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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, August 11, 2017 at 8:47:09 AM

Artist: Nicky Tirta - Vanessa Angel
Title: Indah Cintaku
Tags: bahasa indonesia Jerry indo Nagaswara Alam Urbach Neppu
BPM: 94
Filesize: 7202kb
Play Time: 03:53
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Download: Nicky Tirta - Vanessa Angel - Indah Cintaku
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Sedang = Normal
Susah = Hard
Going for ranked now!
Redownload for better background and storyboard.

Old style mapping. If you don't like it, you can always play another map! The map is from 4 years ago. xD
Special thanks to taiko_maniac1811 and Jerry(Neppu) for editing the sb sprites.

Ishi's http://puu.sh/ipkSz/8d3ab2f4b7.rar
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1st post. muahahaha :3
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Indo song /w/
nazi mod D:
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13:46 HeatKai: ehueheuhuehuehue
13:46 Xinely: buehehehehehe
13:47 HeatKai: play my map!
13:47 *HeatKai is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/337620 Nicky Tirta feat. Vanessa Angel - Indah Cintaku]
13:47 Xinely: dling ><
13:56 Xinely: done
13:56 Xinely: which diff?
13:56 Xinely: inb4 susah xD
13:56 HeatKai: yes :p
13:57 HeatKai: Only Susah and oni done :3
13:59 Xinely: can't taiko sorry xD
14:00 Xinely: rhythm is nice xD
14:01 HeatKai: xD
14:01 Xinely: i will give little suggestion, mostly nazi/personal taste now? is it fine? :3
14:02 HeatKai: sure
14:02 Xinely: 00:17:113 (3) - imo ctrl+g it, jump on (3) seems forced ><
14:03 Xinely: 00:37:539 (5) - NC it for anti jump?
14:04 Xinely: 01:09:773 (3,4,5,6) - btw jump's shape like this, seems repetitive. make it kinda boring, try to change the shape? :3
14:04 Xinely: 01:27:645 (1) - how about make it a little jump? around 1,5x spacing?
14:05 Xinely: for diff, just it :3
14:07 HeatKai: don't want to make a sudden jump on that time, other are fixed! :3
14:08 Xinely: oh i have 1 suggestion from SB
14:08 Xinely: when kiai time, the couple is appear is it? >< 01:12:326 - 
14:09 HeatKai: yes
14:10 Xinely: i think you can make the stars flickering for more vigorous to see ><
14:10 Xinely: just use fade in fade out :3
14:11 Xinely: if you follow it, make it too for 02:28:922 - and 03:22:539 -  ~
14:14 Xinely: is it Hard? i can help you to make it if you want ><
14:15 HeatKai: I'll make it later XD I thought of that when I started to make the sb but i don't have time to fix it xD I'll do it later!
14:15 HeatKai: sb takes too many time ;w;
14:15 Xinely: www
14:16 Xinely: i can do it if you want xD
14:16 HeatKai: ohh really then do it! make sure you didn't mess it up >:P
14:17 Xinely: lol okay xD


sent flickering code in forum pm ~

i'm not really think nazi mod like this should to get kd?;-;

Anyway good luck Heat ~ and star for Indo song :3
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Muzu diff as requested done~

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wahh lagu indo xD /me runs
goodluck guys :3
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hehe thank you! mod the taiko >:DDD
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i am new taiko modder so my mod so poor ;w;
Oni looks like Muzukashii. lol easy |3 /me hides and run


Oni
00:55:092 (193,194,195,196) - hhh not good seems look akward rhythm. maybe try this? (Why not in "Memandang"?)
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01:00:039 (212) - delete this note
01:12:645 (257) - ^ it's too much
01:26:847 (302) - kat here 01:27:007 (303) - and delete kat here because this is perfect imo <3333 no no no no no seems fine
01:27:645 (306) - kat? i like ddk <3333
01:40:092 (350) - huh delete kat what fits here
01:42:645 (360) - ^
01:44:081 - add circle (don thats mean ddd)
01:55:730 (405,406,407) - dons pattern?
02:12:645 (469,470,471,472) - dkdk?
02:45:198 (590,591,592) - dkd pls
02:45:837 (593,594,595) - ^
02:47:751 (600,601,602,603,604,605) - ^
02:50:305 (610,611,612,613,614,615) - ^
02:51:581 (616,617,618) - add kats here? o/ (ok this is my oppinion. if you like just change this.)
02:54:932 (635) - delete this note
02:55:092 (636,637,638,639,640) - dkdkd?
02:57:007 (646) - add k
03:33:709 (770,771) - kd? like before patterns.
03:44:241 (812) - should be kat here


Jerry's Muzukashii
00:06:581 (13,14) - dk?
00:17:432 (36,37,38,39) - ddkd is so boring... maybe try another pattern? like dkdk?
00:49:347 (102) - kat?
00:54:773 - add circle? you should make a 5 patterns o/
01:15:837 - ^
01:37:539 - ^ follows "sudahkah kau"
01:54:454 (59) - maybe delete this circle
01:57:326 (65,66,67,68) - dkdd pls
02:22:858 (38,39,40,1) - ^
02:52:219 (19,20,21) - kkd follow guitar
02:59:560 (1) - ends at 03:00:517 ? (just my oppinion.)
03:16:475 (39,40,41,42) - dkdd pls
03:31:794 (25,26,27,28) - ^
03:47:113 (18) - looks akward ._.


Susah
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oh damn my puush

k - feel akward to rhythms and the spinner so easy so add od+1?

00:15:837 (1,2) - Not a jump? and 00:17:113 (3,4) - jump? maybe it's look like a antijump so reverse collection 00:16:475 (2) - this?
00:18:390 (5) - stack fail lol
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00:25:092 - add circle here? 00:24:454 (6) - or add reverse arrow in this slider? maybe flow bit crowded o/
00:27:007 (1) - new combo here doesn't fit anything
00:30:837 (1) - new combo is not in stanza
00:49:028 (2,3) - maybe flow bit crowded o/
01:02:113 (1) - i think you need this pattern for not akward
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01:03:709 (4) - seems you need to blanket
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02:16:156 (1,2) - this two imo feel akward. so move the red point 2 grids to left. (Grid level: 4)
02:41:368 (1,2,3) - stream not good o/
hmmm good antijumps ;3


Sederhana
00:12:007 (3) - maybe curve/angle it?
00:55:411 (2) - looks different like (1)?
01:05:943 (3) - stack?
01:16:794 (3) - ugly o/
01:23:496 (2) - i should know what you mean/fits here?
02:12:964 (3) - overlap with (1) i mean....
02:29:879 (2) - move 1 grid to left (Grid level: 4)
02:31:475 (1) - ^ but to right
03:35:624 (2) - stack mostly fail
okay \:D/ that

indonesian song ;w; SPEEDRANK SPEEDRANK SPEEDRANK lolololol
sorry my english is poor ;w; and sorry if my mod is not helpfull ;w;
Okay good luck~ :3
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Indonesian Song?
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yes indonesian song :3
I'll update it.... next month LOL
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LETS do this shiet again! REVIVED. d-post
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Hmm, I should start working this soon after I finished sitting on exam. Will be working on it next month ;)
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General
  • Try finding a softer clap-hitsound? It feels like the current one is a bit too loud. It sounds really TOO looud during non-kiai parts, imo. :(
  • Put translation for the dff names to the creator's word. :)
  • Please, disable the Widescreen support! It conflicts with your 4:3 storyboard!
  • You can resize "SB/2.jpg" to 640x480 resolution. If you use 640x480 file it will reduce SB load (there will be no need to scale it) and it is the recommended resolution.
  • Hey, your colours are so bright. They don't really work with your BG and seem unfitting, imo. What's more, they are similar, so it may be boring to look at them for 4 minutes. :(
    How about these colours? :)
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    Code:
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 168,189,186
    Combo2 : 192,208,211
    Combo3 : 211,208,171
    Combo4 : 157,177,198


Sederhana
  • 00:03:390 (4,1,2) - try emphasizing the vocals here? 00:04:028 - there's the same sound as on 00:05:305 - so, it might be a good idea to use the same rhythm for them. It may be a bit hard to understand, but my example should make it clear.
  • 00:11:049 (1) - the way how (1) appears right after clicking 00:09:773 (1) - is confusing for beginners. Since this diff is the easiest I strongly recommend you to make this pattern a bit less confusing. How? Well, this may fit pretty good here.
  • 00:29:879 (4,5) - sounds a bit off because of the beat at 00:30:198 - being ignored, there're also some vocals, so having some empty space here is confusing, imo. Select 00:29:879 (4,5) - and press Ctrl+G. Listen to the result and fix the spacing if you like it! :)
  • 00:31:156 - please, place a circle here and move spinner to 00:31:475 - so, the downbeat is not ignored.
    Note: here's an example of the pattern. See this picture!
  • 00:43:602 (5,1) - first of all, there's a little spacing mistake. Secondly, beginners (since this diff is the easiest, it should be playable for beginners, remembber!) may mistakenly hit (1)'s tail. Please, try to move (1)'s tail away and make the pattern intuitively understandable!
  • 00:59:241 - I see that you don't want to use too many 1/2 beats, but a circle here is really necessary to emphasize the vocals!
  • 01:09:773 (1,1) - having two new combos in a row is not a good idea, imo. Try to remove NC from 01:11:049 (1) - to make comboing a bit more consistent and to make the beginning of kiai a bit more epic. :)
  • 01:23:177 (1,2) - could you, please, fix the blanket here? It will make your map a bit neater and we both know that players like neat patterns! Appearance is also important for the map. :)
  • 01:27:007 (3) - I don't think that the clap on it's repeat is necessary. Consider removing it?
  • 01:47:751 (1) - pretty much the same happend to 00:31:156, so please start the spinner at 01:48:071 - and place a circle at 01:47:751, so you;ll keep your rhythm consistent and follow vocals and music at the same time!
  • 01:50:624 (1,2) - the transition between these two seems a bit unnatural and feels forced. Maybe it's just me, but for such a relaxing song I expected you to use really soft flow. I'd try to make your flow a bit softer, but it is totally up to you. Anyway, just take a look at the example and see for yourself
  • 02:18:709 (1,2) - definetly will confuse befinners. A specially those, who have disabled "snaking sliders" feature. Try to avoid this stack and make the diff a bit more readable for beginners, please!
  • 02:20:624 (1) - previously you were focused on following the vocals, so it is really weird to hear 02:20:943 - voice here ignored. Why don't you try to change the slider? Example
    Note: 02:20:943 - new combo should be placed on 02:20:943, so it will help you to keep consistency in comboing (I've seen a few similar patterns in the diff, so..) and to follow vocals :)
  • 02:26:368 (1,1) - 03:19:985 (1,1) - seems like you've copypasted the pattern from 01:09:773 (1,1) - I'm totally okay with copypasta, but two NCs confuse me here.
  • 02:33:390 - the clap here is ignored. It feels off your normal patterns and it doesn't sound good with vocals, imo. Try to change your rhythm here in order to follow the song better, please! :(
  • 02:56:049 - ignored/ 02:54:773 (2) - mapped / 02:57:326 (2) - mapped / 02:58:602 - ignored. Looks like some kind iof inconsistency. So, I'd remove the circles and follow only "nanana" in the cocals. It will give you more consistent and reasonable rhythm!
  • 03:08:815 (2,1) - try to turn these sliders into blanket-sliders? It may create a smoother flow don't you think so? :)
  • 03:13:283 (2) - try to replace the slider with just one circle at 03:13:602 - it will help you to emphasiz stronger beat. I feel like the beats at the red ticks shouldn't be mapped here because they sound too quite.
  • 03:49:028 (1,1) - don't forget that the diff is playable in ALL modes. This sudden 1/4 pattern will bug o!m players, so I recommend you to remove 03:49:028(1) and place the spinner there.
    Note: alternatively, you can start spinner 03:49:666 - here to emphasize the piano sound. either way is fine, imo.

    The diff is quite alright. Though some of your patterns are too hard, you did really great job!


Susah
  • 00:14:241 (1,2) - try to swap new combo there. Since the sound changes at 00:14:560 - having NC started there sounds like a good idea to me.
  • 00:24:932 - don't you feel like such a cute voice shouldn't be ignored? Try to map "ku" in vocals somehow. I got this but tail of (7) should be muted, if you decide to take this pattern! :)
  • 00:32:592 - I think you should place a circle here in order to ap the 1/4 beat. At the beginning you've used a few 1/4 patterns but now they're all gone which makes your rhythm appear inconsistent :(
    Note: 00:35:783 - 00:36:102 - 00:37:379 - yup, the same. Please, do not ignore them! The song is relaxing, but having a few 1/4 patterns will lkeep players entertained. There're a few more missed beats, but I think you'll be able to find them yourself if you agree with me!
  • 01:25:411 (2) - whoops, check it with 25% playback rate. There's no any 1/4 beats, therefore the part is overmapped. Consider replacing it with two circles or one 1/2 slider, please!
  • 02:56:368 (1,1) - not a fan of such sliders because it is rather hard to read/guess how many repeats are there. So, I would try to replace them with 1/4 circles as you did it previously.
  • 03:49:028 (1,1) - if you've changed this pattern in the Normal diff, do the samme here, please! Consistency is important!

    The diff is pretty nice, great job with the flow!

The mapset is pretty cool, thoug I feel like it needs a few more mods to become perfect!

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Best of luck!
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