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Dancing Dolls - monochrome (TV Size)

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Umi
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Umi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on samedi 24 mai 2014 at 23:57:52

Artist: Dancing Dolls
Title: monochrome (TV Size)
Source: SOUL EATER NOT!
Tags: opening ソウルイーターノット！ kz livetune Vicho
BPM: 132,12
Filesize: 9853kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,6 stars, 95 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 275 notes)
  3. Normal (4,1 stars, 123 notes)
  4. Vicho's Hard (4,86 stars, 233 notes)
Download: Dancing Dolls - monochrome (TV Size)
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#16 ソウルイーターノット! OP

Easy done by me
Normal done by me
Hard done by Vicho
Insane done by me

Enjoy ! ;3
Last edited by Umi , edited 30 times in total.
KantoKun
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Joined December 2011
KantoKun
1st!~

add kz livetune in tag pls

can i use your mp3 and PV?
Umi
2,478 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi
thx add.

and yeah you can use them
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
xChippy
Short IRC mod
HUEHUE
16:00 Umi: _xchippy o3o free 2min for testplay ?
16:00 xChippy: yea
16:00 xChippy: link
16:01 *Umi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/401405 Dancing Dolls!! - monochrome (TV Size)]
16:01 Umi: delte and redl
16:01 Umi: i you had it before
16:01 Umi: if*
16:02 xChippy: uuuh
16:02 Umi: what ?
16:02 xChippy: o-o
16:02 xChippy: I reDled
16:03 xChippy: oh w8
16:03 Umi: did u delete ?
16:03 xChippy: ye
16:03 xChippy: but it gets a update button
16:03 xChippy: good now
16:03 Umi: ah
16:03 Umi: '-'
16:04 xChippy: hmm plays nice :P
16:05 xChippy: srry I'm a bit tired bad play =3=
16:05 Umi: then good >.<
16:05 Umi: np xD
16:05 Umi: low bpm + jump is always fun to play 
16:05 xChippy: yea :3
16:06 xChippy: Click pls o3o
16:06 Umi: lawl x)
16:06 Umi: any suggestion quickly ?
16:06 Umi: or nothing :P
16:06 xChippy: looking now o3o
16:09 xChippy: 00:50:514 (4,5) - this doesnt flow that good IMO
16:09 xChippy: w8 lemme try something MAYBE you will like it o-o
16:09 Umi: okay '-'
16:10 xChippy: http://puu.sh/85HUu.jpg  
16:12 Umi:     let me test
16:12 Umi: play welll :3
16:13 xChippy: :3
16:13 xChippy: personal preference here 01:04:138 (1) - CTRL+G here flows more natural for me 
16:13 xChippy: considering the previous pattern
16:14 Umi: yep right
16:16 xChippy: 00:37:798  -  just to be safe snap this correctly since its unsnapped atm (The green line)
16:16 Umi: btw
16:16 Umi: what a fashy skin that u have xD
16:16 Umi: flashy*
16:16 xChippy: lol :P
16:16 Umi: ops yeah fixed
16:16 xChippy: usually I use osu std skin tho o3o
16:16 Umi: what really ?
16:17 Umi: it suck xD
16:17 Umi: you should make your personal skin :P
16:17 xChippy: I had one
16:17 xChippy: but remember my PC crashed and lost everything
16:17 Umi: orz yeha ..
16:17 Umi: yeah*
16:17 xChippy: 00:01:922 -  not hitsound for this beat owo?
16:17 xChippy: no(
16:18 Umi: oups
16:18 Umi: hum
16:18 Umi: what shoul i put
16:18 Umi: hitclap 2 ,
16:18 Umi: ?*
16:18 Umi: or hitclap 1
16:19 xChippy: 2
16:19 xChippy: o3o
16:19 xChippy: imo
16:19 xChippy: 1 is more bass like o3o
16:19 Umi: alright fixed :3
16:21 xChippy: 00:05:101 (3,4,5,1) -  just personal preference of jump emphasizes o3o http://puu.sh/85Iqi.jpg
16:23 Umi: you delete a note ?
16:23 xChippy: nope owo
16:23 xChippy: o.o
16:23 Umi: because the number are not the same
16:23 Umi: for me
16:23 xChippy: oh w8..
16:23 Umi: x)
16:24 Umi: but well i get what u mean 
16:24 Umi: it play a lot better nice 
16:24 xChippy: cool owo
16:26 xChippy: nothing else o3o
16:26 xChippy: hitsounds seems good and NC´s to etc o3o
16:27 xChippy: cool insane o3o-
16:27 xChippy: o3o/
16:27 Umi: well thx it was good suggestion feel free to post log baka o3o
16:27 xChippy: 01:10:042 (3) -  oh w8 o3o missing clap HUEHEUHE
16:28 xChippy: I think o3o
16:28 Umi: ah yeah lol
Good luck with the map baka o3o
Umi
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Topic Starter
Umi
sankyuu o3o/
happy623
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Joined April 2010
happy623
:roll:
zinsser
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Joined December 2013
zinsser
Umi~ my mod here plz m4m xD http://osu.ppy.sh/b/404728&m=0

[Easy]
01:22:303 (1,2) - 1/2 space after a long return slider at almost the end of the map is ...... unpredictable. both "long return slider" and "end of the map" cause player paying less attention on reading the map. (i'll not tell you that I miss here.) My suggestions is to follow the rhythm 01:18:670 (1,2,3) - here with a different pattern.

[Normal]
00:14:865 - you miss a note here! I'd like to use the following rhythm and position
(maybe you need to think of a better pattern since normal should be DS all the time. but the rhythm is highly recommended)
click here!


[Insane]
00:08:280 - add a circle at 00:07:826 (1) - 's tail to improve the rhythm. I was confused here when I play the map for the first time.
00:54:374 - gradually increase the volume of spinner's end and 00:54:601 (1,2) - If you think that is too complex, well, nvm.
Umi
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Topic Starter
Umi

zinsser wrote:

Umi~ my mod here plz m4m xD http://osu.ppy.sh/b/404728&m=0

[Easy]
01:22:303 (1,2) - 1/2 space after a long return slider at almost the end of the map is ...... unpredictable. both "long return slider" and "end of the map" cause player paying less attention on reading the map. (i'll not tell you that I miss here.) My suggestions is to follow the rhythm 01:18:670 (1,2,3) - here with a different pattern. it's not unpredictable at all imo, and it fit

[Normal]
00:14:865 - you miss a note here! I'd like to use the following rhythm and position no i didn't it's intentionnal here '-'
(maybe you need to think of a better pattern since normal should be DS all the time. but the rhythm is highly recommended)
click here!


[Insane]
00:08:280 - add a circle at 00:07:826 (1) - 's tail to improve the rhythm. I was confused here when I play the map for the first time. it's more confused if i add a note here for me D:
00:54:374 - gradually increase the volume of spinner's end and 00:54:601 (1,2) - If you think that is too complex, well, nvm. not really needed imo
Thx for mod but no change for me, also i didn't say that i accept m4m atm, sorry :/
Oyatsu
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Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
Wow nice!! I'm translating this anime for anime vietnamese sub :D
Go! Umoe~
Umi
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Topic Starter
Umi
moved to pending ! ~
holyKoT
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holyKoT
Hi, from my modding queue.
[Easy]
1) 00:12:821 (4) - Add hitsound here since no vocal on that beat (i suggest clap, sounds fitting)
2) 00:13:956 (2,3) - i suggest to rotate them to the left a bit, so it has a bit better flow with previous slider, also then you can do a fancy triangle thing with 00:16:908 (1,2,1), but then you will need to make slider 00:22:358 (2) curvier
3) 00:29:170 (2,3) - try this (i think it matches vocal better)
4) 00:56:418 (1) - can't hear hitsound on this, maybe i'm deaf...
5) 00:56:872 (1) - fix blanket by changing X coord of the end of that slider from 350 to 352
6) 00:58:688 (3) - if you make this slider shorter and add a note at 00:59:597 it will fit vocal better and you can put a clap on end of that slider so your hitsound pattern will be more consistent
7) 01:04:138 (1) - end -> x:156 y:144 to make it a little bit fancier
8) 01:15:946 (2) - maybe curve this slider down?
[Normal]
1) 00:03:057 - add a note here to better match vocal? also put a finish on following note
2) 00:14:865 (3,4,5) - same problem as 3 in easy
3) 00:29:170 (3,4) - ^
4) 01:16:627 (3,4) - why not just make a long slider? i see no reason in that note: its not a beat and vocal doesn't change
[Hard]
1) 00:04:874 (2) - add hitsound since there is no vocal?
2) 00:33:938 (7) - this note is certainly hiding in this beatmap, while here 00:46:654 you can clearly hear vocal and there is no note, i suggest letting that note to do it's job :) (00:48:243 (7) - is similar to 00:46:654 so i see no reason why there is no note at 00:46:654)
3) 01:01:640 (2,3,4) - try this
[Insane]
1) 00:05:328 (4,5) - maybe replace them? (example)
2) 00:28:489 (3,4,5) - maybe change it like that?
3) 01:01:413 (3,4,5) - ^

That's all. Good luck!
Umi
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Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Umi

h0lyK0T wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.
[Easy]
1) 00:12:821 (4) - Add hitsound here since no vocal on that beat (i suggest clap, sounds fitting) already an hitsounds here
2) 00:13:956 (2,3) - i suggest to rotate them to the left a bit, so it has a bit better flow with previous slider, also then you can do a fancy triangle thing with 00:16:908 (1,2,1), but then you will need to make slider 00:22:358 (2) curvier i prefer the current one
3) 00:29:170 (2,3) - try this (i think it matches vocal better) same as before
4) 00:56:418 (1) - can't hear hitsound on this, maybe i'm deaf... i increased the volum
5) 00:56:872 (1) - fix blanket by changing X coord of the end of that slider from 350 to 352 fixed
6) 00:58:688 (3) - if you make this slider shorter and add a note at 00:59:597 it will fit vocal better and you can put a clap on end of that slider so your hitsound pattern will be more consistent yep fixed
7) 01:04:138 (1) - end -> x:156 y:144 to make it a little bit fancier no i would liek keep the blanket
8) 01:15:946 (2) - maybe curve this slider down? fixed on my own way
[Normal]
1) 00:03:057 - add a note here to better match vocal? also put a finish on following note too hard imo for a normal diff
2) 00:14:865 (3,4,5) - same problem as 3 in easy same reason as before
3) 00:29:170 (3,4) - ^ ^
4) 01:16:627 (3,4) - why not just make a long slider? i see no reason in that note: its not a beat and vocal doesn't change because i don't want skip the beat at 01:16:854 -

[Insane]
1) 00:05:328 (4,5) - maybe replace them? (example) it was already like this before but i decided to change :/
2) 00:28:489 (3,4,5) - maybe change it like that? nop current rythm fit better imo
3) 01:01:413 (3,4,5) - ^ ^

That's all. Good luck!
thx for mod ;)
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
Hihi from modding queue ^^)/

All I have is this in easy

00:07:826 (3,4) - I find this rhythm hard. Try this instead

Other than that, all diffs seem good to me. I'll star

Don't give kudosu

Bai bai~ have a nice day ^^
Umi
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Umi
hi hi, I undertand your point of view but since there is nothing 00:08:734 - it would be more confused if i use this rythm, so i keep it.

Thx for checking ;3
-Maruk-
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-Maruk-
ranked go go :)
Umi
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Umi
sankyuu for star ;)
waxman
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waxman
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[Insane]

01:12:540 (4) - stack on the end of 01:13:221 (1)? I think you placed randomly because of no idea. So I help you.♥

awesome! @@

[Vicho's hard]
According to this stuff. I guess those spacing are not intentional. because you always followed spacing rules, you can change them.
Spacing

00:31:213 (4,5) - spacing
00:47:562 (5,6) - ^
01:02:322 (6,7) - ^
01:19:579 (3,4) - ^

00:11:686 (5) - Delete circle. then the end of 00:11:232 (4) is 00:11:686. It's unnecessary to me.
01:03:003 (7,8) - This slider is strange to me. This slide is not followed rhythm. My idea is better.
01:14:810 (1,2) - This spacing is too far. Because you always followed spacing rules perfectly.
01:16:854 (1,2) - far a bit?
01:22:303 (1,2) - same as 01:14:810 (1,2)


GOOD LICK!
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Konei
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Konei
Hey.


[Easy]

  1. 00:02:376 (1) - Don't you think a Normal finish fits much better because of the enduring sound?
  2. 00:29:624 (3) - Add a whistle to the start emphasize the sync?
  3. 00:35:074 (3) - Same as above.
  4. 00:45:519 (4) - Doesn't look really clean since it overlaps with the previous note, move it more to the left?
  5. 00:50:287 (2) - Add a whistle to the start to catch the piano?
  6. 00:51:422 (3) - Same, but to the end.
  7. 01:04:138 (1) - Add a finish to emphasize the power reset?
  8. 01:18:670 (1,2) - Move them like shown below to preven that overlap.
    example
  9. 01:21:849 (5) - Missing hitsounds on this one.
  10. 01:25:482 (4) - Make the start a hitnormal with clap soft addition, fits the drum hit in the background.

[Normal]

  1. 00:01:922 (1,1) - Missing hitsounds on those two, also same thing as for Easy for the Slider.
  2. 00:09:188 (4) - How about moving this a bit down for a better transition to the next Slider?
  3. 00:31:441 (1) - Looks weird since 2's angle is totally in another way than 1's. Change this to a curved Slider instead?
  4. 01:04:138 (1) - Same as on Easy.
  5. 01:25:482 (5) - Same on the repeat as on Easy.

[Insane]

  1. 00:02:376 (1) - Same as for Easy.
  2. 00:08:507 (2) - This is not a good idea. You just did it for the sake of having symmetry which seems odd since the rhyhtm doesn't fit. Try to just make an 1/1 Slider like below.
    example
  3. 00:22:244 (5,1) - Space them out for a better readability and smoother movement?
    example
  4. 01:04:138 (1) - Same thing as on Easy.
  5. 01:20:260 (1) - Remove the whistle from the start, it's way too single and inconsistent in this section.
  6. 01:25:482 (2) - Same as on Easy.

Good luck, sorry for that poor mod, I got a fever while I was modding it.
Umi
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Topic Starter
Umi

Konei wrote:

Hey.


[Easy]

  1. 00:02:376 (1) - Don't you think a Normal finish fits much better because of the enduring sound? right
  2. 00:29:624 (3) - Add a whistle to the start emphasize the sync? doesn't fit imo
  3. 00:35:074 (3) - Same as above. ^
  4. 00:45:519 (4) - Doesn't look really clean since it overlaps with the previous note, move it more to the left? we can't notice this when we play so it's okay
  5. 00:50:287 (2) - Add a whistle to the start to catch the piano? added
  6. 00:51:422 (3) - Same, but to the end. ^
  7. 01:04:138 (1) - Add a finish to emphasize the power reset? not needed
  8. 01:18:670 (1,2) - Move them like shown below to preven that overlap. okay
    example
  9. 01:21:849 (5) - Missing hitsounds on this one. fixed
  10. 01:25:482 (4) - Make the start a hitnormal with clap soft addition, fits the drum hit in the background. yup

[Normal]

  1. 00:01:922 (1,1) - Missing hitsounds on those two, also same thing as for Easy for the Slider.fixed
  2. 00:09:188 (4) - How about moving this a bit down for a better transition to the next Slider? nop i prefer the current way
  3. 00:31:441 (1) - Looks weird since 2's angle is totally in another way than 1's. Change this to a curved Slider instead? yeah better
  4. 01:04:138 (1) - Same as on Easy. nop
  5. 01:25:482 (5) - Same on the repeat as on Easy. fixed

[Insane]

  1. 00:02:376 (1) - Same as for Easy. fixed
  2. 00:08:507 (2) - This is not a good idea. You just did it for the sake of having symmetry which seems odd since the rhyhtm doesn't fit. Try to just make an 1/1 Slider like below. alright changed the rythm
    example
  3. 00:22:244 (5,1) - Space them out for a better readability and smoother movement? kay
    example
  4. 01:04:138 (1) - Same thing as on Easy.nop
  5. 01:20:260 (1) - Remove the whistle from the start, it's way too single and inconsistent in this section. well yeah
  6. 01:25:482 (2) - Same as on Easy.fixed

Good luck, sorry for that poor mod, I got a fever while I was modding it.
thx for mod konei, and i hope you'll soon recover :/

waxman wrote:

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[Insane]

01:12:540 (4) - stack on the end of 01:13:221 (1)? I think you placed randomly because of no idea. So I help you.♥ yeah it was a bit random lol so fixed ;3

awesome! @@

GOOD LICK!
thx for mod and star waxman ;)
xclaudioh
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xclaudioh
Good map :3
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