1. AI's Extra (4.86 stars, 730 notes)
2. Easy (1.29 stars, 129 notes)
3. Hard (2.88 stars, 409 notes)
4. Insane (4.26 stars, 468 notes)
5. Normal (1.65 stars, 208 notes)

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captin1 wrote:

hi

so your offset is fine timing wise, but the bpm is actually 87.99, if you listen to the end of the last kiai this actually lines it up better. you should also set offset to -708 so that there are no notes before the first timing point. It's an odd disputable point but it's best to stay on the safe side and go negative, since there have been some bugs with this before

remember to resnap all of your green lines, and then all of your notes.

good luck!

1. I love the song♥~
   The map is pretty.

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

你好，随机mod一个
全局：
深（しん）　藍（らん）
感觉拼「しない」不合适，按字来拼比较好 歌名就是"しんあい"了，没法改
某tube你懂的，就不去考证拼法了。如果原视频是这样拼写的话就按照视频为准。

难度：Easy
没有发现

难度：Normal
02:23:496 (4,1) - 这里blanket有点歪了

难度：Insane
没有Hard难度？
00:17:530 (4,1) - 跳的有点远，再加上这里的音乐也感觉不出需要跳跃
00:21:110 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 左边四个将首位互换一下
02:23:837 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 建议根据音调来改变间距

难度：AI's Insane
01:26:564 (1,2) - +clap
02:01:678 (5,6) - +clap

写的挺短的，加油

Cosmolade wrote:

Hello~
M4M (´∪` )

[General]

1. I love the song♥~
   The map is pretty.

[Easy]

Good.

- 00:01:337 - Add a note?
- 00:56:223 (3) - Extend this note to 00:56:735 and add a Reverse.
- 00:57:246 (4) - Move to 00:57:587 and end it on 00:58:610 -(you must keep the reverse)-
- 01:28:269 - Add a note?
- 02:47:360 - ^

[Normal]

Nice

- 00:08:155 (3) - End this on white tick
- 00:56:564 (3,4,5) - Avoid overlap
- 01:19:576 (3) - This is in the blue tick, but it's okay
- 01:25:030 (3) - End this on blue tick, and add circle in 01:25:542 and 01:25:882 - (it's just a suggestion)-
- 02:14:973 - Add a note
- 02:15:314 - ^
- 02:36:110 (5,6,1) - Avoid overlap

[Insane]

Jumps... O︿O

- 00:17:701 (1,2,3,4) - Too far
- 01:33:382 (1,2) - Confusing
- 02:23:837 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - Too confusing.

[AI's Insane]

Wow. Awesome and Perfect. _(:D 」∠)_

---

Good luck with the map~ ‎(✿ﾉ◡‿◡)ﾉ *:･ﾟ✧*:･ﾟ✧

• 00:40:201 (4,5) - remove that overlap lightly
  00:48:382 (1,2) - ^
  01:44:973 (2,1) - ^
  01:51:110 (1,2) - same like 01:48:382 (1,2) - (Like this part: 00:21:110 (1,2,3,4) - )
  02:04:746 (1) - i think using finish on here will be good
  
  [Normal]
  
  • 00:08:155 (2) - a little awkward. end on 00:08:837 -
    00:49:064 (1,2) - try blanket
    02:04:746 (1) - the same as Easy diff
    
    [Insane]
    
    • 00:01:337 (5) - NC for follow vocal
      from 00:21:110 (1) - 00:26:223 (2) - NC spam D: i think that there is no particular need on this part
      from 01:26:564 (1) - 01:28:780 (2) - Cool :3 I love this part :333
      02:14:973 (5) - NC
      02:19:746 (5,6) - try overlap with 02:18:212 (6) -
      02:26:223 (3) - why not using the NC on here? (Same like this: 01:28:951 (1) - )
      02:49:576 (3) - move to (256,45) for accurate overlap with 02:49:064 (2) -
      
      [AI's Insane]
      
      • It is good to me :3

sksmwkd125 wrote:

Hi !

I am a newbie modding.

You can ignore my suggestion.

Easy

No problem


Normal

00:08:155 (2) - Slider 00:08:837 - The end.
↓

Here

Insane

It is not a big problem. ^^


AI's Insane

^


Good map.

star ^^!

[ Raphael ] wrote:

Hi~! M4M :3

[Easy]

• 00:40:201 (4,5) - remove that overlap lightly Don't understand what's this but I tried to fix
  00:48:382 (1,2) - ^
  01:44:973 (2,1) - ^
  01:51:110 (1,2) - same like 01:48:382 (1,2) - (Like this part: 00:21:110 (1,2,3,4) - )
  02:04:746 (1) - i think using finish on here will be good
  
  [Normal]
  
  • 00:08:155 (2) - a little awkward. end on 00:08:837 -
    00:49:064 (1,2) - try blanket
    02:04:746 (1) - the same as Easy diff
    
    [Insane]
    
    • 00:01:337 (5) - NC for follow vocal Fixed
      from 00:21:110 (1) - 00:26:223 (2) - NC spam D: i think that there is no particular need on this part Good idea, but keep atm
      from 01:26:564 (1) - 01:28:780 (2) - Cool :3 I love this part :333 Ty
      02:14:973 (5) - NC Fixed
      02:19:746 (5,6) - try overlap with 02:18:212 (6) - Nice try but I cant do it D:
      02:26:223 (3) - why not using the NC on here? (Same like this: 01:28:951 (1) - )
      02:49:576 (3) - move to (256,45) for accurate overlap with 02:49:064 (2) - Fixed

Feverie wrote:

[Easy]

00:07:473 (1) - Try to Neaten Tried to fix
00:18:382 (1) - ^ Tried to fix
01:12:928 (1,2,3) - Make 1 and 3 Mirror each other

SPOILER

Something of this sorts

01:42:928 (1) - Removed the circle

SPOILER

(You can change a little ofc)

02:52:473 (3) - Neaten a Little Tried to fix

Good Luck

1. Offset 2019 2045

1. 01:15:655 (3) - NC
2. 01:42:928 (1) - move 4th slider point few gird

1. 00:39:519 (4) - blanket
2. 00:45:655 (4) - NC
3. 00:48:382 (7,1) - swap NC
4. 00:52:814 (6) - blanket. move down 2nd slider point few grid
5. 00:56:564 (3) - NC?
6. 01:07:473 (1) - blanket. 3rd slider point (232,128)
7. 01:15:655 (4) - NC
8. 01:15:655 (4) - clap on end of slider
9. 02:02:019 (4) - NC
10. 02:56:564 (5) - ^

1. 00:25:882 (5) - NC
2. 00:52:814 (5) - blanket. move right red slider point 1~2 grid
3. 00:56:564 (1) - blanket. move right 2nd slider point 1~2 grid
4. 00:57:928 (3) - clap on end of slider
5. 00:58:609 (5) - drum hitsound?
6. 01:06:110 (5) - NC?
7. 02:28:269 (6) - Ctrl + G
8. 02:34:746 (1) - clap on arrow of slider
9. 02:52:644 (4) - finish

1. 00:00:826 (2,3,1,2) - add drum-finish
2. 00:09:178 (4) - little blanket. move 3rd slider point few grid
3. 00:11:394 (1) - clap on head of slider
4. 00:15:655 (1) - clap on end of slider
5. 00:16:337 (3,4) - ^
6. 00:18:042 (4) - ^
7. 00:44:462 (4) - clap on head of slider
8. 00:45:655 (1) - blanket
9. 00:47:189 - S:C2 slidertick
10. 00:49:917 (4) - clap
11. 00:55:371 (4) - clap on head of slider
12. 00:55:371 (4) - S:C2 slidertick
13. 00:58:780 (2) - add drum-clap Or add clap on 00:59:121 (4)
14. 01:10:030 (5) - clap
15. 01:34:405 (4) - clap on end of slider
16. 02:14:462 (2,3,2,3) - same on first part. drum-finish
17. 02:29:973 (2) - blanket
18. 02:34:746 (1) - clap on arrow of slider
19. 02:52:644 (2) - finish

1. 00:58:098 (1) - clap
2. 00:58:610 (4,5) - i heard drum sound. add drum-clap on end of (4) and add drum-finish on head and end of (5)
3. 01:15:144 - add S:C2 for clap slidertick
4. 01:21:110 (1) - clap on end of slider
5. 01:23:667 (1,3) - swap NC?
6. 01:27:076 (2,4) - swap clap
7. 01:28:269 (2) - add clap on head of slider,too.
8. 01:29:292 (1) - clap on end of slider
9. 01:32:019 (1) - ^?
10. 01:48:382 (5,1) - swap NC
11. 01:53:496 (5) - clap on end of slider
12. 02:14:632 (4) - add drum-finish
13. 02:24:519 (5) - perfectly stack on 02:22:814 (1)'s location
14. 02:31:848 (6) - clap
15. 02:34:576 (5) - ^
16. 02:40:371 (2) - (344,236)
17. 02:46:848 (2) - clap
18. 02:48:723 (2) - make upward slider
19. 02:57:076 (3) - finish on end of slider

TaMul wrote:

[General]

1. Offset 2019 2045 Keep

[Easy]

1. 01:15:655 (3) - NC Fixed
2. 01:42:928 (1) - move 4th slider point few gird Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:39:519 (4) - blanket Fixed
2. 00:45:655 (4) - NC Fixed
3. 00:48:382 (7,1) - swap NC Fixed
4. 00:52:814 (6) - blanket. move down 2nd slider point few grid Fixed
5. 00:56:564 (3) - NC? Fixed
6. 01:07:473 (1) - blanket. 3rd slider point (232,128) Fixed
7. 01:15:655 (4) - NC Fixed
8. 01:15:655 (4) - clap on end of slider
9. 02:02:019 (4) - NC Fixed
10. 02:56:564 (5) - ^ Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:25:882 (5) - NC Fixed
2. 00:52:814 (5) - blanket. move right red slider point 1~2 grid Fixed
3. 00:56:564 (1) - blanket. move right 2nd slider point 1~2 grid Fixed
4. 00:57:928 (3) - clap on end of slider
5. 00:58:609 (5) - drum hitsound?
6. 01:06:110 (5) - NC?
7. 02:28:269 (6) - Ctrl + G Fixed
8. 02:34:746 (1) - clap on arrow of slider
9. 02:52:644 (4) - finish Fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:00:826 (2,3,1,2) - add drum-finish
2. 00:09:178 (4) - little blanket. move 3rd slider point few grid Fixed
3. 00:11:394 (1) - clap on head of slider
4. 00:15:655 (1) - clap on end of slider
5. 00:16:337 (3,4) - ^
6. 00:18:042 (4) - ^
7. 00:44:462 (4) - clap on head of slider
8. 00:45:655 (1) - blanket Fixed
9. 00:47:189 - S:C2 slidertick
10. 00:49:917 (4) - clap
11. 00:55:371 (4) - clap on head of slider
12. 00:55:371 (4) - S:C2 slidertick
13. 00:58:780 (2) - add drum-clap Or add clap on 00:59:121 (4)
14. 01:10:030 (5) - clap
15. 01:34:405 (4) - clap on end of slider
16. 02:14:462 (2,3,2,3) - same on first part. drum-finish
17. 02:29:973 (2) - blanket Fixed
18. 02:34:746 (1) - clap on arrow of slider
19. 02:52:644 (2) - finish Fixed

1. add 1500 AudioLeadIn manually, your diff are starting so fast
2. you have both slider slide and slider tick silenced, which is considered unrankable
3. your timing lines seems not necessary, just keeping one at: -708 with 88 bpm will work the same

1. Stack leniency 7 work better here IMO
2. 00:01:848 (7) - missing finish here, you can hear cymbals in the music
3. 00:01:934 (8) - this beat sound overmapped, since there is nothing in the music, also mapping it make you lose emphasis with 00:01:848 (7) - and 00:02:019 (1) -
4. 00:02:530 (3) - this beat sound kinda overmapped, there are more in the diff, but not sure if they are on purpose or not
5. 00:03:723 (2,3) - I like your jumps patterns, but here you reduce the spacing alot making the game play not comfortable, some like this can fix this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:04:746 (6) - missing NC, I supposed
7. 00:05:598 (9) - a this rhythm doesn't follow the song nicely, since you are ignoring the one who require a click action in 00:05:769 -, my suggestion:
   
   SPOILER

   
   You can keep the vocal line in that way ^
8. 00:06:451 (2,3,4) - similar as above, you're losing the emphasize when you start sliders on weak beats, try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:14:888 (2) - nothing in the music here
10. 00:15:314 (4,1) - ah this rhythm doesn't follow the song, also is breaking your comboing, try this:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 00:16:507 (4,5,6) - again here, try to start sliders with the heavy beats in the music for better gameplay and rhythm. You follow nicely the music at some points like 00:19:064 (3,4,5,6) - , try to keep it up, since your design and jumps are really funny, but try to improve rhythms here
12. 00:45:314 (1,2) - swap NC?
13. 00:47:359 I can hear a vocal, since you are following vocals in this section, should be a circle IMO
14. 00:53:155 (1) - you're ending this slider on a strong beat and at the same time it broke your comboing, try this:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:00:314 (4) - nothing in the music here, that's why it sound not nice in game, I think is better to remove this 01:00:314 (4) - and add one following the vocals at 01:00:484
16. 01:05:769 (5) - nothing in the music
17. 01:32:701 (3,4) - same as 00:16:507 -, for this one try:
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 01:36:451 (6,7) - exactly the same as above
19. 01:36:962 (1,3) - swap NC
20. 01:44:121 (2,3) - IMO this is too close and ruin the jump feeling of this section, consider to add more distance between them
21. 02:41:138 (6) - nothing in the music here
22. 02:41:905 (2,3) - same with the sliders at 01:32:701
23. 02:44:462 (2,3,6) - ^
24. 02:46:507 (1) - ^
25. 02:49:235 (4,5) - here is a nice example, the first one have a wrong rhythm is starting with almost nothing in the music and the second one is starting with strong beats/vocals how it should be
26. 02:50:257 (1) - same with the sliders at 01:32:701
    
    fun diff, but imo you should work more with rhythms
    
    

1. Stack leniency 4 is on purpose? if not set it to 7
2. 00:05:769 (2) - this is why I don't like symmetry xD, since with the first three sliders 00:04:746 (1,2,1) - you're following the vocals pretty nice, but with the one at 00:05:769 (2) - you're breaking that feeling, since 00:05:769 (2) - need 2 circles to follow the vocal line correctly
3. 00:07:473 (1,2,3) - you can make this pattern look better, maybe like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:16:678 (4) - same as 00:05:769
5. 00:18:041 (4) - ^
6. 00:21:280 remove clap? sound not nice IMO
7. 00:22:128 (2) - same as 00:05:769 -, probably I'll ruin your patterns with my suggestions, but I believe is better to have a nice rhythm
8. 00:21:110 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - you're spamming combos at this section, this doesn't make your patterns more readables, but ruin the overall HP drain of the whole diff, imo remove the unnecesary ones:
9. 00:21:791 (1) - remove NC
10. 00:23:155 ^
11. 00:24:519 ^
12. 00:25:882 ^
13. 01:04:064 (5,6) - a slider fit better the music here, since 6 doesn't have an important sound in the music
14. 01:14:973 (7,1,2) - your rhythm doesn't fit the song nicely here :l since some beats like 01:15:655 need a click action, my suggestion:
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:26:564 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I love this kinds of patterns <3
16. 01:34:405 (4) - same as 00:05:769
17. 02:19:405 (4) - ^
18. 02:23:837 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - cool
19. 02:31:678 (7) - same as 00:05:769
20. 02:40:201 (1,1,1,1) - remove the combo spam plz, as I explain before in 00:21:110
21. 02:45:655 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
    
    pretty nice

1. Stack leniency 4 is on purpose? if not set it to 7
2. 00:17:530 (6) - remove this circle? since sound better imo, also i can't really hear nothing there
3. 00:18:041 (8) - 2 circles fit better the vocals line
4. 00:18:894 (2) - same as 00:17:530
5. 00:21:109 (1,2,3) - kinda nazi but use the same distance between them
6. 00:26:394 (4) - use 2 circles like insane? to bring more emphasis to 00:26:564
7. 00:38:496 (3) - make this slider curved and try to do a blanket with 00:39:519 (5) -
8. 00:59:291 (1,2) - IMO circles fit better the vocal line than sliders
9. 01:24:348 (2) - remove this circle? it doesn't fit the song
10. 01:28:609 (7,8) - this sliders doesn't follow the song properly, also the slider spam is too repetitive, try this:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:34:405 (7) - same as 00:59:291
12. 02:47:700 (9,10) - similar to 01:28:609 -, check the rhythm again to 25% or 50%
13. 02:53:155 (6,7,8) - same here, try this instead:
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 02:57:587 (4) - 2 circles fit better the music in this point
15. 03:01:848 (10) - same as above
    
    pretty clean diff
    

1. same with Stack leniency but here you got 3, I suggest you to set it in 7
2. 00:08:155 (2) - ah this slider doesn't follow the song, it should end in 00:08:666
3. 00:20:087 (2,3) - try to start sliders with the strong sound in the music <:
4. 00:26:223 (5) - add 2 circles to bring more emphasis to 00:26:564
   
   cool diff
   

Natsu wrote:

Hi hi hi ~ M4M as you requested

My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/143216 Will get into it as soon as I can, probably Sunday or Monday

[General]

1. add 1500 AudioLeadIn manually, your diff are starting so fast Fixed
2. you have both slider slide and slider tick silenced, which is considered unrankableFixed, slidertick is now sounded
3. your timing lines seems not necessary, just keeping one at: -708 with 88 bpm will work the same

Fixed

[Insane]

1. Stack leniency 4 is on purpose? if not set it to 7 Keep for the pattern 01:26:564 (1,2,3,4) - , adding the latency make them moved from its original places
2. 00:05:769 (2) - this is why I don't like symmetry xD, since with the first three sliders 00:04:746 (1,2,1) - you're following the vocals pretty nice, but with the one at 00:05:769 (2) - you're breaking that feeling, since 00:05:769 (2) - need 2 circles to follow the vocal line correctly Fixed
3. 00:07:473 (1,2,3) - you can make this pattern look better, maybe like this: Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:16:678 (4) - same as 00:05:769 Fixed
5. 00:18:041 (4) - ^ Fixed
6. 00:21:280 remove clap? sound not nice IMO
7. 00:22:128 (2) - same as 00:05:769 -, probably I'll ruin your patterns with my suggestions, but I believe is better to have a nice rhythm Fixed
8. 00:21:110 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - you're spamming combos at this section, this doesn't make your patterns more readables, but ruin the overall HP drain of the whole diff, imo remove the unnecesary ones: Fixed
9. 00:21:791 (1) - remove NC Fixed
10. 00:23:155 ^ Fixed
11. 00:24:519 ^ Fixed
12. 00:25:882 ^ Fixed
13. 01:04:064 (5,6) - a slider fit better the music here, since 6 doesn't have an important sound in the music Fixed
14. 01:14:973 (7,1,2) - your rhythm doesn't fit the song nicely here :l since some beats like 01:15:655 need a click action, my suggestion: Fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 01:26:564 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - I love this kinds of patterns <3 Thanks!
16. 01:34:405 (4) - same as 00:05:769 Fixed
17. 02:19:405 (4) - ^ Fixed
18. 02:23:837 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - cool Thanks!
19. 02:31:678 (7) - same as 00:05:769 Fixed
20. 02:40:201 (1,1,1,1) - remove the combo spam plz, as I explain before in 00:21:110 Fixed
21. 02:45:655 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ Fixed
    
    pretty nice

[Hard]

1. Stack leniency 4 is on purpose? if not set it to 7 Fixed
2. 00:17:530 (6) - remove this circle? since sound better imo, also i can't really hear nothing there Keep, I love continuous hits (in Hard)
3. 00:18:041 (8) - 2 circles fit better the vocals line Keep for pattern
4. 00:18:894 (2) - same as 00:17:530 Keep, I love continuous hits (in Hard)
5. 00:21:109 (1,2,3) - kinda nazi but use the same distance between them Fixed
6. 00:26:394 (4) - use 2 circles like insane? to bring more emphasis to 00:26:564 Fixed
7. 00:38:496 (3) - make this slider curved and try to do a blanket with 00:39:519 (5) - Fixed
8. 00:59:291 (1,2) - IMO circles fit better the vocal line than sliders Fixed
9. 01:24:348 (2) - remove this circle? it doesn't fit the song Fixed
10. 01:28:609 (7,8) - this sliders doesn't follow the song properly, also the slider spam is too repetitive, try this: Fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:34:405 (7) - same as 00:59:291 Fixed
12. 02:47:700 (9,10) - similar to 01:28:609 -, check the rhythm again to 25% or 50% Fixed
13. 02:53:155 (6,7,8) - same here, try this instead: Fixed
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 02:57:587 (4) - 2 circles fit better the music in this point Fixed
15. 03:01:848 (10) - same as above Fixed
    
    pretty clean diff
    

[Normal]

1. same with Stack leniency but here you got 3, I suggest you to set it in 7 Fixed
2. 00:08:155 (2) - ah this slider doesn't follow the song, it should end in 00:08:666 Fixed
3. 00:20:087 (2,3) - try to start sliders with the strong sound in the music <: Fixed
4. 00:26:223 (5) - add 2 circles to bring more emphasis to 00:26:564 Fixed
   
   cool diff
   

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

M4M from #modreq

1. Grey——Just some complaints.
2. Black——My personal suggestions.
3. Bold——Highly recommended.
4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you'd better fix it.

[General]

1. I recommend to keep the same stack Leniency in all your diffs. Fixed
2. slidertick can't be silent. Fixed
3. add some audio-leadin through .osu file?

Fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:37:473 (1,2) - this sounds better imo. http://puu.sh/7ECAB.jpg Keep
2. 00:42:928 (1,2) - same suggestion as 00:37:473 (1,2) - Keep

[Normal]

1. 00:08:155 (2) - make this a 1/1 slider? Fixed
2. 00:39:178 (3,4) - blanket better? Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:01:337 (1) - remove nc? Keep to follow vocal
2. 02:52:644 (4) - remove the finish, sounds weird.Keep, there's finish in music

[Insane]

• 
  
  SPOILER

  
  http://puu.sh/7EGjN.osr

1. ar8 doesn't fit sv3.0, when I play I find ar9 more fits the map.
2. 00:21:110 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 你的是逐渐变小，不过我建议是间距逐渐变大，一开始就大跳我打了几次都滑条拉断尾了=A= Fixed, 换了排列
3. 02:40:542 (1,1,1) - not necessary to nc spam here Fixed

Good luck.
I feel pretty nice when playing the map, and also my mod is based on my feeling after playing.
Silly misses in my play because when I play the map, I just woke up.
I think it's enough. Lazy to write more.