1. Climbb & KPY's Taiko Oni (3.31 stars, 393 notes)
2. Taiko Muzukashii (2.47 stars, 271 notes)
3. Easy (1.3 stars, 88 notes)
4. Insane (3.6 stars, 272 notes)
5. Melt's Hard (3.36 stars, 223 notes)
6. Normal (2.13 stars, 155 notes)

angle Melt

osu file format v12

[General]
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[Metadata]
Title:Niji no Kakera
TitleUnicode:虹のかけら
Artist:Kon Natsumi
ArtistUnicode:昆 夏美
Creator:OblivioN
Version:Hard
Source:一週間フレンズ
Tags:一週間フレンズ
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1. 一个是现在还没有黄线。
2. 还有一个是用soft音效那一段强烈建议把滑调音消掉。
3. 还有一个是我觉得现在这个combo colour不是很好看，可以试试用浅色调的。比如这种
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 255,196,255
   Combo2 : 255,255,193
   Combo3 : 187,243,253
   Combo4 : 243,167,167

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Hi~ from your request in game~!

• [General]

1. BG is 1055x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.-fixed
   
2. Add audioLeadin 1500~2000ms-fixed
3. Uncheck 'Letterbox during breaks'-fixed
   
   Click

   
4. Inconsistency in combo colours:
   - [Insane] : Combo1 : 243,167,167 Combo2 : 255,196,255 Combo3 : 255,255,193 Combo4 : 187,243,153
   - [Melt's Hard] : Combo1 : 206,167,254 Combo2 : 239,223,75 Combo3 : 81,225,251 Combo4 : 233,90,90

• [Easy]

1. HP +1 , OD +1-fixed
   
2. 00:41:362 (1) - move this 00:41:135 and end is 00:41:817
   
   Click

   
   -fixed
3. 00:43:862 - add note~?-add
4. 01:03:408 (3) - I think This is more fit to music.
   
   Click

   
   -I kept it and think of some time(ˊ・ω・ˋ
5. 01:07:953 (3) - same as 01:03:408-^
6. 01:11:590 (5) - same~!-^
7. 01:16:590 (1,2,3) - You can make this triangle shape.-good! thank you!
   
   Click

   
   ***Here is code~
   

   288,248,76590,6,0,P|344:224|368:192,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   428,128,77499,2,0,P|383:103|333:111,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   259,163,78408,2,0,P|243:111|252:64,1,100,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

• [Normal]

1. HP +2 , OD +1-fixed
   
2. 00:51:362 (1) - delete reverse.just one slider is more follow vocal.-fixed
3. 01:15:226 (1) - This slider is well follow vocal.but awkward I think.So try this.-fixed
   
   Click

   

• [Melt's Hard]

1. AR -1
2. Slider Velocity 1.54 -> 1.60
3. 00:05:226 - add note~?
4. 01:04:317 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This jump is too hard I think..(just suggestion)

• [Insane]

1. 00:05:226 - add note~?(I think it's more comfortable)-sounds uncomfortable……
2. 01:17:271 (2) - x:256, y:192-fixed
3. 01:18:862 (1) - //-fixed
4. 01:26:021 (1) - I think this spin end is 01:29:090 and delete 01:27:726 (1) this note.like other diffs.-fixed

Nice Map and song~! ><
GL to Rank~!

gxytcgxytc wrote:

[general]
ai mod says
妹儿的hard preview time 和其他的不一致-fixed
tag countdown (321go) 不一致 (最好加mapper ID -fixed


Insane和melt hard的artist 中间有个空格 窝不知道应该有还是没有=A=至少统一一下 然后问个霓虹人怎么搞-fixed
[Easy]
摸不出来
[Normal]
00:01:817 (3) - 少whistle么-fixed
01:01:362 (2) - DS奇特 move to 56,256-fixed
[hard]
不会摸;_;
[Insane]
ar-1
00:04:317 (1) - 貌似失去了什么 head加个finish应该不错w
00:00:681 (1,2,3,4) - 这是正方型吧没错吧..
01:05:226 (3,4,5,6) - 整体左移点

可以不看/.\

果然clap还是违和=-= 按你喜好来吧 00:10:226 (2,5) - 00:15:681 (2,3) - 01:27:726 (1) -
remap惹，谢谢白雪:D

Edit do some irc 其实是因为上面看着太寒酸勒QAQ

IIRRCC

20:52 gxytcgxytc: =A=
20:53 OblivioN: ;w;
20:53 OblivioN: 怎么啦？
20:53 gxytcgxytc: 00:08:181 (2,3) - 这种滑条个人来讲是不推荐大量使用
20:53 gxytcgxytc: 偶尔一个没啥
20:53 gxytcgxytc: 最好是重音在滑条头
20:53 OblivioN: normal里的?
20:54 gxytcgxytc: 在看I
20:54 gxytcgxytc: 这个啦啦之前看我图也总说我
20:54 OblivioN: soga
20:54 OblivioN: 发个po吧;w;
20:54 gxytcgxytc: 还有感觉你把I难度看的太重;w;
20:54 gxytcgxytc: 不自然
20:55 OblivioN: soga……
20:55 gxytcgxytc: 刚做的话大概都是这样?= =梗太多根本停不下来什么的
20:55 OblivioN: 好吧/w\
20:56 gxytcgxytc: 132 ar9丧失大怪兽
20:56 OblivioN: /w\
20:56 OblivioN: 其实是因为ar8 这个我打不好;w;
20:56 gxytcgxytc: 美丽
20:56 gxytcgxytc: 我摸图经验不多也不会提啥节奏上的修改
20:57 OblivioN: 00:27:953 (1,2,3) -
20:57 OblivioN: 这种的可以吧？0.0
20:58 gxytcgxytc: 没事啊..
20:58 gxytcgxytc: 然后就是这种nazi00:30:794 (3,4,5,6) -
20:58 gxytcgxytc: 00:00:681 (1,2,3,4) -
20:59 gxytcgxytc: po里说过
20:59 gxytcgxytc: 00:26:135 (1,2,3,4,5) - 然后这类连打间距强烈建议要一致
20:59 OblivioN: OK
20:59 gxytcgxytc: 本串肯定要一致的除非你做梗
21:00 OblivioN: 猴
21:00 gxytcgxytc: 其他串也最好统一一下 速度变了什么的可以适量增加或者减少
21:00 OblivioN: 嗯呐
21:01 gxytcgxytc: 比如"平常串都是0.5 然后想表现一下高潮感觉的可以0.8甚至1.0
21:01 gxytcgxytc: 这些就随心了
21:01 gxytcgxytc: 要怂
21:01 OblivioN: 好的ww
21:02 OblivioN: 怂的意思？
21:02 OblivioN: 规规矩矩作图？;w;
21:02 gxytcgxytc: 追随内心._.
21:02 gxytcgxytc: @贾斯丁比伯
21:02 OblivioN: ;w;

恩果然摸不出来啥..

lnyphoenix wrote:

Easy

抱歉看不懂easy

Normal

00:00:681 (1,2) - 1、2顺序对调，和后面统一
00:01:817 (3,4) - ds 3.82，你的insane都没出现这么大的跳跃……可以和00:03:181 (2)重叠放-fixed
00:38:862 (1) - 改成00:38:635 - 00:39:090，和00:40:226 (3)相应-好像改了:3

Melt's hard

也是不敢摸，妹儿水太深

Insane

AR=8，这bpm和这难度都感觉不需要9原来已经改了
00:57:044 (1,2) - 这个滑条接往返滑条节奏没听出来，改成往返滑条接滑条可能会比较好改哩
01:21:817 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g-get
01:23:635 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ctrl+g，ctrl+h 这里4组多边形全是顺时针，可以加一点变化-get√
01:27:726 (1) - 转圈之后这个note的位置很不顺手，建议放在正中-del
整体来说节奏上空档不少，ds也比较保守（我只看到一处3.2超过了3，超过2的都是屈指可数），也没有什么遮挡或者别的难点，难度名建议改成hard已经remap

我是萌萌的新人酱，如果摸的不好请好好调教教导我 DA☆ZE

WinglessAsura wrote:

[list]here's my mod

General

first, i want to say. your map is almost perfect for ranked. no need for more object modding.
just, your hitsound is should be increase slightly. at some point, your hitsound goes silent while song playing it beats.
as for hard and above, it will be more challenging if you adding some jumps to the map or maybe there's a jump on your map but its too few, try to increase more jumps. usually hard/insane diff player likes jumps

hope my mod will be useful for you. i'm sorry if there's any inconvenience in my words

4anke wrote:

normal

00:21:135 (1,2) - 这两个开头叠起来的滑条对新手来说不好读图
00:30:681 (2,3) -
00:32:953 (1,2) -
00:51:362 (1,2) -
01:00:226 (4,1) -
01:05:681 (3,1) - 理由同上好像EZNM滑条不允许叠
all done

hard

01:20:567 (1,1) - 转盘之后出现note有点突然，中间又不是break，中间建议加点note

insane

00:30:453 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这串东西不好，后面的串不在节奏上，而且也不应该放串在这
01:27:726 (1) - 转盘后的note放中间比较好吧
remap哩

Regraz wrote:

微博上群众hhhhh
占位~Sorry for so long waiting!
新手modder见谅！

==================================
[General]
1. Remove letterbox during breaks because you don't have break times in this mapset.(EZ NM HD)删掉啦
2. Wide Screen Support option conflict in Insane diff.
[Easy]
Rhythm issues：
00:38:408 (4,1) - 这之间 为啥空了？QwQ-感觉可以空，不然ez就3星以上了
01:20:453 (1) - 把前面的vocal补一下，在这里开始转盘-好
Layout issues:
00:07:044 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/8lmxe.jpg
类似的还有一些，譬如 00:15:681 (2,3) - 00:12:499 (4,5) - 做blanket的时候可以用AR圈检查一下~~-改好啦
00:27:044 (2,4) - 用坐标确保2的尾部和4的头部叠放整齐-改好啦
00:45:681 (4,6) - 做成一样的，对称美观-改好啦
01:05:226 (4,1,2) - 他们做成一样的，并且让他们的尾巴连起来是一个正三角形，美观的pattern-改好啦
01:10:226 (2,5) - 把5和2放隔开一些-好
Hitsound issues：
觉得kiai用osu自带的clap不太好听
00:03:635 (2) - 用whistle或者是其他的强调一下这个-改好啦
00:04:317 (3) - 这个大白线finish多好-猴
00:22:044 (3) - 尾巴加finish-猴
[Normal]
3.5星以上了，NM最好做成3.5以下的
CS4好吓人
Rhythm issues：
00:51:362 (1) - 这个不对节奏，跟vocal也感觉怪怪的，建议改一下-改回原来的折返惹
00:07:044 (2) - 这个NM最好不要弄，折返太快了-再留一下;w;
00:28:862 (5) - 这个折返不太对得上音乐 00:29:771 这里加一个note-猴
Layout issues:
00:13:408 (1,2) - 弄成平滑的-还不造怎么改……
00:22:953 (2,3) - 没有blanket好，像这样稍微调一下http://puu.sh/8mv1c.jpg-猴
00:24:771 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/8mv3Y.jpg同样是blanket问题-修啦
00:30:226 (1,2) - 这样包一下：http://puu.sh/8mv7a.jpg-猴
00:16:590 (1) - 检查一下坐标，没有叠好-修好啦
00:35:681 (1,2) - 这样的stack还是不要弄比较好-再看看
01:06:135 (1,2) - 试试这样：http://puu.sh/8mvk4.jpg-棒！
Overlap很不美观比如：00:02:726 (1,2) - 00:21:135 (1,2) -
DS调成1.1就不会overlap啦 :3~;w;先不改啦……不然要remap……orz
[Melt's Hard]
:3
Very nice！
[Insane]

新人不太会Insane，简单看看吧w
00:04:317 (1) - 头加finish
00:05:908 (3) - ^
00:18:862 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/8p9ro.jpg 形状弄好一点，最好包好
00:21:590 (5,6,7,8,9) - 跟着鼓声可以加上clap
00:55:226 (1,2) - 包好 http://puu.sh/8p9B2.jpg
00:56:362 (3,5) - 5的尾巴没有完全叠好哦！
00:58:862 (1,2) - 挪开一些，重叠的太近了
01:09:317 (5,7) - 没有完全叠好，检查一下坐标
01:11:590 (1,3) - ^
01:20:681 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得在 01:21:362 (4) - 01:22:271 (3) - 01:23:181 (3) - 01:24:090 (3) - 01:24:771 (3) - 下whistle好一些。
-全改啦！
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If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in-game!
Good luck!

Jemmmmy wrote:

irc

2014-05-01 22:22 Jemmmmy: 00:01:817 (5) - nc
2014-05-01 22:23 OblivioN: 要走rank是不是比较没戏【。】 ;w;
2014-05-01 22:23 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:23 Jemmmmy: 改改还是可以
2014-05-01 22:23 OblivioN: 噢噢！ww
2014-05-01 22:23 Jemmmmy: 调换nc
2014-05-01 22:24 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-05-01 22:24 OblivioN: 00:01:817 (1) - 这里改了
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 00:04:999 (6,1) -
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 这里调换nc
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 不对
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 00:04:999 (6,1) -
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 这里//
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 00:04:999 (6,1) -
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: orz
2014-05-01 22:24 Jemmmmy: 你等等
2014-05-01 22:24 OblivioN: 嗯
2014-05-01 22:25 Jemmmmy: 00:04:317 (5,1) - 好了这里调换nc
2014-05-01 22:25 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:25 Jemmmmy: 00:04:999 (6,1) - 这两个间距小了, 误以为是隔着半拍
2014-05-01 22:25 OblivioN: soga
2014-05-01 22:26 Jemmmmy: 00:07:840 - 这里可以加个note
2014-05-01 22:26 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:27 Jemmmmy: 00:10:226 - http://puu.sh/8uHrV.jpg
2014-05-01 22:27 OblivioN: OK~
2014-05-01 22:27 Jemmmmy: 节奏贴歌声
2014-05-01 22:27 OblivioN: 好的w
2014-05-01 22:28 Jemmmmy: 00:18:862 (1,2) - 这些不要贴紧在一起
2014-05-01 22:28 Jemmmmy: 留些缝隙
2014-05-01 22:28 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:28 Jemmmmy: 像00:17:726 (3,5) -
2014-05-01 22:28 OblivioN: 嗯啊
2014-05-01 22:29 Jemmmmy: 00:22:499 (1,2) - 分开点？
2014-05-01 22:30 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:30 Jemmmmy: 00:24:544 (2,3,4) - 这里三连不怎么贴节奏
2014-05-01 22:30 OblivioN: 嗯……
2014-05-01 22:30 Jemmmmy: 但是00:25:908 (9,10,1) -
2014-05-01 22:30 Jemmmmy: 这种就可以用用
2014-05-01 22:31 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:31 OblivioN: 00:24:771 (4,5) - 这两个地方的音拉成slider？
2014-05-01 22:31 Jemmmmy: 00:26:817 (2,4) - 这种重叠最好不要用
2014-05-01 22:31 OblivioN: 噢！好
2014-05-01 22:32 Jemmmmy: 可以拉成滑条
2014-05-01 22:32 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:34 Jemmmmy: 00:34:999 - 这里节奏http://puu.sh/8uHQ8.jpg
2014-05-01 22:35 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:35 Jemmmmy: 折返滑条没用的必要
2014-05-01 22:35 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:35 Jemmmmy: 00:38:862 (1) - note
2014-05-01 22:36 Jemmmmy: 做了
2014-05-01 22:36 Jemmmmy: 错了
2014-05-01 22:36 Jemmmmy: 00:37:271 - 这里 note 因为你后面都是跟乐器
2014-05-01 22:36 OblivioN: 嗯……
2014-05-01 22:37 Jemmmmy: 交换nc00:51:362 (10,1) -
2014-05-01 22:37 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:37 OblivioN: 00:37:271这里是加一个吗？
2014-05-01 22:37 OblivioN: 00:37:271
2014-05-01 22:37 Jemmmmy: 嗯
2014-05-01 22:37 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:38 Jemmmmy: 00:57:953 (7,1,2) - 这里太挤了 高潮送很多都行
2014-05-01 22:38 OblivioN: 好
2014-05-01 22:38 OblivioN: 就是分开放吧？
2014-05-01 22:40 Jemmmmy: 差不多
2014-05-01 22:40 Jemmmmy: 重新组合一下
2014-05-01 22:40 OblivioN: 猴w
2014-05-01 22:40 OblivioN: 嗯啊
2014-05-01 22:40 Jemmmmy: 01:00:681 (7) - nc
2014-05-01 22:40 OblivioN: get~
2014-05-01 22:40 Jemmmmy: 01:05:226 (7,8,9,10) - 这里没摆好？
2014-05-01 22:41 Jemmmmy: 连打 摆成标准弧线
2014-05-01 22:41 OblivioN: 好像是的;w;
2014-05-01 22:41 OblivioN: 嗯啊
2014-05-01 22:41 Jemmmmy: 01:05:681 (11) - 这可以分为两个短滑条
2014-05-01 22:41 OblivioN: 好的
2014-05-01 22:43 Jemmmmy: 01:09:544 - 节奏http://puu.sh/8uIjD.jpg
2014-05-01 22:43 OblivioN: get~
2014-05-01 22:44 Jemmmmy: 01:15:226 - 可以用http://puu.sh/8uIpa.jpg
2014-05-01 22:45 Jemmmmy: 然后再摆的整齐点
2014-05-01 22:45 OblivioN: 好w
2014-05-01 22:45 Jemmmmy: 01:15:226 (1) - nc
2014-05-01 22:45 OblivioN: 猴
2014-05-01 22:46 Jemmmmy: 01:23:635 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 这里用多边形工具来摆
2014-05-01 22:46 Jemmmmy: ctrl+shift+d
2014-05-01 22:47 OblivioN: 好【是用多边形摆的来着的>< ;w;可能歪了

加油

HabiHolic wrote:

Hmm as your reqs

wait. Please~ tommorw mod~^^