ的圖好多梗，柑橘自己做的好渣。
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Laurier
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