SnickarN
ninja-hands
CerealeKiller
Winek (pls)
KillerGecko
Kamiya
inverness
Secretpipe
CDFA
guineaQ
Asphyxia
P A N
CrazyrabbitKGE
Dark Fang
Priti
Trust
Don - Converted the mp3!
Lach - Help with hitsound issue!

Enjoy the star!

CerealeKiller wrote:

00:12:406 (2) - I don't get why this slider starts here, I would rather make two circles at 00:12:749 (2) and 00:13:092 (3)

Remapped the whole part

CerealeKiller wrote:

00:23:549 (1) - I think the spacing is a bit too high between this circle and the slider after, maybe consider to rotate or move the slider right before.

Repositioned the slider

CerealeKiller wrote:

00:27:321 (4) , 00:32:806 (5) - Those circles aren't necessery, imo they overload the slow rythm.

On the first one I agree on and removed the circle but I left the other 00:32:806 circle there because imo it fits there

CerealeKiller wrote:

02:12:064 (2) and 02:14:121 (1) - Maybe consider remapping this part to fit more with the vocals. I would see here more a single tap (1/2) combo with a few sliders

I thinks it's fine

CerealeKiller wrote:

02:26:121 (8) - Sneaky circle.

Repositioned

CerealeKiller wrote:

Le wild edit appears (yeah because I would be stupid to post a third time)

XD

CerealeKiller wrote:

04:35:035 (1) - Again I don't get why you start again (I mean after the spinner) at this moment and why not earlier with the vocals, I would remap this 1st combo

I hate it when a circle / combo begins right after a spinner, I feel like one should get to finish the spinner completely and then prepare for following, but I just might do something with this part

CerealeKiller wrote:

04:41:206 (4,5) - I would delete those two sliders but you seem to love filling the "blanks" in the music.

Yes, especially at harder diffs it just feels weird if there is a sudden blank spot, so I'll leave them there

CerealeKiller wrote:

04:56:292 (1) - Same as before, but here I can understand your choice because the "instruments" start again here

Like mentioned before, don't like circles right after spinner

CerealeKiller wrote:

Sorry if you expected more but the rest of the map seem fine. There are still some little things I would map in another way but I respect your mapping style

Anyone who goes through the trouble of modding my map is equally honored, even if it's a tiny mod (not that this was a tiny mod lol).

CerealeKiller wrote:

Anyway it's still a great map, you've done a nice job here, I hope you'll get it ranked !

Thanks and I hope so aswell ^^!

2014-04-20 11:42 Winek: sup boxy
2014-04-20 11:43 ProfessionalBox: hello harpie
2014-04-20 11:43 ProfessionalBox: winek*
2014-04-20 11:43 ProfessionalBox: xD
2014-04-20 11:43 Winek: fffffff
2014-04-20 11:43 Winek: 2 sec and we're back to your map
2014-04-20 11:44 ProfessionalBox: Sure
2014-04-20 11:44 ProfessionalBox: just say when youre ready
2014-04-20 12:33 ProfessionalBox: How long is your 2sec lol
2014-04-20 12:33 Winek: some time hue
2014-04-20 12:33 ProfessionalBox: xD
2014-04-20 12:34 Winek: are you in a hurry or something? ~:3
2014-04-20 12:35 ProfessionalBox: Not really
2014-04-20 12:35 ProfessionalBox: it's just that practically I've been waiting 2 days xD
2014-04-20 12:35 ProfessionalBox: no need to rush, I can take it
2014-04-20 12:35 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 12:48 Winek: gonna play a game of touhou then your map
2014-04-20 12:48 ProfessionalBox: How long ;_;
2014-04-20 12:48 Winek: around 20 mins
2014-04-20 12:49 Winek: little impatient ~:3
2014-04-20 12:49 ProfessionalBox: 20min sounds good
2014-04-20 12:49 ProfessionalBox: atleast it isn't 2sec
2014-04-20 12:49 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 12:49 ProfessionalBox: xD
2014-04-20 12:50 Winek: ok afk
2014-04-20 14:29 Winek: soz
2014-04-20 14:29 Winek: mom is forcing me to go to fkin beach
2014-04-20 14:29 Winek: we'll do it once ill be back
2014-04-20 14:30 ProfessionalBox: When will you be back?
2014-04-20 14:30 ProfessionalBox: can you say like how many hours
2014-04-20 14:30 ProfessionalBox: Or is it delayed to next weekend?
2014-04-20 14:31 Winek: im here tomorrow dw
2014-04-20 14:31 ProfessionalBox: Great
2014-04-20 14:31 Winek: and ill be back in something like 1~2 hours
2014-04-20 14:31 ProfessionalBox: oh ok
2014-04-20 14:31 ProfessionalBox: I'll be here
2014-04-20 14:31 ProfessionalBox: just message me
2014-04-20 14:32 Winek: k
2014-04-20 18:28 Winek: half-back
2014-04-20 18:29 ProfessionalBox: Can you wait 30min?
2014-04-20 19:34 ProfessionalBox: Are you back now?
2014-04-20 19:58 Winek: woopsee
2014-04-20 19:58 Winek: mom annoy
2014-04-20 20:01 Winek: sorry
2014-04-20 20:02 Winek: mom got annoying orz
2014-04-20 20:19 ProfessionalBox: lol
2014-04-20 20:20 ProfessionalBox: im readi if youn are
2014-04-20 20:20 Winek: that grammar pls
2014-04-20 20:20 Winek: ok wait up
2014-04-20 20:20 Winek: let me update my map
2014-04-20 20:20 Winek: thenn lets mod
2014-04-20 20:21 ProfessionalBox: sure
2014-04-20 20:21 ProfessionalBox: btw
2014-04-20 20:21 ProfessionalBox: I remapped one big part
2014-04-20 20:21 Winek: k
2014-04-20 20:21 Winek: which one?
2014-04-20 20:21 ProfessionalBox: so yoou need to update
2014-04-20 20:22 ProfessionalBox: 0:54-1:14
2014-04-20 20:22 Winek: ok
2014-04-20 20:29 ProfessionalBox: So I updated literally 5sec ago
2014-04-20 20:29 Winek: wait
2014-04-20 20:29 Winek: wait up
2014-04-20 20:29 Winek: i must arrange something on my map
2014-04-20 20:29 ProfessionalBox: sure, that's what I've been doing the whole day lol
2014-04-20 20:29 ProfessionalBox: k
2014-04-20 20:32 Winek: alright
2014-04-20 20:33 Winek: np coz im lazy to find it
2014-04-20 20:33 ProfessionalBox: lol
2014-04-20 20:34 Winek: are you lazy as wellw?
2014-04-20 20:34 ProfessionalBox: depends on the subject
2014-04-20 20:35 ProfessionalBox: school things = yes I'm lazy, Something fun = not
2014-04-20 20:37 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 20:40 Winek: so mod time?
2014-04-20 20:40 ProfessionalBox: yes
2014-04-20 20:40 ProfessionalBox: !
2014-04-20 20:40 Winek: k np
2014-04-20 20:40 Winek: im lazy
2014-04-20 20:41 Winek: np it
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: lol
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: oh
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: sec
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/399221 Stan SB - Dead [Rebirth]]
2014-04-20 20:41 Winek: im too lazy to search it in my maps
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: you could have searched for my name but
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: xD
2014-04-20 20:41 Winek: LAZY
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: ok
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: ok
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: that must have been faster then
2014-04-20 20:41 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 20:42 ProfessionalBox: I guess you should check the remap first
2014-04-20 20:42 Winek: which part
2014-04-20 20:42 ProfessionalBox: 00:54:921
2014-04-20 20:43 Winek: look nice
2014-04-20 20:43 ProfessionalBox: pls osu highlight
2014-04-20 20:43 Winek: add a - after
2014-04-20 20:43 ProfessionalBox: great
2014-04-20 20:43 Winek: 00:58:505 -
2014-04-20 20:43 ProfessionalBox: 00:54:921a
2014-04-20 20:43 ProfessionalBox: >.<
2014-04-20 20:43 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 20:44 ProfessionalBox: I think those stacked sliders fit there quite nicely
2014-04-20 20:44 Winek: i agree<
2014-04-20 20:44 Winek: well lets check in the first kiai
2014-04-20 20:45 ProfessionalBox: Now the real fun begins
2014-04-20 20:45 ProfessionalBox: First kiai is meh but the rest of the song is mapped like a pro
2014-04-20 20:45 Winek: i suck at hard shizze
2014-04-20 20:45 ProfessionalBox: since I'm a PROfessionalbox
2014-04-20 20:45 Winek: nope
2014-04-20 20:45 Winek: you're just a box
2014-04-20 20:45 Winek: ACTION runs
2014-04-20 20:45 ProfessionalBox: ACTION is amused
2014-04-20 20:45 Winek: okok lets get serious
2014-04-20 20:46 ProfessionalBox: ACTION let's out an evil laugh
2014-04-20 20:46 ProfessionalBox: yeah xD
2014-04-20 20:46 Winek: crualbox
2014-04-20 20:46 Winek: namechange to this
2014-04-20 20:46 ProfessionalBox: ummm
2014-04-20 20:46 ProfessionalBox: nope
2014-04-20 20:47 Winek: fffuuu
2014-04-20 20:47 Winek: okok mod time
2014-04-20 20:48 Winek: tell my why you give a 1/4 triplet for [osu://edit/01:17:378 (2,3,4) this]
2014-04-20 20:48 Winek: ffffff
2014-04-20 20:48 Winek: tell my why you give a 1/4 triplet for [osu://edit/01:17:378(2,3,4) this]
2014-04-20 20:49 Winek: shiz impossible i give up
2014-04-20 20:49 ProfessionalBox: haha
2014-04-20 20:49 Winek: the triplet is quite unfitting here
2014-04-20 20:49 Winek: it's like the only one
2014-04-20 20:49 ProfessionalBox: I love triplets
2014-04-20 20:49 ProfessionalBox: there will be more
2014-04-20 20:50 Winek: like 01:19:264 (1,2,3,4,1) - sounds better
2014-04-20 20:50 ProfessionalBox: I guess it's just variation
2014-04-20 20:50 ProfessionalBox: triplet there - short stream there
2014-04-20 20:51 Winek: shouldn't there be a triplet in 01:19:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - as well then
2014-04-20 20:52 ProfessionalBox: The triplet is there for the pattern to work
2014-04-20 20:53 ProfessionalBox: I would have to reposition the whole thing without it
2014-04-20 20:53 Winek: well k
2014-04-20 20:53 ProfessionalBox: There's too much of a break without the triplet
2014-04-20 20:53 ProfessionalBox: But I guess it's the only one there
2014-04-20 20:53 ProfessionalBox: there will be more though, especially after the kiai time
2014-04-20 20:53 ProfessionalBox: I'll try to figure out something
2014-04-20 20:54 Winek: okok
2014-04-20 20:55 Winek: ok let's check obvious overall thingies
2014-04-20 20:56 ProfessionalBox: ohgod
2014-04-20 20:56 ProfessionalBox: I forgot to change the mp3
2014-04-20 20:56 Winek: 01:46:692 (5,1) - are you blind
2014-04-20 20:56 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 20:56 ProfessionalBox: blind
2014-04-20 20:56 ProfessionalBox: huh
2014-04-20 20:56 ProfessionalBox: no I guess I can see fine
2014-04-20 20:57 Winek: pls stackfail
2014-04-20 20:57 ProfessionalBox: How can I fix those xD
2014-04-20 20:57 Winek: again
2014-04-20 20:57 ProfessionalBox: there will be more of those I guess..
2014-04-20 20:57 Winek: are you blind 01:48:406 (1,2,3) -
2014-04-20 20:57 Winek: hue
2014-04-20 20:57 Winek: to fix them
2014-04-20 20:57 Winek: try ctrl + g
2014-04-20 20:58 Winek: stack them perfectly
2014-04-20 20:58 Winek: then ctrl+g again
2014-04-20 20:58 ProfessionalBox: so I highlight all of those
2014-04-20 20:58 ProfessionalBox: 1,2,3
2014-04-20 20:59 Winek: just ctrl+g 1
2014-04-20 20:59 Winek: and verify their position
2014-04-20 20:59 Winek: make them have perfect stack
2014-04-20 20:59 Winek: then ctrl+g again for 1
2014-04-20 21:00 ProfessionalBox: ok
2014-04-20 21:00 ProfessionalBox: I think I got it
2014-04-20 21:00 ProfessionalBox: nope
2014-04-20 21:00 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 21:00 ProfessionalBox: lol this is hard ;_;
2014-04-20 21:01 ProfessionalBox: Should I use bigger grid size
2014-04-20 21:01 Winek: opposite
2014-04-20 21:01 Winek: use nogrid
2014-04-20 21:01 ProfessionalBox: ok
2014-04-20 21:02 Winek: or
2014-04-20 21:02 Winek: select a note and directly click there http://puu.sh/8gEwe/ee05c145c9.jpg
2014-04-20 21:03 ProfessionalBox: does stack leniency affect how these circles behave
2014-04-20 21:03 ProfessionalBox: I have it like at 2 or 3
2014-04-20 21:04 Winek: nono its ok
2014-04-20 21:05 ProfessionalBox: Wow i can't seem to fix this
2014-04-20 21:05 ProfessionalBox: what is this sorcery
2014-04-20 21:05 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 21:05 Winek: 01:48:406 (1) -
2014-04-20 21:05 Winek: move y:334
2014-04-20 21:07 Winek: wait up
2014-04-20 21:07 ProfessionalBox: It wont work
2014-04-20 21:08 Winek: x:328 y335
2014-04-20 21:11 Winek: brb a lil while
2014-04-20 21:11 ProfessionalBox: I have all of them at the situation where prev is 0,00x and next is at 0,00x but still
2014-04-20 21:11 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 21:11 ProfessionalBox: it wont work
2014-04-20 21:11 Winek: not distance
2014-04-20 21:11 Winek: xy position
2014-04-20 21:12 ProfessionalBox: thats what I meant
2014-04-20 21:13 ProfessionalBox: they were at the same xy positions
2014-04-20 21:13 ProfessionalBox: but sill
2014-04-20 21:22 ProfessionalBox: So i fixed both of those that their xy position is the exact same
2014-04-20 21:23 Winek: k
2014-04-20 21:23 ProfessionalBox: when played it still looks the same as before
2014-04-20 21:23 ProfessionalBox: Have you modded my map further?
2014-04-20 21:23 Winek: im kinda brb can u wait 5 min
2014-04-20 21:24 ProfessionalBox: if it's really 5min and not 50min lol
2014-04-20 21:24 ProfessionalBox: then i can wait xD
2014-04-20 21:26 Winek: ok bek
2014-04-20 21:26 Winek: still on ovious thing
2014-04-20 21:26 Winek: 01:50:806 (3,4) -
2014-04-20 21:26 Winek: the distance is really weird and confusing here
2014-04-20 21:27 ProfessionalBox: made it smaller
2014-04-20 21:27 ProfessionalBox: and the following too
2014-04-20 21:28 Winek: ye
2014-04-20 21:31 Winek: 02:11:721 (1,2,3) - go to the eye doctor
2014-04-20 21:31 ProfessionalBox: dear god
2014-04-20 21:31 ProfessionalBox: I think I might be blind
2014-04-20 21:31 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 21:31 ProfessionalBox: oh
2014-04-20 21:31 ProfessionalBox: I fixed that just a while ago but wasn't able to get the distance down to 0,00
2014-04-20 21:31 ProfessionalBox: only 0,01
2014-04-20 21:31 ProfessionalBox: is it good enough?
2014-04-20 21:31 ProfessionalBox: xD
2014-04-20 21:33 Winek: xd yes
2014-04-20 21:35 Winek: im not very good for insanes
2014-04-20 21:35 Winek: ill try to shit on flow, etc...
2014-04-20 21:36 ProfessionalBox: The flow is quite nice
2014-04-20 21:37 ProfessionalBox: imo atlest
2014-04-20 21:37 ProfessionalBox: atleast
2014-04-20 21:37 Winek: yeye
2014-04-20 21:37 Winek: your map is good otherwise
2014-04-20 21:41 Winek: box
2014-04-20 21:41 Winek: 02:49:092 (2,3,4) -
2014-04-20 21:41 ProfessionalBox: is it
2014-04-20 21:41 ProfessionalBox: yay!
2014-04-20 21:42 ProfessionalBox: just fixed that
2014-04-20 21:42 ProfessionalBox: but I can only get that to 0,01 too
2014-04-20 21:42 Winek: blind
2014-04-20 21:42 ProfessionalBox: im srs
2014-04-20 21:42 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 21:43 ProfessionalBox: try it out yourself
2014-04-20 21:44 Winek: got a perfect stack and 0.01 doesn't matter
2014-04-20 21:45 ProfessionalBox: I just cant do that
2014-04-20 21:45 ProfessionalBox: all my stacks look awful
2014-04-20 21:45 ProfessionalBox: wtf
2014-04-20 21:46 Winek: i recall bullshit
2014-04-20 21:46 Winek: 03:00:921 (7,2) -
2014-04-20 21:47 ProfessionalBox: IM SUCH A BAD MAPPER
2014-04-20 21:47 ProfessionalBox: DEAR LORD
2014-04-20 21:48 Winek: YOUR MAP SUCKSSSSSSS
2014-04-20 21:48 Winek: LOOOL
2014-04-20 21:48 Winek: loljk
2014-04-20 21:48 ProfessionalBox: I KNOW
2014-04-20 21:48 Winek: just fix the unrankable stackfail
2014-04-20 21:48 ProfessionalBox: BETTER GO KILLMYSELF
2014-04-20 21:48 ProfessionalBox: ACTION is dead
2014-04-20 21:48 Winek: ok
2014-04-20 21:48 ProfessionalBox: ACTION used extra life
2014-04-20 21:48 Winek: ye
2014-04-20 21:49 Winek: kewl
2014-04-20 21:49 Winek: u life again
2014-04-20 21:49 ProfessionalBox: still 2x more lives left
2014-04-20 21:49 ProfessionalBox: Can you puush me how you stacked those notes
2014-04-20 21:49 ProfessionalBox: I can update the map and show you how it still looks terrible even though they are at the exact same positions
2014-04-20 21:50 Winek: hmm
2014-04-20 21:51 Winek: http://puu.sh/8gIen/4b85db776b.jpg
2014-04-20 21:51 Winek: brb 1 min
2014-04-20 21:53 ProfessionalBox: I have it like that, just updated the map
2014-04-20 22:22 Winek: ok back
2014-04-20 22:22 ProfessionalBox: welcome back
2014-04-20 22:23 Winek: shit your map is too good
2014-04-20 22:23 Winek: TH2M
2014-04-20 22:24 ProfessionalBox: I told you that I learned how to map
2014-04-20 22:24 ProfessionalBox: atleast
2014-04-20 22:24 ProfessionalBox: almost
2014-04-20 22:24 ProfessionalBox: that stack thingy
2014-04-20 22:24 ProfessionalBox: xD
2014-04-20 22:24 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 22:24 ProfessionalBox: But you really helped with the beginning
2014-04-20 22:24 ProfessionalBox: <3
2014-04-20 22:25 Winek: well let me check it again
2014-04-20 22:25 Winek: or else i feel poop
2014-04-20 22:25 ProfessionalBox: Remember to post something so that I can kudosu afterwards
2014-04-20 22:25 ProfessionalBox: check all you like
2014-04-20 22:25 Winek: like i'm a useless shit
2014-04-20 22:25 ProfessionalBox: it just means that less people need to mod
2014-04-20 22:25 ProfessionalBox: What I'm most worried about are the hitsounds
2014-04-20 22:26 ProfessionalBox: They suck from time to time i guess
2014-04-20 22:26 Winek: trye
2014-04-20 22:28 Winek: hmm
2014-04-20 22:28 Winek: your hitsounds are ok i guess
2014-04-20 22:28 Winek: but place like 03:33:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
2014-04-20 22:28 Winek: sounds weird .-.
2014-04-20 22:29 ProfessionalBox: In the kiai times theyre great imo
2014-04-20 22:29 ProfessionalBox: but
2014-04-20 22:29 ProfessionalBox: other places they suck xD
2014-04-20 22:29 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 22:31 Winek: so ye
2014-04-20 22:31 Winek: do i post?
2014-04-20 22:31 ProfessionalBox: If you think were done here
2014-04-20 22:32 ProfessionalBox: then go ahead ^^
2014-04-20 22:32 Winek: k

General: Maybe it's intended, but it's a 6:00min map with no breaks! My hand started getting fatigued around 3/4 of the way through the song. Perhaps consider adding a break section to allow people a quick rest and time to re-position their hands.

00:10:399 The vocals that start here kind of drown out the hitsounds for me (I am using headphones too!). I can still hear them, but having them slightly louder would make it easier to hear the flow of the hitsounds.
00:31:314 (2) - Move this to x:444 y:172 to be lined up with the 3 slider
01:15:542 Where the Kiai time begins the hitsounds are drowned out again. I noticed that once I turned on the ignore beatmap hitsounds option I was okay. Perhaps just make hitsounds SLIGHTLY louder overall. Don't wanna go overboard lol.
00:54:971 (1) - I think it's really cool/great when the sound really makes you feel like you hit a different part/section of the music. I noticed you don't really have transition hitsounds throughout the whole song and parts end and begin on the same hitsounds that are consistent throughout the meat of the music. Because I am a stickler for hitsounds, I took the liberty of going through a few places and adding them where I deemed appropriate. It seems you ended sections with claps, and started next ones with finishes, so I tried to keep your style. Hope you don't mind. Ignore this if you do XD. So I added finish sounds as follows:
00:11:085 (1) - Added finish
01:27:885 (1) -Added finish on beginning of slider
01:37:485(1) -Added clap
01:38:856(1) -Added finish at at beginning of slider.
01:49:828(1) -Added finish at beginning
02:00:799(1) -Added finish
02:22:742(1) -Added finish to beginning
02:32:342(1) -Added clap
02:55:656(1) -Added finish
03:06:628(1) -Added finish to beginning
03:17:599(3) -Added clap to end of 3 slider.
04:01:142(2) -Added clap
04:11:085(9) -Added clap (Also to note, this section ends on a combo 9, but in similar sections you end on a combo 8, and then the 9th hit cirlce is a new combo. For consistency's sake, you should make a new combo here. It's similar to sections 02:32:342 and 01:37:742 )
04:12:456(1) -Added finish to start of 1 slider
04:23:428(1) -Added finsih to start of slider.
04:34:399-Added finish to end of spinner
04:56:342(1) -Added finish
05:29:256(1) -Added finish to beginning
06:02:171 - It's the last beat of the song! End it with a crash! lol.

Okay, on my sweep I think I got the most obvious hitsounds. Hope that helps you out! Love the song!

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.