1. Easy (1.33 stars, 188 notes)
2. Hard (2.73 stars, 427 notes)
3. Normal (1.72 stars, 267 notes)

1. same as above about background, what about http://puu.sh/88ooG.png ? (edited a photo from his website to make it 1366x178px. x: ..)
2. if you change bg, don't forget to choose better matching combo colours
   (maybe lighter ones in general, yours are really bright, it's tiring for the eyes. >< )
3. you might wanna consider putting a spinner at the end of every diff. it ends so abruptly.. kinda sad, imo, cause it's mapable. >:

1. 00:11:076 (4) - rotate by 23° (sel centre) to improve movement
2. 00:12:482 (3) - place a bit differently maybe, it could be blanketed perfectly by 00:11:545 (1) -
   sloppy example

   
3. 00:14:357 (3) - dunno about this jump, it feels kinda weird. but maybe that's just me. xD anyway, consider moving it to 295|179?
4. 00:19:045 (1,3) - blanket better?
5. 00:37:560 (5) - replace with slider til next white tick? fits better with the vocals imo (which are more dominant there, cause there is no other sound..)
6. 02:51:857 (3) - bend in opposite direction
7. 02:55:607 (3,4) - doesn't work as nicely as the similar parts, maybe move 3 further up? (~254|109)

1. 00:02:170 (1,1,1) - suggestion which I think adds nice variety to the diff-
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   (wrong spacing is okay, cause players have enough time to notice the difference)
2. 00:52:795 (4) - move further down, improves movement (and looks ><) .. (~335|286)
3. 01:02:873 - add circle? it's easier to read that way
4. 01:07:795 (4,5) - movement/flow is not nice here >: .. blanket helps maybe?
5. 02:07:795 (4,5) - ^
6. 03:03:107 (2) - move to 72|224, improves movement by a lot
7. 03:10:607 (2) - flip horizontally and move so DS is fixed?

1. 00:07:795 (1,1) - shape first one a bit differently to create more dynamic look?
   screen

   

Sieg wrote:

Hello CloudSplash

General:
bg is kinda meh, you may consider to change yeah, I'll try to find a better bg... later.
move ADHD from source to tags? usually we don't put album name in source right.

Hard:
AR 7 is really low for hard, this leads to little mess on play screen with and just harden spots like 01:08:733 (3,4,5,6) - , so I suggest you to try AR 8 and OD 7 No, I feel that AR7 appropriately matches with the low object density of the map. As for OD, I think 6 is pretty standard for Hard, but I may consider changing it to 7 since the map is a bit easy. I'll think about it and get some more opinions.
00:17:170 (1,2) - well, maybe move NC to 2, yes this is not a downbeat and little inconsistency but it seems more logical based on pattern+music here. I prefer the current combo placement.
01:09:435 (6,1) - try this kind of jump here http://puu.sh/882Hl.jpg I guess it fits good Made a bit of a different jump
01:16:935 (5,1) - ^ Doesn't fit so well here in my opinion.
noting more here, great diff

Normal:
00:37:326 () - this beat is much stronger than e.g. 00:14:826 () - so I really don't recommend to skip that one Added a circle
01:37:560 (4) - orz but not the best wave slider, I mean mostly placement looks a bit awkward to me, something with symmetry will be much better http://puu.sh/883cw.jpg but well, nothing bad tho Changed a bit differently. I made it horizontally oriented and adjusted the notes after it.
diff is fine but lacks some kind of aesthetical part Yeah... I mapped this diff last and ran out of inspiration lol.

Easy:
01:24:670 (1) - 01:37:795 (3) - 1\1 whole part :\ It's just because of the nature of the song. I think it's fine.
02:19:045 () - you missed a circle here No, I'm following guitar here, and there's no guitar sound on that beat.
clean

Congratulations with 2nd place on contest, fight your #1 in next one (: Thanks
GL

Squirrel wrote:

hellow ~
mod from my queue. c:
keep in mind I'm just making suggestions, you don't have to change anything if you prefer yours. :3

[General]

1. same as above about background, what about http://puu.sh/88ooG.png ? (edited a photo from his website to make it 1366x178px. x: ..) nah, I don't like that image. I'll try to find my own bg.
2. if you change bg, don't forget to choose better matching combo colours
   (maybe lighter ones in general, yours are really bright, it's tiring for the eyes. >< )
3. you might wanna consider putting a spinner at the end of every diff. it ends so abruptly.. kinda sad, imo, cause it's mapable. >: No.

[Hard]

1. 00:11:076 (4) - rotate by 23° (sel centre) to improve movement No, dropoff is intentional.
2. 00:12:482 (3) - place a bit differently maybe, it could be blanketed perfectly by 00:11:545 (1) - No, I prefer my current placement.
   sloppy example

   
3. 00:14:357 (3) - dunno about this jump, it feels kinda weird. but maybe that's just me. xD anyway, consider moving it to 295|179? No, flows bad and messy overlap.
4. 00:19:045 (1,3) - blanket better? I think it's pretty clear that I wasn't making a blanket here... and I don't think a blanket is necessary.
5. 00:37:560 (5) - replace with slider til next white tick? fits better with the vocals imo (which are more dominant there, cause there is no other sound..) I think it's better as just a circle, for more space for effect.
6. 02:51:857 (3) - bend in opposite direction I was just trying for some variety here with different flows. I don't think it's necessarily better to curve it the other way.
7. 02:55:607 (3,4) - doesn't work as nicely as the similar parts, maybe move 3 further up? (~254|109) No, that's really far imo. I think it's fine as it is.

[Normal]

1. 00:02:170 (1,1,1) - suggestion which I think adds nice variety to the diff-
   screen

   
   (wrong spacing is okay, cause players have enough time to notice the difference) No, I like to having cursor movement here.
2. 00:52:795 (4) - move further down, improves movement (and looks ><) .. (~335|286) I was going for variety here, but i guess it didn't really work out... Used a curved slider instead.
3. 01:02:873 - add circle? it's easier to read that way No, I think it's fine as it is.
4. 01:07:795 (4,5) - movement/flow is not nice here >: .. blanket helps maybe? Straight slider fits the feel of the music instrumentals here. Flow is fine.
5. 02:07:795 (4,5) - ^ ^
6. 03:03:107 (2) - move to 72|224, improves movement by a lot It makes no difference imo.
7. 03:10:607 (2) - flip horizontally and move so DS is fixed? Flows awkward.

[Easy]

1. 00:07:795 (1,1) - shape first one a bit differently to create more dynamic look? I don't like that shape or flow.
   screen

   

that's all, sorry. Dx

nice mapset, good luck!
*squee* o/

Thanks For Modding!

1. SPOILER

   
   im not sure if you have changed the mp3 file o.o

1. clean

1. 00:17:873 (2) - i think its better to remove this note cause this part are not the climax of the music.may be as you did at 00:09:670(1,2)
2. 00:32:873 (2) - Normal-Sampleset may a little noisy for me，try to change it to drum？
3. 00:49:045 (4,5,6) - just a suggestion for this part.
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:37:560 (4) - since there are no spin in this diff，id suggest to change this slider to spin.
5. 01:53:732 (6,7) - try to remove those note,because there are no notes at 00:53:498 - 00:54:435,or you can move them to 02:45:998 - 02:46:935
6. 02:04:982 (4) - let the second point of the sldier down a bit for a better blanket?
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:12:951 (4) - change this circle into a slider to follow the vocal?
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:20:451 (5) - same as above 0.0
9. 02:29:357 (2) - try this rhythm?
   SPOILER

   
10. 03:01:935 - unless greenline

1. 00:09:670 (1) - maybe move to (219,120) to avoid the overlap,remember fix the distance between 00:09:670(1,2,3) if you followe my advice ;w;
2. 00:32:873 (5) - same suggestion as Normal diff.
3. 00:54:201 (1) - remove this slider may better to me.
4. 01:03:576 (4) - move this sldier to left like this?
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:08:733 (3,4,5,6) - i think there are no need to change distance according to the music,so just move 01:08:966(4) to (53,39)
6. 01:14:357 (4) - maybe put this circle at (35,185) for a better flow.
7. 01:32:873 (5,7) - not perfect stack 0.0
8. 01:53:732 (3,4) - maybe move those notes to 02:46:232 - 02:46:935
9. 02:02:170 (1,2,3) - balance the distance between those notes.
10. 03:07:326 (5) - try to move it to (14,25).
    SPOILER

    
11. 03:17:170 (1) - change the combo color to color1 OwO?

1. 02:32:250 - Not sure if it's a bug, but you need to resnap the delayed break to here in each diff.

1. 00:37:171 (4) - Seems more comfortable to me to add a repeat to this slider. I prefer to stop play with the slider end rather than a circle since there is not drum there, see if you agree.
   
   Example

   
2. 01:12:328 (2,3) - Imo 1.4 spacing would feel more natural here because 01:12:562 (3,4) is 1.4. I think it's nicer to keep the same spacing in the combo with the exception of the blanket 1-2.
   
   Example

   
3. 01:37:875 - I'd really like to click here tbh. This is where the music actually halts so it might be nicer if you could start the slider there. You'd probably have to experiment with the slider shape more but maybe you could try a rhythm like this:
   
   Example

   
4. 01:45:375 (1) - I thought you could try flipping it and maybe rotating a bit for a better flow (imo) from 5. Try it see what you think.
   
   Example

   
5. 02:22:406 (3) - Maybe you can try curving it into the 4, it might feel nice after the 2.
   
6. 02:46:078 (4) - I felt like you could unstack this note to make it more unique since it ends the buildup that you have through 02:44:906 (5,6,1,2,3). Just an idea, maybe you'd like it.
   
   Example

   
7. 03:13:031 (5) - Maybe 4-5 feels a bit cramped. I thought you could reposition or move the 5 to the right so it's more rounded.
   
   Example

   

1. 00:37:640 (4) - I felt strange for me to follow the vocals here. Maybe instead you can delete the 00:37:406 (3) and move the 4 1/2 earlier.
   
2. 00:53:578 - I think it could be nicer to have an object here like a slider end. Maybe you can experiment with a rhythm like this:
   
   Example

   
3. 00:54:281 - Maybe you want to have an object here like a 1/2 slider?
   
4. 01:37:640 (4) - Similar suggestion to the Hard diff, I think it could feel nicer if the slider started at 01:37:875.
   
5. 02:29:203 - Maybe add a note here for guitar/vocal.
   
6. 03:15:843 (4) - Normal sample on the head?

1. 00:53:343 (2) - I thought a 1/1 slider could feel more natural here. The break starting at 00:53:812 will be more intuitive to the player since the music continues until there.
   
2. 02:44:906 (3) - I thought it might be better if you moved this forward 1/1 and added a note at 02:44:906. Again I'd like to incorporate the music at 02:46:078 through this since I think it can feel nicer for the player. Try it and see if you agree.
   
3. 03:15:843 (3) - Normal sample on the head?

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey Cloud, how are you? I'm well, UWS, how are you?
Just a few things that might interest you. Nothing important I saw.

[General]

1. 02:32:250 - Not sure if it's a bug, but you need to resnap the delayed break to here in each diff. Well spotted! Fixed.

[Hard]

1. 00:37:171 (4) - Seems more comfortable to me to add a repeat to this slider. I prefer to stop play with the slider end rather than a circle since there is not drum there, see if you agree. Nice. Changed
   
   Example

   
2. 01:12:328 (2,3) - Imo 1.4 spacing would feel more natural here because 01:12:562 (3,4) is 1.4. I think it's nicer to keep the same spacing in the combo with the exception of the blanket 1-2. Fixed.
   
   Example

   
3. 01:37:875 - I'd really like to click here tbh. This is where the music actually halts so it might be nicer if you could start the slider there. You'd probably have to experiment with the slider shape more but maybe you could try a rhythm like this: Yeah, I do like this rhythm better. I decided to keep the current length of the slider (lazy) and added a circle to go with vocals, where the slider is on "and" and the circle is on "I'll".
   
   Example

   
4. 01:45:375 (1) - I thought you could try flipping it and maybe rotating a bit for a better flow (imo) from 5. Try it see what you think. Cool
   
   Example

   
5. 02:22:406 (3) - Maybe you can try curving it into the 4, it might feel nice after the 2. I think I prefer it straight here. It feels better with the short note in the music imo.
   
6. 02:46:078 (4) - I felt like you could unstack this note to make it more unique since it ends the buildup that you have through 02:44:906 (5,6,1,2,3). Just an idea, maybe you'd like it. Good idea. I positioned (4) slightly more horizontal to (3) because it feels better to me.
   
   Example

   
7. 03:13:031 (5) - Maybe 4-5 feels a bit cramped. I thought you could reposition or move the 5 to the right so it's more rounded. Fixed.
   
   Example

   

[Normal]

1. 00:37:640 (4) - I felt strange for me to follow the vocals here. Maybe instead you can delete the 00:37:406 (3) and move the 4 1/2 earlier. okay
   
2. 00:53:578 - I think it could be nicer to have an object here like a slider end. Maybe you can experiment with a rhythm like this: Used a different rhythm.
   
   Example

   
3. 00:54:281 - Maybe you want to have an object here like a 1/2 slider?Added.
   
4. 01:37:640 (4) - Similar suggestion to the Hard diff, I think it could feel nicer if the slider started at 01:37:875. ok
   
5. 02:29:203 - Maybe add a note here for guitar/vocal. I don't think it's necessary.
   
6. 03:15:843 (4) - Normal sample on the head? fixed.

[Easy]

1. 00:53:343 (2) - I thought a 1/1 slider could feel more natural here. The break starting at 00:53:812 will be more intuitive to the player since the music continues until there. ok
   
2. 02:44:906 (3) - I thought it might be better if you moved this forward 1/1 and added a note at 02:44:906. Again I'd like to incorporate the music at 02:46:078 through this since I think it can feel nicer for the player. Try it and see if you agree. ok
   
3. 03:15:843 (3) - Normal sample on the head? ok

Very nice set. I don't think it will need much modding.

1. 02:11:390 - You can add a break here
2. 02:15:609 - Same as above
3. 02:18:890 - Same as above
4. 02:28:500 (1) - Try to change y ? If yes , put Y:340
5. 03:17:718 - You can still continue mapping here !

1. 00:02:250 (1,1,1) - The triangle shape can be improved
2. 00:53:812 - You can add a note here !
3. 00:59:437 (3,4,5) - You can improve flow here !
4. 01:02:953 - You can addd a stacked note for 01:03:187 (2) -
5. 01:34:593 (4,5) - Try to curv one of these sliders ? They are a bit boring imo
6. 02:07:875 (4,5) - Curv (4) a bit for blanket !
7. 02:55:687 (2) - Inconsistent. Ctrl+G and put it here : x:212 y;160
8. 03:17:718 - You can still continue mapping here !

1. 00:22:875 (1,2,3) - Try to make a better symmetrical
2. 00:37:875 - Add a note here ?
3. 00:58:734 (2) - Stack (2) on slider (3)
4. 01:37:640 (5,6,1) - I don't get why you put a triplet . You can make a double or stack one note !
5. 03:17:484 - You can continue mapping here

Secretpipe wrote:

Hello there !

From Modding Queue !

[Easy]

1. 02:11:390 - You can add a break here I don't want to, because it doesn't make sense from a musical standpoint.
2. 02:15:609 - Same as above ^
3. 02:18:890 - Same as above ^
4. 02:28:500 (1) - Try to change y ? If yes , put Y:340 Makes no difference to me.
5. 03:17:718 - You can still continue mapping here ! I find the current ending point more tasteful.

[Normal]

1. 00:02:250 (1,1,1) - The triangle shape can be improved How? By the way, it's a square.
2. 00:53:812 - You can add a note here ! Following drums.
3. 00:59:437 (3,4,5) - You can improve flow here ! How?
4. 01:02:953 - You can addd a stacked note for 01:03:187 (2) - I don't want such high note density.
5. 01:34:593 (4,5) - Try to curv one of these sliders ? They are a bit boring imo No, straight sliders fit the music better imo.
6. 02:07:875 (4,5) - Curv (4) a bit for blanket ! No.
7. 02:55:687 (2) - Inconsistent. Ctrl+G and put it here : x:212 y;160 Inconsistent with what? That flows really awkwardly imo.
8. 03:17:718 - You can still continue mapping here ! Same as Easy

[Hard]

1. 00:22:875 (1,2,3) - Try to make a better symmetrical I think it flows better currently.
2. 00:37:875 - Add a note here ? No.
3. 00:58:734 (2) - Stack (2) on slider (3) Why? I think the current placement is fine.
4. 01:37:640 (5,6,1) - I don't get why you put a triplet . You can make a double or stack one note ! Triplet allows note on blue tick and white tick to match with drum, with vocal covered on red tick.
5. 03:17:484 - You can continue mapping here Same as Easy, Normal.

Here's my suggestions ! Sorry if they weren't useful ! This mapset is already perfect !

Good luck~

Timorisu wrote:

Damn nice mapset. Take my stars (/ﾟДﾟ)/

[Easy]

00:16:312 (4) - Really minor but maybe move this down a notch No.. that break ds.

00:54:750 (1,2,3) - I feel like something less curved would do better here, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1763534 It's fine as it is.

01:43:500 (1) - A normal curve would do, wouldn't it? I prefer this shape for stronger feel.

02:06:937 (2) - This blanket is slightly off, move end to x:44 y:264 to fix that Fixed blanket.

[Normal]

00:46:781 (6) - What the fuck is that drum hitsound on the end It's a drum whistle. It fits the song.

01:02:015 (1) - x:296 y:356 for better triangle, might want to blanket around 6's approach circle It's fine as it is.

01:04:125 (3,1) - If these are supposed to be blankets around the slider followcircle they're kinda off I don't care.

01:46:781 (6) - What the fuck is that drum hitsound on the end Same as before.

02:13:500 (1) - A normal curve would do, wouldn't it? No, I want this shape for more emphasis on the repeat.

02:16:312 (4) - What the fuck is that drum hitsound I don't understand what you have against drum hitsounds..

02:28:500 (1,2) - These drum hitsounds are seriously bothering lol ...

02:44:437 (2,3,4) - Especially on red ticks ...

02:54:281 (5) - Like really bothering on red ticks ...

02:58:500 (1) - This wave is pretty weird hmmmm It's fine.

03:09:750 (1) - ^ ^

03:11:625 (3) - ^ ^

[Hard]

00:07:875 (1) - x:122 y:72 for perfect square ...pls No.

00:13:500 (1) - What's that red point for To match the music.

00:19:125 (1) - Curve less, perhaps blanket around 3's approach circle No.

01:54:281 (4) - NC like you did with 00:54:281 (1) - I don't think it's necessary, since (3) is on the beat, and leads to (4).

02:52:875 (1) - This blanket is oh so very slightly off idc

Amazing