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Ogura Yui - Charming Do! (TV Size)

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popner
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年3月17日星期一 at 09:17:17

Artist: Ogura Yui
Title: Charming Do! (TV Size)
Source: 最近、妹のようすがちょっとおかしいんだが。
Tags: Recently, My Sister is Unusual Saikin, Imouto no Yousu ga Chotto Okaishiin Da Ga. ImoCho ending No_Gu Fycho
BPM: 174
Filesize: 9796kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3.22 stars, 96 notes)
  2. Fycho's Normal (4.12 stars, 122 notes)
  3. Gu's Hard (4.99 stars, 219 notes)
  4. Insane (4.8 stars, 317 notes)
Download: Ogura Yui - Charming Do! (TV Size)
Download: Ogura Yui - Charming Do! (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Please don't use this BG for another map.
Easy - me
Normal - Fycho
Hard - No_Gu
Insane - me
Last edited by popner , edited 10 times in total.
Neku Okazaki
Neku Okazaki
Can i make a guest diff (Easy or Normal)
No_Gu
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No_Gu
done http://puu.sh/7bS7L.osu

[Insane]
01:06:918 - 从这开始能起个1/4吧。。insane多加点?
01:21:228 (1) - 太往下了点吧
01:29:504 - 这里还能听到音。转盘停到01:29:676好点吧
有些跳感觉略大啊。。反正我也好久不打图了
可以考虑把softfinish音量调小点加点finish，这歌finish挺多但是现在这个音量略大
跟vocal的话少放了不少note不过这样跳的感觉也不错啦。。。
popner
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No_Gu wrote:

done http://puu.sh/7bS7L.osu

[Insane]
01:06:918 - 从这开始能起个1/4吧。。insane多加点? ok
01:21:228 (1) - 太往下了点吧 还行，没出界
01:29:504 - 这里还能听到音。转盘停到01:29:676好点吧 我觉得01:29:504 - 红线上更自然一些
有些跳感觉略大啊。。反正我也好久不打图了
可以考虑把softfinish音量调小点加点finish，这歌finish挺多但是现在这个音量略大
跟vocal的话少放了不少note不过这样跳的感觉也不错啦。。。
dosyeru
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dosyeru
hi :)

[Insane]
  1. 01:07:435 (1) - I think it's better if unstack this slider
    x=40 y=212
    or, 01:06:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - move these notes to x + 56, and y -12
    then make a blanket and triangle?
    SPOILER
  2. 01:24:849 (4) - Ctrl J and rotate it for 29 deg clockwise? so that the flow can be better and you don't have to move next stack note 01:26:228 (4) - .
    SPOILER
  3. 01:26:401 (5,6,7) - Ctrl J?

    you didnt use whistle sounds after Intro, but I would use those sounds if i mapped this.
    I hope it wouldnt ruin your hit-sounding style, but pls take a look and try below ones.
  4. 00:22:435 (2,4,6) - add whistle?
  5. 00:23:469 (1) - add whistle or finish on the head?
  6. 00:28:297 (5) - add whistle?
  7. 00:28:814 (1) - add whistle on the head?
  8. 00:33:814 (5) - and 00:34:332 (1) - ^
  9. 00:39:159 (3,1) - ^
  10. 00:44:849 (4) - add whistle?
  11. 00:47:263 (2) - add whistle on the head?
  12. 00:47:607 (3) - ^
  13. 00:50:021 (2) - ^
  14. 00:50:366 (3) - ^
  15. 01:06:745 (1) - add clap?
  16. 01:09:849 (5) - add whistle?
  17. 01:15:366 (4) - ^
  18. 01:20:883 (5) - ^
  19. 01:26:401 (5) - ^
that's it GL ;)
popner
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Thx for mod!

The patterns are intentionally made to not create perfect flow every time to emphasis particular part in music. Added some whistles in strong part of vocal.
zwsr
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zwsr
[Easy]
How about try some whistles on slider heads? Like
00:23:469 (1) -
00:24:159 (2) -
00:25:366 (3) -
00:26:228 (1) -
00:26:745 (2) -
00:27:435 (3) -
The hitsounds are too weak at these points.
00:29:677 (2) - ctrl+g h to make a better flow?
00:31:745 (1,2) - how about make them parallel?
00:58:642 - add a note here? I feel a little empty.

[Gu's Hard]
Fine.

[Insane]
00:01:228 (1,4) - are they intentianal? Maybe you can try changing to another pattern.
00:02:607 (1,4) - 00:06:745 (1,4) - 00:08:125 (1,4) - same as above
00:14:332 (3,4) - add a triplet on the slider head? Sounds interesting for me.
01:27:263 (2,3,4,5,6) - make a star out of them?


good map paopaoxuejie:DDD
popner
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Thanks for mod! Added some whistles in Easy and changed patterns in Insane as suggested.
Fycho
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[Mod Info]
  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Bold: Importance.You might consider
  3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
  1. Easy diff的artist和source出乱码了，把Easy的widescreen support去掉

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:607 (1) –改成向左凹的？00:08:125 (1,4) –像这俩凹凸方向一样
  2. 00:13:642 (1) –首加finish？00:15:021 (1,1) –这些类似，感觉这些重音可以多加点
  3. 00:23:469 (1) –头上finish
  4. 00:28:125 (3) –加个whistle？
  5. 00:28:469 (6,7) -^
  6. 00:33:642 (3) -00:33:987 (6,7) - ^
  7. 00:48:125 (1) –头上finish
  8. 00:50:883 (1) -^
  9. 01:01:918 (5) –建议去掉clap，这和01:01:745 (4) –有点不一样
  10. 01:06:573 –加个circle
  11. 01:17:090 (1) –finish
  12. 01:27:263 (2) –尾加finish再降点音量
  13. 01:28:125 (6) -^

[Hard]
  1. 00:22:435 (2,3,4) –合起来放打着不好，分开放吧
  2. 00:42:780 (1) –首加whistle
  3. 00:52:263 (1) -^
  4. 00:55:021 (1) -^
  5. 01:27:263 (2) –尾加finish再降点音量

http://puu.sh/7kTqe.rar
popner
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Updated.


Fycho wrote:

[Mod Info]
  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Bold: Importance.You might consider
  3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
  1. Easy diff的artist和source出乱码了，把Easy的widescreen support去掉 fixed

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:607 (1) –改成向左凹的？00:08:125 (1,4) –像这俩凹凸方向一样 故意弄成不一样的，不然都一样太无聊
  2. 00:13:642 (1) –首加finish？00:15:021 (1,1) –这些类似，感觉这些重音可以多加点 不习惯太多finish
  3. 00:23:469 (1) –头上finish
  4. 00:28:125 (3) –加个whistle？ added on all like this
  5. 00:28:469 (6,7) -^
  6. 00:33:642 (3) -00:33:987 (6,7) - ^
  7. 00:48:125 (1) –头上finish
  8. 00:50:883 (1) -^
  9. 01:01:918 (5) –建议去掉clap，这和01:01:745 (4) –有点不一样 我排列都强调这两个音了。。感觉加上也不差吧
  10. 01:06:573 –加个circle 这个鼓相对音量低，所以空着突出旁边强的了
  11. 01:17:090 (1) –finish
  12. 01:27:263 (2) –尾加finish再降点音量
  13. 01:28:125 (6) -^ added
Toyosaki
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Toyosaki
Hey from PM (M4M) ~

[General]
All fine.

[Insane]
00:43:987 (1) - Ctrl + G ?

[Gu's Hard]
00:33:987 (4) - this slider look strange
Put it x:268 | y:132
00:39:504 (4) - Ctrl + G maybe ? less spacing and looks cool also.

[Easy]
00:05:883 (2) - Whistle
00:16:918 (3) - Whistle

I cannot find any mistakes or something to improve so i shot a star ! There's no way, rank it !
popner
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Added whistle(as previous mod suggested). About the slider in Insane, there is a strong beat at 00:43:987 - so I want a jump here to fit it.

Thanks for mod and star!
smallboat
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嗨，泡泡，As ur PM req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Stack Leniency不一致，Check No_Gu's diff.

[Easy]

00:23:469 (1) - 試試這邊開頭+個finish? 有重音。 (如果加了這個，把這音效音量調小)
00:34:332 (1) - ^
00:48:125 (1) - 有聽到一點點輕的重音加個finish增強?
01:26:746 (1) - 如果這邊也加個finish，跟01:23:987 (1) 會有好的效果。

[Fycho's Normal] 00:12:263 這條綠線沒有必要

00:36:228 (3) - 開頭應該是在紅線? 我看Easy這個跟紅線要不要跟一下
00:41:745 (3) - ^


[Gu's Hard]

00:07:952 (3) - 我覺得疊在00:08:125 (1) 開頭，打的時候比較有感覺。
00:15:538 (2) - 放在(147|207)比較好點。
00:24:159 (2) - 疊在00:24:332 (3) 開頭比較有感覺。
00:25:883 (4) - 怎麼不跟前面用弧線反而用直線?
00:28:814 (1) - 開頭忘了finish?
00:29:676 (2) - 疊在00:29:849 (3) 開頭比較有感覺。
00:36:401 (3) - 開頭whistle試試?
00:37:263 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 中間節拍空一格，這樣子放，感覺有點坑。(尤其是點00:37:607 (3,1) 時)
00:39:849 (1) - 忘了finish?
00:41:918 (3) - 或許開頭能跟隨vocal加個whistle。
00:43:469 (2) - 建議這往前一格，然後 00:43:814 (3) 加note，這不錯的節奏可以試試。
00:52:263 (1) - 忘了whistle?
00:54:504 (2) - 疊00:54:676 (3) 開頭比較好。
00:57:780 (1) - 忘了whistle?
01:02:090 (1) - 我覺得開頭是finish而不是whistle。
01:15:711 (1) - 忘了加whistle? 你這01:14:332 (1) 都加了

[Insane]

00:05:366 (1) - 我覺得用ctrl+g比較順呢，原先 00:04:849 (4,1) 有點扭。
00:23:469 (1) - 開頭加finish會有不錯的效果，重音。
00:25:366 (3) - 放在(277|287)比較順。
00:28:814 (1) - 理由同00:23:469 (1)
00:34:332 (1) - ^
00:39:849 (1) - ^
00:44:504 (2,3) - Ctrl+g比較好點。
01:02:090 (1) - 理由同00:23:469 (1)
01:03:125 (4) - 疊在01:04:332 (4) 會比較好flow.
01:04:504 (5) - 建議把這5跟6拉開一點，現在這樣有點擠。
01:26:401 (5,6,7) - 全選丟到(128|95)看看?
01:28:125 (6) - 加個finish做結束音效?

[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
4.射一星。
popner
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smallboat wrote:

嗨，泡泡，As ur PM req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

Stack Leniency不一致，Check No_Gu's diff. it's fine

[Easy]

00:23:469 (1) - 試試這邊開頭+個finish? 有重音。 (如果加了這個，把這音效音量調小) 同Insane，不想加finish
00:34:332 (1) - ^
00:48:125 (1) - 有聽到一點點輕的重音加個finish增強?
01:26:746 (1) - 如果這邊也加個finish，跟01:23:987 (1) 會有好的效果。

[Fycho's Normal] 00:12:263 這條綠線沒有必要

00:36:228 (3) - 開頭應該是在紅線? 我看Easy這個跟紅線要不要跟一下
00:41:745 (3) - ^

[Insane]

00:05:366 (1) - 我覺得用ctrl+g比較順呢，原先 00:04:849 (4,1) 有點扭。 还行，这里是故意做的flow break
00:23:469 (1) - 開頭加finish會有不錯的效果，重音。 这里没那么重所以就没加
00:25:366 (3) - 放在(277|287)比較順。 同上，音乐有断点，排列既然没跳，flow断一下没什么不好。。
00:28:814 (1) - 理由同00:23:469 (1)
00:34:332 (1) - ^
00:39:849 (1) - ^
00:44:504 (2,3) - Ctrl+g比較好點。 Indeed. Changed
01:02:090 (1) - 理由同00:23:469 (1)
01:03:125 (4) - 疊在01:04:332 (4) 會比較好flow. ok
01:04:504 (5) - 建議把這5跟6拉開一點，現在這樣有點擠。 ok
01:26:401 (5,6,7) - 全選丟到(128|95)看看? nope
01:28:125 (6) - 加個finish做結束音效? added

[Other]

1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
4.射一星。

Thanks for mod and star!
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki


From your request

  1. Black——My personal suggestions.
  2. Bold——Highly recommended.

[General]
  1. 把Easy的widescreen support还是没有去掉

[Easy]
  1. 00:13:125 (1) - 头上finish感觉更适合
  2. 00:15:021 (1) - ^
  3. 00:16:745 (3) - 尾巴也加个fin？
  4. 00:20:538 (1) - 头上fin？
  5. 00:23:469 (1) - 头上whistle
  6. 00:28:814 (1) - ^
  7. 00:29:677 (2) - ^
  8. 00:31:745 (1) - ^
  9. 00:32:952 (3) - 头clap?
  10. 00:34:332 (1) - 头whistle?
  11. 00:35:194 (2) - ^
  12. 00:37:263 (1) - ^
  13. 00:39:849 (1) - ^
  14. 00:42:781 (1) - ^
  15. 00:43:987 (3) - finish?
  16. 00:48:125 (1) - ^
  17. 00:50:883 (1) - ^
  18. 00:53:642 (1) - whistle?
  19. 00:59:159 (1) - finish?
  20. 01:01:228 (4) - 尾巴finish?
  21. 01:08:814 (3) - 头finish?
  22. 01:10:194 (1) - ^
  23. 01:12:952 (4) - ^ and NC
  24. 01:14:332 (6) - ^
  25. 01:17:090 (3) - whistle?
  26. 01:19:849 (3) - finish?
  27. 01:21:228 (1) - ^
  28. 01:25:366 (3) - ^
  29. 01:26:746 (1) - ^

[Fycho's Normal]
  1. 00:12:780 (1) - 尾巴fin?
  2. 00:12:780 (1) - ^
  3. 00:23:469 (1) - 头上补个whistle更好一点
  4. 00:40:711 (2) - 头whi?

[Gu's Hard]
  1. 00:13:642 (1) - 头上finish更好一点
  2. 00:15:021 (1) - ^
  3. 00:16:401 (1) - ^
  4. 00:19:159 (1) - ^
  5. 00:22:780 (3) - 头whi?
  6. 00:23:469 (1) - 头上补个whistle更好一点
  7. 00:25:883 (4) - ^
  8. 00:31:401 (4) - ^
  9. 00:36:918 (4) - ^
  10. 00:37:263 (1) - whistle
  11. 00:37:952 (1) - ^
  12. 00:42:435 (4) - 头上补个whistle更好一点
  13. 00:42:780 (1) - 头whi?
  14. 00:43:987 (1) - 头上finish更好一点
  15. 00:45:021 (4) - 头whi?
  16. 01:04:849 (1) - 头上finish更好一点
  17. 01:08:814 (1) - ^
  18. 01:10:194 (1) - ^
  19. 01:11:573 (1) - ^
  20. 01:14:332 (1) - ^
  21. 01:15:711 (1) - ^
  22. 01:17:090 (1) - ^
  23. 01:19:849 (1) - ^
  24. 01:21:228 (1) - ^
  25. 01:22:607 (1) - ^
  26. 01:25:366 (1) - ^
  27. 01:26:745 (1) - ^

[Insane]
  1. 00:13:125 (5) - 头上fin？
  2. 00:13:642 (1) - ^
  3. 00:15:021 (1) - ^
  4. 00:16:401 (1) - ^
  5. 00:18:642 (5) - ^
  6. 00:19:159 (1) - ^
  7. 00:20:538 (1) - ^
  8. 00:21:918 (1) - ^
  9. 00:23:469 (1) - 头上whi?
  10. 00:24:159 (3) - ^
  11. 00:24:676 (1) - ^
  12. 00:25:883 (4) - ^
  13. 00:26:228 (1) - ^
  14. 00:26:745 (4) - 尾巴whi?
  15. 00:28:814 (1) - 头上whi?
  16. 00:29:676 (3) - ^
  17. 00:31:401 (4) - ^
  18. 00:32:263 (4) - ^
  19. 00:32:952 (1) - ^
  20. 00:34:332 (1) - ^
  21. 00:35:194 (3) - whi?
  22. 00:35:711 (1) - 头上whi?
  23. 00:36:918 (4) - ^
  24. 00:37:263 (1) - whi?
  25. 00:37:780 (4) - 头上whi?
  26. 00:38:469 (1) - ^
  27. 00:39:849 (1) - ^
  28. 00:40:711 (4) - ^
  29. 00:41:228 (1) - ^
  30. 00:42:435 (5) - ^
  31. 00:42:780 (1) - ^
  32. 00:43:987 (1) - 头上fin?
  33. 00:46:745 (1) - 头上whi?
  34. 00:49:504 (1) - ^
  35. 00:59:159 (1) - 头上fin?
  36. 01:02:090 (1) - ^
  37. 01:06:401 (6) - fin?
  38. 01:08:814 (1) - 头上fin?
  39. 01:10:194 (1) - ^
  40. 01:11:573 (1) - ^
  41. 01:14:332 (1) - ^
  42. 01:15:711 (1) - ^
  43. 01:17:090 (1) - ^
  44. 01:19:332 (4) - 头上whi?
  45. 01:13:814 (4) - ^
  46. 01:08:297 (4) - ^
  47. 01:24:849 (4) - ^
  48. 01:19:849 (1) - 头上fin?
  49. 01:21:228 (1) - ^
  50. 01:22:607 (1) -
  51. 01:25:366 (1) - ^
  52. 01:26:745 (1) - ^

flow没啥问题啊打起来挺好的，嗯
popner
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看十感

Fixed setting in Easy.
Fycho
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Fycho

smallboat wrote:

[Fycho's Normal] 00:12:263 這條綠線沒有必要 fine.

00:36:228 (3) - 開頭應該是在紅線? 我看Easy這個跟紅線要不要跟一下 不想，我倾向于跟鼓点
00:41:745 (3) - ^

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

[Fycho's Normal]
  1. 00:12:780 (1) - 尾巴fin? 头上加了，尾巴再加吵
  2. 00:12:780 (1) - ^时间复制错了=。=
  3. 00:23:469 (1) - 头上补个whistle更好一点有finish了加不加了也听不出来
  4. 00:40:711 (2) - 头whi? ok


flow没啥问题啊打起来挺好的，嗯
thanks for modding
@popner，在00:40:711 (2) - 头上加个whistle即可。
Nyquill
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[Easy]
00:12:780 - 加个note?从00:13:125 (1) 开始的话感觉很奇怪。要是加的话往上面放个clap
00:13:125 (1) - 这个的尾可以有finish
00:14:159 (2) - 头因该有clap?
00:15:021 (1) - 头可以有finish.
00:15:883 (2) - 尾也可以有finish.
00:18:642 (2) - 尾可以有finish.多放一点hitsound会让图感觉活跃一些。。
00:20:538 (1) - 头
00:21:401 (2) - 尾
00:27:435 (3) - 改成1/1repeat因该会更好。。。
00:32:952 (3) - ＾
00:38:469 (3) - ＾
00:43:987 (3) - ＾
00:48:125 (1) -头放一个finish效果好。

eh actually thats it, let me know if you change anything.
popner
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Nyquill wrote:

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00:12:780 - 加个note?从00:13:125 (1) 开始的话感觉很奇怪。要是加的话往上面放个clap 超3.25星的原因，另外和前面转盘离得有些近
00:13:125 (1) - 这个的尾可以有finish ok
00:14:159 (2) - 头因该有clap? 有了
00:15:021 (1) - 头可以有finish. 有whistle
00:15:883 (2) - 尾也可以有finish. ok
00:18:642 (2) - 尾可以有finish.多放一点hitsound会让图感觉活跃一些。。 ok
00:20:538 (1) - 头 有whistle
00:21:401 (2) - 尾 ok
00:27:435 (3) - 改成1/1repeat因该会更好。。。 本来是1/1repeat，然后超3.25星了，然后就没有然后了。。
00:32:952 (3) - ＾
00:38:469 (3) - ＾
00:43:987 (3) - ＾
00:48:125 (1) -头放一个finish效果好。 added

eh actually thats it, let me know if you change anything.
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