1. Easy (1.4 stars, 73 notes)
2. Gero's Normal (1.82 stars, 128 notes)
3. Gu's Insane (3.26 stars, 267 notes)
4. Hard (2.78 stars, 200 notes)

1. I noticed your mp3 sounded a bit too quiet, so I turned it up here. New offset would be 2380. (+50)
   
   
2. Also, to be on the sure side, I'd move the offset to the Spinner's start to prevent having objects before a timeline.
   
   
3. You should add "kz livetune" to tags as they contributed to the song.

1. Done per chat.
   
   Log

   23:28 Konei: eh time for an irc mod maybe?
   23:40 Kenezz: Sorry, if you want yes, no prob
   23:41 Konei: ah cool. then I'll do this and mod Gu's in forum
   23:41 Kenezz: fine :3
   23:41 Konei: also I found your mp3 a bit quiet and turned the volume up, you'll see in my post :P
   23:41 Konei: okay 
   23:41 *Konei is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/401146 Dancing Dolls - monochrome (TV Size) [Easy]]
   23:43 Konei: 00:15:107 (3) - Add a drum hitclap addition to the repeat to follow the drums in the background?
   23:44 Konei: 00:22:380 - drag the break's end point until here? seems to fit the music better
   23:44 Kenezz: ok ok
   23:45 Konei: 00:34:652 (1) - Shouldn't the NC be on the next note? According to the downbeat?
   23:45 Kenezz: You're right
   23:46 Konei: 00:41:470 (3) - Add a whistle to the head? The vocal pattern ends here in my view
   23:46 Konei: 00:44:198 (2) - Missed a whistle at the start?
   23:47 Kenezz: Fixed 
   23:47 Konei: 00:53:175 (1) - How about adding Normal sampleset to the Spinner to follow the drums?
   23:47 Kenezz: Sounds nice, added
   23:48 Konei: 01:07:834 (1) - The end's vocal is a highest, so add a whistle there aswell?
   23:48 Konei: beat*
   23:48 Konei: not vocal
   23:49 Konei: 01:25:902 (1) - Add a whistle to the Spinner? Fits the high tone on the end
   23:49 Kenezz: added
   23:50 Konei: Okay, going to Hard
   23:51 Konei: 00:18:516 (1) - Add a whistle? Fits the melody better
   23:52 Kenezz: Added
   23:52 Konei: 00:20:334 - here aswell then
   23:52 Konei: 00:22:152 - and there ~
   23:52 Kenezz: okay
   23:53 Konei: 00:26:925 (3) - You might try a whistle on the end here. It fits the piano or whatever this is in the background
   23:54 Konei: 00:28:516 (2) - If you add the above one then I'd add one here aswell for the consistency
   23:54 Kenezz: Hmm I really don't like how the whistle works there
   23:55 Konei: Yea, that might be your taste
   23:55 Konei: I understand what you mean
   23:56 Konei: 00:41:470 (3) - Add a whistle here as on Easy?
   23:56 Konei: 00:44:197 (1) - Missed it here on the start?
   23:56 Kenezz: Fixed
   23:57 Konei: 00:53:175 (1) - Add a clap to the Spinner to follow the bass?
   23:58 Kenezz: Added~
   23:58 Konei: 01:11:016 (7) - This one feels weird with the triplet plus stack, you could try to unstack and blanket 1 with this Slider
   00:00 Kenezz: I'll try if more people pokes about this point, for now I'll leave it as is
   00:00 Konei: Sure
   00:01 Konei: 01:25:902 (1) - and here same as on Easy
   00:01 Kenezz: the whistle, okay~

1. 00:09:652 (1) - I recommend you to add a clap to the end to catch the bass.
2. 00:11:016 (4) - Same as above.
3. 00:11:470 (6) - Here on the end.
4. 00:12:834 (8) - And hereee, and on the rest, you should be able to here them out.
5. 00:15:107 (4) - I suggest a new combo here, the music shift is too strong to have this in the same combo.
6. 00:31:698 (3) - Remove this note? It seems not to be that important for the rhythm, plus I think you used too much 1/2 in a row.
7. 01:25:789 (1) - This NC feels unneeded, better to remove it I guess.
8. 01:25:902 (1) - You should end this Spinner on the downbeat like Kenezz did, or have a talk with him. But at least make it consistent through difficulties.

1. 00:28:289 (1) - I think curving this one in the other direction gives a better transition.
   
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2. 00:40:561 (1) - The tone is high at the start, don't wanna add a whistle to the downbeat?
3. 00:44:425 (2) - Spacing feels to high here, I'd say reduce it to 2,5 or something?
4. 01:00:561 (1) - Pull the end up a bit and try to do a neater blanket? It's noticeable here.
5. 01:25:789 (5) - I'd say this feels more like a jump, not an antijump. Try to do a triangle jump here?
6. 01:25:902 (1) - Add a whistle to the Spinner to catch the hightone?

DakeDekaane wrote:

Yup yup, getting into this first, idk why lol

[General]
Maybe I'm deaf but the 40% volume sections the soft hits are barely noticeable, increase the volume around 50-55% (This would require to increase volume in the other sections to preserve consistency).

[Hard]
00:37:216 (2) - Tal vez usar circulos en vez de este slider? Es más una preferencia personal pero sería mejor si hay algo para golpear en 00:37:330
00:38:125 (5) - ^ Dejaré ambos como están.
01:10:511 (4,5,6,7) - Tal vez desapilar el slider del triple, aunque se juega bien con la canción, puede llegar a ser algo confuso.
01:25:739 (1) - Remover NC.Listo

[Easy]
00:00:511 (1) - Generalemente no sugeriría algo que fuera en contra de la consistencia en todas las diffs, pero tal vez remover este spinner De hecho esperaba que alguien más pensara lo mismo para arreglarlo
01:18:693 (1,2,3) - Tal vez esto fue intencional, pero igual no hace mal decirlo, tal vez hacer que los sliders hagan el blanket al circulo? Arreglado

That'd be all from my part, cool mapset overall, good luck everyone \o/

Konei wrote:

Heey.


[General]

1. I noticed your mp3 sounded a bit too quiet, so I turned it up here. New offset would be 2380. (+50)
   
   
2. Also, to be on the sure side, I'd move the offset to the Spinner's start to prevent having objects before a timeline.
   
   
3. You should add "kz livetune" to tags as they contributed to the song. Added

Okay, that's it.

Nice mapset you got there, good luck!

1. ~

• - 00:53:175 (1) - No se si este spinner vaya junto con el slider, seria muy dificil para los jugadores nuevos, podrias moverlo al siguente tick blanco
  - 01:06:016 (2,3) - Spacing?
  - 01:25:902 (1) - Lo mismo en la primera sugerencia

• - 01:16:925 (4) - Tendras que mover este slider un poco mas a la izquierda ya que esta off-grid

• -- Muy bien

• -- Good diff

MoodyRPG wrote:

blarg ~

General

1. ~

Easy

• - 00:53:175 (1) - No se si este spinner vaya junto con el slider, seria muy dificil para los jugadores nuevos, podrias moverlo al siguente tick blanco Tienes razón, arreglado o3o
  - 01:06:016 (2,3) - Spacing? Whoops
  - 01:25:902 (1) - Lo mismo en la primera sugerencia Arreglado también.

Buen map, las dificultades estan bien hechas y hace bastante tiempo no modeaba un map tuyo hue

Buena suerte

1. Try offset 2,340 it seems accurate enough, and I get about 0~3ms of late early with it, so it should be accurate enough.

1. 00:11:470 (3) - The start of the slider has a really strong beat to it, maybe you should add a whistle to accompany it and make the start sound a lot less empty when clicking on it.
2. 00:27:380 (4) - I think symmetry mistakes in this map are a big problem since the whole map is designed to symmetry, and in here 4 is not lined correctly to 00:29:198 (2) - and 00:27:380 (4) - should be at the same position as 00:31:016 (4) - . I think you should try to fix that
3. 00:49:652 (1) - Too much whistle to me, maybe remove the whistle at the reverse? To follow your pattern you don't add whistle to all the white ticks and only important one's and this slider has 3 whistle which I find strange.
4. 01:07:834 (1) - ^ same as above, maybe replace the whistle in the reverse with a clap?
5. 01:24:198 (2) - The flow and the direction of this slider is strange, I think it's better to make a curve slider like this, to signal the symmetry and make it more beautiful, like this : http://puu.sh/8wVH0.jpg

1. 00:06:925 (5) - This note touches the HP Bar, which is not acceptable , try to move it down please. there no symmetry here, but don't move the next note just move the previous note if you adjust the position of this note.
2. 00:28:289 (1,2,3) - It's better to change this to a reverse arrow slider rhythm than a 3 circle rhythm, gets really boring to play and is a little overmapped for this section, try this, http://puu.sh/8wVZV.jpg
3. 01:23:970 - There needs to be a note here, that beat in the red tick is crazy strong, and it would unfortunate if you missed it, about pattern you can possibly change it, orz
4. 01:01:698 - ^ Maybe here too, Kiai needs harder rhythm imo.

1. 00:13:970 (2) - Add a whistle to the start of the slider here?
2. 00:10:561 (3) - ^
3. 00:28:743 (3) - The overlap here looks unclean compared to the your map, and it breaks your structure maybe you can stack the end of this slider with start of 00:27:380 (4) - like this : http://puu.sh/8wXtX.jpg
4. 00:42:152 (5) - Move to the left more, so there is a jump to the next combo? you seem to do that many times, and I think its good if you do it here. http://puu.sh/8wXzc.jpg
5. 00:53:061 (4) - I don't think you should stack them, the finish note should have movement to it, people need to feel the power of the beat, so you should move this note, not make it stack. follow the same design as 01:25:789 (8) -
6. 01:18:743 (1) - Finish here, to match finish with the first verse of kiai at 01:04:198 (3) - ?

1. 01:03:743 (5) - This note section seems a little overmapped, Imo, its better to do a reverse arrow slider rhythm like this : http://puu.sh/8wYdV.jpg seems to fit better.
2. 00:09:198 (4) - Whistle on the start of the slider only?
3. 00:11:470 (1) - ^
4. 01:25:220 (2) - New combo here, to match with 00:15:220 (1) -

Tari wrote:

OK

[General]

1. Try offset 2,340 it seems accurate enough, and I get about 0~3ms of late early with it, so it should be accurate enough. I'll change the bpm after everybody check the mod o3o/

[Easy]

1. 00:11:470 (3) - The start of the slider has a really strong beat to it, maybe you should add a whistle to accompany it and make the start sound a lot less empty when clicking on it. Added
2. 00:27:380 (4) - I think symmetry mistakes in this map are a big problem since the whole map is designed to symmetry, and in here 4 is not lined correctly to 00:29:198 (2) - and 00:27:380 (4) - should be at the same position as 00:31:016 (4) - . I think you should try to fix that Whops, fixed.
3. 00:49:652 (1) - Too much whistle to me, maybe remove the whistle at the reverse? To follow your pattern you don't add whistle to all the white ticks and only important one's and this slider has 3 whistle which I find strange. Okay
4. 01:07:834 (1) - ^ same as above, maybe replace the whistle in the reverse with a clap? ^
5. 01:24:198 (2) - The flow and the direction of this slider is strange, I think it's better to make a curve slider like this, to signal the symmetry and make it more beautiful, like this : http://puu.sh/8wVH0.jpg Changed, thanks o3o

[Hard]

1. 00:13:970 (2) - Add a whistle to the start of the slider here?
2. 00:10:561 (3) - ^ Added these and more
3. 00:28:743 (3) - The overlap here looks unclean compared to the your map, and it breaks your structure maybe you can stack the end of this slider with start of 00:27:380 (4) - like this : http://puu.sh/8wXtX.jpg Fine, fixed o3o
4. 00:42:152 (5) - Move to the left more, so there is a jump to the next combo? you seem to do that many times, and I think its good if you do it here. http://puu.sh/8wXzc.jpg Done
5. 00:53:061 (4) - I don't think you should stack them, the finish note should have movement to it, people need to feel the power of the beat, so you should move this note, not make it stack. follow the same design as 01:25:789 (8) - Naah, it's fine, works with the music
6. 01:18:743 (1) - Finish here, to match finish with the first verse of kiai at 01:04:198 (3) - ?Okay

Rest seems fine.

1. Be sure to uncheck widescreen support in all difficulties

1. 00:06:016 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
2. 00:45:561 (3,1) - ^

1. 00:28:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would refrain from having too many stacks in such a quick succession like this, its hard for normal players to read on an AR like this. Players will be tapping either too fast or too slow!
2. 00:43:743 (4,5) - While I like the whole symmetry thing that you have going on here, I don't really like the rhythm that you tried to follow! Maybe its best to break symmetry once here and try this rhythm, i found that this sounds and plays a bit better
   
3. 01:25:902 (1) - Maybe have this spinner end and sound like it does in the Easy difficulty.

1. HP - 1 to fit the spread better, LD7 is already pretty high for a hard!
2. 00:16:925 (1,3) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved
3. 00:18:743 (3,5) - ^
4. 00:51:470 (1) - 491:284 so that its slider end stacks with 00:50:561 (3) - perfectly
5. 00:52:152 (2) - 255:259 so that its slider end stacks with 00:51:243 (4) - perfectly
6. 01:11:016 (7) - Maybe face the slider more to the left so that there is a bigger jump in to 01:11:470 (1) -

1. I definitely recommend AR8 as opposed to AR9. A slow song like this does not warrant a faster approach rate. I found it awkward with AR9; it plays better with a slower AR, trust me!
2. If Kenezz lowers the LD in the Hard, then HP - 1 here as well
3. 01:23:970 (1) - This slowdown was a bit hard to read, I would recommend against it and just map it normally.

Lust wrote:

here is your mod as requested

[General]

1. Be sure to uncheck widescreen support in all difficulties Done

[Easy]
Really clean easy, can't really find anything to poke at here

1. 00:06:016 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
2. 00:45:561 (3,1) - ^ lol, fixed

[Hard]
Nice hard!

1. HP - 1 to fit the spread better, LD7 is already pretty high for a hard! Ok
2. 00:16:925 (1,3) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved
3. 00:18:743 (3,5) - ^ No changes here and ^
4. 00:51:470 (1) - 491:284 so that its slider end stacks with 00:50:561 (3) - perfectly
5. 00:52:152 (2) - 255:259 so that its slider end stacks with 00:51:243 (4) - perfectly So nazi but okay
6. 01:11:016 (7) - Maybe face the slider more to the left so that there is a bigger jump in to 01:11:470 (1) - Okay

Good luck!

1. 00:52:380 (4,1) - don't really like the spacing here, except I'm not really sure how to fix it.

1. 00:02:380 (1) - starting from here, this first volume section seems rather quiet. hard to hear almost any hitsounds. is this intentional? o.o
2. 00:03:061 (2,3,4,5) - possibly could play a little better like this? http://puu.sh/8BNFv.jpg adds a nice circular flow element and makes it a little bit less repetitive
3. 01:10:561 (4,5,6,7) - very hard to read with 4/5/6 stacked on top of 7 with the pause like that. pulling out 4,5,6 so they're making a triangle with 3 and 2 and moving 3 down a little makes a nice little zigzag like pattern and makes it a lot more readable. something like this, maybe :3 http://puu.sh/8BO2j.jpg

1. 00:42:720 (2,3,4,5) - one of my major gripes when playing this map was that this section didn't flow in the best way it could. switching to something like this (http://puu.sh/8BN5k.jpg, except polished a little better than what I did haha) could really improve the flow here. makes it a lot more fun imo
2. 00:53:061 (1) - this was probably the biggest other one I could see. it's just kinda.. not pretty. even something like this (http://puu.sh/8BNqQ.jpg) could be a large improvement, imo. I can see the anchors and all, but it just doesn't look that pretty of a slider.