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Yamamoto Nozomi, Uesaka Sumire, Uchiyama Yumi, Kakuma Ai - A

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Mei
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Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年7月11日 at 20:33:27

Artist: Yamamoto Nozomi, Uesaka Sumire, Uchiyama Yumi, Kakuma Ai
Title: Aoku Yureteiru
Source: Genshiken Nidaime
Tags: ending ogiue chika yoshitake rika yajima mirei hato kenjirou げんしけん 二代目
BPM: 130
Filesize: 13056kb
Play Time: 01:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.51 stars, 203 notes)
  2. Insane (3.42 stars, 302 notes)
  3. Normal (1.59 stars, 121 notes)
Download: Yamamoto Nozomi, Uesaka Sumire, Uchiyama Yumi, Kakuma Ai - Aoku Yureteiru
Download: Yamamoto Nozomi, Uesaka Sumire, Uchiyama Yumi, Kakuma Ai - Aoku Yureteiru (no video)
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Ending of げんしけん 二代目
one of my fav anime <3(and manga)
great thanks to those modders
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Last edited by Mei , edited 75 times in total.
dazzulay
54 posts
Joined September 2012
dazzulay
这是要转型麻婆的节奏啊。。。
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
rinsukir
mark 等我放假回来再摸
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

dazzulay wrote:

这是要转型麻婆的节奏啊。。。
我就玩玩。。能rank就感天动地了T T

rinsukir wrote:

mark 等我放假回来再摸
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Winek
887 posts
Joined September 2013
Winek
From My modding queue!

Normal
00:00:125 (1,2,3,4) - Add normal clap at the end, maybe?
00:18:125 (6) - End of slider , Finish
00:25:048 (3) - Add finish at the end of slider, after the reversearrow
00:33:355 (5) - Add finish
00:40:740 (4) - Add finish at the start of slider
00:44:894 (2) - Add finish at the end
00:48:586 (2) - Add finish at reversarrow
00:53:663 Add a circle there between the "hoofs"
01:36:125 (1) - Spinner must finish on the previous withe tick

Hard
Decrease approach rate to 6.
00:00:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These two make one and only one combo
00:03:817 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
00:25:048 (2,3) - Make a good distance between them (not distance snap!)
01:17:201 (4) - Add finish at the end after reversearrow
01:36:125 (1) - Spinner must finish on previous white tick

Insane
General Rules talking about combos on Insane: 7-12. Try to follow it.
00:48:125 (1) - Distance it from previous note for less confusion!
Last spinner end on the previous white tick.

That'S about all, hopes it help.
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

Winek wrote:

From My modding queue!

Normal
00:00:125 (1,2,3,4) - Add normal clap at the end, maybe?sounds not bad
00:18:125 (6) - End of slider , Finishfix
00:25:048 (3) - Add finish at the end of slider, after the reversearrow^
00:33:355 (5) - Add finish^
00:40:740 (4) - Add finish at the start of slider^
00:44:894 (2) - Add finish at the endnice!
00:48:586 (2) - Add finish at reversarrow^
00:53:663 Add a circle there between the "hoofs"not hoofs Σ( ° △ °|||)︴ok it is hoofs , but i tried not to make it so difficult so no
01:36:125 (1) - Spinner must finish on the previous withe tick._.

Hard
Decrease approach rate to 6.well for this circle size i think AR7 is proper enough... keep this
00:00:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These two make one and only one combook
00:03:817 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^^
00:25:048 (2,3) - Make a good distance between them (not distance snap!)well keep this
01:17:201 (4) - Add finish at the end after reversearrowok
01:36:125 (1) - Spinner must finish on previous white tickwait for more comments about this

Insane
General Rules talking about combos on Insane: 7-12. Try to follow it.ok, followed this rule i made some changes
00:48:125 (1) - Distance it from previous note for less confusion!well...that's a trick and i think it is ok anyway
Last spinner end on the previous white tick.red line is also fine :o keep this

That'S about all, hopes it help.

Thank you for your modding Winek :)
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
mod4mod

Normal
00:08:894 (3) - use same form as 00:07:971 (2) - .
SPOILER
00:10:740 (1) - finish on reverse
00:20:432 (3,5) - make a curve ? It looks more beautiful　
SPOILER
00:24:586 (1,2,3) - if you don't stack those notes. it will be more easier to beginners.
00:30:586 (2) - make a curve
SPOILER
00:37:740 (2,3,4) - try this rhythm and follow vocal
SPOILER
00:51:817 (1,2) - center with symmetry ?
SPOILER
01:02:894 (1) - add finish
01:09:817 (1) - finish on end

Hard
00:07:047 (6,1,2) - try this rhythm
SPOILER
00:11:894 (3) - make better blanket
SPOILER
00:12:586 (4) - this overlap is not good imo please move away
00:15:817 (4) - move this
SPOILER
00:22:971 (2,3) - please follow vocal x_x
00:27:817 (5) - make better blanket
SPOILER
00:40:971 (4) - ^
00:45:125 (2) - ^
00:46:740 (4) - ^
00:48:125 (3,4) - make a little curve ?
SPOILER
01:02:432 (7) - stack on 01:03:355 (2) - ?
SPOILER
01:35:894 - add note

Insane

00:01:971 (4) - it is better to use same form as 00:00:125 (1) -
00:05:663 (4) - ^ use same form as 00:03:817 (1) -
00:13:048 (4) - follow 00:12:586 (3) - 's line ?
SPOILER
00:23:548 (4) - remove clap
00:31:971 (3) - stack on 00:31:278 (7) - ?

That's it
Avishay
1,250 posts
Joined April 2013
Avishay
Hey, M4M from my queue :)


[Normal]
00:28:740 (4) - Wouldn't this slider be too much confusing to beginners?

[Hard]
00:01:048 (2,5) - I don't feel those circles are doing their job, they are not giving much to the map, I think it will be better without them.
00:23:317 (3) - This slider doesn't fit at all in his appearence
01:15:355 (6,1) - They shouldn't stack, it doesn't fit that good
00:56:663 (2) - Maybe make it the CTRL + G version of 00:54:586 (3) ?
01:04:278 (4) - This doesn't feel like a proper place for the cirlce, try to make it flow more like that:
01:24:586 (1) - Don't stack it with the next slider, it doesn't fit
01:24:817 (1) - NC starts here and not before

[Insane]
00:01:509 (3) - The placement is not that good, try moving it to x:248 y:56
00:16:740 (8,9,10) - The spacing here is really wrong, no one could guess that there's no beat distance between them, the sliders are long and such spacing does not fit the place in the song, however 00:28:048 (2,3,4,5) - was great, also the parts that are like this in the kiai time fit well too
00:23:202 (3,4,5) - Same ^

Good luck!
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

Laurier wrote:

mod4mod

Normal
00:08:894 (3) - use same form as 00:07:971 (2) - .ok
SPOILER
00:10:740 (1) - finish on reversefix
00:20:432 (3,5) - make a curve ? It looks more beautiful　np
SPOILER
00:24:586 (1,2,3) - if you don't stack those notes. it will be more easier to beginners.made some changes there
00:30:586 (2) - make a curve
SPOILER
00:37:740 (2,3,4) - try this rhythm and follow vocal
SPOILER
00:51:817 (1,2) - center with symmetry ?ok
SPOILER
01:02:894 (1) - add finishfix
01:09:817 (1) - finish on endfix

Hard
00:07:047 (6,1,2) - try this rhythm umm the current one is better i think
SPOILER
00:11:894 (3) - make better blanket fix
SPOILER
00:12:586 (4) - this overlap is not good imo please move awayok i change to another way
00:15:817 (4) - move this ok
SPOILER
00:22:971 (2,3) - please follow vocal x_xx_x ok
00:27:817 (5) - make better blanket fix
SPOILER
00:40:971 (4) - ^^
00:45:125 (2) - ^^
00:46:740 (4) - ^^
00:48:125 (3,4) - make a little curve ? ok
SPOILER
01:02:432 (7) - stack on 01:03:355 (2) - ?yes fix this
SPOILER
01:35:894 - add note ok

Insane

00:01:971 (4) - it is better to use same form as 00:00:125 (1) - ok
00:05:663 (4) - ^ use same form as 00:03:817 (1) - ok
00:13:048 (4) - follow 00:12:586 (3) - 's line ?that's what i tried to do ;w;
SPOILER
00:23:548 (4) - remove clap
00:31:971 (3) - stack on 00:31:278 (7) - ?

That's it
thank you for your modding laurier san ;)



Avishay wrote:

Hey, M4M from my queue :)


[Normal]
00:28:740 (4) - Wouldn't this slider be too much confusing to beginners? sorry but i am not sure about this either...keep this and wait for more comments

[Hard]
00:01:048 (2,5) - I don't feel those circles are doing their job, they are not giving much to the map, I think it will be better without them.well their job is to help player to folow the rhythm,in normal diff i removed this two notes
00:23:317 (3) - This slider doesn't fit at all in his appearencewhyΣ( ° △ °|||)︴ it fit
01:15:355 (6,1) - They shouldn't stack, it doesn't fit that goodOK made some change there
00:56:663 (2) - Maybe make it the CTRL + G version of 00:54:586 (3) ?look nice
01:04:278 (4) - This doesn't feel like a proper place for the cirlce, try to make it flow more like that:color=#FF8080]like what?_?well it is proper for me[/color]
01:24:586 (1) - Don't stack it with the next slider, it doesn't fitkeep this cuz i think it is ok
01:24:817 (1) - NC starts here and not beforei just follow the vocal...maybe you need 25% playback

[Insane]
00:01:509 (3) - The placement is not that good, try moving it to x:248 y:56umm i think it is ok. keep this first
00:16:740 (8,9,10) - The spacing here is really wrong, no one could guess that there's no beat distance between them, the sliders are long and such spacing does not fit the place in the song, however 00:28:048 (2,3,4,5) - was great, also the parts that are like this in the kiai time fit well toonot really , i just follow the vocal and i feel this part palys well for me. this sapacing are not hard to read either. so i keep this sorry ;w;
00:23:202 (3,4,5) - Same ^^

Good luck!
thank you Avishay :D :D
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
M4M
我这边又有import问题估计是artist+title略长.如果往后BAT不给过的话可以考虑把Artist换成Genshiken Cast
没个video么
没细查不过你这title大小写怎么弄的。。正常来说Ao ku Yurete Iru应该比较正常
我觉得可以一直用S:C1。默认clap效果不是特别好。顺带S:C1加个无声sliderbody

[Normal]
00:00:125 (1,2,3,4) - 头上加whislte结尾clap去掉感觉比较好
00:17:201 (4) - 出的略多
01:00:125 (2,3) - 有点overlap
01:35:894 - spinner这里开始比较合适
01:39:586 - 加个5%绿线

[Hard]
Hard我比较推荐1个downbeat放1个NC
00:01:509 (3,6,3,6) - clap
00:10:740 (1) - hard别放1/8了
00:24:586 (1) - 可以离远点
00:25:971 (4) - 稍微再修一修吧。。。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1216894
01:01:971 (6,7) - 实在是不咋好看啊
01:35:894 (4) - finish

[Insane]
00:23:202 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1216899
00:41:663 (3,4,5,6) - 弄个好点的图形吧
01:03:817 (4,1,2) - 感觉有点。。

Normal和Hard还都算可以把。Insane就没那么干净了。不过勉勉强强还OK吧
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
rinsukir
sry for late.

[Normal]
排版不是很好看a(
00:12:125 (3) - 中间描点出界
00:15:355 (1) - 描点出界
00:16:278 (2,4,6) - 2弯的4直的可能会好看点 6的弧度可以大一些
00:21:355 (4) - flow不是很好吧 后面好像还有一些 自己找找(
00:24:125 (4) - 遮折返箭头没问题吗..
00:51:817 (1,2) - 再扭的对称点啦
01:23:201 (4) - 跟vocal?
01:24:586 (1) - 描点出界

[Hard]
hp和od高一点
有些地方连续多个直滑条感觉有点怪 感觉直滑条和弯滑条结合在一起使用会好看点
00:10:740 (1) - 音量小一点?
00:11:201 (2) - 有点丑
00:34:740 (4) - 滑条尾压长白线不太好吧..还有blanket better 后面我不再提
00:42:355 (2) - 丑
试试这种拉法?
00:47:201 (1) - 为什么突然拉大间距..
00:59:432 - 加个note?

[Insane]
hp+1?
ds拉大点可能会好玩一些 不过善良点也不是不好(
00:03:817 (1,4) - 丑
00:10:740 (4,5,6,7) - insane的串可以拉大点ds
00:17:086 (9) - 最好前后等间距
00:49:278 (4) - 有点丑
00:54:586 (4) - 跟vocal?
01:04:163 (1,2) - 太远了吧
01:04:740 - 漏音
01:07:048 (3,4) - 有点丑
01:32:432 (1) - ^

滑条样式少的话我建议你多看点别人的图偷点梗(
goodluck~ :)
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

No_Gu wrote:

M4M
我这边又有import问题估计是artist+title略长.如果往后BAT不给过的话可以考虑把Artist换成Genshiken Cast我也觉的略长，不过有个日本人做了这个我是抄他的。。暂时先这样
没个video么好我去搞
没细查不过你这title大小写怎么弄的。。正常来说Ao ku Yurete Iru应该比较正常抄的
我觉得可以一直用S:C1。默认clap效果不是特别好。顺带S:C1加个无声sliderbody这样么0 0，嗯那就改成这样好了，但是全改成custom1的意见还是先保留。。

[Normal]
00:00:125 (1,2,3,4) - 头上加whislte结尾clap去掉感觉比较好好
00:17:201 (4) - 出的略多我尽量调整下
01:00:125 (2,3) - 有点overlap改了
01:35:894 - spinner这里开始比较合适好
01:39:586 - 加个5%绿线了解

[Hard]
Hard我比较推荐1个downbeat放1个NC
00:01:509 (3,6,3,6) - clap听起来不错
00:10:740 (1) - hard别放1/8了好吧
00:24:586 (1) - 可以离远点嗯
00:25:971 (4) - 稍微再修一修吧。。。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1216894虽然我是乱拉的。。调整了下
01:01:971 (6,7) - 实在是不咋好看啊勉强吧。。先这样
01:35:894 (4) - finish 对

[Insane]
00:23:202 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1216899赞
00:41:663 (3,4,5,6) - 弄个好点的图形吧做了正方形
01:03:817 (4,1,2) - 感觉有点。。失误啊上次修改没修干净

Normal和Hard还都算可以把。Insane就没那么干净了。不过勉勉强强还OK吧
嗯嗯感谢你的mod和评价 no_gu :)



rinsukir wrote:

sry for late.

[Normal]
排版不是很好看a(对啊怎么办QvQ教教我呀
00:12:125 (3) - 中间描点出界换了个方向
00:15:355 (1) - 描点出界好办
00:16:278 (2,4,6) - 2弯的4直的可能会好看点 6的弧度可以大一些改了一点，2复制了4
00:21:355 (4) - flow不是很好吧 后面好像还有一些 自己找找(normal居然有flowΣ( ° △ °|||)︴这个不懂
00:24:125 (4) - 遮折返箭头没问题吗..有问题
00:51:817 (1,2) - 再扭的对称点啦你居然不服我的最高杰作
01:23:201 (4) - 跟vocal?太难了
01:24:586 (1) - 描点出界你说的队

[Hard]
hp和od高一点好
有些地方连续多个直滑条感觉有点怪 感觉直滑条和弯滑条结合在一起使用会好看点._.
00:10:740 (1) - 音量小一点?特别给他一个我觉得比较蠢
00:11:201 (2) - 有点丑不会啊（我说我不会拉啊
00:34:740 (4) - 滑条尾压长白线不太好吧..还有blanket better 后面我不再提blanket改了，滑条那个还是先keep一下
00:42:355 (2) - 丑善
试试这种拉法?
00:47:201 (1) - 为什么突然拉大间距..因为手滑
00:59:432 - 加个note?太密了

[Insane]
hp+1?目前这个没问题
ds拉大点可能会好玩一些 不过善良点也不是不好(我这是为了送
00:03:817 (1,4) - 丑饶了我吧我不会啊;w;
00:10:740 (4,5,6,7) - insane的串可以拉大点ds目前这个还好
00:17:086 (9) - 最好前后等间距有道理
00:49:278 (4) - 有点丑还行吧。。。
00:54:586 (4) - 跟vocal?原来试过，为了flow放弃了一个音
01:04:163 (1,2) - 太远了吧这个地方失误了。。。上次修改完后没搞好
01:04:740 - 漏音我是这么蠢的人么哼哼，理由见上
01:07:048 (3,4) - 有点丑别老说丑啊T T我也就这水品了
01:32:432 (1) - ^这不是和nike的标致一样挺帅的么>.>

滑条样式少的话我建议你多看点别人的图偷点梗好啊._.(
goodluck~ :)
好谢谢你的摸 :D 暴打吐槽我滑条蠢的家伙
Evil_Twilight
587 posts
Joined July 2010
Evil_Twilight
From my Queue

[General]
  1. Artist填歌手就行了，角色名不需要
    https://osu.ppy.sh/s/72658 這歌就是填歌手名所以不用擔心
  2. 不用個combo colour嗎
    我幫你簡單弄了一下
    顏色我大多都會用跟BG相似的
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,179,255
    Combo2 : 180,119,92
    Combo3 : 206,255,206
    Combo4 : 85,170,255

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:048 (2) - 如果要包住(1)的話就往左一點吧，00:00:125 (1) - 這個也拉的圓一些
  2. 00:01:971 (4) - 這裡就一小節用一個NC，看起來也乾淨一點
  3. 00:05:663 (4) - 同上
  4. 00:03:817 (1) - 這slider有點獵奇阿，試試用這樣唄
    SPOILER
  5. 00:09:355 (1) - 把00:07:509 (1,2) - 包的更好
  6. 00:13:509 (5) - 往上移一點讓00:12:586 (3,4,5) - 變三角形？
    SPOILER
  7. 00:15:355 (2) - 往左邊彎試試，疊到00:14:432 (8) - 不太好看
  8. 00:26:894 (6) - 頭尾相反
  9. 00:28:048 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - 這一串的話我會把00:28:048 (2,3,4) - 弄成三角形，00:28:740 (5) - 因為鼓聲從這裡開始所以我換成了note，00:29:663 (1) - 這個就複製00:30:125 (2) - 顛倒一下
    SPOILER
  10. 00:40:740 (1,2) - 音樂在這裡的音調都是往上升的，所以我覺得把slider改成往上會好點
  11. 00:48:817 (2) - 跟00:49:048 (3) - 一樣擺在凹陷的地方吧
  12. 00:54:586 (4) - 因為你這邊是跟著人聲的，把節奏改成這樣試試
    SPOILER
  13. 00:55:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - 左移移到中間用成對稱的好看些
  14. 01:03:817 (4,5) - 這裡音調也是往上的，看你要不要改吧
  15. 01:18:586 (5) - 頭尾相反，這樣好玩些
  16. 01:32:432 (1) - 移到x:68 y:220弄成三角形，然後加個紅點吧，原本的有點藝術
    SPOILER
  17. 01:33:817 (3) - 我會改成note和一個1/2的slider，這樣聽起來比較順
  18. 01:35:894 (3) - 右移弄個三角形

[Hard]
  1. 00:01:048 (2,3) - 跟00:02:894 (5,6) - 一樣先上在下？ 你後面也都是這樣排的
  2. 00:06:817 (x) - 這裡加一顆note，音樂有酷炫的聲音
  3. 00:07:048 (8) - 這個改成3/4的slider接note，聽起來會比原本順
  4. 00:17:663 (8) - 包住00:16:740 (6) - 的尾巴？
  5. 00:20:432 (6) - 用成一個折返對我來好一點
  6. 00:26:894 (1,2,3,4) - 這邊不適合用重疊，2移到4上面，3移到1會更適合
  7. 00:37:971 (4) - 左移兩格，擺得更好一點
  8. 00:43:278 (3,4,5) - 試試這樣放
    SPOILER
  9. 01:05:432 (3) - 換個節奏？ 漏了鼓聲感覺怪怪的
  10. 01:35:201 (3) - 換成三顆note試試，順時針擺一個躺著的菱形

[Normal]
  1. 00:01:971 (2) - 你是不是忘了加whistle
  2. 00:03:817 (3) - 加個NC吧
  3. 00:05:663 (4) - 跟前面一樣用對稱的？
  4. 00:13:971 (2,3,4) - 我覺得疊兩顆就行了，新手好像對重疊不是很在行
  5. 01:35:201 (4) - 放一個1/2的折返slider吧

排版稍微亂了些
到乾淨整潔可能還需要點時間
繼續加油吧
共勉之
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

Evil_Twilight wrote:

From my Queue

[General]
  1. Artist填歌手就行了，角色名不需要恩好的我删掉
    https://osu.ppy.sh/s/72658 這歌就是填歌手名所以不用擔心
  2. 不用個combo colour嗎哇谢谢你
    我幫你簡單弄了一下
    顏色我大多都會用跟BG相似的
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,179,255
    Combo2 : 180,119,92
    Combo3 : 206,255,206
    Combo4 : 85,170,255
看起来不错ヾ(´･ω･｀)ﾉ

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:048 (2) - 如果要包住(1)的話就往左一點吧，00:00:125 (1) - 這個也拉的圓一些没想过包的问题呀，改了一下
  2. 00:01:971 (4) - 這裡就一小節用一個NC，看起來也乾淨一點是别人叫我这样改的呢。。。我原来就是那样的，先保留一下吧
  3. 00:05:663 (4) - 同上^
  4. 00:03:817 (1) - 這slider有點獵奇阿，試試用這樣唄 hao
    SPOILER
  5. 00:09:355 (1) - 把00:07:509 (1,2) - 包的更好对
  6. 00:13:509 (5) - 往上移一點讓00:12:586 (3,4,5) - 變三角形？ 善
    SPOILER
  7. 00:15:355 (2) - 往左邊彎試試，疊到00:14:432 (8) - 不太好看改了下
  8. 00:26:894 (6) - 頭尾相反不了:3
  9. 00:28:048 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - 這一串的話我會把00:28:048 (2,3,4) - 弄成三角形，00:28:740 (5) - 因為鼓聲從這裡開始所以我換成了note，00:29:663 (1) - 這個就複製00:30:125 (2) - 顛倒一下虽然是非常好的建议，但我做了一下感觉没有原来好打。。。个人还是备份了一下如果还有人提的话我就立刻改了
    SPOILER
  10. 00:40:740 (1,2) - 音樂在這裡的音調都是往上升的，所以我覺得把slider改成往上會好點抱歉啊不觉得特别必要啊
  11. 00:48:817 (2) - 跟00:49:048 (3) - 一樣擺在凹陷的地方吧离滑条尾巴太近了我怕误导
  12. 00:54:586 (4) - 因為你這邊是跟著人聲的，把節奏改成這樣試試 嗯嗯
    SPOILER
  13. 00:55:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - 左移移到中間用成對稱的好看些好的
  14. 01:03:817 (4,5) - 這裡音調也是往上的，看你要不要改吧现在的蛮好
  15. 01:18:586 (5) - 頭尾相反，這樣好玩些感觉不错
  16. 01:32:432 (1) - 移到x:68 y:220弄成三角形，然後加個紅點吧，原本的有點藝術 滑条master！！教我滑条吧吧吧吧
    SPOILER
  17. 01:33:817 (3) - 我會改成note和一個1/2的slider，這樣聽起來比較順不了吧现在的挺好
  18. 01:35:894 (3) - 右移弄個三角形原来的不是三角形么。。

[Hard]
  1. 00:01:048 (2,3) - 跟00:02:894 (5,6) - 一樣先上在下？ 你後面也都是這樣排的没太大必要啊。。因为要改太多了所以没改_(:зゝ∠)_
  2. 00:06:817 (x) - 這裡加一顆note，音樂有酷炫的聲音虽然有声音但不是5，6跟的那个音啊呜呜
  3. 00:07:048 (8) - 這個改成3/4的slider接note，聽起來會比原本順貌似不错
  4. 00:17:663 (8) - 包住00:16:740 (6) - 的尾巴？好
  5. 00:20:432 (6) - 用成一個折返對我來好一點感觉不太必要
  6. 00:26:894 (1,2,3,4) - 這邊不適合用重疊，2移到4上面，3移到1會更適合ok
  7. 00:37:971 (4) - 左移兩格，擺得更好一點ok
  8. 00:43:278 (3,4,5) - 試試這樣放哇感觉不错呢
    SPOILER
  9. 01:05:432 (3) - 換個節奏？ 漏了鼓聲感覺怪怪的这个的话先保留看看
  10. 01:35:201 (3) - 換成三顆note試試，順時針擺一個躺著的菱形现在这样的话难度还好，换成note会不会有点难啊

[Normal]
  1. 00:01:971 (2) - 你是不是忘了加whistle对啊呜呜
  2. 00:03:817 (3) - 加個NC吧normal的话不必了
  3. 00:05:663 (4) - 跟前面一樣用對稱的？用了DS所以才会这样
  4. 00:13:971 (2,3,4) - 我覺得疊兩顆就行了，新手好像對重疊不是很在行再看看._.
  5. 01:35:201 (4) - 放一個1/2的折返slider吧对！

排版稍微亂了些
到乾淨整潔可能還需要點時間
繼續加油吧
共勉之
哇谢谢你的评价和mod Evil_Twilight :3
Pandiar
391 posts
Joined February 2012
Pandiar
happy new year :D
m4m !

[General]
  1. countdowm
  2. widescreen support
  3. letterbox
uncheck

[Insane]
00:11:201 (8) - NC
00:11:894 (1) - remove NC
00:11:663 (9) - how about this? or i think it is fun to use same form like 00:08:432 (3,4,5,6)
SPOILER
SPOILER
00:15:817 (3) - move x168 y120? blanket good, but try to make make triangle 00:15:817 (3,4,7)
00:33:355 (1) - ctrl + h ? it is better flow
00:35:663 (2) - ctrl + g
00:42:586 ~ 00:44:317 - i think stream is also good
00:45:817 (4) - too close.how about stack 00:46:048 (5)
00:51:817 (2) - how about this rhythm?
SPOILER
00:53:663 (8) - move about x256 y164?
00:55:278 (5) - more more up?x300 y120?
00:55:509 (1) - this rhyzhm is better
SPOILER
00:57:355 (1) - spinner is good, but i think it is better flow to 00:58:278's stream because Insane diff
SPOILER
00:59:201 - how about this? i think it is fit
SPOILER


[Hard]
AR-1 ?
OD-1 ?
00:07:509 (1) - how about this?
SPOILER
00:45:125 (2) - start 00:45:355?
00:45:817 (3) - stack 00:46:048 (4)


[Normal]
00:11:894 (2) - remove
00:12:817 (3) - ^
00:16:971 (3) - ^
00:17:894 (5) - ^
00:28:740 (4) - maybe it confuse for beginner.try to change slider?
01:02:894 (1) - distance error

i heard for the first time but i like song very much!
and like your Insane XD
goooood luck!!
Mei
1,053 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Mei

Pandiar wrote:

happy new year :D:D
m4m !

[General]
  1. countdowm
  2. widescreen support
  3. letterbox
uncheckfix! but i keep widscreen support on

[Insane]
00:11:201 (8) - NCok
00:11:894 (1) - remove NCok
00:11:663 (9) - how about this? or i think it is fun to use same form like 00:08:432 (3,4,5,6)it will be a hard work and current one is also fine so no change_(:зゝ∠)_
SPOILER
SPOILER
00:15:817 (3) - move x168 y120? blanket good, but try to make make triangle 00:15:817 (3,4,7)seems nice!
00:33:355 (1) - ctrl + h ? it is better flowsure
00:35:663 (2) - ctrl + gok
00:42:586 ~ 00:44:317 - i think stream is also goodthis one is also fine:3
00:45:817 (4) - too close.how about stack 00:46:048 (5)ok
00:51:817 (2) - how about this rhythm?[not bad but current one also fit
SPOILER
00:53:663 (8) - move about x256 y164?ok
00:55:278 (5) - more more up?x300 y120?made some other changes there
00:55:509 (1) - this rhyzhm is betteralthough i dont find any differences between current one...fixed it anyway
SPOILER
00:57:355 (1) - spinner is good, but i think it is better flow to 00:58:278's stream because Insane diffok
SPOILER
00:59:201 - how about this? i think it is fitsince vocal starts from red line._. anyway i made some change there
SPOILER


[Hard]
AR-1 ?keep this, i think ar7 for this is fine
OD-1 ?oh someone have asked me to +1 ;w;
00:07:509 (1) - how about this?oh this is someone's suggestion. i did same as you shows before
SPOILER
00:45:125 (2) - start 00:45:355?ummm... this one is ok but i think the currrent one is also fine
00:45:817 (3) - stack 00:46:048 (4)sorry no ._.


[Normal]
00:11:894 (2) - removeok
00:12:817 (3) - ^^
00:16:971 (3) - ^keep
00:17:894 (5) - ^keep since there has lyrics
00:28:740 (4) - maybe it confuse for beginner.try to change slider?ok
01:02:894 (1) - distance errorfix

i heard for the first time but i like song very much!yeah. i am happy to choose a song which everybody like it
and like your Insane XDthank you:3
goooood luck!!
thank you for you modding Pandiar-san v(｀・ω・´)v
Rakuen
1,654 posts
Joined March 2013
Rakuen
( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[Normal]
00:13:048 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:894 (4) - Don't stack and and NC
00:20:432 (3) - Replace this shape with 00:19:048 (1) - and rotate 135*
00:21:586 (5) - Make this Ctrl+G and stack 00:21:355 (4) - on 00:21:586 (5) -
00:24:125 (4) - Avoid overlap with 00:25:048 (6) -
00:33:817 (1) - Change to straight slider like 00:34:740 (2) -
00:39:355 (1) - Jump?
00:44:894 (2) - Move this to X:192 Y:176, stack the tail of 00:45:817 (3) - to 00:43:971 (1) -
01:07:048 (2) - This is a little close to 01:05:663 (4) - , move away further
01:10:740 (2) - Put on X:256 Y:132
01:14:432 (1,2) - 太多背向flow的note了，试试跟flow多点
01:17:894 (1) - Remove this and NC 01:18:125 -
01:19:509 (3,4,5) - Hardest part, don't make slider head touch with next slider
01:25:048 - Finish
01:34:509 (3) - Ctrl+G

[Hard]
00:12:817 (4) - Ctrl+G and stack 00:12:586 (3) - on the head
00:13:971 (7) - CtrL+G
00:15:586 (3,4) - Blanket
00:15:355 (2) - 1.2x DS here but only 1.0x here 00:15:586 (3) - , make them same
00:17:432 (7) - Inconsistency DS
00:17:663 (8) - DS too close ^
00:20:432 (6,7,8) - Make them same shape, use 00:20:432 (6) - and rotate a bit
00:24:586 (1) - Move further and remove NC
00:25:048 (2) - NC here
00:26:894 (1,2) - Swap timing place
00:27:355 (3,4) - ^
00:29:663 - There should be a note here
00:39:125 - Add a note here stack on 00:38:432 (5) -
00:41:663 (1) - Remove NC, NC at 00:42:355 - or 00:43:509 -
00:47:201 (1,2,3) - Change this pattern becoz there's no vocal on 00:47:201 (1) -
00:48:125 (3) - NC here and remove NC at 00:49:509 (1) -
00:52:048 (1) - 1.0xDS
01:03:125 (1,2) - This flow is strange, try Ctrl+G on 01:03:355 (2) - and unstack 01:03:125 (1) - by moving them to right bottom part
01:13:971 (3) - NC here
01:32:201 - A note here

[Insane]
00:05:663 (1) - Don't NC here
00:16:740 (8) - NC here and remove NC at 00:17:663 (1) -
00:19:048 (5) - NC here
00:23:432 - Remove clap
00:26:894 (6) - Ctrl+G and move further + NC
00:27:817 (1) - Remove NC
00:28:971 (6) - NC here
00:30:125 - Clap
00:31:048 (6) - ^
00:33:817 - Clap
00:34:740 - ^
00:44:432 (1) - Stack this
00:47:663 (9) - ^
00:49:855 (6) - Arrange this to straight line (hold shift and move)
00:53:432 (8,9) - Swap timing place
00:55:971 (2,1) - Don't stack on head of 00:55:509 (1) - , it's hard to read
00:59:432 (1) - Flow break, try rotate 00:58:278 (1,2) - by 90* anti-clockwise

总结：排列摆放整齐就可以了，太乱玩起来会很怪
G S X
88 posts
Joined August 2012
G S X
irc mod
13:14 Mei: 来帮我摸摸吧
13:14 Mei: 嗯嗯
13:14 judgment light: OK
13:15 judgment light: 我现在要出门
13:15 Mei: ye
13:15 judgment light: 我回来帮你看看你的图
13:15 Mei: Ok那我pm？
13:15 Mei: 还是现在np给你
13:15 judgment light: np过来
13:15 *Mei is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/344073 Yamamoto Nozomi, Uesaka Sumire, Uchiyama Yumi Kakuma Ai - AO ku YURE te iru (TV Size)]
13:15 Mei: ;D
13:16 judgment light: 我回来再帮你看
13:16 judgment light: 88
13:16 Mei: 白白
14:16 judgment light: 奇怪
14:17 judgment light: 你那图下回来发现铺面已损坏
14:17 judgment light: 开不了
14:23 Mei: 噗
14:23 Mei: 我现在在看到
14:23 Mei: 等等啊
14:24 Mei: 不会把。。。
14:24 Mei: 有不少人摸过了
14:24 Mei: 我在上传便
14:24 Mei: 一遍
14:27 *Mei is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/344073 Yamamoto Nozomi, Uesaka Sumire, Uchiyama Yumi Kakuma Ai - AO ku YURE te iru (TV Size) [Insane]]
14:27 Mei: 再试试
14:27 Mei: ;w;
14:28 judgment light: 还是不完整QAQ
14:28 judgment light: 你有没有度盘什么的传一个呗
14:28 Mei: 好
14:28 Mei: 我来
14:39 judgment light: 咦度盘呢
14:48 Mei: 抱歉我这里网太慢了
14:49 judgment light: 没事
14:49 Mei: ;w;
14:49 Mei: 传度盘好慢=A=
14:49 judgment light: 233
14:50 Mei: 唉文件出错的话不知道要怎么搞
14:50 Mei: 别人mod也出错不知道怎么办呢:w:
14:50 judgment light: 别人也是吗
14:50 Mei: 没有吧...
14:50 Mei: 有一个人貌似提过import有问题
14:50 judgment light: ...
14:51 Mei: 但是我想就一个人问题不大
14:51 judgment light: import是什么
14:53 Mei: 呃
14:53 Mei: 就是导入的时候出错
14:53 judgment light: 哦..
14:55 Mei: :3
14:56 Mei: 好啦\:D/
14:56 Mei: http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kTJSm2b
14:57 judgment light: 行了
14:57 Mei: 好快
14:57 judgment light: 233
14:57 judgment light: 度盘是挺快
14:57 judgment light: 比官网好太多
15:00 judgment light: 我直接irc mod吧
15:01 judgment light: 如何
15:01 Mei: 呃irc那个
15:01 Mei: 怎么上传的啊
15:01 Mei: 我不会欸
15:01 judgment light: savelog
15:01 judgment light: 然后发上forum啊
15:01 judgment light: 00:14:432 (9) -
15:01 judgment light: 这个别用1/6 换成1/8
15:01 Mei: ok
15:02 Mei: 等等
15:02 judgment light: 我先打一遍这图
15:02 Mei: 那个难度？
15:04 judgment light: 感觉kiai里面不适合用clap
15:04 Mei: 会么0 0
15:04 judgment light: 纯用whistle音效就不错啊kiai那里
15:04 Mei: 不不一般不会吧
15:04 Mei: 不用clap
15:04 judgment light: 可以的
15:05 judgment light: 你看看rin的那个脑浆炸裂女孩
15:05 judgment light: 几乎只用whistle
15:05 judgment light: 00:57:240 这里加个转盘
15:05 judgment light: 00:57:240
15:05 judgment light: ..
15:05 judgment light: 00:57:240
15:05 Mei: 啊这里原来是转盘的
15:05 judgment light: .....
15:05 Mei: 但是后来换掉了
15:06 Mei: 00:58:278 (1,2,3) -
15:06 Mei: 原来没有这里的
15:06 Mei: 是转盘一直到kiai
15:06 judgment light: 转盘转到
15:06 Mei: 后来被人建议换掉了
15:06 judgment light: 00:58:163
15:06 Mei: .-.
15:06 judgment light: 这里呀
15:06 Mei: 048吧
15:06 judgment light: 另外这00:58:278 (1,2) - 几个换成4个短滑条不错
15:07 Mei: 恩我觉得看了一
15:07 Mei: 可以
15:07 judgment light: 048可以
15:07 Mei: 呃我想想啊
15:08 judgment light: 对了 2 4 clap我个人觉得要么不用 要用就用到底当一个伴奏
15:08 Mei: 感觉勉强吧
15:08 judgment light: kiai用一下不用一下真的很违和
15:08 judgment light: 唔 无所谓的 这些都是建议而已 采纳不采纳完全在于你自己
15:08 Mei: kiai为了跟人声顾不上了:w;
15:08 Mei: 很多地方下不了clap了
15:08 judgment light: 没错 跟人声才好玩
15:08 judgment light: 那就干脆全部去掉
15:09 Mei: 全程都去么
15:09 judgment light: kiai而已
15:09 Mei: 建议太开放了我要想想
15:09 judgment light: 2333
15:09 judgment light: 只是我自己的建议而已
15:09 judgment light: 你看看还有没有人提这个意见把
15:09 judgment light: 如果还有的话你就考虑去掉
15:10 Mei: 嗯嗯1
15:10 judgment light: 不对
15:11 Mei: 0 0
15:11 judgment light: 后半段Kiai感觉要用1/3来做啊
15:11 judgment light: 1/6
15:11 judgment light: 不然感觉不太对
15:11 Mei: 哈。。。
15:11 Mei: 不是吧
15:11 Mei: 从哪里开始啊
15:11 judgment light: 哦草我的错觉不好意思
15:12 judgment light: 只是听着觉得人声好像不太准
15:13 Mei: 来来继续
15:13 judgment light: 我再看看
15:14 judgment light: 00:07:048 (3) - 感觉这里是个3/4的滑条才对 不过这样你那个梗就得改了 换不换看你自己爱好
15:15 Mei: 对了clap的问题
15:15 Mei: 我干脆只下2
15:15 Mei: 不下24clap
15:15 judgment light: 这样不好听的
15:15 Mei: 之下2
15:15 Mei: 你看这样行不行
15:15 Mei: ;w;
15:15 judgment light: 感觉2 4 clap就是配套用的
15:15 judgment light: 要么不下要么一起下
15:16 judgment light: kiai之前的都可以2 4 clap啊
15:16 judgment light: 到了kiai去掉而已
15:16 Mei: 感觉好怪啊
15:16 Mei: 我觉得kiai之前可以没有 clap
15:16 judgment light: 唔..
15:16 Mei: kiai一定要有啊
15:17 judgment light: 删不删看你的爱好吧
15:17 Mei: 我再想想
15:17 judgment light: 干脆不删也行
15:17 judgment light: 00:07:048 (3) - 对了这个你换么
15:17 judgment light: 换成3/4滑条
15:18 Mei: 应该不换
15:18 Mei: 1/2感觉没问题
15:18 Mei: 换了的话要改蛮多的
15:18 judgment light: 那就不换
15:19 judgment light: 00:24:355
15:19 judgment light: 这里没必要空了啊
15:19 judgment light: 00:24:355
15:19 Mei: ok
15:20 judgment light: 00:42:586 (1,2) - 这两个感觉很不搭啊 换四个单点或者滑条什么的试试
15:20 judgment light: 我的建议是换两个普通滑条
15:21 judgment light: 看了一下你的s1的clap 我觉得全部clap换成s1也许好点
15:21 judgment light: 我去试试
15:23 Mei: 默认的clap还是清脆一点
15:23 Mei: s1感觉是比较贴合音乐
15:23 judgment light: 给我的感觉就是s1音效1 3 finish 2 4 clap挺带感的
15:23 judgment light: 嗯
15:23 judgment light: s1挺贴合音乐的
15:24 Mei: 这音效还是偷别人的
15:24 Mei: 我自己不会.-.
15:24 judgment light: 我也不回啊
15:24 judgment light: 基本都是偷的
15:24 Mei: 233
15:24 judgment light: 00:23:548 (4) -
15:24 judgment light: 感觉换成2连然后放clap比较好
15:25 judgment light: 00:37:971 (3,4,5,6) -
15:25 judgment light: 像你这段一样
15:25 Mei: 啊啊啊我懂得
15:26 Mei: 咦
15:26 Mei: 感觉不错
15:26 judgment light: 嗯
15:27 judgment light: 00:57:125 (4) - 这里加个finish
15:27 judgment light: 00:53:894 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段不错
15:27 Mei: 呃s1的finish么
15:27 judgment light: 嗯
15:27 judgment light: 对了这两个有换吗00:42:586 (7,8) -
15:28 judgment light: 00:51:125
15:28 judgment light: 这里加个note试试
15:28 Mei: 没
15:28 judgment light: 我觉得换了比较好
15:29 judgment light: 两个滑条
15:29 Mei: 先保留把主要是我觉得没什么问题
15:29 Mei: 看看别人怎么说
15:29 judgment light: 好吧
15:29 judgment light: kiai试试全用s1音效
15:29 judgment light: 我觉得比s音效好
15:31 Mei: 可以但是要换一下finish
15:31 Mei: 做个s2好了
15:31 judgment light: 嗯
15:31 judgment light: 可以
15:31 judgment light: 因为默认的sclap感觉太明显 用来只下2clap的话有点突兀了
15:32 judgment light: 01:14:894 (4) - 这个做个blanket比较好
15:33 judgment light: 后面找不出什么问题了
15:34 Mei: 好blanketfix
15:35 judgment light: 感觉你hard的排版比insane好了不少....
15:36 judgment light: hard部分
15:36 judgment light: 00:18:125 (9) -
15:36 judgment light: 这个拖成1/2滑条后面再加一个note
15:36 judgment light: 大白线那里加一个note
15:37 Mei: 有么0 0
15:37 Mei: 这个还是不加吧
15:37 judgment light: 我感觉吧..
15:38 Mei: 现在的这个贴节奏一点
15:38 Mei: hard我还是按照ds摆的
15:38 Mei: 然后稍微调整一下
15:38 judgment light: 那个那样改是因为感觉用滑条把人声盖住了不太好
15:38 judgment light: 不加也没关系
15:40 judgment light: 感觉hard没什么问题可以挑呢
15:40 Mei: 耶
15:42 judgment light: 00:57:125 (1) - 把转盘尾拖到00:58:278
15:42 judgment light: 然后00:59:201
15:43 judgment light: 这后面加两个note吧
15:43 judgment light: 感觉无缘无故空了两声很不习惯啊..
15:44 Mei: 中间又空了
15:44 Mei: 我想下
15:44 Mei: 这个地方我也觉的不是很好
15:44 judgment light: 嗯
15:44 Mei: 没想到特别好的解决方法
15:45 judgment light: 一个长滑条呗
15:45 Mei: 00:58:278
15:45 Mei: 滑条停在那里了
15:45 Mei: 那里有音啊
15:46 judgment light: 你后面空了的一段你想下甚么
15:46 judgment light: 连打滑条么
15:46 Mei: http://puu.sh/68Zwk.jpg
15:46 Mei: 这样你看看
15:47 judgment light: 卧槽打不开
15:47 Mei: 我来描述吧
15:47 judgment light: 行了
15:47 judgment light: 我看看
15:47 Mei: ...
15:47 Mei: ;w;
15:48 judgment light: 可以
15:49 judgment light: 01:26:663 (7,8) - 这两个感觉应该先滑条后note手感比较好
15:51 judgment light: 没啥可挑的了
15:51 judgment light: 我去看看normal
15:51 judgment light: 不过我不太会挑normal
15:52 judgment light: 还在么..
15:52 judgment light: 00:20:432 (3) -
15:52 judgment light: 感觉像后面那个一样比较好
15:53 judgment light: 00:21:355 (4,5) - 像这个
15:53 Mei: 噗我去上了下厕所。。。
15:53 Mei: 抱歉;w;
15:53 judgment light: ...
15:54 judgment light: 00:53:894 (2) - Ω....
15:54 Mei: 哇好眼光
15:54 Mei: 有个外国佬说这是马蹄铁
15:54 Mei: ._.
15:54 judgment light: 233
15:55 Mei: 有什么样式推荐么
15:55 Mei: 我拉不出滑条
15:55 Mei: 随便拉的`
15:55 judgment light: 我最不会的就是拖滑条了...
15:55 judgment light: 01:12:125 (1) -
15:55 judgment light: 这个滑条头
15:55 judgment light: 拖到01:11:894
15:56 Mei: 转盘吧
15:56 Mei: ok
15:56 judgment light: normal也没什么可挑的了
15:56 Mei: 好
15:57 judgment light: 咦不对啊01:35:894 (1) - 这个滑条尾你normal静音了hard怎么没静音
15:57 judgment light: insane也是一样
15:57 Mei: 对
15:57 judgment light: 静音好很多
15:57 Mei: 全改好了
15:57 judgment light: 嗯
15:57 Mei: 王杰了
15:57 Mei: 忘记
15:57 Mei: ;w;
15:57 judgment light: 233
15:57 judgment light: 我也经常会
Mei
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Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) AIRakuen 愛楽園 (Mod/GD/M4M)

[Normal]
00:13:048 (1) - Remove NCok
00:14:894 (4) - Don't stack and and NCkeep this..
00:20:432 (3) - Replace this shape with 00:19:048 (1) - and rotate 135*ok
00:21:586 (5) - Make this Ctrl+G and stack 00:21:355 (4) - on 00:21:586 (5) - no
00:24:125 (4) - Avoid overlap with 00:25:048 (6) - fix
00:33:817 (1) - Change to straight slider like 00:34:740 (2) - ok
00:39:355 (1) - Jump?fix
00:44:894 (2) - Move this to X:192 Y:176, stack the tail of 00:45:817 (3) - to 00:43:971 (1) - fix
01:07:048 (2) - This is a little close to 01:05:663 (4) - , move away furtherok
01:10:740 (2) - Put on X:256 Y:132ok
01:14:432 (1,2) - 太多背向flow的note了，试试跟flow多点好的.-.
01:17:894 (1) - Remove this and NC 01:18:125 - ok
01:19:509 (3,4,5) - Hardest part, don't make slider head touch with next sliderchange a bit
01:25:048 - Finishok
01:34:509 (3) - Ctrl+Gok

[Hard]
00:12:817 (4) - Ctrl+G and stack 00:12:586 (3) - on the headsorry i just follow DS
00:13:971 (7) - CtrL+G^
00:15:586 (3,4) - Blanketok
00:15:355 (2) - 1.2x DS here but only 1.0x here 00:15:586 (3) - , make them samesure
00:17:432 (7) - Inconsistency DSfix
00:17:663 (8) - DS too close ^ok
00:20:432 (6,7,8) - Make them same shape, use 00:20:432 (6) - and rotate a biti am sure this is how i did
00:24:586 (1) - Move further and remove NCok
00:25:048 (2) - NC hereok
00:26:894 (1,2) - Swap timing place this is someone's suggestion... keep it
00:27:355 (3,4) - ^
00:29:663 - There should be a note herei am not going to make it too diofficult
00:39:125 - Add a note here stack on 00:38:432 (5) - no, current one is better
00:41:663 (1) - Remove NC, NC at 00:42:355 - or 00:43:509 - ok
00:47:201 (1,2,3) - Change this pattern becoz there's no vocal on 00:47:201 (1) - well actually there is ._.
00:48:125 (3) - NC here and remove NC at 00:49:509 (1) - ummm no
00:52:048 (1) - 1.0xDSsince there is an NC, i think it is ok there
01:03:125 (1,2) - This flow is strange, try Ctrl+G on 01:03:355 (2) - and unstack 01:03:125 (1) - by moving them to right bottom partok
01:13:971 (3) - NC hereok
01:32:201 - A note hereno

[Insane]
00:05:663 (1) - Don't NC hereok
00:16:740 (8) - NC here and remove NC at 00:17:663 (1) - ok
00:19:048 (5) - NC hereok
00:23:432 - Remove clapchanged in a different way
00:26:894 (6) - Ctrl+G and move further + NCcurrent one is ok i think...
00:27:817 (1) - Remove NCok
00:28:971 (6) - NC hereok
00:30:125 - Clapno
00:31:048 (6) - ^no
00:33:817 - Clapno
00:34:740 - ^no, all of them are a trick
00:44:432 (1) - Stack thisnot realy necessary since this is a trick too
00:47:663 (9) - ^^
00:49:855 (6) - Arrange this to straight line (hold shift and move)
00:53:432 (8,9) - Swap timing placeok
00:55:971 (2,1) - Don't stack on head of 00:55:509 (1) - , it's hard to readok
00:59:432 (1) - Flow break, try rotate 00:58:278 (1,2) - by 90* anti-clockwiseok

总结：排列摆放整齐就可以了，太乱玩起来会很怪
谢谢你的mod和评价 rakuen-san :D :D
Fushimi Rio
Fushimi Rio
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[General]
美观上比第一张进步很多啊 基本就是细节问题了 好

[Normal]

01:16:740 (3,1) - 压上了 这里我倾向于不用做对称 毕竟player看不到 意义不大
01:31:509 (3,1) - ^

[Hard]

00:12:586 (3,4,5,6) -
try

292,124,12586,1,12,0:0:0:0:
292,124,12817,2,0,L|201:164,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
220,239,13278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,239,13509,2,0,L|295:267,1,80,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:20:894 (7) - 弧度太大
00:25:048 (2,3,4) - 这个antijump有点难读……
00:26:894 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+G
00:33:355 - 这里有个鼓啊 不放东西不知道行不行
00:45:125 (2,3,4) -
SPOILER
虽然4是跟着ds的 看着还是不美观 挪开点
01:01:971 (8,9) - ^
01:14:894 (3,4,5) - ……我也不知道哪不对劲 但就是不舒服
01:18:125 (2) - 第三个锚点左5grid

[Insane]

Irc moded

01:16:278 (7) - stack to 8
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