1. Easy (1,53 stars, 120 notes)
2. Hard (2,94 stars, 229 notes)
3. Insane (3,73 stars, 279 notes)
4. Luxo's Normal (1,64 stars, 135 notes)

No Dap wrote:

Hi ~~ m4m request from my Q~

yay fresh map

I swear, I've watched this cartoon, and I don't recognize this guy in the bg... It's chip skylark xD.. But yeah, its not the best BG

[General]
you need normal~ Is on the way~
Also, I suggest having more spinners on easier diff Done~
Easy0
Hard1
Insane2

I think there may be a bpm or offset problem, I usually get -13~+13 ms with no mod. Maybe I just can't read AR8 For that, I gotta get someone else because I suck at timing.
Besides, it's od6 and my accuracy....

Test Play. First try

[Easy]
To be honest, it feels a bit too hard for easy.. Maybe not
00:15:923 (5,1) - break time? Naw, The DR is so low that you barely loose any HP so I think its okay that way.
01:19:397 (1,2,1,2) - I think it would look better if you blanket like this 01:53:502 (1,2) I'll think about it, but I dont want to use
the same pattern over and over again.

[Hard]
OD+1 maybe? Yup!
00:10:239 (2,3) - make these parallel, 3 slider looks ugly Found another solution~
00:23:502 (1,2) - blanket properly fixed~
00:35:344 (4,5,1) - inconsistent spacing ruins blanket fixed
01:06:923 (3,4) - blanket properly fixed!
00:40:397 (5,1) - inconsistent NC 01:35:976 (6,7) 01:44:976 (3,1) 01:46:081 (3,4) fixed~
01:50:818 (8) - that wow vocal seems to be in 1/6 snap (I'm pretty sure) you did it correctly on the insane 00:45:397 (1) fixed~
01:56:028 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make them the same shape! Alright

[Insane]
Od+1 Yes!
00:13:713 (2,3) - stack the end properly fixed
00:16:555 (1,2,3,4) - mm maybe this?

SPOILER

Nah, the current pattern works perfectly. Maybe its my personal taste but I just cant stand back and forth jumps
00:22:397 (5) - NC see next point
00:23:502 (1) - delete NCI set NC here to outline the vocals with it so no change here
01:22:555 (1,2,3) - little bit closer to the center?done~

Neiji Razuiya wrote:

hi from modrequest
i hear you want m4m right? mod this https://osu.ppy.sh/s/149547 Done~
ok let's do it~
i'll do my best


[insane]
umm you think AR9 is good or not? o.o Well.. Eventho this has a high BPM the song dosnt sound that fast. So I
think that AR 8 fits good.
00:22:397 (5) - NC done
00:51:607 (5) - NC Naw, no need for this.

[hard]
nice~

[easy]
nice~

sorry if my mod so simple
its ok i giving you star

btw i really really like this song because i always watch fairyoddparents

[Twinkle] wrote:

M4M from my queue

[Easy]
you should start your first note at 00:03:292 Ah yes, thanks for reminding me~
00:21:923 (2,3) - overlap like this should be avoid in easy diff. Hard diff is OK fixed
00:38:976 (2,3) - ^ The sliderpath is visible and clear, so this shouldn'T be an issue
00:56:976 (3,4) - ^ fixed
01:10:555 (2,3) - ^ The sliderpath is visible and clear
01:49:397 (1,2,3) - make it like this? Fixed

SPOILER

[Hard]
ar-1 might be better AR 7 is appropriate for this song. 6 would be too slow and confusing to read.
00:09:923 (1,2,3) - this is really not so beautiful I think it looks nice.. o.ô But I'll see what I can do
01:02:660 (1) - so nice slider! I like it Oh thank you ~
01:50:818 (5,6) - I think these sliders not fit the rhythm very well You are right. I'll replace it with a spinner like I
did on insane

[Insane]
00:45:370 (1) - this is not snapped well not even on the line It's a 1/3 beat to fit the WOW sound.
00:45:370 (1) - also here, you can add a slider speed up to fit the rhythm I don't like random speed ups so this
will stay like that
01:17:028 (1) - ^ ^

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿

[General]
*BG should have the dimensions 1366x768 or 1024x768 Ah yeah, I wanted to fix this earlier but I forgot xD Thanks ~ Changed to 800x600
[Easy]
00:47:818 (1,2) - They're literally the same rhythm you use in your normal diff. I suggest trying to find a simpler rhythm, so that this rhythm isn't too repetitive in your diffs. I have this rythm in every diff, not because I am lazy but becasue I want the consistency on certain parts.

00:53:186 (2) - Move more lower, so it doesn't appear like it's overlapped by 00:51:292 (2) - fixed
00:54:134 (3) - Remove the reverse, it shouldn't be dragging on too long. A suggestino you can do for this part is to add a 1/1 slider with a reverse on 00:55:397 like this: I did not quite understand the picture but i changed the reverse so it dosnt sound so awkward

01:19:081 - Same suggestion as 00:47:818 (1,2) - I think adding a note would make it harder for no reason, also
I want to keep consistency
01:21:607- Add a note here if you agree to the suggestion above.
01:41:818 - Spinner should start here instead. New players may react to early to the spinner, and let go of 01:41:186 (4) - to early. fixed~
01:53:186 - Same suggestion as 00:47:818 (1,2) -
01:55:713 - Add a note if you agree to the suggestion above.
01:58:239 - Same suggestion as 00:47:818 (1,2) -

[Hard]
00:42:765 (1) - Move it away from 00:41:186 (3) - , so they're not touching each other. fixed~

[Insane]
00:13:397 (1) - move to 00:13:239, so it will hit the 'self' lyrics. Add a note at 00:13:555 so it hits the 'and' Done~
01:04:476 - You can add a note here, to create a triple.

*Try creating small 3-note stacks in parts of this diff, to add more of a challenge. Otherwise, it's pretty much like Hard mode, but with faster SV.The problem is that there isn't really a place to fit
triplets. I understand what you mean and I'd like to add them too but I hate it when there are extra circles if there is no rhythm that says so.

Wow, this map looked better then expected Nice job!
Good luck.

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿

[Luxo's Normal]
00:47:502 (1) - Add finish. ok
01:14:976 (3) - ^ On the tail. ok
01:19:081 (1) - Add finish. ok
01:24:134 - Add a note here with a whistle? no
01:53:186 (1) - Add finish. ok

Wow, this map looked better then expected Nice job!
Good luck.

• 00:03:911 (2,3) - this jump is a bit big
  00:08:964 (4,5) - stack better disable grid snap
  00:08:648 (3,7) - stack
  00:11:490 (3,4) - overlap completely
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:12:753 (5,1) - stack?
  00:13:543 (2,4) - ugly overlap
  00:16:543 (5) - try to only have 1 reverse. any more gets confusing, i suggest you remove a reverse and stack a circle at the end
  00:20:648 (7,1) - overlap more or don't overlap
  00:21:911 (4,1) - stack?
  00:35:332 (2,1) - nngg this overlap
  01:15:595 (2,3) - improve blanket
  01:53:490 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - improve this hexagon. you can make a triangle, copy that then go under edit> rotate by
  01:17:016 (1) - remove finish at end
  01:19:385 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - may you can make the pattern less random
  example:
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:21:911 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^

• 00:06:923 (6,7) - stack
  00:50:344 (2,5) - ^
  00:12:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - improve this, turn off grid snap/distance snap if needed
  00:15:134 (7,8) - blanket? or better blanket?
  00:50:502 (3,4) - ^
  01:10:713 (3,4) - ^
  00:24:765 (7) - ctrl + g?
  00:30:449 (3,4,5,6) - make a better curve
  00:37:239 (6,1) - why not stack
  00:42:449 (1,3) - distance out a bit more
  00:42:765 (2,4) - ^
  01:59:818 (2) - make the bottom part parallel to 01:59:186 (3)?

• 00:35:344 (4) - blanket could use some work
  01:11:660 (4) - ctrl + g?
  bleh this difficulty is good ;w;

• 01:03:607 (3) - ctrl + j?
  01:09:923 (1) - x464 y304
  01:40:555 (2,3) - overlap a bit more
  01:53:186 (1) - x48
  01:55:713 (1) - move 1 grid to the right

• 00:06:449 (2) - avoid repeating more than once especially on easy
  00:22:555 (3,1) - don't overlap
  00:56:976 (3) - move up 1 grid

Kibbleru wrote:

NM from our queue


[ColdTooth's Extra]

• 00:06:923 (6,7) - stack Eeeh.. sure
  00:50:344 (2,5) - ^ ^
  00:12:134 (1,2,3,4,5) - improve this, turn off grid snap/distance snap if needed fixed
  00:15:134 (7,8) - blanket? or better blanket? Fixed
  00:50:502 (3,4) - ^ ^
  01:10:713 (3,4) - ^ think i fixed it.
  00:24:765 (7) - ctrl + g? |Good idea. Implemented
  00:30:449 (3,4,5,6) - make a better curve sure
  00:37:239 (6,1) - why not stack It's not necessary.
  00:42:449 (1,3) - distance out a bit moreIt's fine.
  00:42:765 (2,4) - ^ ^
  01:59:818 (2) - make the bottom part parallel to 01:59:186 (3)? Not a bad idea, implemented.

uhgg this mapset is too good. gunna star since my mod probably wasn't very helpful

Kibbleru wrote:

NM from our queue

[Insane]

• 00:03:911 (2,3) - this jump is a bit big Id love to reduce the jump by hitting ctrl+g but then the spacing to 00:04:385 (3,4) is
  very small and the previous jump would feel choppy with such a slow down.
  00:08:964 (4,5) - stack better disable grid snap It is perfectly stacked? oAo
  00:08:648 (3,7) - stack Done~
  00:11:490 (3,4) - overlap completely Parcial overlap looks great to me
  
  SPOILER

  
  00:12:753 (5,1) - stack? no, since I did this on purpose. It looks better imo.
  00:13:543 (2,4) - ugly overlap Yeah, I acctually changed the pattern up a bit since it plays weird.
  00:16:543 (5) - try to only have 1 reverse. any more gets confusing, i suggest you remove a reverse and stack a circle at the end Its a very quick reverse so you are likley to not relese it till the end because it reverses so fast.
  00:20:648 (7,1) - overlap more or don't overlap more overlapped now
  00:21:911 (4,1) - stack? Nah, Anti-Jump works perfectly fine here and looks good imo
  00:35:332 (2,1) - nngg this overlap fixed
  01:15:595 (2,3) - improve blanket I made it a bit prettier
  01:53:490 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - improve this hexagon. you can make a triangle, copy that then go under edit> rotate by fixed
  01:17:016 (1) - remove finish at end that shouldnt be there.. FIXED
  01:19:385 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - may you can make the pattern less random I think a little bit random is always good, but I will think ybout it~
  example:
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:21:911 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ ^

[Hard]

• 00:35:344 (4) - blanket could use some work In what way? Its perfectly aligned and fits the vocals as well
  01:11:660 (4) - ctrl + g? naw, would get the spacing messed up
  bleh this difficulty is good ;w; thanks qwq

[Easy]

• 00:06:449 (2) - avoid repeating more than once especially on easy That'S something I would say in my mod.. xD No, but I will keep it. That is because the repeat is very fast and a newb is unlikly to release the slider before its surely over. So I am sure that this isn't a big problem.
  00:22:555 (3,1) - don't overlap fixed
  00:56:976 (3) - move up 1 grid fixed~

uhgg this mapset is too good. gunna star since my mod probably wasn't very helpful

1. You'd better make slider put the 'end of dot' on the middle of 'end of slider' (Example : http://puu.sh/70GoW.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/70Gpy.jpg )
   This will help you making your map's quality higher

1. You'd better use Medium Grid Size when you make Easy Diff
2. 00:39:923 (3) - it's overlapped not good for easy diff
3. 01:11:502 (3) - ^

1. 00:39:292 (3) - Better make that slider's red point on the middle
2. 00:45:292 (3) - beat is little weird i think reverse slider is not good
3. 01:15:607 (1) - Do we need NC here?
4. 01:41:186 (3) - it's overlapped little better fix it not to overlap

1. 00:20:976 (1) - better make slider same as 2
2. 00:23:502 (1) - slider's shape is little weird
3. 01:36:765 (2) - make it same as 3 or make 4 same as 3

1. 00:16:543 (5) - http://puu.sh/70GXv.jpg I think this one is better
2. 00:44:016 (2) - move to x = 400 y = 60
3. 01:07:464 (1) - ?? http://puu.sh/70H3o.jpg change like this plz

Neta wrote:

Hi From my Modding Queue

My modding is all suggestion

[Before Modding]

1. You'd better make slider put the 'end of dot' on the middle of 'end of slider' (Example : http://puu.sh/70GoW.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/70Gpy.jpg )
   This will help you making your map's quality higher This dosn't improve the quality at all since it has absolutly
   no effect wheter visual nor in terms of playing.

[Easy]

1. You'd better use Medium Grid Size when you make Easy Diff Distance stays distance, if I map it on medium or tiny makes
   no diffrence with distance snap
2. 00:39:923 (3) - it's overlapped not good for easy diff sliderpath is still very clearly visible.
3. 01:11:502 (3) - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. 00:20:976 (1) - better make slider same as 2 okay
2. 00:23:502 (1) - slider's shape is little weird It's.. a regular curve?
3. 01:36:765 (2) - make it same as 3 or make 4 same as 3 No

[Insane]

1. 00:16:543 (5) - http://puu.sh/70GXv.jpg I think this one is better nope, this is perfect.
2. 00:44:016 (2) - move to x = 400 y = 60 Check dem coordinates again. but yeah, I moved it so its a bit more
   centered
3. 01:07:464 (1) - ?? http://puu.sh/70H3o.jpg change like this plz slider was messed up, thanks, I fixed it

OK~ GOOD LUCK

MMd- wrote:

don't Kudos if this mod doesn't help you at all
ah, I'll mod Insane later, sorry.

[Easy]
00:15:595 (4,5) - change with slider
also, I would suggest not to use stacked circle in Easy diff, but it's up to you. I'll keep it with two circles, sounds better

[Hard]
Nothing wrong for me.

Kibbleru wrote:

[Luxo's Normal]

• 01:03:607 (3) - ctrl + j? no, bacause I want to keep this little 2 wave shape
  01:09:923 (1) - x464 y304 ok
  01:40:555 (2,3) - overlap a bit more ok (LOL for the first time I see a suggestion like this XD usually is "overlap less")
  01:53:186 (1) - x48 ok
  01:55:713 (1) - move 1 grid to the right fixed

Neta wrote:

[Luxo's Normal]

1. 00:39:292 (3) - Better make that slider's red point on the middle nah, I think is ok also in this way, the blancked is better enphatized imo
2. 00:45:292 (3) - beat is little weird i think reverse slider is not good maybe... but, why didn't you post a better solution? anyway for now I'll keep it, also I thought to make something different
3. 01:15:607 (1) - Do we need NC here? yeh, probably not
4. 01:41:186 (3) - it's overlapped little better fix it not to overlap overlapped better

MMd- wrote:

[Luxo's Normal]
01:03:595 (3) - ctrl+j and place it at the same position. no, bacause I want to keep this little 2 wave shape
I see that some of your patern was boring (?) so I thought it will be better if you change some. (or it's just me, idk) if you thought so you could have posted some suggestions to make it less boring?

1. Fine

1. 00:21:280 (1,2, 3) - With these, you emphasize the offbeat white-ticks more than the onbeat, but that's not appropriate to the song. I'd highly suggest to change the rhythm, like this maybe:
   
   Example

   
   That would be like you did it before and it fits much better.
2. 00:24:437 (2) - The offbeat-slider before fits, but not this one. Please, consider to change rhythm like this:
   
   Example

   
3. 00:43:385 (1) - Rhythm-wise, this slider doesn't fit. Probably you are trying to map the lyrics here, but you forgot the more important beat at the big white tick, which makes it sound strange. Consider to change like this:
   
   Example

   
4. 00:54:437 (3) - I think you moved this rhythm and forgot to snap?
5. 01:14:964 (1) - Same as at 00:43:385
6. 01:46:858 (1) - This slider makes not much sense rhythm-wise. Maybe you just put it there for the look of it or for having a long slider o: The reaverse emphasizes a beat, which is important, but obviously not as important as 01:48:122. Either do it like this:
   
   Example

   
   Or if you want to keep your slider and your lyrics-mapping:
   
   Example

   
7. Well, except some rhythm-issues, the diff seems to be flawless! I personally don't like the look of your s-sliders, because they need more curve, in my opinion. But it's just personal preference, I guess~

1. HP3 & OD4 maybe for better diff-spread?
2. I really love the look and flow of your diff. I don't want to be offensive, but in my opinion, the rhythm you used in this diff sounds mostly bad. For me, it's important where the music emphasizes a beat, and not the lyrics. Maybe you can consider lyrics when there's no special beat emphasizing or something... But this diff is full of offbeat-sliders, which in this case really destroy my impression of this difficulty. Those offbeat sliders are all lyrics-based, so they might be rankable, and not unfitting at all, but for me, they just sound bad and feel weird when playing. Maybe you could also say they are based on the offbeat-drums, but these are usually emphasized by hitsounds and seem weird when emphasized with slider-starts. I can't say anything more about this diff, except music & ryhthm should be more important than placement & the other stuff.

1. 00:09:437 (5,6) - If you want to map the main instrument, you probably shouldn't even map the big white tick, because bad impression again.
   
   Example

   
2. 00:14:490 (3,4) - I would sound better here when the first slider was reversed and the second wasn't.
3. 00:20:174 (5,6) - ^
4. 00:45:753 (2,3) - Wouldn't this be a better timeline?
   
   Example

   
5. 00:31:069 (1) - 00:35:964 (1) - 01:07:543 (1) - As I mentioned earlier, ryhthm should be more important than placement. Then, tell me why these exist. The tick, where the reverse lies on, aren't in the music, or don't seem to be in the music. This slider is just there to have long sliders in the map, which is horrible. Sorry, I don't want to be offensive, but I'm always very picky with rhythm, and this hurts me somehow ;w;
6. Again, the placement and flow of this diff is really, really good. You are all really good with this stuff. Why don't you care more about the rhythm then?

1. 00:24:437 (3) - Consider to use the same spacing to (2) and to (4) to create better look?
2. 00:45:358 (1) - Umm.. This sounds pretty awkward, because the noise doesn't even start on the blue tick. It starts somewhere between the blue tick and the red tick, and is not mappable. Please turn into 1/2 slider starting from red tick o:
3. Otherwise, the insane diff is awesome! Well done :3 Really fun to play, and rhythm fits. Only minor problem I have, that you won't fix though, is the long sliders again. But this time, it's not about their rhythm itself, but about the sliderticks. The fact that they all appear on red ticks makes it feel kind of weird again. But well, it's fine I guess~

1. 00:15:280 (8) - Well, I personally don't like the flow, when there's a jump and afterwards a small distance to a slider, but the direction you have to move is linear. What I mean is, the flow breaks somehow when moving the cursor to this slider. But this is seen in many maps and is usually not considered as bad. That's why I'd suggest you to move the slider a little bit upwards atleast, so you got a better blanket and the flow is better. Like this maybe:
   
   Example

   
2. Awesome diff, the best in the mapset! I love the rhythm, the flow and everything <3