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mAjorHon - Taoist and gangland

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kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年11月8日 at 10:00:12

Artist: mAjorHon
Title: Taoist and gangland
Source: dubstep
BPM: 143
Filesize: 7147kb
Play Time: 04:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. cucumber (4.99 stars, 721 notes)
  2. Hard (4.42 stars, 422 notes)
  3. Normal (2.78 stars, 281 notes)
Download: mAjorHon - Taoist and gangland
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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this is my frist beatmap~
i try my best to do it
hope you will enjoy it~ :)
need mod！
normal done
hard done(remaping)
insane V4.7 done
ready to modding!
i dont know how to use hitsound~hope somebody will help me
thank you very much!
thanks everyone mod for my map~
Last edited by kamisamaaa , edited 41 times in total.
[ Joey ]
390 posts
Joined May 2013
[ Joey ]
Hey there! Just a random mod here. The song sounded nice so I thought I would have a look.
Before I start I would like to say that I am not experienced at modding. :P

General
Looks like the offset should be 1525 (I think you will have to adjust the offset before you read the rest of my mod or else the times will be off. I just realized that :| )
Your combos seemed a little short to me, I mentioned where you could get rid of some NC's.
Really cool background image.
Hit sounds need work, but I can't help much there.
There are some parts where you can make sliders more round, and some sliders could be positioned parallel to each other, just to make it look better. But that is just my opinion.

Normal
00:03:410 (1) - Remove NC
00:05:085 (1) - ^
00:06:760 (1) - ^
00:10:110 (4) - ^
00:18:067 (2) - ^
00:19:324 (3) - ^
00:20:580 (1) - ^
00:20:580 (6) - ^
00:57:109 (3) - ^
01:00:459 (4) - ^
02:03:800 (1) - ^
02:49:521 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:17:211 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
03:00:474 (3) - ^
03:32:302 (4) - ^
01:09:254 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Split these into 2 combos.
01:13:861 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Split into 2 combos.
00:36:913 (1) - Give this slider more of a circular shape.
00:40:263 (1,2) - Make these sliders parallel maybe?
01:01:297 (6,1) - ^
02:57:962 (1,2) - ^
01:16:687 (1) - Move this to here 01:16:792 (1) -
01:19:724 (1,1) - Put these sliders the same distance away as the previous sliders. They look a little out of position.
01:22:236 (1) - Wow, this slider is really fast.
01:49:142 (1) - ^
03:06:337 (1,2,3,4) - I really like this part!
03:39:003 (3) - Shorten this slider to end here. 03:40:678
03:46:541 (4) - Feels like you reverse the slider direction too many times here.
04:05:039 (1) - Add a longer break before the next note after the slider.

Hard
00:01:525 (1,2,3) - Begin here
00:26:443 (5) - Remove NC
00:36:494 (3) - ^
01:17:211 (1) - ^
01:17:630 (1) - ^
01:46:945 (2) - ^
01:48:201 (4) - ^
01:56:052 (5) - ^
01:59:193 (5) - ^
02:07:150 (3) - ^
02:13:432 (2) - ^
02:25:158 (5) - ^
02:35:282 (4) - ^
02:36:957 (2) - ^
02:37:795 (4) - ^
02:38:214 (5) - ^
02:40:098 (2) - ^
02:41:355 (3) - ^
02:43:658 (2) - ^
02:44:496 (4) - ^
02:52:034 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
03:29:371 (2) - ^
00:36:494 (3) - Make slider more circular?
01:09:254 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Split into 2 combos.
01:13:861 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:24:749 (4) - Move this so it isn't overlapping.

Sorry I didn't get to the insane yet. It's 4 a.m where I am so I should go to bed. :P
I will post my mod for insane tomorrow!
Oh, and if you have any questions, message me. :D

I hope this helps!
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

Spudgy wrote:

Hey there! Just a random mod here. The song sounded nice so I thought I would have a look.
Before I start I would like to say that I am not experienced at modding. :P

General
Looks like the offset should be 1525 (I think you will have to adjust the offset before you read the rest of my mod or else the times will be off. I just realized that :| )
Your combos seemed a little short to me, I mentioned where you could get rid of some NC's.
Really cool background image.
Hit sounds need work, but I can't help much there.
There are some parts where you can make sliders more round, and some sliders could be positioned parallel to each other, just to make it look better. But that is just my opinion.

Normal
00:03:410 (1) - Remove NC done
00:05:085 (1) - ^ done
00:06:760 (1) - ^ done
00:10:110 (4) - ^ done
00:18:067 (2) - ^ done
00:19:324 (3) - ^ done
00:20:580 (1) - ^ done
00:20:580 (6) - ^ done
00:57:109 (3) - ^ done
01:00:459 (4) - ^ done
02:03:800 (1) - ^ done
02:49:521 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ I think same color is not so beautiful~
01:17:211 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ same
03:00:474 (3) - ^ done
03:32:302 (4) - ^ done
01:09:254 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Split these into 2 combos. done
01:13:861 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Split into 2 combos. colorful is more beautiful~ :)
00:36:913 (1) - Give this slider more of a circular shape. done
00:40:263 (1,2) - Make these sliders parallel maybe? done
01:01:297 (6,1) - ^ done
02:57:962 (1,2) - ^ I think this is ok~
01:16:687 (1) - Move this to here 01:16:792 (1) - done
01:19:724 (1,1) - Put these sliders the same distance away as the previous sliders. They look a little out of position. done
01:22:236 (1) - Wow, this slider is really fast. I change this spin to a other slider~
01:49:142 (1) - ^ I have delete it~
03:06:337 (1,2,3,4) - I really like this part! thank you~ ;)
03:39:003 (3) - Shorten this slider to end here. 03:40:678 done
03:46:541 (4) - Feels like you reverse the slider direction too many times here. I change it to twice with two other ciecle
04:05:039 (1) - Add a longer break before the next note after the slider. I dont understand whats your mean0.0 :o
Hard
00:01:525 (1,2,3) - Begin here
00:26:443 (5) - Remove NC
00:36:494 (3) - ^
01:17:211 (1) - ^
01:17:630 (1) - ^
01:46:945 (2) - ^
01:48:201 (4) - ^
01:56:052 (5) - ^
01:59:193 (5) - ^
02:07:150 (3) - ^
02:13:432 (2) - ^
02:25:158 (5) - ^
02:35:282 (4) - ^
02:36:957 (2) - ^
02:37:795 (4) - ^
02:38:214 (5) - ^
02:40:098 (2) - ^
02:41:355 (3) - ^
02:43:658 (2) - ^
02:44:496 (4) - ^
02:52:034 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
03:29:371 (2) - ^ all done
00:36:494 (3) - Make slider more circular? done
01:09:254 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Split into 2 combos. done
01:13:861 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^ done
01:24:749 (4) - Move this so it isn't overlapping.
done

Sorry I didn't get to the insane yet. It's 4 a.m where I am so I should go to bed. :P
I will post my mod for insane tomorrow!
Oh, and if you have any questions, message me. :D

I hope this helps!


really really thank you for mod my map~
my english is poor, sometimes maybe i cant understand what's your mean..i'm so sorry about that :o
i will mod your map next,i have never mod some map before, but i will try my best!
you say"Looks like the offset should be 1525" i'm sorry i'm a new mapper, i dont know which offset you mean....
because every red line has different offset =L=
as NC i will make more longer combow~
really thanks for your mod!
[ Joey ]
390 posts
Joined May 2013
[ Joey ]
Hey again! Back to mod your insane diff.
The offset at 1525 is when the music begins to play. Here 00:01:525

Insane
Sorry, I won't have much to say about this one because I can't play insane maps myself.

Whenever I see a single hit circle, or a single slider in a combo like this one 00:13:880 (1) - it doesn't look right to me.
00:25:396 (1,2) - These two hit circles are confusing (to me) because they are directly under the previous hit circles. (idk if this is bad for insane)
00:26:862 (2,3) - ^
01:03:810 (1,2) - ^
01:07:997 (1,2) - ^
00:56:271 (1,2,3,4) - Weird spacing.
00:57:947 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:05:485 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:00:459 (1) - Is too far away from 01:00:669 (2,3,4)
01:23:493 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can make this combo look better.
01:44:851 (5) - Slider has a weird shape (just my opinion).
02:23:483 (1,2,3,4) - Make these symmetrical?
02:43:030 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Wow, really hard combos here. :P
03:33:140 (2,1,2) - These should all be one combo.
04:02:945 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - These are very spread out, which might make it too difficult.
04:10:902 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Sorry, I'm not that helpful with insane haha.

If you have any questions, message me anytime!
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

Spudgy wrote:

Hey again! Back to mod your insane diff.
The offset at 1525 is when the music begins to play. Here 00:01:525 I think a little before is better~sorry i will not change this 0.0

Insane
Sorry, I won't have much to say about this one because I can't play insane maps myself.

Whenever I see a single hit circle, or a single slider in a combo like this one 00:13:880 (1) - it doesn't look right to me. I have change this~Done
00:25:396 (1,2) - These two hit circles are confusing (to me) because they are directly under the previous hit circles. (idk if this is bad for insane)
00:26:862 (2,3) - ^
01:03:810 (1,2) - ^
01:07:997 (1,2) - ^ this is normal in the insane~if you can read the map in the game that you will find this is easy to play
00:56:271 (1,2,3,4) - Weird spacing.
00:57:947 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:05:485 (1,2,3,4) - ^ this is OK in the insane~ make map more interst
01:00:459 (1) - Is too far away from 01:00:669 (2,3,4) I change it~Done
01:23:493 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can make this combo look better. Done~
01:44:851 (5) - Slider has a weird shape (just my opinion). I think it's ok~
02:23:483 (1,2,3,4) - Make these symmetrical?
02:43:030 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Wow, really hard combos here. :P I like this kind of comble~ :)
03:33:140 (2,1,2) - These should all be one combo. Done~
04:02:945 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - These are very spread out, which might make it too difficult. I make it a little easier~Done
04:10:902 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Sorry, I'm not that helpful with insane haha.

If you have any questions, message me anytime!


it help a lot for me~thanks~and I will continue mod your map maybe tomorrow~
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
这歌不错 想做个ex
mod回头给
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki


From your request
NO KDS (you have already given me one before)

[General]
  1. audio leadin不一样
  2. 请不要让你的kiai time不从白线开始白线结束好吗？
    #1: Starts on 00:55:208, ends on 01:22:481
    #2: Starts on 02:29:194, ends on 02:56:467
    这kiai显然不对头啊，建议第一段从01:08:845 - 到01:49:124 - ，后面一段从02:56:257 - 到03:49:964 -
  3. 请多用三点滑条不要拉出一坨奇怪的东西，比如normal里面的00:20:593 (6) - ，00:11:782 (1) - 还有01:44:929 (5) - ，三点滑条也要注意除非合曲不要拉这种00:15:558 (2) -

[Normal]
  1. 每两个长白线一个NC，NC太乱了，有13个note不NC的然后又疯狂NC，看不懂你怎么下的NC
  2. ar4
  3. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:00:528 - snap to 00:00:558
    00:28:483 - snap to 00:28:460
    01:49:143 - snap to 01:49:124
    03:49:762 - snap to 03:49:754
    04:03:259 - snap to 04:03:285
  4. 00:26:467 (5,1) - 听着都怪
  5. 00:35:278 - 这里是新的一小段的开始怎么放一个折返？
  6. 00:28:775 (1) - NC补上，这是个bug
  7. 00:55:418 (1,3) - 哨子音难听死了我建议吧whistle去掉，或者改成soft不要用normal
  8. 01:08:425 (2) - 尾进kiai，改掉
  9. 01:11:782 (1,2) - normal里面别这么放妥不妥？
  10. 01:09:264 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这一坨简直……kiaitime*1.5sv闹哪样？结果kiai里面的排列简直不能看啊
  11. 01:49:124 - 这里补上啊
  12. 01:56:467 - 这里有音
  13. 02:00:565 - 插个break可好？
  14. 02:02:551 (1,2,3,4) - normal不要随便改间距啊
  15. 02:56:467 (1) - 转盘太短，干脆别用

[Hard]
  1. 绿线问题不再赘述，01:49:124 (1) - 转盘太短
  2. 可以对照normal一个个看，感觉这俩难度除了四围差不多

[Insane]
  1. NC还是乱得一塌糊涂，绿线依旧unsnap
  2. 00:22:901 (3,4,5) - 这节奏你是从哪里听出来的？
  3. 00:25:628 - 这个地方用滑条更合适吧
  4. 滑条的whistle别乱加，哨子听着很违和，比如00:34:439 (9) -
  5. 00:55:419 (1,2) - 你觉得这玩意好看么
  6. 01:41:572 (5) - 那个5为嘛要跑出来啊
  7. 01:44:930 (5) - 我靠这坨
  8. 01:48:285 (1) - 这个转盘一点都不合适，然后后面又接一个转盘……01:52:481 (1) -
  9. 我去后面一大段就没有break了？
  10. 02:01:082 - 一大段的虽然没东西空着不别扭？还不把break补上？
  11. 02:02:552 (1,2,3) - 这个跳完全没理由
  12. 02:42:411 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 唯一比较出彩的地方，只要一拉滑条，本性显露
  13. 跳摆的不是很好，后面也就不吐槽了

综上，remap plz，要有耐心，大家是新mapper的时候，坚持下来remap的到最后才能成为神Mapper

我extra估计要一段时间，你可以先把这图放一下看看同类型ranked map，麻婆们是怎么作图的，好好研究一下吧

强烈建议看http://osu.ppy.sh/b/187639
建议看http://osu.ppy.sh/b/133476和http://osu.ppy.sh/b/247749
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:



From your request
NO KDS (you have already given me one before)

[General]
  1. audio leadin不一样 这个全部设置成2000了
  2. 请不要让你的kiai time不从白线开始白线结束好吗？
    #1: Starts on 00:55:208, ends on 01:22:481
    #2: Starts on 02:29:194, ends on 02:56:467
    这kiai显然不对头啊，建议第一段从01:08:845 - 到01:49:124 - ，后面一段从02:56:257 - 到03:49:964 -
  3. 请多用三点滑条不要拉出一坨奇怪的东西，比如normal里面的00:20:593 (6) - ，00:11:782 (1) - 还有01:44:929 (5) - ，三点滑条也要注意除非合曲不要拉这种00:15:558 (2) -
都改了

[Normal]
  1. 每两个长白线一个NC，NC太乱了，有13个note不NC的然后又疯狂NC，看不懂你怎么下的NC
  2. ar4
  3. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:00:528 - snap to 00:00:558
    00:28:483 - snap to 00:28:460
    01:49:143 - snap to 01:49:124
    03:49:762 - snap to 03:49:754
    04:03:259 - snap to 04:03:285
  4. 00:26:467 (5,1) - 听着都怪 改了
  5. 00:35:278 - 这里是新的一小段的开始怎么放一个折返？改了
  6. 00:28:775 (1) - NC补上，这是个bug
  7. 00:55:418 (1,3) - 哨子音难听死了我建议吧whistle去掉，或者改成soft不要用normal 改了
  8. 01:08:425 (2) - 尾进kiai，改掉
  9. 01:11:782 (1,2) - normal里面别这么放妥不妥？ 改了
  10. 01:09:264 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 这一坨简直……kiaitime*1.5sv闹哪样？结果kiai里面的排列简直不能看啊 改了
  11. 01:49:124 - 这里补上啊 改了
  12. 01:56:467 - 这里有音 改了
  13. 02:00:565 - 插个break可好？[/color]
  14. 02:02:551 (1,2,3,4) - normal不要随便改间距啊
  15. 02:56:467 (1) - 转盘太短，干脆别用
改了

[Hard]
  1. 绿线问题不再赘述，01:49:124 (1) - 转盘太短 改了
  2. 可以对照normal一个个看，感觉这俩难度除了四围差不多

[Insane]
  1. NC还是乱得一塌糊涂，绿线依旧unsnap
  2. 00:22:901 (3,4,5) - 这节奏你是从哪里听出来的？ 改了
  3. 00:25:628 - 这个地方用滑条更合适吧 改了
  4. 滑条的whistle别乱加，哨子听着很违和，比如00:34:439 (9) - 改了
  5. 00:55:419 (1,2) - 你觉得这玩意好看么 改了
  6. 01:41:572 (5) - 那个5为嘛要跑出来啊 改了 有的地方摆放没放好
  7. 01:44:930 (5) - 我靠这坨 改了
  8. 01:48:285 (1) - 这个转盘一点都不合适，然后后面又接一个转盘……01:52:481 (1) - 改了 变成break了
  9. 我去后面一大段就没有break了？不知在哪里加
  10. 02:01:082 - 一大段的虽然没东西空着不别扭？还不把break补上？ 不知怎么加
  11. 02:02:552 (1,2,3) - 这个跳完全没理由 改了
  12. 02:42:411 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 唯一比较出彩的地方，只要一拉滑条，本性显露
  13. 跳摆的不是很好，后面也就不吐槽了

综上，remap plz，要有耐心，大家是新mapper的时候，坚持下来remap的到最后才能成为神Mapper

我extra估计要一段时间，你可以先把这图放一下看看同类型ranked map，麻婆们是怎么作图的，好好研究一下吧

强烈建议看http://osu.ppy.sh/b/187639
建议看http://osu.ppy.sh/b/133476和http://osu.ppy.sh/b/247749


timing 绿线都放到白线上了 kiai也改成你说的了 但是提示kiai时间过长0.0
滑条哨子声音效全部改了
NC全部重做了
滑条基本用三点了
跳摆的不是很好 不是很明白
audio leadin 我是通过osu文件记事本修改的2000 但是游戏内提示矛盾
正在研究你给的例子~看了好久音效还是不会加，，，摆放倒是准备换一换了
Last edited by kamisamaaa , edited 1 time in total.
cheesecheng
7 posts
Joined August 2011
cheesecheng
歌好听，希望在细节更加抠一点！ :lol:
Insane
01:22:271 (1) -我觉得可以把声效去掉，比较突兀
00:55:838 (2) -这里是不是可以改为和上一个滑条对称？看着比较规律
00:57:517 (2) -这里也是变成对称的是不是好看些？
01:41:153 (1,2,3,4,5) -这个连打摆放的不是很齐啊……
01:48:285 (1) -这个转盘为什么要从01:48:285 开始？从下一小节开始会不会更好些？

第一次渣排版，见谅……加油，希望可以看到这张MAP被rank！
sjoy
1,024 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
一些建议关于Insane:
00:01:293 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音量太小 不适合连打 我觉得用折返滑条
实际上 我从00:01:502才听到音量
00:19:334 (2) - 你觉得这个摆放的很随意么 毫无目的的摆法
00:24:159 (4) - bad flow
00:28:355 (8,9,1) - 建议折返滑条
00:33:810 (1,2,3) - 随意摆放
00:35:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:02:132 (1,2,3,4) - 好歹叠在之前的 5 6也好看
01:17:237 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 为什么不绕中心对称呢？
01:41:153 (1,2,3,4,5) - 摆直线请摆直
02:03:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 没看出这样摆的意义
后面太多不想每个都吐槽了
作图不光是只有节奏
还有排版 美观
争取用心去想每个物件的摆法位置可以说出来我为什么要摆这
加油吧
可以学一些FLOW知识
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/141227
kamisamaaa
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Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

sjoy wrote:

一些建议关于Insane:
00:01:293 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音量太小 不适合连打 我觉得用折返滑条 改了
实际上 我从00:01:502才听到音量 这个没觉得啊
00:19:334 (2) - 你觉得这个摆放的很随意么 毫无目的的摆法 改了
00:24:159 (4) - bad flow 改了 换了滑条方向
00:28:355 (8,9,1) - 建议折返滑条 改了
00:33:810 (1,2,3) - 随意摆放 改了
00:35:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ 改了
01:02:132 (1,2,3,4) - 好歹叠在之前的 5 6也好看 改了 好建议！！！
01:17:237 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 为什么不绕中心对称呢？ 改了
01:41:153 (1,2,3,4,5) - 摆直线请摆直 改了
02:03:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 没看出这样摆的意义 觉得好看。。不知摆什么好额
后面太多不想每个都吐槽了
作图不光是只有节奏
还有排版 美观
争取用心去想每个物件的摆法位置可以说出来我为什么要摆这
加油吧
可以学一些FLOW知识
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/141227
感谢mod！flow那个正在研究0.0
kamisamaaa
605 posts
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Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

cheesecheng wrote:

歌好听，希望在细节更加抠一点！ :lol:
Insane
01:22:271 (1) -我觉得可以把声效去掉，比较突兀 改了
00:55:838 (2) -这里是不是可以改为和上一个滑条对称？看着比较规律 改了
00:57:517 (2) -这里也是变成对称的是不是好看些？ 改了
01:41:153 (1,2,3,4,5) -这个连打摆放的不是很齐啊…… 改了
01:48:285 (1) -这个转盘为什么要从01:48:285 开始？从下一小节开始会不会更好些？ 转盘开头也没音。。

第一次渣排版，见谅……加油，希望可以看到这张MAP被rank！
希望有生之年吧。。。
Koiyuki
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
自己做ex啊 那再见 我正好也可以少做一个GD
kamisamaaa
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kamisamaaa

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

自己做ex啊 那再见 我正好也可以少做一个GD

因为你不是说你没时间么。。。 :o
我准备先把insane做好 然后做EX就方便了
还是音效完全不行，，
liangv587
472 posts
Joined April 2013
liangv587
整体
路漫漫其修远兮 吾将上下而求索

normal

首先是间距，要ds做normal，不然没法玩
00:03:390 (2) - 这种在时间轴上的距离较远可以忽略
00:20:593 (6) - 这个稍微有点大
00:28:775 (1,2) - 00:40:313 (4,5) - 这种必须改
突然加速吓尿了，不要这样吧
01:01:292 (6,1,2,3) - ds后面的也尽量吧，看你大多数都1.0，就1.0吧
01:13:880 (1) - 这段太难了，normal嘛简单点，不要怕无聊
00:28:775 (1) - 01:54:789 (1) - 04:05:068 (1) - 物件里转盘太近了，可以减少转盘，可以物件延后，短的也可以取消转盘
03:15:978 (3,4) - 3）取消折返4）提前1折返
然后easy normal难度白好看点就行了，排列很重要，可以学一下包，blanket可以参考http://osu.ppy.sh/s/114860的Tardy和Orderly难度别打我

hard

00:26:467 (7) - 两三个点就够了，后面也是，不嫌麻烦么
01:22:271漏音
01:49:124 (1) - 太短了

insane

太简单了bpm143感觉滑条可以快些，加跳，滑条的下个物件有时可以隔远一点

建议就这么多还要慢慢努力才行
kamisamaaa
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Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

liangv587 wrote:

整体
路漫漫其修远兮 吾将上下而求索

normal

首先是间距，要ds做normal，不然没法玩
00:03:390 (2) - 这种在时间轴上的距离较远可以忽略
00:20:593 (6) - 这个稍微有点大
00:28:775 (1,2) - 00:40:313 (4,5) - 这种必须改
突然加速吓尿了，不要这样吧
01:01:292 (6,1,2,3) - ds后面的也尽量吧，看你大多数都1.0，就1.0吧
01:13:880 (1) - 这段太难了，normal嘛简单点，不要怕无聊
00:28:775 (1) - 01:54:789 (1) - 04:05:068 (1) - 物件里转盘太近了，可以减少转盘，可以物件延后，短的也可以取消转盘
03:15:978 (3,4) - 3）取消折返4）提前1折返
然后easy normal难度白好看点就行了，排列很重要，可以学一下包，blanket可以参考http://osu.ppy.sh/s/114860的Tardy和Orderly难度别打我

hard

00:26:467 (7) - 两三个点就够了，后面也是，不嫌麻烦么
01:22:271漏音
01:49:124 (1) - 太短了

insane

太简单了bpm143感觉滑条可以快些，加跳，滑条的下个物件有时可以隔远一点

建议就这么多还要慢慢努力才行

因为我hard 和normal还没重新排列。。。主要吧insane重做了 准备弄好insane在把这些问题应用在低难度 所以低难度排列什么的会有很多问题0.0
还是感谢mod~我一会就去吧这些改了
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki

kamisamaaa wrote:

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

自己做ex啊 那再见 我正好也可以少做一个GD

因为你不是说你没时间么。。。 :o
我准备先把insane做好 然后做EX就方便了
还是音效完全不行，，
那你还是自己做吧
我如果有空做个难度玩玩，也不要交上去了
MeraMiPoP_old
155 posts
Joined October 2013
MeraMiPoP_old
03:09:369 (2) - 这里空了个四分拍, 下面的蓝线出音
03:11:362 (1,2) - 这里节拍不对..

第一个kiai的那段三连感觉有点不好, 而且配合这音效就有些毁歌了
我觉得的话可以放个长串, 夹杂那种两个转向的4分拍短滑条 (这样就不会打太累)
然后音效从低一点的音量开始逐渐增大, 间距可以随着音量增大一点这样, 不过也不要太大了, 最大0.8左右就好
注意放串的时候把gridsnap关了, 调distance (平时的话建议开着grid, 然后view->grid level->4)

其他的节奏方面我觉得挺好的, 小跳什么的也能配合歌曲的意境
可以试试摆的更整齐一些, 比如像nold_1702的first of the year, 很多的跳梗用的都是几何多边形结构
这样看起来就会美观一些, 也是一个好图必要的地方

dubstep我接触不多, 也没做过图, 不过感觉是个最近比较受欢迎的类型
因为最近ALR和redalice好像都在做这个, avenew也有类似风格的歌 (思考..)
感觉上这种歌节奏很丰富, 可以作图做得很出彩, 不过相对的有些不好作图
有些好mapper做这种类型的比如La Cataline, Natteke, Vass_Bass, luanny(?) 可以多在edit里看看

作为first map我觉得是很好的图, 自己都想做个gd 不过想想还有六个坑没做还是不用了(stress
总之加油了

另外是说的in难度, 低难度我没看
kamisamaaa
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Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

Meramipop wrote:

03:09:369 (2) - 这里空了个四分拍, 下面的蓝线出音 这个改了
03:11:362 (1,2) - 这里节拍不对.. 这个没感觉有问题额

第一个kiai的那段三连感觉有点不好, 而且配合这音效就有些毁歌了
我觉得的话可以放个长串, 夹杂那种两个转向的4分拍短滑条 (这样就不会打太累) 这个不太明白什么意思
然后音效从低一点的音量开始逐渐增大, 间距可以随着音量增大一点这样, 不过也不要太大了, 最大0.8左右就好 这个已经加了 是不是你看的是旧版本额
注意放串的时候把gridsnap关了, 调distance (平时的话建议开着grid, 然后view->grid level->4) 哦 这个我确实不知道~

其他的节奏方面我觉得挺好的, 小跳什么的也能配合歌曲的意境
可以试试摆的更整齐一些, 比如像nold_1702的first of the year, 很多的跳梗用的都是几何多边形结构
这样看起来就会美观一些, 也是一个好图必要的地方 基本remap了。。。 >:(

dubstep我接触不多, 也没做过图, 不过感觉是个最近比较受欢迎的类型
因为最近ALR和redalice好像都在做这个, avenew也有类似风格的歌 (思考..)
感觉上这种歌节奏很丰富, 可以作图做得很出彩, 不过相对的有些不好作图
有些好mapper做这种类型的比如La Cataline, Natteke, Vass_Bass, luanny(?) 可以多在edit里看看 嗯 谢谢推荐了~

作为first map我觉得是很好的图, 自己都想做个gd 不过想想还有六个坑没做还是不用了(stress
总之加油了

另外是说的in难度, 低难度我没看

非常感谢mod！
hoshisorakiseki
300 posts
Joined January 2012
hoshisorakiseki
queue什么的
全局：

难度：Normal
-->打开AiMod（Ctrl+shift+A），勾上“Check distance snap”,将这些问题处理掉
00:04:229 (3) - (256,288)，包好，00:05:068 (4) 也调整一下
00:06:747 (6) - (368,112)，同上
01:15:138 (4) - 歪了
01:15:978 (2) - 歪了
01:20:593 (1) - 换成spinner吧
01:44:089 (3) - (336,248)
02:44:929 (4) - (200,152)
02:54:579 (1) - 换spinner
03:33:600 (2,3,4) - 感觉会点错
04:08:425 (1,2,3,1) - 这堆乱了

难度：Hard
-->打开AiMod（Ctrl+shift+A），不用勾上“Check distance snap”,将这些问题处理掉
00:05:068 (3) - (128,296)
00:06:747 (5) - (256,72)
00:18:075 (3,4) - 后面的被挡住了
01:20:593 (1) - 换spinner
02:20:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - 整齐一点
02:54:579 (1) - 换spinner
04:11:152 (4) - 感觉太多折返了

难度：Insane
-->打开AiMod（Ctrl+shift+A），不用勾上“Check distance snap”,将这些问题处理掉
01:05:489 (1) - (168,208)
01:05:909 (3) - (296,176)
02:03:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 整齐一点
02:58:775 (4) - NC，并取消02:59:194 (1) 的NC
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