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Tamura Yukari & Hanazawa Kana - Mogitate * Fruit Girls [Osu|

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Topic Starter
Raisa12
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 07 de enero de 2015 at 12:09:00

Artist: Tamura Yukari & Hanazawa Kana
Title: Mogitate * Fruit Girls
Source: のうりん
Tags: Nourin ending Ringo Kinoshita Minori Nakazawa no-rin kamisamaaa SILVER LINK Nardoxyribonucleic tv size
BPM: 175
Filesize: 3197kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,65 stars, 103 notes)
  2. Hard (3,15 stars, 259 notes)
  3. kami's Insane (4,64 stars, 365 notes)
  4. Nardo's Muzukashii (2,87 stars, 343 notes)
  5. Nardo's Oni (3,87 stars, 485 notes)
  6. Normal (2,03 stars, 144 notes)
Download: Tamura Yukari & Hanazawa Kana - Mogitate * Fruit Girls
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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First Ranked map :D

Easy - by me
Normal - by me
Hard - by me
Kami's Insane - by kamisamaaa
Oni/Muzu - by Nardoxyribonucleic

Enjoy!
LucyS
My mod :)

Eazy
00:44:399 (5,6) - try this http://puu.sh/6t5ft.jpg
00:46:456 (7) - http://puu.sh/6t5lo.jpg
00:46:456 (7) - NC
Add a circle 00:47:485 - and 00:47:828 in x: 184 y: 172
01:17:314 (8) - NC
01:18:342 (1) - Cancel this combo
00:15:256 (5) - Move the second node to x:288 y:96
00:38:914 (7) - NC
00:40:285 (1) - Cancel combo

Normal
00:03:256 (7) - Move to x:256 y:200
00:03:942 (8) - ^ to x: 452 y:160
00:04:628 (9) - ^ to x: 232 y:100
00:04:628 (9) - move the last node to x:32 y:160
00:12:856 (3) - Move to x:68 y:56
00:14:228 - Make in this time http://puu.sh/6t6Ez.jpg
00:17:314 (9,10) - Move these together to 00:16:971
00:18:856 (1,2) - these to 00:18:685
00:19:714 (3,4,5) - these to 00:19:371
00:20:399 - circle here
then adjust the distance
00:34:456 (8) - delete
00:34:799 -00:35:828 - put a slider here or a spinner
make sure that the combos do not pass 6 or 8

Hard
00:20:914 (2) -
00:11:142 (9,10) - Delete these, and http://puu.sh/6t7CP.jpg
00:13:371 (2) - this should to end here 00:13:885
00:17:314 (1) - Move to x:364 y:132
00:17:656 (2) - ^ to x:232 y:136
00:20:914 (2) - http://puu.sh/6t7MJ.jpg
Topic Starter
Raisa12
SPOILER

LucyS wrote:

My mod :)

Eazy
00:44:399 (5,6) - try this http://puu.sh/6t5ft.jpg
00:46:456 (7) - http://puu.sh/6t5lo.jpg
00:46:456 (7) - NC
Add a circle 00:47:485 - and 00:47:828 in x: 184 y: 172
01:17:314 (8) - NC
01:18:342 (1) - Cancel this combo
00:15:256 (5) - Move the second node to x:288 y:96
00:38:914 (7) - NC
00:40:285 (1) - Cancel combo

Normal
00:03:256 (7) - Move to x:256 y:200
00:03:942 (8) - ^ to x: 452 y:160
00:04:628 (9) - ^ to x: 232 y:100
00:04:628 (9) - move the last node to x:32 y:160
00:12:856 (3) - Move to x:68 y:56
00:14:228 - Make in this time http://puu.sh/6t6Ez.jpg
00:17:314 (9,10) - Move these together to 00:16:971
00:18:856 (1,2) - these to 00:18:685
00:19:714 (3,4,5) - these to 00:19:371
00:20:399 - circle here
then adjust the distance
00:34:456 (8) - delete
00:34:799 -00:35:828 - put a slider here or a spinner
make sure that the combos do not pass 6 or 8

Hard
00:20:914 (2) -
00:11:142 (9,10) - Delete these, and http://puu.sh/6t7CP.jpg
00:13:371 (2) - this should to end here 00:13:885
00:17:314 (1) - Move to x:364 y:132
00:17:656 (2) - ^ to x:232 y:136
00:20:914 (2) - http://puu.sh/6t7MJ.jpg

thanks for mod LucyS!
Mira-san

Mira-san's Modding Queue



Easy


00:04:285 (6)
- Move the endpoint to x:364 y:96 to make this slider parallel to (5).
00:45:599 (9)
- This doesn't blanket (8) properly.
01:28:285
- Put a timing point here and set the volume to 5% maybe? I think it's better if it ends silently.


Normal


00:21:256 (2)
- Try making this a repeat slider.
01:28:285
- Same goes here. Put a timing point here as well. (if you did it for Easy)


Hard


00:48:342 (3)
- Sounds better if you do this.

01:28:285
- Same goes here. Put a timing point here as well. (if you did it for Easy and Normal lel)

Good luck! I didn't find much. Sorry. lol.
Narcissu
from my queue

[easy]

easy & normal should follow the time-distance equality rule , -0.05~+0.05 , i think you should fix your 00:02:228 (4) - 00:04:285 (6) - 00:07:371 (2) - 00:25:199 (1) -

00:05:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too many whistle , delete some

00:25:199 - drum finish too noise , i suggest you use custom finish

00:25:885 - delete finish , because your normal no finish ?

00:27:256 - ^

00:45:599 (9,1) - maybe better ↓↓↓


[normal]

…………

[hard]

why skip some colours ? like 00:32:399 (1) - , you skip blue

00:05:656 (1,4) - avoid small overlap ↓↓↓ considering that this rarely happened at other parts of your map


00:26:571 (6,7) - can blanket better , and maybe your 00:25:199 (3) - could the same as 00:26:914 (7) -

00:32:399 (1,2) - can blanket better

good luck
Topic Starter
Raisa12
Thanks for the mod Mira-san and zengdaen ^^
updated
kamisamaaa
from my queue~
[hard]
00:11:142 (9,1) - these two is too close, really hard to read when player play.because this 1/1 rythm really look like a 1/2.
00:10:628 (6) - suggest to delete this , because you follow the vocal here and this sound strange. if you delete this stack the 7 to the 5's tail or make a jump.
01:24:856 (8) - change this to two notes.because the head and tail all have the strong beat. slider is not suitable.
amm..maybe you need to make it a bit more diffcult. because you dont have a insane diff
[normal]
good diff and nothing to say
[easy]
00:04:285 (6) - actually I perfer this
00:22:456 (8) - stack is not a good idea in easy diff. really hard for newable
00:52:285 (5,6,7) - blanket them better here
01:06:685 (8) - maybe begin at 01:07:028 sounds better

really good map. are you really a new mapper? :)
hope this mod can help you~
and also hope you can reply this to let me know where you not fix and the reason~thanks
Topic Starter
Raisa12

kamisamaaa wrote:

from my queue~
[hard]
00:11:142 (9,1) - these two is too close, really hard to read when player play.because this 1/1 rythm really look like a 1/2. Done
00:10:628 (6) - suggest to delete this , because you follow the vocal here and this sound strange. if you delete this stack the 7 to the 5's tail or make a jump. sounds better .. eliminating the note .. done
01:24:856 (8) - change this to two notes.because the head and tail all have the strong beat. slider is not suitable. Done
amm..maybe you need to make it a bit more diffcult. because you dont have a insane diff
[normal]
good diff and nothing to say
[easy]
00:04:285 (6) - actually I perfer this Done
00:22:456 (8) - stack is not a good idea in easy diff. really hard for newable changed
00:52:285 (5,6,7) - blanket them better here *I try to better shelter*Done
01:06:685 (8) - maybe begin at 01:07:028 sounds better oh really sounds better ... Done

really good map. are you really a new mapper? :)
hope this mod can help you~
and also hope you can reply this to let me know where you not fix and the reason~thanks
Thanks kamisamaaa for mod ,thanks for saying ''really good map'' it will help me :)
Squichu
sorry, I'm sooo slow. ;o;
mod from queue!

[General]
  1. I didn't check (or rather was too lazy to calculate x: ..) but is your background image 16:9 or 4:3 ratio?
    if not, please resize it accordingly!
  2. I had the feeling the timing isn't accurate 100%, so maybe find someone to check it
    I suck at timing myself, so I can't help with that, sorry. orz
[Easy]
hmmh, this looks nice already!
this is gonna get a bit nazi I think. x:
so all below is just suggestions!
  1. 00:02:228 (4) - might match even better with 00:03:256 (5) if you move the middle anchor down/left one grid
  2. 00:03:256 (5) - rotate by 30° (selection centre), the movement from 4 to 5 feels nicer then imo
    you could do the same then with 00:04:285 (6)!
  3. 00:07:371 (2) - don't break DS in Easy/Normal diffs please. ><
    it's too hard to read for beginners andit's just an example, there are billions of alternatives c:
  4. 00:08:742 (4) - rotate by -20° (selection centre)?
  5. 00:10:114 (6) - move to 412|200 for perfect triangle with 4+5
  6. 00:14:228 (4,5) - why not use the same shape for them?
  7. 00:19:028 (3) - move middle anchor one grid to the right
  8. 00:19:714 (4,5) - move slider's end closer to circle
  9. 00:21:428 (7) - move slider's end a tiiiny bit further from circle
    also the distance to 00:22:456 (8) is too far
  10. 00:23:314 (1) - might be better to not switch between white and red ticks,
    it's incredible hard to read cause it's a different tapping rhythm
    (and this is the easiest diff after all. >: )
    and better don't break DS!
    same here - 00:48:342 (4,1) and here - 01:23:656 (3)!
    btw, it might be better to not stack 00:47:828 (3,4), it's too hard to read
  11. 00:40:628 (5,6) - movement here doesn't feel nice, maybe you can align 6 to 5?
  12. 00:43:028 - missing an object here, there is a loooud beat, I'd expect a circle
    additionally the purple combo is too long anyway (max should be 8 I think), so you could start a new here
  13. cause of the two above - (matched 6 with 5, added a circle on 5's end at 43:028 and placed the next slider at 6's reverse)
    don't wanna mess with your style tho, up to you if you wanna change it :3
  14. 00:47:485 (2) - shorten distnace to previous object a bit
  15. 01:03:256 (3) - movement to 4 feels kinda weird, move to 444|260 maybe?
    or let 4 start further left, around 412|104?
  16. 01:12:514 (1) - placing circles in the centre of the playfield is confusing (imo!)
    cause the approach circle has the same shape as the spinner, they might overlook it
    up to you if you wanna place it somewhere else
  17. 01:15:942 (6,7,1) - movement might be better if you place 7 and 1 further left/down
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:256 (1) - include it in the circle the previous object create?
    (move to 272|196)
  2. 00:09:428 (6) - movement here and at some other parts would feel nicer if reversed. .o.
    but it's kinda your style.. meh. >< (not sayin your style is bad or anything, personally I just prefer smoother movement!)
  3. 00:12:856 (3) - feels a bit weird, plus the next pbjects starts on a white tick so this should end on a white tick as well imo
    there are some more parts with the red/white tick stuff, might wanna pay attention to that
    BTW
    it's only hard to read if you leave a gap between reds/whites like here:
    it's fine if the 2nd objects follows directly after like here:
  4. 00:33:085 (6) - keep DS consistent!
  5. 00:42:685 (3) - place middle anchor closer to 2's end
  6. 00:46:456 (1,2) - I guess a "correct" overlap is preferable
  7. 01:12:514 (1) - same as in Easy (circle after spinner)
  8. 01:23:656 (3) - place differently maybe, might be confusing
[Hard]
there's almost nothing in this diff, only some minor pixel things.. O:
  1. 00:01:714 (6) - middle anchor a bit further away
    same here - 00:19:371 (6)
  2. 00:03:256 (10) - new combo should start here I think, delete NC at next object then
  3. 00:05:656 (1) - use same shape as for 2+3
  4. 00:27:599 (2) - align better to 4
overall a really nice mapset, good luck to you! [=

*squee*
KokoroStudiox3
mod request in Shinsei mapuu team queue
hard
00:03:256 (10) - no seria el nuevo combo aquí ?

easy
00:05:999 (1,2) - vas a tener que arreglar el espacio entre estas notas no se puede tener diferente y esque esta en el mismo combo
00:24:171 (2) - mover a x372 y224
01:08:056 (2) - curva a este slider ?

normal
00:33:085 (6) - creo que no se debe de tapar un reverse arrow


:) :) :) :) :)
kamisamaaa
ammm...do you accept GD?
actually I make a insane diff for your map~
here is my diff
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: nourin.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60856
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5999,16971,25199,36157,45757
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Mogitate * Fruits Girls (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Mogitate * Fruits Girls (TV Size)
Artist:Tamura Yukari & Hanazawa Kana
ArtistUnicode:Tamura Yukari & Hanazawa Kana
Creator:Raisa12
Version:kami's Insane
Source:のうりん
Tags:Nourin ending Ringo Kinoshita Minori Nakazawa no-rin
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:143556

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"d0237121_4484743.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
500,342.857142857143,4,2,1,80,1,0
60842,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,80,0,1
82785,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
85528,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,204
Combo2 : 244,157,244
Combo3 : 1,203,254
Combo4 : 97,241,92
Combo5 : 255,198,111
Combo6 : 157,136,244
Combo7 : 213,170,170
Combo8 : 39,231,125

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IF you like this~told me and I will add the hitsound ;)
if you dont like this I will update this by myself=L=
btw, I think offset should be 500
00:34:785 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hear this part with 25% speed
Topic Starter
Raisa12
SPOILER

Squirrel wrote:

sorry, I'm sooo slow. ;o;
mod from queue!

[General]
  1. I didn't check (or rather was too lazy to calculate x: ..) but is your background image 16:9 or 4:3 ratio?
    if not, please resize it accordingly!
  2. I had the feeling the timing isn't accurate 100%, so maybe find someone to check it
    I suck at timing myself, so I can't help with that, sorry. orz
[Easy]
hmmh, this looks nice already!
this is gonna get a bit nazi I think. x:
so all below is just suggestions!
  1. 00:02:228 (4) - might match even better with 00:03:256 (5) if you move the middle anchor down/left one grid done
  2. 00:03:256 (5) - rotate by 30° (selection centre), the movement from 4 to 5 feels nicer then imo
    you could do the same then with 00:04:285 (6)!
  3. 00:07:371 (2) - don't break DS in Easy/Normal diffs please. >< done
    it's too hard to read for beginners andit's just an example, there are billions of alternatives c:
  4. 00:08:742 (4) - rotate by -20° (selection centre)? done
  5. 00:10:114 (6) - move to 412|200 for perfect triangle with 4+5
  6. 00:14:228 (4,5) - why not use the same shape for them? done
  7. 00:19:028 (3) - move middle anchor one grid to the right done
  8. 00:19:714 (4,5) - move slider's end closer to circle
  9. 00:21:428 (7) - move slider's end a tiiiny bit further from circle
    also the distance to 00:22:456 (8) is too far
  10. 00:23:314 (1) - might be better to not switch between white and red ticks,
    it's incredible hard to read cause it's a different tapping rhythm
    (and this is the easiest diff after all. >: )
    and better don't break DS!
    same here - 00:48:342 (4,1) and here - 01:23:656 (3)!
    btw, it might be better to not stack 00:47:828 (3,4), it's too hard to read
  11. 00:40:628 (5,6) - movement here doesn't feel nice, maybe you can align 6 to 5?
  12. 00:43:028 - missing an object here, there is a loooud beat, I'd expect a circle
    additionally the purple combo is too long anyway (max should be 8 I think), so you could start a new here
  13. cause of the two above - (matched 6 with 5, added a circle on 5's end at 43:028 and placed the next slider at 6's reverse)
    don't wanna mess with your style tho, up to you if you wanna change it :3
  14. 00:47:485 (2) - shorten distnace to previous object a bit
  15. 01:03:256 (3) - movement to 4 feels kinda weird, move to 444|260 maybe?
    or let 4 start further left, around 412|104?
  16. 01:12:514 (1) - placing circles in the centre of the playfield is confusing (imo!)
    cause the approach circle has the same shape as the spinner, they might overlook it
    up to you if you wanna place it somewhere else
  17. 01:15:942 (6,7,1) - movement might be better if you place 7 and 1 further left/down
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:256 (1) - include it in the circle the previous object create?
    (move to 272|196)
  2. 00:09:428 (6) - movement here and at some other parts would feel nicer if reversed. .o.
    but it's kinda your style.. meh. >< (not sayin your style is bad or anything, personally I just prefer smoother movement!)
  3. 00:12:856 (3) - feels a bit weird, plus the next pbjects starts on a white tick so this should end on a white tick as well imo
    there are some more parts with the red/white tick stuff, might wanna pay attention to that
    BTW
    it's only hard to read if you leave a gap between reds/whites like here:
    it's fine if the 2nd objects follows directly after like here:
  4. 00:33:085 (6) - keep DS consistent! done
  5. 00:42:685 (3) - place middle anchor closer to 2's end
  6. 00:46:456 (1,2) - I guess a "correct" overlap is preferable
  7. 01:12:514 (1) - same as in Easy (circle after spinner) Nope e.e
  8. 01:23:656 (3) - place differently maybe, might be confusing done
[Hard]
there's almost nothing in this diff, only some minor pixel things.. O:
  1. 00:01:714 (6) - middle anchor a bit further away done
    same here - 00:19:371 (6) done
  2. 00:03:256 (10) - new combo should start here I think, delete NC at next object then done
  3. 00:05:656 (1) - use same shape as for 2+3 done
  4. 00:27:599 (2) - align better to 4


overall a really nice mapset, good luck to you! [=

*squee*
thanks for your mod Squirrel :)

SPOILER

eLtigreXXx wrote:

mod request in Shinsei mapuu team queue
hard
00:03:256 (10) - no seria el nuevo combo aquí ? hecho

easy
00:05:999 (1,2) - vas a tener que arreglar el espacio entre estas notas no se puede tener diferente y esque esta en el mismo combo
00:24:171 (2) - mover a x372 y224
01:08:056 (2) - curva a este slider ?

normal
00:33:085 (6) - creo que no se debe de tapar un reverse arrow hecho


:) :) :) :) :)

also thanks for your mod eLtigreX

kamisamaaa wrote:

btw, I think offset should be 500 changed
fixed & Updated. :)
kamisamaaa
hitsound is added~all finish~
here is hitsound puu.sh/6Its3.rar
here is map
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: nourin.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 60856
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5999,16971,25199,36157,45757
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Mogitate * Fruits Girls (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Mogitate * Fruits Girls (TV Size)
Artist:Tamura Yukari & Hanazawa Kana
ArtistUnicode:Tamura Yukari & Hanazawa Kana
Creator:Raisa12
Version:kami's Insane
Source:のうりん
Tags:Nourin ending Ringo Kinoshita Minori Nakazawa no-rin
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"d0237121_4484743.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
500,342.857142857143,4,2,3,80,1,0
4614,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
5985,-100,4,2,4,60,0,0
11471,-100,4,2,3,80,0,0
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79185,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,90,0,1
80042,-83.3333333333333,4,2,3,90,0,1
82785,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
85528,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,0,204
Combo2 : 244,157,244
Combo3 : 1,203,254
Combo4 : 97,241,92
Combo5 : 255,198,111
Combo6 : 157,136,244
Combo7 : 213,170,170
Combo8 : 39,231,125

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284,192,69071,6,0,P|292:164|308:140,1,53.9999983520508,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,52,69242,2,0,P|416:80|400:104,1,53.9999983520508
332,76,69414,2,0,P|340:48|356:24,1,53.9999983520508,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,168,69585,2,0,P|368:196|352:220,1,53.9999983520508
296,272,69757,6,0,L|240:272,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,336,69928,2,0,L|138:336,1,53.9999983520508
172,252,70100,2,0,L|172:196,1,53.9999983520508,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,196,70271,2,0,L|92:142,1,53.9999983520508
0,132,70442,6,0,P|-4:72|8:16,2,107.999996704102,6|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,72,70957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
189,85,71042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,98,71128,5,4,0:0:0:0:
432,196,71385,1,4,0:0:0:0:
234,334,71642,1,4,0:0:0:0:
0,132,71814,6,0,P|0:200|8:244,1,107.999996704102,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,180,72157,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,384,72328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,384,72414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,384,72500,2,0,P|152:380|208:384,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,209,72842,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,376,73014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,196,73185,6,0,P|400:252|364:300,1,107.999996704102,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,56,73528,1,8,0:0:0:0:
329,209,73700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,80,73871,2,0,P|200:108|244:152,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,176,74128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,176,74214,2,0,P|116:232|108:280,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,209,74557,5,6,0:0:0:0:
264,352,74728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,108,74900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,256,75071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,213,75242,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,356,75413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,75585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,108,75756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,24,75928,6,0,P|400:84|388:144,1,107.999996704102,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,228,76185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,228,76271,2,0,P|400:292|420:344,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,236,76614,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,104,76785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,108,76957,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,232,77128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,228,77300,6,0,P|156:280|188:336,1,107.999996704102,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,236,77642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,240,77814,2,0,P|424:292|392:348,1,107.999996704102,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,136,78157,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,136,78242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,136,78328,2,0,P|364:132|424:136,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,8,78671,5,6,0:0:0:0:
292,236,78842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,80,79014,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,20,79185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
19,52,79270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
18,84,79356,1,2,0:0:0:0:
21,116,79442,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,148,79527,5,2,0:0:0:0:
40,178,79613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
55,207,79699,1,2,0:0:0:0:
73,234,79785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
95,258,79870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,360,80042,5,6,0:0:0:0:
300,211,80300,1,2,0:0:0:0:
365,62,80557,1,2,0:0:0:0:
235,63,80728,5,6,0:0:0:0:
300,212,80986,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,360,81243,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,164,81414,6,0,P|304:152|236:160,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,152,81757,2,0,L|68:272,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,320,82014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,320,82100,2,0,L|60:370,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,213,82442,2,0,L|255:271,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,204,82785,5,2,0:0:0:0:
332,324,82957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,121,83128,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,38,83300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,324,83642,1,2,0:0:0:0:
474,1,83985,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,104,84157,5,2,0:0:0:0:
496,204,84328,1,2,0:0:0:0:
391,334,84500,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,332,84585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,323,84671,1,2,0:0:0:0:
302,309,84757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,289,84842,1,10,0:0:0:0:
212,156,85014,2,0,P|172:188|144:224,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,360,85357,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85528,12,0,88271,0:0:0:0:

hope you find more mod and rank this ;)
good luck~
Topic Starter
Raisa12
I added hitsound :)
Winek
So hello, my mod like ya request
Your Mapset is Rankable - These are simply suggestions, feel free to reject all of them if you want.

[General]
>///< video
Hitsound are different on each mapset

[Easy]
00:28:614 (6) - I'd rather add a New Combo, since there is a little space between previous note, and it starts a new downbeat.
00:43:357 (7) - New combo?
01:00:842 (1) - Add clap like the other? It feels awkward if the claps just starts randomly
01:05:300 (6) - New combo?
01:06:671 (8) - It feels weird to just come and add a clap at the end, changing completely the beat of clap. If there is a slidertick, just don't use a clap, and skip this one.

[Normal]
00:00:500 (1,2) - Total Nazi but I would better see them as little curves

[Hard]
00:10:271 (5,6) - I'd rater remove de (6) and move the 1/2 slider (5) at 00:10:442
Weird Whistle hitsound on 1/2?

[Insane]
00:58:100 (1,2,3) - Make a correct triangle?
00:58:785 (1,2,3) - Same here

So yeah, I'm not the best you know. I would bubble that
kamisamaaa

Winek wrote:

So hello, my mod like ya request
Your Mapset is Rankable - These are simply suggestions, feel free to reject all of them if you want.

[General]
>///< video
Hitsound are different on each mapset actually insane is mapped by me, hitsound can be different

[Insane]
00:58:100 (1,2,3) - Make a correct triangle?
00:58:785 (1,2,3) - Same here I use ctrl+shift+D to make these two triangle~ just because I use the GS so distance have a little different(2.03X really same as 2.05X)~ I think its okay

So yeah, I'm not the best you know. I would bubble that
thanks for mod~ ;)
Topic Starter
Raisa12

Winek wrote:

So hello, my mod like ya request
Your Mapset is Rankable - These are simply suggestions, feel free to reject all of them if you want.

[General]
>///< video
Hitsound are different on each mapset

[Easy]
00:28:614 (6) - I'd rather add a New Combo, since there is a little space between previous note, and it starts a new downbeat. Done
00:43:357 (7) - New combo? Done
01:00:842 (1) - Add clap like the other? It feels awkward if the claps just starts randomly Done
01:05:300 (6) - New combo? Done
01:06:671 (8) - It feels weird to just come and add a clap at the end, changing completely the beat of clap. If there is a slidertick, just don't use a clap, and skip this one. *oh really * Done
[Normal]
00:00:500 (1,2) - Total Nazi but I would better see them as little curves I think this is fine as

[Hard]
00:10:271 (5,6) - I'd rater remove de (6) and move the 1/2 slider (5) at 00:10:442
Weird Whistle hitsound on 1/2?


So yeah, I'm not the best you know. I would bubble that
thanks for the mod :)
Ozato Fumika
M4M from Kiss(and)Love

[General]
I don't know if 906x640 BG in acceptable, double check~
01:11:471 End KIAI time
01:11:814 Start KIAI time

[Easy]
00:04:100 (6) - OR



00:14:214 (4,5) - off beat
00:19:700 (4,5) - blanket properly
00:23:300 (1,2) - use long sliders to over come the emptiness..
00:41:985 (6) - add clap
00:44:385 (2,3) - blanket properly
00:56:385 (3) - clap on the tick

[Normal]
00:05:642 (4) - add a note here
00:26:900 (5,6) - blanket properly
00:28:957 (8) - stack this on 00:27:242 (6) tail
00:41:985 (2) - hitclap on the tick
00:44:042 (6) - hit clap
00:44:385 (7) - claps on the tick
00:46:100 (8) - add a note with clap
00:46:442 (1) - remove clap
01:07:700 (3,4) - blanket properly

[Hard]
00:04:957 (7) - Delete 1 tick and add a circle
00:05:642 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:11:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -
00:25:014 (1,2) - delete these
00:25:871 (4,5) - blanket properly
00:26:557 (6,7) - ^
01:22:957 (2,3) - 2 goes on 3, 3 stacks on 4
01:24:671 (7,1,2,3,4) - use sliders for these.

[Insane]
00:02:042 (6,8) - way to far away
00:04:442 (5) - make it a circle
00:13:785 (10) - delete or make it flow better
As I go through this difficulty, I think this should be extra and there should be an easier insane.
Jumps are too hard.

Hope my mod helped!
Good luck!!
kamisamaaa

No Dap wrote:

M4M from Kiss(and)Love

[General]
I don't know if 906x640 BG in acceptable, double check~
01:11:471 End KIAI time
01:11:814 Start KIAI time add this kiai or not is both okay~decided by Raisa12


[Insane]
00:02:042 (6,8) - way to far away ammm...I make this intended.
00:04:442 (5) - make it a circle why? here is a strong drum in the blue line
00:13:785 (10) - delete or make it flow better okay~I will delete this~
As I go through this difficulty, I think this should be extra and there should be an easier insane.
Jumps are too hard. ammm~yes a little difficult :)

Hope my mod helped!
Good luck!!
thanks for mod~
and to Raisa12: please delete 00:13:785 (10) - in my diff ;)
you can PM or in game ask some godd mapper for some mod. not just find mod in queue. do you need me help you find some mod?
yf_bmp
from kami's request

[kami]
00:02:728 - 这里有明显鼓点
00:12:671 (5,6) - 建议做成滑条 然后和00:11:814 (2,3) - 做成一样的样式(note叠在滑条头) 这样做可以更契合vocal 这条主观性挺强的可以忽视
00:17:814 (4) - ctrl+g flow可能更好些
00:21:414 (8,9) - ^
00:21:757 (10) - ^
00:22:785 (2,3,4) - 有点近
00:24:070 (6) - 可以去掉, 感觉加上也没什么意思, 个人觉得删了后(5)和(7)做成跳更有感觉些
00:25:185 (1) - 有点丑...
00:26:557 (1) - ....
00:25:700 (2,3,4) - 这样处理可能flow更好..为了下面的(1)的话
00:27:071 (2,3,4) - ^
00:28:271 (2) - ctrl+G
00:29:300 (1) - ^
00:35:814 (7,8,1) - (8)的位置我建议放的跳点
00:36:500 (2) - ctrl+g
00:45:328 - map上?
00:45:414 (5) - 红线+finish
00:51:585 (4) - ctrl+g会顺一些 但貌似有些难 你看着弄吧
01:09:071 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 感觉这里没必要overmap.. 音乐里的话也不是很明显 01:19:185 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 如果想用四分滑条这里倒是可以考虑下我认为

美丽

[Hard]
00:07:014 (5,6,7,8,1) - Arc
00:09:071 (3,4) - too close
00:40:100 (6,7,1,2) - Arc
00:45:585 (3) - finish
00:48:328 (3) - finish if you don't think it is loud
00:51:071 (3) - finish
00:51:585 (5) - remove finish add clap
01:06:328 (3) - finish
01:17:300 (5) - finish
01:18:671 (3) - finish
01:24:157 (1) - nc here, and 01:24:842 (1) - remove nc

[normal]
there are some NC issue here, i won't write down every NC points, sorry :(

00:01:871 (3,4,5,6,1) - make a better arc
00:14:214 (4) - nc
00:14:214 (4,5,6,7) - this rhyme may be little hard for normal
00:58:785 (6) - nc

[easy]
00:14:214 (4) - nc
00:15:242 (5) - wrong rhythm
00:14:214 (4) - ^

i think this easy is just like normal diff. you may simplify it
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