1. True (5.49 stars, 1663 notes)

crabovan wrote:

Random mod from #modreq
00:03:992 (1) - move it to x:248 y:256 for better synergy with 00:00:847 (3,4) , and change 00:04:464 (3,4,5,6,7) this stream if you accept this.
no
00:21:759 (3) - move it to x:256 y:328, right to center of asis, also looks better for
00:22:074 (4). Rework 00:23:174 (2) stream after accepting.
done
00:35:910 (4,5,6) - make triangle from 4 start and 5+6 ends. (move 6 to x:284 y:8).
(5) blankedt head of (4).
00:36:696 (1,2) - to fit previous liine move them to x:156 y:128.
no they make triangle with end of 00:36:068 (5,6) -
01:03:112 (3) - move second square to x:37 y:246 (turn off grid snap).
done in another way
01:26:382 (4,10) - you can stack 4 end and 10 start.
done
02:02:074 (3) - no need to make slidertick silent.
lol. You can delete the green line and you'll know What that made.
02:32:891 (3) - make this slider more round for 02:32:420 (1) end - make fourth square,
move second square to x:356 y:136, move third square to x:260 y:148, move fourth square to x:224 y:68.
no This is better way for me
03:15:816 (1,2,3,4) - 1-2 is confusing compare to previous square, just make square rolling in another direction.
I tried many pattern, But this is best flow...
03:22:577 (1) - drum-hitnormal38 is a bit confusing, it prevents to hear song few seconds, maybe remove it?
reduced its volume
03:46:634 (7) - going out of screen (unranked), move it above.
done
03:56:382 (6,7) - this combo is unranked, change it.
done
06:51:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this stream is ugly, make it more round.
They are on accord, I don't have a will to change them now.

Also, BG too sad for this cheerful song.
Nice work, favouriting this map and waiting for its rank!

Akali wrote:

http://i.imgur.com/BExrQdy.jpg

what about this? Youtube background for this song is lucky star as well, not sure if vocal samples are from there but this one fits the song imo

Might do a little mod later, but just browsed through it and didn't find much to fix, nice map & great song

Urushi38 wrote:

Akali wrote:

http://i.imgur.com/BExrQdy.jpg

what about this? Youtube background for this song is lucky star as well, not sure if vocal samples are from there but this one fits the song imo

Might do a little mod later, but just browsed through it and didn't find much to fix, nice map & great song

Thank you for BG suggestion, but Original song from 今日の5-2. not lucky star...

Akali wrote:

Small low quality mod

00:12:797 (1,2,1) - shape of these seem too curved, doesn't look nice, music doesn't change, keep them similar to what's before
done
01:09:086 (7,8,1) - it's fine but overlapping jumps with slider like that might be slightly confusing, up to you
I think they are fine because they have same flow and rhythm.
01:19:149 (7) - deserves more impact imo, better with circles not a slider
done
01:40:218 (7) - nc
done
02:01:917 (2) - stack?
done
02:02:546 (4,5) - uneven ds for no reason, 02:03:174 (7) - blankets differently than 6
Keep DS, but fixed blanket.
02:19:998 (7) - stacking under short slider is meh, + it makes a stop then awkward-ish transition to 8, maybe stack it with 02:19:212 (4) -
done
02:29:904 (1,2,3) - kinda weird, look like you got cornered but nothing special in music on that part to make anything funky like that. Should play ok maybe
done
02:45:627 (3,4,1) - I find this ugly, angles between sliders aren't even, mb try to make it more regular rotations or some other pattern
Tried
03:16:445 (1) - deathstream seems a bit too hard compared to the rest of the map, I don't like it
I tried
04:02:986 (1) - that croud cheering hitsound sounds super cheesy >.<
I think they are nice...
04:58:882 (6) - consistent ds, 0,8 vs 0,87 out of nowhere
done
05:06:193 (2,3,4) - stacks? ctrl g every slider, make sure they have same position then ctrl+g back (not sure if ctrl+g doesn't move it slightly though)
done
05:12:797 (3) - nc or space this out, don't want to have players misread that after keeping combo for 5 minutes, you could even consider deleting 05:12:483 (2) -
I prefer NC.
05:58:080 (3) - blanket, move 2 up
done in my way.

Good luck with approval!

GyroX20 wrote:

From my M4M queue
[True]
00:48:646 (1) - Why NC here, the rest of them you did in intervals of 8
done
00:51:791 - Place a circle?
There is no sound I take
01:00:124 - ^
^
01:00:281 - ^
^
01:40:218 (7) - I suggest putting a new combo here
done
02:35:407 (2) - This slider is a little out of place
I don't think so...
02:43:426 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Please dont do this
no
02:48:457 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - ^
no
02:53:489 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - This is better than what you did before
There is not big difference.
03:22:577 (1) - 03:32:718 (8) you have a lot of mini streams but 03:32:797 (1) - 03:50:250 (1) you dont have any
Umm excuse me. I'm suck at English, I can't get what you wanna say.
03:38:772 (1) - Why NC here
Followed Lilycs.
04:05:344 (1) - A finish should not be here, it sounds wrong
I put them regularly. not so wrong IMO.
04:48:269 (2) - Finish at head of this slider
done
if you want, you can even put finishes where the claps are
06:16:319 (5) - NC to follow the pattern
done

Could use a little work in some places. Good Luck

1. pls check some unsnapped inherited points whether they are intentional or not
2. try to find better BG, current BG is too small which can be weird when stretched. http://puu.sh/dxRyX/2a75eae15d.png try to find some?
3. add audio leadin at least 2000ms
4. decrease all of custom slidertick sounds by 10% because they are little bit louder than other sounds
5. since there are many object on blueticks current OD setting may lead to so many 100s (even 50s) which most of players cannot handle them easily. i know this map is aiming for approval which means that it's fine to be mapped hard, but since most of patterns are quite hard enough, i recommend you to decrease OD setting. so consider increasing HP (for balance) by 1 and decreasing OD by 0.5 ~ 1
6. 00:51:948 - how about adding a note here? it seems that you followed the piano sound (i have no idea how to call it) when you map. if yes, you'd better add a note to fit with the piano sound perfectly. 00:52:105 (7) - changing this into 1/2 slider would be great too as alternative way
   
   examples

   
7. 01:06:728 (6) - add a clap on the starting point of this slider for consistency
8. 03:10:156 (3) - actually, i really expected defaul whsitle sounds (custom 2 soft whistle on your mapset) here, this part ,which needs a whistle on the starting point, has similar sounds like previous part. current sound is a bit weird to hear
9. 05:03:049 (12) - what about adding NC here? to indicate SV change
10. 05:48:961 (2,3) - reversing the rhythm is recommended. this would fit more nicely with the song imo
    
    for example

    
11. 05:53:049 - hmm try adding a note here, current rhythm feels too empty and this also good for emphasize the vocal
12. 06:11:288 (1) - i think current repeat slider sustains too long this can cause boring while playing, i'd prefer to split this into 3 sliders
    
    for example like this

    
13. 06:47:766 (6) - maybe you forgor to add whistle?
14. 06:54:134 (1) - current volume set hears too loud, try 30% volume instead?

HelloSCV wrote:

from my queue

[Insane]

1. pls check some unsnapped inherited points whether they are intentional or not
2. try to find better BG, current BG is too small which can be weird when stretched. http://puu.sh/dxRyX/2a75eae15d.png try to find some?
3. add audio leadin at least 2000ms
4. decrease all of custom slidertick sounds by 10% because they are little bit louder than other sounds
5. since there are many object on blueticks current OD setting may lead to so many 100s (even 50s) which most of players cannot handle them easily. i know this map is aiming for approval which means that it's fine to be mapped hard, but since most of patterns are quite hard enough, i recommend you to decrease OD setting. so consider increasing HP (for balance) by 1 and decreasing OD by 0.5 ~ 1
6. 00:51:948 - how about adding a note here? it seems that you followed the piano sound (i have no idea how to call it) when you map. if yes, you'd better add a note to fit with the piano sound perfectly. 00:52:105 (7) - changing this into 1/2 slider would be great too as alternative way
   
   examples

   
7. 01:06:728 (6) - add a clap on the starting point of this slider for consistency
8. 03:10:156 (3) - actually, i really expected defaul whsitle sounds (custom 2 soft whistle on your mapset) here, this part ,which needs a whistle on the starting point, has similar sounds like previous part. current sound is a bit weird to hear
9. 05:03:049 (12) - what about adding NC here? to indicate SV change
10. 05:48:961 (2,3) - reversing the rhythm is recommended. this would fit more nicely with the song imo
    
    for example

    
11. 05:53:049 - hmm try adding a note here, current rhythm feels too empty and this also good for emphasize the vocal
    No, I don't follow vocals on both parts. It make players confused
12. 06:11:288 (1) - i think current repeat slider sustains too long this can cause boring while playing, i'd prefer to split this into 3 sliders
    
    for example like this

    
    No, I put this as a little break. ofc It will be boring some players, but some players need them(like me. lol)
13. 06:47:766 (6) - maybe you forgor to add whistle?
14. 06:54:134 (1) - current volume set hears too loud, try 30% volume instead?

good luck for approval :>

sionKotori wrote:

nokds

source, 恐らく「妄殺オタクティクス」です
http://www.sharpnel.com/index-j.html

他の例から見ますと、sourceにアルバムタイトルを入れるのではなく、tagsに追加されてるのがほとんどですのでそれに習ったほうがいいかもしれません

ts8zs wrote:

00:20:895 (5) - del
00:23:410 (5) - ^
01:03:426 (4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2416843
01:10:030 (3,4,5,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2416857
>01:10:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2416861
>>01:11:759 (6,7,8,9) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2416863
01:40:140 - circle
01:40:769 - ^
01:24:810 (2) - blanket
03:20:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - use reverse
06:31:256 (1,2) - 3circles instead
06:56:728 - end hereI fixed only this