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Nymph
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年6月12日 at 14:23:58

Artist: nao
Title: scarlet leap
Source: CUSTOM MAID 3D
Tags: Cosmic Cube Tsukuyomi baldrace [Minakami Yuki] No_Gu yf_bmp
BPM: 112
Filesize: 4883kb
Play Time: 02:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Gu's Hard (2.98 stars, 349 notes)
  2. Insane (-1 stars, 455 notes)
  3. yf's Easy (1.56 stars, 141 notes)
  4. Yomi's Normal (1.59 stars, 165 notes)
  5. Yuki's Insane (3.43 stars, 436 notes)
Download: nao - scarlet leap
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custom maid 3d(
3D妹抖
感谢众变态的GD
Koiyuki
From my queue of BGreq~

妮妮的,话那就传度盘,不传puush了
我也不清楚这歌用啥BG好所以就选了五张妹抖的图
分辨率没处理过
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1Ea87X
Topic Starter
Nymph
>_<多謝~!
Kyouren
Can i make Normal diff?
Topic Starter
Nymph
sorry I have no idea when I am gonna to finish this, so I can't accept guest diff for now, hope you understand.
Kinomi
Koiyuki
kamisamaaa
复读群里说的M4M额
[insane]
00:16:207 (1) - 这个转盘音量也是逐渐增强的 建议和后面那个一样差点绿线
00:32:614 (2) - 这个起头的音很轻 但是距离隔得很远 感觉不合适 并且这个滑条尾音很重 击打感不好 所以建议换成两个note
00:38:345这段直接break不好吧。。。虽然你追的是鼓点 但是这里毕竟是刚开始唱歌 感觉这首歌正式开始的地方你直接不map了。。。这里鼓点很单一 可以跟歌声 做一段感觉很舒缓的节奏额
01:25:053 这里的三个白线做个anti-jump? 感觉比空着合适额
01:27:248 (3) - 这个音感觉很高 很尖锐 感觉用一个放这么下面的滑条有点违和=L=
01:43:955 (6) - 感觉这个是overmap 这里基本没音 感觉很违和 建议delete 或者像别的地方一样 叠在后面滑条头上 违和感不会这么明显额
02:15:174 (8) - 虽然这里有鼓点 但是我感觉删掉这个的话 能梗突出后面那些短滑条的感觉 要不然在打一个note+一个滑条这种组合的时候没注意就变成短滑条了
[yuki insane]
00:01:207 (1,2) - 感觉这么叠和歌曲完全没关系
00:12:724 (4,5,6,7) - 这啥意思 一个分开 一个重叠?
00:34:077 (2,3) - 这两个就叠起来吧 因为三个的话你错开一点 玩的时候岔开的大一些能看到你三个一排 感觉还好 但是两个感觉就是没叠好的感觉 两个缩圈一边重叠一边分开难看的要死 自己test看看
00:58:223 (3,4,5,6) - 这些两个两个都是一样的道理 自己test吧 不多说了
另外感觉break完全是偷懒,,,
还有关于那个五连拆成2个2连 我觉得你可以前奏这么拆 然后kiai部分就正常的五连 然后后面再这么拆是不是比整首歌都这么拆要好一点
[hard]
等你做完了再叫我 我来补这个~
[yomi normal]
00:10:582 (2) - 这个因为中间那个音而且和头上那个音是一组 所以这个滑条西安的很违和 不顾我不知道怎么改=L=
00:11:921 (4) - 稍微往左边来一点 不在一条直线上额 有微妙的偏差 大概是X坐标减3
00:33:589 (3) - 这个位置感觉不好看 这样会不会好一点 点这里 note和后面滑条的开始也在一条线上的感觉
01:05:053 (1) - 感觉没有ctrl+G 舒服 不过不好改就是了=L= 这样其实也行
02:32:857 (7) - 这个不如叠到02:29:931 (3) - 这个上面 感觉更好

图都很屌 没啥太多可以说的=L=
妮妮大人我爱你~ :)
最后祝你身体健康
Topic Starter
Nymph

kamisamaaa wrote:

复读群里说的M4M额
[insane]
00:16:207 (1) - 这个转盘音量也是逐渐增强的 建议和后面那个一样差点绿线 这个我个人觉得很难听得到。。就没管了
00:32:614 (2) - 这个起头的音很轻 但是距离隔得很远 感觉不合适 并且这个滑条尾音很重 击打感不好 所以建议换成两个note 这里我个人理解还是不那么重 感觉还是先保留
00:38:345这段直接break不好吧。。。虽然你追的是鼓点 但是这里毕竟是刚开始唱歌 感觉这首歌正式开始的地方你直接不map了。。。这里鼓点很单一 可以跟歌声 做一段感觉很舒缓的节奏额 我个人觉得这里还好 因为别的地方更不适合下break 就
01:25:053 这里的三个白线做个anti-jump? 感觉比空着合适额 鼓音刚结束啊 不怎么想加note 而且加了note的话 hitsound又成问题 有hitsound的话 这里没鼓 没hitsound的话 这里又有vocal 很尴尬 干脆就不做
01:27:248 (3) - 这个音感觉很高 很尖锐 感觉用一个放这么下面的滑条有点违和=L= 这里感觉跟vocal单独做一个slider 而且跟之前反向就可以了 没太注意别的
01:43:955 (6) - 感觉这个是overmap 这里基本没音 感觉很违和 建议delete 或者像别的地方一样 叠在后面滑条头上 违和感不会这么明显额这个后改的 效果不好那就删了
02:15:174 (8) - 虽然这里有鼓点 但是我感觉删掉这个的话 能梗突出后面那些短滑条的感觉 要不然在打一个note+一个滑条这种组合的时候没注意就变成短滑条了 这里鼓点太密集了 空一个拍子实在是无法忍受啊
thanks~
Koiyuki
我的改动比较微小就等下次一起改吧
yf_bmp
看到首页有req,主动来mod

[Insane]

排列:
00:27:004 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这一串换成是0.7x? 后面00:34:809 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 是0.7x
00:27:004 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 00:34:809 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 这两个串方向一致 有没有必要调整一下

音效:
00:01:207 - 00:15:939 - 这一段是很安静的 但是为什么不放一些whistle在重音上(个人觉得尤其是有些长白线处,加了后更有点缀效果)

00:51:638 (1,2) - 头尾用shift+R用drum音
01:57:735 (5,6) - ^

01:00:906 (8) - 尾clap
01:30:296 (9) - clap 根据前面
01:33:466 (5,11) - ^
01:38:101 (9) - ^
01:45:905 (9) - ^
01:49:076 (5,11) - ^
01:53:589 (10,11) - ^, 如果觉得吵10不要加
02:20:906 (11) - ^尾
02:24:198 (6) - ^
02:24:809 (10) - ^尾
02:28:833 (7) - ^
02:32:003 (6,12) - ^

01:59:443 (3) - 尾clap

02:15:296 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这一段可以跟前面音效不一样一点,因为bgm

02:17:248 - 02:32:857 - 旋律回到了前奏 而且这一段挺多貌似是跟吉他的 所以放点whistle突出主旋律?


[Yuki]
00:06:564 - 有音
00:06:698 (7) - del
00:52:857 (5) - 去掉clap
00:57:735 (2,3) - 距离和之前的1/4间隔一样 调开一点
01:17:248 (2) - 调成1/2 根据bgm
01:24:565 (3) - 去掉finish
01:39:077 (4,5) - 缩短 不会影响到后面重复的梗
01:49:809 (11,1) - 2.0x
01:57:370 (4,5) - 缩短 或者01:57:248 (3,4) - 弄成滑条
01:59:443 (2) - normalclap->softclap,或者直接normal 不要clap
02:22:126 - 有音
02:32:735 (8) - finish->clap,后面的音不做成note?

[Gu]
00:07:769 (2) - 貌似没音 个人感觉会去掉
00:53:833 (2) - 越界
00:51:638 (1,2) - 换成drum?
01:07:614 (3,4) - 这个距离对于hard来说确实远了些
02:16:516 (10,11,12,13) - 这样对于hard的来说比较难,可以试试把02:16:516 (10,11) - 换为滑条

[Yomi]
有些地方包围的滑条幅度有些大,比如01:04:565 (6,1) - .应该像这样子的01:06:516 (2,3) - 才是,希望修复小细节

00:01:207 (1,3) - 分开些
00:04:421 (4) - 尾去掉finish 不符bgm
00:35:296 (5) - 换个位置放
01:18:223 (3,4,5,6,7) - 貌似不太正
01:18:711 (4) - nc
01:49:443 (4) - clap
01:49:931 (4) - finish
02:30:906 (5) - NC

应该都是细节上的
妮妮窝爱妮
Selisi
支持下 最近好忙 过段时间来mod :)
[yf's Easy]
  1. 没用的绿线略多
  2. 00:39:687 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这一大串间隔时间超长的单点 真的可以直接breaktime 00:53:345 - 这个时间点之前的都可以不要
  3. 00:56:272 - 这个有鼓点的 是要map上的
  4. 01:07:004 (1,1) - 按鼓点做要好很多 歌词不适合这个难度
  5. 01:26:516 (1,2) - 01:30:418 (1,2) - spacing是1.1X
  6. 00:27:004 (4) - 00:33:833 (3,4) - 01:33:345 (4) - 01:48:955 (3) - 02:24:077 (2) - 02:31:882 (2) - 这种白蓝蓝白的鼓点用折返感觉怪怪的 出现一两个就算了 出现那么多 节奏感觉很乱 其实直接一个滑条感觉就足够了 就像这样
[Yomi's Normal]
  1. 00:01:207 (1,2,3) - 这三个太弯呢一点 不太美观
  2. 00:04:421 (4) - 尾巴上放finish略显吵 用水滴 或sc2的clap比较合适 00:15:671 (2) - 这个的开头也是
  3. 01:05:053 (1,3) - 统一弯度
[Gu's Hard]
  1. 00:07:635 (1,2,3,4) - 这个是不是overmap了 这里只有三个音
  2. 00:17:278 (3,4) - 这个没有必要加 spinner提前就可以了 加上反而感觉怪怪的
  3. 00:59:687 (3,4) - 01:49:077 (6) - 这里完全不符合鼓点 还是要做细一点的吧
  4. 01:10:296 (5) - 去掉circle 和这里保持一致 01:14:240 -
  5. 01:28:467 (1) - 滑条为什么在蓝线结束 然后后面多出一个circle 玩起来很奇怪 请与这个保持一致01:32:370 (1) -
  6. 01:33:711 - 这个蓝线音没有做出来 滑条应该在这个蓝线结束 后面从白线跟上
  7. 02:08:223 (3,4) - 02:23:589 (3,4) - 这个虽然响亮的鼓点都做出来了 却玩起来没有击打感 02:08:467 - 02:24:077 - 这个时间点是circle的话 击打感会很好(02:31:882 (4,5) - 这个就非常好)
  8. 02:16:516 (10,11,12,13) - 不要这样 请连打 这样反而比连打要难好多
[Yuki's Insane]
  1. 00:14:064 (1) - 照开头这个节奏应该这个滑条是一个短滑条加两个circle呀 长话条很突兀
  2. 00:52:614 (4) - 这个接连打好突然 是不是可以直接一个circle就足够了 后面的四连其实和滑条是标准的5连打分开来有些鬼畜
  3. 01:35:784 (8) - move to (448,148)
  4. 01:33:345 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个四个四个加大距离的不太美观 变速的话直接每个距离渐大的话会很美观而且有难度
  5. 01:48:955 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 好完美的难度 找不出问题 玩起来也很舒服
渣mod一枚 感觉又是快速rank的节奏呢..
yf_bmp
Easy done
tick音好多
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6Jg1Hw
(puush传不了
Oracle
Mark,回头来送mod :)
Topic Starter
Nymph
音效改了一些啊 其实我这个音效有点没梗 不怎么想多用whistle 待我三思
排列那2个没改 因为其实有点是刻意那么做的 虽然我也不知道为啥要那么做
Sure
this song <3
btw the song's title has not capital. It should be 'scarlet leap'
http://www.powerhouse-studio.jp/entranc ... index.html
Koiyuki
@小黄瓜:手动堆叠主要是改变方向而已,只改了一个,别的还是没动,另外break不做就是懒了wwwww

yf_bmp wrote:

[Yuki]
00:06:564 - 有音 nope
00:06:698 (7) - del nope
00:52:857 (5) - 去掉clap
00:57:735 (2,3) - 距离和之前的1/4间隔一样 调开一点
01:17:248 (2) - 调成1/2 根据bgm nope
01:24:565 (3) - 去掉finish
01:39:077 (4,5) - 缩短 不会影响到后面重复的梗
01:49:809 (11,1) - 2.0x
01:57:370 (4,5) - 缩短 或者01:57:248 (3,4) - 弄成滑条 nope
01:59:443 (2) - normalclap->softclap,或者直接normal 不要clap
02:22:126 - 有音 nope
02:32:735 (8) - finish->clap,后面的音不做成note? 做了
no comment=fixed
thanks~

SPOILER
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Version:Yuki's Insane
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Tags:Cosmic Cube
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194,298,114321,1,8,0:0:0:0:
346,179,114565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,188,114687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,193,114809,2,0,L|136:179,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,179,115297,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,265,115540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,245,115662,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,220,115784,6,0,P|43:149|143:77,1,192,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,101,116516,2,0,P|286:118|333:117,2,96
398,34,117248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
410,59,117370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
475,125,117492,2,0,L|458:175,1,48,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,322,117735,6,0,P|393:275|401:229,1,96,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,322,118101,2,0,P|358:333|311:325,1,96,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,289,118467,1,4,0:0:0:0:
194,296,118589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,303,118711,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,162,119199,6,0,L|71:218,1,48,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,111,119443,2,0,L|94:66,2,48,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,119809,12,4,121638,0:0:0:0:
85,133,137248,6,0,L|45:41,1,96,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,132,137735,1,8,0:0:0:0:
47,230,137979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
47,230,138101,2,0,P|63:292|135:331,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,221,138711,2,0,P|186:215|143:234,2,96,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,257,139443,5,0,0:0:0:0:
366,270,139565,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,282,139687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
265,306,139931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,327,140053,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,231,140296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,210,140418,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,26,140662,2,0,L|482:126,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,87,141150,5,2,0:0:0:0:
261,41,141394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,50,141516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,57,141638,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,53,141882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
25,28,142004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
143,143,142248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,168,142370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,192,142492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,216,142614,2,0,L|179:317,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,358,143101,5,2,0:0:0:0:
91,271,143345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,257,143467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
39,243,143589,2,0,L|12:148,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,216,144077,2,0,L|214:308,1,96
337,343,144565,2,0,L|388:334,1,48,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,255,144809,2,0,L|442:219,1,48
451,124,145053,6,0,L|366:73,1,96,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,124,145540,1,8,0:0:0:0:
275,52,145784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,52,145906,2,0,P|195:65|151:125,1,144,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,231,146516,2,0,P|241:191|247:144,2,96,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,180,147248,5,0,0:0:0:0:
102,173,147370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
73,167,147492,1,8,0:0:0:0:
13,66,147735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
19,94,147857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,260,148101,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,267,148223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,332,148467,2,0,L|209:314,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,267,148955,5,2,0:0:0:0:
39,350,149199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,322,149321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
19,294,149443,2,0,L|40:189,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,85,149931,2,0,L|133:180,1,96,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,308,150418,2,0,P|283:326|339:316,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,306,150784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
369,289,150906,6,0,L|387:238,1,48,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,224,151150,2,0,L|452:173,1,48,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,125,151394,2,0,L|326:142,1,48,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,54,151638,2,0,L|478:40,1,48
272,92,151882,5,2,0:0:0:0:
246,78,152004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,72,152126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,75,152248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,87,152370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
141,107,152492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
127,132,152614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,159,152735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Nymph

ykcarrot wrote:

this song <3
btw the song's title has not capital. It should be 'scarlet leap'
http://www.powerhouse-studio.jp/entranc ... index.html
I see~ thank you :D


@Yuki:你贴的不是你的难度啊
Kinomi
kamisamaaa

kamisamaaa wrote:

[yomi normal]
00:10:582 (2) - 这个因为中间那个音而且和头上那个音是一组 所以这个滑条西安的很违和 不顾我不知道怎么改=L= 0.0滑条盖一个音不是很正常的事情
00:11:921 (4) - 稍微往左边来一点 不在一条直线上额 有微妙的偏差 大概是X坐标减3
00:33:589 (3) - 这个位置感觉不好看 这样会不会好一点 点这里 note和后面滑条的开始也在一条线上的感觉
01:05:053 (1) - 感觉没有ctrl+G 舒服 不过不好改就是了=L= 这样其实也行 0.0
02:32:857 (7) - 这个不如叠到02:29:931 (3) - 这个上面 感觉更好 都一样啊

yf_bmp

yf_bmp wrote:

[Yomi]
有些地方包围的滑条幅度有些大,比如01:04:565 (6,1) - .应该像这样子的01:06:516 (2,3) - 才是,希望修复小细节

00:01:207 (1,3) - 分开些 这个没关系,不是同时出现
00:04:421 (4) - 尾去掉finish 不符bgm 换了
00:35:296 (5) - 换个位置放
01:18:223 (3,4,5,6,7) - 貌似不太正 0.0
01:18:711 (4) - nc 0.0 两条大白线一放
01:49:443 (4) - clap
01:49:931 (4) - finish
02:30:906 (5) - NC 0.0

Sweet Vanilla

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

[Yomi's Normal]
  1. 00:01:207 (1,2,3) - 这三个太弯呢一点 不太美观 0.0
  2. 00:04:421 (4) - 尾巴上放finish略显吵 用水滴 或sc2的clap比较合适 00:15:671 (2) - 这个的开头也是 改了
  3. 01:05:053 (1,3) - 统一弯度

http://puu.sh/6yfjk.osu
Evil_Twilight
From QQ Fudu Group.
香草妮妮

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:207 (1) - ~ 00:15:671 (4) - 這段不加點音效嗎,我覺得在白線上放一些whistle挺不錯的
  2. 00:05:492 (1) - 我的話會把slider拉的平滑些,00:04:957 (4) - 這裡這麼平可是(1)這麼彎看起來有點詭異
  3. 00:18:215 (1) - 在加個clap? 這裡的啪聲蠻大的,加了會更符合音樂些
  4. 00:27:125 (2) - 這裡也有跟(5)一樣的鼓聲,加上clap吧
  5. 00:34:930 (6) - 這是不是歪了阿,時間軸上是00:34:931可是note在00:34:930,後面的(7)也是(其實還有不少地方是這樣,窩不知道這樣有沒有關係阿)
  6. 00:51:638 (1) - drum的clap放在這很適合,可以考慮一下
  7. 00:52:248 (2) - ^這上面一樣,不過這邊是頭尾都加
  8. 01:02:614 (6) - 試試改成1/1的slider跟著人聲唄,剛好01:03:101 (1) - 的頭也沒什麼聲音
  9. 01:57:735 (5) - 可以放個NC在這去強調這兩拍的聲音
  10. 02:04:321 (8) - 往左移一點? 似乎沒排成橢圓
  11. 02:16:272 (5) - 個人習慣在這裡放NC,對我來說乾淨整齊些

[Yuki's Insane]
  1. 00:06:296 (5,6,7,8,9) - 其實窩覺得這邊沒很好,感覺沒跟到什麼東西聽起來也怪怪的
  2. 01:18:223 (4,5) - 對我來說這裡不適合用重疊,(5)的音比(4)高了點,可以試著把配合音樂擺得比(4)還高
  3. 01:24:565 (3) - 我會把這顆移遠一點去強調那響亮的啪聲
  4. 01:36:272 (1) - 這裡有個明顯的finish聲,加上去可能會好點,01:36:760 (4) - 的尾巴也是
  5. 01:40:664 (3) - unsnapped slider
  6. 01:49:931 (1) - 雖然是insane,不過我覺得跳得有點大,第一次玩可能會miss掉,如果你堅持這樣用我建議把01:49:687 (10,11) - 改成1/4的slider唄
  7. 01:49:931 (1) - 01:50:662 (3) - 01:51:882 (1) - 這三個也是很明顯的finish
  8. 01:55:784 (1) - 節奏改成跟前面一樣3/4 slider + note試試,這樣能同時跟到人聲和鼓聲
  9. 01:58:101 (2) - 擺在(1)的左上對我來說玩起來順一些,排法也比較好看

[Gu's Hard]
  1. 00:12:992 (4) - 中間和尾巴的描點條一下,讓他同時能包住00:11:653 (7) - 也能被00:11:921 (1) - 包住
  2. 00:16:474 (2) - 我的話會跟著鋼琴的長音把這個slider改成note,然後在藍線放一個長slider到00:17:278 (4) -
  3. 01:11:882 (3) - 窩喜歡往左上斜讓01:11:394 (2,3) - 看起來是條弧線
  4. 02:15:296 (3) - 重音是在這裡感覺NC下在這會好點

[Yomi's Normal]
  1. 00:04:421 (4) - 建議把尾巴的聲音條小,不然太大聲就不好聽了
  2. 00:16:474 (1) - 雖然這裡放clap比較適合,不過連續兩個clap聽起來感覺有點怪,我的話會改成finish
  3. 00:54:321 (2,3,4) - 這三個就逆時針擺個三角形吧,我覺得好看些
  4. 01:48:955 (4) - 中間忘了clap,尾巴finish

[yf's Easy]
  1. 00:12:457 (2) - 我覺得把whistle放在(3)好聽些
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