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Silent Siren - stella* [Taiko|Osu]

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captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
captin1
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, May 24, 2014 at 1:41:45 PM

Artist: Silent Siren
Title: stella*
Tags: start raose climbb65588 kanpakyin
BPM: 158
Filesize: 4285kb
Play Time: 02:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Climbb & KPY's Taiko Oni (4.94 stars, 673 notes)
  2. Easy (1.94 stars, 122 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 434 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (4.87 stars, 526 notes)
  5. Normal (4.31 stars, 230 notes)
  6. Raose's Hard (4.94 stars, 337 notes)
Download: Silent Siren - stella*
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hard: Raose
Taiko: climbb65588 & kanpakyin
full version: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ARO8Zr7smPU
Last edited by captin1 , edited 23 times in total.
Trust
1,240 posts
Joined March 2012
Trust
haha first
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
actually i was the first to testplay ok
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
captin1
actually no the first to testplay was broccoly before the map was even submitted
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
first testplay after submitted D:!
-AbaY-
6 posts
Joined January 2013
-AbaY-
nice beatmap :)
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
captin1
hey thanks!
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
mmk m4m! :D
from your queue

[Insane]
  1. 00:06:550 (5,6) - for this you could just copy paste one of the sliders and rotate it by 120, it just makes the pattern neater
  2. 00:03:511 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:10:537 (5,6) - ^ (theres gunna be alot of these b prepared lol)
  4. 00:21:929 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:17:182 (3,4) - ^
  6. 01:41:296 (2,3) - ^
  7. 00:09:018 (4) - flows better from previous note if you ctrl g
  8. 01:30:284 (1) - ^
  9. 00:15:094 (2,4) - space out a bit more, looks a bit too cramped for an insane
  10. 00:21:549 (5,5) - perhaps try stacking
  11. 00:48:322 (3,2) - ^
  12. 01:00:284 (2,4) - ^ i don't think this overlap here looks too good lol
  13. 00:47:562 (7,1) - ^ although these probably don't really matter it just makes it seem neater
  14. 00:31:708 (2) - overmapped i think
  15. 00:33:322 (4,1) - ehh this overlap isnt too pretty
  16. 00:56:866 (1,2) - you should just copy one of the sliders and ctrl ghj
[Raose's Hard]
  1. 00:19:460 (3) - center this a bit more between (1) and (2)
    SPOILER
  2. 00:39:776 (4,4) - stack better
  3. 00:50:979 (2,2) - ^
  4. 01:01:612 - there's a strong sound here that you're not mapping out :( to fix that,
    01:01:232 (3,1) - you should make rhythm more consistent with 00:58:194 (1) -
  5. 01:08:257 (3,1) - they touch, space out
  6. 01:17:182 (2) - make this curve more like this
    SPOILER
  7. 01:46:232 (5,6) - make parallel :o? idk just looks better to me
    SPOILER
  8. 02:03:511 (1,4) - overlap makes this part look kinda messy, and possibly hard to read
  9. 02:10:536 (1,2,3,4) - might be too difficult for hard. not sure tho, it's a matter of opinion
[Normal]
  1. 01:26:106 (5) - flows better if you made it parallel with (6)
    SPOILER
  2. 01:31:422 (3,4) - this bit may be too hard, consider using a slider instead
  3. 01:37:688 (4,5) - ehh this overlap isnt that pretty ._. and might make it hard to read
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:333 (1,3) - don't overlap?
  2. 01:09:776 (2,3) - ctrl g these and use that rhythm instead, i feel like it makes more sense if the slider is mapping that guitar or w/e
Great mapset! gl for ranking
tollox
31 posts
Joined March 2013
tollox
Here from your m4m queue

Fun map!
You're clearly a better modder so take advice with a grain of salt


Easy
00:03:511 (2) - Sounds better to me if you start it on the white tick, the strong beat on the white feels like it's missing
00:06:549 (2) - ^
00:18:700 (2) - ^
00:56:865 (1,2) - Perhaps a note between these?
01:27:245 (1,2) - ^
01:35:599 (3,1) - ^

Normal
00:26:485 (1) - Sounds better like this http://puu.sh/8fdRo.jpg
00:29:523 (1) - Same thing here
00:28:954 (5,1) - Also consider placing a note between these two, sounds pretty nice
01:01:042 (2) - Possibly http://puu.sh/8felP.jpg (or with a repeat on that slider)
01:29:713 (5,6) - These stacked notes are both on the "by" part of baby, possibly a tiny overmap for normal

Roase's Hard
00:30:663 (3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - This part feels clumsy to me. Not sure how it could be made better, replacing 4 and 5 with a slider and unstacking the blue 1?
00:43:004 (4,1) - All other diffs have a spinner here. Not necessary to add one (especially since different mapper), but it would make them feel more like a whole, and a spinner does fit here.
01:00:663 (2,3,1) - Maybe this instead http://puu.sh/8fgnW.jpg
01:36:359 (1,2) - This overlap isn't very pretty and you don't really have any other overlaps
01:41:295 (2) - Curving it more around the 3 would look nicer


Insane
Couple of unsnapped sliders, check aimod
00:02:942 (2,3) - Doesn't look very balanced. Perhaps wrap the 2 more around the 3?
00:35:600 (1,2,3,4) - How about this? http://puu.sh/8fhE5.jpg or some other remap to music
02:07:878 (6) - Replace this by a mini-stream?
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose

Kibbleru wrote:

[Raose's Hard]
  1. 00:19:460 (3) - center this a bit more between (1) and (2) oops nice
    SPOILER
  2. 00:39:776 (4,4) - stack better wasn't trying to but ok
  3. 00:50:979 (2,2) - ^ eh wasn't trying to, and it would sorta mess up the pattern & spacing D: sorry
  4. 01:01:612 - there's a strong sound here that you're not mapping out :( to fix that,
    01:01:232 (3,1) - you should make rhythm more consistent with 00:58:194 (1) - changed to 2 1/2 sliders
  5. 01:08:257 (3,1) - they touch, space out ok
  6. 01:17:182 (2) - make this curve more like this what happened to your slider LOL changed
    SPOILER
  7. 01:46:232 (5,6) - make parallel :o? idk just looks better to me i wanted a circular flow to lead into (1)
    SPOILER
  8. 02:03:511 (1,4) - overlap makes this part look kinda messy, and possibly hard to read yea but idk how to change it D:
  9. 02:10:536 (1,2,3,4) - might be too difficult for hard. not sure tho, it's a matter of opinion the jumps aren't too big, and it's a pretty cool way to end the map imo

tollox wrote:

Roase's Hard
00:30:663 (3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - This part feels clumsy to me. Not sure how it could be made better, replacing 4 and 5 with a slider and unstacking the blue 1? hmmm not sure exactly what you mean by clumsy D: maybe plain? I kinda like 4 and 5 as circles because they better emphasize the drums, but i'll consider
00:43:004 (4,1) - All other diffs have a spinner here. Not necessary to add one (especially since different mapper), but it would make them feel more like a whole, and a spinner does fit here. ok
01:00:663 (2,3,1) - Maybe this instead http://puu.sh/8fgnW.jpg changed the rhythm a bit from previous mod, and i like it better than this rhythm, sorry ;w; i see how this rhythm makes sense though
01:36:359 (1,2) - This overlap isn't very pretty and you don't really have any other overlaps are you sure i don't have any other overlaps? :( i think the overlap is fine personally, will change if more people say so
01:41:295 (2) - Curving it more around the 3 would look nicer alright
ty ty for mod

today i ate chicken
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Silent Siren.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 80226
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.5
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Stella
TitleUnicode:Stella
Artist:Silent Siren
ArtistUnicode:Silent Siren
Creator:captin1
Version:Raose's Hard
Source:
Tags:start
BeatmapID:400610
BeatmapSetID:163253

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OverallDifficulty:6
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captin1
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captin1
"Kibbleru"
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[Insane]
  1. 00:06:550 (5,6) - for this you could just copy paste one of the sliders and rotate it by 120, it just makes the pattern neater
  2. 00:03:511 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:10:537 (5,6) - ^ (theres gunna be alot of these b prepared lol)
  4. 00:21:929 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:17:182 (3,4) - ^
  6. 01:41:296 (2,3) - ^ so I understand why you suggest these, but I generally do all my sliders in a particular way, so plain 120 degree rotations isn't always exactly what I'm looking for. I could do other numbers of course to get it how I wanted, but they're all quite similar in shape already so there's really no need
  7. 00:09:018 (4) - flows better from previous note if you ctrl g nice
  8. 01:30:284 (1) - ^ eh not on this one, the path to the note after is weird
  9. 00:15:094 (2,4) - space out a bit more, looks a bit too cramped for an insane
  10. 00:21:549 (5,5) - perhaps try stacking not noticeable at all in game and probably changes my placement more than I want it to, so no thanks to these
  11. 00:48:322 (3,2) - ^
  12. 01:00:284 (2,4) - ^ i don't think this overlap here looks too good lol I like it owo
  13. 00:47:562 (7,1) - ^ although these probably don't really matter it just makes it seem neater
  14. 00:31:708 (2) - overmapped i think :P shhh
  15. 00:33:322 (4,1) - ehh this overlap isnt too pretty ;w;
  16. 00:56:866 (1,2) - you should just copy one of the sliders and ctrl ghj again i'm very particular about the direction of my sliders and this doesn't give me enough control over it
[Normal]
  1. 01:26:106 (5) - flows better if you made it parallel with (6)
    SPOILER
  2. 01:31:422 (3,4) - this bit may be too hard, consider using a slider instead I think it's fine, it's not the first time i've used two 1/2 circles and I'd really like a click on 4
  3. 01:37:688 (4,5) - ehh this overlap isnt that pretty ._. and might make it hard to read I think it's alright for now, but i'll consider
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:333 (1,3) - don't overlap?
  2. 01:09:776 (2,3) - ctrl g these and use that rhythm instead, i feel like it makes more sense if the slider is mapping that guitar or w/e
Great mapset! gl for ranking

tollox wrote:

Here from your m4m queue

Fun map!
You're clearly a better modder so take advice with a grain of salt


Easy
00:03:511 (2) - Sounds better to me if you start it on the white tick, the strong beat on the white feels like it's missing
00:06:549 (2) - ^
00:18:700 (2) - ^ I see what you mean, but since in this section the downbeat doesn't really have any more emphasis than the other beats, i'll go with mapping the guitar
00:56:865 (1,2) - Perhaps a note between these?
01:27:245 (1,2) - ^
01:35:599 (3,1) - ^ I wanted to capture the halftime feel that the drum goes into with the space here

Normal
00:26:485 (1) - Sounds better like this http://puu.sh/8fdRo.jpg I like my current rhythm, sorry
00:29:523 (1) - Same thing here
00:28:954 (5,1) - Also consider placing a note between these two, sounds pretty nice hmm I think that might be too much
01:01:042 (2) - Possibly http://puu.sh/8felP.jpg (or with a repeat on that slider) I'm following the vocal with my current rhythm, so I'll keep it
01:29:713 (5,6) - These stacked notes are both on the "by" part of baby, possibly a tiny overmap for normal the first is on the vocal yes, but the second is with the snare hit

Insane
Couple of unsnapped sliders, check aimod
00:02:942 (2,3) - Doesn't look very balanced. Perhaps wrap the 2 more around the 3?
00:35:600 (1,2,3,4) - How about this? http://puu.sh/8fhE5.jpg or some other remap to music eh, mine fits fine
02:07:878 (6) - Replace this by a mini-stream? no thanks, i'll keep the hanging feel from the guitar note
Thanks!
I hope your chicken was good rose
hue
Yuuki Aoi_old
Yuuki Aoi_old
Came from your M4M Queue! Sorry if the mod's bad, i'm new when it comes to modding! Hope to be better!

Easy
01:43:004 (2) - flip it upside down? to make the flow better
02:08:257 (3) - add soft whistle to the head and drum-hitwhistle to the tail. I think it works wonderfully.

Nice diff, can't spot anything else, though I think the 3/2 space between objects are kind of difficult for beginner players to playout but since they're kind of.. consistent, maybe it'll work out :D.

Normal
00:12:245 (3) - and 00:13:004 (4) - change it to be like this? http://puu.sh/8fOyN.png
00:24:397 (3) - Curve it so it faces to 00:25:156 (4) - ? to make the flow better.
00:46:992 (3) - drop it down a little? it almost touches the HP Bar!
00:49:270 (4) - add soft hitwhistle in the head?
01:13:194 (3) - ^ and tail
01:48:700 (4) - add soft whistle in the head?

Raose's Hard
00:13:954 (4) - make it a triple repeating slider? u don't have to though.
00:38:257 (4) - make this a blanket?

Insane
01:18:701 (4) - NC
01:19:271 (7) - NC swap with 01:19:461 (1) -
01:20:219 (1) - to 01:20:980 (5) - add default soft-hitwhistle? (optional)
01:22:119 (4) - add soft-hitwhistle?
01:27:246 (1) - remove soft-hitwhistle in tail?
01:43:954 add spinner until 01:45:093 ?

It's really hard to mod insanes for me because it's a matter of mapping style. There's not really much to fix here either.

Good Luck with ranking this! :D
OblivioN
OblivioN
hi，from your m4m queue :3
[Normal]
00:15:093 (2) - blanket with 00:14:333 (1) -
I think the diff is hard for newbie……consider about decreasing difficulty
[Hard]
00:13:954 (4) - sounds uncomfortable……

good diff！

[Insane]
00:03:511 (3) - ctrl+g
00:43:195 (1) - I think spin should be ended at00:44:333 or it's hard to hit 00:44:713 at time :(
02:11:107 (7) - end at02:11:295 will be sounds fine:3
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose

Yuuki Aoi wrote:

Raose's Hard
00:13:954 (4) - make it a triple repeating slider? u don't have to though. trying to emphasize the stronger sounding beats
00:38:257 (4) - make this a blanket? ok

OblivioN wrote:

[Hard]
00:13:954 (4) - sounds uncomfortable…… think it sounds ok D:
the chicken was good ty
osu file format v12

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177,224,79270,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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312,93,80030,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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431,264,82308,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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401,154,83637,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,244,83827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,232,84017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,116,84207,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,116,84587,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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44,120,85346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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233,339,87055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,332,87245,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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261,337,90093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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captin1
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captin1

Yuuki Aoi wrote:

Came from your M4M Queue! Sorry if the mod's bad, i'm new when it comes to modding! Hope to be better!

Easy
01:43:004 (2) - flip it upside down? to make the flow better I like the way it is now, fits with the kiai ending
02:08:257 (3) - add soft whistle to the head and drum-hitwhistle to the tail. I think it works wonderfully.

Nice diff, can't spot anything else, though I think the 3/2 space between objects are kind of difficult for beginner players to playout but since they're kind of.. consistent, maybe it'll work out :D.

Normal
00:12:245 (3) - and 00:13:004 (4) - change it to be like this? http://puu.sh/8fOyN.png
00:24:397 (3) - Curve it so it faces to 00:25:156 (4) - ? to make the flow better. I like the angled pattern
00:46:992 (3) - drop it down a little? it almost touches the HP Bar! key word is almost ;)
00:49:270 (4) - add soft hitwhistle in the head?
01:13:194 (3) - ^ and tail just head will be fine
01:48:700 (4) - add soft whistle in the head?

Insane
01:18:701 (4) - NC
01:19:271 (7) - NC swap with 01:19:461 (1) -
01:20:219 (1) - to 01:20:980 (5) - add default soft-hitwhistle? (optional) nah, I like this being soft
01:22:119 (4) - add soft-hitwhistle?
01:27:246 (1) - remove soft-hitwhistle in tail?
01:43:954 add spinner until 01:45:093 ? I like the short break, fits the song well

It's really hard to mod insanes for me because it's a matter of mapping style. There's not really much to fix here either.

Good Luck with ranking this! :D
"OblivioN"
hi，from your m4m queue :3
[Normal]
00:15:093 (2) - blanket with 00:14:333 (1) - not really necessary
I think the diff is hard for newbie……consider about decreasing difficulty it's fine, this map isn't for beginners, that's what easy is for

[Insane]
00:03:511 (3) - ctrl+g flows well but it puts the jump in the wrong place so no thanks
00:43:195 (1) - I think spin should be ended at00:44:333 or it's hard to hit 00:44:713 at time :(
02:11:107 (7) - end at02:11:295 will be sounds fine:3 made the slider repeat instead

thanks!

i had chicken today too
Ozato Fumika
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Ozato Fumika
I love you for mapping standard of this song.

Have my babies I mean stars
captin1
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omg o.o thank you so much!
Chewin
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Chewin
General

  1. odd bg dimensions, try to get it in 4:3 pls
  2. Combo3 colour is inconsistent between difficult, I would make it consistent (at least between E/N/I because mapped by you)
  3. Inconsistency in kiai times by 1ms. Please check it carefully and snap them properly
Easy

  1. 00:02:182 (1) - It could sound nazi but it isn't. I would move the second slider's point some grid left because actually I think it's tail is placed too much on the right and it flows bad considering where you have placed the next slider 00:03:511 (2). I mean, placing it in this other way would help the flow much better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548044
  2. 00:31:802 (2) - I think that clap is missing on this slider's head
  3. 00:38:637 (1,2) - Well.. to be consistent with previous slider you should add a whistle on (1)'s repeat like you did for the previous 00:32:561 (1,2,1,2)'s tails, and add a whistle on 00:40:916 (2) as well
  4. 00:50:409 - I'd really add a circle with clap hitsound here if I was you. This part looks so empty without that strong clap sound and don't using it just makes the clap on 00:50:789 (1)'s tail sound very loud and bad. Really consider to add it, it's very needed
  5. 01:05:979 (1) - Add finish here, it sounds really cool
  6. 01:08:257 (3) - You forgot clap on this slider's head
  7. 01:28:004 (2) - Clap on the tail again
Normal

  1. 00:31:612 (4) - Add clap on repeat to fill the drum in the music
  2. 02:05:219 (1) - I'd give you same suggestion I wrote above for 00:02:182 (1) in the normal. Move this slider's tail on the right more, it helps the flow very much
  3. 02:10:916 (5,6) - What about to replace these two circles with a slider? I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548075
Hard

  1. I'd say HP and OD -1
  2. 00:49:840 (2,3,4,1) - I don't like how this part plays. What about to make something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548102 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548107
    SPOILER
    408,168,49840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    384,80,50030,2,0,P|408:36|448:16,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    408,168,50599,2,0,P|364:188|316:176,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    276,116,50979,6,0,P|188:100|112:116,1,160
    44,72,51549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    8,152,51738,2,0,P|7:190|20:241,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 01:02:941 (1) - Finish on the head? I think it sounds cool
  4. 01:05:219 - This missing tick really confuses player, trust me. I know you are trying to follow the vocal sound here but you used custom claps in the previous low part (and next) as well. So, you really need to add a circle with a clap hitsound to emphasize that drum in the music. Actually it's pretty confusing.
  5. 01:23:827 (5,6,1,2) - There is something wrong here. The 01:24:017 (6) should be placed where there is actually the 01:24:207 (1). You could switch them and move the 01:24:587 (2) on 01:24:776 (3)'s head (that's the correct version): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548122
  6. 01:27:245 (1) - Finish? It sounds nicely together with previous one on 01:25:536 (1)'s head
Insane

  1. 00:14:334 (1) - Finish on the head
  2. 00:16:042 (4,5,6) - What about this? It flows much better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548131
  3. 01:05:789 (10) - I'd remove this circle
  4. 01:19:840 (5) - This slider shouldn't be placed here considering that it's 1/1 from 01:19:461 (2) on the timeline. But we can easily fix this just adding two circles on 01:19:650 and 01:19:745 to make a triple on the actual (3)'s head
  5. 01:33:322 (1) - The sliderball is slowed too much due to the slider's shape. Sorry but new rules say that this kind of slider is not rankable. Remove those two red point to fix that and try to get a different shape.
  6. 02:05:220 (1) - Finish on the head
I think this mapset still needs more work, especially on the Hard and Insane diff. That's it for now, good luck dude :3
captin1
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Chewin wrote:

General

  1. odd bg dimensions, try to get it in 4:3 pls The bg is actually currently in 16:9, just not the max dimensions for it, I'll see what I can do though
  2. Combo3 colour is inconsistent between difficult, I would make it consistent (at least between E/N/I because mapped by you) oops, I had changed it in the insane but forgot to copy it over
  3. Inconsistency in kiai times by 1ms. Please check it carefully and snap them properly D: green lines why
Easy

  1. 00:02:182 (1) - It could sound nazi but it isn't. I would move the second slider's point some grid left because actually I think it's tail is placed too much on the right and it flows bad considering where you have placed the next slider 00:03:511 (2). I mean, placing it in this other way would help the flow much better: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548044 fixed
  2. 00:31:802 (2) - I think that clap is missing on this slider's head fixed
  3. 00:38:637 (1,2) - Well.. to be consistent with previous slider you should add a whistle on (1)'s repeat like you did for the previous 00:32:561 (1,2,1,2)'s tails, and add a whistle on 00:40:916 (2) as well added on the repeat but I think I'll leave 2 without it
  4. 00:50:409 - I'd really add a circle with clap hitsound here if I was you. This part looks so empty without that strong clap sound and don't using it just makes the clap on 00:50:789 (1)'s tail sound very loud and bad. Really consider to add it, it's very needed yep!
  5. 01:05:979 (1) - Add finish here, it sounds really cool nice!
  6. 01:08:257 (3) - You forgot clap on this slider's head fixed
  7. 01:28:004 (2) - Clap on the tail again fixed
Normal

  1. 00:31:612 (4) - Add clap on repeat to fill the drum in the music
  2. 02:05:219 (1) - I'd give you same suggestion I wrote above for 00:02:182 (1) in the normal. Move this slider's tail on the right more, it helps the flow very much
  3. 02:10:916 (5,6) - What about to replace these two circles with a slider? I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548075
all fixed here

Insane

  1. 00:14:334 (1) - Finish on the head fixed
  2. 00:16:042 (4,5,6) - What about this? It flows much better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548131 yeah!
  3. 01:05:789 (10) - I'd remove this circle I'd like to keep this for the bass drum note, so adjusted so 9 isn't stacked anymore
  4. 01:19:840 (5) - This slider shouldn't be placed here considering that it's 1/1 from 01:19:461 (2) on the timeline. But we can easily fix this just adding two circles on 01:19:650 and 01:19:745 to make a triple on the actual (3)'s head woah awesome
  5. 01:33:322 (1) - The sliderball is slowed too much due to the slider's shape. Sorry but new rules say that this kind of slider is not rankable. Remove those two red point to fix that and try to get a different shape. ;w; rip slider, spaced out the red points so it doesn't slow down
  6. 02:05:220 (1) - Finish on the head Fixed
I think this mapset still needs more work, especially on the Hard and Insane diff. That's it for now, good luck dude :3
thank you so much!
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose

Chewin wrote:

Hard

  1. I'd say HP and OD -1 ok
  2. 00:49:840 (2,3,4,1) - I don't like how this part plays. What about to make something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548102 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548107 good idea ty! didn't follow code exactly
    SPOILER
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  3. 01:02:941 (1) - Finish on the head? I think it sounds cool nice
  4. 01:05:219 - This missing tick really confuses player, trust me. I know you are trying to follow the vocal sound here but you used custom claps in the previous low part (and next) as well. So, you really need to add a circle with a clap hitsound to emphasize that drum in the music. Actually it's pretty confusing. added~
  5. 01:23:827 (5,6,1,2) - There is something wrong here. The 01:24:017 (6) should be placed where there is actually the 01:24:207 (1). You could switch them and move the 01:24:587 (2) on 01:24:776 (3)'s head (that's the correct version): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1548122 nice
  6. 01:27:245 (1) - Finish? It sounds nicely together with previous one on 01:25:536 (1)'s head suuuure why not
i want ramen
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240,98,109080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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418,140,110599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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301,248,114207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,248,114397,6,0,P|310:155|296:90,1,160
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359,43,115346,2,0,P|390:57|447:57,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,50,115726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,206,116106,6,0,P|379:259|368:298,2,80,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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473,349,117245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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259,251,120283,2,0,P|214:238|183:207,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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437,129,121232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,202,121422,2,0,P|337:258|361:291,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,206,121802,2,0,P|443:168|437:129,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,276,122182,6,0,P|428:315|504:287,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
507,217,122751,1,0,0:0:0:0:
501,137,122941,2,0,L|487:41,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,33,123321,1,8,0:0:0:0:
334,125,123511,6,0,B|272:138|228:104|228:104|176:143,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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205,210,124840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,201,125219,6,0,P|355:145|318:116,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,188,125599,2,0,P|291:244|328:273,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,291,125979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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355,338,126549,6,0,L|274:342,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,273,126928,2,0,L|239:270,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,341,127308,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,335,127498,2,0,P|88:300|89:252,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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139,36,128257,6,0,P|98:23|44:43,1,80
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205,249,129017,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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284,258,129587,6,0,P|318:235|339:182,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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336,201,130346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
319,122,130536,5,8,0:0:0:0:
284,258,130726,1,8,0:0:0:0:
419,219,130916,1,8,0:0:0:0:
319,122,131106,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,116,136202,5,8,0:0:0:0:
344,116,136391,2,0,B|294:130|294:130|238:125|238:125|185:142,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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