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kino77
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年11月24日 at 19:13:21

Artist: Nam Goo-min
Title: Dawn
Source: TalesWeaver
Tags: Game
BPM: 72
Filesize: 3950kb
Play Time: 01:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Adventure (4.64 stars, 226 notes)
  2. Soft (2.94 stars, 145 notes)
Download: Nam Goo-min - Dawn
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My second map.
This piano music is a BGM of the online game TalesWeaver.
I havn't make a Hard diff coz I don't want a soft music be so carzy.
Hope you enjoy it.

+Edit:
11.2-Fixed new combo,hitsound,timing section,diffs' name.
11.3-Resnapped.
11.4-Fixed spacing issues.make triangle looks better.
11.6-Fixed hitsound,artist's name.
11.8-Fixed hitsound,volume.
11.9-Fixed new combo.
11.11-Fixed end.
11.12-Fixed hitsound,notes.
11.14-Fixed end.
11.22-Change diff's name,resnap.
11.24-Fixed a little.
blissfulyoshi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
alvisto
Your offset is too early. Use blissfulyoshi's timing suggestion, it's quite accurate for me.

HARD
00:39:36 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Actually you could try jumps here to make 00:41:03 (1) easier to see when playing ? Like this.

01:00:19 (3) - whistle at the start of slider ?

NORMAL
Perfect and beautiful.

General :

1.3 seconds audio lead in is too long I think. Make it 2 seconds ?

Star !
Topic Starter
kino77

blissfulyoshi wrote:

BPM: 72 (I think it is flat with the new offset)
offset: 1033 fixed~

You have 3 .osb files, please remove the 2 unneeded ones Thanks~Removed~
Add a preview point to both diffs. Uh...sorry but what is preview point? :o

Normal:

Combo mod:
00:04:95 (5) - new combo since you usually would put a new combo on something that sounds similar ot the end of 4
00:24:33 (6) - new combo to be consistent with 00:17:67 (1)
00:54:34 (6) - new combo for consistency with previous combos
01:04:76 (7) - new combo? Do you mean 6?
Fixed
Timing section mod:
If you can have a timing section that is directly on a note, please move it back a quarter note if possible.
Sorry my english is so poor that couldn't understand what it means...who can explain it to me? >:(
Hard:
Combo mod:
00:29:34 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:36:00 (1)
01:26:43 (9) - new combo?
Fixed
Timing section mod:
same as normal.

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Nice and relaxing map. Star.
Thanks a lot~❤~

alvisto wrote:

Your offset is too early. Use blissfulyoshi's timing suggestion, it's quite accurate for me.

HARD
00:39:36 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Actually you could try jumps here to make 00:41:03 (1) easier to see when playing ? Like this. Fixed~
01:00:19 (3) - whistle at the start of slider ? I change the hitsound around there~

NORMAL
Perfect and beautiful.

General :

1.3 seconds audio lead in is too long I think. Make it 2 seconds ? Fixed

Star !
Thanks alvisto~❤~
DJPop
Suggest to silence all spinner-spin and spinner-bonus.

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
01:15:82 (6,1) - too far
01:22:70 (5,1) - ^


+Star
gdeath
Overall:tags:吧game改成video game?

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
fine

no problems found.
dont give kds on this post.
blissfulyoshi
Don't give kds for this post

Preview point: the point where the music starts playing when you click on the map.
How to set the preview point: In the editor go to to the point where you want your preview point to be and then click "timing" on the top bar, the same bar where file is, and then click the bottom option "Set Current Position as Preview." Now, that point will be your preview point.

Also, you forgot to resnap the notes after changing the timing, so please resnap all notes.
alvisto

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Timing section mod:
If you can have a timing section that is directly on a note, please move it back a quarter note if possible.
意思就是说,假如在上面的timeline那边,你有timing section是刚刚好落在一个note的话,就把它移前一点。因为有时你玩时太早按到note的话,之前timing section的hitsound会出现。

例子:

把那个timing section移到前一个蓝线去 :


Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

-timing looks good (wow. a timable piano piece :))
-maybe make an easy? shouldn't be hard with a short song like this
-if you can, shorten the mp3 to get rid of the unmapped space at the end?

[NORMAL]

all good

[HARD]

01:22:70 (5,1) - this jump feels odd to me. maybe remove it?

nice, relaxing map. good job :). could use an easy difficulty though

star'd
Lissette
Hi!

Normal
00:43:032 (1) - too near from the end point of the prev spinner, I suggest this: 00:43:032 (1,2) - remove, end spinner at 00:43:053, and silence the spinner, its up to you
01:32:069 (1) - too near from the end point of the prev spinner

Hard
Suggestions
00:22:007 (3) - remove?
00:25:040 (3) - move to the next red tick, and remove one repeat

Nice music and map
Star!
Topic Starter
kino77

DJPop wrote:

Suggest to silence all spinner-spin and spinner-bonus.
~Normal~
Fine.
~Hard~
01:15:82 (6,1) - too far
01:22:70 (5,1) - ^
Fixed~Thanks~❤~

gdeath wrote:

Overall:tags:吧game改成video game?
我不太确定,Talesweaver应该算online game?
Thank you all the same~❤~

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Preview point: the point where the music starts playing when you click on the map.
How to set the preview point: In the editor go to to the point where you want your preview point to be and then click "timing" on the top bar, the same bar where file is, and then click the bottom option "Set Current Position as Preview." Now, that point will be your preview point.
Also, you forgot to resnap the notes after changing the timing, so please resnap all notes.
Thanks again blissfulyoshi~Fixed~❤~

alvisto wrote:

意思就是说,假如在上面的timeline那边,你有timing section是刚刚好落在一个note的话,就把它移前一点。因为有时你玩时太早按到note的话,之前timing section的hitsound会出现。
Thanks alvisto~又学到了呢~ :D ~❤~

Doomsday93 wrote:

-timing looks good (wow. a timable piano piece :))
-maybe make an easy? shouldn't be hard with a short song like this I change the name of diffs',how about that?
-if you can, shorten the mp3 to get rid of the unmapped space at the end? I guess I need help again for I know nothing about deal with mp3... >:(
[NORMAL]
all good
[HARD]
01:22:70 (5,1) - this jump feels odd to me. maybe remove it? I had shorten the spacing~
nice, relaxing map. good job :). could use an easy difficulty though
star'd
Thanks for modding~❤~

Lissette wrote:

Hi!
Normal
00:43:032 (1) - too near from the end point of the prev spinner, I suggest this: 00:43:032 (1,2) - remove, end spinner at 00:43:053, and silence the spinner, its up to you
01:32:069 (1) - too near from the end point of the prev spinner
I made the spinner end earlier~
Hard
Suggestions
00:22:007 (3) - remove?
00:25:040 (3) - move to the next red tick, and remove one repeat
I like the note sound like that~so no~
Nice music and map
Star!
Thank you~Lissette~❤~
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

Resnap all notes on all difficulties.

[Soft]

Some objects aren't snapped correctly.

Use AIMod for some help, too much objects unsnapped.

[Relax]

Here too, some objects unsnapped.

00:02:028 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:04:099 (2,3) - ^
GbL
I suggest only use more spacing in Soft, the rest looks good.

Star.
Topic Starter
kino77

osuplayer111 wrote:

Starts Suggestions:
Resnap all notes on all difficulties.

[Soft]
Some objects aren't snapped correctly.
Use AIMod for some help, too much objects unsnapped.

[Relax]
Here too, some objects unsnapped.
00:02:028 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:04:099 (2,3) - ^
Fixed~Thanks~❤~

GbL wrote:

I suggest only use more spacing in Soft, the rest looks good.
Star.
I try use more spacing in Soft,but for Relax,I like the spacing it is~
Thanks~❤~
Breeze
废话不多说,直接mod:

[Soft]

  1. 00:22:282 (3,4) - 从整体来说,重叠会比较好看
[Relax]

  1. 建议:note大一点看起来更好
  2. 00:51:032 (1,2,3,4) - 1开始的地方有被前面还没消失的note挡住,不是那么好看
  3. 01:29:782 (1,2,3) - 开头都加whistle
  4. 01:41:449 - 这个break完全没必要,删掉吧
不错
star~ 8-)
Thats_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Kytoxid
Generally, there was a bit too much lead-in time, in my opinion.

[Soft]

00:11:003 (1,2,3) - Try to keep spacing within a combo to be exact, especially the difference between touching and not touching. Here, 1-2 is closer than 2-3.

If I was to be picky, you should keep the spacing consistent within the whole song (either 1/4 stacked, or 1/4 not stacked), but if you don't change around too much, it's not THAT noticeable, although perhaps more so with Easy mod.

00:30:019 (5) - Not snapped.
01:23:094 (2) - Move a bit to line up with 3?
01:29:078 (1,2,3) - Nicer triangle?

[Relax]

00:14:099 (2,3) - Angle looks a bit weird, shift 3 up a bit?
00:22:028 (4) - Right 1 grid?
00:55:040 (6,7) - There was a few shifts in 1/4 spacing up until now, but it was constant within their phrases, this was the first one I noticed while playing.
00:56:044 (1,2,3) - I like nicer triangles. You don't have to, of course.
01:03:011 (1) - Left a grid.
01:17:069 (1,2,3) - More nicer triangles? This one actually looked a little bad.

Very soothing song, and nice maps in general, starred. :)
Topic Starter
kino77

Breeze wrote:

废话不多说,直接mod:

[Soft]
  1. 00:22:282 (3,4) - 从整体来说,重叠会比较好看
[Relax]
  1. 建议:note大一点看起来更好
  2. 00:51:032 (1,2,3,4) - 1开始的地方有被前面还没消失的note挡住,不是那么好看
  3. 01:29:782 (1,2,3) - 开头都加whistle
  4. 01:41:449 - 这个break完全没必要,删掉吧
不错
star~ 8-)
改好了~除了把note改大这个考虑到各方面因素还是放弃了>_<
灰常感谢~❤~

Kytoxid wrote:

Generally, there was a bit too much lead-in time, in my opinion.

[Soft]
00:11:003 (1,2,3) - Try to keep spacing within a combo to be exact, especially the difference between touching and not touching. Here, 1-2 is closer than 2-3.
If I was to be picky, you should keep the spacing consistent within the whole song (either 1/4 stacked, or 1/4 not stacked), but if you don't change around too much, it's not THAT noticeable, although perhaps more so with Easy mod.
00:30:019 (5) - Not snapped.
01:23:094 (2) - Move a bit to line up with 3?
01:29:078 (1,2,3) - Nicer triangle?

[Relax]
00:14:099 (2,3) - Angle looks a bit weird, shift 3 up a bit?
00:22:028 (4) - Right 1 grid?
00:55:040 (6,7) - There was a few shifts in 1/4 spacing up until now, but it was constant within their phrases, this was the first one I noticed while playing.
00:56:044 (1,2,3) - I like nicer triangles. You don't have to, of course.
01:03:011 (1) - Left a grid.
01:17:069 (1,2,3) - More nicer triangles? This one actually looked a little bad.

Very soothing song, and nice maps in general, starred. :)
All fixed~Thanks so much for spacing and triangle~❤~
Sure
[General]
Artist name is a little bit weird.
OK... 'Nam Goo-min' is right in Korea. 'Nam' is family name. And 'Goo-min' is first name.
'Nam,Goo-min' seems likes Nam and Goo-min. change the artist name to 'Nam Goo-min'.


[Soft]
00:27:069 (1) - move to left by 1 grid?


[Relax]
01:12:049 (7) - How about make it likes this? I think more fit at song.
01:15:082 (6) - ^ same suggestion

01:37:069 (1,2) - I suggest this makes to a slider. Also, audio volume 10 at end of slider may works better in my opinion.
01:39:036 (1,2) - ^
01:41:003 (1,2) - ^
01:43:053 (1,2) - ^
01:43:094 (1,2) - ^
01:44:036 (1,2) - ^


Nice instrument. Star :)
Armin
[Soft]

Nice, the maps with the hitsounds are great :D

[Relax]

00:14:366 (1,2) Whistles at the start
00:18:324 Whistle at the start
00:37:699 (1,3) Whistles at the start
00:43:324 Whistle on the second repeat

Omg, I don't see problems! O_O
Starred :D
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