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Koalazy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年3月25日 at 上午 01:42:50

Artist: Monophobia Studio
Title: Suspense
Tags: OST cello cinematic drum piano audiojungle
BPM: 60
Filesize: 4870kb
Play Time: 02:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.54 stars, 92 notes)
  2. Hard (4.55 stars, 272 notes)
  3. Insane (4.85 stars, 374 notes)
  4. Normal (2.31 stars, 163 notes)
Download: Monophobia Studio - Suspense
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Feel the beat with the clock

~Please play with your SBs on~

All mapset done by myself
you can try DT if you feel it too slow for you :D
suggestions are appreciated! and thanks to all the players who tests ;)

ChocolaNeko
General
Tag可以在這個網頁的右邊找到一些 再加進去
那個是作者的audiojungle
自己聽聽看 覺得是曲風偏向哪種類型(哪種樂器出現次數最多) 就放哪些進去 (建議別全部放進去 不然量會太多)

Easy
01:27:150 (1) 和 01:28:150 (2) 這兩個物件
這樣擺(如下圖)好像節奏感好一些

(可是EASY難度就把物件擺在紅線上 不知道會不會偏難 自己斟酌看看吧)

Normal
看不出來哪裡有問題
有待高手幫忙

Insane
00:47:150 (4) 和 00:47:650 (5) 這兩個物件
試著這樣擺看看



大概就這樣了
mod技術頗差 還請多多包涵 (很怕越摸越爛啊....)
還是聽聽其他高手的建議吧....
Topic Starter
Koalazy

ChocolaNeko wrote:

General
Tag可以在這個網頁的右邊找到一些 再加進去
那個是作者的audiojungle
自己聽聽看 覺得是曲風偏向哪種類型(哪種樂器出現次數最多) 就放哪些進去 (建議別全部放進去 不然量會太多)

Easy
01:27:150 (1) 和 01:28:150 (2) 這兩個物件
這樣擺(如下圖)好像節奏感好一些

(可是EASY難度就把物件擺在紅線上 不知道會不會偏難 自己斟酌看看吧)

還不清楚能不能放紅線,所以先保留。

Normal
看不出來哪裡有問題
有待高手幫忙

Insane
00:47:150 (4) 和 00:47:650 (5) 這兩個物件
試著這樣擺看看


這個部分個人認為兩種節奏都OK,打起來的話這種比較好打,已做修改。

大概就這樣了
mod技術頗差 還請多多包涵 (很怕越摸越爛啊....)
還是聽聽其他高手的建議吧....

感謝你的mod! :)
OuO
我可能不能點出很明確的建議
我還是個mod新手

[Easy]
00:45:150 (4) - Easy難度可能有遮擋嫌疑
00:49:150 (3) - ^
01:04:650 (1) - SB需要調整(與insane相同Normal也有相同問題)
01:36:150 - 開始的SB大概要去除
01:51:150 - ^
02:33:150 (2) - Easy難度可能有遮擋嫌疑
02:57:150 - 開始的SB大概要去除(白藍紅)

[Normal]
00:25:150 (1) - 可以考慮包好一點<對(5)來說
像這樣

00:28:656 - 可以考慮放個物件
00:33:650 - ^
02:38:650 (3) - 移到x:104 y:216

[Insane]
02:24:150 (1) - white SB開始出現後就不會消失了




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kiai time考慮改成01:06:150 ~ 01:54:150 或 01:22:150 ~ 01:54:150
最後那三段kiai time保留
如果採用的話。
基本上都是挑小瑕疵!
另外吐槽
有insane好像還要做個Hard ?(聽說..

以下個人感覺(拖走
作圖做得比我好啊XD
我光一個Easy就可以抱頭燒整個下午www


祝好運 :D
Topic Starter
Koalazy

koiez123 wrote:

我可能不能點出很明確的建議
我還是個mod新手

[Easy]
00:45:150 (4) - Easy難度可能有遮擋嫌疑 已分開
00:49:150 (3) - ^ 已分開
01:04:650 (1) - SB需要調整(與insane相同Normal也有相同問題) SB已修正
01:36:150 - 開始的SB大概要去除 SB已修正
01:51:150 - ^
02:33:150 (2) - Easy難度可能有遮擋嫌疑 已分開
02:57:150 - 開始的SB大概要去除(白藍紅) SB已修正

[Normal]
00:25:150 (1) - 可以考慮包好一點<對(5)來說 已修正,這樣的確比較好看lol
像這樣

00:28:656 - 可以考慮放個物件 放上了
00:33:650 - ^ 放上了
02:38:650 (3) - 移到x:104 y:216 已修正

[Insane]
02:24:150 (1) - white SB開始出現後就不會消失了


這邊的話...做圖那時候我腦袋應該進水了,修改過應該會比較好了,已修正

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kiai time考慮改成01:06:150 ~ 01:54:150 或 01:22:150 ~ 01:54:150
最後那三段kiai time保留
如果採用的話。 Easy跟Normal都改上了01:06:150 ~ 01:54:150,Insane沒有修改因為太閃怕讀譜有困難,這樣放Kiai Time不知道會不會太長...有問題我再修正
基本上都是挑小瑕疵!
另外吐槽
有insane好像還要做個Hard ?(聽說.. 要Hard的話又會是場硬仗了...

以下個人感覺(拖走
作圖做得比我好啊XD
我光一個Easy就可以抱頭燒整個下午www


祝好運 :D

非常感謝你的Mod :)
Easy其實比較好做,無腦亂拉滑條,Insane我是坐在電腦桌前整整兩天弄出來的 :?
這首歌低BPM又有算是高潮的地方,所以做的跳了點,希望玩起來還能合意
真的非常謝謝幫忙Mod ;) !
Xinchii
Hihi ~ o/

from巴哈 XD

下面都是提出一些小意見,窩mod也不是很好,可以斟酌著看:P
其實我覺得你這張map已經挺強悍了lol
我自覺十分慚愧
[Insane]
  1. 00:50:650(3) - 建議把grid level調到最細就可以把這個Slider調得更對稱於中線 (nazi)
  2. 00:53:150(8,9,0) - 推薦可以在這段直線移動的note上,稍微把位置錯開一些
    這樣可以增加一些視線上的活潑度
    類似:
  3. 00:54:150(1) - ^
  4. 00:56:150(5,6) - 這兩個Slider的距離跟前面的(4)(5)和後面的(6)(7)之間的距離有稍微縮小的感覺
    可以將間距微調一些,試著把距離調得比較統一
  5. 01:03:150(4,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 這段的2.0x間距繞圈的梗可以微調成已中心為對稱的感覺
    這樣第7個減速Slider 01:04:650(1) - 就可以剛好放在中線上,嗯...個人是覺得擺在中線上會有更佳的強調效果啦:P (背後SB也要一起位移)
  6. 01:50:650(1) - 這個Slider的尾巴跟01:49:900(4) - 沒有重疊的很準
[Normal]
  1. 00:26:650(2) - 其實這顆Note我會比較推薦把他疊在00:24:650(6) - 的位置啦...
  2. 00:37:150(1) - 對Normal而言這段Combo有點太長了,可以在這邊加一個NC
    Normal的combo如果沒有要特別強調或打造梗或真的不好分combo的點的話,最好是控制在5~6以下這樣啦
  3. 01:04:150(1,1) - 如果Insane這邊的Slider(+SB)有想調到中線上的話,這邊也跟上吧~
  4. 01:47:650(2) - 同Normal第一條建議,可以試著疊在01:45:650(4) - 的位置上,畫面會比較乾淨

Oh,如果要拼Rank的話可能還需要一個Hard的難度喔:OOO
話說map這麼好,不拼拼看好可惜

以上
射星星加油~! :D
Topic Starter
Koalazy

leon1341414 wrote:

Hihi ~ o/

from巴哈 XD

下面都是提出一些小意見,窩mod也不是很好,可以斟酌著看:P
其實我覺得你這張map已經挺強悍了lol
我自覺十分慚愧
[Insane]
  1. 00:50:650(3) - 建議把grid level調到最細就可以把這個Slider調得更對稱於中線 (nazi)
    我調了半天,至少slider ball有對稱中間,就改成這樣子吧
    詳細的圖解真的幫了大忙! :)
  2. 00:53:150(8,9,0) - 推薦可以在這段直線移動的note上,稍微把位置錯開一些
    這樣可以增加一些視線上的活潑度
    類似:
    我試打了幾次,先調整成現在這版本的樣子,後來如果有想到其他排法再做微調
  3. 00:54:150(1) - ^
  4. 00:56:150(5,6) - 這兩個Slider的距離跟前面的(4)(5)和後面的(6)(7)之間的距離有稍微縮小的感覺
    可以將間距微調一些,試著把距離調得比較統一
    好看多了 :)
  5. 01:03:150(4,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 這段的2.0x間距繞圈的梗可以微調成已中心為對稱的感覺
    這樣第7個減速Slider 01:04:650(1) - 就可以剛好放在中線上,嗯...個人是覺得擺在中線上會有更佳的強調效果啦:P (背後SB也要一起位移)
    已修正
  6. 01:50:650(1) - 這個Slider的尾巴跟01:49:900(4) - 沒有重疊的很準
    已修正
[Normal]
  1. 00:26:650(2) - 其實這顆Note我會比較推薦把他疊在00:24:650(6) - 的位置啦...
    很細膩的排法呢
  2. 00:37:150(1) - 對Normal而言這段Combo有點太長了,可以在這邊加一個NC
    Normal的combo如果沒有要特別強調或打造梗或真的不好分combo的點的話,最好是控制在5~6以下這樣啦
    原來是這樣 :O!
  3. 01:04:150(1,1) - 如果Insane這邊的Slider(+SB)有想調到中線上的話,這邊也跟上吧~
    我忘記為甚麼他沒在中線上了,Anyway被揪出來真是太好了 :)
  4. 01:47:650(2) - 同Normal第一條建議,可以試著疊在01:45:650(4) - 的位置上,畫面會比較乾淨

Oh,如果要拼Rank的話可能還需要一個Hard的難度喔:OOO
話說map這麼好,不拼拼看好可惜

以上
射星星加油~! :D

大大真是個細膩的人呢..Map調整之後排列也美觀很多

看來真的需要Map Hard了阿...我現在完全沒頭緒lol
先做看看,感謝你的支持和Mod :D !
DreaM117er
From 巴哈~

久等了...


首先:
1.大大你缺少了Hard難度,是不合規定的
2.建議你把三個難度的Kiai Time條成一致


Insane
有些地方的音效顯得很吵,這個難度最明顯,因為你加了自己的元素進去,所以我會建議你先把某些地方的音量再降一點會比較好;還有在藍線結束的Slider,在藍線上加上綠線降低音量比較優。

最後就是,New Combo和音效都很亂,我會幫你MOD掉。

New Combo
點我打開
00:34:150 (1,1) - del NC
00:38:150 (1,1) - ^
00:42:150 (1,1) - ^
00:52:025 - 不用我多說明了吧,建議加綠線降低音量。後面若是還有的話我會略過不MOD。
00:53:150 (8) - NC
00:54:150 (1) - del NC
00:57:650 (1) - ^
00:59:650 (1) - ^
01:01:650 (1) - ^
01:03:150 (5) - NC
01:03:400 (1,1,1,1,1) - del NC
01:08:150 (1) - ^
01:10:650 (1) - ^
01:11:900 (1) - ^
01:13:150 (10) - NC
01:14:650 (1) - del NC
01:16:900 (1) - ^
01:21:150 (1) - ^
01:23:650 (1) - ^
01:34:650 (1) - ^
01:35:650 (1) - ^
01:39:650 (1) - ^
01:40:650 (4) - NC
01:42:150 (9) - ^
01:42:650 (1,1) - del NC
01:44:150 (4) - NC
01:50:650 (1,1) - 這是為了好看嗎??不然就是del NC
02:11:650 (1) - del NC
02:22:650 (1,1,1) - ^
02:27:150 (1) - ^
02:36:650 (1) - ^
02:38:650 (1) - ^
02:39:650 (1) - ^

音效
點我打開
00:35:150 (2) - 刪掉頭的finish
00:39:150 (2) - ^
00:43:150 (2) - ^
00:47:150 (4) - ^
00:50:650 (3) - 刪掉尾巴的finish
00:55:150 (4) - 刪掉頭的finish
00:58:650 (3) - 刪掉尾巴的finish
01:03:150 (4,1,1,1,1,1) - 全部的finish都刪掉
01:08:150 (1) - 刪掉頭的finish
01:12:150 (3) - ^
01:15:650 (3) - 刪掉尾巴的finish
01:18:650 (3,1,3) - 刪掉fnish
01:23:650 (1) - 刪掉尾巴的finish
01:28:150 (1) - 刪掉頭的finish
01:32:150 (6) - ^
01:34:650 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 刪掉finish
01:40:150 (3) - 刪掉頭的finish
01:44:150 (4) - ^
01:50:650 (1,1,1) - ^
02:12:150 (3) - ^
02:16:150 (1) - 刪掉finish
02:20:150 (1) - 刪掉頭的finish
02:22:650 (1,1,1) - ^
02:28:150 (1) - ^
02:32:150 (1) - ^
02:36:150 (1) - ^
02:38:150 (1) - 加finish


Normal
AR-1或-2,要不然不符合規定。

一樣是音效和少部分的New Combo
點我打開
00:34:150 (2) - 刪掉尾巴的finish
00:39:150 (4) - 刪掉finish
00:43:150 (3) - 刪掉頭的finish
00:47:150 (3) - ^
00:51:150 (4) - ^
00:55:150 (4) - ^
00:59:150 (3) - 刪掉finish
01:08:150 (3) - 刪掉頭的finish
01:12:150 (2) - ^
01:16:150 (3) - ^
01:20:150 (3) - ^
01:24:150 (5) - 刪掉finish
01:28:150 (5) - ^
01:31:650 (4) - 尾巴的finish刪掉
01:36:150 (1) - 頭的finish刪掉
01:40:150 (3) - ^
01:43:650 (2) - 刪掉尾巴的finish
01:48:150 (3) - 刪掉頭的finish
01:50:150 (1) - 加finish
01:52:150 (1) - 刪掉頭的finish
02:12:150 (2) - ^
02:16:150 (4) - 刪掉finish
02:20:150 (5) - ^
02:28:150 (3) - ^
02:32:150 (1) - ^
02:36:150 (6) - 刪掉頭的finish

New Combo為什麼從歌曲頭到第一段Kiai Time都做得很好,但後面就全亂了,照著第一段Kiai Time前的去做,都有共通點的。
抱歉如果全Mod會太棧版面 :o


Easy
Easy的Distance Spacing有點太寬了,你在Compose介面按住Alt在往右上角看就知道了

Easy全程都要開著Distance snap去做圖,這裡00:20:150 (4,1) 就不符合規定了

00:25:150 (1) - 其他的難度都沒有在這裡加Finish,這裡怎麼跑出來了??

Slider Velocity也太慢了吧= =|||,建議是在0.7~1.0之間跑

Beat snap divisor條成1/1去做,物件不用分得這麼開沒有關係

基本上Easy應該是要重做了 :( ,音效的話參照Normal的去設置(改過的)

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再提醒大大一次,缺Hard難度不符合規定,這很重要,要不然就是改變難度的名稱還有微調內容

以上,希望我有幫到你 :)
Topic Starter
Koalazy

m1223961117 wrote:

From 巴哈~

久等了...


首先:
1.大大你缺少了Hard難度,是不合規定的

製作中 :) 感謝告知
2.建議你把三個難度的Kiai Time條成一致

已修正


Insane
有些地方的音效顯得很吵,這個難度最明顯,因為你加了自己的元素進去,所以我會建議你先把某些地方的音量再降一點會比較好;還有在藍線結束的Slider,在藍線上加上綠線降低音量比較優。

最後就是,New Combo和音效都很亂,我會幫你MOD掉。

New Combo
點我打開
00:34:150 (1,1) - del NC 下面有解釋
00:38:150 (1,1) - ^下面有解釋
00:42:150 (1,1) - ^下面有解釋
00:52:025 - 不用我多說明了吧,建議加綠線降低音量。後面若是還有的話我會略過不MOD。降低音量了
00:53:150 (8) - NC已修正
00:54:150 (1) - del NC 00:55:150 (1) - 移到這邊,考慮到Followpoint
00:57:650 (1) - ^下面有解釋
00:59:650 (1) - ^明顯這裡和剛剛的Pattern是不同系,我認為NC是OK的,保留
01:01:650 (1) - ^下面有解釋
01:03:150 (5) - NC這裡是前面來回點擊和後面的變黑梗的交接處,如果NC了,會和前面的pattern斷掉關係,對後面沒影響;如果沒NC,前面的pattern接了,後面的梗也可以接的上,故保留
01:03:400 (1,1,1,1,1) - del NC下面有解釋
01:08:150 (1) - ^和接下來的反覆滑條對稱,故NC
01:10:650 (1) - ^下面有解釋
01:11:900 (1) - ^已修正
01:13:150 (10) - NC 已修正
01:14:650 (1) - del NC下面有解釋
01:16:900 (1) - ^已修正
01:21:150 (1) - ^已修正
01:23:650 (1) - ^下面有解釋
01:34:650 (1) - ^下面有解釋
01:35:650 (1) - ^下面有解釋
01:39:650 (1) - ^ 這邊配合下面的01:40:650 (4) 是相對的pattern
01:40:650 (4) - NC 所以這邊沒有NC
01:42:150 (9) - ^已修正
01:42:650 (1,1) - del NC下面有解釋
01:44:150 (4) - NC因為沒有修正前面的NC,所以這邊應該不需要改,保留
01:50:650 (1,1) - 這是為了好看嗎??不然就是del NC下面有解釋
02:11:650 (1) - del NC為什麼:O?
02:22:650 (1,1,1) - ^下面有解釋
02:27:150 (1) - ^已修正
02:36:650 (1) - ^已修正
02:38:650 (1) - ^下面有解釋
02:39:650 (1) - ^下面有解釋
有關NC的部分...我特地調白色是因為有速度的改變或是代表特殊的Spot,經過大大的NC建議之後我把所有的顏色都調整過了,但是可能不會採用一些部分
要進入黑暗的時候(變黑梗),設計上是將所有顏色表現出來,最後用白色收尾,所以一整串的NC不是亂做的,如果這樣真的有問題我會再進行修正
NC這樣會過亂嗎...


音效
點我打開
00:35:150 (2) - 刪掉頭的finish
00:39:150 (2) - ^
00:43:150 (2) - ^
00:47:150 (4) - ^
00:50:650 (3) - 刪掉尾巴的finish
00:55:150 (4) - 刪掉頭的finish
00:58:650 (3) - 刪掉尾巴的finish
01:03:150 (4,1,1,1,1,1) - 全部的finish都刪掉
01:08:150 (1) - 刪掉頭的finish
01:12:150 (3) - ^
01:15:650 (3) - 刪掉尾巴的finish
01:18:650 (3,1,3) - 刪掉fnish
01:23:650 (1) - 刪掉尾巴的finish
01:28:150 (1) - 刪掉頭的finish
01:32:150 (6) - ^
01:34:650 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 刪掉finish
01:40:150 (3) - 刪掉頭的finish
01:44:150 (4) - ^
01:50:650 (1,1,1) - ^
02:12:150 (3) - ^
02:16:150 (1) - 刪掉finish
02:20:150 (1) - 刪掉頭的finish
02:22:650 (1,1,1) - ^
02:28:150 (1) - ^
02:32:150 (1) - ^
02:36:150 (1) - ^
02:38:150 (1) - 加finish
我對音效完全不了解._.,以上都修正了

Normal
AR-1或-2,要不然不符合規定。
-1
一樣是音效和少部分的New Combo
點我打開
00:34:150 (2) - 刪掉尾巴的finish
00:39:150 (4) - 刪掉finish
00:43:150 (3) - 刪掉頭的finish
00:47:150 (3) - ^
00:51:150 (4) - ^
00:55:150 (4) - ^
00:59:150 (3) - 刪掉finish
01:08:150 (3) - 刪掉頭的finish
01:12:150 (2) - ^
01:16:150 (3) - ^
01:20:150 (3) - ^
01:24:150 (5) - 刪掉finish
01:28:150 (5) - ^
01:31:650 (4) - 尾巴的finish刪掉
01:36:150 (1) - 頭的finish刪掉
01:40:150 (3) - ^
01:43:650 (2) - 刪掉尾巴的finish
01:48:150 (3) - 刪掉頭的finish
01:50:150 (1) - 加finish
01:52:150 (1) - 刪掉頭的finish
02:12:150 (2) - ^
02:16:150 (4) - 刪掉finish
02:20:150 (5) - ^
02:28:150 (3) - ^
02:32:150 (1) - ^
02:36:150 (6) - 刪掉頭的finish
同上,對音效完全不熟,已全做修改
New Combo為什麼從歌曲頭到第一段Kiai Time都做得很好,但後面就全亂了,照著第一段Kiai Time前的去做,都有共通點的。
抱歉如果全Mod會太棧版面 :o
去除白色之後我看不出哪裡有亂掉@__@,01:54:150 - 已修正顏色

Easy
Easy的Distance Spacing有點太寬了,你在Compose介面按住Alt在往右上角看就知道了

Easy全程都要開著Distance snap去做圖,這裡00:20:150 (4,1) 就不符合規定了

00:25:150 (1) - 其他的難度都沒有在這裡加Finish,這裡怎麼跑出來了??

Slider Velocity也太慢了吧= =|||,建議是在0.7~1.0之間跑

Beat snap divisor條成1/1去做,物件不用分得這麼開沒有關係

基本上Easy應該是要重做了 :( ,音效的話參照Normal的去設置(改過的)

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再提醒大大一次,缺Hard難度不符合規定,這很重要,要不然就是改變難度的名稱還有微調內容

以上,希望我有幫到你 :)
非常感謝大大的Mod :)
提出的點都很詳細,多數是NC和音效的問題
NC的部分我使用的應該算頻繁,因為我不喜歡看到二位數插進來,經過一些修正希望有好一點,有關於變黑梗跟變速梗如果真的違反Rules我會修掉
音效我是完全沒概念,Normal的音效如果我沒有理解錯誤大大是把Finish的間距拉長了,如果是的話,Easy我就比照著做
現在先把Easy重做,預計不會花很多時間,做完之後要繼續完成Hard了
辛苦大大了! :)
Winek
Hello there, File Mod.

[General]
That kiai is weird, uh.

[Easy]
01:08:150 (2,3) - Same Y axis?
01:52:650 (3) - Ctrl + J Ctrl + H to reverse?

[Normal]
Fine I guess. :D

[Hard]
00:58:900 (4,1) - Disable Grid snap to stack the 2 correctly

[Insane]
Seem rather fine! :)

You shove me perfect beatmap x.x I can't mod that!
If you need another mod, feel free to call me again yeah i know my mod was just crappy
Topic Starter
Koalazy

Winek wrote:

Hello there, File Mod.

[General]
That kiai is weird, uh.

[Easy]
01:08:150 (2,3) - Same Y axis? Fixed
01:52:650 (3) - Ctrl + J Ctrl + H to reverse? Fixed

[Normal]
Fine I guess. :D

[Hard]
00:58:900 (4,1) - Disable Grid snap to stack the 2 correctly Fixed

[Insane]
Seem rather fine! :)

You shove me perfect beatmap x.x I can't mod that!
If you need another mod, feel free to call me again yeah i know my mod was just crappy
Thank you for the modding! :)
Oriance
Yo Random Mod, hope this helps :3 EDIT: I Shall MOD in blue for the leftovers

[General]
Please look at Ctrl + Shift + A, You have things that need to be fixed.

In order to make a preview point, just go to Timing and at the very bottom it'll say set current position as preview point

I like the SB outlook for this map, but I see some parts that are kind of awkward like 01:06:150 - 01:06:275 where the BG just pops back randomly, for the parts like those i suggest fade the black image out.

For the thing at 01:06:150 - 01:06:275, you should use a blur image of the background and scale it bigger while it fades away, it'll add more power to that. I can help you with this if you want owo


[Insane]
00:21:150 - I don't see why you did this 00:21:150 (1,2) but then did this 00:23:150 (5,6,7,8). Not really consistent. I recommend this:
176,300,21150,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,84,21650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,320,22150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,64,22650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,23150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,23650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,300,24150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,84,24650,1,0,0:0:0:0:

00:33:150 (1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - From here, whats with all these NC's and such? It breaks the consistency of the previous combos. (Look at the response at the bottom)
00:50:150 (1) - Add a whistle for consistency like you did here 00:34:025 (1), 00:38:150 (1), 00:42:150 (1)
00:54:150 (4) - ^
00:58:150 (1) - ^ on tail
01:03:400 (1,1,1,1,1) - Not sure if you could use NC's as a design, keep in mind that.
01:52:900 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - No reason for volume to lower
02:41:400 (1,1,1) - No reason for the volume to lower owo, music doesn't change at all. If you're going to keep this, 02:42:150 (1) lower this sound too for consistency with 01:52:900

Honestly I don't really know how to mod insanes due to my inexperience with design and such. From what I can testplay, I see no reason for the white sliders to be here (except for 01:04:650 (1)), for example can be this one here 01:23:650 (1), theres no changes in the music to the least. Overall, I like the mapset and i find it really fun, the only problems i see here are just the Combo and hitsounds consistencies. :o

[Hard]
00:21:150 (1,3) - Throughout the whole song, I believe i see no other slider like this so you should remove it to be consistent.
01:50:150 - 2 slider ticks at the same point, please remove one.
01:53:150 (4) - v
02:41:400 (1,1,1) - Same as Insane with the volume.

Similar two problems like insane, but as well I like this difficulty too. Not much problems with this mapset from what I see.

[Normal]
Alright, you should add the whistles in the beginning like what you did in Hard and Insane.
01:10:150 (5) - Add NC here for consistency with the other combos, make sure to remove combo at 01:11:150 if followed.
01:46:150 (1) - Really picky here, but I don't like how this is overlapped by the previous slider
02:30:150 (5) - Similar to 01:10:150 (5) and remove combo at 02:32:150 from here on, if you follow this combo, should follow the ones below as well.
02:32:150 (1) - remove NC
02:34:150 (1) - NC

Pretty solid, questioning the sliders though.


[Easy]
So with this difficulty, the combos are pretty lackluster around here unlike with your other diffs. For each combo, there is like a 4 second interval until it goes to the next combo. (ex. 00:17:150 (1,2,3,4) to 00:21:150 (1,2,3,4), should follow it like that).
01:01:150 (5) - Don't really know why, but this slider looks really awkward.
01:30:150 (1) - Picky again about this overlap

About this difficulty, again it's pretty solid. Can't really say anything to change it because it looks good. owo From what I can see though, I feel as if the DS should be a little bit bigger. Everything almost looks overlapped by a tinsy bit that it bothers me LOL. Also with the slider usages because they're so rare, but since its Easy and repeating the same sliders might be boring, it's okay for me o:


Phew, hope this helps xD.
Topic Starter
Koalazy

Oriance wrote:

Yo Random Mod, hope this helps :3

[General]
Please look at Ctrl + Shift + A, You have things that need to be fixed.
These need to be fixed

Ah sorry i don't know haw to set a preview point:__:mapping beginner?
Source and Tags all fixed

I like the SB outlook for this map, but I see some parts that are kind of awkward like 01:06:150 - 01:06:275 where the BG just pops back randomly, for the parts like those i suggest fade the black image out.

hmm...as for 01:06:150 - 01:06:275 the music suddenly arised so i think it's fine
and fixed some other black image fadings


[Insane]
00:21:150 - I don't see why you did this 00:21:150 (1,2) but then did this 00:23:150 (5,6,7,8). Not really consistent. I recommend this:
176,300,21150,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,84,21650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,320,22150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,64,22650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,320,23150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,64,23650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,300,24150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,84,24650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
looks better :3 so fixed
00:33:150 (1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1) - From here, whats with all these NC's and such? It breaks the consistency of the previous combos. (Look at the response at the bottom)
I designed white sliders as for speed changes or special part in map, or maybe i just put the NC back to the old versions (purple-white-purple, unlike purple-white-blue now)
if canceled the white slow sliders here then slow sliders after it may seemed to have "different colors in slow sliders"
i fixed it back to the old version colors to see people opinions :o

00:50:150 (1) - Add a whistle for consistency like you did here 00:34:025 (1), 00:38:150 (1), 00:42:150 (1) i totally don't know how to perfect my sound designs so fixed
00:54:150 (4) - ^ fixed
00:58:150 (1) - ^ on tail fixed
01:03:400 (1,1,1,1,1) - Not sure if you could use NC's as a design, keep in mind that. ok :(
01:52:900 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - No reason for volume to lower it might be too loud during the stream so just fixed some
02:41:400 (1,1,1) - No reason for the volume to lower owo, music doesn't change at all. If you're going to keep this, 02:42:150 (1) lower this sound too for consistency with 01:52:900 same here, fixed some

Honestly I don't really know how to mod insanes due to my inexperience with design and such. From what I can testplay, I see no reason for the white sliders to be here (except for 01:04:650 (1)), for example can be this one here 01:23:650 (1), theres no changes in the music to the least. Overall, I like the mapset and i find it really fun, the only problems i see here are just the Combo and hitsounds consistencies. :o

[Hard]
00:21:150 (1,3) - Throughout the whole song, I believe i see no other slider like this so you should remove it to be consistent. fixed the shape orz
01:50:150 - 2 slider ticks at the same point, please remove one. fixed
01:53:150 (4) - v similar to insane, fixed
02:41:400 (1,1,1) - Same as Insane with the volume. same as the insane, fixed

Similar two problems like insane, but as well I like this difficulty too. Not much problems with this mapset from what I see.

[Normal]
Will finish this tomorrow @_@, i have homework to do!

OK!,well thanks for your modding! I'll give a kudosu on this post after the normal and easy modding
Useful suggestions :)
Oriance
I will leave you off with this image and (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ (only one star. LOL)

RatedNC17
Hello~

Set a preview point for your map at 01:06:150. also your kiai placement is very wrong. There are some appropriate sections where kiai could be used nicely.

[Easy]
i don't know if it's just me but your spacing makes objects overlap with each other. How about a distance snap of 1.3?. also approach rate is a bit too fast for an easy -1

Overall nice diff though...
01:01:150 (5) - i question this sliders shape...
01:03:150 and 01:06:150 - remove this kiai i feel it shouldn't be placed here.
01:04:650 - lower the volume all the way to 5% (lowest volume) and give soft hitsounds. the sliders sound at this silence just kills it for me
01:06:150 - make a kiai start here and end it 01:22:025
01:22:150 - make a kiai start here and end it 01:38:025. also remove kiai at 01:36:150
01:38:150 - another kiai start here until 01:54:150. remove kiai from 01:50:150
02:19:150 (4) - NC (new combo)
02:22:150 to 02:26:150 - i'm not sure if kiai should be used only on spinners
Like what oriance said work on the combos

[Normal]
Kiai suggestions apply here. Also the volume suggestion applies here to.
00:39:150 (4) - NC
01:44:650 (3,1) - ugly overlap
01:48:150 (3) - the way this sliders shape is not the same as (1) bothers me...

[Hard]
Kiai suggestions apply here. Also the volume suggestion applies here to.
00:33:650 (1,1) - why NC on both of them? remove NC on 00:34:150 and 00:34:900
00:41:150 (1,1) - same as top
01:04:150 (1,1,1) - remove NC on these 3

[Insane]
Kiai suggestions apply here. Also the volume suggestion applies here to.
01:03:400 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - why so many nc's here?
01:32:150 (6,7,8) - ugly overlaps
01:36:150 (1,1,1,1) - less ncs >.<
01:43:900 (3,4) - whoa i'm not liking how 3 is placed right on top of 4. i would suggest moving theses
02:12:150 (3,4,5,6) - ugly overlaps
Topic Starter
Koalazy

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello~

Set a preview point for your map at 01:06:150. also your kiai placement is very wrong. There are some appropriate sections where kiai could be used nicely.
ok done the perview point though I don't really know how preview point works O__O;

[Easy]
i don't know if it's just me but your spacing makes objects overlap with each other. How about a distance snap of 1.3?. also approach rate is a bit too fast for an easy -1
i've done 1.3 before, it makes notes a little bit too far so maybe 1.2? and AR-1 done

Overall nice diff though...
01:01:150 (5) - i question this sliders shape... well..fixed it
01:03:150 and 01:06:150 - remove this kiai i feel it shouldn't be placed here. kiai fixed
01:04:650 - lower the volume all the way to 5% (lowest volume) and give soft hitsounds. the sliders sound at this silence just kills it for me i made a custom sound for the sliderslide here, maybe better now?
01:06:150 - make a kiai start here and end it 01:22:025 kiai fixed
01:22:150 - make a kiai start here and end it 01:38:025. also remove kiai at 01:36:150 kiai fixed
01:38:150 - another kiai start here until 01:54:150. remove kiai from 01:50:150 kiai fixed
02:19:150 (4) - NC (new combo) fixed
02:22:150 to 02:26:150 - i'm not sure if kiai should be used only on spinners hmm...the only difference is the stars popping up, well removed it
Like what oriance said work on the combos

[Normal]
Kiai suggestions apply here. Also the volume suggestion applies here to. kiai fixed and done the custom sound
00:39:150 (4) - NC fixed
01:44:650 (3,1) - ugly overlap when 01:46:150 (1) - appears 01:44:650 (3) - has already disappeared, so i think thats fine :?
01:48:150 (3) - the way this sliders shape is not the same as (1) bothers me... fixed~

[Hard]
Kiai suggestions apply here. Also the volume suggestion applies here to. kiai fixed and done the custom sound
00:33:650 (1,1) - why NC on both of them? remove NC on 00:34:150 and 00:34:900 i use white as a design of speed changes and special spots, ill fix it to the same design as insane here
00:41:150 (1,1) - same as top OK!
01:04:150 (1,1,1) - remove NC on these 3 removed01:03:900 (1,1,1) - and kept the white color

[Insane]
Kiai suggestions apply here. Also the volume suggestion applies here to. kiai fixed and done the custom sound
01:03:400 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - why so many nc's here? i was trying to use the design as when the background started to fade to black, the colors(NCs) pops out and white color gives it an end, is this design not allowed?
01:32:150 (6,7,8) - ugly overlaps plays well :? ?
01:36:150 (1,1,1,1) - less ncs >.< fixed >_<
01:43:900 (3,4) - whoa i'm not liking how 3 is placed right on top of 4. i would suggest moving theses no idea how to perfect the design because it plays fine :o
02:12:150 (3,4,5,6) - ugly overlaps i placed it here as a rest for players, not in a good looking i admit :(
thanks for your mod! :D
really appreciate that ;)
Bara-
Hi, Testplaya here, but first:
01:23:150 (1,2) - Sure this is allowed in Easy diff?
Please don't have SV (Slider Velocity) Changes in low diffs, like Easy and Normal. The max SV changer in Normal is 1.2. Please change.
The changes in Hard are too much. Change those to 1.5.
Insane is PERFECT!
BTW, LOVE your SB!


Good Map/Luck :)
Topic Starter
Koalazy

baraatje123 wrote:

Hi, Testplaya here, but first:
01:23:150 (1,2) - Sure this is allowed in Easy diff? im not sure :( , sorry if it's too complicated for easy, well fixed
Please don't have SV (Slider Velocity) Changes in low diffs, like Easy and Normal. The max SV changer in Normal is 1.2. Please change.
The changes in Hard are too much. Change those to 1.5.
the slow slider there may be too long if no SV changes there...are the "wiggle" sliders allowed in easy= =?
and normal SV changer fixed
hard SV changer fixed orz

Insane is PERFECT!
BTW, LOVE your SB!
thanks><!


Good Map/Luck :)

thank you for the test play!
i looked up the osu wiki and havent found some rules for easy,normal..etc
maybe i should find somewhere else :(
- Melody
♥ ~ Random Mod ~ ♥


: Must fix
: Suggestion


General ;

Your Background has a size of 1200x705 , the recommended size is 1024x768 or 1366x768
Disable Widescreen Support


Easy ;

00:59:150 (4) - Rotate by +92° (Clockwise) and Reverse Selection (Ctrl + G) & move it to : x208 y80
01:01:150 (5) - When you have done the mod from above, rotate this by +45° & move it to : x256 y240 to fix the DS
01:16:150 (3) - Ctrl + J , for the flow
01:18:150 (4) - ^
01:30:150 (1) - This looks ugly and it overlays a little bit, make it like this : 01:32:150 (2) - ^

Well, there are more sliders you can improve more.



Normal ;

00:48:150 (4) - Ctrl + G , looks better imo
01:33:150 (6,1) - Make them similar/symmetrical , copy (6) & paste it on the same place where (1) was
01:52:150 (1) - Delete Whistle Sound on the Slider Body, it sounds ugly
02:50:150 (4) - Finish
02:57:150 (1) - The reverse arrow shouldlook up & not down !



Hard ;

01:01:150 (1) - This blanket isn't very well
01:15:900 (2) - x308 y52 , for a better flow
01:21:650 (2) - Move the 2nd Sliderpoint to : x296 y144
02:57:400 (1,1) - Add Whistle, so it doesn't sound so "hard"



Insane ;

00:36:150 - Whistle
00:40:150 - ^
00:44:150 - ^
01:23:650 (1) - Player will think that this Slider have the same speed as 01:22:150 (1,2,3) - so it's unreadable, you should make the slider speed inconsistent
02:45:650 (5) - Ctrl + G , for a Jump
02:57:150 (1,1,1) - Add Whistle, so it doesn't sound so "hard"



That was it. ~ I like the storyboard. But you can improve your Slider Shapes & your flow in some parts a little bit more. Good Luck ~ ♥
Topic Starter
Koalazy

- Melody wrote:

♥ ~ Random Mod ~ ♥


: Must fix
: Suggestion


General ;

Your Background has a size of 1200x705 , the recommended size is 1024x768 or 1366x768 ok changed it to 1366x768 looks a little bit weird though :o
Disable Widescreen Support fixed!


Easy ;

00:59:150 (4) - Rotate by +92° (Clockwise) and Reverse Selection (Ctrl + G) & move it to : x208 y80 fixed
01:01:150 (5) - When you have done the mod from above, rotate this by +45° & move it to : x256 y240 to fix the DS fixed! though the DS made it x256 y248
01:16:150 (3) - Ctrl + J , for the flow fixed
01:18:150 (4) - ^ fixed :)
01:30:150 (1) - This looks ugly and it overlays a little bit, make it like this : fixed, looks great!
01:32:150 (2) - ^ fixed

Well, there are more sliders you can improve more.
sorry for my poor designing skills orz
ive looked for the strange sliders and tested it again and fixed some more flow problems



Normal ;

00:48:150 (4) - Ctrl + G , looks better imo agree with this, looks more vivid now
01:33:150 (6,1) - Make them similar/symmetrical , copy (6) & paste it on the same place where (1) was fixed
01:52:150 (1) - Delete Whistle Sound on the Slider Body, it sounds ugly fixed, and adjusted the timing points
02:50:150 (4) - Finish fixed
02:57:150 (1) - The reverse arrow shouldlook up & not down ! fixed!



Hard ;

01:01:150 (1) - This blanket isn't very well fixed
01:15:900 (2) - x308 y52 , for a better flow made 01:14:400 (9,2) and fixed
01:21:650 (2) - Move the 2nd Sliderpoint to : x296 y144 the old design looks better so keep it
02:57:400 (1,1) - Add Whistle, so it doesn't sound so "hard" fixed



Insane ;

00:36:150 - Whistle fixed!
00:40:150 - ^ fixed
00:44:150 - ^ fixed, sounds better
01:23:650 (1) - Player will think that this Slider have the same speed as 01:22:150 (1,2,3) - so it's unreadable, you should make the slider speed inconsistent i think it's still playable in this condition, and white color is the mark of it, so keep it!
02:45:650 (5) - Ctrl + G , for a Jump 02:45:650 (5) ~ 02:57:650 (1) - are for players to rest, they just passed the stream, and the song(playing) is going to the end. the design here may consider as a "stretch", so i prefer to keep it ;) i hope my english expression is good enough :(
02:57:150 (1,1,1) - Add Whistle, so it doesn't sound so "hard" fixed



That was it. ~ I like the storyboard. But you can improve your Slider Shapes & your flow in some parts a little bit more. Good Luck ~ ♥
thanks so much for the mod!
and i do need to improve the designing skills orz
have a good day!
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