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Ogura Yui - Charming Do! (TV Size) [Taiko]

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Nardoxyribonucleic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年5月23日 at 10:57:25

Artist: Ogura Yui
Title: Charming Do! (TV Size)
Source: 最近、妹のようすがちょっとおかしいんだが。
Tags: Taiko Recently my sister is unusual Saikin Imouto no Yousu ga Chotto Okashiin da ga imocho Ending meetmeetdee JUDYDANNY
BPM: 174
Filesize: 2250kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. JuDa's Futsuu (4.24 stars, 229 notes)
  2. Kantan (2.5 stars, 147 notes)
  3. Meet's Oni (4.94 stars, 497 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (4.83 stars, 380 notes)
  5. Oni (4.94 stars, 474 notes)
Download: Ogura Yui - Charming Do! (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#5 - Taiko mapset
BG - 100%
Kantan - 100%
JuDa's Futsuu - 100% (by JUDYDANNY)
Muzukashii - 100%
Oni - 100%
Meet's Oni - 100% (by meetmeetdee)
Acknowledgement
Thanks aabc for the offset help.
Thanks to all modders who helped making the mapset better.
Evening
From Zenx' Mod Quehueheuhuehaudndf uandf

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Timing Check

Offset

The hitsound sounds a bit late? I'm not an expert at checking offset though so I can't give you the exact value to change to

BPM

No Problemssadif

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

No problems for the first half, the kat rhythm and spread is pretty smooth

00:39:572 (188) - d >D | According to your pattern, you use finish when a rhythm ends, so I think you should add a finish here

y u no give me errors to mod

I don't think there's any other errors, very smooth and consistent kat rhythm for the whole chart

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

meet's Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:21:469 (103) - d > k | According to your pattern, the kat density here is a bit too low for your current pattern, i suggest to add a kat to fill this up
00:23:279 (114) - Remove | 113 is the start of another rhythm so i suggest to use a finish for 113 and remove 114
00:56:124 (302) - d > D | This is the start of another rhythm I suggest to emphasize it with a finish

No Other problems, I think you might want to use more finishes to emphasize some part of the rhythm otherwise, smooth kat rhythm and good spread of kats

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

No Problems for Muzu

[Futsuu]

00:05:952 (13) - Move ( > ) Right by 1/2 | There seems to be a lack of kats here and putting a kat on 13 seems a bit early, it will ruin the kat rhythm in my opinion
00:10:779 - Spinner?

[Kantan]
00:10:779 - Spinner?
00:36:124 - This place seems to be too empty I suggest to add some notes here

No Other Problems

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

lZenxl wrote:

From Zenx' Mod Quehueheuhuehaudndf uandf

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Timing Check

Offset

The hitsound sounds a bit late? I'm not an expert at checking offset though so I can't give you the exact value to change to will recheck it later

BPM

No Problemssadif

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

No problems for the first half, the kat rhythm and spread is pretty smooth

00:39:572 (188) - d >D | According to your pattern, you use finish when a rhythm ends, so I think you should add a finish here um... the note is not stressed enough to use finish >_<

y u no give me errors to mod

I don't think there's any other errors, very smooth and consistent kat rhythm for the whole chart

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

No Problems for Muzu

[Futsuu]

00:05:952 (13) - Move ( > ) Right by 1/2 | There seems to be a lack of kats here and putting a kat on 13 seems a bit early, it will ruin the kat rhythm in my opinion removed 00:05:434 and 00:05:779 - and changed 00:05:607 to kat for better flow
00:10:779 - Spinner? added a spinner starting from 00:10:607 - 00:11:641

[Kantan]
00:10:779 - Spinner? same as Futsuu
00:36:124 - This place seems to be too empty I suggest to add some notes here added a don.

No Other Problems

Good luck!
Thanks for the mod Zenx~ :)
meetmeetdee

lZenxl wrote:

From Zenx' Mod Quehueheuhuehaudndf uandf

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Timing Check

Offset

The hitsound sounds a bit late? I'm not an expert at checking offset though so I can't give you the exact value to change to

BPM

No Problemssadif

meet's Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

00:21:469 (103) - d > k | According to your pattern, the kat density here is a bit too low for your current pattern, i suggest to add a kat to fill this up OK
00:23:279 (114) - Remove | 113 is the start of another rhythm so i suggest to use a finish for 113 and remove 114 nope, I prefer the transition as original
00:56:124 (302) - d > D | This is the start of another rhythm I suggest to emphasize it with a finish That part isn't really strong in music

No Other problems, I think you might want to use more finishes to emphasize some part of the rhythm otherwise, smooth kat rhythm and good spread of kats this song does not really deserve much finish in my opinion, I may consider it later

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems


Good luck!
Thanks for your mod :)
toara_fict
Hey Nardo :3
taiko mod request from you. ( Sorry late ;w; )

Modding
[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. Vol Change. ( All 100% The very noisy ;w; )
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Kantan]
  1. okay. However, be a little difficult.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Futsuu]
  1. Kantan too.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:32:331 (135) - Change d ? ( 00:31:986 (134) - some sound and Oni = d )
  2. 00:45:779 (195) - move 00:46:124 (196) - ( More of here is good pattern ? )
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Oni]
  1. 01:24:831 (442) - move 01:24:486 (440) - ? ( Better here pattern
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Meet's Oni]
  1. 00:32:245 (168) - move 00:32:072 (167) - and Change d ? ( More of here is good pattern )
  2. 00:37:762 (199) - move 00:37:589 (198) - ? ( Have a sounds. )
  3. 00:38:883 (205,206,207,208,209) - d d kkk => ddk d k ? ( 00:38:969 (206) - have a sounds )

Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

toara_fict wrote:

Hey Nardo :3 Hi toara :3
taiko mod request from you. ( Sorry late ;w; )

Modding
[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. Vol Change. ( All 100% The very noisy ;w; ) changed to 90%
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Kantan]
  1. okay. However, be a little difficult.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Futsuu]
  1. Kantan too.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:32:331 (135) - Change d ? ( 00:31:986 (134) - some sound and Oni = d ) fixed
  2. 00:45:779 (195) - move 00:46:124 (196) - ( More of here is good pattern ? ) fixed
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Oni]
  1. 01:24:831 (442) - move 01:24:486 (440) - ? ( Better here pattern fixed
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Good Luck :3
Thanks for the mod toara~~ :D
meetmeetdee

toara_fict wrote:

Hey Nardo :3
taiko mod request from you. ( Sorry late ;w; )

Modding
[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. Vol Change. ( All 100% The very noisy ;w; )
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Meet's Oni]
  1. 00:32:245 (168) - move 00:32:072 (167) - and Change d ? ( More of here is good pattern ) OK
  2. 00:37:762 (199) - move 00:37:589 (198) - ? ( Have a sounds. ) OK
  3. 00:38:883 (205,206,207,208,209) - d d kkk => ddk d k ? ( 00:38:969 (206) - have a sounds ) OK

Good Luck :3
Thanks for your mod :)
Nofool
Hi', mod req from Nardo.
I'm still unexperienced é_è... so it's all suggestions ofc.
I hope it'll be usefull a bit.
[Kantan]
  • 00:22:158 (20) d instead of k ? Sounds well (and I think so it’s the right moment to break the previous usual kdk)
    00:26:641 (27) maybe move this one to 00:26:469 ?
    00:32:158 (36) ^ to 00:31:986
    00:37:676 (47) ^ to 00:37:503
    00:43:193 (59) ^ to 00:43:020
    ^ I don’t get what you’re following at these 4 moments, it’s prolly just me x) but it sounds better to me at the moments I suggested (‘cause of both voice and weak melody). What you made fits with the style you mapped the whole song so.. as you prefer n_n.
[Futsuu]
  • 00:08:538 (17) d instead of k ?
    01:14:745 (186) ^
Nothing else T_T.
[Muzukashii]
  • 00:12:331 (50,51,52,53) dddk instead of dkdd ?
    00:17:848 (74,75,76,77) ^
    00:45:952 (195,196,197,198) kkdk instead of ddkd ? Fits better with both voice and melody to me.
    00:52:331 (224,225,226) ddk instead of dkd ?
[Oni]
  • 00:14:572 (63) d instead of k ? (melody)
    00:18:020 (80) ^
    00:20:089 (91) same as 00:14:572
    00:40:434 (192,193,194) kdk or kkk instead of kdd would fit better with the song atm to me.
    00:53:020 (257,258,259) kdd instead of ddk ?
    01:13:193 (366,367,368) kdk instead of kkd ? (voice)
[Meet's Oni]
  • 00:10:089 (41,42,43) kdk or kkk instead of ddk ? Fits better with both voice and melody atm to me.
    00:24:400 (122) d instead of k ?
    00:44:400 (236) ^
    01:05:262 (356) ^
    01:07:676 (371) k instead of d and then d instead of k at 01:07:848 ? I suggest it mostly because the voice’s intensity is higher at 01:07:676 than at 01:07:848
    01:09:917 (385) k instead of d ?
    01:26:469 (486) ^
Coro
Taiko mod~
All are suggestion unless in red.

[Muzukashii]
00:02:158 (6,7) - change to kd? I think it sounds better with the consistent k
00:03:538 (12,13) - ^
00:07:676 (30,31) - ^
00:09:055 (36,37) - ^
00:14:745 (61) - probably should remove finish, since it's same color as the previous note
00:20:262 (85) - ^
00:23:365 (99) - remove

[Oni]
00:02:158 (6,7) - same as Muzu
00:03:538 (12,13) - ^
00:07:676 (31,32) - ^
00:09:055 (37,38) - ^

the other diffs are fine~
good luck with rank~
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Nofool wrote:

Hi', mod req from Nardo.
I'm still unexperienced é_è... so it's all suggestions ofc.
I hope it'll be usefull a bit.
[Kantan]
  • 00:22:158 (20) d instead of k ? Sounds well (and I think so it’s the right moment to break the previous usual kdk) fixed
    00:26:641 (27) maybe move this one to 00:26:469 ? Agree~ It sounds better.
    00:32:158 (36) ^ to 00:31:986 ^
    00:37:676 (47) ^ to 00:37:503 ^
    00:43:193 (59) ^ to 00:43:020 ^
    ^ I don’t get what you’re following at these 4 moments, it’s prolly just me x) but it sounds better to me at the moments I suggested (‘cause of both voice and weak melody). What you made fits with the style you mapped the whole song so.. as you prefer n_n.
[Futsuu]
  • 00:08:538 (17) d instead of k ? no change, k fits the vocal imo
    01:14:745 (186) ^ ^
Nothing else T_T.
[Muzukashii]
  • 00:12:331 (50,51,52,53) dddk instead of dkdd ? fixed
    00:17:848 (74,75,76,77) ^ ^
    00:45:952 (195,196,197,198) kkdk instead of ddkd ? Fits better with both voice and melody to me. fixed
    00:52:331 (224,225,226) ddk instead of dkd ? no change. Vocal is of low pitch and snare is relatively dominant.
[Oni]
  • 00:14:572 (63) d instead of k ? (melody) fixed
    00:18:020 (80) ^ no change. It's good to follow the snare.
    00:20:089 (91) same as 00:14:572 fixed
    00:40:434 (192,193,194) kdk or kkk instead of kdd would fit better with the song atm to me. changed to kdk
    00:53:020 (257,258,259) kdd instead of ddk ? no change
    01:13:193 (366,367,368) kdk instead of kkd ? (voice) no change. This is similar to 01:07:676 (331,332,333)
Thanks for the mod Nofool~ :)

CoroQuetz wrote:

Taiko mod~
All are suggestion unless in red.

[Muzukashii]
00:02:158 (6,7) - change to kd? I think it sounds better with the consistent k There is no need to follow such a consistency at the beginning of song imo... I prefer vocal rather than this.
00:03:538 (12,13) - ^ ^
00:07:676 (30,31) - ^ ^
00:09:055 (36,37) - ^ ^
00:14:745 (61) - probably should remove finish, since it's same color as the previous note The note is stressed and in high pitch... can't think of a reason of not using a big kat
00:20:262 (85) - ^ ^
00:23:365 (99) - remove fixed

[Oni]
00:02:158 (6,7) - same as Muzu refer to Muzu
00:03:538 (12,13) - ^ ^
00:07:676 (31,32) - ^ ^
00:09:055 (37,38) - ^ ^

the other diffs are fine~
good luck with rank~
Thanks for the mod~ :)
meetmeetdee

Nofool wrote:

Hi', mod req from Nardo.
I'm still unexperienced é_è... so it's all suggestions ofc.
I hope it'll be usefull a bit.

[Meet's Oni]
  • 00:10:089 (41,42,43) kdk or kkk instead of ddk ? Fits better with both voice and melody atm to me. current one is fit imo
    00:24:400 (122) d instead of k ? Ok
    00:44:400 (236) ^ Ok
    01:05:262 (356) ^ Ok
    01:07:676 (371) k instead of d and then d instead of k at 01:07:848 ? I suggest it mostly because the voice’s intensity is higher at 01:07:676 than at 01:07:848 Ok
    01:09:917 (385) k instead of d ? I hear drum here
    01:26:469 (486) ^ I hear drum here
Thanks for your mod :)
JUDYDANNY
No Kds please.
hi. just only General for the 1st time.
[General]
  1. Uncheck the widescreen support(that is for SB options). This beatmap has not SB.
    http://puu.sh/728Ot.png
  2. Timing
    Metronome stats offset 1123
    , not 951. :(
  3. meet's Oni
    :!: bg positions changed x:y 0:-55
    like Nardo's diff.
    File > Open .osu in NotePad
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"imocho_bg.JPG",0,-55
    :!: Circe size change => +1.
    Star Difficulty .... ._.
Later I will come again to mod all of taiko diffs.
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

JUDYDANNY wrote:

No Kds please.
hi. just only General for the 1st time.
[General]
  1. Uncheck the widescreen support(that is for SB options). This beatmap has not SB. fixed
    http://puu.sh/728Ot.png
  2. Timing
    Metronome stats offset 1123 You mean shifting 1/2 earlier? I'm still considering this...
    , not 951. :(
  3. meet's Oni
    :!: bg positions changed x:y 0:-55
    like Nardo's diff. OK, I helped him fix it.
    File > Open .osu in NotePad
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"imocho_bg.JPG",0,-55
    :!: Circe size change => +1. fixed
    Star Difficulty .... ._.
Later I will come again to mod all of taiko diffs. OK. Thanks for the star :D
Lundlerol
Hi
Nardoォ!'s mod req via my mod queue


[General]
Please resnap all notes(;_;)/~~~

[Kantan]
00:11:985 - ~ 00:22:847 - relocation?
00:11:985 - D
00:13:364 - k
00:14:054 - d
00:14:744 - k
00:15:606 - k
00:16:123 - d
00:18:882 - k
00:19:571 - d
00:20:261 - k
00:21:123 - k
00:21:640 - ~ 00:22:847 - spinner I think it's good
Consider following synthesizer sound to make more natural rhythm.

00:23:192 - umm....remove finisher? there isn't the sound of cymbals here, so the big note is noisy. so,I think that the big note is not necessary for this atmosphere.
00:25:606 - del?
00:27:502 - 00:27:847 - k? It comes to seem to be kantan more when you put it monotonically.
00:31:123 - del?
00:32:675 - same as above.
00:34:054 - same as above.
00:36:640 - del?
00:38:537 - same as above.
00:41:295 - same as above.
00:42:157 - del?
00:44:054 - same as above.
00:46:468 - ~ 00:47:502 - spinner?
00:47:847 - remove finisher? there isn't the sound of cymbals here, so the big note is noisy.
00:50:088 - del? i think that this note is not necessary. The rhythm of the red line is difficult,imo.
00:51:123 - del? same as reason
00:52:502 - del? same as reason
00:52:847 - move to 00:52:675 -
00:53:882 - del? same as reason
00:56:640 - del?^
00:58:882 - remove finisher? there isn't the sound of cymbals here, so the big note is noisy.
01:02:157 - del?
01:02:847 - move to 01:03:019 - ?
01:05:261 - ~ 01:06:813 - spinner?
01:09:054 - del?
01:10:433 - del?
01:13:192 - del?
01:26:985 - del?
I suggested it to make simple rhythm in consideration of a beginner..
I mod and adjust from your style._.

[Futsuu]
Please refer to kantan.

[Muzukashii]
00:05:778 - del? I think a dim sound that it is not necessary to follow
hah! nice diff~!:D


[Oni]
00:05:778 - del? I think a dim sound that it is not necessary to follow
00:11:640 - k triplet? you can follow with a synthesizer
00:23:019 - k? I think that this d cannot gain momentum just before a big note
01:08:019 - k? you can follow with a accent vocal
01:10:606 - ~ 01:11:123 - ddk kkk? I think fit it.
01:13:537 - same as above.
01:19:226 - k triplet? Please think to attach the first half and a change
01:24:571 - k? you can follow with an accent vocal.
01:24:744 - ~ 01:25:433 - I felt lacking here ;w; 01:25:088 - kkd triplet? you can follow with vocal long tone.

done..?
good luck~:3
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Lundlerol wrote:

Hi Hi Lundlerol~
Nardoォ!'s mod req via my mod queue


[General]
Please resnap all notes(;_;)/~~~ Done for all diffs

[Kantan]
00:11:985 - ~ 00:22:847 - relocation?
00:11:985 - D
00:13:364 - k
00:14:054 - d
00:14:744 - k
00:15:606 - k
00:16:123 - d
00:18:882 - k
00:19:571 - d
00:20:261 - k
00:21:123 - k
00:21:640 - ~ 00:22:847 - spinner I think it's good
Consider following synthesizer sound to make more natural rhythm. Thanks, the rhythm becomes much better now :D

00:23:192 - umm....remove finisher? there isn't the sound of cymbals here, so the big note is noisy. so,I think that the big note is not necessary for this atmosphere. OK
00:25:606 - del? A bit hollow if doing so...
00:27:502 - 00:27:847 - k? It comes to seem to be kantan more when you put it monotonically. fixed
00:31:123 - del? same as 00:25:606
00:32:675 - same as above. fixed
00:34:054 - same as above. fixed
00:36:640 - del? fixed
00:38:537 - same as above. fixed
00:41:295 - same as above. fixed
00:42:157 - del? fixed
00:44:054 - same as above. fixed
00:46:468 - ~ 00:47:502 - spinner? deleted 00:47:330 instead of using a spinner
00:47:847 - remove finisher? there isn't the sound of cymbals here, so the big note is noisy. fixed
00:50:088 - del? i think that this note is not necessary. The rhythm of the red line is difficult,imo. fixed
00:51:123 - del? same as reason I want to step up the difficulty by a little bit starting from here, so no change
00:52:502 - del? same as reason ^
00:52:847 - move to 00:52:675 - ^
00:53:882 - del? same as reason ^
00:56:640 - del?^ ^
00:58:882 - remove finisher? there isn't the sound of cymbals here, so the big note is noisy. fixed
01:02:157 - del? fixed
01:02:847 - move to 01:03:019 - ? fixed
01:05:261 - ~ 01:06:813 - spinner? fixed
01:09:054 - del? fixed
01:10:433 - del? fixed
01:13:192 - del? fixed
01:26:985 - del? fixed
I suggested it to make simple rhythm in consideration of a beginner..
I mod and adjust from your style._.

[Futsuu]
Please refer to kantan. I just accepted JUDYDANNY's diff. This Futsuu will be provided in "Creator's Words".

[Muzukashii]
00:05:778 - del? I think a dim sound that it is not necessary to follow fixed
hah! nice diff~!:D Thanks \:D/


[Oni]
00:05:778 - del? I think a dim sound that it is not necessary to follow fixed
00:11:640 - k triplet? you can follow with a synthesizer It seems to be nice~
00:23:019 - k? I think that this d cannot gain momentum just before a big note The current one fits the music more imo...
01:08:019 - k? you can follow with a accent vocal It is quite reasonable. Fixed.
01:10:606 - ~ 01:11:123 - ddk kkk? I think fit it. changed to ddk kdk
01:13:537 - same as above. fixed
01:19:226 - k triplet? Please think to attach the first half and a change fixed
01:24:571 - k? you can follow with an accent vocal. fixed
01:24:744 - ~ 01:25:433 - I felt lacking here ;w; 01:25:088 - kkd triplet? you can follow with vocal long tone. Fixed. It would be better to have a triplet in between.

done..?
good luck~:3
Thanks for the mod~ :)
JUDYDANNY
Hi :3//

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
1/1 ,1/2 ….” Beat Snap Divisor”.
Big text is storong suggestion.

[General]
  1. I Said again.. 00:00:951 – starts music,yes. but Metronome starts 00:01:123…so add Redline on the offset 1123.
    Try to Compare with 951 and 1123 “ +Nightcore+Autoplay “… .. ;w;
[Kantan]
  1. 00:25:606 (23) – move 1/1 left. hear the piano hits & begin to slar. & You put 00:23:192 (20,21,22) – follow vocal ,yes. But also all piano hits storong point.
  2. 00:31:123 (32) –same as above.
  3. 00:36:123 (42) – move 1/2 right. reason is same. ^
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:33:709 (138) – k hits snea sounds. andI think backsounds feels good:3/
  2. 00:48:537 (205) – delete, make the same 00:45:778 -.
  3. 01:00:606 (256) – how about add d?
[Oni]
  1. 00:49:916 (243) – delete or k
  2. 00:50:347 (246) – add k?
  3. 01:06:726 (330) – add note? hear the beautiful backsound.
  4. 01:06:813 (330) – k

[meet’s Oni]
  1. 00:11:813 – k fit as Harp sound :3
  2. 00:12:847 – d 00:12:502 (1,2) – put kd feels not to follow synth, dfit to follow the bass drums :3
  3. 00:15:606 – ^ ? if you like.
  4. 00:18:364 – ^
  5. 00:19:744 -^? If you like.
  6. 00:22:588 – I try to suggest d :3/
  7. Phrase start is 00:23:192 - ~~~ , not 00:23:019 -~~.
    Try to these rhythm pattern. 00:23:019 -~.
  8. 00:26:295 (1,2,3,4,5) – d k ddd=>k ddd d k or k ddd k k
  9. and.. 00:35:088 - d?
  10. 00:31:554 – delete, unnecessary.
  11. 00:42:071 – add d , backsound (piano) fits :3
  12. 00:42:588 – move 00:42:761 - + 00:43:278 – move 00:43:106 – and k … ddk kkd :3 how about?
  13. 00:52:933 – move 00:52:761 - … but also can move 00:53:106 -. I think 53:106 – better/
  14. 00:54:054 - d?
  15. 01:00:433 (1,2,3,4,5) – ddd d k =>d ddk or d ddk d
  16. 01:01:985 ( – d
  17. 01:09:054 – k ;;; why d._. ;;
  18. 01:09:226 - d + 01:09:399 – k? if you hope to avoid same pattern 01:10:433 (1,2) -.
  19. 01:12:416 – add note ,fit as backsound :3:3
  20. 01:13:106 – , 01:14:485 - 01:16:985 – unncesesarry .. ._.
  21. 01:10:864– add d? follow the synthesizer slar.
  22. 01:18:709 (1,2) – swap
  23. Either
    01:19:657 (446) – add d + 01:19:744 (447) – change d
    Or
    01:19:744 (446) – delete.
  24. 01:23:192 (1,2,3) ~~– divisor 1/4 streams..ddddk…. :3:3:3
  25. 01:25:864 (483) – add k .. fit as vocal.
  26. 00:45:088 (241) – add finisher
  27. 00:56:123 (302) -^
  28. 01:18:192 (437) -^
  29. still need to add some finishers… I guess
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through ;)
Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hi :3// Hi JuDa :3//

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
1/1 ,1/2 ….” Beat Snap Divisor”.
Big text is storong suggestion.

[General]
  1. I Said again.. 00:00:951 – starts music,yes. but Metronome starts 00:01:123…so add Redline on the offset 1123.
    Try to Compare with 951 and 1123 “ +Nightcore+Autoplay “… .. ;w; I've found some mappers to check the offset. They said that 951 is perfect.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:25:606 (23) – move 1/1 left. hear the piano hits & begin to slar. & You put 00:23:192 (20,21,22) – follow vocal ,yes. But also all piano hits storong point. It would be better. Fixed.
  2. 00:31:123 (32) –same as above. fixed
  3. 00:36:123 (42) – move 1/2 right. reason is same. ^ fixed
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:33:709 (138) – k hits snea sounds. andI think backsounds feels good:3/ OK
  2. 00:48:537 (205) – delete, make the same 00:45:778 -. fixed
  3. 01:00:606 (256) – how about add d? There is no significant sound or vocal to follow, so no change.
[Oni]
  1. 00:49:916 (243) – delete or k changed to k
  2. 00:50:347 (246) – add k? fixed
  3. 01:06:726 (330) – add note? hear the beautiful backsound. added k there
  4. 01:06:813 (330) – k no change
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through ;)
Good Luck! :D
Thanks for the mod~ :)
meetmeetdee

JUDYDANNY wrote:

SPOILER
Hi :3//

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
1/1 ,1/2 ….” Beat Snap Divisor”.
Big text is storong suggestion.


[/list][/notice]
[meet’s Oni]
  1. 00:11:813 – k fit as Harp sound :3 OK
  2. 00:12:847 – d OK
    00:12:502 (1,2) – put kd feels not to follow synth, dfit to follow the bass drums :3 I feel kd is better here
  3. 00:15:606 – ^ ? if you like. OK
  4. 00:18:364 – ^ OK
  5. 00:19:744 -^? If you like. OK
  6. 00:22:588 – I try to suggest d :3/ OK
  7. Phrase start is 00:23:192 - ~~~ , not 00:23:019 -~~.
    Try to these rhythm pattern. 00:23:019 -~. OK
  8. 00:26:295 (1,2,3,4,5) – d k ddd=>k ddd d k or k ddd k k I use k kdd d k instead
  9. and.. 00:35:088 - d? OK
  10. 00:31:554 – delete, unnecessary. OK
  11. 00:42:071 – add d , backsound (piano) fits :3 OK
  12. 00:42:588 – move 00:42:761 - + 00:43:278 – move 00:43:106 – and k … ddk kkd :3 how about? Ok for ddk
  13. 00:52:933 – move 00:52:761 - … but also can move 00:53:106 -. I think 53:106 – better/ I use 00:53:106
  14. 00:54:054 - d? OK
  15. 01:00:433 (1,2,3,4,5) – ddd d k =>d ddk or d ddk d nope, feel strange for me
  16. 01:01:985 ( – d OK
  17. 01:09:054 – k ;;; why d._. ;; OK
  18. 01:09:226 - d + 01:09:399 – k? if you hope to avoid same pattern 01:10:433 (1,2) -. OK
  19. 01:12:416 – add note ,fit as backsound :3:3 OK
  20. 01:13:106 – , 01:14:485 - 01:16:985 – unncesesarry .. ._. Remove first two only
  21. 01:10:864– add d? follow the synthesizer slar. I prefer no 1/4 in that part
  22. 01:18:709 (1,2) – swap OK
  23. Either
    01:19:657 (446) – add d + 01:19:744 (447) – change d This seems better
    Or
    01:19:744 (446) – delete.
  24. 01:23:192 (1,2,3) ~~– divisor 1/4 streams..ddddk…. :3:3:3 I prefer d ddk
  25. 01:25:864 (483) – add k .. fit as vocal. d seems better here
  26. 00:45:088 (241) – add finisher OK
  27. 00:56:123 (302) -^ OK
  28. 01:18:192 (437) -^ OK
  29. still need to add some finishers… I guess
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through ;)
Good Luck! :D
Thanks for your mod :)

@Nardo
Here is the update
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Updated~
Redon
[Timing]

The BPM seems fine. No tempo changes, so no problem there.

The offset is set 1/2 too early. Instead of 951 ms, it should be at 1123 ms
This may seem counter-intuitive when listening to the first few seconds of the song, but that's because the chorus puts a strong emphasis on the 7th beat. You might notice that with your current offset, the first bar line is always off by 1/2 throughout the song. It's especially evident when you listen to the metronome in the timing window.(Trust me, I'm a doctor.)

You can adjust the position of the inherited timing points too, although I see no harm in kicking off Kiai time 1/2 early to match that emphasis. Just make sure you do recheck their position since you're messing with the uninherited section they sit on.

Also, for consistency I suggest you use these same timing settings on all difficulties, especially since you currently have conflicting timing sections between JuDa's Fuutsu and the rest.

Incoming opinions

[Kantan]
00:40:951 (51,52,53) - I suggest d d d instead of k k k as a sort of contrast to 00:43:709 (56,57,58)

00:58:364 - don and 00:58:882 (81) add a finish?

01:07:157 (1) - Add a finish
01:09:054 - Add a kat
01:13:192 - Add a kat
01:14:054 (11) - kat
01:25:088 (32) - kat

[JuDa's Futsuu]
00:02:329 (3) - Kat for consistency with later part of the intro
I like that there seems to be this pattern of alternating between d d d and k k k on the emphasized notes beginning at 00:24:398 (1,2,3)
I think it would play very nicely if you kept this consistent throughout the verse, e.g.:
00:26:812 (2) - don
00:27:502 - Add kat
00:28:019 (4) - Move to 00:27:847
00:37:502 (20,21,22,23,24) - d d k k k instead of k k d d d

00:49:226 (2) - don
00:50:433 (1) - kat

The chorus is perfect.

[Muzukashii]
00:02:157 (6,7) - I suggest switching these around from d k to k d for consistency of having a don on the 7th.
00:03:537 (12,13) - Same as above.
00:07:675 (29,30) - Same as above.
00:09:054 (35,36) - Same as above.

00:24:399 (102) - Turn this one in to a don to emphasize downbeat and to match the following three dons
00:29:226 (121) - Move don to 00:29:571
00:26:468 (110,111,112) - 00:31:985 (132,133,134) - I suggest you make these two parts the same for consistency since they follow the same rhythm pattern
00:45:951 (193,194,195,196) - Turn this kkdk into ddkd

The rest looks fine!

I don't do well enough on the Onis, so I'm leaving them out for now. Perhaps I'll add something about them later.
Nice maps, good luck on getting them ranked!
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