1. Houtarou (2.5 stars, 256 notes)
2. Mio (4.27 stars, 371 notes)

tennyecho wrote:

Hard
I don't think countdown is needed done
Sliderticks become 2, coz 4 is too noisy nope, the song is extremely slow, there should be some fast and varying things
00:03:070 isn't the volume too loud here I suggest reduced it to around 60 - 70 % done
00:10:664 (2) - add whistle here nope, previous whistle pattern just repeats twice. If change the pattern of the second half of this part, that is weird.
00:12:183 (1) - I don't think long back to back slider is fun because too many repeat how about reduce it? and add note at 00:14:462 - nope, there is no note at 00:14:462 - in the music. also fitting the music is more important than being full of fun I think. What's more, sliders after the first kiai time are placed in the pattern of your suggestion, so everything keeps the same is not cool
00:13:702 - add whistle nope, ^
00:33:449 (1) - too much repeat in the slider nope, ^
00:45:601 (1) - ^ nope, ^
00:54:715 (1) - add finish at the head done
00:54:715 (1) - add whistle at the end nope, music of this part becomes quiet gradually so whistle patterns should also changed gradually
00:56:994 (6) - add whistle here nope, ^
01:46:361 (1) - long back to back slider, too many repeat done
01:53:956 (1) - NC here nope, combo is related to bars not numbers of notes.
01:55:285 (5) - I think the slider should end at white tick 01:55:475 nope, that is a long note here in the vocal
02:03:070 (8) - long back to back slider, too many repeat nope, ^
02:04:588 (1) - add whistle here nope, the whistle i chose is a pretty loud one. should not be used at this part
02:06:107 (4) - ^ at the head nope, the whistle i chose is a pretty loud one. should not be used at this part
02:06:867 (6) - ^ at the tail nope, the whistle i chose is a pretty loud one. should not be used at this part
02:21:297 (5) - too many repeat nope, ^
02:57:373 (3) - I think you can change the rhythm here better by making 3 normal sliders nope, the silder starts at a upbeat. such a return slider can both fit the vocal and the down beat. If changed to 3 sliders, all of them start at upbeats and end at downbeat which is a disaster
03:43:323 (1,1) - they sounds so wrong. Long sliders are better nope, not at the highest point of the song.
Umm... IMO, the hitnormal sound in kiai time sounds tooo noisy. I am suggesting to change it with a little bit normal sound not too noisy not too soft, coz the it ruins the feeling. definitely i will if i can find a better hitsound. but it's hard to find one that is both clear and fitting to the music because the music itself during kiaitime is pretty loud.
I can't point much except the hitsound.I think the position is fine, the problem only with long slider with too much repeat.
And so, my mod ends. Sorry for my poor mods. Thank you for coming to my queue Thank you!

Irie Miyuki wrote:

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zinsser wrote:

2391645784 wrote:

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_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

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