1. Cup184 (4.12 stars, 173 notes)
2. Platter184 (5.61 stars, 316 notes)
3. Rain184 (6.14 stars, 459 notes)
4. Salad184 (4.59 stars, 236 notes)

Genocide wrote:

[Salad184]
01:43:237 Add 1 here added :3

[Rain184]
00:05:574 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) : x=336 i don't understand, i put the opposite of the previous 2 streams instead
00:06:552 (2) ctrl+g (x=416) added
00:07:204 (4) ctrl+g (x=496) added
00:07:856 (2) ^ (x=128) added
00:08:508 (4) ^ (x=26) added
00:44:052 (5.6.7.8) (x=320) http://puu.sh/86DYB.png done

Kay, i tried my best gj
All Diff is okay and nice to play (y) cool

Good Luck thanks

toybot wrote:

waa you're mapping cytus maps too ;;

Marinska wrote:

yo m4m right.... hoho...
[General]
i think you must change combo color ... try to use 3 Different color..
or just remove combo color 4 and change the combo color 1 to blue sea

rain184

-2 HP is a very hard diff... so you can lower the HP fixed
00:04:922 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - it's so hard to pass ... try like This ? I changed with different pattern but it's similar
00:16:008 - NC here.. ok
00:15:356 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,) ?
00:27:748 (6,7) - x:400 ? sure
00:29:378 (3) - Ctrl+g fixed
00:40:791 (3) - don't jupm here ... x:352 and 00:42:585 (10) - so far jump , place it same with (3) fixed
00:45:356 (9) - NC here done
01:06:552 (5,9,13) - ^ ok
01:10:139 (5,11) - ^ k
01:16:498 (5) - ^ yea
01:20:737 (8,14,20) - ^ and remove NC 01:23:182 sure
01:27:095 (9) - NC fixed

Platter184

00:12:421 (5) - distance different with (2) - (3) move (5) to x:144 ok fixed
00:16:008 (7) - NC k
00:20:574 (10) - NC done
00:26:443 (7) - ^ ^
01:06:878 (9) - ^ ^
01:21:552 (11,12) - (11) x:272 and (12) x:368 ? ok
01:21:063 (8) - NC ofc ok

oce just it now.. hope it helpful... thanks for mod :3

DragonSlayer96 wrote:

[Cup184]
add notes here to help follow the beat:
- 00:33:291 - no because there should be less combo in cup so there should have less circles and sliders than other diffs, and I don't see it necessary
- 00:34:595 - ^
- 00:38:508 - ^
- 01:08:508 - ^
- 01:13:726 - ^
- 01:18:943 - ^
- 01:29:378 - ^
- 01:34:595 - ^
- 01:52:856 - I added this one
- 01:55:465 - no again, sorry

toybot wrote:

here you go

2014-05-09 22:01 toybot: i dont think im gonna need to mod salad or cup
2014-05-09 22:02 alienflybot: :o
2014-05-09 22:02 alienflybot: okok
2014-05-09 22:04 toybot: maybe make cup ar6? the fruits seemed too connected
2014-05-09 22:04 toybot: and ill go through rain once more
2014-05-09 22:04 alienflybot: :o
2014-05-09 22:04 alienflybot: ok
2014-05-09 22:04 alienflybot: i almost fc rain :( i missed 1 :((((
2014-05-09 22:06 toybot: loooo
2014-05-09 22:06 toybot: mmk
2014-05-09 22:06 alienflybot: lel
2014-05-09 22:06 toybot: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/393051 Persona - Area184 [Rain184]]
2014-05-09 22:06 alienflybot: its ok rain is a bit hard :p
2014-05-09 22:07 toybot: ok there was a part where i didnt really like
2014-05-09 22:07 toybot: 00:45:356 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - 
2014-05-09 22:08 alienflybot: but why
2014-05-09 22:08 toybot: well not because of strean
2014-05-09 22:08 alienflybot: i kinda like that pattern of keep enlarging the sliders
2014-05-09 22:08 alienflybot: *not sliders but kind of
2014-05-09 22:08 toybot: its the connection between (16) and the slider
2014-05-09 22:08 toybot: its a bit too far a part imo
2014-05-09 22:09 alienflybot: ok
2014-05-09 22:09 alienflybot: i will make it closer
2014-05-09 22:09 toybot: mmkz
2014-05-09 22:10 alienflybot: changed
2014-05-09 22:10 toybot: 00:58:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - how about ctrl+g this entire pattern?
2014-05-09 22:10 toybot: so that the distance gets smaller and smaller
2014-05-09 22:10 toybot: then larger and larger
2014-05-09 22:10 toybot: yknow
2014-05-09 22:11 alienflybot: fixed
2014-05-09 22:11 toybot: 01:28:237 (8) - move this to the left so that there isnt hyperdash between (7) and (8)
2014-05-09 22:12 alienflybot: ok
2014-05-09 22:12 alienflybot: fixed
2014-05-09 22:14 toybot: 00:42:421 (9) - maybe move this to the right a little
2014-05-09 22:14 alienflybot: ok fixed
2014-05-09 22:15 toybot: hmm i cant think of anything else
2014-05-09 22:15 toybot: because im noob at ctb map
2014-05-09 22:15 alienflybot: :o
2014-05-09 22:15 toybot: 00:56:280 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - thought this was a little weird
2014-05-09 22:15 toybot: well (9,10,11) progression
2014-05-09 22:16 toybot: but i guess its ok
2014-05-09 22:16 alienflybot: ok
2014-05-09 22:16 toybot: ill go on to platter once you fix
2014-05-09 22:16 alienflybot: i changed it so there will not have 3 red jump
2014-05-09 22:16 toybot: yeah
2014-05-09 22:16 alienflybot: because i thought its too hard too xd
2014-05-09 22:16 toybot: lol i could fc that
2014-05-09 22:16 toybot: but it felt too out of place
2014-05-09 22:16 alienflybot: :o
2014-05-09 22:17 toybot: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/395570 Persona - Area184 [Platter184]]
2014-05-09 22:17 toybot: add at least like one hyper jump in the diff?
2014-05-09 22:17 alienflybot: oh
2014-05-09 22:17 alienflybot: which part
2014-05-09 22:18 toybot: lol idk
2014-05-09 22:18 toybot: >pro mod
2014-05-09 22:18 toybot: 00:16:335 (5,6,7,8) - maybe connect this with the slider?
2014-05-09 22:20 alienflybot: wait
2014-05-09 22:20 toybot: 01:41:443 (1) - make this 1/1 beat instead?
2014-05-09 22:20 toybot: yeah?
2014-05-09 22:20 alienflybot: ok fixed
2014-05-09 22:20 alienflybot: what do you mean by 1/1
2014-05-09 22:21 toybot: http://puu.sh/8Gbfn.jpg this takes up 1/1 tick
2014-05-09 22:22 toybot: gonna have to go soon
2014-05-09 22:22 alienflybot: ok fixed
2014-05-09 22:22 alienflybot: okok

Good luck! and shot a star~

DragonSlayer96 wrote:

Thanks for letting me know how Cup difficulty looks like afb. Just learning how to mod CtB so it's helpful to know

Phoenixphi wrote:

Hi...
M4M time

[Cup148]
CS:3 no because it will be harder with higher cs + using hardrock
AR:5 sure fixed
00:45:030 -> Spinner start here and make it until 00:46:498 no because the spinner now is at the sound where it is different from 00:45:030
01:10:139 -> NC here
01:15:356 -> ^
01:20:574 -> ^ all fixed ^
01:28:400 -> Spiky sliders for new player i don't think so because its just a curve-like slider
01:34:921 -> ^ same as above
01:51:878 -> NC done
01:59:704 -> Add Whistle at the end of the spinner although i don't find it important because of the audio 5% but ok i will take it

[Salad184]
00:23:182 -> NC ok
00:25:791 -> ^ ^
01:05:900 -> Put the end of the spinner here done
01:25:791 -> NC ok
01:32:965 -> Change Finish to Whistle, but keep the tail with Finish no because i think it's quite cool because of the finish slider at last
01:38:182 -> ^ same as above
01:43:237 -> Delete circle lol xd a modder before said to add, and you said to delete, but i find it better with deleting the circle so yeah
01:43:400 -> Change Finish to Whistle, but keep the tail with Finish same as above that i think its not necessary
01:48:291 -> Disable Whistle sorry but i think this is much cooler than without whistle
01:48:617 -> Change Finish to Whistle, but keep the tail with Finish again sorry
01:59:704 -> Add Whistle at the end of the spinner aight

[Platter184]
00:46:008 (1,2,3,4) -> Same rhythm but different spacing between sliders. Change it! fixed
01:05:900 -> End of the spinner ok
01:10:139 -> NC changed
01:15:356 (7,8,9,10) -> Same rhythm but different spacing between sliders. Change it! ok made easier
01:28:074 -> End of the spinner alright

Vhy wrote:

hi hi ~
m4m as you request xD

[Cup184]
AR should be same with OD. set it to 5 or 6. but i prefer 6 here fixed
00:06:226 (1) - too soon the note is placed after the spinner. it's quite hard to read for most beginner because of the low AR and high bpm which causes this note is too near after the spinner. considering shorten the spinner by 1/2 tick on timeline 00:05:900 to make it easier. this applies to all spinner which have same issues on this diff done
00:15:030 (6) - this note needs more distance to the right because there's a spinner afterward made spinner end earlier
00:23:182 (5) - move this to x:384 just to make it more interesting done
00:25:302 (3) - put this note on the right one. i mean x:288 flows better ok
00:27:421 (9) - ctrl+g this? sure
00:44:704 (3,4) - switch their position fixed
00:55:465 (2,3,4,5,6) - reduce their distance each other done
01:14:052 (2) - move to x:208 ok
01:47:639 (2) - move to x:208 it flows better than the current fixed
01:54:487 (1) - remove the clap on head. it doesn't fit at all with the music cz the low volume fixed
01:55:791 (2) - remove the clap on tail. same reason as above ^
01:57:095 (4) - here too. remove clap on head ^
01:57:748 (1) - ^ ^

[Salad184]
this salad needs more movement. imo overall distance here is too low, even i can FC this without using any shift here. considering increase more distance on each note to make this salad more interesting. here's some of parts that need to increase the distance.

SPOILER

00:06:063 (8,1) - ctrl+g'ed the slider
00:10:791 (10,11,1) - done
00:20:248 (6,7) - aight
00:26:769 (3,4) -made farther
00:28:237 (6,1) - ^
00:29:704 (3,4) - fixed
00:54:487 (5,6) - yup ^
00:57:095 (1,2,3,4) - farther
01:10:139 (5,6) - ok
01:13:400 (2,3) - done
01:17:313 (8,1) - ok
01:21:878 (7,1) - ok
01:28:074 (8,1) - ^
01:44:052 (1,2) - done

00:42:748 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - im sure you can make those pattern more interesting fixed
00:45:356 (9) - NC here ^
00:55:465 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - same as above done
01:50:900 (5) - move this to x:184 done
01:54:487 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - remove these clap. change it to whistle instead actually i think clapping gives a rhythmatic feeling, so i will keep the clap instead of whistle

[Platter184]
00:06:226 (1) - this is the part of the song where the sound begin loud, so i guess a Dash would be fit here. slider ctrl+g then move to x:96. and also to improve the movement here, move the circle at 00:06:715 (2) to x:176 fixed
00:10:139 (5) - move this to x:464 alright
00:17:313 (2) - i prefer ctrl+g this. a backward flow could be interesting sure
00:22:530 (2) - move to x:192 fixed
00:31:008 (4,5,6) - having this pattern in the same x axis is quite boring imo. try to move 00:31:498 (5) more to the left to create a Dash sure I changed
00:56:769 (9,10) - drcrease the distance a please. the amount of spacing here is too big for platter at this streams ok
01:09:487 (4) - you can divide this into a 2 circles and place them apart more than just a straight slider across y axis which is kinda little boring ok
01:11:443 (5,6,7,8) - you can increase the degree of this difficult by ctrl+g every one of them to make it more interesting i used two same pattern instead (still likely yours one)
01:11:443 (5,6,7,8) - move to x:308 for a better movement and flow not 308 but still ok
01:26:443 (3,4) - increase the distance between them until it creates a HDash ok
01:30:682 (8) - move to x:176 fixed
01:31:008 (1,2,3,4) - spread them away please. this is too easy xD sure
01:38:182 (7) - move to x:32 ok
01:52:204 (2,3) - swap the position of these notes
01:53:182 (5,6) - here's too double yes
01:54:487 (1,2,4,5,6,7) - remove these clap. change it to whistle instead sorry I think it is better with clapping as I mentioned before

[Rain184]
00:07:856 (2) - this pattern is really hard to catch and doesn't empashize the previous pattern at all. considering move this to x:112 in order to create a HDash too at 00:07:530 (1) ok, changed the whole pattern instead
00:11:117 (4) - why using 3/4 slider here? it sounds better that the slider made the audio stretched, and as well as the circle
00:15:356 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - increase the distance more. the ryuuta needs more movement here enlarged the distance
00:31:498 (10) - move to x:144 for a better movement sure
00:37:530 (1,2,3,4) - increase the distance more done
00:38:835 (5,6,7,8) - here's too ^
00:42:748 (1,2,3,4) - ^ changed with another pattern which is ok as well
00:44:052 (5,6,7,8) - ^ ^
00:45:356 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - don't you think this streams is a bit easy for rain? I actually was thinking about making the sliderstream bigger and bigger to become interesting, but now I switched them into 4 little streams
00:46:008 (9) - NC here done
00:57:095 (1,3,5,7) - move this 2 grid to the right I don't understand about this, but I changed tho
00:58:563 (2,4,6,8) - ^ to the left ^
01:54:487 (1,3,5,8,10,1) - remove these clap. change it to whistle instead as I mentioned before, it suits the rhythm

good luck thanks for your mod!

Xinely wrote:

hi o.o hi www

well actually this mapset especially Cup and Salad are really need hard works here yep
i will mention this ones :
- the Cup is really easy, less movement. 00:07:204 (3) - like this etc. i would say use consistency spacing here but larger spacing like 1,0x or 1,2x would be fine. oh and AR5 OD 5 should work better here since Cup is Easy, less AR better imo. HP3 because HP2 is too low cup is supposed to be easy diff but in ctb mode, right but I didn't really follow the distance snap or spacing etc. because it is just the sense of movement for me, I will take the HP drain and AR, OD settings, and I will make the spacing bigger

- Salad : same as Cup, less movement. 00:04:922 (1,2) - pattern like this working bad at CtB so i highly recommended to change it. more movement better for CtB. Use larger spacing is highly suggested here. use 1,2x worked nice in my eyes. 01:39:813 (2) - spacing like this is really low.. example this one why i told need to use larger spacing. I will change

- Platter : 00:16:335 (5,6,7,8) - the stream feel a little bit dizzy for new player who want try platter so make it straight stream better http://puu.sh/8XWVT.jpg . seems fine for this diff. fixed them

- Rain : HP6 because HP5 setting for Platter mostly. Patterns seems good. suggestion 00:14:378 (2) - to ctrl+G for better movement. 00:15:030 (4) - same goes this one okay it looks like I keep using this pattern (the two slider pointing each other) but alright

- For all diffs : 01:28:400 - this time should hitsounded with finish. not clap because Cymbal sounds done

Yup ~
You can see much CtB's ranked diffs as reference to make your diffs become awesome
Good Luck ne ~
No Kudosu i guess. just mentioning some issues