1. Easy (1.15 stars, 122 notes)
2. Extra (5.47 stars, 763 notes)
3. Hard (3.02 stars, 429 notes)
4. Hyper (3.77 stars, 481 notes)
5. lightr's Insane (4.84 stars, 669 notes)
6. Normal (2.11 stars, 251 notes)

zwsr wrote:

fight~~

[Twinkle] wrote:

support

yu1sT wrote:

[easy]
00:23:375 (1) - 尾部方向朝着2？ ok
01:00:832 (2) - 再弯一点ok
02:26:843 - 添加一个折返滑条？是好一点

[Normal]
00:15:051 (1) - 包好一点ok
00:41:410 (4) - ^ok
01:51:121 (2) - ^ok
00:40:022 (1,2) - 间距。。没发现
01:02:219 (1,2) - ^ok

[Hard]
00:18:173 (2,3) - 用一样的滑条ok
02:37:595 (4,1) - 距离远一点，跟后面的距离有点相似ok

太喜欢这歌，祝顺利rank~~

zinsser wrote:

哎，接受中文是么

第一次mod还不太会用论坛的功能，鉴于是新手我说的你就参考参考就好

[easy]
00:28:924 (1,2,1,2) - 之间的空隙太长，而且有些单调副歌之前没有升华的预感。建议在三个空当中间分别加个圈，然后 00:37:248 (2) ·长度减半，然后往返两次（左，右，左）后面改了些
00:40:022 (1,2,3,4) - 单调+1 建议把第三个改成往返，删掉第四个，在第四个开始的位置结束的时间加一个圈看了看，easy就不变了
00:51:121 (1,2,3,4) - 上边+1，可以保留上边那个然后改掉这个
01:20:254 (1,2,1,2) - 上边+1，既然有 01:30:658 (3) ·的存在，那可以吧最后一个滑条长度减半，往返一次
02:15:745 (4) - 个人会把这个加长到下一个白色tick （到 02:17:132 ·结束）ok
02:28:231 (1,2,3,4) - 上边+1

[normal]
02:03:259 (1) - 我觉得可以吧这个和前面的距离伸长到1.2x 。。。这个得保持DS
02:16:785 (6) - 这个滑条反复一次ok

[hard]
00:49:213 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 感觉怪怪的，我反正第一次打的时候是反应不过来4是多次往返，但是不知道怎么给更改建议，毕竟这一块也算原创的图案。（至少可以尝试拉近 00:49:213 (4,1) ·之间的距离，1.5x的距离很容易让第一次打的人预判为4只有一次往返）ok
01:06:381 - 请务必删掉这个spinner……只有3秒的break特别短不说，紧接着就是一个长度只有1秒的转盘，而且还不在重音上，好不容易打完一段休息了突然这么一个转盘肯定反应不过来ok
01:29:271 (2,4) - 这两个滑条的重叠有些莫名其妙，不在中点，也不是distance snap，关键是还挡住了第二个滑条的结束圈……感觉还好
01:52:421 (3) - 把它放在两个滑条中间的位置吧，表和第二个起始圈重合不喜欢放中间。。。。。



[extra]
建议od+1
01:00:572 (5,2) - 放在在4和6（1和3）的中间吧，现在这样很破坏移动。。。
01:06:381 - 转盘删掉+1ok
01:07:768 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 反正我是打不了xD 跳的好多1.9 slider velocity + 4.8 distance snap
01:59:098 - 删掉+1
02:17:132 - 加一个圈，可以放在78的中间跟着鼓点走
02:26:150 - 好吧这一串我也打不了……收回前言od不用+1了。。这个不是滑条吗
02:47:913 (2) - 13中间


第一次mod就献给你了xD 不知道楼上这些图是怎么截出来的求讲解？
背景很喜欢，哪里搞来的？pixiv上搜索的。。
m4m: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/141353
lol 祝楼主成功rank

zinsser wrote:

建议ar -1 no,这种排列和BPM你觉得AR8玩着舒服吗？
00:20:080 (4) - 摆在这里很容易看丢 （虽然我没看丢） 算是比较常见的遮挡把
00:37:248 (3,1) - 这中间为什么要空一拍，小鼓在空的这一排已经开始有比较弱的声音了，要么再加个圈，要么把3改成短滑条。个人会再加一个圈然后从00:37:248 (3) ·开始标新combo no,停顿一下转折
01:06:381 - 转盘删掉+1 好
01:07:768 (1,2) - 两个离得太远，短滑条往返接3.45x短滑条往返没人能反应过来（第一次打的时候）缩到2x差不多 Insane不是面向新手玩家做的，这种跳对已经入门的玩家来说完全谈不上难度
01:23:028 (3) - 嚯这一大串连打…… 建议把 01:24:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) ·改成短滑条往返，后边两个短滑条往返改成连打 sorry,no change
02:49:300 (2) - +1 sorry,no change

1. why you add tag 'Vo' 'Gt' 'Dr' 'Ba'. i don't understand. please remove these.

1. 00:15:051 (2) - add finish slider end. and sampleset is soft. because symbals part. really fit.
2. 00:17:826 (1) - ^ but, slider head.
3. 00:21:988 (5) - drum sampleset slider head.
4. 00:28:924 (1) - finish sampleset slider head.
5. 00:34:473 (1) - ^
6. 00:37:248 (3) - add finish slider head.
7. 00:38:635 (5) - add finish slider end. and sampleset is drum.
8. 01:03:259 (3) - remove clap. and instead add finish and sampleset drum. more fit.
9. 01:09:155 (1) - soft sampleset slider head.
10. 01:20:254 (1) - ^
11. 01:25:803 (1) - ^
12. 02:26:843 (1) - add clap slider head and reverse and end.

1. 00:16:092 (3) - change soft and add finish.
2. 00:37:248 (1) - add finish.
3. 01:03:606 (4) - add finish.
4. 01:09:155 (1) - add finish slider head.
5. 01:20:254 (1) - add finish slider head.
6. 01:25:803 (1) - add finish slider head.

1. 00:17:826 (1) - remove clap slider head and add finish slider head and sampleset soft.
2. 00:28:924 (1) - ^
3. 00:29:618 (1,1) - nothing mean NC. remove these.
4. 00:34:473 (1) - remove clap slider head and add finish slider head and sampleset soft.
5. 00:39:155 (1) - remove finish. instead add clap.
6. 01:03:606 (3) - sampleset soft.
7. 01:09:155 (1) - remove clap slider head and add finish slider head and sampleset soft.
8. 01:20:254 (1) - ^
9. 01:20:947 (1,1,1)- nothing mean NC. remove these.
10. 01:26:496 (1,1,1) - ^
11. 01:54:762 (6) - bit long stream part for hard diff. try change 1/4 reverse slider.
12. 02:10:889 (3) - add clap slider head. and add finish slider end.
13. 02:11:236 (4) - add finish slider head.
14. 02:26:843 (1) - add clap slider head and all reverse.
15. 02:38:115 (3,1,3,1) - don't make harder. both (3) remove reverse once. http://puu.sh/7Eu4d.jpg
16. 02:49:387 (2,3,4,9) - remove reverse once. or more close distance spacing better.

1. 01:01:872 (1) - remove NC.
2. 01:09:155 (1) - add finish slider head.
3. 01:25:456 (2) - if this pateern NC, add NC.
4. 01:52:161 (6) - add NC.
5. 01:54:936 (5) - add finish.
6. 02:11:063 (4,5) - add finish.
7. 02:39:329 (5) - add NC.

1. stream hitsound weird imo..

P o M u T a wrote:

from my queue. nice song

[General]

1. why you add tag 'Vo' 'Gt' 'Dr' 'Ba'. i don't understand. please remove these.OK

[Easy]

1. 00:15:051 (2) - add finish slider end. and sampleset is soft. because symbals part. really fit.
2. 00:17:826 (1) - ^ but, slider head.
3. 00:21:988 (5) - drum sampleset slider head.
4. 00:28:924 (1) - finish sampleset slider head.
5. 00:34:473 (1) - ^
6. 00:37:248 (3) - add finish slider head.
7. 00:38:635 (5) - add finish slider end. and sampleset is drum.
8. 01:03:259 (3) - remove clap. and instead add finish and sampleset drum. more fit.
9. 01:09:155 (1) - soft sampleset slider head.
10. 01:20:254 (1) - ^
11. 01:25:803 (1) - ^
12. 02:26:843 (1) - add clap slider head and reverse and end.
    change all

[Normal]

1. 00:16:092 (3) - change soft and add finish.
2. 00:37:248 (1) - add finish.
3. 01:03:606 (4) - add finish.
4. 01:09:155 (1) - add finish slider head.
5. 01:20:254 (1) - add finish slider head.
6. 01:25:803 (1) - add finish slider head.
   change all

[Hard]

1. 00:17:826 (1) - remove clap slider head and add finish slider head and sampleset soft.
2. 00:28:924 (1) - ^
3. 00:29:618 (1,1) - nothing mean NC. remove these.
4. 00:34:473 (1) - remove clap slider head and add finish slider head and sampleset soft.
5. 00:39:155 (1) - remove finish. instead add clap.
6. 01:03:606 (3) - sampleset soft.
7. 01:09:155 (1) - remove clap slider head and add finish slider head and sampleset soft.
8. 01:20:254 (1) - ^
9. 01:20:947 (1,1,1)- nothing mean NC. remove these.
10. 01:26:496 (1,1,1) - ^
11. 01:54:762 (6) - bit long stream part for hard diff. try change 1/4 reverse slider. nop
12. 02:10:889 (3) - add clap slider head. and add finish slider end.
13. 02:11:236 (4) - add finish slider head.
14. 02:26:843 (1) - add clap slider head and all reverse.
15. 02:38:115 (3,1,3,1) - don't make harder. both (3) remove reverse once. http://puu.sh/7Eu4d.jpg
16. 02:49:387 (2,3,4,9) - remove reverse once. or more close distance spacing better.
    and change all

[extra]

1. stream hitsound weird imo..yeah,,need develop

almost hitsound suggest.
good luck

P o M u T a wrote:

from my queue. nice song

[lightr's Insane]

1. 01:01:872 (1) - remove NC.
2. 01:09:155 (1) - add finish slider head.
3. 01:25:456 (2) - if this pateern NC, add NC.
4. 01:52:161 (6) - add NC.
5. 01:54:936 (5) - add finish.
6. 02:11:063 (4,5) - add finish.
7. 02:39:329 (5) - add NC.

All fixed , Thank you

1. 00:12:970 (3,3) - stack?
2. 00:20:254 (5,6) - you get some better flow if you ctrl g these two
3. 00:34:473 (1,1) - bad overlap.
4. 00:40:369 (2,3) - stack these better. (ctrl g them both, so you can stack the heads. then ctrl g back)
5. 00:42:103 (3,4) - why stack? the pause in flow here is really awkward
6. 00:58:057 (1,2) - again, why does the flow stop here?
7. 01:12:797 (5,6,7) - hmm how do i explain this, from 01:12:624 (4,5) - the ds gets a slight decrease so you can angle the triangle, but i think it feels awkward when the DS decreases rather than increase. so just basically instead of offsetting the triangle by spinning it clockwise, spin it counter clockwise, following the flow
8. 01:30:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i think you should take copy 01:29:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and ctrl hj, or vice versa
9. 01:34:126 (1,2) - blanket could be better
10. 02:03:953 (1,2,3,4) - the reverse in the direction of flow just feels awkward
11. 02:41:757 (3,1) - stack?
12. 02:43:144 (5,3) - not a good overlap
13. 02:45:225 (2,4) - ^
14. 02:52:161 (2) - ctrl g?
15. 02:52:855 (4) - ^
16. 02:53:548 (2,4) - same with these two?
17. 02:56:236 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i just thought you could make a better design here, maybe like a wave or something

1. 00:14:705 (5) - copy 00:15:051 (1) - ctrl hj
2. 01:31:352 (1,2) - ^ same with this pair maybe
3. 02:05:340 (1,2) - don't overlap
4. 02:13:317 (2) - ctrl g
5. 02:14:011 (4) - ^
6. 02:16:959 (1) - consider turning this into a 1/2 slider
7. 02:15:745 - not sure if all these nc are necessary
8. 02:22:681 (1) - this isn't a very good place for spinner lol
9. 02:49:213 - the stream starts here?

1. 00:02:566 (1,2,3,4) - i don't get it. why ds change?
2. 00:22:855 (2,1) - blanket
3. 00:38:115 (5,6,7) - make the DS change more even lol
4. 00:41:063 (5,6) - DS change here a bit random and this set of jumps look messy
5. 00:50:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - these streams look kinda hard.
6. 01:01:352 - this one here especially lol
7. 01:12:624 (4,1) - random change in flow direction why?
8. 01:13:664 (2) - ctrl g?
9. 01:16:092 (1) - slider kinda ugly lol. curve less or something
10. 01:41:410 (5) - the way how it overlaps both (4) and (5) makes it look bad and confusing
11. 02:16:959 (8) - move this one down a bit
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 02:56:236 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this stream seems so impossible to play lol..

1. 00:04:300 (2,3) - music doesn't pause, no reason to stack
2. 00:40:716 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:10:196 (2) - istead just copy (1) and rotate by a bit
4. 00:19:213 (3,4) - blanket 4 better for better overlap
5. 01:09:155 (1) - how bout this lol?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:11:583 (1,2) - reversing more than once can be confusing in normals
7. 02:40:022 (2) - rotate this clockwise a bit more
8. 02:44:184 (4) - this might be better
   
   SPOILER

   

• 
  You have a 1 star easy going to a 3.5 star normal... the difficulty spread is kinda yah...
  thats all i got to say lels

Tagre wrote:

M4M

ALL OF MODS ARE SUGGESTIONS

[Easy]
CS:2 ?nope
00:19:213 (2,3) - blanket it (and if you think it is necessary blanket 00:17:826 (1) - too)ok
00:21:988 (5,1) - move they closer to the right (you will be have more space for 00:24:762 (2) - and it would be prettier)
00:48:346 (1,2) - blanket itok
01:09:155 (1,2) - curve they somehow (they are really ugly as straight)
01:34:820 (4,5) - blanket it
01:42:450 (1) - ctrl+h, ctrl+j, ctrl+g (lol) then place as previous (better flow)ok
01:49:387 (3,4) - bad blanket. fix it ok
01:52:161 (1,2,3) - use this pattern 01:00:832 (2,3,4) - ok
02:37:942 (5,1) - blanket itok
02:55:976 (4) - it should ends at 02:57:363 -

nothing else

[Normal]
00:04:647 (3) - maybe something like this http://puu.sh/7KDpL.jpg ?ok
00:11:583 (5,1) - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/7KDBl.jpg (i know it would be harder but it fits better to song for me)
00:21:988 - i suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/7KDTD.jpgok
00:28:231 (4) - delete it and place 1beat slider at 00:27:884 - ok
00:41:410 (4,1) - blanket itok
01:13:317 (3,4) - almost good but fix blanket ;_;ok
01:19:560 (4) - same as 00:28:231 (4) -ok
01:33:086 (4,1) - blanket itok
01:36:901 (1) - i suggest to do something like this http://puu.sh/7KEjO.jpg but more beauty please
01:44:531 (5,1) - blanket itok
02:02:566 (4,1) - ^
02:16:612 - place a note here (there is a word from song and you leaved empty space. it sounds better)
02:26:843 (1,2) - blanket itok
02:35:167 (1,3) - ^
02:47:652 (3,1) - this is quite ugly. i suggest to change shape and placement of 3 to this http://puu.sh/7KENY.jpg. looks much better
ok
nothing else

[Hard]
00:07:074 (2) - ctrl+gnope
00:07:768 (4) - ^
00:08:115 (1) - delete repeat and place a note 00:08:462 - for a little jump ( better flow in my opinion
00:22:681 (6) - move to 00:22:508 - (sounds much better) and fix ds
00:25:976 - here is important sound. maybe place a note here?nope
00:32:913 - ^
00:33:433 (2,3) - use ds for this
00:40:716 (3,4) - blanket itok
00:42:103 (3,4) - ^
00:43:837 (5,1) - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/7KFKv.jpg (sounds better)
00:51:121 (1,2) - blanket itok
00:49:213 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - very nice part but probably i will be too hard. new people dont stream that well when they reach hard level (only opinion)
00:53:722 (1) - place it over 2
00:59:965 (4,5) - this flow drop is too confused. try to change placement somehow
01:12:624 (3,1) - place under each other properly
01:14:531 (5,1) - blanket it
01:41:583 (3) - ctrl+g
01:42:103 (5,1) - use ds
02:04:647 (1,2) - blanket it ok
02:05:340 (1,2) - ^
02:06:728 (3,4,5,6) - make it more various. try to rotate 5,6 somehow (02:09:502 (3,4,5,6) - this is nice )ok
02:08:115 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:15:745 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - make nc after 4th note (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)nope
02:37:421 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - same as 00:49:213 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - nope
02:46:265 (1) - ctrl+g (better flow)

nothing else

Sorry but i'm too tired for further modding (11 p.m. )
if you want i can look on insane and extra later. just pm me
and i'm giving you star because i was searching for map of this song for standard mode heh
GL

Kibbleru wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:12:970 (3,3) - stack? OK
2. 00:20:254 (5,6) - you get some better flow if you ctrl g these two OK
3. 00:34:473 (1,1) - bad overlap. i don't think so
4. 00:40:369 (2,3) - stack these better. (ctrl g them both, so you can stack the heads. then ctrl g back OK
5. 00:42:103 (3,4) - why stack? the pause in flow here is really awkward i don't think so
6. 00:58:057 (1,2) - again, why does the flow stop here? stack here is very good becuase of a big jupm before
7. 01:12:797 (5,6,7) - hmm how do i explain this, from 01:12:624 (4,5) - the ds gets a slight decrease so you can angle the triangle, but i think it feels awkward when the DS decreases rather than increase. so just basically instead of offsetting the triangle by spinning it clockwise, spin it counter clockwise, following the flow OK，remap this part a little
8. 01:30:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i think you should take copy 01:29:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and ctrl hj, or vice versa nope
9. 01:34:126 (1,2) - blanket could be better OK
10. 02:03:953 (1,2,3,4) - the reverse in the direction of flow just feels awkward i don't know how to change it
11. 02:41:757 (3,1) - stack? OK
12. 02:43:144 (5,3) - not a good overlap OK
13. 02:45:225 (2,4) - ^
14. 02:52:161 (2) - ctrl g?
15. 02:52:855 (4) - ^
16. 02:53:548 (2,4) - same with these two? OK^
17. 02:56:236 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i just thought you could make a better design here, maybe like a wave or somethingthis is good enough,so i don't change this stream

Thank you !

Kibbleru wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:14:705 (5) - copy 00:15:051 (1) - ctrl hjok
2. 01:31:352 (1,2) - ^ same with this pair maybe
3. 02:05:340 (1,2) - don't overlapok
4. 02:13:317 (2) - ctrl gok
5. 02:14:011 (4) - ^ok
6. 02:16:959 (1) - consider turning this into a 1/2 slidernope
7. 02:15:745 - not sure if all these nc are necessarync can express the strong beats
8. 02:22:681 (1) - this isn't a very good place for spinner lolok
9. 02:49:213 - the stream starts here?nop, start at red line would be so confuse

[ExtrA]

1. 00:02:566 (1,2,3,4) - i don't get it. why ds change?follow the music
2. 00:22:855 (2,1) - blanketok
3. 00:38:115 (5,6,7) - make the DS change more even lolok
4. 00:41:063 (5,6) - DS change here a bit random and this set of jumps look messy
5. 00:50:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - these streams look kinda hard.it's fine
6. 01:01:352 - this one here especially lol
7. 01:12:624 (4,1) - random change in flow direction why?more fun
8. 01:13:664 (2) - ctrl g?ok
9. 01:16:092 (1) - slider kinda ugly lol. curve less or somethingnope
10. 01:41:410 (5) - the way how it overlaps both (4) and (5) makes it look bad and confusing
11. 02:16:959 (8) - move this one down a bit ok
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 02:56:236 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this stream seems so impossible to play lol....it's not hard, basic on the low bpm

[Normal]

1. 00:04:300 (2,3) - music doesn't pause, no reason to stack
2. 00:40:716 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:10:196 (2) - istead just copy (1) and rotate by a bitok
4. 00:19:213 (3,4) - blanket 4 better for better overlapok
5. 01:09:155 (1) - how bout this lol?ok
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:11:583 (1,2) - reversing more than once can be confusing in normalsok
7. 02:40:022 (2) - rotate this clockwise a bit more.no, it's fine
8. 02:44:184 (4) - this might be betterok
   
   SPOILER

   

[Easy]

• 
  You have a 1 star easy going to a 3.5 star normal... the difficulty spread is kinda yah...it's how easy work
  thats all i got to say lels

----um kinda late right now but i WILL finish this mod up so don't give me kudos for now----

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey mod from queue

2~ 3 minutes = 4 Diffs


[Hard]
01:27:884 (4) - Not snapped.OK

01:35:514 (7,1) - These objects is appearing too close to each other, it makes the DS look really screwed up here. Please stack or move them more apart.I think it's not a big problem in hard dif
01:49:387 (1,2) - Same issue as above.

[Normal]
00:17:132 (2,1) - DS is not snapped properly here. Be sure to keep an eye out for the spacing in Easy/Normal diffs.ok

02:28:231 (2) - NC, because it's the first object to appear in Kai time.ok

[Easy]
AR +1, 3 is more fitting for this diff, because of the fast pace the music has.ok

Wow I have to say, you've used some pretty neat mapping techniques in your map
Good luck!