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Black Raison d'etre - Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Weez
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on April-05-14 at 7:54:30 PM

Artist: Black Raison d'etre
Title: Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
Source: 中二病でも恋がしたい!戀
Tags: Chuunibyou demo Koi ga Shitai Ren Chu-2 Vanishment This season 2 Hinsvar Xinely Weezy
BPM: 167
Filesize: 8166kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3.19 stars, 104 notes)
  2. Hinely's Hard (4.94 stars, 227 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 335 notes)
  4. Normal (4.41 stars, 147 notes)
Download: Black Raison d'etre - Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
Download: Black Raison d'etre - Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Blast reality.
Burst it into shreds.
Banishment....THIS WOOOOOOOOOORLLLLLLLDDDDDDDDD

My 14th beatmap yaaay \o/
Easy: Weez
Normal: Weez
Hard: Hinsvar and Xinely
Insane: Weez
Kyouren
Can i make a Normal Diff?
Topic Starter
Weez

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Can i make a Normal Diff?
go for it ^_^ nvm I've decided to do it myself... But message me if you started please
Hinsvar
Done!

http://puu.sh/6M1hl.rar

Just place everything inside the folder :D
Topic Starter
Weez
Finally ready!
Ozato Fumika
Hi mod from modidng Q

lol no offense but I think you can find a better BG.. Rika looks so weird..

[General]
Hard diff too hard.
I really think there should be another hard diff. and call the current hard something else

[Easy]
00:53:190 (2,3) - blanket properly

[Normal]
OD-1
00:21:573 (3,4) - spacing
01:02:172 (3,4,5) - 01:02:711 (4) is off a bit
01:17:262 (1,2) - dem bluetick vocals but I think it's alright
01:26:423 (3,1,2,3) - 2 1/4 sliders?
01:27:142 (4) - make it a circle?

[Hard]
I think this is an insane map. dem spacing..
01:15:645 (2) - same shape as 01:14:387 (3)

[Insane]
00:01:274 (3) - crtl + g
00:21:034 (2,3) - too much spacing
00:27:861 (1,2) - blanket
00:29:118 (6,7) - ^
00:54:088 (4,1) - put these a little bit closer?
00:54:088 (4,1) - too much jump
01:26:603 (1,2) - make it 5 circles

Hope my mod helped~
Topic Starter
Weez

No Dap wrote:

Hi mod from modidng Q

lol no offense but I think you can find a better BG.. Rika looks so weird.. ....I like it

[General]
Hard diff too hard. naaaaw, I really think this is a sufficient hard diff. It may be difficult but it holds true to the hard name.
I really think there should be another hard diff. and call the current hard something else

[Easy]
00:53:190 (2,3) - blanket properly 2 was suppose to blanket just 1 only.

[Normal]
OD-1
00:21:573 (3,4) - spacing
01:02:172 (3,4,5) - 01:02:711 (4) is off a bit Whats so off about this?
01:17:262 (1,2) - dem bluetick vocals but I think it's alright
01:26:423 (3,1,2,3) - 2 1/4 sliders? I'll keep it as circles.
01:27:142 (4) - make it a circle?

[Hard]
I think this is an insane map. dem spacing..
01:15:645 (2) - same shape as 01:14:387 (3)

[Insane]
00:01:274 (3) - crtl + g Nope, too close to the previous note
00:21:034 (2,3) - too much spacing Purposely done that.
00:27:861 (1,2) - blanket Not suppose to blanket.
00:29:118 (6,7) - ^ (6) slider tail is blanketing (7)
00:54:088 (4,1) - put these a little bit closer?
00:54:088 (4,1) - too much jump
01:26:603 (1,2) - make it 5 circles Keeping this as is. I prefer 1/4 sliders.

Hope my mod helped~
Thanks for the mod
Hinsvar

No Dap wrote:

[Hard]
I think this is an insane map. dem spacing.. Not quite sure about this... We've always made our Hard diff to be this difficult (and we have five ranked Hard collab diffs), and no one ever complained about the difficulty. Will keep the difficulty as is for now.
01:15:645 (2) - same shape as 01:14:387 (3) Sure!
Thanks~

hue
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 02.Vanshment This World (TVS).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54807
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
Artist:Black Raison d'etre
ArtistUnicode:Black Raison d'etre
Creator:Weez
Version:Hinely's Hard
Source:中二病でも恋がしたい!戀
Tags:Chuunibyou demo Koi ga Shitai Ren Chu-2 Vanishment This season 2 Hinsvar Xinely Weezy
BeatmapID:366659
BeatmapSetID:144190

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

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412,256,54986,6,0,P|408:168|312:120,1,187.5,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,196,55525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,196,55705,2,0,B|196:224|196:224|136:176|72:204,1,187.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,296,56244,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,372,56423,6,0,P|224:352|260:284,1,140.625,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,252,56783,2,0,L|352:248,1,93.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,216,57142,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,216,57322,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,340,57501,2,0,P|316:352|260:332,1,93.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,208,57861,6,0,B|160:160|160:160|176:108,1,93.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,204,58220,2,0,B|328:252|328:252|312:304,1,93.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,348,58579,2,0,P|68:316|28:236,1,187.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,124,59118,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,200,59298,6,0,P|224:212|288:148,1,140.625,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,120,59657,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,44,59837,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,140,60016,2,0,P|56:188|68:244,1,93.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,324,60375,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,284,60555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,348,60735,6,0,P|400:256|388:160,2,187.5,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,352,61633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,352,61813,2,0,P|224:312|232:256,1,93.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,268,62172,6,0,P|444:240|480:172,2,140.625,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,212,62890,2,0,P|260:164|268:112,1,93.75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,36,63250,2,0,L|444:36,1,93.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,172,63609,5,2,0:0:0:0:
484,180,63968,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,180,64328,5,2,0:0:0:0:
424,84,64507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,188,64687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,296,64867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,160,65046,6,0,P|164:172|112:264,1,187.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,344,65585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,344,65765,2,0,B|240:360|240:360|292:316|360:324,1,187.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,360,66304,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,224,66483,6,0,B|376:168|424:124|424:124|352:76,1,187.5,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,40,67022,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,132,67202,2,0,P|120:152|52:132,1,140.625,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,120,67561,2,0,L|40:212,1,93.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,308,67920,6,0,B|152:336|152:336|192:312|252:320,2,140.625,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,204,68639,2,0,P|48:160|64:100,2,93.75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,268,69178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,69358,6,0,P|372:224|444:160,1,187.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,104,69896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,60,70076,2,0,P|192:52|136:80,1,93.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,164,70435,2,0,P|260:172|316:144,1,93.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,88,70795,6,0,P|132:172|184:244,1,187.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,316,71334,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,168,71513,2,0,L|36:172,1,187.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,276,72052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,316,72232,6,0,L|224:316,1,93.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,236,72591,2,0,L|184:236,1,93.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,152,72950,2,0,L|264:152,1,187.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,148,73489,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,248,73669,6,0,L|384:368,1,93.75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,236,74028,2,0,L|192:280,1,93.75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,152,74387,2,0,P|360:108|436:148,1,187.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
357,208,74926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,75106,6,0,P|160:264|92:252,2,93.75,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,152,75645,2,0,P|360:108|436:148,1,187.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,244,76184,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,332,76364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,324,76543,6,0,P|224:356|128:320,1,187.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,260,77082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,160,77262,2,0,L|256:160,1,140.625,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,268,77711,2,0,L|134:268,1,93.75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,60,78340,5,4,0:0:0:0:
448,60,78519,2,0,P|460:104|452:168,1,93.75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,244,78878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,284,79058,2,0,B|228:308|152:260|84:280,1,187.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,192,79777,6,0,P|344:120|304:16,2,187.5,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,232,80675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,340,80855,6,0,B|384:344|400:288|400:288|448:328|480:280,1,187.5,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,281,81573,2,0,L|488:184,1,93.75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,184,81932,2,0,L|328:80,1,93.75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,90,82471,5,2,0:0:0:0:
240,160,82651,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,84,82831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,264,83010,6,0,P|196:308|112:300,2,140.625,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,83729,6,0,P|248:124|268:88,1,75,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,80,84088,2,0,P|404:156|380:240,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,284,84627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,284,84807,2,0,L|220:288,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,184,85166,6,0,P|112:112|144:24,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,200,85884,2,0,P|400:272|368:360,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,364,86423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,292,86603,5,2,0:0:0:0:
272,212,86783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,364,86962,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,192,87142,2,0,P|160:120|212:40,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Ami
Hello from my queue~
Im modding with grid snap 4.

[General] Disable Widescreen Support & Letterbox.

[Easy] lol cs2 ok. Check AiMod
Hp & od -1
Spacing is a bit weird D:
00:32:262 (1,2,3,4) - rythmn are weird, Map with Beat Snap Divisor 1/1
00:52:112 (1,2,3) - make 2 blankets
At kiai Time: Hitsounds are a bit too loud
01:23:729 (1) - this spinner comes too fast

[Normal] Its a bit too hard for a Normal map.
00:03:250 (1,2) - flows bad
00:18:519 (2,3) - its a bit confusing
00:36:124 (1,2,3) - looks/flows bad
01:10:795 (3,4,5,6) - too hard/confusing
01:17:262 (1,2) - sounds weird
01:26:423 (3,1,2,3,4) - too hard.

[Hard] Nice diff.
00:19:058 (1,2) - why 1/4?
00:20:316 (7) - ^

[Insane]
00:27:861 (1) - copy this slider and paste it there: 00:28:220
00:29:118 (6,7) - copy (7) and paste it on (6). looks better
00:38:280 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/6Tnv9.jpg ?
00:42:052 (1) - http://puu.sh/6TnxA.jpg try to make this slider like this, looks better :3
01:10:795 (1,2,3,4) - It fits the Music but its weird to play
01:14:387 (5) - looks ugly
01:15:465 (3) - ^

Map needs more work, but it can be improve!
Topic Starter
Weez

Ami wrote:

Hello from my queue~
Im modding with grid snap 4.

[General] Disable Widescreen Support & Letterbox.

[Easy] lol cs2 ok. Check AiMod
Hp & od -1 Nope, it seems like its low enough
Spacing is a bit weird D:
00:32:262 (1,2,3,4) - rythmn are weird, Map with Beat Snap Divisor 1/1 Don't want this to be a generic 1/1 easy map though
00:52:112 (1,2,3) - make 2 blankets
At kiai Time: Hitsounds are a bit too loud Iffy about this one. I'll see what others have to say about it.
01:23:729 (1) - this spinner comes too fast Slight change. increased the duration of the spinner so players have more time to complete the spinner.

[Normal] Its a bit too hard for a Normal map.
00:03:250 (1,2) - flows bad
00:18:519 (2,3) - its a bit confusing Don't find this super confusing. Challenging yes, confusing no.
00:36:124 (1,2,3) - looks/flows bad
01:10:795 (3,4,5,6) - too hard/confusing
01:17:262 (1,2) - sounds weird Don't want to add notes to the blue ticks and it seems good to me :S
01:26:423 (3,1,2,3,4) - too hard.

[Hard] Nice diff.
00:19:058 (1,2) - why 1/4?
00:20:316 (7) - ^

[Insane]
00:27:861 (1) - copy this slider and paste it there: 00:28:220
00:29:118 (6,7) - copy (7) and paste it on (6). looks better Don't find this better compared to what I intended :T
00:38:280 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/6Tnv9.jpg ?
00:42:052 (1) - http://puu.sh/6TnxA.jpg try to make this slider like this, looks better :3
01:10:795 (1,2,3,4) - It fits the Music but its weird to play Work in progress for this part...
01:14:387 (5) - looks ugly
01:15:465 (3) - ^

Map needs more work, but it can be improve!
Thanks for the mod
[Twinkle]
NM request from my Q

[General]
nice BG :D

[Easy]
DS 1.0 might be better ;\
00:12:411 (5) - DS of this should be 1.2
00:29:118 (5,1) - overlap
01:01:813 (2,3) - make it like this?

[Normal]
DS for normal is 1.0 even lower than easy, you may make it higher.
00:45:286 (5,6) - maybe its better
01:24:447 (2) - add a note before this

[Hinely's Hard]
fine. found nothing to talk

[Insane]
00:29:118 (6,7) - these two sliders not fit, make it the same?
00:43:220 (4,5,6,1) - hard to read and too hard
01:00:465 (4,5,6) - not straight or meant to?
01:22:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think u should arrange these notes in order.
01:26:603 (1,2,3,4) - put jump here may fit the rhythm better
Topic Starter
Weez

[Twinkle] wrote:

NM request from my Q

[General]
nice BG :D

[Easy]
DS 1.0 might be better ;\ Would have to disagree on this. I like my easy diffs spaced out. I've done them before.
00:12:411 (5) - DS of this should be 1.2
00:29:118 (5,1) - overlap
01:01:813 (2,3) - make it like this?

[Normal]
DS for normal is 1.0 even lower than easy, you may make it higher. Just because there is an increase in difficulty doesn't always mean more spacing.
00:45:286 (5,6) - maybe its better
01:24:447 (2) - add a note before this Nope, doesn't fit the music or the diff imo

[Hinely's Hard]
fine. found nothing to talk

[Insane]
00:29:118 (6,7) - these two sliders not fit, make it the same?
00:43:220 (4,5,6,1) - hard to read and too hard
01:00:465 (4,5,6) - not straight or meant to? Suppose to follow the flow of the slider.
01:22:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think u should arrange these notes in order. This is purposely done to pose for a difficult jump.
01:26:603 (1,2,3,4) - put jump here may fit the rhythm better emmm if iffy about that suggestion
thanks for the mod :D
arviejhay
hi from my modding queue

Normal
00:08:998(1) - move this slider to x:92 y:52
00:34:328(5) - move this slider to x:192 y:128 (stack)
00:47:621(1),(2) - move this circle and slider to x:164 y:296
01:11:154(3) - slider end - add clap
01:11:513(5) - slider start - add clap

sorry for short mod
good luck mapping
10crystalmask01
Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿
[General]
*mp3 sounds a bit muffled if you ask me. Can you find another one, with a higher quality?

[Easy]
00:26:962 (3,4) - Distance snap here.
00:01:274 (2,1) - Either stack the note on the tail or move apart, please.
00:15:465 (2) - Reshaped slider for better flow:

472,272,15465,2,0,P|408:284|352:352,1,142.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:26:244 (1) - Add finish
00:37:741 (1,4) - Ew, another overlap.
Please, fix.
00:52:112 (1,2,3) - Better blanket for 00:53:190 (2) - :
256,292,52112,6,0,P|168:332|84:296,1,190,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,220,53190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,128,53549,2,0,P|168:104|236:128,1,142.5,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:15:106 (1) - Friendly suggestion - you can blanket 01:14:747 (4) - with this slider.
72,180,75106,6,0,P|136:144|208:156,1,142.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Normal]
00:13:310 (7) - Need to be moved away from 00:12:411 (6) - . Plus, a straight slider may be more fitting for the flow here:

4,244,13310,2,0,L|91:95,1,172.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:16:364 (5) - Sounds off. Remove the reverse, and add a note at 00:16:902 so it hits the 'e'
00:24:627 (8,1) - Move apart, the way they're positioned so closely to each other creates this crowded look.
00:33:250 (3,4) - Unstack, it ruins the flow consistency.
00:34:867 (6) - Needs to blanket 00:36:124 (1) - better.
192,128,34867,2,0,P|304:140|332:300,1,287.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:01:813 (2,3) - Needs better blanket...
01:06:483 (1,2) - ^

[Hinely's Hard]
AR - 1?
01:00:735 (1) - Curve it so that it isn't overlapping 01:02:172 (1) - ,but instead is blanketing the head.
388,348,60735,6,0,P|440:304|388:188,2,187.5,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:02:890 (2) - Can you flip this, so it isn't creating the repetitive curve from 01:01:813 (3) - ?

[Insane]
00:03:250 (1,2,3) - Move objects higher, mainly so that 00:03:250 (1) - isn't touching 00:02:531 (7) -
00:26:244 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:28:220 (2) - Move to 40:188 for better blanket.
00:31:992 (1) - Add finish.
00:40:435 (7) - Add drum-clap
00:43:310 (5) - ^
00:44:747 (4) - ^
00:46:184 (5) - ^
00:47:621 (1) - ^
00:49:058 (8) - ^
00:54:088 (4) - I personally don't think a slider is needed here, because what does it cover in this part? A note would be just fine.

Overall, I'd say blanketing needs improving. But, the map still looks okay
Good luck.
Topic Starter
Weez

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿
[General]
*mp3 sounds a bit muffled if you ask me. Can you find another one, with a higher quality? I'll see about this. Seems ok to me

[Easy]
00:26:962 (3,4) - Distance snap here.
00:01:274 (2,1) - Either stack the note on the tail or move apart, please.
00:15:465 (2) - Reshaped slider for better flow: Did it a different way

472,272,15465,2,0,P|408:284|352:352,1,142.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:26:244 (1) - Add finish same reason as in Insane
00:37:741 (1,4) - Ew, another overlap. Only overlapping in the Editor. Its alright in play
Please, fix.
00:52:112 (1,2,3) - Better blanket for 00:53:190 (2) - : This is already blanketed to the way I want it to be :T
256,292,52112,6,0,P|168:332|84:296,1,190,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,220,53190,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,128,53549,2,0,P|168:104|236:128,1,142.5,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:15:106 (1) - Friendly suggestion - you can blanket 01:14:747 (4) - with this slider. Not intended to be a blanket here.....
72,180,75106,6,0,P|136:144|208:156,1,142.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Normal]
00:13:310 (7) - Need to be moved away from 00:12:411 (6) - . Plus, a straight slider may be more fitting for the flow here: Don't like the straight idea part

4,244,13310,2,0,L|91:95,1,172.5,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:16:364 (5) - Sounds off. Remove the reverse, and add a note at 00:16:902 so it hits the 'e'
00:24:627 (8,1) - Move apart, the way they're positioned so closely to each other creates this crowded look.I don't find it clustered really. This is a part that is suppose to be a slight increase in difficulty.
00:33:250 (3,4) - Unstack, it ruins the flow consistency.
00:34:867 (6) - Needs to blanket 00:36:124 (1) - better.
192,128,34867,2,0,P|304:140|332:300,1,287.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:01:813 (2,3) - Needs better blanket... Not intended to blanket. Its suppose to be a diagonal flow through 1,2,3
01:06:483 (1,2) - ^ not intended to be a blanket.

[Insane]
00:03:250 (1,2,3) - Move objects higher, mainly so that 00:03:250 (1) - isn't touching 00:02:531 (7) -
00:26:244 (1) - Add finish on the head. I don't find this to be fitting.
00:28:220 (2) - Move to 40:188 for better blanket. Not even suppose to be a blanket here
00:31:992 (1) - Add finish. Same as before.
00:40:435 (7) - Add drum-clap Sorry but I really hate how those drums sound.
00:43:310 (5) - ^
00:44:747 (4) - ^
00:46:184 (5) - ^
00:47:621 (1) - ^
00:49:058 (8) - ^
00:54:088 (4) - I personally don't think a slider is needed here, because what does it cover in this part? A note would be just fine.

Overall, I'd say blanketing needs improving. But, the map still looks okay Blanketing is not the only pattern you can do in osu!!! Gotta see if something is done to keep the flow of the diff in check. Thats my little tidbit.
Good luck.
thanks for the mods!!

As for arviejhay: I couldn't really understand where you were going with the mod. You should note which part of the slider needs to be moved. Try to be as clear as possible when communicating mods.
10crystalmask01
Ahh, sorry :| I've overestimated this map, I guess.
Topic Starter
Weez

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ahh, sorry :| I've overestimated this map, I guess.
No no, even though I may at first don't apply some of your mods, I still keep them in mind always!! I do that for everyone!! :D
pkk
From my modding queue the ethereal horizon~

Greetings, Wicked Lord Shingan. It is I, DARKUU FUHLAAAME MASTERRRRRRRR!!!!!! Heed my advice and I shall once again guide you towards the ethereal horizon. Are you ready?

Blast reality.

Burst it into shreds.

Banishment....THIS WOOOOOOOOOORLLLLLLLDDDDDDDDD


wow that was embarassing

[Easy]
For easy difficulty, it's better to keep as many notes as possible on the white ticks as it makes the map easy to read for beginners. If you switch back and forth from white to red ticks, it will be hard to read.

00:12:232 (5) - I feel that you should move this back to the white tick and extend it to the next white tick. Even though you did it on the red tick to match the guitar, I feel it is better this way on the beat, and it also keeps the hitsounds consistent.

00:13:310 (6) - add the clap hitsound to the end to match the rest of this section

00:17:980 - this is my favourite part of the song :D (the actual music)

00:17:980 (1,2) - you can keep all of this part on the white ticks. The reason for this is that it will be easier to read, but mainly because the gap between 00:18:878 (2) - and 00:20:495 (1) - feels awkward. I propose extending (1) to the white tick and moving (2) to the next white tick.
Also, if you do apply the change, you might want to change the shape of slider (1) to something more fun like a wavy slider. I tested this out and it feels better to play~

00:24:627 (7,1,2,1,2) - this part is a bit hard for beginners to read, mainly because you put some of the notes on red polarity, or on the red ticks. I rearranged some of the notes to make it easier to play while still matching the beat and music, please consider this channge:

00:34:148 (4,5) - make sure you space this properly! Run over your song again with distance snap and make sure it's the same throughout the song, especially since this is an easy difficulty.

00:34:148 (4) - also, were you aiming to make this straight? If you were, it's a little slanted to the left, you can use grid snap to make it straight if you want.

01:07:561 (2,3) - you should fix up the flow here, I suggest moving (3) down a bit so that the player can smoothly transition from 1 to 3 in a nice, curved line.
01:10:795 (3) - for same reasons as above, you should change this up a bit, I suggest making it less of a sharp curve
01:14:747 (4,1) - this is a great opportunity for you to blanket these notes and make it look nicer
01:18:340 (1,2) - this part doesn't match the music that well, try keeping them both on white ticks and adding a note after the (2) I feel that the (3)(4)(5) go very well with the vocal at that part~

[Normal]
00:03:250 (1) - distance snap is not 1.0x, but it looks like you did that so (3) would fit. You can still fit (3) in if you move it up a bit. It's important that you have the same distance snap throughout the song for normal~ You can have different distance snap, but it has to make sense, like during kiai time or something.

00:08:280 (4) - I think this would fit better as a repeat slider. If you make a repeat slider, you'll have to find a way to place (1) so that it looks nice, though.

00:16:004 (4,5,6) - this part feels a bit weird to me, partly because of the timing on the repeat slider (it starts on a red tick). I changed it a bit and it sounds better to me this way:

00:24:627 (8,1) - try to avoid this overlap to make it look neater

00:26:244 (1,2,3) - flow here could be better, you can try making the straight slider curved. Here is one suggestion:
00:26:962 (3,4) - to make it look nicer, you can blanket these two
00:29:118 (6,2) - since these overlap, you can make it look nicer if you move (2) a bit so that the end stacks with the end of (6). This also helps (2) flow better into (3), as it curves into (3) as opposed to being a straight slider then jumping straight into (3).
00:31:274 (3,1) - I feel that it sounds better if you keep them on white ticks:. It looks like you stretched (3) to match the vocal, but I feel that it makes the song have a dragging along feeling and not very 'crisp', maybe it's just me.

00:34:867 (6,1) - try to blanket this according to the approach circle:
01:06:483 (1,2,3) - again, you want to go for a nice blanket. Note that you will have to move (1) up a bit so that (3) isn't touching the bottom of the screen.

[Hinley's Hard]
It might be cool if you could have the pictures Hinsvar and Xinley slowly move across the screen somehow, right now it looks sort of static. Maybe you could have Hinsvar's signature slowly make its way to the bottom/right of the screen, then Xinley's signature slowly move left/to the top, or something like that~

00:19:417 (2) - looks like somebody forgot to extend this to the next red tick :oops:

00:19:777 (3,1) - you can try stacking these

00:28:938 (5,1,2) - make sure the spacing is the same! If nothing, I would have expected the jump to be between (1) and (2), not (5) and (1) because of the emphasis on the vocal suggesting a jump.

01:04:328 (1) - I think that this would work better if you didn't stack it, but overlap it instead like you did with (1) and (2)

01:07:561 (4,2) - think this would look neater if you stacked the tail of (4) with the head of (4)

[Insane]
I would prefer a higher slider velocity for insane, something like 1.90 or 2.00 but that's just my preference.

00:39:537 (3,4,5) - to make this part flow better and match the curvy pattern, I would suggest stacking (4) with (5). You'll have to adjust the spacing for the notes in the pattern though.

00:43:489 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - just a suggestion to make the flow better:

move (2) down so it is parallel with the middle of (3). flip (3) (Ctrl + g), and ctrl+g each of 00:44:926 (1,2,3) -

01:17:531 (2,3,4,5) - maybe you can make this an arch from (1) to (6) instead of a straight line, as the (1) slider suggests an upwards motion, but you instead have a flat arch stream.

Nice song! ...but why isn't Rikka's other eye yellow? Could she have awoken the true power of The Tyrant's Eye?!?!?!?!

If you have any questions about any of the suggestions I made, do not hesitate to ask (put your question in a different colour or something when you reply) Have fun mapping! ...also, one more thing......

STOP CHUUNI ABUSE!
Topic Starter
Weez

pkmnyab wrote:

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Blast reality.

Burst it into shreds.

Banishment....THIS WOOOOOOOOOORLLLLLLLDDDDDDDDD


wow that was embarassing

[Easy]
For easy difficulty, it's better to keep as many notes as possible on the white ticks as it makes the map easy to read for beginners. If you switch back and forth from white to red ticks, it will be hard to read. I would disagree here. You can make an easy diff that follows both the white and red ticks. Just have to know when and how to implement them. I really hate easy maps that only follow the white ticks, as it gets boring having the same 1/1 rhythm over and over again.

00:12:232 (5) - I feel that you should move this back to the white tick and extend it to the next white tick. Even though you did it on the red tick to match the guitar, I feel it is better this way on the beat, and it also keeps the hitsounds consistent. I'd rather keep following the guitar here.

00:13:310 (6) - add the clap hitsound to the end to match the rest of this section Doesn't really fit.

00:17:980 - this is my favourite part of the song :D (the actual music)

00:17:980 (1,2) - you can keep all of this part on the white ticks. The reason for this is that it will be easier to read, but mainly because the gap between 00:18:878 (2) - and 00:20:495 (1) - feels awkward. I propose extending (1) to the white tick and moving (2) to the next white tick. Changed differently
Also, if you do apply the change, you might want to change the shape of slider (1) to something more fun like a wavy slider. I tested this out and it feels better to play~ Keeping it a straight slider to maintain flow.

00:24:627 (7,1,2,1,2) - this part is a bit hard for beginners to read, mainly because you put some of the notes on red polarity, or on the red ticks. I rearranged some of the notes to make it easier to play while still matching the beat and music, please consider this channge:

00:34:148 (4,5) - make sure you space this properly! Run over your song again with distance snap and make sure it's the same throughout the song, especially since this is an easy difficulty. ...but its fine....might have an outdated version??

00:34:148 (4) - also, were you aiming to make this straight? If you were, it's a little slanted to the left, you can use grid snap to make it straight if you want.purposely done

01:07:561 (2,3) - you should fix up the flow here, I suggest moving (3) down a bit so that the player can smoothly transition from 1 to 3 in a nice, curved line.
01:10:795 (3) - for same reasons as above, you should change this up a bit, I suggest making it less of a sharp curve
01:14:747 (4,1) - this is a great opportunity for you to blanket these notes and make it look nicernope I like the direction that I have currently
01:18:340 (1,2) - this part doesn't match the music that well, try keeping them both on white ticks and adding a note after the (2) Changed differently I feel that the (3)(4)(5) go very well with the vocal at that part~

[Normal]
00:03:250 (1) - distance snap is not 1.0x, but it looks like you did that so (3) would fit. You can still fit (3) in if you move it up a bit. It's important that you have the same distance snap throughout the song for normal~ You can have different distance snap, but it has to make sense, like during kiai time or something.

00:08:280 (4) - I think this would fit better as a repeat slider. If you make a repeat slider, you'll have to find a way to place (1) so that it looks nice, though.Tried that before but things got too complicated so i simplified it.

00:16:004 (4,5,6) - this part feels a bit weird to me, partly because of the timing on the repeat slider (it starts on a red tick). I changed it a bit and it sounds better to me this way: Changed differently

00:24:627 (8,1) - try to avoid this overlap to make it look neater This i would have to keep.

00:26:244 (1,2,3) - flow here could be better, you can try making the straight slider curved. Here is one suggestion:
00:26:962 (3,4) - to make it look nicer, you can blanket these two Nope, I liked your previous suggestion on how the direction of the slider took with the next one sooo no blanket.

00:29:118 (6,2) - since these overlap, you can make it look nicer if you move (2) a bit so that the end stacks with the end of (6). This also helps (2) flow better into (3), as it curves into (3) as opposed to being a straight slider then jumping straight into (3). Already changed before
00:31:274 (3,1) - I feel that it sounds better if you keep them on white ticks:. It looks like you stretched (3) to match the vocal, but I feel that it makes the song have a dragging along feeling and not very 'crisp', maybe it's just me.but i like the vocals in this part. Im highlighting them to the max here with both the combo colours and mapping!

00:34:867 (6,1) - try to blanket this according to the approach circle:
01:06:483 (1,2,3) - again, you want to go for a nice blanket. Note that you will have to move (1) up a bit so that (3) isn't touching the bottom of the screen. Wasn't intending it to be a blanket

[Hinley's Hard]
It might be cool if you could have the pictures Hinsvar and Xinley slowly move across the screen somehow, right now it looks sort of static. Maybe you could have Hinsvar's signature slowly make its way to the bottom/right of the screen, then Xinley's signature slowly move left/to the top, or something like that~

00:19:417 (2) - looks like somebody forgot to extend this to the next red tick :oops:

00:19:777 (3,1) - you can try stacking these

00:28:938 (5,1,2) - make sure the spacing is the same! If nothing, I would have expected the jump to be between (1) and (2), not (5) and (1) because of the emphasis on the vocal suggesting a jump.

01:04:328 (1) - I think that this would work better if you didn't stack it, but overlap it instead like you did with (1) and (2)

01:07:561 (4,2) - think this would look neater if you stacked the tail of (4) with the head of (4)

[Insane]
I would prefer a higher slider velocity for insane, something like 1.90 or 2.00 but that's just my preference.

00:39:537 (3,4,5) - to make this part flow better and match the curvy pattern, I would suggest stacking (4) with (5). You'll have to adjust the spacing for the notes in the pattern though. no to stacking but changed it a bit up

00:43:489 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - just a suggestion to make the flow better:

move (2) down so it is parallel with the middle of (3). flip (3) (Ctrl + g), and ctrl+g each of 00:44:926 (1,2,3) - I like this ._.

01:17:531 (2,3,4,5) - maybe you can make this an arch from (1) to (6) instead of a straight line, as the (1) slider suggests an upwards motion, but you instead have a flat arch stream.

Nice song! ...but why isn't Rikka's other eye yellow? Could she have awoken the true power of The Tyrant's Eye?!?!?!?! hahahah i didn't notice this....could be :P

If you have any questions about any of the suggestions I made, do not hesitate to ask (put your question in a different colour or something when you reply) Have fun mapping! ...also, one more thing......

STOP CHUUNI ABUSE!
Thanks for the mod!!! \:D/
Hinsvar

Ami wrote:

[Hard] Nice diff.
00:19:058 (1,2) - why 1/4? Looks like something weird happened. Resnapped to 1/2.
00:20:316 (7) - ^ ^

10crystalmask01 wrote:

[Hinely's Hard]
AR - 1?
01:00:735 (1) - Curve it so that it isn't overlapping 01:02:172 (1) - ,but instead is blanketing the head. It isn't that noticeable, so I'll keep it for now.
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01:02:890 (2) - Can you flip this, so it isn't creating the repetitive curve from 01:01:813 (3) - ? That would break the flow and make this map look messy. I can't sacrifice comfortableness for a mere variety, can I?

pkmnyab wrote:

[Hinley's Hard]
It might be cool if you could have the pictures Hinsvar and Xinley slowly move across the screen somehow, right now it looks sort of static. Maybe you could have Hinsvar's signature slowly make its way to the bottom/right of the screen, then Xinley's signature slowly move left/to the top, or something like that~ IMO, it would be weird if the names were moving... I'd like to keep it static, as is. Also, it's Xinely, not Xinely. Isn't it obvious? O.o

00:19:417 (2) - looks like somebody forgot to extend this to the next red tick :oops: Yep.

00:19:777 (3,1) - you can try stacking these The gap between them is too long for this to have any effect while playing, so no.

00:28:938 (5,1,2) - make sure the spacing is the same! If nothing, I would have expected the jump to be between (1) and (2), not (5) and (1) because of the emphasis on the vocal suggesting a jump. Actually, the jump was like this because of the reason that you said by yourself, except inverted.

01:04:328 (1) - I think that this would work better if you didn't stack it, but overlap it instead like you did with (1) and (2) This pattern plays better if you're using an anti-jump to indicate the 1/1 gap, and made the spacing normal for 1/2. I'd stay with this pattern for now and will wait for more opinions.

01:07:561 (4,2) - think this would look neater if you stacked the tail of (4) with the head of (4) Nope; same reason as 00:19:777 (3,1).
Thanks for the mods!

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276,364,86423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,212,86783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,364,86962,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,192,87142,2,0,P|160:120|212:40,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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