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Toraboruta-P - Soleil [Taiko]

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Minao
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Minao
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 21 septembre 2014 at 17:39:42

Artist: Toraboruta-P
Title: Soleil
Tags: Kagamine Rin CHRIS Matsumura Takumi Sun Mystyk MystykAMV 鏡音リン append vocaloid nico_nico_douga
BPM: 200
Filesize: 7691kb
Play Time: 03:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (1,85 stars, 382 notes)
  2. Kantan (0,94 stars, 182 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2,57 stars, 598 notes)
  4. Mystyk's Oni (3,18 stars, 1031 notes)
Download: Toraboruta-P - Soleil
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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From Miku Creator's Project on Google+
Lyrics & Music : Toraboruta
Illustration : CHRIS
Flute : Matsumura Takumi
You can see the awsum video here
Oni by Mystyk. Thank you!!! :D
Lyrics translated by AmeSubs ~
SPOILER
A god of death with sorrowful eyes speaks
"Are you the one who will save me?"
You feel pain from darkness you never wished for
Even this appearance is hideous...
The girl shines like the sun; and as she stands still,
She holds out one of her hands, smiling as she speaks
"Its alright,
I shall take on your darkness,
And change your form into a bird."
"You can fly free; go anywhere you wish to in this sky,
And if you have no destination in mind
You can come with me."
The white bird flaps its wings, following the girl.
Many more are waiting to be saved from their darkness,
And the girl reached out to every single one of them.
Accompanied by a flock of white birds in the sky,
The girl's figure was as dark as the night.
Her body had been consumed by the darkness,
She used up the last of her strength,
And began to turn cold,
The grieving birds consume the girl's darkness.
And in the sky filled with a flock of black birds,
You sparkle a bright gold; you are
Soleil.
Last edited by Minao , edited 22 times in total.
hufuhufu
70 posts
Joined August 2013
hufuhufu
hi o/
here's your timing request

i don't think there's anything wrong with the BPM
but offset is 3775

hope it help and good luck ;)
Minao
219 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Minao

hufuhufu wrote:

hi o/
here's your timing request

i don't think there's anything wrong with the BPM
but offset is 3775

hope it help and good luck ;)
Thank you! :)
toara_fict
1,319 posts
Joined July 2012
toara_fict
Hi :3

Sorry, I can't modding this map x.x

t/152263

Please study the above

GL :3
Minao
219 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Minao
Thank you for the topic ~
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
You asked me for a Oni GD, you also asked other people, I'll wait for further confirmation before I start making it inb4 10 oni GDs

d = represents don ( red )
k = represents kat ( blue )
D = represents big don
K = represents big kat

[Futsuu]
Hm.. this is unrankable at first glance, I will point out the major errors in here

This Futsuu doesn't look like a futsuu, it is somewhat a muzu

[quote="EN : Taiko Ranking Criteria":1337]
Finish notes

Finish notes must not be in the middle or at the beginning in a 1/4 or above stream. At the end, finish streams may be allowed if there is a reasonable sound for it. Finisher notes at the end of a stream must have the opposite color of the previous note.[quote="FR: Taiko Ranking Criteria":1337]
Finish notes

Les Finish Notes ne doivent pas être placées au milieu ou au début d'un stream 1/4 ou moins. A la fin de la map, les Finish Streams sont autorisés s'ils correspondent à certains sons de la musique. Les Finisher Notes à la fin d'un stream doivent être de couleur différente que la note précédente.00:38:578 (51,52,53) - Unrankable
00:45:778 (67,68,69) - ^
01:19:081 (144,145,146) - ^
and other occurences if I missed out any

01:22:082 (150) - K > k | I don't get why is there a finish here owo
01:29:282 (170) - d > k | There's too much dons in succession, add a kat here
01:34:683 (180) - K > k | Remove the finish here, it gives 01:35:583 (183) - a much greater impact
02:01:085 (247,250) - Remove | The finishes here with the notes may confuse muzu players, create some breaks for them
02:16:086 (287) - K > k | Rankable but it's not recommended in Muzu
02:56:590 - I don't get some finishes here, try to not use too many if there isn't a significant sound for it
02:54:790 (381,384,385) - Change to Dkk | 1 finish here is enough
03:05:591 (401) - Change to a finish | This is to keep consistency with the previous finishers
03:17:292 (429) - d > k | There's a lack of kats here, add one here

[Muzu]

This should be renamed to Oni

00:44:728 (129) - Remove | Having one more note than the vocals is pretty weird imo
01:19:081 (238,239,240) - I think it's better to make it kdk or k - K, since having a finish at the end of a stream is pretty hard to do and this is a pretty calming song
01:26:282 (261,262,263) - ^
01:33:783 (284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295) - Unrankable and also ^ for 295
01:21:931 (248,249) - Unrankable
and the list goes on

01:38:283 (303) - I don't think it's good to have sliders in songs that use 1/6 or 1/3 since the slider uses 1/4 beats which are pretty weird, I suggest to just use notes instead of sliders

I think the don and kats are pretty okay, pretty much all of my mods will just surface the unrankable problems, after you are done checking with the topic toara_fict recommended, I think I will recheck this again, just post in my queue whenever you are ready owo/
Minao
219 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Minao
Thank you for the Mod :D

lZenxl wrote:

You asked me for a Oni GD, you also asked other people, I'll wait for further confirmation before I start making it inb4 10 oni GDs
Yep I asked to another people before you because I didn't really think any of you would accept it XD I was very surprised when you said okay! I said to the other people that you will make it. Thank you :)

d = represents don ( red )
k = represents kat ( blue )
D = represents big don
K = represents big kat

[Futsuu]
Hm.. this is unrankable at first glance, I will point out the major errors in here

This Futsuu doesn't look like a futsuu, it is somewhat a muzu Apparently I made each diff a little harder than what it should be :? I renamed it

[quote="EN : Taiko Ranking Criteria":1337]
Finish notes

Finish notes must not be in the middle or at the beginning in a 1/4 or above stream. At the end, finish streams may be allowed if there is a reasonable sound for it. Finisher notes at the end of a stream must have the opposite color of the previous note.
[quote="FR: Taiko Ranking Criteria":1337]
Finish notes

Les Finish Notes ne doivent pas être placées au milieu ou au début d'un stream 1/4 ou moins. A la fin de la map, les Finish Streams sont autorisés s'ils correspondent à certains sons de la musique. Les Finisher Notes à la fin d'un stream doivent être de couleur différente que la note précédente.^ I take note of this, thanks

00:38:578 (51,52,53) - Unrankable Deleted (52)
00:45:778 (67,68,69) - ^ Deleted (67,68)
01:19:081 (144,145,146) - ^ Deleted (145)
and other occurences if I missed out any

01:22:082 (150) - K > k | I don't get why is there a finish here owo It's because of the little sound like a little bell in the music. I removed it.
01:29:282 (170) - d > k | There's too much dons in succession, add a kat here Done
01:34:683 (180) - K > k | Remove the finish here, it gives 01:35:583 (183) - a much greater impact Done
02:01:085 (247,250) - Remove | The finishes here with the notes may confuse muzu players, create some breaks for them Done
02:16:086 (287) - K > k | Rankable but it's not recommended in Muzu Done
02:56:590 - I don't get some finishes here, try to not use too many if there isn't a significant sound for it Removed some notes
02:54:790 (381,384,385) - Change to Dkk | 1 finish here is enough Done
03:05:591 (401) - Change to a finish | This is to keep consistency with the previous finishers Done
03:17:292 (429) - d > k | There's a lack of kats here, add one here Done

[Muzu]

This should be renamed to Oni I renamed it

00:44:728 (129) - Remove | Having one more note than the vocals is pretty weird imo Okay
01:19:081 (238,239,240) - I think it's better to make it kdk or k - K, since having a finish at the end of a stream is pretty hard to do and this is a pretty calming song Changed for kdk
01:26:282 (261,262,263) - ^ Changed for kdk
01:33:783 (284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295) - Unrankable and also ^ for 295 Saaad because I liked this part XD Changed it for something easier
01:21:931 (248,249) - Unrankable Deleted (248)
and the list goes on

01:38:283 (303) - I don't think it's good to have sliders in songs that use 1/6 or 1/3 since the slider uses 1/4 beats which are pretty weird, I suggest to just use notes instead of sliders Okay I will change it for every slider

I think the don and kats are pretty okay, pretty much all of my mods will just surface the unrankable problems, after you are done checking with the topic toara_fict recommended, I think I will recheck this again, just post in my queue whenever you are ready owo/Thank you very much! So if I get it... The Katan is quite ok, Futsuu becomes Muzu and Muzu becomes Oni. So I need now to:
- Make a Futsuu according to the Mapping Taiko Difficulties guide
- Check every diff with this guide in mind
- Maybe I will have to up the Slider Velocity, because all diffs seems too easy to me (and I'm not a good taiko player) comparing with other maps I played @_@

And then there will be 2 Oni diff :D I'm happy!
I will post in your queue when I think everything is better :3 Thanks again!
Konpaku Sariel
778 posts
Joined October 2010
Konpaku Sariel
bpm change to 200
and
slider velocity multiple -> 0.5x or 0.75x

and muzukasii OD7 is very cruel ;w;
Minao
219 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Minao

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

bpm change to 200 Wow I didn't get how it worked but it worked XD Thank you!
and
slider velocity multiple -> 0.5x or 0.75x Okay!

and muzukasii OD7 is very cruel ;w; I will change it ^^"
Thank you!! :)
Mystyk
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950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk
Hey!

I made an Oni, so if you like it I hope you'll use it :3
http://puu.sh/9w189/d0c476842d.osu

Also, muzukashii should have OD4, futsuu OD3 and kantan OD2.
Minao
219 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Minao

Mystyk wrote:

Hey!

I made an Oni, so if you like it I hope you'll use it :3
http://puu.sh/9w189/d0c476842d.osu

Also, muzukashii should have OD4, futsuu OD3 and kantan OD2.
Thank you! Omg I have 4 Oni diffs now XD Okaaay I will try add the more I can. lZenxl has the priority on this, I'm going to add his/her diff for sure.
I can't guarantee anything for your diff but thank you again.
I'm going to work on this beatmap today, I hope I could make all the needed changes and give you a precise answer about your diff, if I add it or not.
Mystyk
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Mystyk
Well I didn't know others have made an Oni for this o.o but oh well, I'll wait for your answer :3
Evening
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Joined December 2012
Evening
Mod here owo/!

[spoilerI'm not going to make a GD on this since I really don't know how to start lol[/spoiler]

[General]

The Video is blocked by the taiko gameplay field, you might want to somehow move it down using a video editing program

[Muzu]
00:24:025 (25,27,28,29) - Invert colours | Follows pitch of vocal better
00:47:275 (81) - d > k | For vocals here
00:55:975 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1833181 | This pattern? It follows the guitar
01:27:775 (194,195,196) - Invert colours for vocals
01:48:475 (261,262) - dd > kk | For vocals?
02:03:475 (303) - d > k OR K
02:40:375 (405) - d > D | For emphasis?
03:18:025 - Add a don here for vocals?

[Futsuu]
00:51:475 (43) - d > D | For the end of a section?
00:58:675 (2) - k > K | For emphasis?
01:01:375 (7) - d > k | Pitch map?
01:35:575 (47) - d > D | Emphasis on the start of chorus
01:49:975 (68) - d > D | Emphasis on the middle of the chorus?
02:11:575 (2) - d > k | Pitch map?
02:40:375 (25) - d > D | Finish here due to the finish on 02:33:175 (20) -
02:54:775 (46) - d > D | Emphasis on strong vocals
03:06:175 (60,61) - Swap | Pitchmap
03:09:175 (64) - k > K | Emphasis on start of chorus
03:23:575 (88,91,95,98) - Finishes on all of these to increase the variety of the patterns here?

[Kantan]

01:09:475 (10,15) - Swap | Variation of pattern here?
01:19:375 (17) - k > K | Finisher here?
01:26:575 (22) - ^
01:35:575 (27) - ^
01:45:475 (35,37) - Change to k so as to have a different hitsound here?
02:11:575 (1) - d > k | For vocals?
02:18:775 (8) - d > k |^

Nothing else, good luck owo/!
Minao
219 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Minao

lZenxl wrote:

Mod here owo/!

[spoilerI'm not going to make a GD on this since I really don't know how to start lol[/spoiler] Okay :(

[General]

The Video is blocked by the taiko gameplay field, you might want to somehow move it down using a video editing program I noticed this too but I'm a noob for editing videos, I try to find someone to do it!

I made all the changes, except:
03:23:575 (88,91,95,98) - Finishes on all of these to increase the variety of the patterns here? Only add a finisher to 2 of them

Nothing else, good luck owo/! Thank you!
Sad for the GD, thank you a lot for the mod anyway!
Minao
219 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Minao
Map now pending and ready for mods!
@Mystyk -> I allowed myself to change your diff setup song title to the exact same title than the other diffs, and I added your name on all the diffs tags. I hope you don't mind u.u"
blackabyss
494 posts
Joined November 2011
blackabyss
metadata check here uvu)/

Artist name should be Toraboruta-P and remove "feat. Kagamine Rin"
put Kagamine Rin in tags instead.

osu!wiki wrote:

Vocaloids can be featured within the artist section if the producer/composer includes it via official sources. This ensures that we enforce metadata being accurate in all cases.
try check this out https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

You shouldn't put Toraboruta in tags because Toraburuta is the artist name.
Just suggestion, i think you should add this to the tag: 鏡音リン, append, vocaloid, nico_nico_douga

nice song! 8-)
Minao
219 posts
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Topic Starter
Minao

blackabyss wrote:

metadata check here uvu)/ Hi hi!!! :)

Artist name should be Toraboruta-P and remove "feat. Kagamine Rin"
put Kagamine Rin in tags instead.

osu!wiki wrote:

Vocaloids can be featured within the artist section if the producer/composer includes it via official sources. This ensures that we enforce metadata being accurate in all cases.
try check this out https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria
About this I don't know what to do because the video was posted first on NicoNicoDouga, and Toraboruta doesn't write he is the artist but the "songwriter", and it's Kagamine Rin's name which appears in the title of the video @_@ : http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm18857288

You shouldn't put Toraboruta in tags because Toraburuta is the artist name. Okay I remove!
Just suggestion, i think you should add this to the tag: 鏡音リン, append, vocaloid, nico_nico_douga Okay :D

nice song! 8-)
Thank you!!!
If you see this post can you please tell me what I should finally do for "feat. Kagamine Rin"? :?
blackabyss
494 posts
Joined November 2011
blackabyss

Minao wrote:

If you see this post can you please tell me what I should finally do for "feat. Kagamine Rin"? :? [/b]
nah, my vocaloid map yonjuunana is the same case. if the artist didn't put "feat." via song title or in his official video on niconico... i think you should remove it like i and other vocaloid songs mapper did.
or you may also looking on wikia or something to be sure about it :'3
sorry i can't help much.
don't kudos this pls.
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
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Mystyk
That's okay Minao, thanks for doing it instead of me xD

Also, I usually put vocaloid names (like Kagamine Rin) in the tags.

Artist: トラボルタP
Romanised Artist: Toraboruta-P

copy pasted from wikia and also obviously no kudosu xD im this is the right artist :P

This is how I usually do it (but I don't have any vocaloid maps ranked yet): http://puu.sh/alqBq/f3a3faa411.png
Minao
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Minao
Okay I changed all thank you both ^_^
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