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Cutline - Die For You (Shock One Remix)

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Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 апреля 2014 г. at 1:59:45

Artist: Cutline
Title: Die For You (Shock One Remix)
Tags: dnb drum and bass Xinely Mystyk
BPM: 175
Filesize: 6909kb
Play Time: 02:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4,84 stars, 382 notes)
  2. Mystyk's Hard (4,93 stars, 298 notes)
  3. Normal (3,2 stars, 168 notes)
  4. Xinely's Hard (4,77 stars, 288 notes)
Download: Cutline - Die For You (Shock One Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Insane by Me - 100%
Xinely's Hard by Xinely - 100%
Mystyk's Hard by Mystyk - 100%
Normal by Me - 100%
SB by DJNightmare - 100%
Last edited by Poggo , edited 18 times in total.
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
Hi~

M4M request~
My map: Rurutia - Shinai

[General]
Nice song

01:06:183 - This could be a good KIAI, consider about that

[Normal]
AR4 is strongly suggested for the SV and DS
00:22:987 - Slider ticks looks annoying, try to lower the volume of them in this part
00:26:416 (4) - X:124 Y:73 (better blanket)
00:26:416 (4) - For me I will prefer Ctrl+G even it's a pattern from 00:25:387 (1,2,3) -
00:30:872 (1) - Remove whistle
00:31:215 (2) - Whistle (vocal and piano)
00:31:558 (3) - Remove whistle
00:31:901 - Whistle here
00:35:329 (2) - Remove whistle
00:36:015 (1) - Maybe arrange it to middle? Consider changing the shape and coordinates for 00:33:958 (1) -
00:39:957 (2) - Prefer 1 reverse and then a hit for 00:41:500 -
00:56:584 - Slider ticks >_<
00:56:584 (4) - Not sure why u put a long slider here, for me I would prefer some shorter sliders
^ Drum in the music isn't full 1/1, same with the other cover (keyboard or wadever)
01:02:069 - Prefer to let spin starts here
01:09:611 (2) - X:393 Y:320 (better blanket)
01:30:865 (1,2,3,4) - May lead to confusion like (refer pic):
Image
^ Can try making them more separated also prevent 01:31:894 (4) - being too close to 01:30:180 (4) -
01:58:291 (1,2,3,4,5) - Some whistles could be presented here, looks cool
02:09:261 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[Xinely's Hard]
00:37:386 - Looks extra, vocal is dragging
01:06:183 (1) - Space further from 01:06:525 (2) - so it doesn't look stuffed, ignoring DS
01:12:867 - Note
01:14:239 - ^
01:23:838 - ^ (prefer cuz cover still goes on)
01:26:752 - Note so it's same as 01:25:380 (1) -
01:33:608 (1) - Ctrl+G
01:34:122 (2) - ^ (pattern)
02:33:944 - Hit for finish / spinner fits here

[Insane]
00:55:898 (3) - Clap here instead of 00:56:069 (4) -
02:33:944 (4) - NC? (last hit)

Hmm...looks cool, can't find much on Insane
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thank you for mod :3 fixed some ;)
[ Zzz ]
1,296 posts
Joined June 2011
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ Katty Pie
Mod Request!!

[ General ]

320kbps = unrankble
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/7JTai.mp3 = 192kbps ^^

Name of Xinely is not in the tags ( All difficulty )

[ Normal ]

HP AR OD + 1

No problem.

[ Xinely's Hard ]

HP OD + 1

01:01:383 (3) -
Good shape

01:25:895 (1) - Add NC

01:46:978 (4) - x160 y120

01:47:149 (5) - NC

01:48:006 (6) - Add NC

[ Insane ]

01:34:636 (3) - Ctrl + G

No problem.
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thank you for mod. Fixed Insane and General :3
iyasine
1,135 posts
Joined January 2012
iyasine
hi~ katty , Thanks for mod request!!

General
■ BPM175.00 , offset +10
■ add soft-sliderslide(Silent)

[Normal]
■ 00:16:817 (1) - add finish ?
■ 00:22:987 (1) - x:429 y:97 ?
■ 00:25:730 (2) - add whistle ? vocal & synthesizer frow
■ 01:00:697 (1) - remove finish & 01:03:440 - Audio volume 25%

[Xinely's Hard]
■ 00:16:817 (1) - whistle → finish
■ 01:18:524 (1) - x:23 y:86 ?
■ 01:48:006 - N:C1 → S:C1 ?
■ 02:33:944 - add note ?

[Insane]
■ 00:55:898 (3) - sampleset Normal → Auto ?
■ 02:05:147 (1) - ctrl + G ?

nice mapset!! good luck :D
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

Rakuen wrote:

Hi~

[Xinely's Hard]
00:37:386 - Looks extra, vocal is dragging following drum too here
01:06:183 (1) - Space further from 01:06:525 (2) - so it doesn't look stuffed, ignoring DS dunno what placement that fit for this pattern if i ignore the ds
01:12:867 - Note nope since my hard supposed as an Easy Hard, let give a little break
01:14:239 - ^ ^
01:23:838 - ^ (prefer cuz cover still goes on) moved the circle to red tick instead
01:26:752 - Note so it's same as 01:25:380 (1) - removed the circle on 01:25:380 instead
01:33:608 (1) - Ctrl+G nope, the flow
01:34:122 (2) - ^ (pattern) ^
02:33:944 - Hit for finish / spinner fits here sure

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ Katty Pie

[ Xinely's Hard ]

HP OD + 1 HP+1 instead. wth how can i use HP4 for Hard lol

01:01:383 (3) -
Good shape
sorry it's my style

01:25:895 (1) - Add NC used on other object because did little tweak

01:46:978 (4) - x160 y120 no

01:47:149 (5) - NC already NC'ed o.o

01:48:006 (6) - Add NC no

iyasine wrote:

hi~ katty , Thanks for mod request!!

[Xinely's Hard]
■ 00:16:817 (1) - whistle → finish my bad, fixed
■ 01:18:524 (1) - x:23 y:86 ? sure
■ 01:48:006 - N:C1 → S:C1 ? not a big deal, also no any custom hitsound on soft so it looks so random for me
■ 02:33:944 - add note ? yes

nice mapset!! good luck :D
thanks 4 mod all ~
update
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Cutline - Die For You (Shock One Remix).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22302,44242,55212,66183,77153,88123,99093,142974
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Die For You (Shock One Remix)
TitleUnicode:Die For You (Shock One Remix)
Artist:Cutline
ArtistUnicode:Cutline
Creator:Katty Pie
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:
Tags:dnb drum and bass Xinely
BeatmapID:389110
BeatmapSetID:155285

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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284,352,97893,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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323,78,98750,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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464,304,103207,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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364,216,104235,5,8,0:0:0:0:
196,316,104578,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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244,244,106635,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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216,76,109035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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148,116,110406,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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156,156,112120,2,0,P|226:126|300:146,1,155.999995239258,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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412,208,134232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,348,134575,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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332,340,135775,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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184,156,139374,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,32,139717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,224,140060,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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340,324,141431,6,0,P|268:351|195:329,2,155.999995239258,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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244,32,149144,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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244,44,150687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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460,120,152230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thanks for mod iyasine :3 fixed almost all~
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk
Here's my finished hard (it's hitsounded):
http://puu.sh/7LBdQ.osu

Edit:
Irreversible told me some suggestions in-game, so I changed some stuff, please update my diff :3 thanks xD
http://puu.sh/7MYME.osu
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo
Updated :3
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe
Hi Katty~

I just loved the song so here's my mod o3o

[Normal]
00:55:898 (2) - Put that note like thisfor follow the rhythm
02:11:318 (5) - I dunno why but this slider breaks the rhythm :c Change it ?
02:26:059 (2,4) - You should curv these slider for increase flow :D

[Xinely's Hard]
01:01:897 - You should add a circle here for follow the rhythm ( like this circle 01:01:212 (2) - )
01:02:069 (1,2,3,4) - Idea is good but try to make a better shape ( like an arc of a circle )
01:24:180 (2,3) - Are you sure to want to put in on red ticks ?( If yes , add a circle here 01:24:009 - or like this 01:35:493 (2,3) - )
01:48:006 (2) - New combo here :p

[Mystyk's Hard]
00:36:015 (1) - Sliderwave here ? It fits better imo !
01:47:321 (1) - Hide it behind the circle 3
02:15:946 (1) - This blanket is good but you can improve it a little bit better ( nazi mod :333)

[Insane]
AiMod -> Object not snapped !
00:27:273 (4) - You should put this note further (jump) like the 3 notes before ! It breaks the flow !


Actually , I haven't anything else to say !
It's one of the best map I've seen in this game ! Good joob to you guys ! :D
Good luck for rank =D
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thank you for mod :3 Some fixed
Kazuya
894 posts
Joined May 2013
Kazuya
Hello. Random mod.

It's only ideas!

[Normal]

AR: +1 or +2?
Overall or HP: +1 ?

00:30:015 (2) - Hmm. Curve?
SPOILER

00:33:958 (1) - Curve?
SPOILER

00:33:958 (1,2) - Distance!

00:39:957 (2) - replace 2 slider? It's better: timeline e.g.: http://puu.sh/7SZTM.jpg

01:17:496 (1,2,3) - Hmm. Position? e.g.: http://puu.sh/7SZXC.jpg
01:21:952 (5) - move: x: 180 y: 340, and slider center point (2nd white tick) x: 180 y: 292 ?
01:52:463 (5) - move: x: 256 y: 16 ?

[Xinely's Hard]

00:37:386 (4) - Curve?
00:59:155 (3) - SLider center (2nd white tick) point: x: 248 y: 200 ? (better blanket)
01:13:382 (2) - Slider 2nd (red) point: x: 120 y: 296 ?
01:16:638 (2) - SLider center (2nd) point: x: 92 y: 244 and last (3rd) point: x: 132 y: 168? (blanket)
01:31:551 (3) - Slider center point: x: 232 y: 168 and end point (3rd tick) x: 268 y: 96 ?
01:37:036 (3) - move x: 88 y: 116 ?
01:37:550 (4) - move: x: 156 y: 180?
01:54:691 (2) - blanket? Slider center point: x: 136 y: 248 ? and end point: x: 104 y: 168?

[Insane]
No comment. Good. o_o

[Mystyk's Hard]

Üdvez. :3 Mikor ehhez a diffhez jutottam, akkor kapcsoltam, hogy hoppá! Úgy sem fogadod meg, de azért... na. :'D

Overallt 5-re. ?

01:38:750 (5) - Esetleg a rá következő slider kezdőpontjára? x: 208 y: 244
01:41:836 (1,2) - Ezt a kettőt máshová raknám, ez így olyan köcsög, troll ahol most vannak. x'D Valahogy úgy kéne eligazítani 01:40:464 (4,5,6,1,2) - ezen részeket, hogy a 01:41:493 (6) - és a 01:42:178 (3) - slider között legyen eme két kör. :O
02:07:204 (2) - A slider középpontja x: 372 y: 48 és a végpontja: x: 419 y: 33? Hülye labdától nem nagyon látom, de szebbnek tűnik a takarás. C :
02:08:918 (4,5) - Oké, átbaszós... legalábbis én ctrl-g-zném aztán a 02:08:918 (4) - -es kört kb idepakolnám: x: 40 y: 100
02:21:431 (1) - Cukibb takarás: Slider középpont: x: 96 y: 168 végpont: x: 28 y: 200

Azért furcsa, hogy az editor diffrátája szerint az insane gyengébb mint a hardod. x'D

Sok cserencsét / Good luck!

Go-go Pie-chan. :3
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo
Thank you for mod :3 fixed some on Normal ;)
Damnae
Elite Storyboarder
640 posts
Joined July 2011
Damnae


kd pls
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Poggo

Damnae wrote:



kd pls
no
guineaQ
1,588 posts
Joined December 2013
guineaQ
Normal
-I don't think slider tick rate of 2 is neccessary.
-Other than that no immediately noticeable mistakes were found.

Xinely's hard
-Change the hit sound set to soft or change only the whistle sound to soft one, normal one doesn't seem to fit for me
-01:48:006 (2,3,4) - Decrease the volume here a bit more

Insane
-I'm crying due to epic jumpiness of this map. gj.

Mystyk's Hard
-Again, slider tick rate of 2, don't think its necessary but up to you.

General Suggestion
00:16:817 (1) - For the first spinner, try adding some timing nodes every 2 beat or so to make the sound increase little by little like
Image explanation
Something like this, add nodes every 2 beats starting small like 5% volume up to whatever you like in the end.

No major/minor flaws were detected, gj. :D

From the random guy who was deciding whether to sleep or not but then you came along and poked :3
-Neipezi
2,246 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
hi owo/

[General]
- BPM 175.020 is not. BPM 175.00 is correct.
- offset 382(+20) is correct.
- please check widescreen. "Mystyk's Hard" except, check is disabled.

[Normal]
- slider tick rate -1?

[Xinely's Hard]
01:06:525 (2) - ctrl + g?

[Mystyk's Hard]
._.

[Insane]
- OD -1? too high..?
01:09:268 (2) - ctrl + g? this jump
01:53:320 (2,3) - stack
01:53:663 (4,5) - ^
01:54:006 (6,1) - ^
02:21:260 (6,7,1) - intervals are too close
02:21:945 (2,3,4) - ^
02:25:888 (1,2) - stack?
02:26:231 (3,4) - ^
02:26:573 (5,6,7,1) - ^

dubstep!
Birdy
5,720 posts
Joined April 2011
Birdy
My first mod in a stupendously long time. Hopefully it's not too bad.

[Normal]
00:42:871 (3) - Very minor flaw, but the start point should be at x:80 (one small square left)
I also disagree with people wanting to decrease the tick rate - I find tick rate 2 more suitable for this.

[Xinely's Hard]
00:22:987 (1,3) - I don't know what you were heading for with these shapes, but I don't personally like them. You should probably use a more visible nudge or just a clear curve.
00:37:386 (4) - Same as above, though a nudge wouldn't work in here - just use a clear curve for blanketing the circle beautifully.
01:00:697 (1,3) - Meh. I suggest not to overlap in this manner. Move the slider a little bit somewhere else, or the (2), and put the (3) to start from (2)'s position.
01:02:069 (1,2,3,4) - I'd say it goes better like this. (delete the first of the rolls and start a 1/1 slider 1/2 earlier)

01:37:036 (3,4,1,2) - The "Z"-shaped flow here is uncomfortable - not sure if it's just me not being pro or if it really is annoying.
01:47:149 (1,2) - Swap NC.
01:53:491 (2,1) - Slight, easily avoidable overlapping. Sure, there's a lot of similar overlapping, but this one caught my eye and it doesn't look comfortable.

[Mystyk's Hard]
01:55:891 (5) - I don't see your point in placing the NC on this rather than on the next one.

[Insane]
01:53:320 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - These should just flow normally instead of stacking them.
02:25:888 (5,6,7,1) - You should probably separate this to two stacks or one stack of three (or one stack of two and one separate circle) and the slider starting separately. I don't know if I just prefer odd things myself, but it seems like such a flowbreaker.

Good mapset and SB, as expected~
phaZ
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phaZ
[general]

correct bpm is 175 and not 175,02. i checked it by fixing the offset
offset is freaking early! the explosion-sound right at the beginning is not exactly on the beat. compare it with those tick-sounds right at the start or with the drumbeats on 1. and 3. white ticks (01:06:183). it should be at 376 !
please apply wide scren to all maps pls it just looks weird in breaktime http://puu.sh/7TcPU.jpg(Mystyk did it already)
I myself find that the BG does not fit that much to the music somehow :o though you already have SB so just ignore it if you want
im so bad at finding bg's >.>
http://oracleandtarotgoddess.files.wordpress.com/2012/03/flow-light-free_wallpapers.jpg
or BGs like at wallbase (tags flow light)
^would fit more IMO
i modded the normal with the old offset/bpm
[normal]
00:35:329 (2,3,1) - would definitively look better if this slider is centered. also it would look cooler if (2,3) would be parallel to that part of the slider http://puu.sh/7Tkaa.jpg (the part where i have put on the circles) so it looks like this in the end http://puu.sh/7Tkr5.jpg
01:30:865 (1,2,3,4) - nazisutff ;w; please hit ctrl+d to create perfect polygons
..nothing much to say, difficulty is fine :3
[Xinleys hard]
01:00:718 (5,1,2,3) - distance spacing is too broken here imo. i can see that (1) starts on the same "x" as the orange (4) but i think that is not worth that high ds-break. also it would propably look better if (3) starts on the slidertick of one (or slightly off from it so its better readable).nah in they way i changed it it looked fine imo afterwards.
01:07:576 (1,2,3,4) - why? just why you have used such sliders here? thats out of rhythm (and since you land on the secondary finger it is propably a little bit hard to play for hard-players)
01:10:147 - missing a beat here :s
01:16:661 (2) - shouldnt be at 01:16:833 an object? want it here. same for 01:27:461 (2)
01:16:661 (2,1) - i think the broken ds here is a bit too much
01:21:960 (3,4) - why? i dont understand the usage :v gimme an explanation
01:35:690 (3,4) - ^
01:38:947 (4,1) - damn hard. if you remove the last one it would still follow the lyrics
01:42:547 (2,3) - .
01:48:033 - i think this part is too noisy
02:00:013 (2,3) - NOW it would fit :D
02:09:976 (3,4) - no not here
[Mystyk's hard]
i recommend to raise the volume to 50% or copying it from Xynley's diff
00:25:061 - remove all those useless section. you dont use it
01:11:325 (4,1) or 01:22:295 (8,1) - just mentioning. the 3/4-slider fits here but its a little bit hard or rather confusing to play because hard-plaers end up landing on the secondary finger, which they are totally unused
01:25:404 (1,2,3,4) - ^ here i recommend to change (3) to a 1/2-slider
01:54:177 (1,2,3) - what? why you wuold use those 3/4-sliders here?
01:57:262 (1,2,3) - i would actually recommend to make (2) to a 3/4-slider and (3) to a 1/2-slider
02:09:261 (1,2,3,4) - why?
from those rhythm exceptions both hard diffs seem to be fine to me
[Insane]
nice ds-usage like it, but a bit often too "boring" rhythm
01:26:775 (1) - rhythm killer
01:50:090 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm could be like (following the lyrics) (actually it works out pretty good if you just swap positions of 01:51:118 (2) and 01:51:461 (3). flow is good as well. put NC at the lyrics' start, and fix hitsounds if you apply
01:54:204 (1,2,3) - rhythm killer. the second slider "should" be following after the first slider
02:03:776 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - rhythm killing. lyrics follow different rhythm

thats all
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