1. BD's Insane (4.33 stars, 678 notes)
2. Easy (1.63 stars, 168 notes)
3. Hard (2.85 stars, 365 notes)
4. Normal (1.76 stars, 229 notes)

sheela901 wrote:

I think the offset is 1.

P o M u T a wrote:

sheela901 wrote:

I think the offset is 1.

0→1.. this is sense.
sorry, no changed. thanks

Winek wrote:

Hi, from modding queue

[General]
Consider extending the kiai time to 02:07:555

[Easy]
00:46:222 (1,2,3) - Place them respectively 164|64 ; 93|134 ; 22|64 . It will look prettier like that
00:58:666 (5) - The whistle at the end doesn't fit well. fixed
02:31:111 (4) - Add a finish at the head. to fits more the rythm you created
02:32:888 (1) - ^
02:34:666 (3) - ^

[Normal]
See nothing, sorry

[Hard]
00:03:777 (2) - Just suggestion to vary - Transofrm this into 3 circles.
00:42:666 (1,2,3) - You should stack properly

I'm done modding. Hope i helped you anyhow.
other no changed sorry

Feith wrote:

hi hi...
I'm from modding queue

Your map looks good but I've seen the mistakes. Objects out of grid layout from easy and medium difficulty. When the hit object out from the grid, Will have an impact on normal screen monitor (based on my own computer) eh...

And also in my opinion, change the dark green color combo to another color because when the screen brightness dimmed, dark green object will blend in with the background, make the object can not be seen clearly . i chnaged yellow color :3

that's all from me

P o M u T a wrote:

Feith wrote:

hi hi...
I'm from modding queue

Your map looks good but I've seen the mistakes. Objects out of grid layout from easy and medium difficulty. When the hit object out from the grid, Will have an impact on normal screen monitor (based on my own computer) eh...

And also in my opinion, change the dark green color combo to another color because when the screen brightness dimmed, dark green object will blend in with the background, make the object can not be seen clearly . i chnaged yellow color :3

that's all from me

thanks you!

1. Combo Colour number 3 is different on your hard diff. Consider keeping them consistent, it's a rule. Though, I'd use different colours. Current ones are kinda toxic and they don't really fit with the BG. try to make your colours a bit more relaxing and comfrtable for players' eye!
   
   Try us!

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 134,202,139
   Combo2 : 224,221,101
   Combo3 : 216,197,250

1. 00:20:888 (4,2) - I'd try to add NCs here and to remove NC from 00:21:333 (1) - to make your comboing more fitting with the song and a bit more logical. 00:21:333 (1) - this beat sounds less iportant, then the previous circle, so I wouldn't emphasize it with a new combo. EVEN if it's placed on a downbeat.
2. 00:26:666 - I think that you should use normal-hitnormal sound here. take a loom here, to make things clear It will fit both with the vocals and with the music.
3. 00:35:555 (1,2) - the transition between these two objects doesn't flow nice. It's just my opinion, so you're free to reject it completely, but I believe that every object should be intuitevely catchable for beginners. try to rotate them and see if you like it
   Note: if you do this, make sure you'll fix the DS and flow for the following patterns
4. 00:39:111 (1,3) - well, these two looks kinda random to me. I'd recommend you to make them parallel or something like that, so you will make it look prettier
5. 00:48:888 (6) - well, it's about the shape again! Yes, I'm picky about this kind of things so, it looks like blanket slider or something and it may confuse players. I'd try to make a more suitable shape! Here's an example of a non-blanket slider which will fit with your flow. example
   Note: 01:36:888 (2) - that'd be cool to change the shape of this slider, as well (for the same reason, ofc)
6. 01:02:666 (3) - try single-object-pattern here! I really want you to put a new combo here to emphasize music changes, it will help beginners to understand when and why do we use NCs
7. 02:13:333 (5) - 02:20:444 (3) - come ooon, place NCs on these objects! They will fit, we can't just let htese changes go without pointing them out, these beats are great and the need to be emphasized.
   
   Enjoyable and neat diff. Like it!

1. You use so many 1/2 and 3/4 patterns here. How about using OD3 to make this diff more playable? I'd also reduce the amount of 1/2 patterns a bit to make diff spread a bit more balanced.
2. 00:20:888 (4,1,2) - pretty much the same thing, as on the Easy diff. Try to remove NC from (1) and place NCs on (4) and (2)
   Note: 00:34:222 (4) - same here, NC for sound changes. It will fit here + it will actually look cool! Don't be afraid of breaking the pattern if you follow music!
3. 00:26:666 - these are some kind of vocals and I'd recommend you to emphasize them somehow. It's similar with the suggestion for the Easy diff.
4. 00:48:222 (5) - removve this one? You didn't use such long 1/2 patterns earlier + it doesn't really needed here and I'm sure that players will enjoy playing that diff more, without this circle!
5. 01:02:666 (4) - another "add NC suggestion", this time you should do it to emphasize music changes and end of the part! Try it, it'll look cool!
6. 01:16:444 (4) - 01:23:555 (4) - put a new combo here, just like you did it with 01:09:333 (1,2,3) - this combo. Rhythm.sound changes should be pointed out, so players will be able to understand your map better!
   Note: 01:51:999 (3) - 02:13:333 (4) - pretty much the same here. You've got a plenty of objects, so it'll be okay to use more NCs.
7. 02:00:888 (1,4) - double-repeats sliders are hard to read and in this kind of diffs they may kinda "finish" the player. The diff itself is a bit too hard for a normal, but this patterns make it way too hard! try to avoid them and replace them with something easier, please!
   Note: 02:29:333 (1,2) - the same!
8. 02:19:999 (3) - end of the pattern and the beginning of another pattern are mapped by the same slider. It soesn't sound alright to me, so I'd recommend you to replace it with something like circle and an 1/1 slider
   
   The song is relaxing, and I expected the diff to be relaxing as well. Try to reduce amount of the 1/2 patterns (a pecially for the final part)!

1. Since it's a Hard diff I was expecting you to place new combos more often, so you could emphasize more sound changes/interesting beats. It'd also make your map a bit brighter in players' eyes!
2. 00:26:666 (5) - same as for the two previous diffs, try to emphasize these interesting screams with some hitsounds. Whistles/hitnormals will fit here, try'em!
3. 01:12:222 - if you really want to ignore beats like this one, set slider tick rate to 2. Gor this diff, it will be totally okay to use it!
   
   Except for issues with the comboing, that's a very good diff. Adorable 1/4 patterns! Love it!

There're some more things to improve, but your mapset is good, in general.

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, just a random mod.

[General]

1. Combo Colour number 3 is different on your hard diff. Consider keeping them consistent, it's a rule. Though, I'd use different colours. Current ones are kinda toxic and they don't really fit with the BG. try to make your colours a bit more relaxing and comfrtable for players' eye!
   
   Try us!

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 134,202,139
   Combo2 : 224,221,101
   Combo3 : 216,197,250

alright. all diff changed~.
[Easy]

1. 00:20:888 (4,2) - I'd try to add NCs here and to remove NC from 00:21:333 (1) - to make your comboing more fitting with the song and a bit more logical. 00:21:333 (1) - this beat sounds less iportant, then the previous circle, so I wouldn't emphasize it with a new combo. EVEN if it's placed on a downbeat. ok
2. 00:26:666 - I think that you should use normal-hitnormal sound here. take a loom here, to make things clear It will fit both with the vocals and with the music. ok
3. 00:35:555 (1,2) - the transition between these two objects doesn't flow nice. It's just my opinion, so you're free to reject it completely, but I believe that every object should be intuitevely catchable for beginners. try to rotate them and see if you like it
   Note: if you do this, make sure you'll fix the DS and flow for the following patterns bit, my original, so, i hope fixed flow ;w;
4. 00:39:111 (1,3) - well, these two looks kinda random to me. I'd recommend you to make them parallel or something like that, so you will make it look prettier ok
5. 00:48:888 (6) - well, it's about the shape again! Yes, I'm picky about this kind of things so, it looks like blanket slider or something and it may confuse players. I'd try to make a more suitable shape! Here's an example of a non-blanket slider which will fit with your flow. example agree
   Note: 01:36:888 (2) - that'd be cool to change the shape of this slider, as well (for the same reason, ofc) ^
6. 01:02:666 (3) - try single-object-pattern here! I really want you to put a new combo here to emphasize music changes, it will help beginners to understand when and why do we use NCs talked irc and fixed.
7. 02:13:333 (5) - 02:20:444 (3) - come ooon, place NCs on these objects! They will fit, we can't just let htese changes go without pointing them out, these beats are great and the need to be emphasized. yep
   
   Enjoyable and neat diff. Like it!

[Normal]

1. You use so many 1/2 and 3/4 patterns here. How about using OD3 to make this diff more playable? I'd also reduce the amount of 1/2 patterns a bit to make diff spread a bit more balanced. OD-1 all diff. 1,3,5 spread OD.
2. 00:20:888 (4,1,2) - pretty much the same thing, as on the Easy diff. Try to remove NC from (1) and place NCs on (4) and (2) ok
   Note: 00:34:222 (4) - same here, NC for sound changes. It will fit here + it will actually look cool! Don't be afraid of breaking the pattern if you follow music! i see.
   
3. 00:26:666 - these are some kind of vocals and I'd recommend you to emphasize them somehow. It's similar with the suggestion for the Easy diff. maybe fixed.
4. 00:48:222 (5) - removve this one? You didn't use such long 1/2 patterns earlier + it doesn't really needed here and I'm sure that players will enjoy playing that diff more, without this circle! oh.. okay ;w;
5. 01:02:666 (4) - another "add NC suggestion", this time you should do it to emphasize music changes and end of the part! Try it, it'll look cool! okay!
6. 01:16:444 (4) - 01:23:555 (4) - put a new combo here, just like you did it with 01:09:333 (1,2,3) - this combo. Rhythm.sound changes should be pointed out, so players will be able to understand your map better! yeah
   Note: 01:51:999 (3) - 02:13:333 (4) - pretty much the same here. You've got a plenty of objects, so it'll be okay to use more NCs. fixed
7. 02:00:888 (1,4) - double-repeats sliders are hard to read and in this kind of diffs they may kinda "finish" the player. The diff itself is a bit too hard for a normal, but this patterns make it way too hard! try to avoid them and replace them with something easier, please! fixed
   
   Note: 02:29:333 (1,2) - the same! done
8. 02:19:999 (3) - end of the pattern and the beginning of another pattern are mapped by the same slider. It soesn't sound alright to me, so I'd recommend you to replace it with something like circle and an 1/1 slider done.
   
   The song is relaxing, and I expected the diff to be relaxing as well. Try to reduce amount of the 1/2 patterns (a pecially for the final part)!

i tried DT this diff. i can took acc 100% easily. i think fine now!
[Hard]

1. Since it's a Hard diff I was expecting you to place new combos more often, so you could emphasize more sound changes/interesting beats. It'd also make your map a bit brighter in players' eyes! i haven't mapping skill ;w;
   
2. 00:26:666 (5) - same as for the two previous diffs, try to emphasize these interesting screams with some hitsounds. Whistles/hitnormals will fit here, try'em! whistle this part only. if people will say this whistle weird, i delete this. also fixed now.
3. 01:12:222 - if you really want to ignore beats like this one, set slider tick rate to 2. Gor this diff, it will be totally okay to use it! oh, this is awesome suggest. very fitting imo.
   
   Except for issues with the comboing, that's a very good diff. Adorable 1/4 patterns! Love it!

There're some more things to improve, but your mapset is good, in general.

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Best of luck!