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Machinae Supremacy - Gimme More (SID)
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Topic Starter
welcome back sieg
wow the video is so ecchi ><
wow the video is so ecchi ><
[normal]
nice map and good song, gl- 00:04:029 (4,5) - (Nazi) Blanket is slightly off
- 00:05:458 (6,1) - ^
- 00:12:125 (2,3) - ^ (curves a bit outwards at the end)
- 00:21:172 (4,1) - These arent perfectly stacked. Move (1) to 22:273
- 00:28:791 (5,1) - ah because of the low AR these overlap for a bit and it doesn't look nice. Also pretty confusing
- 00:40:220 (4) - Curve this out a bit so that it perfectly blankets 00:41:648 (1) -
- 01:21:648 (4) - Ah a slider slowdown isn't really recommended, its awkward in a difficulty like this, I like how you tried to go with the music with later in the map but right now it seems odd
- 01:21:648 (4,5) - (Nazi) blanket is off
- 01:28:315 (4,5) - ^
- 00:53:077 (7,6) - Stack is a bit off
- 02:09:743 (3,5) - Have (5) blanket (3)
Topic Starter
ty Lust (:
I guess I've done all things except◾01:21:648 (4)
updated
I guess I've done all things except◾01:21:648 (4)
updated
m4m
only two diffs lol
good luck
General
- the mp3 file now has a higher bitrate than 192kbps, so i think u have to change it coz this is unrankble. after u change the mp3 file u need to redo the timing work and resnap all objs
Hard
- 00:49:506 (1,2) - blanket?
- 01:22:482 (2,3,1,2,3) - idk if these sliders r following the slow down electric beats correctly, or maybe u even need red line support. while the drum beat is not changed there as well, maybe u can consider to follow it instead.
- other stuff r fine to me
Normal
- 1 unsnaped
- lots of blankets haven't done perfectly, thou it's not a serious problem, a better composing maybe set if u wanna check them
- 01:04:982 (2,3) - here is the example
- 02:14:506 (3) - ha, so why made this slider like this lol
- fine
good luck
Topic Starter
all done except:
mp3 is 170-210 VBR so it will be pretty much the same size as 192 constant no point to change
and imo it's easier to play with red support on hard on ◾01:22:482 -
ty Hollow Wings
mp3 is 170-210 VBR so it will be pretty much the same size as 192 constant no point to change
and imo it's easier to play with red support on hard on ◾01:22:482 -
ty Hollow Wings
Hello~ (From your queue)
[Normal]
no distant snap?
01:39:267 (2) - Move your sliders end point to x:360 y:256. i don't think the being tilted is necessary.
02:04:505 (6) - move your slider end point to x:272 y:180
Sorry couldn't find more. real nice diff
[Hard]
00:02:006 (2,4,6,8) - the way these don't stack with sliders bothers me and i think putting in the place like they are is pretty unnecessary.
00:05:815 (1) - ^
00:09:625 (1) - ^
those notes just bother me up until it starts getting faster.
actually why are most of your 1/1 notes so very very close together? why not space them out a little?
02:36:886 (3) - this note is a bit off move this one grid up (nazi!)
02:40:696 (3) - also a little off. move this one grid left
Nice song and overall great map
[Normal]
no distant snap?
01:39:267 (2) - Move your sliders end point to x:360 y:256. i don't think the being tilted is necessary.
02:04:505 (6) - move your slider end point to x:272 y:180
Sorry couldn't find more. real nice diff
[Hard]
00:02:006 (2,4,6,8) - the way these don't stack with sliders bothers me and i think putting in the place like they are is pretty unnecessary.
00:05:815 (1) - ^
00:09:625 (1) - ^
those notes just bother me up until it starts getting faster.
actually why are most of your 1/1 notes so very very close together? why not space them out a little?
02:36:886 (3) - this note is a bit off move this one grid up (nazi!)
02:40:696 (3) - also a little off. move this one grid left
Nice song and overall great map
Topic Starter
thanks RatedNC17
fixed 2 things on normal
and 2 last notes on hard
as for stacks, they stacked cus they 1\4 (:
fixed 2 things on normal
and 2 last notes on hard
as for stacks, they stacked cus they 1\4 (:
M4M here from ur queue
[General]
be careful of overmaps during the streams
make NCs more consistent, try to start them on the long white lines. (would be a good suggestion for ur insane)
[Normal]
00:02:125 (2,3) - for me it just sounds awkward that suddenly at 00:04:029 (4) the clap starts. maybe you can put claps 00:02:125 (2,3) but make them quieter through the timing sections
00:19:744 (2,4) - blanket? that's what i thought it was on first play through
00:25:696 (4,5) - line these circles up with the blanket too (just add another circle at the center at a later time and use it as a guideline)
00:37:363 (5) - same here possibly
00:34:029 (1) - align with the start of 00:32:125 (4)
-nazi-
00:45:934 (2) - to make this better you can take 00:44:506 (5) and ctrl + jh
00:49:268 (1,2,3,4) - make this curve more even
00:55:459 (5) - blanket 00:56:410 (6)? looks pretty close but its not quite
01:04:982 (2,3) - doesn't seem to flow well. try reshaping 01:04:982 (2,3)
01:27:363 (3,4) - same here i think
01:34:982 (1) - although they don't appear at the same time i think you should make this curve parallel with 01:36:887 (3)
01:35:934 (2) - same. this one is pretty good but i think you can sill make some adjustments
01:59:268 (3) - 01:58:315 (2) ctrl + hjg
02:14:506 (3) - same thing with this one here. (rly nazi) its rly close but when you overlap them they're still different
01:12:125 (8) - this seems like a better place (timelinewise) to start a NC insead of 01:12:601 (1)
[Insane]
00:02:006 (2,4,6,8) - ignore this if this was intended. but overlap the start of the sliders
same with a lot of other ones
hp drain i find a little high but probably just me cuz i suck at osu
00:28:791 (3) - adjust blanket (if it is a blanket)
00:38:553 (3) - i feel like a curve might be better to sorta blanket 00:38:315 (2)
00:45:458 (6) - NC
00:45:696 (1) - no NC
i think the NCs should be placed on the longer white lines. not the red lines (if you use 1/4)
also if you do want to place them on the one after, make them consistent as some of them are the end of sliders which you can't NC on
http://gyazo.com/8e22f02959da06c1780f68b8ec5eec63
00:55:577 (4,6) - i think a little overmapped nothing in music to sync with
01:05:458 (3) - slanted, try to fit it on top of the ends of 01:04:506 (1,2)
01:12:839 (3) - plays better if you ctrl + g
01:18:553 (2) - take 01:18:077 (1) ctrl + hj
[General]
be careful of overmaps during the streams
make NCs more consistent, try to start them on the long white lines. (would be a good suggestion for ur insane)
[Normal]
00:02:125 (2,3) - for me it just sounds awkward that suddenly at 00:04:029 (4) the clap starts. maybe you can put claps 00:02:125 (2,3) but make them quieter through the timing sections
00:19:744 (2,4) - blanket? that's what i thought it was on first play through
00:25:696 (4,5) - line these circles up with the blanket too (just add another circle at the center at a later time and use it as a guideline)
00:37:363 (5) - same here possibly
00:34:029 (1) - align with the start of 00:32:125 (4)
-nazi-
00:45:934 (2) - to make this better you can take 00:44:506 (5) and ctrl + jh
00:49:268 (1,2,3,4) - make this curve more even
00:55:459 (5) - blanket 00:56:410 (6)? looks pretty close but its not quite
01:04:982 (2,3) - doesn't seem to flow well. try reshaping 01:04:982 (2,3)
01:27:363 (3,4) - same here i think
01:34:982 (1) - although they don't appear at the same time i think you should make this curve parallel with 01:36:887 (3)
01:35:934 (2) - same. this one is pretty good but i think you can sill make some adjustments
01:59:268 (3) - 01:58:315 (2) ctrl + hjg
02:14:506 (3) - same thing with this one here. (rly nazi) its rly close but when you overlap them they're still different
01:12:125 (8) - this seems like a better place (timelinewise) to start a NC insead of 01:12:601 (1)
[Insane]
00:02:006 (2,4,6,8) - ignore this if this was intended. but overlap the start of the sliders
same with a lot of other ones
hp drain i find a little high but probably just me cuz i suck at osu
00:28:791 (3) - adjust blanket (if it is a blanket)
00:38:553 (3) - i feel like a curve might be better to sorta blanket 00:38:315 (2)
00:45:458 (6) - NC
00:45:696 (1) - no NC
i think the NCs should be placed on the longer white lines. not the red lines (if you use 1/4)
also if you do want to place them on the one after, make them consistent as some of them are the end of sliders which you can't NC on
http://gyazo.com/8e22f02959da06c1780f68b8ec5eec63
00:55:577 (4,6) - i think a little overmapped nothing in music to sync with
01:05:458 (3) - slanted, try to fit it on top of the ends of 01:04:506 (1,2)
01:12:839 (3) - plays better if you ctrl + g
01:18:553 (2) - take 01:18:077 (1) ctrl + hj
Topic Starter
thanks Kibbleru
done most of suggestions on Normal and some on Hard
done most of suggestions on Normal and some on Hard
Hello
[Normal]
00:04:506 (5) - Drum doesn't really sound good here. I suggest you remove
00:40:220 (4) - Clap at the tail
00:59:744 (5) - I suggest an Auto Finish at tail instead of a Whistle
01:35:934 (2) - try to blanket properly. I suggest rotate it clockwise by about +6 degrees and put the head at about 252,152
01:55:934 (3) - Normal Finish on the second head? (01:57:363)
just a suggestion, you should put a Finish on the tails of:
01:03:553 (6)
01:07:363 (5)
01:11:648 (7)
02:00:696 (5)
02:04:505 (6)
02:08:315 (5)
02:12:600 (7)
02:15:934 (5)
02:19:744 (6)
02:23:553 (5)
02:27:838 (7)
[Hard]
00:04:506 (1) - This drum whistle doesn't fit here; either a Drum Finish or soft Finish
00:40:934 (5) - ^ I suggest either a Soft Clap or Soft Finish
01:21:887 (1,2,3) - These sliders are out of beat with the song
maybe the first slider ends on the red, 2 starts at 1:22:601 ? or some combination of red and white ticks. The blue ticks makes it seem very out of beat
Fun song, Good luck
[Normal]
00:04:506 (5) - Drum doesn't really sound good here. I suggest you remove
00:40:220 (4) - Clap at the tail
00:59:744 (5) - I suggest an Auto Finish at tail instead of a Whistle
01:35:934 (2) - try to blanket properly. I suggest rotate it clockwise by about +6 degrees and put the head at about 252,152
01:55:934 (3) - Normal Finish on the second head? (01:57:363)
just a suggestion, you should put a Finish on the tails of:
01:03:553 (6)
01:07:363 (5)
01:11:648 (7)
02:00:696 (5)
02:04:505 (6)
02:08:315 (5)
02:12:600 (7)
02:15:934 (5)
02:19:744 (6)
02:23:553 (5)
02:27:838 (7)
[Hard]
00:04:506 (1) - This drum whistle doesn't fit here; either a Drum Finish or soft Finish
00:40:934 (5) - ^ I suggest either a Soft Clap or Soft Finish
01:21:887 (1,2,3) - These sliders are out of beat with the song
maybe the first slider ends on the red, 2 starts at 1:22:601 ? or some combination of red and white ticks. The blue ticks makes it seem very out of beat
Fun song, Good luck
Topic Starter
thanks FlawlessTea
fixed some hs on normal
fixed some hs on normal
Lol my first playthrough, I couldn't help but try and play the song just to watch the video xD. here we go~
[Normal]
01:20:696 (1,2)
The spacing here was close enough between the end of slider 1 and the beginning of slider 2 that it made me think that I should hit it early. I know it's the beginning of the part that starts to slow down, but I think the spacing change should be more gradual.
Also, if you're willing to do this, for sliders that are long such as these:
01:29:268
01:31:648
01:36:887
01:39:268
etc. (basically all the sliders long enough to have ticks)
You can change the slider ticks to the drum hitsounds you have. It would probably sound better and more consistent.
[Hard]
00:32:125
spacings like this look exactly like....
this.
On the beatmap, both the first example and the second example (shown in the pics) have the different time spacings, but they are (distance) spaced almost exactly the same as each other. (overlapping) This occurs in other places too. for example:
00:09:625 (1,2) and 00:13:077 (1,2)
I'll leave it up to you to fully understand what I mean by finding other examples yourself
That's all! good luck
[Normal]
01:20:696 (1,2)
The spacing here was close enough between the end of slider 1 and the beginning of slider 2 that it made me think that I should hit it early. I know it's the beginning of the part that starts to slow down, but I think the spacing change should be more gradual.
Also, if you're willing to do this, for sliders that are long such as these:
01:29:268
01:31:648
01:36:887
01:39:268
etc. (basically all the sliders long enough to have ticks)
You can change the slider ticks to the drum hitsounds you have. It would probably sound better and more consistent.
[Hard]
00:32:125
spacings like this look exactly like....
this.
On the beatmap, both the first example and the second example (shown in the pics) have the different time spacings, but they are (distance) spaced almost exactly the same as each other. (overlapping) This occurs in other places too. for example:
00:09:625 (1,2) and 00:13:077 (1,2)
I'll leave it up to you to fully understand what I mean by finding other examples yourself
That's all! good luck
Topic Starter
thanks Tsuchimikado (:
Little IRC mod.
We've done
Best of luck!
IRC log
13:59 -Bakari-: letterboxes
13:59 -Bakari-: no breaks
13:59 *-Bakari- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/357728 Machinae Supremacy - Gimme More (SID) [Hard]]
13:59 Sieg: оу
14:00 -Bakari-: add some warning
14:00 -Bakari-: cause video is
14:00 -Bakari-: perverted o3o
14:00 Sieg: совсем немного
14:00 -Bakari-: В тэги "give me"
14:00 Sieg: xd
14:00 -Bakari-: т.к. ну ты понял
14:00 Sieg: ага
14:01 -Bakari-: 00:25:696 (5) - hurd -чувствуются НАМНОГО сильнее предыдущих битов, мб НК на них, чтоб как-то подчеркнуть их?
14:02 Sieg: хз даже
14:02 -Bakari-: а на киаях не полениться
14:03 -Bakari-: и сделать отдельные, более агрессивные комбо-цвета
14:03 Sieg: это можно
14:03 -Bakari-: такое зверство на киаи
14:04 -Bakari-: у игроков будет такое состояние, что сыграв киаи моментально поставят 10 :3
14:04 Sieg: :3
14:04 Sieg: лол
14:04 -Bakari-: 00:25:696 (5) - я бы предпочел классический http://puu.sh/6H4Fs.jpg
14:05 -Bakari-: 01:31:172 (1,2) - *
14:05 Sieg: ват
14:05 Sieg: ага
14:05 -Bakari-: и на всех подобных
14:05 Sieg: я тоже так думал
14:05 Sieg: но потом решил разнообразие быть должно
14:06 Sieg: при том, смотрятся они довольно мило
14:06 Sieg: хз
14:06 Sieg: как по мне
14:06 -Bakari-: мило-то мило
14:06 -Bakari-: просто их каждый второй клепать начал
14:06 Sieg: лол
14:06 -Bakari-: ох и надоест это игрокам, мне кажется
14:07 Sieg: новый заеб в 2014
14:07 -Bakari-: как сп3 начал в 2013м
14:07 -Bakari-: так толпа и подхватила
14:08 -Bakari-: 01:10:219 (1,2,3,4) -
14:08 -Bakari-: круто ♥
14:08 Sieg: этот паттерн уже тоже
14:08 Sieg: поднадоел
14:08 -Bakari-: 01:20:934 (5,1) - swap NCs
14:08 -Bakari-: там замедление начинается же
14:09 -Bakari-: как раз на него и НК
14:09 Sieg: окай
14:09 -Bakari-: 01:33:553 (2) - нравятся такие джампы? юзай, но мне кажется он тут немного рандомно и не в тему
14:09 -Bakari-: смотрится-то мило, и читается.
14:09 -Bakari-: и даже играется
14:10 -Bakari-: но не вписывается логически, вот.
14:10 Sieg: ага
14:10 Sieg: подумаю
14:10 -Bakari-: 01:45:934 (4) - nazi - го виз зе флоу http://puu.sh/6H4Vt.jpg
14:11 -Bakari-: 01:46:768 (2,3) - hail satan. lovely 1/8 in a hard diff o3o
14:11 Sieg: ага
14:11 Sieg: (:
14:11 -Bakari-: од что ли убавь
14:11 Sieg: это же
14:11 -Bakari-: а то зверство редкостное
14:11 Sieg: слайдер
14:12 Sieg: этот хард лечге чем гюнтер с бибером бтв
14:12 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/6H4ZJ.jpg
14:12 -Bakari-: кривоватый бланкет :P
14:12 -Bakari-: 02:04:029 (2,3) -
14:12 -Bakari-: гюнтер кстати норм :D
14:13 Sieg: надо подправить
14:13 Sieg: ага
14:14 -Bakari-: 02:18:791 (1,2) - dem flow
14:15 -Bakari-: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1302398
14:15 Sieg: хз, на планшете нормально все
14:15 -Bakari-: еще чуток покрутить, и буть ровнее, чем пацаны на районе
14:15 Sieg: джампы большеваты
14:15 -Bakari-: будет*
14:15 -Bakari-: это же киаи
14:15 -Bakari-: тут должно штырить <3
14:16 Sieg: это же хард, я и так боюсь ;_;
14:16 -Bakari-: 02:32:482 (1,2,3,4,5) -
14:16 -Bakari-: все, что ниже х2.5 вполне норм
14:17 -Bakari-: 02:32:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - генератор анальных болей v2.28
14:17 Sieg: ритм гейм же
14:17 -Bakari-: антиджампы 1/2 И В ТОМ ЖЕ КОМБО 1/4
14:17 Sieg: в чем проблемы
14:17 -Bakari-: похожи очень
14:17 -Bakari-: невольно читаешь антиджампы, как 1/4
14:17 Sieg: спейсинг то
14:18 Sieg: разный
14:18 -Bakari-: 02:42:839 (4) - я б конвертнул в 1/2 cлайдер и заглушил хвост
14:18 -Bakari-: как-то вяжется с музыкой, не?
14:18 Sieg: ммм
14:19 Sieg: там конец где-то на синем
14:19 Sieg: или вообще на 1\8
14:19 Sieg: так что лучше так
14:19 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/6H5gk.jpg
14:19 -Bakari-: просто для интуитивности, а раз хвост заглушен, то норм
14:20 Sieg: подумаю, но что-то мне это не очень нравится
14:20 -Bakari-: ах да
14:21 -Bakari-: 00:11:172 - фигачь фонтаны
14:21 -Bakari-: БУТЬ БРУТАЛЬНЕЕ
14:21 -Bakari-: в идеале и свистки
14:21 -Bakari-: чтоб глушило
14:21 Sieg: свистки
14:21 -Bakari-: но ты их не сделаешь :(
14:21 Sieg: ewwwwwwwww
14:21 Sieg: я там и так жесткие финиши с драмов
14:21 Sieg: воткнул
14:24 -Bakari-: ну и все по харду
14:24 Sieg: го нормалл
14:25 -Bakari-: ar 6 easiest diff
14:25 -Bakari-: much butthurt so rage
14:25 Sieg: это нормальчик же
14:25 Sieg: я пробывал 5
14:25 Sieg: прям не очень
14:25 -Bakari-: ну
14:25 Sieg: сейчас все любят большие ары
14:25 -Bakari-: изи бы сюда
14:26 Sieg: десяточку там
14:26 Sieg: 6 на изи
14:26 -Bakari-: а то ар 6 на самой легкой это
14:26 -Bakari-: это ОЧЕНЬ стремно
14:26 Sieg: вернемся к этому после
14:26 Sieg: может не так все и плохо с 6
14:27 Sieg: нет я могу конечно 5 воткнуть тут
14:28 -Bakari-: го изи :D
14:28 Sieg: xD
14:28 -Bakari-: 02:40:220 - захитсаундить бы клэпы
14:29 Sieg: не люблю эту наркоманию
14:29 Sieg: всегда когда играю
14:29 Sieg: и мне клапает посреди слайдера
14:29 -Bakari-: 02:41:172 -
14:29 -Bakari-: ну а тут бы
14:29 Sieg: как-то не по себе
14:30 Sieg: там же по чиптюну
14:30 Sieg: 1\1
14:30 -Bakari-: ну
14:31 -Bakari-: 00:25:696 (4) - друмы тут о3о
14:31 Sieg: уху
14:33 -Bakari-: все ок тут
14:33 -Bakari-: но изи бы надо
We've done
- A few general suggestions
- Some nazi things
- A few flow improvements
Best of luck!
Topic Starter
updtd
♥: Must fix
♥: Suggestion
General ;
♥Audio bitrate is higher than 192kbps. You should decrease it between 128 - 192 kbps !
Normal ;
♥00:45:934 (2) - x20 y112 , for a better flow. If you do it , fix The Distance Snaps of the following patterns
♥00:50:696 (2,3,4,5) - The Circles do a "Curve" , you should do this Slider 00:52:125 (5) - like a curve too. And place it like this : ♥01:03:553 (6) - x388 y216 , for a better flow. If you do it , fix The Distance Snaps of the following patterns
♥01:04:982 (2,3) - They don't look so good when they are so similar imo , do it like this :♥01:14:029 (3) - x256 y240 , for a better transition to 01:14:506 (4)
♥01:34:029 (5) - x28 y256 , so it makes a better looking triangle with 01:33:077 (3,4)
♥01:54:029 (1,2) - This doesn't flow so much..
♥02:10:695 (4,5) - ^^ ~ Do it like this : ♥02:33:791 (3) - x52 y168 , for a better looking Triangle
♥02:43:315 (1) - Add Finish maybe
Hard ;
♥00:12:601 (4) - Ctrl + G , for a Jump
♥00:48:791 (7,1) - Make there another Shape for a blanket with (1) , like this : ♥00:58:077 (4) - x58 y261 , for a better flow
♥01:04:267 (2) - x345 y130 , same reason as above
♥01:23:672 (1,2,3) - That's unreadable, because it's like a "stream"
♥01:25:458 (3) - Cut it until the white tick at 01:26:405
♥01:29:982 (5) - NC
♥01:37:601 (5) - ^
♥02:37:838 (6) - x336 y268 , for a better flow
♥02:43:315 (1) - Add Finish maybe
~ That was it, great Map & Song. Good Luck ! ♥
Take this ! ;
Hello~ From my queue~ c:
[General]
-NSFW warning? o3o
-I guess you should change the preview point, or maybe not.
-I guess you should change the combo colours.
[Normal]
00:10:458 -DS.
00:11:172 -^
00:25:696 -Move with DS
00:25:934 -^
01:45:458 (1,2,3) -Fix DS.
01:53:077 (1,2,3) -^
GL ~ ! And have a star~ =w=
[General]
-NSFW warning? o3o
-I guess you should change the preview point, or maybe not.
-I guess you should change the combo colours.
[Normal]
00:10:458 -DS.
00:11:172 -^
00:25:696 -Move with DS
00:25:934 -^
01:45:458 (1,2,3) -Fix DS.
01:53:077 (1,2,3) -^
GL ~ !
And have a star~ =w=
Topic Starter
thank you - Melody (:
applied almost all things for normal
and almost half for hard
about mp3 its 170-210kbps VBR, converting to constant 192kpbs doesn't give any size change, so no point in this
applied almost all things for normal
and almost half for hard
about mp3 its 170-210kbps VBR, converting to constant 192kpbs doesn't give any size change, so no point in this
Topic Starter
thanks Lapis Aoki (:
applied your suggestions
about video it's not really NSFW, but i'll add warning
applied your suggestions
about video it's not really NSFW, but i'll add warning