forum

Black Raison d'etre - Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)

posted
Total Posts
74
Topic Starter
Lust
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, March 25, 2014 at 7:09:22 AM

Artist: Black Raison d'etre
Title: Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
Source: 中二病でも恋がしたい!戀
Tags: Chu-2 season two ending ED Love, Chunibyo & Other Delusions! Two Chūnibyō Demo Koi ga Shitai! Ren Cloudchaser Momochikun Cloudsplash16 Togashi Yuta Rikka Takanashi Satone Shichimiya Shinka Nibutani Kumin Tsuyuri Sanae Dekomori Makoto Isshiki Kazari Kannagi Kuzuha Togashi Yumeha Togashi Touka Takanashi ZAQ happy30
BPM: 167
Filesize: 8866kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Cloudchaser's Normal (3.92 stars, 119 notes)
  2. CloudSplash's Insane (5 stars, 334 notes)
  3. happy30's Insane (5 stars, 271 notes)
  4. Hard (4.97 stars, 237 notes)
  5. Mochi's Easy (2.92 stars, 105 notes)
Download: Black Raison d'etre - Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
Download: Black Raison d'etre - Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
#3
Asphyxia
First
Little
^^/
Here's my diff and hitsounds: http://puu.sh/6hPYf.zip

Unicode Artist should be: Black Raison d'être
Topic Starter
Lust
updated :^)
Umi
(>' 3')> http://puu.sh/6hS33/f6c6dd2814.rar what u think ?

I was expecting an ending as awesome as the first one, a bit sad ;w; but well not bad too >.<

GL Lust and the Cloud Crew lol
Cloudchaser
Here's my diff http://puu.sh/6i9Dk.rar I need to check NCs but it's ready for mods, I hope you like it.

I'm using Cloud16's hitsounds too~
MouseEasy
Ganbatte Lustão :^)
MikuEviL
Mod Reqest???
Topic Starter
Lust
opened for modding :)
MikuEviL

Lust wrote:

opened for modding :)

Yes!!!!!!
MikuEviL
[b]Mydiff+Sound+BG>>>>>>>>>>>Deleted!!!
Topic Starter
Lust
sorry but not taking anymore gds
Yauxo
[Mochi's Easy]

00:13:300 (1) - (semi-optional?) Iam unsure whether this Spinner is doable to new players. An alternative would be another long Slider or a simple Circle combo.
01:05:036 (1) - ^

[Cloud's Normal]

00:07:821 (3) - You could add a Circle here
00:08:090 (3) - Consider resnapping this one. Jumping from .8 to .5ish feels weird and is hard to actually hit.
00:25:695 (2) - This one seems offbeat and is difficult to play (for some reason it actually is) Consider changing the mapping here abit; some examples:
Now:

Ex1:

Ex2:

(Optional (variation)) 00:56:234 (3) - Add a Circle here

[Lust's Hard]

00:10:066 (4) - Add a Circle to keep the flow/ up with the beat.
00:32:252 (2) - let this one start at 00:32:342 (2) - (1 tick). Doesnt really make sense to me that its starting mid-vocal and between the beats
(optional) 00:54:078 (2) - lower slider velocity for this one
00:55:695 (3) - This one feels better with a simple slider

[Cloud's Insane]

00:14:198 (4,5) - Add 2 Circles here for a better transition into the slider

In general, NCing on sudden speed changes would be something that makes it easier to read those.
The ones that really got me were:

00:02:701 (1) -
00:05:395 (4) -
00:11:503 (5) -
00:37:371 (1) -

[]
Didnt find too much, but its something
Little

Yauxo wrote:

[Cloud's Insane]

00:14:198 (4,5) - Add 2 Circles here for a better transition into the slider That doesn't follow the music..

In general, NCing on sudden speed changes would be something that makes it easier to read those. Using NC like that screws up the HP scaling.. and I don't see how any of these SV changes are hard to read.. all of them have visible slider ticks
The ones that really got me were:

00:02:701 (1) -
00:05:395 (4) -
00:11:503 (5) -
00:37:371 (1) -

[]
Didnt find too much, but its something
Thanks, no changes to my diff from this mod.
@Lust, I made a couple of changes on my own to improve spacing and flow at parts.
Cloud's Insane
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: vanishmentthisworld.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54617
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
Artist:Black Raison d'etre
ArtistUnicode:Black Raison d'être
Creator:Lust
Version:Cloud's Insane
Source:中二病でも恋がしたい!戀
Tags:Chu-2 season two ending ED Love, Chunibyo & Other Delusions! Two Chūnibyō Demo Koi ga Shitai! Ren Cloudchaser Momochikun Cloudsplash16 Togashi Yuta Rikka Takanashi Satone Shichimiya Shinka Nibutani Kumin Tsuyuri Sanae Dekomori Makoto Isshiki Kazari Kannagi Kuzuha Togashi Yumeha Togashi Touka Takanashi ZAQ
BeatmapID:353859
BeatmapSetID:141956

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Ed.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
366,359.281437125748,4,2,2,40,1,0
366,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,40,0,0
2701,-200,4,2,2,40,0,0
3240,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,40,0,0
5395,-200,4,2,2,40,0,0
6114,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
7012,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
8988,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
11503,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,65,0,0
11863,-80,4,2,1,65,0,0
14377,-57.1428571428571,4,2,1,70,0,0
14737,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,0
17611,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
25874,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,65,0,0
26234,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
34857,-100,4,2,1,53,0,0
35575,-100,4,2,1,57,0,0
36294,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
37012,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
37371,-57.1428571428571,4,2,1,70,0,0
37731,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
38809,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
38988,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
40246,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
40425,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
41683,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
41863,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
43120,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
43300,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
44557,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
44737,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
45994,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
46174,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
46354,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,0
46713,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,45,0,0
46892,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,0
47431,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,45,0,0
47611,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,0
47791,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
48150,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
48330,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
48868,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
49048,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
49228,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
49587,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
49767,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
50306,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
50485,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
51024,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
51204,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
51743,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
51922,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
52461,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
52821,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
53180,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
53360,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
54976,-80,4,2,1,70,0,1
71863,-50,4,2,1,75,0,1
72222,-80,4,2,1,70,0,1
77521,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
77611,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
77880,-149.925037481259,4,2,1,60,0,0
78330,-80,4,2,1,70,0,1
82102,-80,4,2,1,60,0,0
83719,-80,4,2,1,70,0,0
87132,-80,4,2,1,60,0,0
87222,-80,4,2,1,40,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,64,64
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
101,153,366,2,0,P|135:224|198:236,1,135.000005149842,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,158,904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
15,297,1264,1,4,0:0:0:0:
228,345,1623,6,0,B|260:348|285:326|285:326|334:341|364:324,1,135.000005149842,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,157,2162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,237,2342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
438,246,2521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,158,2701,2,0,P|285:149|240:148,1,90
162,102,3240,6,0,B|133:163|175:210|175:210|159:233,1,135.000005149842,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,298,3779,2,0,P|50:284|23:264,1,67.5000025749208
182,325,4138,1,4,0:0:0:0:
182,325,4497,6,0,B|214:344|214:344|254:324|297:328|297:328|323:311,1,135.000005149842,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,233,5036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
426,332,5216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,235,5395,2,0,P|236:224|164:248,1,135
76,312,6114,5,2,0:0:0:0:
66,317,6204,1,2,0:0:0:0:
50,318,6294,1,2,0:0:0:0:
31,309,6383,1,2,0:0:0:0:
22,285,6473,1,2,0:0:0:0:
30,256,6563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,240,6653,1,2,0:0:0:0:
97,246,6743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,334,7012,2,0,P|237:300|320:304,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,343,7551,5,2,0:0:0:0:
393,158,7821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,363,8090,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,121,8270,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,334,8539,1,2,0:0:0:0:
462,226,8809,2,0,P|485:220|513:200,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,70,8988,6,0,P|386:113|393:158,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,363,9348,2,0,P|399:319|393:275,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,121,9707,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,334,9886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,334,9976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,334,10066,1,2,0:0:0:0:
354,199,10246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,250,10425,6,0,B|128:263|128:263|93:249|59:260,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,121,10785,2,0,B|245:108|245:108|280:122|314:111,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,199,11144,1,2,0:0:0:0:
157,250,11324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,310,11503,2,0,P|242:261|264:334,1,202.500007724762,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,300,11863,6,0,P|384:245|354:199,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,250,12222,1,2,0:0:0:0:
354,199,12401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,354,12581,1,2,0:0:0:0:
253,168,12761,2,0,P|260:140|276:118,1,56.25
168,159,12940,2,0,B|174:172|174:172|172:187|183:210|183:210|183:232|200:274,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,300,13300,6,0,P|345:339|288:335,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,199,13659,1,2,0:0:0:0:
495,104,13839,1,2,0:0:0:0:
495,104,14377,2,0,P|474:176|505:255,1,157.500001502037,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,300,14737,6,0,B|326:284|326:284|259:295,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,343,15276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,247,15455,1,2,0:0:0:0:
155,165,15635,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,136,15815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,15994,6,0,L|46:298,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,198,16354,2,0,L|190:247,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,336,16713,1,2,0:0:0:0:
319,336,16892,2,0,P|369:306|386:262,1,101.250003862381
386,246,17252,1,8,0:0:0:0:
193,331,17611,6,0,P|148:343|106:328,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,17970,2,0,L|41:127,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,77,18330,2,0,L|155:165,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,247,18689,2,0,P|343:259|386:246,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,83,19048,5,2,0:0:0:0:
343,182,19228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
466,183,19407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,73,19587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,135,19767,2,0,L|259:176,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,191,19946,2,0,L|165:235,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,200,20126,2,0,B|52:224|33:263|33:263|12:266,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,304,20485,6,0,P|164:317|206:305,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,176,20845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,235,21024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,309,21204,1,2,0:0:0:0:
309,309,21563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
259,176,21743,2,0,L|228:91,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,91,22282,5,8,0:0:0:0:
165,235,22461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,235,22821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
259,176,23000,1,8,0:0:0:0:
309,309,23180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
145,314,23360,6,0,P|101:286|85:246,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,114,23719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
259,176,23898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,94,24078,2,0,P|60:50|100:34,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,60,24437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
170,208,24616,1,2,0:0:0:0:
394,264,24976,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,270,25156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,312,25336,1,2,0:0:0:0:
209,320,25516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,340,25695,2,0,P|414:342|444:351,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,296,25874,2,0,P|295:232|259:176,1,135.000005149842,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,191,26234,6,0,B|98:209|98:209|90:256|117:278|117:278|121:300|109:319,1,135.000005149842,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,374,26773,1,2,0:0:0:0:
28,278,26952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,320,27132,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,313,27312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,241,27491,6,0,P|221:210|242:172,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,278,27851,2,0,P|56:247|77:209,1,67.5000025749208,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,320,28210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
209,320,28389,2,0,P|267:319|304:289,1,101.250003862381
312,275,28749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
113,191,29108,6,0,B|104:176|104:176|108:140|100:108,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,29467,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,192,29647,2,0,B|188:257|131:272|131:272|181:273,1,135.000005149842
312,275,30186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,275,30365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,368,30545,5,0,0:0:0:0:
179,368,30724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,192,30904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,275,31084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,272,31264,2,0,B|114:274|84:257|84:257|70:275,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,333,31623,1,8,0:0:0:0:
111,182,31803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
230,296,31982,6,0,P|256:339|305:360,1,101.250003862381,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,323,32342,2,0,L|405:245,1,67.5000025749208,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,109,32880,1,2,0:0:0:0:
270,109,33060,2,0,L|259:176,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,296,33419,5,2,0:0:0:0:
230,296,33779,2,0,B|196:297|180:269|180:269|151:309|85:309|57:255,1,202.500007724762,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,127,34497,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,226,34677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,138,34857,6,0,L|195:69,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,196,35216,1,8,0:0:0:0:
183,295,35396,1,2,0:0:0:0:
313,207,35576,2,0,L|254:138,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,265,35934,1,8,0:0:0:0:
242,364,36114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,276,36294,6,0,P|397:241|399:181,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,364,36653,1,8,0:0:0:0:
313,207,36833,1,2,0:0:0:0:
226,265,37012,2,0,L|180:297,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,211,37192,2,0,L|105:215,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,131,37371,2,0,P|112:110|188:83,1,157.500001502037,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,150,37641,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,211,37731,6,0,P|144:281|176:333,1,135.000005149842,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,300,38270,2,0,L|257:300,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,211,38629,1,2,0:0:0:0:
313,207,38809,2,0,L|380:207,1,67.5000025749208,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,300,39168,5,2,0:0:0:0:
210,150,39348,1,2,0:0:0:0:
210,150,39707,1,2,0:0:0:0:
210,150,40066,1,2,0:0:0:0:
166,317,40246,2,0,B|184:322|219:306|219:306|230:313,1,67.5000025749208,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,299,40605,6,0,P|304:237|336:179,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,247,41144,2,0,L|393:247,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,313,41503,1,2,0:0:0:0:
269,179,41683,2,0,L|336:179,1,67.5000025749208,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,300,42042,5,2,0:0:0:0:
161,211,42222,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,211,42581,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,211,42940,1,2,0:0:0:0:
37,333,43120,1,8,0:0:0:0:
59,357,43210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,367,43300,1,2,0:0:0:0:
143,357,43389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,318,43479,6,0,P|206:279|305:280,1,135.000005149842,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,348,44018,2,0,L|352:365,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,341,44377,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,211,44557,2,0,L|178:146,1,67.5000025749208,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,179,44916,5,2,0:0:0:0:
106,284,45096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
106,284,45455,2,0,P|72:234|86:158,1,135.000005149842,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,146,45994,2,0,L|161:211,1,67.5000025749208,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,244,46354,6,0,L|269:179,1,67.5000025749208,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,306,46713,2,0,P|273:322|313:318,1,67.5000025749208,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,165,47072,2,0,P|391:167|362:183,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,314,47431,1,8,0:0:0:0:
286,244,47611,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,228,47701,1,2,0:0:0:0:
201,237,47791,6,0,P|160:252|123:246,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,109,48150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
286,244,48330,2,0,L|309:314,1,67.5000025749208,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,237,48689,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,154,48868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
398,314,49048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
307,308,49228,6,0,L|219:328,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,197,49588,2,0,L|248:217,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,154,49946,2,0,P|359:111|346:68,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,231,50306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
283,112,50485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
454,148,50665,5,2,0:0:0:0:
454,148,51024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
409,226,51204,2,0,P|395:269|398:314,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,384,51563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
354,279,51743,2,0,L|265:266,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,326,52102,5,2,0:0:0:0:
244,109,52461,1,8,0:0:0:0:
350,357,52821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
223,265,53000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
365,252,53180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,369,53360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
125,240,53539,5,2,0:0:0:0:
339,127,53719,1,2,0:0:0:0:
138,41,53898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
223,265,54078,1,12,0:0:0:0:
339,127,54976,6,0,P|356:184|340:240,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,241,55336,2,0,P|206:200|260:184,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,280,55695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
166,132,55874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,127,56054,2,0,L|455:124,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,284,56413,5,2,0:0:0:0:
254,167,56593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,167,56683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,167,56773,2,0,L|257:280,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,223,57132,1,2,0:0:0:0:
166,132,57312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,322,57491,2,0,P|203:363|257:379,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,223,57851,5,2,0:0:0:0:
257,280,58030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,284,58210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,167,58389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
81,372,58569,2,0,P|68:317|85:265,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,167,58928,2,0,L|257:280,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,135,59288,6,0,B|94:146|141:127|141:127|166:132,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,280,59647,1,8,0:0:0:0:
81,372,59827,2,0,P|68:317|85:265,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,280,60186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,322,60365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
129,206,60545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,280,60725,6,0,P|309:296|363:283,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,76,61084,2,0,P|269:113|254:167,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,172,61443,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,69,61623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
55,135,61803,2,0,L|63:252,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,340,62162,6,0,B|171:369|171:369|228:369,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,196,62431,2,0,P|192:242|190:297,1,112.5
332,325,62701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,172,62880,2,0,L|244:158,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,340,63240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
55,135,63419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,88,63599,6,0,P|234:142|221:196,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,63958,2,0,L|90:232,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,172,64318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,369,64497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,206,64677,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,325,64857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,65036,5,2,0:0:0:0:
221,196,65216,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,369,65395,1,10,0:0:0:0:
28,278,65575,1,2,0:0:0:0:
28,278,65934,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,156,66114,2,0,L|7:148,1,112.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,66473,6,0,P|169:371|225:372,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,207,66833,2,0,P|284:232|256:280,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,309,67192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
439,129,67371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,89,67551,2,0,L|258:203,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,309,67910,5,2,0:0:0:0:
123,341,68090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,68180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,68270,2,0,P|169:371|225:372,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,207,68629,1,2,0:0:0:0:
201,272,68809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
11,148,68988,2,0,L|26:262,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,69348,5,2,0:0:0:0:
221,196,69527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,369,69707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
73,229,69886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,206,70066,2,0,P|326:149|292:106,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,70425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
221,196,70605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,309,70785,5,2,0:0:0:0:
195,69,71054,1,2,0:0:0:0:
123,341,71324,1,2,0:0:0:0:
427,365,71503,2,0,L|440:340,6,28.125,2|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,316,71863,6,0,P|428:244|327:216,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,72222,6,0,L|237:358,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,180,72581,2,0,P|232:237|259:285,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,213,72940,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,273,73120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,357,73300,2,0,L|451:316,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,213,73659,5,2,0:0:0:0:
258,284,73839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,156,74018,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,273,74198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,214,74377,2,0,P|353:159|339:106,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,284,74737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
346,357,74916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,259,75096,6,0,L|427:154,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,369,75455,1,10,0:0:0:0:
335,214,75635,2,0,L|293:109,1,112.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,75994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,196,76173,1,8,0:0:0:0:
73,229,76353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,369,76532,5,2,0:0:0:0:
335,214,76713,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,273,76892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
346,357,77072,1,2,0:0:0:0:
469,259,77252,2,0,L|483:147,1,112.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,155,77521,2,0,L|350:125,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,214,77701,2,0,L|277:212,1,45,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,297,77880,6,0,B|277:321|258:360|258:360|249:361,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,361,78330,1,4,0:0:0:0:
165,273,78509,2,0,P|152:218|169:166,1,112.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,224,78868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,357,79048,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,246,79228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,166,79407,6,0,L|280:140,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,322,79767,2,0,L|309:297,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,217,80126,2,0,P|70:162|87:110,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,173,80485,2,0,P|303:212|249:224,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,141,80845,5,2,0:0:0:0:
284,117,81024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
375,226,81204,1,8,0:0:0:0:
361,47,81384,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,296,81563,5,2,0:0:0:0:
195,69,81743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
343,173,81922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,217,82102,1,12,0:0:0:0:
268,296,83719,6,0,P|322:309|374:293,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,176,84078,2,0,L|180:280,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,84348,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,208,84437,2,0,P|333:153|317:101,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,271,84797,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,293,84976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,176,85156,6,0,P|191:157|137:169,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,85515,2,0,L|384:104,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,271,85785,1,2,0:0:0:0:
185,272,85874,2,0,P|195:326|232:367,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,293,86234,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,176,86413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,345,86593,5,2,0:0:0:0:
360,113,86773,1,2,0:0:0:0:
157,195,86952,1,2,0:0:0:0:
375,293,87132,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87222,12,0,88389,0:0:0:0:
Pagno
hello! from your queue~


~ Mod ~
[Cloud's Insane]
00:07:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's quite hard to tell the timing difference of these notes, pheraps make it like this:




00:11:503 (5) - hmmm, CTRL+G or do something that makes you understand that it's a slider ending on the blue tick, such as putting its end on the next slider's head


00:24:976 (1,2,3,4) - The idea itself is good, if I were you however I'd put more spacing




00:37:641 (7) - I'd stack it on the next slider's head like




[Lust's Hard]
00:06:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ehhhh this is a Hard, personally I wouldn't put any stream at all, instead I'd put reverse sliders ;c

00:14:198 (3) - In my opinion it would give a better effect if you stacked this on 00:13:839 (2)

01:02:521 (3) - *hitclap*

01:04:318 (2,3,4,5) - Decrease spacing of a bit?

[Cloud's Normal]
00:07:012 (2,3,4) - This pattern here, maybe change it like this so that it's easier to get the timing



Nothing much to say about this difficulty - the only thing, maybe try doing less complicated patterns in your next map! remember that it's beginners who play those diffs!

[Mochi's Easy]
00:13:300 (1,1) - Placing a note immediatly after a spinner is quite disorienting for a beginner - consider removing the spinner and convert it into a single slider

01:05:036 (1,1) - Same as before

In general, it's a good mapset! Just, try making easier easy difficulties next time :)
Ghost Reaver
hello m4m here

General:
clear

Cloud's Insane:
pretty good mapped insane, only one suggestion please consider to lower SV on this sliders, they are really frustrating to play and just spoils all the good impression from this diiff
00:11:503 (5) -
00:14:377 (4) -
00:25:874 (6) -
00:37:371 (6) -
01:11:863 (1) -

Lust's Hard:
00:12:401 (2,3,1) - sorry but this overlap pattern not looking any good, maybe alter to http://puu.sh/6p4D1.jpg
00:14:377 (4) - sounds too loud moreover you have 00:14:557 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with quiet hitsounds, that's sounds strange
00:17:252 (4,5,1) - space this? http://puu.sh/6p4JE.jpg
00:24:078 (2,1) - remove this overlap? it looks awkward now
00:56:054 (4,1) - maybe http://puu.sh/6p4Qo.jpg
01:01:084 (2,3) - and 3 flows bad after 2, move it left a bit

Cloud's Normal:
setting really low for 167 bpm normal, try 4-6-5 plays much better
00:25:695 (2) - clap here? feels lonely now without any hitsoud
00:42:042 (3) - curve a bit more this one http://puu.sh/6p52M.jpg
'01:20:845 (1,1) - eh, fill empty space with slider or something http://puu.sh/6p56Q.jpg

Mochi's Easy:
great easy, 5 spinners is too much tho. And hp setting is rather low.

Good Luck (:
Little
Pagno's mod

Pagno wrote:

hello! from your queue~


[box=~ Mod ~][Cloud's Insane]
00:07:551 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's quite hard to tell the timing difference of these notes, pheraps make it like this: No, I think it's reasonable readable since the AR is quite high. I've had other players test this, and they haven't had any trouble reading it.




00:11:503 (5) - hmmm, CTRL+G or do something that makes you understand that it's a slider ending on the blue tick, such as putting its end on the next slider's head I think the SV is enough to tell the player this.


00:24:976 (1,2,3,4) - The idea itself is good, if I were you however I'd put more spacing Too hard imo




00:37:641 (7) - I'd stack it on the next slider's head like I think it looks nicer the way it is now, and makes sense because the time spacing is equal.



In general, it's a good mapset! Just, try making easier easy difficulties next time :)
@Ghost Reaver, all I can say is that my high SV sliders are all placed with purpose, and I think they're quite fun to play.
----------------
Cloud's Insane
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: vanishmentthisworld.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54617
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Van!shment Th!s World (TV Size)
Artist:Black Raison d'etre
ArtistUnicode:Black Raison d'être
Creator:Lust
Version:Cloud's Insane
Source:中二病でも恋がしたい!戀
Tags:Chu-2 season two ending ED Love, Chunibyo & Other Delusions! Two Chūnibyō Demo Koi ga Shitai! Ren Cloudchaser Momochikun Cloudsplash16 Togashi Yuta Rikka Takanashi Satone Shichimiya Shinka Nibutani Kumin Tsuyuri Sanae Dekomori Makoto Isshiki Kazari Kannagi Kuzuha Togashi Yumeha Togashi Touka Takanashi ZAQ
BeatmapID:353859
BeatmapSetID:141956

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Ed.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
366,359.281437125748,4,2,2,40,1,0
366,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,40,0,0
2701,-200,4,2,2,40,0,0
3240,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,40,0,0
5395,-200,4,2,2,40,0,0
6114,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
7012,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
8988,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
11503,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,65,0,0
11863,-80,4,2,1,65,0,0
14377,-57.1428571428571,4,2,1,70,0,0
14737,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,0
17611,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
25874,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,65,0,0
26234,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
34857,-100,4,2,1,53,0,0
35575,-100,4,2,1,57,0,0
36294,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
37012,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
37371,-57.1428571428571,4,2,1,70,0,0
37731,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
38809,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
38988,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
40246,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
40425,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
41683,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
41863,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
43120,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
43300,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
44557,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
44737,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
45994,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
46174,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
46354,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,0
46713,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,45,0,0
46892,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,0
47431,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,45,0,0
47611,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,0
47791,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
48150,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
48330,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
48868,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,50,0,0
49048,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
49228,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
49587,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
49767,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
50306,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
50485,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
51024,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
51204,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
51743,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
51922,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
52461,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
52821,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
53180,-100,4,2,2,55,0,0
53360,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
54976,-80,4,2,1,70,0,1
71863,-50,4,2,1,75,0,1
72222,-80,4,2,1,70,0,1
77521,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
77611,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
77880,-149.925037481259,4,2,1,60,0,0
78330,-80,4,2,1,70,0,1
82102,-80,4,2,1,60,0,0
83719,-80,4,2,1,70,0,0
87132,-80,4,2,1,60,0,0
87222,-80,4,2,1,40,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,64,64
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 255,128,192
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
101,153,366,2,0,P|135:224|198:236,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,158,904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
15,297,1264,1,4,0:0:0:0:
228,345,1623,6,0,B|260:348|285:326|285:326|334:341|364:324,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
423,157,2162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
325,237,2342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
438,246,2521,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,158,2701,2,0,P|285:149|240:148,1,90
162,102,3240,6,0,B|133:163|175:210|175:210|159:233,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,298,3779,2,0,P|50:284|23:264,1,67.5
182,325,4138,1,4,0:0:0:0:
182,325,4497,6,0,B|214:344|214:344|254:324|297:328|297:328|323:311,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,233,5036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
426,332,5216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,235,5395,2,0,P|236:224|164:248,1,135
76,312,6114,5,2,0:0:0:0:
66,317,6204,1,2,0:0:0:0:
50,318,6294,1,2,0:0:0:0:
31,309,6383,1,2,0:0:0:0:
22,285,6473,1,2,0:0:0:0:
30,256,6563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,240,6653,1,2,0:0:0:0:
97,246,6743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,334,7012,2,0,P|237:300|320:304,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,343,7551,5,2,0:0:0:0:
393,158,7821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,363,8090,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,121,8270,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,334,8539,1,2,0:0:0:0:
462,226,8809,2,0,P|485:220|513:200,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,70,8988,6,0,P|386:113|393:158,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,363,9348,2,0,P|399:319|393:275,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,121,9707,1,2,0:0:0:0:
264,334,9886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,334,9976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,334,10066,1,2,0:0:0:0:
354,199,10246,1,0,0:0:0:0:
157,250,10425,6,0,B|128:263|128:263|93:249|59:260,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,121,10785,2,0,B|245:108|245:108|280:122|314:111,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,199,11144,1,2,0:0:0:0:
157,250,11324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,310,11503,2,0,P|242:261|264:334,1,202.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,300,11863,6,0,P|384:245|354:199,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,250,12222,1,2,0:0:0:0:
354,199,12401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,354,12581,1,2,0:0:0:0:
253,168,12761,2,0,P|260:140|276:118,1,56.25
168,159,12940,2,0,B|174:172|174:172|172:187|183:210|183:210|183:232|200:274,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,300,13300,6,0,P|345:339|288:335,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,199,13659,1,2,0:0:0:0:
495,104,13839,1,2,0:0:0:0:
495,104,14377,2,0,P|474:176|505:255,1,157.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,300,14737,6,0,B|326:284|326:284|259:295,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,343,15276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,247,15455,1,2,0:0:0:0:
155,165,15635,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,136,15815,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,15994,6,0,L|46:298,1,67.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,198,16354,2,0,L|190:247,1,67.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
319,336,16713,1,2,0:0:0:0:
319,336,16892,2,0,P|369:306|386:262,1,101.25
386,246,17252,1,8,0:0:0:0:
193,331,17611,6,0,P|148:343|106:328,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,224,17970,2,0,L|41:127,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,77,18330,2,0,L|155:165,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,247,18689,2,0,P|343:259|386:246,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,83,19048,5,2,0:0:0:0:
343,182,19228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
466,183,19407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,73,19587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,135,19767,2,0,L|259:176,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,191,19946,2,0,L|165:235,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,200,20126,2,0,B|52:224|33:263|33:263|12:266,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,304,20485,6,0,P|164:317|206:305,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,176,20845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,235,21024,1,0,0:0:0:0:
309,309,21204,1,2,0:0:0:0:
309,309,21563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
259,176,21743,2,0,L|228:91,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,91,22282,5,8,0:0:0:0:
165,235,22461,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,235,22821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
259,176,23000,1,8,0:0:0:0:
309,309,23180,1,2,0:0:0:0:
145,314,23360,6,0,P|101:286|85:246,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,114,23719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
259,176,23898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,94,24078,2,0,P|60:50|100:34,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,60,24437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
170,208,24616,1,2,0:0:0:0:
394,264,24976,5,2,0:0:0:0:
420,270,25156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
234,312,25336,1,2,0:0:0:0:
209,320,25516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,340,25695,2,0,P|414:342|444:351,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,296,25874,2,0,P|295:232|259:176,1,135,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,191,26234,6,0,B|98:209|98:209|90:256|117:278|117:278|121:300|109:319,1,135,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,374,26773,1,2,0:0:0:0:
28,278,26952,1,0,0:0:0:0:
209,320,27132,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,313,27312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,241,27491,6,0,P|221:210|242:172,1,67.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,278,27851,2,0,P|56:247|77:209,1,67.5,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,320,28210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
209,320,28389,2,0,P|267:319|304:289,1,101.25
312,275,28749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
113,191,29108,6,0,B|104:176|104:176|108:140|100:108,1,67.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,96,29467,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,192,29647,2,0,B|188:257|131:272|131:272|181:273,1,135
312,275,30186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,275,30365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,368,30545,5,0,0:0:0:0:
179,368,30724,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,192,30904,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,275,31084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,272,31264,2,0,B|114:274|84:257|84:257|70:275,1,67.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,333,31623,1,8,0:0:0:0:
111,182,31803,1,2,0:0:0:0:
230,296,31982,6,0,P|256:339|305:360,1,101.25,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,323,32342,2,0,L|405:245,1,67.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,109,32880,1,2,0:0:0:0:
270,109,33060,2,0,L|259:176,1,67.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,296,33419,5,2,0:0:0:0:
230,296,33779,2,0,B|196:297|180:269|180:269|151:309|85:309|57:255,1,202.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,127,34497,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,226,34677,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,138,34857,6,0,L|195:69,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,196,35216,1,8,0:0:0:0:
183,295,35396,1,2,0:0:0:0:
313,207,35576,2,0,L|254:138,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,265,35934,1,8,0:0:0:0:
242,364,36114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,276,36294,6,0,P|397:241|399:181,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,364,36653,1,8,0:0:0:0:
313,207,36833,1,2,0:0:0:0:
226,265,37012,2,0,L|180:297,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,211,37192,2,0,L|105:215,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,131,37371,2,0,P|112:110|188:83,1,157.5,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,150,37641,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,211,37731,6,0,P|144:281|176:333,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,300,38270,2,0,L|257:300,1,67.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,211,38629,1,2,0:0:0:0:
313,207,38809,2,0,L|380:207,1,67.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,300,39168,5,2,0:0:0:0:
210,150,39348,1,2,0:0:0:0:
210,150,39707,1,2,0:0:0:0:
210,150,40066,1,2,0:0:0:0:
166,317,40246,2,0,B|184:322|219:306|219:306|230:313,1,67.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,299,40605,6,0,P|304:237|336:179,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,247,41144,2,0,L|393:247,1,67.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,313,41503,1,2,0:0:0:0:
269,179,41683,2,0,L|336:179,1,67.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,300,42042,5,2,0:0:0:0:
161,211,42222,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,211,42581,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,211,42940,1,2,0:0:0:0:
37,333,43120,1,8,0:0:0:0:
59,357,43210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,367,43300,1,2,0:0:0:0:
143,357,43389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,318,43479,6,0,P|206:279|305:280,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,348,44018,2,0,L|352:365,1,67.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,341,44377,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,211,44557,2,0,L|178:146,1,67.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,179,44916,5,2,0:0:0:0:
106,284,45096,1,2,0:0:0:0:
106,284,45455,2,0,P|72:234|86:158,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,146,45994,2,0,L|161:211,1,67.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,244,46354,6,0,L|269:179,1,67.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,306,46713,2,0,P|273:322|313:318,1,67.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
425,165,47072,2,0,P|391:167|362:183,1,67.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,314,47431,1,8,0:0:0:0:
286,244,47611,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,228,47701,1,2,0:0:0:0:
201,237,47791,6,0,P|160:252|123:246,1,67.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,109,48150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
286,244,48330,2,0,L|309:314,1,67.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,237,48689,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,154,48868,1,8,0:0:0:0:
398,314,49048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
307,308,49228,6,0,L|219:328,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,197,49588,2,0,L|248:217,1,90,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,154,49946,2,0,P|359:111|346:68,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,231,50306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
283,112,50485,1,0,0:0:0:0:
454,148,50665,5,2,0:0:0:0:
454,148,51024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
409,226,51204,2,0,P|395:269|398:314,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,384,51563,1,2,0:0:0:0:
354,279,51743,2,0,L|265:266,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
82,326,52102,5,2,0:0:0:0:
244,109,52461,1,8,0:0:0:0:
350,357,52821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
223,265,53000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
365,252,53180,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,369,53360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
125,240,53539,5,2,0:0:0:0:
339,127,53719,1,2,0:0:0:0:
138,41,53898,1,2,0:0:0:0:
223,265,54078,1,12,0:0:0:0:
339,127,54976,6,0,P|356:184|340:240,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,241,55336,2,0,P|206:200|260:184,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,280,55695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
166,132,55874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,127,56054,2,0,L|455:124,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,284,56413,5,2,0:0:0:0:
254,167,56593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,167,56683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,167,56773,2,0,L|257:280,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,223,57132,1,2,0:0:0:0:
166,132,57312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,322,57491,2,0,P|203:363|257:379,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,223,57851,5,2,0:0:0:0:
257,280,58030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,284,58210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,167,58389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
81,372,58569,2,0,P|68:317|85:265,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,167,58928,2,0,L|257:280,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,135,59288,6,0,B|94:146|141:127|141:127|166:132,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,280,59647,1,8,0:0:0:0:
81,372,59827,2,0,P|68:317|85:265,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,280,60186,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,322,60365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
129,206,60545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,280,60725,6,0,P|309:296|363:283,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,76,61084,2,0,P|269:113|254:167,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,172,61443,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,69,61623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
55,135,61803,2,0,L|63:252,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,340,62162,6,0,B|171:369|171:369|228:369,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,196,62431,2,0,P|192:242|190:297,1,112.5
332,325,62701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,172,62880,2,0,L|244:158,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,340,63240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
55,135,63419,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,88,63599,6,0,P|234:142|221:196,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,63958,2,0,L|90:232,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,172,64318,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,369,64497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
129,206,64677,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,325,64857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,65036,5,2,0:0:0:0:
221,196,65216,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,369,65395,1,10,0:0:0:0:
28,278,65575,1,2,0:0:0:0:
28,278,65934,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,156,66114,2,0,L|7:148,1,112.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,66473,6,0,P|169:371|225:372,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,207,66833,2,0,P|284:232|256:280,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,309,67192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
439,129,67371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
243,89,67551,2,0,L|258:203,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,309,67910,5,2,0:0:0:0:
123,341,68090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,68180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,68270,2,0,P|169:371|225:372,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
333,207,68629,1,2,0:0:0:0:
201,272,68809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
11,148,68988,2,0,L|26:262,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,69348,5,2,0:0:0:0:
221,196,69527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,369,69707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
73,229,69886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
333,206,70066,2,0,P|326:149|292:106,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,70425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
221,196,70605,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,309,70785,5,2,0:0:0:0:
195,69,71054,1,2,0:0:0:0:
123,341,71324,1,2,0:0:0:0:
427,365,71503,2,0,L|440:340,6,28.125,2|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,316,71863,6,0,P|428:244|327:216,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,72222,6,0,L|237:358,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,180,72581,2,0,P|232:237|259:285,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,213,72940,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,273,73120,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,357,73300,2,0,L|451:316,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,213,73659,5,2,0:0:0:0:
258,284,73839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,156,74018,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,273,74198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,214,74377,2,0,P|353:159|339:106,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,284,74737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
346,357,74916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
469,259,75096,6,0,L|427:154,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,369,75455,1,10,0:0:0:0:
335,214,75635,2,0,L|293:109,1,112.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,341,75994,1,0,0:0:0:0:
221,196,76173,1,8,0:0:0:0:
73,229,76353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,369,76532,5,2,0:0:0:0:
335,214,76713,1,2,0:0:0:0:
165,273,76892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
346,357,77072,1,2,0:0:0:0:
469,259,77252,2,0,L|483:147,1,112.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,155,77521,2,0,L|350:125,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,214,77701,2,0,L|277:212,1,45,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,297,77880,6,0,B|277:321|258:360|258:360|249:361,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,361,78330,1,4,0:0:0:0:
165,273,78509,2,0,P|152:218|169:166,1,112.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,224,78868,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,357,79048,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,246,79228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,166,79407,6,0,L|280:140,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
418,322,79767,2,0,L|309:297,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,217,80126,2,0,P|70:162|87:110,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,173,80485,2,0,P|303:212|249:224,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
439,141,80845,5,2,0:0:0:0:
284,117,81024,1,2,0:0:0:0:
375,226,81204,1,8,0:0:0:0:
361,47,81384,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,296,81563,5,2,0:0:0:0:
195,69,81743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
343,173,81922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,217,82102,1,12,0:0:0:0:
268,296,83719,6,0,P|322:309|374:293,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,176,84078,2,0,L|180:280,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,84348,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,208,84437,2,0,P|333:153|317:101,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,271,84797,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,293,84976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,176,85156,6,0,P|191:157|137:169,1,112.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,85515,2,0,L|384:104,1,112.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
185,271,85785,1,2,0:0:0:0:
185,272,85874,2,0,P|195:326|232:367,1,112.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,293,86234,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,176,86413,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,345,86593,5,2,0:0:0:0:
360,113,86773,1,2,0:0:0:0:
157,195,86952,1,2,0:0:0:0:
375,293,87132,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87222,12,0,88389,0:0:0:0:
_koinuri
Hello for M4M; I hope this mod is useful, still have lots to learn >.<


[General]
Rikka <3
The difficulty setting jump from Normal and Hard seems extreme (HP2->6, AR4->AR8, OD2->OD7). I think you should lower the gap a little bit

[Mochi's Easy]
Wow, very nice Easy.
00:40:605 (1) - Stack with the end of 00:37:731 (1) - ?
01:15:455 (4) - I think making this more parellel to the end of 01:14:377 (3) - looks nicer.

[Cloud's Normal]
Having distance snap of 1.0 makes symmetry made at the end with sliders and circles look better, but it's probably too late for that
00:19:048 (4) - Moving it to (162,89) makes it perfectly symmetrical to 00:17:431 (1) - , assuming that was what you intended.
00:26:054 (3) - Moving this note on timeline to white tick nearby (either way, I personally would go for 00:25:874) sounds better. Right now, it's ignoring the beginning of the vocal and feels awkward.
01:06:833 (2,3,4) - Try ctrl+H 01:05:036 (4) - and move around the object so that all the object fits inside this curve. It gives more symmetrical feel

[Lust's Hard]
The 2x distance snap used at some places seems too difficult for Hard, like 01:04:318 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:10:246 (5,6) -
00:15:815 (7,8,1) - I don't think this is readable to Hard players. The sudden 2x distance snap and 00:16:354 (1) - being placed at the same place where 00:15:815 (7) - was with different timing is confusing
00:19:946 (3,4) - (272,302) for 3, (315,229) for 4. Makes better curve, kind of continuing the 00:19:407 (2) -
00:30:545 (1) - (157,141). I'm not sure if it's on purpose, but it's not perfectly straight from the 2 notes before.
00:32:252 (2) - Make this shorter and move it to the white tick, and add a note at the blue tick it was on. This makes the beat consistent with other following circle-slider in the combo and fits the song better
00:38:270 (2,3,4,5,6) - Arrange this in better hexagon shape? (381,68) for 4, (405,144) for 5, (350,202) for 6
00:53:360 (2,3,1) - Overlap doesn't look that great in my opinion.

[Cloud's Insane]
00:02:521 (4,5) - (432,237) for 4, (334,157) for 5? This seem cleaner imo
00:21:204 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - This sudden non-vocal rhythm feels awkward to me since the other notes around is following the vocal. Having notes in the empty place feels more natural
00:27:132 (4) - Somewhere around (203,300). I think moving this so that it forms isosceles triangle with 00:26:773 (2,3) - looks nicer than stacking under 00:25:516 (4) - . 00:27:312 (5) - looks better being in the center of a triangle too
00:32:342 (2,3,4) -Same as 00:21:204 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -

Nice map, good luck on this map! :D
izzydemon
get modded

Easy

00:33:419 (1) - ugly
00:40:605 (1) - move the red node to x264 y52 and the end node to x176 y88
01:02:162 (3) - ugly pls

i think you overused spinners in this, but w/e seems fine

Normal

good

Hard

it's your map man why is it named Lust's Hard

00:00:904 (2,3) - i hate this pattern so i can't avoid bitching about it but it's just my opinion
00:06:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - you sure you want to do this on a hard?
00:26:234 (1,2,3) - would look better if they didn't all start in the same place, imo
00:45:635 (3,4) - also something i can't avoid bitching about fdshkfasdkfuasdg please change this
00:52:102 (1) - luv u 2 bby s2
01:13:659 (1) - ugly

good

Insane

00:33:779 (2) - kinda ugly

aaAAAHHH DAMN LOVE THIS DIFF

welp that's it
Topic Starter
Lust
thanks for the mods! updated
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply