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Coldplay - White Shadows

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Card N'FoRcE
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on giovedì 10 dicembre 2009 at 19.35.04

Artist: Coldplay
Title: White Shadows
Source: X&Y
BPM: 127,43
Filesize: 7377kb
Play Time: 02:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0,43 stars, 100 notes)
  2. Hard (4,4 stars, 449 notes)
  3. Normal (2,34 stars, 296 notes)
Download: Coldplay - White Shadows
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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A simple map this time.
No Weird jump, no Impossible insanes, no storyboard.
A song, a background and the map with simple yet enjoyable spacing, like maps were in "old times" =3
Last edited by Card N'FoRcE , edited 22 times in total.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
...ok, semi-modded via irc, so have your happy star ^^
Andrea
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Overall]

- Set a preview point on all difficulties.

Timing is fine.

[Easy]

00:27:073 (2) - New combo.
02:17:089 (1) - This combo seems out of map. Remove new combo.
02:31:019 (1) - Never start spinners on blue lines if not necessary.

[Normal]

00:26:079 (3) - I don't like much a note silenced. Can confuse players.

[Hard]

02:57:020 (1) - This combo seems out of map. Remove new combo.
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

00:39:097 (3) - New combo
00:41:086 (4) - ^

[Normal]

It's ok

[Hard]

It's ok

Starred~
Card N'FoRcE
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osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

- Set a preview point on all difficulties.

Timing is fine.

[Easy]

00:27:073 (2) - New combo. Uhm I noticed that before, but i think it feels weird.
02:17:089 (1) - This combo seems out of map. Remove new combo. It follows a completely different instrument, so it has to be a new combo, to me.
02:31:019 (1) - Never start spinners on blue lines if not necessary. It was supposed to start on white line, i dunno what happened o.o Fixed

[Normal]

00:26:079 (3) - I don't like much a note silenced. Can confuse players. Increased a bit the volume. Anyway, i think it's not a problem, since it's the last beat of the combo and there's a whole second of GAP.

[Hard]

02:57:020 (1) - This combo seems out of map. Remove new combo. Same thing as Easy 02:17:089 (1)
Thanks for modding ^^

@xxheroxx: i think those new combos are not useful, also i want followpoints (why does everyone ignore followpoints, i wonder)
yaya
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yaya
yo
try offset +6 ~~
[hard]
00:34:032 (5) - finish is better.
00:41:086 (1) - ^
00:54:010 (1) - normal hitsound .no whistle
00:56:045 (6) - ^
01:26:011 (2) - the finish of slider . why not soft finish.?
01:27:076 (3) - and delete this note? like you did it before. 01:18:058 (5,1) -
02:12:025 (1) - finish .instead of whistle...or finish + whistle . becuz you do it here. 02:19:078 (1) -

[Normal]
00:56:045 (6) - normal hitsound.
00:58:080 - add a note?
01:02:057 - ^
01:11:075 (2) - move to 01:11:099 ?
01:26:082 (2) - move to 01:27:005 ?
01:37:088 - add a note?
02:57:020 (2) - do like before
03:23:033 - add a note.
do it like this make it easier to catch the notes.

nice xD
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Easy
01:18:058 (3,4) - finish here
01:50:059 (2) - move it a square right and a square down
02:11:007 (4,5) - strange spacing... try to move the 5th beat (and next 1st, 2nd and 3rd orange) 1-2 squares right
02:25:043 (5) - move it 1-2 squares up

Normal
00:26:079 (3) - soft finish here
00:49:039 (1) - ^
01:11:099 - ... new soft finish beat here? I'm not sure...
01:18:058 (3,4,5) - move them a square left
01:27:005 - if you added the soft finish beat before, add here too ^^
01:33:064 (1,2,3,4) - move them a square up
02:57:044 - new soft whistle beat here
03:12:050 - ^

Hard
... already modded via Irc... remember? x3

As said before, this map is a clear example of how a map can be good without any special Storyboarding modifies... Keep up the GREAT work! ;3
Card N'FoRcE
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Thanks, both of you ^^
I didn't quote everything (it would have been looooooong)...

I applied some of what you both suggested, thanks for modding ^^
Yumiko
505 posts
Joined September 2008
Yumiko
starred :P
Luxary
826 posts
Joined August 2008
Luxary
I really like this map.
As Simple as Beautiful :D

Starred
nazenaze
62 posts
Joined December 2008
nazenaze
niiiiiice :D
really enjoyable hitsounds :D

catch a star :)
cesc
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Joined August 2008
cesc
I love Coldplay. I love Card N'FoRcE.

STARRED~
Teara
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Teara
I see no problems~

I suggest you silence the slider slide noise in all diffs~ ( see attachment for the blank sounds )

You also forgot too set a preview point in all your diffs~

Nice beatmap~ good job.

Star

Download: Blank sound sample.rar
Card N'FoRcE
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Teara wrote:

I see no problems~

I suggest you silence the slider slide noise in all diffs~ ( see attachment for the blank sounds )

You also forgot too set a preview point in all your diffs~

Nice beatmap~ good job.

Star
Thanks a lot for this suggestion ^^
Anyway, i didn't make it exactly as you told me ^^"
Since blank sound felt really "empty", i used the soft hitsound and only at the beginning. I think it's perfect now :)

I set preview points too.
Jinxy
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Jinxy
[Easy]
01:16:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - The timing points around this area seems weird...

[Normal]
01:55:77 - Quite a few unused timing sections?
02:20:95 (3) - End 1/4 later.
03:33:69 - Unused timing sections?
04:06:41 (3) - End 1/4 later.

[Hard]
02:15:054 (1) - Mini darrinub slider detected.
04:00:099 (1) - ^

Starred.
Card N'FoRcE
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JInxyjem wrote:

[Easy]
01:16:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - The timing points around this area seems weird... Ok i fixed them, but i still don't understand the issue in this D:

[Normal]
01:55:77 - Quite a few unused timing sections? Fixed
02:20:95 (3) - End 1/4 later. No sorry i really like it that way D:
03:33:69 - Unused timing sections? Fixed (awww these are all Hard's timing points >.<)
04:06:41 (3) - End 1/4 later. Same as above

[Hard]
02:15:054 (1) - Mini darrinub slider detected.
04:00:099 (1) - ^ lol you're the only one who noticed that xD (yeah they're intentional)

Starred.
Thanks for modding ^^
Armin
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Armin
sei chiara come un'albaa
(ma anche no)
deadbeat
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nice map :)
0_o
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All
There are a few inherited timing points that are directly on top of notes, just skim through and check for them.

Normal/Hard
00:49:086 (2,3) [and other hitsounds patterns like this] To me it sounds better if the first two hits are Soft, and the last one Normal. Switching to Normal where it does now puts emphasis on the off-beat which sounds kind of off with the music.

Nice :)
Card N'FoRcE
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Ok, i cleaned up the most important timing sections.

About your suggestion, sorry, i don't like how it sounds >.<
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