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Domino - ParaGirl ~Domino Girl's Pop Mix~

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Leorda
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 Desember 2009 at 21:07:21

Artist: Domino
Title: ParaGirl ~Domino Girl's Pop Mix~
Source: Super Eurobeat vol.192
Tags: girl pop mix domino para
BPM: 148
Filesize: 13996kb
Play Time: 01:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. BeatPara (4,69 stars, 206 notes)
  2. DancePara (4,14 stars, 194 notes)
  3. ParaPara (2,67 stars, 105 notes)
  4. ToraPara (3,73 stars, 120 notes)
Download: Domino - ParaGirl ~Domino Girl's Pop Mix~
Download: Domino - ParaGirl ~Domino Girl's Pop Mix~ (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks to Cyclone to add the spinner-bg and spinner-meter to this map. I so happy!

Domino's real name is Alessandra Gatti. This beatmap contains skin, mp3 and video (ParaPara Lesson). Meet the girl at video. Saki, Tomomin, Yoshimi, and Marie. Tha't from Gazen ParaPara! This song is a eurobeat song, not americanbeat song! Meet Domino at Dominoonline.net
Update in October 17, 2009 : Reduces a Circle Size, HP Drain, and Overall Difficulty for all difficulty. Changes a BPM and Offset for all difficulty.
Update in October 18, 2009 : Fix a beat spacing for all difficulty (no error) with AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A). Background and circle is changes color. New circle places.
Update in October 20, 2009 : Add a slider and spinner for all difficulty (I'm very so sorry I just make a few slider). New circle place. Change a difficulty name (HardPara to DancePara).
Update in October 24, 2009 : Fix a wrong timing , and changes some background
Update in October 25. 2009 : Changes some source in song setup.
Update in October 27, 2009 : Changes some offset to 628, add a breaks (I just make a few breaks........), Fix a 2 difficulty (DancePara & MasterPara)
Update in November 02, 2009 : Fix a spacing for all difficulty
Update in November 03, 2009 : Fix a ParaPara difficulty
Update in November 04, 2009 : Fix about beat spacing, fix something.
Update in November 06, 2009 : Add some slider, new circle place (Sorry, I just clear all beats first........)
Update in November 07, 2009 : Add some difficult level for DancePara and BeatPara
Update in November 08, 2009 : Fix all difficulty (kino77's suggestion)
Update in November 09, 2009 : Fix all difficulty except DancePara (Yes's suggestion)
Update in November 10, 2009 : Fix all difficulty (osuplayer111's suggestion)
Update in November 11, 2009 : Fix the spacing for all difficulty
Update in November 14, 2009 : Fix all difficulty except BeatPara
Update in November 15, 2009 : Fix the ParaPara difficulty
Update in November 16, 2009 : Fix the ToraPara difficulty, add some kiai time for all difficulty
Update in November 19, 2009 : Fix all difficulty for 3 times (Samurai_X, gdeath and ykcarrot's suggestion)
Update in November 23, 2009 : Changes some pattern, delete MasterPara (that's not useful again :'( )
Update in November 25, 2009 : Fix all difficulty execpt ParaPara (Tanmak and Dusty's suggestion)
Update in November 27, 2009 : Fix all difficulty for 2 times execpt BeatPara, DancePara (alvisto and Shinxyn suggestion), video finally flipped, new skin in this beatmap
Update in November 29, 2009 : Added some circle, new skin, new hitsound
Update in December 01, 2009 : Added some lyric, fix all difficulty, remove hitsound (because FuukoLover can't hear a hitsound). Please redownload!!!
Update in December 08, 2009 : Changes some colour for DancePara and BeatPara (NoHitter's suggestion)
Update in December 10, 2009 : Fix some difficulty (arkianduski's suggestion)
Update in December 11, 2009 : Fix all difficulty (roxkyuubiforever's suggestion), Change some color for all diff execpt ParaPara (Now all diff color is same as ParaPara)
Update in December 13, 2009 : Fix all difficulty (Crazy Jay and Aoitenshi suggestion), added text (Domino Girl's Pop Mix)
Update in December 16, 2009 : Fix all difficulty execpt BeatPara (DJPop's suggestion)
Update in December 17, 2009 : Fix all difficulty execpt ParaPara (abalee's suggestion)
Update in December 18, 2009 : Fix all difficulty execpt DancePara (Gens and osuplayer111's suggestion)
Mafiamaster
Something is wrong with the .osz file. (723 bytes in total download size)
Try doing a full resubmit in editor~
Hit me up again when you've done it.
Mafiamaster
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Leorda
Thanks Master! I already changes a BPM and Offset. And I reduces the HP Drain, Overall Difficulty, and Circle Size for all difficulty! :D
Matma Rex
Sorry, this map is crappy.

Start with pressing Ctrl+Shift+A in editor, clicking "Run" and fixing everything. Repeat for every difficulty.

Then re-place all beats to fit music.


Then you can ask someone to mod it.
Topic Starter
Leorda
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
happy30
wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 204x204 bg


[ParaPara]

remap this, use 1/4 snap divisor, and use sliders, hitsounds, effort, etc

[ToraPara]

See [ParaPara]

[HardPara]

See [ParaPara]

Ill stop here, it's too much work to write all the difficult names, they have all the same flaws
Topic Starter
Leorda
Thanks, I already make a slider, spinner, and hitsounds.
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[overall]
* You need a better quality Background picture. a 204x204 image just will not work.
*Is there a source for this song? is it from an album, Video game, etc. If so, can it be specified in the Source section in Song Setup
*There are no tags. Tags help users find your map in a search. so, I suppose Eurobeat is one. I'm sure you may be able to think of others. Tags can be adjusted from the Song Setup as well.

[ParaPara]
00:24:95 (4) - New combo
00:26:58 (7) - New combo
00:31:44 (4) - New combo
00:33:06 (7) - New combo
00:34:59 (10) - Move this forward 1/4 beat and shorten by 1/4 beat. Probably make a new combo here, too.
00:39:55 (4) - New combo
00:41:17 (8) - New combo

00:41:98 - Note here?
00:46:04 (4) - New combo
00:52:52 (5) - New combo
00:54:14 (8) - New combo
01:05:50 (6) - New combo
01:06:72 (9) - Sounds better at 01:06:92.
01:07:43 (10) - Move to the next white tick (01:07:53)
01:11:89 (6) - Move forward to the white tick. New combo as well
01:18:47 (6) - New combo
01:24:95 (6) - New combo
01:27:39 (11) - New combo
01:28:91 (13) - Move forward 1/4, to the white tick
01:31:44 (4) - New combo
01:33:06 (7) - New combo
01:33:78 (9) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:37:93 (4) - New combo
01:39:55 (7) - New combo
01:41:18 (10) - Shorten by 1/4 beat
01:44:42 (1,2,3) - These beats should probably be removed, since they seem out of place after the part before it is unmapped.


Distance snapping should be definitely implemented on this map. Also, try using grid level 2 or 3 for more precise mapping.

[ToraPara]
00:06:61 (2) - Move forward 1/4 beat. Also a new combo may be a good idea
00:08:33 (3) - New combo
00:10:36 (4) - New combo
00:11:98 (8) - New combo
00:12:69 (9) - Move forward 1/4 beat
00:13:60 (11) - New combo
00:15:22 (15) - New combo
00:17:56 (2) - Move forward 1/4 beat
00:20:19 (5) - Move back 1/4 beat. A break should be placed here.
00:24:25 (4) - Make this consistent with the later style, which fits the music better. Move it 1/2 beat forward
00:24:95 (1) - New combo
00:26:58 (6) - New combo
00:26:88 (12) - Move 1/4 beat forward
00:28:20 (11) - New combo
00:31:44 (6) - New combo
00:31:75 (7) - Move forward 1/4 beat
00:33:06 (11) - New combo
00:33:87 (13) - Move forward 1/4 beat
00:33:97 (14) - Move forward 1/4 beat
00:36:61 (2) - Move forward 1/4 beat
00:39:45 (10) - Move forward 1/4 beat
00:41:07 (14) - Move forward 1/4 beat
00:41:88 (16) - Move forward 1/4 beat
00:43:50 (2) - Move forward 1/4 beat
00:45:12 (6) - Move forward 1/4 beat
00:46:04 (7) - New combo
00:46:34 (8) - Move forward 1/4 beat
00:47:15 (10) - Move forward 1/4 beat
00:47:56 (11) - Move back 1/4 beat, and extend 1/4 beat
00:49:99 (2) - Move forward 1/4 beat
00:57:29 (3) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:00:53 (7) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:04:58 (5) - Move back or forward 1/4 beat
01:05:50 (6) - New combo
01:06:20 (8,9) - Move both of these forward 1/4 beat
01:07:42 (10) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:10:66 (4) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:11:88 (6) - New combo and move forward 1/4 beat
01:12:89 (9) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:13:40 (5) - Move forward 1/2 beat
01:13:91 (6) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:15:93 (2) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:18:37 (6) - New combo and move forward 1/4 beat
01:19:58 (4) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:20:39 (5) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:22:42 (2) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:23:64 (4) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:24:85 (6,7) - Move both of these forward 1/4 beat, and make (6) a new combo
01:25:87 (9,10) - Move both of these forward 1/4 beat
01:27:39 (11) - New combo
01:31:04 (5) - New combo
01:33:06 (11) - New combo
01:33:77 (13) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:34:58 (16) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:37:02 (3,4,5) - Move these three forward 1/4 beat
01:37:93 (6) - New combo
01:39:04 (10) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:39:55 (11) - New combo
01:39:85 (12) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:40:26 (13,14,15) - Move these three circles forward 1/4 beat
01:41:37 (17) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:41:68 (18) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:44:31 (5) - Move forward 1/4 beat
01:45:12 (7) - Move forward 1/4 beat


Distance snapping is required here as well. I'll mod the rest later because frankly, I'm exhausted
WyndII
Okay since this is your first map ^.^

But I'll help you polish your map before I start moden~

"Beat placement generally follows the time-distance-equality rule (holding Alt while placing beats enforces this). This means you shouldn't have some fast notes with huge distance between them followed by closely placed but slow notes. This gets really confusing if the player isn't the person who designed the beatmap! Having some logic to the placement should be one of your goals."

"Use breaks where possible. Even if they are only 5-10 seconds, it allows a bit of recovery and hand repositioning for the players. But I saw no breaks on your map"

"And background is pixelated, please use an appropriate size for you image 800x600 or 1200x1600."
Topic Starter
Leorda
OMG! Thank Ms. WyndII for the star :)
WyndII
Ms.... geez =.=
Zekira
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
DJPop
Fix spacings whole maps in every diffs.

~DancePara~
00:06:70 (2) - new combo
00:08:33 (3) - ^
00:09:75 (5) - ^
00:10:35 (7) - ^
00:12:384 - add circle
00:13:60 (4) - new combo
00:15:22 (8) - ^
00:15:62 (9) - move 1/4 left
00:16:03 (10) - move 1/2 left
00:16:84 (1,1,1,1) - too short
00:28:19 (6) - new combo
00:34:68 (6) - ^
00:37:92 (5) - ^
00:41:16 (5) - ^
00:44:41 (5) - ^
00:47:75 (5) - ^
00:50:89 (5) - ^
00:57:38 (5) - ^
01:03:26 (7) - ^
01:06:50 (7) - ^
01:09:74 (7) - ^
01:14:00 (6) - ^
01:16:84 (5) - ^
01:20:08 (5) - ^
01:23:33 (5) - ^
01:24:95 (8) - ^
01:26:87 (1) - move 3/4 left
01:44:41 (5) - new combo

~MasterPara~
00:04:78 (4) - on red tick
00:06:40 (6) - ^
00:08:02 (6) - ^
00:08:63 (2) - on white tick
00:08:83 (3) - delete
00:09:64 (6) - on red tick
00:09:85 (7) - on white tick
00:11:97 (6) - new combo
00:13:60 (12) - ^
00:15:22 (18) - ^
00:16:84 (1,1,1,1) - too short
00:37:92 (9) - new combo
00:41:16 (9) - ^
00:44:41 (9) - ^
00:50:89 (10) - ^
00:54:54 (8) - ^
00:57:08 (5) - on red tick
00:57:58 (6) - new combo
00:59:00 (11) - ^
01:06:70 (8) - move left 1/2
01:07:11 (9) - ^
01:07:317 - add circle
01:09:14 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - move left 1/2
01:14:41 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - move right 1/2
01:16:03 (7) - new combo
01:17:65 (13) - ^
01:19:47 (19) - ^
01:30:62 (3) - move left 1/2
01:31:43 (6) - new combo
01:33:87 (13) - move left 1/2
01:34:58 (16) - on white tick & new combo
01:35:49 (18) - move left 1/2
01:36:30 (21) - new combo
01:37:11 (1) - remove new combo
01:39:54 (6) - new combo
01:41:16 (11) - new combo & end on white tick
01:44:41 (8) - new combo


I'm tired now =__="
Kytoxid
[ParaGirl]

00:27:38 (3) - Break after this probably isn't necessary.
00:34:58 (1) - Move it 1/4 later.
00:34:58 (1) - No break after this.
00:42:38 (4) - ^, move it one grid right.
00:46:03 (1,4) - One grid right.
00:47:65 (5,1,2,3,4) - Messed up spacing.
00:54:95 (3) - One grid up.
01:01:33 (8) - Weird timing.
01:01:33 (8,1) - Jump.
01:02:24 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing.
01:06:30 (3,4) - ^
01:08:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
01:15:22 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
01:27:38 (1,2,3) - ^

Stopping here, please recheck all your spacing.
Andrea
You have to adjust all the spacing for first... and when you're done contact me and i re-mod :D
Lissette

osuplayer111 wrote:

You have to adjust all the spacing for first... and when you're done contact me and i re-mod :D
like he said

maybe this can help http://up.ppy.sh/files/beatspacing-1.jpg

try using the distance snap plz
Topic Starter
Leorda
I already use a distance snap for all difficulty......
kino77
[ParaPara]
Slider Tick Rate 1?
Add some hitsound?
00:23:74(2,3)-Spacing?
00:30:22(2,3)-^
00:34:68(1)-End here white tick?
00:47:66(4,5)-Spacing?
00:59:82(5,6,7,8)-^
01:03:06(2,3,4,5)-^
01:06:71(4,5)-^
You got a lot of spacing issues in this diff,I won't point them out one by one since here,please use Distance Spacing and replace them~
01:26:37(x)-Add a spinner here end 01:28:20,remove notes within it,coz it sounds off,and end mapping here.


[ToraPara]
Still spacing issues in this diff,same advice as ParaPara
00:05:09(1,1,1)-Finish?
00:10:36(1)-Add some hitsound around here?
00:20:09(5)-Finish?
01:26:37(x)-Same as ParaPara?

[BeatPara]
Spacing issues...
Its almost circles in this map,add some sliders and reverse sliders to make it intersting~
00:16:84(1)-Spinner is too long and off,move it to 00:20:09 end 00:22:93,and filled up empety with note?
End mapping 01:42:38 or 01:28:20?

[DancePara]
00:16:82(1,1)-I don't like those spinner...
End mapping 01:42:38 or 01:28:20?

[MasterPara]
I think 5 diffs was enough...
you must try to make every diffs better but no make many diffs.
01:26:78(1)-Start here 01:26:37?

No star for now,since you fix all of those things,ask me to mod again~
kino77
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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