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Ray - ebb and flow (TV Size)

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Lust
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Lust
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, March 30, 2014 at 1:45:32 PM

Artist: Ray
Title: ebb and flow (TV Size)
Source: 凪のあすから
Tags: Nagi no Asukara Nagi-Asu: A Lull in the Sea From the Calm Tomorrow Manaka Mukaido Hikari Sakishima Chisaki Hiradaira Kaname Isaki Tsumugu Kihara
BPM: 106.02
Filesize: 17255kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.83 stars, 106 notes)
  2. Hard (4.6 stars, 178 notes)
  3. Normal (4.22 stars, 140 notes)
Download: Ray - ebb and flow (TV Size)
Download: Ray - ebb and flow (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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yet another ebb and flow mapset appears!


#4 ranked map

What a beautiful song for a beautiful anime~
Thanks to Kodora (and by extension colin hou and doomsday) for letting me use his mp3 and video!
Also thanks to Yoeri for hitsounding help!
Last edited by Lust , edited 14 times in total.
Maeglwn
Maeglwn
mod lel
Normal
CS: to 3 (imo)
00:02:563 - should be a single or something here imo
00:25:766 (1,2) - spacing is awkward, would be better if they were close together

this map is really pretty

Hard
CS: to 3/4 (cs5 seems way too awkward for a map with this low bpm and low note density)
00:04:261 (3,4,1,2) - this entire section plays badly imo, too hard to read because the stacks shouldn't overlap on each other but the second set does
00:19:541 (2,3,4) - overmapped, hard to follow
00:23:220 (1) - bad placement for spinner, this song is definitely a song that should only have spinners in transitions
00:25:200 (1,1) - why the new combo twice?
00:52:648 (1) - this is literally the worst heart I have ever seen ever pls fix
toara_fict
1,319 posts
Joined July 2012
toara_fict
:3 ♥
Hula
581 posts
Joined January 2013
Hula
no.
Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Lust

Maeglwn wrote:

mod lel
Normal
CS: to 3 (imo) nah its ok
00:02:563 - should be a single or something here imo nah, none there to lower note density
00:25:766 (1,2) - spacing is awkward, would be better if they were close together i think its fine

this map is really pretty thanks <3

Hard
CS: to 3/4 (cs5 seems way too awkward for a map with this low bpm and low note density) nah its ok
00:04:261 (3,4,1,2) - this entire section plays badly imo, too hard to read because the stacks shouldn't overlap on each other but the second set does i am going to need more opinions on this, so ill hold on changing it
00:19:541 (2,3,4) - overmapped, hard to follow i dont think so
00:23:220 (1) - bad placement for spinner, this song is definitely a song that should only have spinners in transitions [color=#4080FFi think its fine[/color]
00:25:200 (1,1) - why the new combo twice? first combo is required after the spinner, second is for the change in the music
00:52:648 (1) - this is literally the worst heart I have ever seen ever pls fix oh okay :(

thanks for the mod!

Hula wrote:

no.
gosh darnit hula


toara_fict wrote:

:3 ♥
thanks for the star ♥
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe
Hello o/

Here's your mod as requested

Here we go~~

[General]
Check AiMod , video dimensions problem

[Normal]
00:06:525 (3) - I think it's better to put this on a blue tick
00:26:332 (2) - Kind of random circles but you can keep it imo
00:40:481 (3) - New combo here !

[Hard]
00:02:705 (5) - Kind of useless ?
00:15:297 (4,5,6,7) - Random circles imo. Try to male a better pattern !
00:58:024 (3,4,5) - ^
01:26:038 (4) - Remove it and put 2 notes ? :D

That's all I found !
Pretty nice mapset Lust =D
When Easy diff come , call me for a second mod :p
Timorisu
771 posts
Joined November 2012
Timorisu
irc lol
17:07 Timorisu: boop
17:07 Lust: which diff are we on
17:07 *Timorisu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/386590 Ray - ebb and flow (TV Size) [Normal]]
17:07 Timorisu: 00:04:261 (3,2) -
17:08 Lust: oh nothing i suppose, they are used to carry the rhythm
17:09 Timorisu: [http://puu.sh/7y0Fp.jpg i would just]
17:10 Timorisu: 00:32:275 (1) - this is really off
17:10 Timorisu: i cant click anything again wtf
17:10 Timorisu: ugh
17:10 Lust: yeah
17:10 Lust: got damn
17:11 Timorisu: 00:39:915 (2,3) - im not sure about anti jumps in a normal but they might trick new players
17:12 Lust: hmm ill need to get more opinions on that
17:12 Timorisu: 00:48:262 (1) - i think the minimun space b/t a object and a spinner is 1/2 if not even 1/1
17:12 Lust: because most of the normal players i had test were fine with it
17:12 Lust: nah its fine
17:13 Timorisu: 00:58:024 (2) - i will point out every blanket i notice
17:13 Timorisu: 01:05:948 (5) - lol
17:14 Timorisu: uh that was it
17:14 Timorisu: for this diff
17:14 Lust: first blanket was fine
17:14 Lust: second ill fix
17:15 *Timorisu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/386589 Ray - ebb and flow (TV Size) [Hard]]
17:15 Timorisu: 00:01:714 (2) - really off
17:16 Timorisu: 00:11:901 (1) - either this or (2) is off
17:16 Timorisu: but i think fixing the curve in this on is easier
17:16 Lust: hmm alright
17:17 Timorisu: http://puu.sh/7y1pk.jpg
17:17 Timorisu: like this for example
17:17 Timorisu: the way it is now is that the red point is closer to (2) than the end of (1) making it look uneven :P
17:18 Lust: ah alright
17:18 Timorisu: 00:25:483 (1) -
17:19 Timorisu: [ITALICS INTENSIFY] really off
17:19 Timorisu: [http://puu.sh/7y1zC.jpg like please]
17:19 Timorisu: 00:26:332 (2,1) - too then
17:20 Timorisu: 00:35:387 (2) -
17:20 Lust: the second one at 35:387 seems pretty fine
17:20 Timorisu: 00:41:330 (1) -
17:20 Timorisu: http://puu.sh/7y1GM.jpg i think this fits better
17:21 Timorisu: but not too sure tbh
17:21 Timorisu: no wait, delete 4 then
17:21 Timorisu: wait wait wait
17:21 Lust: D;
17:21 Timorisu: im confused
17:22 Timorisu: http://puu.sh/7y1O4.jpg
17:22 Timorisu: okay this
17:23 Timorisu: 00:52:648 (1) - i really am not one to criticize slider art because my skills in that are around 0, but i think it'd be tidier if the end would not touch the body
17:24 Timorisu: 00:59:722 (2) - if you snap the middle it will automatically turn into a great blanket
17:25 Timorisu: 01:09:626 (4) - snap this so it's perfectly in the middle of 1 and 2
17:25 Timorisu: "perfectly" lol
17:26 Timorisu: that's about it
17:26 Lust: :D
17:26 Lust: well fixed most of it
17:26 Lust: some of the others ill need to get opinions on
17:26 Lust: thanks a lot
17:26 Lust: <3
17:27 Timorisu: do you still have the whole log
17:27 Timorisu: i restarted and forgot to save :|
17:28 Lust: yeah i have it
toybot
1,050 posts
Joined June 2013
toybot
mod by request :DDDD
chisakiiiii <3

[General]
Why are the kiai's so short? It kind of feels like it lets down the chorus a bit.
00:50:384 - Make this preview time? it sounds much better as one (and is same as andrea's anyway)

[Normal]
00:26:898 (1) - remove this NC and make the next note NC instead? (1) follows the same rhythm pattern as the last two notes, and followpoints would help
00:40:481 (3,4) - these objects may be confusing, consider placing them some where else? or make 2 and 3 into a slider
00:45:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about make each of these notes get softer and softer? like (1) would be at 40% volume, (2) would be at 35%, (3) would be at 30%, so on. that would make a nice progression. :P
00:52:648 (1) - put a clap on the tail? and speaking of that, 00:53:214 - to 00:54:063 - will probably need to be raised, since that 15% section makes it so quiet unneedingly.
01:19:247 (4) - blanket more pls, the middle seems to be too close compared to head and tail
01:19:813 (1) - why this NC

[Hard]
It would've fitted so much if you made some wave sliders :O
00:04:827 (1,2) - this will definitely confuse some players, even though this is a hard diff, because there are 4 stacked notes with varying rhythm; move 1 and 2 away? like dis:
SPOILER
also remove NC from (1) and place it on the (3) after
00:52:648 (1) - make this heart better noob
swag <3
01:05:099 (4) - remove clap pls, sounds so weird
01:10:475 (7,1) - just something that thought up, but how about move (7) to like around x45 y211 to continue the pattern, then ctrl+g (1)?

Goddamn freaking editing the .osu file to grid 0...

GL on rank lust !~
Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Lust

toybot wrote:

mod by request :DDDD
chisakiiiii <3

[General]
Why are the kiai's so short? It kind of feels like it lets down the chorus a bit. ill think about it
00:50:384 - Make this preview time? it sounds much better as one (and is same as andrea's anyway) nah, i wanna be unique

[Normal]
00:26:898 (1) - remove this NC and make the next note NC instead? (1) follows the same rhythm pattern as the last two notes, and followpoints would help ok
00:40:481 (3,4) - these objects may be confusing, consider placing them some where else? or make 2 and 3 into a slider i think its fine
00:45:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about make each of these notes get softer and softer? like (1) would be at 40% volume, (2) would be at 35%, (3) would be at 30%, so on. that would make a nice progression. :P wouldnt they actually get louder? but either case i think its fine, well no ill think about it because thatd actually be kinda cool
00:52:648 (1) - put a clap on the tail? and speaking of that, 00:53:214 - to 00:54:063 - will probably need to be raised, since that 15% section makes it so quiet unneedingly. [color=$4080FF]oh yeah oops[/color]
01:19:247 (4) - blanket more pls, the middle seems to be too close compared to head and tail ok
01:19:813 (1) - why this NC oops

[Hard]
It would've fitted so much if you made some wave sliders :O wat
00:04:827 (1,2) - this will definitely confuse some players, even though this is a hard diff, because there are 4 stacked notes with varying rhythm; move 1 and 2 away? like dis: ill think about it
SPOILER
also remove NC from (1) and place it on the (3) after oh fixed
00:52:648 (1) - make this heart better noob fixed
swag <3
01:05:099 (4) - remove clap pls, sounds so weird removed
01:10:475 (7,1) - just something that thought up, but how about move (7) to like around x45 y211 to continue the pattern, then ctrl+g (1)? nah its fine

Goddamn freaking editing the .osu file to grid 0...

GL on rank lust !~ thanks!

Secretpipe wrote:

Hello o/

Here's your mod as requested

Here we go~~

[General]
Check AiMod , video dimensions problem its fine

[Normal]
00:06:525 (3) - I think it's better to put this on a blue tick i dont think so
00:26:332 (2) - Kind of random circles but you can keep it imo
00:40:481 (3) - New combo here ! good idea

[Hard]
00:02:705 (5) - Kind of useless ? nah
00:15:297 (4,5,6,7) - Random circles imo. Try to male a better pattern ! fine to me
00:58:024 (3,4,5) - ^ ^
01:26:038 (4) - Remove it and put 2 notes ? :D fine to me

That's all I found !
Pretty nice mapset Lust =D thanks!
When Easy diff come , call me for a second mod :p will do o/

thanks for the mods, guys!
Winnie
1,343 posts
Joined November 2013
Winnie
Tari and Kocari's Modding Queue


[Normal]

00:02:563 (4) - Note around here like this to sound better without the gap of without nothing there http://puu.sh/7y9D6.jpg

00:05:393 (1,2,3,1) - New sequence like this to really fit with the sound http://puu.sh/7y9GF.jpg

Nothing else wrong nice normal difficulty

[Hard]

Well not much I found on hard... Right after my osu client crashed. Yeah been having weird bugs that doesn't allow me to use osu anymore. I'm really sorry if I wasn't much help :(
Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Lust

Kocari wrote:

Tari and Kocari's Modding Queue


[Normal]

00:02:563 (4) - Note around here like this to sound better without the gap of without nothing there http://puu.sh/7y9D6.jpg ill think about it, the main reason its not there is to lower note density

00:05:393 (1,2,3,1) - New sequence like this to really fit with the sound http://puu.sh/7y9GF.jpg i like! changed the rhythm

Nothing else wrong nice normal difficulty

[Hard]

Well not much I found on hard... Right after my osu client crashed. Yeah been having weird bugs that doesn't allow me to use osu anymore. I'm really sorry if I wasn't much help :( its fine, I still helped to improve the mapset!
Thank you for the mod!
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
well like idk why u would want a mod from a crappy mapper like me but ok

[Hard]
00:33:406 (4,5) - ctrl g cuz im a hater
00:34:538 (1,4) - so like, stack?
01:23:491 (3,3) - ^
00:39:915 (2) - well something like this would look better and i would rotate the star thing you have so it stacks as well
SPOILER
01:04:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yah this shape looks pretty fugly :o
01:09:626 (4,5) - i vote triplet here ._.
00:45:291 (4,2) - stack better
01:11:607 (2,3) - i dont think u should stack..?

[Normal]
00:03:412 (2,3) - why dont u blanket ;-;
00:17:843 (3,4,5) - more curve
SPOILER
00:30:011 (1) - touches hp bar (probably cuz of skin, but you should still fix? owo)
01:01:703 (1,3) - blanket better :I
01:10:758 (1,2) - this looks fugly '^'
/me runs

skip this useless mod if u want
Voxnola
729 posts
Joined May 2013
Voxnola
Mod from request
5th time modding something (Holy crap a counter). Sorry if I'm not helpful I'm new at modding >.>

[General]
AiMod is a liar don't listen to it

[Normal]
00:03:978 (3) - You can make this a blanket (keeping the slider head stationary of course
Bad example box

difojaskldf can't find much. This diff is well done.

[Hard]
00:07:091 (4) - I understand it... but I'm not sure why the other piano part here 00:07:232 was ignored. you could make 4 a circle and add a slider here to the original time it ended 00:07:232 - 00:07:657 Did you do this for minimal density?

00:15:297 (4,5,6,7) - wouldn't this pattern make more sense if everything all the circles were snapped to 1.00xds from the 5? It's unequal spacing as it is now. Example:
Bad example box
for this you could move 00:16:994 (2) - to 290, 86 : 00:15:297 (4) - to 229, 147 : 00:16:146 (7) - to 193, 296 : and 00:15:863 (6) - to 79, 186. With this you can retain all the stacks too. Of course 00:16:994 (2,3) - would be a bigger jump but I'm not sure if it matters or not considering the amount of spacing in time. (for 7 you could have the same distance from 6 to 7 to 1. I didn't do that though) <--- all this is just one big noob idea, don't mind it much.

00:52:648 (1) - <3 Though it seems a bit lop-sided is all :p

01:04:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - weird idea I know but maybe increase the spacing between 1 and 2? keeping 1 where it is you could create a sort of triangle thing... (sorry for the bad example and really I see nothing wrong with what you have either. I just think that 6 and 1 should be spaced a bit more is all)
Bad example box

01:07:645 (3,4) - This is a blanket right? It looks off

01:09:626 (4,5) - you could have a stacked triple by adding a note here 01:09:768 (again I see nothing wrong with what you have but I think that having only single-tapping circles while there's material to map can get repetitive.


01:11:607 (2) 01:13:871 (3) - you could stack these two ?

01:16:700 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Idea circle flow?
Bad example box
http://puu.sh/7Anvd.jpg
http://puu.sh/7AnvQ.jpg
Straight seems pretty boring to me lol. plus the way I have it is nice because it makes this slider feel so sexy 01:19:813 (1) only thing I'm sure is a good idea. Use if you want though I won't be offended. Unfortunately there are two circles that overlap a slider in that example.

[Hai]
Nice maps and sorry for the bad mod >.> I think I might've lost some of the mod due to the website acting up too, but I'm not sure:(
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
As ur request

[General]
Fine.

[Nomal]

00:00:583 (1) - Perhaps this part you can use S:C1, to mute the sliderslide sound?
00:02:563 (4) - Add a note? Because have a "ding" vocal . (Like 00:01:431 (2) )
00:36:519 (4) - Feel this hitsound volume suddenly noise,turn down a bit volume?
01:08:777 (1) - Remove clap? Feel can fit the vocal.
01:19:247 (4) - Slider remove finish,there is no dowmbeat here.

[Hard]

00:04:827 (1,2) - Move another place? I feel stack many times here,no sense of rhtythm.
00:36:519 (4) - As the same Normal.
01:05:665 (6,1) - Select add , move to (248|248) will be a good pattern.
01:09:626 (4) - Add clap? Feel can fit the vocal.
01:25:472 (3) - Why not stack 01:23:491 (3) ?

Good Luck ~ ! :)
Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Lust
Thanks for the mods guys! I will apply them tomorrow when I wake up~
Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Topic Starter
Lust
double post because i can
kibbleru

Kibbleru wrote:

well like idk why u would want a mod from a crappy mapper like me but ok

[Hard]
00:33:406 (4,5) - ctrl g cuz im a hater thatll make the distance to (6) too short
00:34:538 (1,4) - so like, stack? too far in the timeline to matter
01:23:491 (3,3) - ^ ^
00:39:915 (2) - well something like this would look better and i would rotate the star thing you have so it stacks as well its fine
01:04:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yah this shape looks pretty fugly :o plays well though
01:09:626 (4,5) - i vote triplet here ._. why?
00:45:291 (4,2) - stack better alright
01:11:607 (2,3) - i dont think u should stack..? why?

[Normal]
00:03:412 (2,3) - why dont u blanket ;-; i wanted to have a nice curving effect downwards
00:17:843 (3,4,5) - more curve sure
00:30:011 (1) - touches hp bar (probably cuz of skin, but you should still fix? owo) hmm i think its alright
01:01:703 (1,3) - blanket better :I its already perfect :x
01:10:758 (1,2) - this looks fugly '^' why?
/me runs

skip this useless mod if u want

naitoshi

Naitoshi wrote:

Mod from request
5th time modding something (Holy crap a counter). Sorry if I'm not helpful I'm new at modding >.>


[Normal]
00:03:978 (3) - You can make this a blanket (keeping the slider head stationary of course ill try it out

difojaskldf can't find much. This diff is well done.

[Hard]
00:07:091 (4) - I understand it... but I'm not sure why the other piano part here 00:07:232 was ignored. you could make 4 a circle and add a slider here to the original time it ended 00:07:232 - 00:07:657 Did you do this for minimal density? its fine how it is

00:15:297 (4,5,6,7) - wouldn't this pattern make more sense if everything all the circles were snapped to 1.00xds from the 5? It's unequal spacing as it is now. Example: for this you could move 00:16:994 (2) - to 290, 86 : 00:15:297 (4) - to 229, 147 : 00:16:146 (7) - to 193, 296 : and 00:15:863 (6) - to 79, 186. With this you can retain all the stacks too. Of course 00:16:994 (2,3) - would be a bigger jump but I'm not sure if it matters or not considering the amount of spacing in time. (for 7 you could have the same distance from 6 to 7 to 1. I didn't do that though) <--- all this is just one big noob idea, don't mind it much. the triangles are all perfectly spaced, except for the notes in the middle, which is intentional

00:52:648 (1) - <3 Though it seems a bit lop-sided is all :p aw ill try to fix

01:04:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - weird idea I know but maybe increase the spacing between 1 and 2? keeping 1 where it is you could create a sort of triangle thing... (sorry for the bad example and really I see nothing wrong with what you have either. I just think that 6 and 1 should be spaced a bit more is all)eh not really noticeable

01:07:645 (3,4) - This is a blanket right? It looks off (3)'s approach circle says its not

01:09:626 (4,5) - you could have a stacked triple by adding a note here 01:09:768 (again I see nothing wrong with what you have but I think that having only single-tapping circles while there's material to map can get repetitive. its fine how it is


01:11:607 (2) 01:13:871 (3) - you could stack these two ? doesnt really matter since its not really stacking on anything, the hitburst is at the end of the slider and its too far in the timeline for it to be visibly stacking with the slider start

01:16:700 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Idea circle flow? Straight seems pretty boring to me lol. plus the way I have it is nice because it makes this slider feel so sexy 01:19:813 (1) only thing I'm sure is a good idea. Use if you want though I won't be offended. Unfortunately there are two circles that overlap a slider in that example. eh ill think about it

[Hai]
Nice maps and sorry for the bad mod >.> I think I might've lost some of the mod due to the website acting up too, but I'm not sure:( :( thanks anyways!

smallboat

smallboat wrote:

As ur request

[General]
Fine.

[Nomal]

00:00:583 (1) - Perhaps this part you can use S:C1, to mute the sliderslide sound? i think it sounds fine
00:02:563 (4) - Add a note? Because have a "ding" vocal . (Like 00:01:431 (2) ) not sire what you are asking here, there is a note?
00:36:519 (4) - Feel this hitsound volume suddenly noise,turn down a bit volume? fixed
01:08:777 (1) - Remove clap? Feel can fit the vocal. i think its fine
01:19:247 (4) - Slider remove finish,there is no dowmbeat here. sure

[Hard]

00:04:827 (1,2) - Move another place? I feel stack many times here,no sense of rhtythm. i really think it gives a nice lull in the map for it to just stop
00:36:519 (4) - As the same Normal. same answer as normal
01:05:665 (6,1) - Select add , move to (248|248) will be a good pattern.
01:09:626 (4) - Add clap? Feel can fit the vocal.
01:25:472 (3) - Why not stack 01:23:491 (3) ?

all fixed except for the one i replied to

Good Luck ~ ! :)

thanks for the mods guys!
ColdTooth
1,100 posts
Joined June 2012
ColdTooth
hi ho

[Easy]

Pretty damn clean. Almost nothing wrong.

00:36:236 (3,4) - Maybe a slider would be better, idk


[Normal]

00:01:714 (3) - not perfect blanket

00:06:242 (3,1) - Something like 00:03:978 (3) - could've fitted better

00:30:011 (1,2) - Looks ugly IMO, maybe blanketing the slider begining could do

00:32:275 (1) - Not blanketed properly

00:39:915 (2,1) - Erm, stacks? Why?

00:58:024 (2) - Not blanketed


[Hard]

00:04:827 (1) - Remove NC 00:05:393 (3) - NC here

00:15:297 (4,5,6,7) - Awkard triangle shape.

00:44:442 (2) - Curve this the other way

00:52:648 (1) - If you move the red dot to x:244 y:72 might look better (also, you make me jelly of hearts ;c;)

00:54:629 (1) - Not blanketing 00:55:478 (2) -

01:16:700 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Could be symmetrical


That is all. Hope it helps and goes for rank o/
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Kazuya
Hi, from #modreqs (My english is bad. e_e Sorry.)

[Easy]
Change slider tick rate: 2
HP, OD: +1 ?

Timing point: 00:26:898 --> Change 00:27:747
Timing point: Unnecessary: 00:50:101
Timing point: ^ 00:52:790 & 00:52:931

[Normal]

Remove unnecessary timing point. e.g: Spinner 00:07:374 (1) -
Circle Size: -1 (3)
Overall Diff: +1 (4)

00:15:297 (3,1) - Hmm. Slider style? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1437215
00:30:011 (1,2,3) - Hmm: 00:30:011 (1) - x: 404 y: 176 ? 00:30:860 (2) - x: 412 y: 88? 00:31:709 (3) - x: 212 y: 148 ?
00:45:291 (3) - Add clap?
00:52:648 (1) - Remove unnecessary timing point.
01:15:002 (1,3) - Slider style? e.g: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1437228
01:24:906 (2) - Better blanket: Slider center point: x: 184 y: 296 ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1437231

[Hard]
This circle size too small! Change size the 4!

00:04:968 (2) - Unnecessary circle. Remove, and move 00:04:827 (1) - circle: x: 328 y: 340
00:43:452 (7) - ^ Remove circle
00:45:291 (4) - Add clap the slider head
00:57:034 (6) - Remove circle
01:09:768 - Put circle here

Good luck!
Lust
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Lust
coldtooth

ColdTooth wrote:

hi ho

[Easy]

Pretty damn clean. Almost nothing wrong.

00:36:236 (3,4) - Maybe a slider would be better, idk having a bunch of sliders in rapid succession isnt very fun and intuitive to play, itll get boring after awhile!


[Normal]

00:01:714 (3) - not perfect blanket looks fine to me

00:06:242 (3,1) - Something like 00:03:978 (3) - could've fitted better oh yeah you right

00:30:011 (1,2) - Looks ugly IMO, maybe blanketing the slider begining could do looks and plays fine to me

00:32:275 (1) - Not blanketed properly what

00:39:915 (2,1) - Erm, stacks? Why? stacks are fun

00:58:024 (2) - Not blanketed looks good to me


[Hard]

00:04:827 (1) - Remove NC 00:05:393 (3) - NC here whoops fixed

00:15:297 (4,5,6,7) - Awkard triangle shape. they are cool!

00:44:442 (2) - Curve this the other way sure ill bite

00:52:648 (1) - If you move the red dot to x:244 y:72 might look better (also, you make me jelly of hearts ;c;)

00:54:629 (1) - Not blanketing 00:55:478 (2) - looks good to me

01:16:700 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Could be symmetrical it is though


That is all. Hope it helps and goes for rank o/ ill try my best!
Kazuya-Sama

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs (My english is bad. e_e Sorry.)

[Easy]
Change slider tick rate: 2 i think its fine
HP, OD: +1 ? i think that will throw the spread off

Timing point: 00:26:898 --> Change 00:27:747 fixed
Timing point: Unnecessary: 00:50:101 actually was meant for the end of the spinner, whoops!
Timing point: ^ 00:52:790 & 00:52:931 removed

[Normal]

Remove unnecessary timing point. e.g: Spinner 00:07:374 (1) - well ok then
Circle Size: -1 (3) nah
Overall Diff: +1 (4) itll raise the stars so no

00:15:297 (3,1) - Hmm. Slider style? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1437215 looks out of place
00:30:011 (1,2,3) - Hmm: 00:30:011 (1) - x: 404 y: 176 ? 00:30:860 (2) - x: 412 y: 88? 00:31:709 (3) - x: 212 y: 148 ? grid modssss
00:45:291 (3) - Add clap? sure
00:52:648 (1) - Remove unnecessary timing point. done
01:15:002 (1,3) - Slider style? e.g: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1437228 looks out of place
01:24:906 (2) - Better blanket: Slider center point: x: 184 y: 296 ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1437231 fixed

no changes on hard

Good luck! thanks!

thanks for the mods guys!
Erina
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Erina
i was doing discussion questions if I get a F on these i'm blaming you

star bc <3

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21:34 Lust: erina!!!!!!!
21:34 Erina: yoo
21:36 Lust: irc mod with me!
21:36 Erina: oh shoot right i need to mod your map
21:37 Lust: just irc mod it because
21:37 Lust: ill probably ask a BAT soon
21:37 Erina: its ebb and flow right
21:37 Lust: yeeep
21:37 Erina: i never got why this song is so popular
21:37 Erina: its a good song but why so popular
21:37 Lust: because its fun to map
21:38 Lust: naw
21:38 Lust: i actually just mapped it as a joke
21:38 Lust: just so theres another ebb and flow mapset to be ranked haha
21:41 Erina: i reall ylike these hitsounds lol
21:41 Erina: how do you guys find custom hitsounds
21:41 Lust: i just jack them from random mapsets
21:41 Lust: if i hear one i like i cop it and save it to my computer
21:41 Lust: LOL
21:41 Erina: lol haha
21:43 Erina: fk your maps i cant mod them
21:43 Erina: 00:52:648 (1) - looks asymmetrical but idk how the hell you'd fix that
21:43 Erina: also the dark blue combo color
21:43 Erina: on my screen is a bit too dark when background dim is 100%
21:44 Lust: oh well never take bg dim in to consideration unless the combo colors are #00000
21:46 Lust: and for the heart slider ill fix it eventually
21:46 Lust: people have pointed that out sometimes
21:46 Erina: 00:01:431 (4) - i dont see why this NC is necessary
21:47 Erina: 00:06:242 (1) - same here
21:47 Erina: wait actually
21:47 Erina: the second one i can understand
21:47 Lust: its really only symbolic to go along with the pattern
21:47 Erina: for the first one if i were to put a NC it'd be on 00:01:714 (5)
21:47 Erina: hmm ok
21:48 Erina: 00:27:181 (1) - same with this NC, all the other notes like it dont have NC
21:48 Erina: i never see NCs as part of a pattern lol
21:49 Lust: eh i guess its uncommon
21:51 Erina: ok normal
21:52 Erina: 00:01:714 (3) - idk about the snap divsor rules for normal, but i like it better if it was shortened to the blue tick
21:52 Lust: <3
21:52 Erina: and then maybe add a note on the red tick
21:52 Erina: lol this new font butchers the heart emote
21:52 Lust: i changed the font back to tahoma
21:52 Erina: i like the font for the most part tho
21:53 Lust: and thatll just add more note density
21:53 Lust: which im trying to avoid
21:53 Lust: :(
21:53 Erina: hmm then dont add the red tick note and just shorten to blue tick?
21:54 Lust: id like to avoid 3/4 sliders in lower difficulties just based on the principle that itll be hard to recognize for less experienced players
21:54 Lust: sure it sounds good rhythmically, but id rather them to enjoy the play rather than focus too much on the song, which in itself is kinda redundant though
21:54 Erina: ok
22:03 Erina: are you watching nagi no asukara
22:03 Erina: im assuming you are
22:03 Lust: yeah
22:03 Lust: not caught up though
22:03 Erina: manaka tho
22:03 Erina: o
22:03 Erina: i was about to spoil everything
22:04 Lust: chisaki my GIRL
22:04 Lust: LOL
22:04 Erina: ok i dont see anything wrong with easy
22:04 Lust: what happened to normal
22:04 Erina: idk man im kinda a miuna/sayu fan
22:04 Lust: ?!
22:04 Erina: wait didnt i just do normal
22:04 Lust: miuna is too kawaii
22:04 Erina: the NCs
22:04 Lust: you gave me like one suggestion
22:04 Erina: yeah thats all i found
22:04 Erina: fk ur maps
22:05 Lust: ;~;
22:05 Lust: well you can post the savelog in da thread
22:05 Lust: for kds
22:05 Lust: homeboy
22:05 Erina: lol ill prob look at it again tmrw
22:05 Erina: since i did only give like 1 suggestion
22:05 Erina: i need to do some discussion questions now
22:05 Lust: you go do those discussion questions
22:05 Lust: i have an essay to write
22:05 Erina: gl
22:06 Lust: thanks
22:06 Lust: only have another three pages to do anyways
22:24 Lust: not going to post the savelog?
22:24 Lust: lol
22:25 Erina: oh should i
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