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Hitoshizuku P - Alluring Secret ~Black Vow~

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dennischan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, December 24, 2018 at 11:21:08 PM

Artist: Hitoshizuku P
Title: Alluring Secret ~Black Vow~
Tags: suzunosuke hatsune miku collab vocaloid append rin len angel forbidden love kagamine yuri
BPM: 134
Filesize: 24057kb
Play Time: 04:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.38 stars, 494 notes)
  2. Insane (4.12 stars, 723 notes)
  3. Normal (1.86 stars, 297 notes)
Download: Hitoshizuku P - Alluring Secret ~Black Vow~
Download: Hitoshizuku P - Alluring Secret ~Black Vow~ (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This map is currently incomplete.
Thanks to mike6649 for constantly modding my maps and improving this mapset

Normal: ready
Hard: unplayable
Insane: WIP
irvinchan
General
Your tough is a too easy. Maybe you can rename it as normal;
the spread of difficulties is not good enough
Sweet Love
00:04:613 (4,5,6) - Reposition those three notes?
00:59:240 (2) - Maybe this should be changed to a smooth slider
too much straight line flow
Tough Love
00:44:016 (2) - change this to a normal looking shape maybe
00:49:389 (3,4,5) - curved sliders plz
01:00:919 (5,6,7) - the timing of those notes are not spot on
01:51:740 (4,5,6,7) - confusing to read
02:18:941 (1,2,3,4,5) - confusing to read
Not quite sure about the kiai time
maybe change to normal love
Impossible Love
03:30:583 (3,4) - confusing to read (but maybe a feature)
Topic Starter
dennischan
thanks for modding :)
Topic Starter
dennischan
updated beatmap according to mod
mike6649
Generally a lot of potential to be a great map imo, but some intricate problems such as spacing and timing
Also beat sounds should have more variation so players can feel the atmosphere of the song.
Style is somewhat inconsistent.

Sweet Love:
00:59:240 (2) - until the end of the combo, very noticeable timing error that can be annoying
01:09:986 (1) - wrong timing

Tough Love:
Consider increasing the beat spacing to increase the difficulty.
01:46:255 (1) - slider starts without any indication in the song
01:56:106 (8) - half a beat too early
02:14:464 (5) - extra beat
02:50:956 (5,6) - add a beat between 5 and 6
02:57:001 (1) - spinner should start a beat early

03:27:001 (1) - very chaotic and fluctuating pattern until 03:40:434 (10)
03:37:971 (4) - timing
03:50:733 (5) - slider should end half a beat later
03:53:419 (5,6) - i suggest adding a beat between the two to match the style
04:03:270 (2) - sort of a crudely made heart that isn't really recognisable
04:09:091 (5+) - suggest mapping the rest of the song, and start the spinner right at the last note of the song.

Impossible Love:
Improve the spacing to gain flow.
02:04:837 (3) - this heart screws me over every time - try to delay the start of the spinner
02:49:389 (3) - kind of badly designed slider: Z doesnt mean anything significant, and the varying speeds threw me off.
03:30:583 (3,4) - make the fourth note visible
03:46:703 (1-15) - again a hard to recognize heart (at least for me)
Topic Starter
dennischan
thanks for mod; but I didn't realise that I had so much mistakes.
changing...
Topic Starter
dennischan
good job mike
Topic Starter
dennischan
updated map again
xymdjx
you should type ひとしずくP (Hitoshizuku P) in for artist instead of Vocaloid
other than that, you also should change the source from Vocaloid to "Append 2 Kagamine Rin and Len"
(according to the rules)
misk703
Hi!
Thank you my map mod.

[Generally]
Artist : ひとしずくP
Romanised Artist : Hitoshizuku P
Title : 秘蜜〜黒の誓い〜
[Sweet Love]
Slider Velocity : 1.00~1.20
00:01:031 ~ 00:07:747 Volume 30%
00:04:613 (4,5,6) - Circle at regular intervals.
00:06:852 (8) - Slider end 00:07:757
00:32:822 (4) - fix the form
00:38:643 (3) - ^
00:52:524 (3) - Move 00:52:971
00:58:792 (2) - Too difficult.Try
01:26:553 (3) - Move Slider start 01:27:001 and end 01:27:897
[Normal Love]
00:06:852 (10) - Slider end 00:07:747 add Circle 00:08:195
00:32:822 (6) - Move 00:33:270
00:50:285 (5) - Change Return Slider?
00:54:762 (5) - New Combo
01:01:927 (6) - ^
02:16:815 (5) - Delete
02:17:598 (8) - Add Circle
02:26:106 (6) - Delete
02:25:882 (6) - Add Circle
02:26:330 (7,8,9,10) - Move 02:26:106 (7,8,9,10) ? I think this is good timing.
02:32:374 (4,5) - Ctrl + G
02:53:867 (3) - It is hard to look
03:33:718 (12) - Move x:256 y:296
03:45:807 (1,2) - Move 03:45:583
[Impossible Love]
00:01:031 ~ 00:07:747 Volume 30% Sampleset Soft ?
01:12:673 (11,12,13,14) - Try New Combo
01:17:150 (10) - Not Return Slider. Change standard Slider.
02:42:225 (1) - not stack start and end.

GL~~
Topic Starter
dennischan
thanks a lot for really detailed map mod
MiniKotoba
Sorry for late mod T T

Sweet love -
00:08:195 - Add a slider.Put the end on the red tick and add 1 reverse.
00:08:867 - Add a note
00:57:449 - check distance.

Normal love -
Distance check for this diff. Many notes seems to be wrong.

02:42:225 - This Anti-jump can be confusing.
02:53:867 - move the end to the previous white tick.

Tough Love -
00:18:718 (1,2) - A little hard to read.

Thanks!
Topic Starter
dennischan
Didn't change tough love as I think its ok
Also, updated map already
10crystalmask01
Ello o3o Random mod
[General]
Offset: 1022
Kai times:
01:14:454 - 01:28:783
02:27:887 - 02:42:216
03:48:484 - 04:09:977

Apply this to all your diffs

[Sweet Love]
00:04:613 (4) - New Combo (NC)
00:06:404 (7) - ^
00:07:747 - Holy cow, suddenly the volume becomes 100%?? :? Don't make ti to drastically louder then the previous timing point. I suggest using either 50% or 60%
00:11:777 (1) - Tail should end at 00:15:359 with a finish
00:32:822 (4) - Move to 00:33:270 to keep the consistency (since I've noticed 00:29:688 (1,2,3) - are spaced 2 beats apart)Also NC
00:52:524 (3) - Move to 00:52:971
00:54:762 (4) - NC
01:01:927 (5) - ^
01:12:673 (4) - ^

[Normal]
AR -1
OD -1 or 2, it should not exceed over 5.
Circle size +1
00:06:404 (8) - NC
00:31:927 - Needs a note here, so the rhythm here is consistent with 00:29:688 (1,2,3) -
00:33:270 (6) - NC
00:35:061 (7,1) - Replace with 00:33:270 (6) - here as well.
00:46:031 (5) - NC
01:01:031 (5) - Move it so it isn't under 00:59:240 (4) -
01:12:673 (5) - NC
01:26:553 (6) - ^

[Tough love]
00:02:598 (5) - NC
00:06:180 (6) - ^
00:12:897 (4) - ^
00:27:001 (6) - ^
00:49:277- Add a note here, so its consistent with 00:45:583 (5,6,7) -
01:07:076 (8) - NC

...Hmm. This map still looks as though it needs more work :S I suggest you re-check the rhythms, as they sound and look inconsistent.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
dennischan
Thanks a lot!! :) :D
MeraMiPoP_old
感觉听过。。

Tough Love:
00:01:703 (4) - 往上一点放到x:267 y:41, 避免重叠, 也符合oto~那个上升音
00:38:419 (5) - 这个串离前面的太近了, 看着就像连打一样, 分开一点就能看出间距了
01:12:673 (1,1,1,1) - 这四个note的clap有些太过明显.. 降低音量或者换个custom set比较好
02:26:106 (1,2,3,1) - ^
01:14:912 (3,4,5) - 这里看不清连打和单点了.. 把单点的间距DS拉大点, 至少0.9左右, 不要和连打一样..
02:42:225 (1) - 不好看..
03:05:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这样的连打好奇葩0.0
03:46:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 这里的节奏不明显, 而且normal的音效明显用得太过了
04:09:762 (1) - 最后不跟歌词好可惜啊
节奏好像一直是跟的歌词, 这个不错
排列方面还需要改进, 好多地方摆的间距看着就很乱.. 可以开着ds不要改 把不

是故意放跳的地方间距都调整一下
有些滑条有些太花了, 其实三个点的默认圆弧就不错啊

Normal Love:
00:04:389 (1) - N难度的话最好不要放1/4的东西
00:38:419 (4) - ^
01:44:688 (5) - ^
感觉clap音太违和了, 试着从别人图里拿个好听点的?
00:31:479 (4,5,6) - 间距要一样的吧.. 最好和前面三个对称一下, 就是复制以后ctrl+H
00:44:016 (2) - 这个用带反转的滑条比较好? osu.ppy.sh/ss/1102451
kiai段100%的音量太高了.. 大概70就好了吧
01:43:121 (2) - 01:57:897 (2,3) - 这里这一大段排列比较混乱, 既然是简单的难度最好能摆的清爽一点, 这样也好读图, 也看着舒服
02:38:643 (1,2,3) - 间距要一样的
02:32:598 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
03:32:822 (8,9,10,11,12) - ^
03:47:374 (7) - 看上去好奇怪
normal难度要间距DS都一样的, 不要放跳
最好把ds固定好,重新摆一下看看哪里不对。。

Sweet Love:
00:08:195 (1) - 间距。。
01:03:718 (2) - ^
00:10:882 (5) - 把这个包成圆弧在(4)周围, 把滑条上的点放在x:464 y:224和x:427 y:286, 这样好看一点
好像没做完。。
00:55:658 (2,3) - 这两个可以做成对称的
Ethercastle
From #modreq. Learning modding but I will try to be helpful. (不知道你习惯什么语言那就用英文好了)

[General]

[Tough Love]
General suggestions (I will point out specific instances later)
  1. Use create polygons (ctrl-shift-D) for regular gemetric shapes and turn on distance-snapping (or press shift or just manually adjust the distance) when placing streams of 1/2 or 1/4 circles. Currently this map looks quite messy due to inconsistent spacing and irregular shapes, which is really detrimental to the aesthetics.
  2. Don't think it's necessary for you to follow the lyrics word by word, it's feels quite monotonous, especially the gaps between each line of lyrics. Try to add some variety through mixing other instruments to the map. (Look at some ranked vocaloid songs with low BPM may help)
00:01:031 (1,2,3,4) - Shape doesn't look that nice. Consider just aligning them along a curve?
00:02:598 (1,2,3) - Spacing issues. Or you can't probably just stack them (this happens a lot in the map and I won't repeat the stacking suggestion)
00:03:718 (5) - Vocal here feels like a slider, not a circle.
00:04:613 (3) - ^
00:05:509 (5,6) - consider this? may fit the rhythm better imo00:06:852 (8,9,10) - spacing should be somewhat consistent. Current one is confusing in that it seems that 9 is directly following 8
00:08:867 (2) - slider
00:09:762 (4,5) - align them in a straight line
00:10:434 (6,7,8) - vocal here is slow so better not jump
00:11:553 (1,2,3) - alignment
00:10:882 (8) - slider? (also the hitsound for this part sounds way too loud, generally you want to use the soft sampleset when folloing vocals)
00:11:777 (3) - Find this slider too long
00:12:897 (4,5,6,7) - ctrl shift D for better square
00:15:583 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:17:150 (2,3,4) - ^
00:17:598 (3) - perhaps NC here
00:18:941 (2) - there are several notes here so better not a single slider
00:23:195 (4) - ^
00:26:553 (5,6,7) - music is descending here so three parallel sliders (even ascending a bit) don't fit that well
00:27:897 (8,9) - string sound is different here, so better not the same pattern
00:29:464 (1,2,3) - shape
00:31:031 (4,5,6,7,8) - spacing
00:34:165 (3) - slider
00:34:837 (4) - NC
00:34:837 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - spacing
00:42:225 (8,9,10) - ^
00:49:613 (7,8,9,10) - ^ (basically the same issues everywhere, gonna skip those)
00:58:792 (4,5,6,7) - rhythm here is definitely not 4 single clicks
01:04:389 (8) - feels like a slider
01:15:807 (6) - NC
01:19:389 (6) - NC, also long slider doesn't fit
01:20:956 (9) - antijump confusing
01:26:777 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Serious overmapping here. Don't use stream if there's nothing in the music
01:45:359 (8) - rotate anticlockwise a bit for better flow
01:48:941 (8) - ^ but clockwise
01:50:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - please don't copy and paste
01:55:658 (9) - slider feels awkward
01:57:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - don't copy and paste
02:05:061 (3) - slider doesn't fit. Even if you want a heart, follow some instructions in the forum to make it better
02:09:091 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing
02:19:165 (4) - curved too much
02:26:106 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - now it's time to use copy & paste & rotation...
03:10:882 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - you really have to set constant spacing to make such irregular rhythm intuitive and readable
03:27:001 (1) - hitsound too loud
03:46:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - overmapped stream

Well, after checking in details I would really recommend that you remap this difficulty, it's probably the easiest way to improve the beatmap. Don't go too fast, slow down a bit and consider carefully before placing the notes. Anyways, good luck on whatever you choose to do.

That applies still to the other 2 difficulties so I won't waste time listing out all the problems. Feel free to ask me for a recheck when you've improved those, though.

Sorry for being a bit harsh when writing and good luck ^ ^
Topic Starter
dennischan
read your mod already~
Will post again when I have time to fix it~
Maybe will also ask for recheck
Topic Starter
dennischan

Ethercastle wrote:

From #modreq. Learning modding but I will try to be helpful. (不知道你习惯什么语言那就用英文好了)

[General]

[Tough Love]
General suggestions (I will point out specific instances later)
  1. Use create polygons (ctrl-shift-D) for regular gemetric shapes and turn on distance-snapping (or press shift or just manually adjust the distance) when placing streams of 1/2 or 1/4 circles. Currently this map looks quite messy due to inconsistent spacing and irregular shapes, which is really detrimental to the aesthetics. (done)
  2. Don't think it's necessary for you to follow the lyrics word by word, it's feels quite monotonous, especially the gaps between each line of lyrics. Try to add some variety through mixing other instruments to the map. (Look at some ranked vocaloid songs with low BPM may help) I think its fine, it fits the music
These are the things I changed:
00:03:718 (5) - Vocal here feels like a slider, not a circle.
00:04:613 (3) - ^
00:06:852 (8,9,10) - spacing should be somewhat consistent. Current one is confusing in that it seems that 9 is directly following 8
00:08:867 (2) - slider
00:10:882 (8) - slider? (also the hitsound for this part sounds way too loud, generally you want to use the soft sampleset when folloing vocals)
00:11:777 (3) - Find this slider too long
00:12:897 (4,5,6,7) - ctrl shift D for better square
00:15:583 (1,2,3) - spacing
00:17:150 (2,3,4) - ^
00:26:553 (5,6,7) - music is descending here so three parallel sliders (even ascending a bit) don't fit that well
00:27:897 (8,9) - string sound is different here, so better not the same pattern
00:29:464 (1,2,3) - shape
00:31:031 (4,5,6,7,8) - spacing
00:34:165 (3) - slider
00:34:837 (4) - NC
00:34:837 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - spacing
00:42:225 (8,9,10) - ^
00:49:613 (7,8,9,10) - ^ (basically the same issues everywhere, gonna skip those)
00:58:792 (4,5,6,7) - rhythm here is definitely not 4 single clicks
01:04:389 (8) - feels like a slider
01:15:807 (6) - NC
01:20:956 (9) - antijump confusing
01:45:359 (8) - rotate anticlockwise a bit for better flow
01:48:941 (8) - ^ but clockwise
01:50:061 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - please don't copy and paste
01:55:658 (9) - slider feels awkward
01:57:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - don't copy and paste
02:05:061 (3) - slider doesn't fit. Even if you want a heart, follow some instructions in the forum to make it better
03:27:001 (1) - hitsound too loud
03:46:703 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - overmapped stream
Topic Starter
dennischan
I'm going to put the names of the people who helped me in doing the collab in the Tough Love diff.
ayaka2000
0.:47 の スピナーが少し短いような気がします。
Topic Starter
dennischan
I'm so sorry, I can only read Chinese or English.
So please don't give mods in any other language.
:( I cannot read your mod if you do so and so I cannot change my map and cannot give you kudosu.
ayaka2000
I'm Japanese
I speak English a little,sorry
This song is Good song
I expect that it will be completed by map!!!
Kuron-kun
Hello, M4M for PM request~

General

• I think it's better if you disable letterbox during breaks

• A high resolution BG should be better (1024x768 or 1366x768)

Sweet Love

00:08:195 (1) - Move to x:216 y:240

00:09:986 (3) - Move to x:360 y:120

00:55:658 (2,3) - you can do this, it is more beaultiful

00:58:792 (2,3) - they are a little ugly, you can do some slide art here D:

01:00:807 (3) - move it one snap ahead http://puu.sh/5p4k7.png

Hm... I can't do anything more on this diff, but you can let it more beaultiful

Normal Love

00:47:598 (1,1) - they should be more beaultiful like this

00:49:389 (2,3,4) - Move 2 to x:256 y:48 ; 3 to x:328 y:136 and 4 to x:256 y:224

00:51:628 (2) - move to x:48 y:152

01:57:449 (1) - move to x:96 y:64

01:58:344 (3) - move to x:216 y:272

01:58:792 (4) - move to x:320 y:232

I think this is all, good luck trying to rank it!~
Kiyura_old
M4M (PM req)
*you do not need to do what i tell you if you think this isn't good, if my mod just ruining your map, just say it.
Think I'll try my new style of modding :)
*I will give general thoughts about the whole map, and per each diff. And I hope my mod is useful for you.

General Thoughts
Nothing much to mention, for a first time map, it's pretty good (at least better than me when i start mapping ._. )

[Sweet Love]
Not finished? don't see anything wrong here except the spacings, please press (ctrl+shift+a) and check the "check distance snap" and fix everything written there, since this is an easy diff

[Normal Love]

General Thoughts
Difficulty gap is too far to sweet love, too many 1/2 circles i think, nothing special here.
Mod

00:01:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - make the rhythm like this :
well, this part is needed to fix imo 02:32:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
mod

02:32:374 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - looks good, plays terrible imo
^ while you fix this, fix this 02:33:494 (9,10) - spacing
02:35:061 (1) - make it farther
02:37:971 (8) - delete?
03:35:509 (3,4,5) - spacing


[Tough Love]

General Thought
it has a few unreadable jumps / spacing, I focused my mod on this, but you do not need to make all spacing the same (trust me it will be bad :( ), i think these spacing is unreadable because of something that doesn't fit, spacing like these are fine imo 01:42:897 (1,2,3) - . and I mod this diff based on a first play, so I'm all now to the map and song.
I'm a little confused with your collab, so i can't make my mod divided to who's mapping what, sorry :(

Mod
HP +1 or 2
00:07:524 (9) - really hard to read for someone who plays this map for first time & don't know the song (eg. me)
00:30:136 (3) - make it farther
00:31:367 (6) - add note
00:59:464 (8) - x:464 y:152
01:16:255 (3) - for some reason, for me this slider is faster than the others (I thing it's just me ._.)
01:20:956 (9) - Make it farther
02:30:136 (8) - ^
02:52:747 (1) - unreadable, reposition this : suggestion :
1. you could stack 1 at 5's end
2. you could make 1 farther away.

Hope it's useful and GOOD LUCK~ :)
Topic Starter
dennischan
Will upload map this evening~ Have to wait until the internet acess is fixed.

changed almost everything in your mod, except the places that I cannot understand.
And yes, your mod was useful.

well, this part is needed to fix imo 02:32:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
(don't quite understand the graph, so changed it in my own style)

HP +1 or 2
(didn't do this because I want people to be able to play this diff although they may not be very good at osu. In simpler terms, I want everybody to enjoy this diff)

I'm a little confused with your collab, so i can't make my mod divided to who's mapping what, sorry :(
(Changed the collab info)
cirnocon
Hi Dennis~
Sweet love
Is it completed or WIP? Too bad if it is uncomplete. :(
Normal Love
00:33:270 (7,1) - You can make the slider shape properly
04:09:986 (1) - you can adjust the spinner volume
Tough Love
00:18:941 (2) - you can adjust the slider shape so it fits the previous slider
01:26:777 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - i would like to know that these note is with which type of the music? Vocal or instrmental?
04:12:673 (1) - adjust the spinner volume.
Anyway the beatmap design of the Tough love diff is quite good especially heart shape circle.
Good luck~. :)
Topic Starter
dennischan
Uploaded new version of changed beatmap~
and thanks to cirnocon for his/her mod~


cirnocon wrote:

Hi Dennis~
Sweet love
Is it completed or WIP? Too bad if it is uncomplete. :(
Normal Love
00:33:270 (7,1) - You can make the slider shape properly (done)
04:09:986 (1) - you can adjust the spinner volume (done)
Tough Love
00:18:941 (2) - you can adjust the slider shape so it fits the previous slider (don't know what you mean, so not done)
01:26:777 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - i would like to know that these note is with which type of the music? Vocal or instrmental?
(I am considering whether to change it or not~ It's by my friend mike6649 and he says that this place should have a stream... I'll change it if one more modder suggests it)
04:12:673 (1) - adjust the spinner volume. (done)
Anyway the beatmap design of the Tough love diff is quite good especially heart shape circle.
Good luck~. :)
The Sweet Love diff is completed! I just think that people who play easy diffs will not play for 4 min song, and they may not have the ability to play such a long map. So that is why I have Sweet love with a cut version.
Groumiezi


Hi! From my queue :3
dis bitmap iz kinda seort
This map using Old style of osu.

[General]
    1. Who can fix it?
    1. The BG size is not 1024x768 or 1366x768 pixel
    1. Remove the "cute" from tags. I didn't found something cute on this map
    [Easy]
    00:06:852 (2) - please fix the blanket
    00:10:882 (5) - ^
    00:41:330 (2) - Stack at 00:38:643 (3) (Slider head)
    00:55:658 (2,3) - This sliders bit worse and different. Try this :
    01:00:136 (3,4) - Spacing
    01:14:464 (1) - It's kinda ugly for me. please Change it into Wave slider
    01:22:971 (2,3) - Overlap

    [Normal]
    00:01:031 - 01:12:673 NO HITSOUND ANY YET?

    00:05:956 (5) - NC
    00:08:195 (10) - ^
    00:08:419 (1) - Remove NC
    00:08:867 (4) - Ugly slider. then you make this :
    00:11:777 (1) - finish
    00:49:389 (3,4,5) - You can do this. It's more beautiful
    01:14:240 - The kiai time start in 01:14:464 not 01:14:240.
    01:14:464 (1) - finish (slider head)
    01:20:733 (7) - NC
    01:23:867 (5) - ^
    01:26:106 (5) - ^
    01:27:001 (8) - ^
    01:44:688 (5) - ^
    01:46:479 (1) -

    can you remap this slider? for remove that two reds.
    01:51:740 (4) - The object is in the blue. Move it into red ( 1/2 )
    02:02:822 (6) - NC
    02:16:927 (5) - ^
    02:21:180 (6) - ^
    02:22:076 (8) - Where is the rhythm you follow? D:
    02:28:121 (2) - Bad overlap D:
    02:32:822 (5) - NC
    02:46:255 (6) - ^
    03:27:001 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why you put jumps here D:
    03:32:374 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
    03:32:374 (6) - NC

    ._. only that
    Good luck :3
Topic Starter
dennischan

Groumiezi wrote:

[General]
    1. Who can fix it?
    This does not really need to be fixed because I use all my mp3 except on the sweet love diff
    1. The BG size is not 1024x768 or 1366x768 pixel
    Done
    1. Remove the "cute" from tags. I didn't found something cute on this map
    Done
    Blue is for done and red for not done

    [Easy]
    00:06:852 (2) - please fix the blanket
    00:10:882 (5) - ^
    00:41:330 (2) - Stack at 00:38:643 (3) (Slider head)
    00:55:658 (2,3) - This sliders bit worse and different. Try this :
    01:00:136 (3,4) - Spacing
    01:14:464 (1) - It's kinda ugly for me. please Change it into Wave slider
    01:22:971 (2,3) - Overlap changed all for easy

    [Normal]
    00:01:031 - 01:12:673 NO HITSOUND ANY YET?
    tried to change this but my weakest point is hitsounds~ can't really improve~~

    00:05:956 (5) - NC
    00:08:195 (10) - ^
    00:08:419 (1) - Remove NC
    00:08:867 (4) - Ugly slider. then you make this :
    00:11:777 (1) - finish
    00:49:389 (3,4,5) - You can do this. It's more beautiful
    01:14:240 - The kiai time start in 01:14:464 not 01:14:240.
    01:14:464 (1) - finish (slider head)
    01:20:733 (7) - NC
    01:23:867 (5) - ^
    01:26:106 (5) - ^
    01:27:001 (8) - ^
    01:44:688 (5) - ^
    01:46:479 (1) -

    can you remap this slider? for remove that two reds.
    01:51:740 (4) - The object is in the blue. Move it into red ( 1/2 )
    02:02:822 (6) - NC
    02:16:927 (5) - ^
    02:21:180 (6) - ^
    02:22:076 (8) - Where is the rhythm you follow? D:
    02:28:121 (2) - Bad overlap D:
    02:32:822 (5) - NC
    02:46:255 (6) - ^


    03:27:001 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why you put jumps here D:
    03:32:374 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
    03:32:374 (6) - NC

    I think my jumps are perfectly fine. It's just that I want to add something harder during kiai time and the jumps looked pretty good~

    ._. only that
    Good luck :3

Thanks for modding~~~
:) :D
DeletedUser_3611598
Hi~! from my queue!

[Sweet Love]
  • 00:56:553 (3,4) - remove that it overlaps lightly
    00:58:792 (2) - reduce some curve. it looks ugly ;w;
    00:58:344 (1,3) - overlap. maybe it is look like better :3
    01:08:195 (4,5,6) - distance seems strange
    01:16:255 (2,3,4) - ^
    01:19:837 (3,4,5,6) - ^

    [Normal Love]
    • 00:05:956 (1,2,3,4,5) - what do you think about this placement?
      00:09:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - distance
      00:33:270 (7) - move the second little square to (191,168) and move the square on tail to (289,247) for better blanket
      00:35:061 (1) - if you follow the above, move the square on tail to (256,320)
      00:38:419 (4,5) - overlap. it is look like better.
      00:45:583 (4) - NC
      00:50:733 - add circle
      01:01:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remove some circle and use some slider. it is hard ;w;
      01:19:837 (4) - NC
      01:20:733 (1) - remove NC
      01:24:315 (7) - end on 01:24:762. maybe this rhythm is better~
      02:01:479 (3,4) - too close
      02:04:837 (2) - reduce some curve. it looks ugly D:
      02:07:076 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - use some slider
      02:15:807 (4) - this slider should start on 02:15:583 and end on 02:16:703 for follow the vocal
      02:25:658 (5,1) - set to parallel
      02:29:688 (5,6) - too close. it is too confuse ;w;
      02:33:718 (5,1) - overlap
      02:38:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - resetting distance. too confuse..
      02:46:255 (1,2) - distance
      02:47:150 (4,5) - ^
      02:50:956 (5) - NC
      03:46:703 (6) - remove this circle and 03:46:815 (1) - start on 03:46:70
      03:53:419 (5) - NC
      03:57:001 (6) - NC
      03:57:897 (8,9) - distance
      04:02:822 (1) ~ 04:05:956 (12) - use some slider

      [Tough Love]
      • 00:04:613 (3,5) - make same shape
        00:18:718 (1,2) - try another pattern. maybe many players feel confuse ;w;
        00:26:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make same shape
        00:28:792 (9) - end on 00:29:240
        00:38:419 (5,6,7) - move to (80,160).
        00:50:061 (9,1) - overlap
        00:53:195 (7,8) - make same shape. it is ugly.
        01:20:733 - add circle
        01:26:777 (5) - NC
        01:59:688 (9) - move to (384,32) for symmetry of (7)
        02:00:135 (10,4) - overlap
        02:05:061 (3) - ohhhhh, it is pretty! :3
        02:07:299 (9,10,11) - distance
        02:09:986 (6,8) - make same shape
        02:22:971 (12,1) - too close
        02:24:762 (1) - this slider start on 02:24:986 for follow the vocal
        03:04:389 (3,4) - too close
        03:08:419 (2) - place elsewhere. it is confuse with 03:07:300 (4)
Atrue
Hello~
From m4m req

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
关掉gridsnap或者用更小的格子会让你的滑条变得更加美观
建议多去摸图,多去看图,现在的质量还不够。
啊。。摸了个wip。。看看摸的这样我也不好意思来问你要m4m了,如果有时间和兴趣就来mod吧,随时欢迎。
给一星,祝你成功!(ノ·ω·)ノ︵
[Sweet Love]
General
诶诶诶?后边怎么美丽。。
Beats
00:08:195 (1) - 减少这种1/2多往返在ez里面的出现
01:12:673 (1,2,3,4,1) - 连续的追二分拍在ez里面难了
[Normal Love]
General
怎么说呢。。还是感觉跟高难度想说的一样
三点,第一间距问题,很多间距没有整理好,虽然用的是0.7间距但是很多地方偏到0.5
第二节奏问题,这里节奏比高难度好些,不过还是需要仔细琢磨,而且有些地方节奏是难了,那种单note的1/4二连是尽量不能出现的,那不是能够出现在normal里面的东西
第三排版问题,00:45:359 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 比如这种超级线性的排列可以出现,但是太多了就会有一种无趣的感觉。。
[Notice][Tough Love]
General
嗯。。试着mod一下~
我不是很清楚这是什么难度,不过很多地方没有必要去采用不同的间距,这第一会有种不整齐的感觉,拉低了图本身的质量,第二,最根本的一点就是跳的太大导致了不该跳的时候出现了跳,就有一种异样的感觉。比如这里一上来就是一种不整齐的感觉(00:01:255 (2) )所以在排版上我不会说一些距离的问题了,但是这个问题是十分重要并且必须解决的。
Beats
00:06:852 (8) - 尾巴上是个长音,建议滑条从原滑条尾巴起带1/2拍,然后原滑条头用circle,还能够覆盖长白线上的鼓点,不过也可以直接跨过长白线直接拉长一点追求长音的感觉,那样的话就是纯跟vocal。
00:11:777 (3) - 拆分滑条为好,这样的跨过了好几个音很可惜,节奏过于缓
00:37:300 (3) - 适合滑条
01:16:255 (3) - 前边你在跟vocal,这里却在跟鼓
01:20:061 (7,8) - 处理长音的问题
01:23:419 (6) - 尤其是这里就会显得比较空
长音问题太多,我之后也就不再一一指出,请务必注意这个问题
02:05:061 (3) - 真的值得为了这样的滑条放弃节奏上的
02:15:359 (1,2,3) - 下vocal的话这三个note下错音了,再听听,我建议第一个音做个滑条
02:49:389 (1) - 从这个意义上来说这里我也不知道怎么下这里的节奏,不跟vocal是一个好办法。。总之以spinner来盖vocal是不明智的选择
02:54:762 (1) - 这段节奏还能抢救一下
另外kiai中间不要break,如果要的话也先停kiai
03:45:583 (1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 不明白这串连打是怎么来的

Placement
00:53:195 (7,8) - 着实不美观,我想说的是滑条的弧度尽量一致,尤其是这样很轻松就能对比到的地方。
01:20:061 (7,8) - 像这种地方blanket请做好,就是说判定线尽量在某个时刻与滑条内边相切
01:50:061 (1) - 有点莫名的stack。。摊开比较好
另外减少不明所以的滑条,奇形怪状并不能让人产生多大的乐趣,或者让你瞬间就明白这是个什么形状,什么意义,反而长滑条会在节奏上变水

Hitsound
控制音量,100%有点吵了

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .




STAR:(ノ·ω·)ノ︵
Topic Starter
dennischan
done Rapheal's mod, here:
I'll underline and red the things I didn't do and say why~~

[ Raphael ] wrote:

Hi~! from my queue!

[Sweet Love]
  • 00:56:553 (3,4) - remove that it overlaps lightly
    00:58:792 (2) - reduce some curve. it looks ugly ;w;
    00:58:344 (1,3) - overlap. maybe it is look like better :3
    01:08:195 (4,5,6) - distance seems strange
    01:16:255 (2,3,4) - ^
    01:19:837 (3,4,5,6) - ^

    [Normal Love]
    • 00:05:956 (1,2,3,4,5) - what do you think about this placement?
      00:09:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - distance
      00:33:270 (7) - move the second little square to (191,168) and move the square on tail to (289,247) for better blanket
      00:35:061 (1) - if you follow the above, move the square on tail to (256,320)
      00:38:419 (4,5) - overlap. it is look like better.
      00:45:583 (4) - NC
      00:50:733 - add circle
      01:01:927 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remove some circle and use some slider. it is hard ;w;
      01:19:837 (4) - NC
      01:20:733 (1) - remove NC
      01:24:315 (7) - end on 01:24:762. maybe this rhythm is better~
      02:01:479 (3,4) - too close
      02:04:837 (2) - reduce some curve. it looks ugly D:
      02:07:076 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - use some slider
      02:15:807 (4) - this slider should start on 02:15:583 and end on 02:16:703 for follow the vocal
      02:25:658 (5,1) - set to parallel
      02:29:688 (5,6) - too close. it is too confuse ;w;
      02:33:718 (5,1) - overlap
      02:38:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - resetting distance. too confuse..
      02:46:255 (1,2) - distance
      02:47:150 (4,5) - ^
      02:50:956 (5) - NC
      03:46:703 (6) - remove this circle and 03:46:815 (1) - start on 03:46:70
      03:53:419 (5) - NC
      03:57:001 (6) - NC
      03:57:897 (8,9) - distance
      04:02:822 (1) ~ 04:05:956 (12) - use some slider
      Didn't do this because I was trying to put a heart pattern here~

      [Tough Love]
      • 00:04:613 (3,5) - make same shape
        00:18:718 (1,2) - try another pattern. maybe many players feel confuse ;w;
        tried to do this, but I think I like the original one better~~
        00:26:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make same shape
        Sorry~ don't know what you mean
        00:28:792 (9) - end on 00:29:240
        00:38:419 (5,6,7) - move to (80,160).
        00:50:061 (9,1) - overlap
        00:53:195 (7,8) - make same shape. it is ugly.
        01:20:733 - add circle
        01:26:777 (5) - NC
        01:59:688 (9) - move to (384,32) for symmetry of (7)
        02:00:135 (10,4) - overlap
        02:05:061 (3) - ohhhhh, it is pretty! :3 Thanks :)
        02:07:299 (9,10,11) - distance
        02:09:986 (6,8) - make same shape
        Sorry, don't know what you mean~
        02:22:971 (12,1) - too close
        02:24:762 (1) - this slider start on 02:24:986 for follow the vocal
        03:04:389 (3,4) - too close
        03:08:419 (2) - place elsewhere. it is confuse with 03:07:300 (4)
Topic Starter
dennischan
thanks for everybody's mod~~~
Rizia
[Tough Love]
圖暫時來說不會亂得到那裡
感覺有點間距需要控制一下
例如00:09:986 (5,6,7) - , 5~6是1/1 所以應該會比6~7的隔距大
這樣會令玩家難讀
00:29:464 (1,2,3) - 同樣
00:12:897 (4,8) - 要重疊就疊好點吧
01:26:777 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - 不應該有連打
03:42:672 - 這裡停一停KIAI 到03:48:493 - 再開始

多下點功夫吧
整體來說
排列方面有點問題
有點粗糙 不夠工整
Good Luck >w<
Sanbyoururu
This is my first mod ever, I hope I can help you a bit. :3


Sweet Love:

Why is this only 90 secs? I understand hard diffs seem more fun to you, but you should also think of the people who want to play easy maps. I don't like how the other diffs are full length while this one isn't.

00:08:195 (1,2,3,4) - Is there a certain reason to increase the DS here and go back to 0,6 on 00:10:882 (5) ? I don't think there's any emphasis on there. It's an easy difficulty anyway, so you should be very careful with changing DS.
00:56:553 (3) - While ^ might still be appropriate, I think this one is over the top. There's no emphasis at all, and jumps really shouldn't be a thing in an easy diff.
00:56:553 (3,4) - Also, try to improve the blanketing here, it looks a bit weird.
01:12:673 (1,1,1,1) - I can see why you would want to increase the DS here, but this ist just too much for an easy diff. Stick to your usual DS or at least put them a bit closer together.
01:18:046 (1,2) - Why are these overlapping? Doesn't look good. Just stick to your 0,6 DS. o.o
01:21:180 (6,1,2) - ^ (Not exactly overlapping, but you might want to at least get a minimum of space between the notes)



Normal Love:

I don't really get your DS, to be honest. You start at 0,7 I think, but later on it's often at 0,8 or 1,0 or even 1,4 without apparent reasons... All in all, I don't think this is a good idea to have in a normal map. xp
Overall: I think this is pretty difficult for a normal map. Remember this is actually the only difficulty between easy and hard, so you might want to keep it simple.
Maybe you could go a bit easier with the red ticks?
Also, I'd prefer decreasing the SV and increasing the DS instead. There's a notable difference between how fast you have to move from circle to circle/on sliders, which isn't always easy to handle.


00:09:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Example of ^ . Maybe a slider in there could help.
00:38:419 (4,5) - Looks kinda ugly... Seeing how this is the only time in the whole song you use this pattern, I think you could just drop it and only put a circle instead of a slider.
00:42:225 (3,4,5,6,7) - 3 + 4 + 5 would make a great curved slider imo.
01:19:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I find this too cramped and not nice to look at. Increasing the DS (while decreasing the SV) could help, or you could just rearrange it, or something.
02:20:956 (1,2) - Blue lines in normal? Personally, I think thats too difficult, save hat stuff for hard diffs. You could turn it into a slider.
02:26:106 (1,2,3,4,1) - Again, I find these jumps too hard for normal. If you really insist on increasing the spacing there, at least make it a bit easier.
02:32:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same here, pretty tough for normal. Decrease DS, maybe putting a slider in there would also help.
02:36:404 (4,1) - I don't understand this jump at all. .- .
02:38:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, too tough for normal imo.
02:50:061 (3,4) - Another jump I don't get.
03:27:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - No, this is simply too hard for normal, especially after that pause. Actually, there's no need to put any jumps at all, but if you insist, at least make them smaller and arrange them like you did here: 03:32:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) .
03:35:844 (5) - Again, blue ticks? Nah...
03:37:636 (2) - ^
03:38:643 (5,6,7,8,9) - Too tough, no emphasis. Decrease DS.
03:45:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:55:210 (4) - Move to 382|272 for better blanketing.
04:03:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Ugh, how about some sliders in there?



Tough Love:

00:18:718 (1,2) - Avoid that overlap, also the blanketing didn't turn out so well.
01:07:076 (8) - Maybe make the curve a little gentler so the end doesn't overlap with the slider body? It looks pretty ugly imo. D:
03:07:300 (4) - ^ , more like 03:34:837 (4) .
01:55:658 (9) - to get that nice teardrop-shaped hole in the middle.
02:26:106 - Not sure if that weird shape is intentional, but why not make it a perfect circle? Would look and feel a lot smoother.
02:29:464 (5,6,7) - If these are supposed to be part of a heart, I think you might want to move them to the left a bit. Otherwise, it's shape is pretty weird. :'3
02:42:225 (1) - Uh, this looks kinda deformed. You might want to make it wider and less high to get a smoother heart shape. :3



Uh, that's it for my first mod I guess. Tough Love was pretty fun while Normal Love still needs some tuning imo. Also, as I said, I really think you shouldn't just cut corners with that easy diff like that. xp

I hope I could get everything across, but if there are questions, just PN me. :3
Good luck!
Topic Starter
dennischan
I'll just write my comments in blue

Sanbyoururu wrote:

This is my first mod ever, I hope I can help you a bit. :3


Sweet Love:

Why is this only 90 secs? I understand hard diffs seem more fun to you, but you should also think of the people who want to play easy maps. I don't like how the other diffs are full length while this one isn't.
( I think if I had mapped the whole thing, it would be too long for newbies~~ 4 minutes is for approved not for newbies usually~~)

00:08:195 (1,2,3,4) - Is there a certain reason to increase the DS here and go back to 0,6 on 00:10:882 (5) ? I don't think there's any emphasis on there. It's an easy difficulty anyway, so you should be very careful with changing DS. (changed)
00:56:553 (3) - While ^ might still be appropriate, I think this one is over the top. There's no emphasis at all, and jumps really shouldn't be a thing in an easy diff. (modders recommended this. changed)
00:56:553 (3,4) - Also, try to improve the blanketing here, it looks a bit weird. (changed)
01:12:673 (1,1,1,1) - I can see why you would want to increase the DS here, but this ist just too much for an easy diff. Stick to your usual DS or at least put them a bit closer together. (changed from 1.1 DS to 0.9 DS)
01:18:046 (1,2) - Why are these overlapping? Doesn't look good. Just stick to your 0,6 DS. o.o (changed)
01:21:180 (6,1,2) - ^ (Not exactly overlapping, but you might want to at least get a minimum of space between the notes) (changed)



Normal Love:

I don't really get your DS, to be honest. You start at 0,7 I think, but later on it's often at 0,8 or 1,0 or even 1,4 without apparent reasons... All in all, I don't think this is a good idea to have in a normal map. xp (tried to change)
Overall: I think this is pretty difficult for a normal map. Remember this is actually the only difficulty between easy and hard, so you might want to keep it simple.
Maybe you could go a bit easier with the red ticks?
Also, I'd prefer decreasing the SV and increasing the DS instead. There's a notable difference between how fast you have to move from circle to circle/on sliders, which isn't always easy to handle. (no, sorry~ I think maps with high SV are cool)


00:09:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Example of ^ . Maybe a slider in there could help. (fixed)
00:38:419 (4,5) - Looks kinda ugly... Seeing how this is the only time in the whole song you use this pattern, I think you could just drop it and only put a circle instead of a slider. (fixed)
00:42:225 (3,4,5,6,7) - 3 + 4 + 5 would make a great curved slider imo. (fixed)
01:19:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I find this too cramped and not nice to look at. Increasing the DS (while decreasing the SV) could help, or you could just rearrange it, or something. (fixed)
02:20:956 (1,2) - Blue lines in normal? Personally, I think thats too difficult, save hat stuff for hard diffs. You could turn it into a slider. (this was originally a tough (hard diff) before a modder said it was too easy and wanted me to change the name of this diff to normal. So there's still some hard stuff left) (changed)
02:26:106 (1,2,3,4,1) - Again, I find these jumps too hard for normal. If you really insist on increasing the spacing there, at least make it a bit easier. (sorry, keeping this. having jumps here is fun)
02:32:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same here, pretty tough for normal. Decrease DS, maybe putting a slider in there would also help. (fixed)
02:36:404 (4,1) - I don't understand this jump at all. .- . (fixed)
02:38:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, too tough for normal imo. (fixed)
02:50:061 (3,4) - Another jump I don't get. (simply a pattern. wasn't meant to be a jump)(fixed)
03:27:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - No, this is simply too hard for normal, especially after that pause. Actually, there's no need to put any jumps at all, but if you insist, at least make them smaller and arrange them like you did here: 03:32:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) . (fixed)
03:35:844 (5) - Again, blue ticks? Nah... (kept, sorry, this is in kiai time so I think a little harder notes are ok)
03:37:636 (2) - ^ (^ same )
03:38:643 (5,6,7,8,9) - Too tough, no emphasis. Decrease DS. (fixed)
03:45:583 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ (didn't fix)
03:55:210 (4) - Move to 382|272 for better blanketing. (done)
04:03:270 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Ugh, how about some sliders in there? (okay)



Tough Love:

00:18:718 (1,2) - Avoid that overlap, also the blanketing didn't turn out so well. (I think this is nice~~)
01:07:076 (8) - Maybe make the curve a little gentler so the end doesn't overlap with the slider body? It looks pretty ugly imo. D:
03:07:300 (4) - ^ , more like 03:34:837 (4) .
01:55:658 (9) - to get that nice teardrop-shaped hole in the middle. (fixed)
02:26:106 - Not sure if that weird shape is intentional, but why not make it a perfect circle? Would look and feel a lot smoother. (intentional, sorry, the DS increases bit by bit here~~)
02:29:464 (5,6,7) - If these are supposed to be part of a heart, I think you might want to move them to the left a bit. Otherwise, it's shape is pretty weird. :'3 (no, not a heart~)
02:42:225 (1) - Uh, this looks kinda deformed. You might want to make it wider and less high to get a smoother heart shape. :3 (fixed)



Uh, that's it for my first mod I guess. Tough Love was pretty fun while Normal Love still needs some tuning imo. Also, as I said, I really think you shouldn't just cut corners with that easy diff like that. xp

I hope I could get everything across, but if there are questions, just PN me. :3
Good luck!
Sanbyoururu
Sorry to keep you waiting so long. ;_ ;
Rechecked your map, mainly the parts I pointed out before that you agreed to change. Good job!

Easy is looking pretty good now imo, but this note 00:57:449 (4) - got a bit out of place. Blanket would be much nicer at 324|130. You could even try to blanket it with both the 2 and 3 sliders, but you'd probably have to slightly rearrange them for that. Your choice. :3

Normal feels way more consistent now! Some bits still seem a bit tough to me, but since you'd like to keep it like that, it's probably ok. :3
02:21:404 (7,8,9) - Maybe it's possible to rotate 9 a bit and go for a nice symmetrical Ü-shape?
02:37:076 (2,3) - Hm, I think slightly altering 2's curve and blanketing 3 would look pretty nice here, kinda 03:52:076 (1) - Not sure if you'd like to keep it like that for distance reasons, but visually it would certainly be better at 203|223. :3

Nothing to grump about in Tough. :3
The small changes turned out nice. Fun to play, this is still my favorite diff. :>

Well done! As far as I'm concerned, this mapset pretty good now. Even though I generally dislike vocaloid and usually don't enjoy playing a song like this, I had fun, so I really wish you good luck with this one! :3
Mafumafu
Hi!
From a wrong pm request! XD
Thank you for giving me a chance to mod your map!
Maybe this is a m4m but if you are busy or you think my mod is of little use, you can ignore this :D
First time mod, so sorry if it disturbs!
I’ll use Chinese if I think I couldn’t express my ideas clearly. Sorry for this.
[General]
1. Video and Audio: the quality of 128kbps mp3is little low. Is it possible to use 192kbps in its place? What’s more, the video quality is not very good but the file size is LARGE! (压缩一下换个800*600的更好!) But it is alright if you really don’t have one.
2. I was greatly frightened at the sight of 1.3 slider velocity with 0.6x distance spacing. Okay, well, it may be alright. 
3. About Grid Snap: I’d strongly suggest you cancel the grid snap, now that your grids are large, which influences 0.6x distance spacing a lot, and it influence blankets a lot. (This is the most important!) Plz do recheck the blankets after turning off the grid snap! 
4. Beatmap could be more interesting if you use slider multiplier during the Kiai time!
5. About hitsound:In vocal part I’d suggest soft sample set, while in kiai part I’d suggest normal.
6. You can use Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J !
[Sweet Love]
General:
0. In most cases of Easy diff, mappers should obey the distance spacing. Plz open AiMod to check the distance spacing.
1. The slider velocity spread can be improved. For Easy Diff, I'd suggest 1.1 or 1.2 with such a BPM. Also, for Tough Love, I'd suggest 1.7 or 1.8
2. 00:08:195 (1) – this repeat slider is good, but at 00:08:867- I’d suggest a slider here. (这是一个长音,而这里却只有滑条末端,感觉空了啊!)
3. 00:31:479 (3) –I’d suggest a repeat slider to go with vocal since the other instrumental elements are not outstanding. And plz blanket well!(简单难度的话有其他乐器的时候跟其他乐器,不过vocal部分还是尽量跟人声比较好.)
Such like:

4. 00:38:643 (3) –Also plz blanket well
Such like:
(You can use approach circle to make sure you blanket well!)

5. 00:42:225 (3,4,5) – 00:45:807 (3,4) – slider? Plz fit the rhythm
6. 00:48:046 (2) – This slider is not appropriate. 这是两个音,长滑条感觉不太合适呢w~
7. 00:52:971 (3) – Plz blanket well and I think repeat twice is good. (Follow the vocal)
8. 01:14:464 (1) – I think this slider’s shape and position should be changed. (和01:14:016 (1) –重叠上了感觉不太好看,然后也没有和下面的note blanket好)
9. kiai time 部分可以试试2 4 Clap?
10. 01:18:046 (1,2) – not a beautiful pattern I think 这里的排列不太好看感觉。
这样试试?:

5正好可以和6的滑条头组成blanket(当然这不一定是最好的排列啦!)
同样这里01:21:628 (1) – 也可以改进一下.
11. 01:27:001 (3) –Add a finish at the end?
[Normal Love]
Sorry for late!
1. 00:01:479 (3) - I think it should be moved to 00:01:703 and add a hit circle at 00:01:479 .
2. 00:08:867 (4) - This slider should end at 00:09:315
3. 00:49:389 (3,4,5,6) - Trying to make them be the same shape, so as to make this pattern more beautiful:D
4. 00:52:524 (4) - The slider shape seems a bit weird, consider improve it.
5. 00:56:553 (5,6,7) - These notes doesn't fit in with the vocal. (考虑长音的时候用滑条,短音用打击圈。)
6. 02:26:106 (1,2,3,4) - 尽管跳可以体现音乐或节奏,但在Normal难度里,应尽量避免跳,在Hard Insane及以上级别使用跳更好。
7. From 02:42:225 (1) to 02:56:106 (8) - Consider reduce the volume of hitsounds here! They are a bit noisy >.<
8. 03:27:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - inappropriate DS
9. 03:35:733 (5,6,7) - Normal 难度不推荐连打
10. 03:37:524 (1,2,3) - same as above.
11. 04:09:986 (1) - end at 04:13:568?
[Tough Love]
This Diff is much better than the other diffs! A good diff!
1. 01:12:673 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Using finish and clap on each first note of a combo is better, I think.
2. 01:43:568 (3) - I think it should end at 01:44:016 instead of 01:43:904
3. 01:45:807 (9) - same as above.
4. 01:47:150 (3) - same as above.
(I guess these slider length problem result from the adjustment you did about slider velocity. So plz recheck all the sliders after changing slider velocity.)
5. 01:48:270 (4,7) - same as above. (类似问题不再阐述。)
6. 02:39:315 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - hard to read(not a good flow I think.)
7. 03:30:583 (3,4) - not a good shape? Try to move them further away from each other.
============End===================
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
dennischan
Uploaded the map, did some changes on the spacing and the timing, and deleted some unused files
RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. BG is invisible without video (maybe, do you change the filename of BG?)
  2. BG file should be not png but jpg
  3. video: aspect ratio is not correct. I recommend to fix it
  4. the following is necessary for tags?
    hatsune miku
    append
  5. how about adding "Suzunosuke" for tags?
  6. I suggest to remove Letterbox in breaks
  7. Kiai time suggetion:
    01:14:464~01:28:121- end at 01:28:792
    02:28:344~03:01:031- start at 02:27:897 and end at 02:42:225
    03:26:553~03:42:897- remove
    03:44:464~03:48:494- remove
    03:48:494~04:09:538- add
  8. preview point suggetion: 01:14:464
[Sweet Love]
  1. I suggest to decrease SV and increase DS. by doing this, you can avoid several overlaps
  2. you should do mapping until the end of song
  3. 01:09:091 (6,1) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
  4. 01:14:016 (1,1) - avoid overlap
[Normal Love]
  1. I suggest to increase DS to 1.0x. by doing this, you can avoid several overlaps and do mapping more clearly
  2. 00:33:270 (7,1) - swap NC
  3. 00:46:703 (5) - I prefer slider: 00:46:703~00:47:150
  4. 01:04:389 (7) - ^: 01:04:389~01:05:061
  5. 01:12:673 (1,2,3) - this overlap is not good
  6. 01:20:733 (4) - decrease 1 reverse
  7. 02:18:494- add a note
  8. 02:21:404 (7) - NC
  9. 02:30:583 (7) - end at 02:31:031
  10. 02:48:270- add a note
  11. 02:48:494 (7) - slider: 02:48:494~02:48:941
  12. 02:51:852 (9) - end at 02:52:300
  13. 02:55:434 (6) - I prefer to delete
  14. 02:56:553 (1) - end at 03:00:136
  15. 03:00:583~03:27:001- too long break time
  16. 03:41:330 (1) - don't suit to music
  17. 04:01:031 (6,7,8) - avoid overlap
[Tough Love]
  1. it is better to add "collab" in diff-name
mike6649
  1. 00:00:136~00:07:747- increase hitsound volume more
  2. 00:06:404 (7) - NC
  3. 00:13:121 (5,8) - avoid overlap
  4. 00:18:718 (1,2) - very hard to distinguish. you sould remap while avioding overlap
  5. 01:16:255 (3,4) - avoid overlap
  6. 01:24:762- add a note
  7. 01:28:009 (1) - end at 01:28:792
dennischan(?)
  1. 00:40:882 (4,5,6,7,8) - it is better to conform DS
  2. 00:52:524- add a note
  3. 00:54:091 (9,11) - I prefer Ctrl+G
  4. 01:55:658 (9) - you can make more symmetrically
    SPOILER

    424,316,115658,2,0,B|368:296|344:284|288:208|380:132|472:208|416:284|396:296|
  5. 02:28:344 (3,4) - avoid overlap
  6. 02:37:524 (9,10) - ^
  7. 02:49:389 (1) - end at 02:50:733
  8. 03:30:583 (3,4) - avoid overlap
  9. 03:48:606~04:09:538 In this part, I prefer normal-hitsound
  10. 03:56:330 (4,6,7) - avoid overlap
irvinchan
  1. 03:07:300 (4) - it is better to increase edge's angle
  2. 03:09:091 (5,6) - make symmetrically with 03:08:643 (3,4) -
  3. 03:12:673- add a note
if you have any question about my modding, feel free to send me PM
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
dennischan
I did pretty most everything that RandomEffect suggested, except the things highlighted in red~
My commts are in blue

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. BG is invisible without video (maybe, do you change the filename of BG?)
    BG file should be not png but jpg
    I don't know how to change, sorry
  2. video: aspect ratio is not correct. I recommend to fix it
  3. the following is necessary for tags?
    hatsune miku
    append
  4. how about adding "Suzunosuke" for tags?
  5. I suggest to remove Letterbox in breaks
    Kiai time suggetion:
    01:14:464~01:28:121- end at 01:28:792
    02:28:344~03:01:031- start at 02:27:897 and end at 02:42:225
    03:26:553~03:42:897- remove
    03:44:464~03:48:494- remove
    03:48:494~04:09:538- add

    Didn't do this, because I think the last part of this song is the recap, which is a little more soft, and also my kiai times are the parts which the singer sounds most urgent
  6. preview point suggetion: 01:14:464
[Sweet Love]
  1. I suggest to decrease SV and increase DS. by doing this, you can avoid several overlaps
  2. you should do mapping until the end of song
  3. 01:09:091 (6,1) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
  4. 01:14:016 (1,1) - avoid overlap
[Normal Love]
  1. I suggest to increase DS to 1.0x. by doing this, you can avoid several overlaps and do mapping more clearly
  2. 00:33:270 (7,1) - swap NC
  3. 00:46:703 (5) - I prefer slider: 00:46:703~00:47:150
  4. 01:04:389 (7) - ^: 01:04:389~01:05:061
  5. 01:12:673 (1,2,3) - this overlap is not good
  6. 01:20:733 (4) - decrease 1 reverse
  7. 02:18:494- add a note
  8. 02:21:404 (7) - NC
  9. 02:30:583 (7) - end at 02:31:031
  10. 02:48:270- add a note
  11. 02:48:494 (7) - slider: 02:48:494~02:48:941
  12. 02:51:852 (9) - end at 02:52:300
  13. 02:55:434 (6) - I prefer to delete
  14. 02:56:553 (1) - end at 03:00:136
    03:00:583~03:27:001- too long break time
    I only map vocal parts in normal~
  15. 03:41:330 (1) - don't suit to music
  16. 04:01:031 (6,7,8) - avoid overlap
[Tough Love]
it is better to add "collab" in diff-name
Didn't do as collab love sounds bad
mike6649
  1. 00:00:136~00:07:747- increase hitsound volume more
  2. 00:06:404 (7) - NC
  3. 00:13:121 (5,8) - avoid overlap
  4. 00:18:718 (1,2) - very hard to distinguish. you sould remap while avioding overlap
  5. 01:16:255 (3,4) - avoid overlap
  6. 01:24:762- add a note
  7. 01:28:009 (1) - end at 01:28:792
dennischan(?)
  1. 00:40:882 (4,5,6,7,8) - it is better to conform DS
  2. 00:52:524- add a note
  3. 00:54:091 (9,11) - I prefer Ctrl+G
  4. 01:55:658 (9) - you can make more symmetrically
    SPOILER

    424,316,115658,2,0,B|368:296|344:284|288:208|380:132|472:208|416:284|396:296|
  5. 02:28:344 (3,4) - avoid overlap
  6. 02:37:524 (9,10) - ^
  7. 02:49:389 (1) - end at 02:50:733
  8. 03:30:583 (3,4) - avoid overlap
  9. 03:48:606~04:09:538 In this part, I prefer normal-hitsound
  10. 03:56:330 (4,6,7) - avoid overlap
irvinchan
  1. 03:07:300 (4) - it is better to increase edge's angle
  2. 03:09:091 (5,6) - make symmetrically with 03:08:643 (3,4) -
  3. 03:12:673- add a note
if you have any question about my modding, feel free to send me PM
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
dennischan
Also, I increased the DS in sweet love as you said to 0.8x, and decreased the SV to 1.1x
I increased the DS in normal love by 0.1 to 0.8x
Also, I'll mod Regraz's map once I get time (busy preparing for public exams)
I'll mod regraz's map in 1 or 2 days (i hope)

About Regraz's mod, I changed almost everything in the Sweet and Normal diffs,I even changed the SV and the DS and the slider length problems are fixed, I changed the SV back to normal
[Tough Love]
This Diff is much better than the other diffs! A good diff!
1. 01:12:673 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Using finish and clap on each first note of a combo is better, I think. done

2. 01:43:568 (3) - I think it should end at 01:44:016 instead of 01:43:904
3. 01:45:807 (9) - same as above.
4. 01:47:150 (3) - same as above.
(I guess these slider length problem result from the adjustment you did about slider velocity. So plz recheck all the sliders after changing slider velocity.)
5. 01:48:270 (4,7) - same as above. (类似问题不再阐述。)


6. 02:39:315 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - hard to read(not a good flow I think.)This is called irregular flow, and it makes the map more interesting and fun
7. 03:30:583 (3,4) - not a good shape? Try to move them further away from each other.done
Winek
From my modding queue!

It's not like i don't ;like the song or anything, I just can't seem to see many error, + it already got modded quite a bunch, so i can't really see any error..
I'm really sorry. But as I see the beatmap, i think it's ready to get ranked.
Awaken
Mod From my queue

  • [General]
  1. Stack Leniency最好维持0.7 没有特殊原因的话
  2. Romanised Artist中Hitoshizuku和P的空格去掉 "HitoshizukuP"
  3. 按现在的rule,ez和hd的难度名都不适合,可以改成"Easy Love"和"Hard Love"

    [Sweet Love]
  4. 00:08:195 (1,2) - 节奏略怪 我建议改成1/2
  5. 00:43:568 这里后面的音效部分音量调大 然后clap加多点
  6. 这没做完....?
  7. 整体就是音效加的太少了

    [Normal Love]
  8. 00:44:016 (2) - (308,64)和(348,64)的两个描点没有必要
  9. 整体节奏下的有点奇怪..在副歌部分应该塞的满一点..用大量的自创节奏是哪般

    [Tough Love]
  10. 00:11:777 (3) - 这个滑条带过太多音了,拆开

    纵观整体来看
    最大的问题是排列,排列下的十分没有整体性和布局感,使得看起来就像随便乱放的物件一样
    然后是节奏问题,节奏下的也略过单调,几乎跟的都是vocal,然后有时候vocal也没跟完...
    音效你没下多少啊似乎...
That's all
Good Luck
Topic Starter
dennischan

Awaken wrote:

Mod From my queue

  • [General]
  1. Stack Leniency最好维持0.7 没有特殊原因的话 I changed it~~
  2. Romanised Artist中Hitoshizuku和P的空格去掉 "HitoshizukuP" OK
  3. 按现在的rule,ez和hd的难度名都不适合,可以改成"Easy Love"和"Hard Love" I remember that the rule stated that the diff names needed to be intuitive, easy to understand, but it is not necessary to change all diff names into easy,normal hard...SO I think that my current diff names are ok

    [Sweet Love]
  4. 00:08:195 (1,2) - 节奏略怪 我建议改成1/2 changed
  5. 00:43:568 这里后面的音效部分音量调大 然后clap加多点 改了
  6. 这没做完....? 做完了...
  7. 整体就是音效加的太少了改了

    [Normal Love]
  8. 00:44:016 (2) - (308,64)和(348,64)的两个描点没有必要 did that
  9. 整体节奏下的有点奇怪..在副歌部分应该塞的满一点..用大量的自创节奏是哪般

    [Tough Love]
  10. 00:11:777 (3) - 这个滑条带过太多音了,拆开 changed

    纵观整体来看
    最大的问题是排列,排列下的十分没有整体性和布局感,使得看起来就像随便乱放的物件一样
    然后是节奏问题,节奏下的也略过单调,几乎跟的都是vocal,然后有时候vocal也没跟完...
    音效你没下多少啊似乎...
That's all
Good Luck
BigWilly
[Sweet Love]

01:12:673 (1,1,1,1) - You may not want these all the be a new combo. It might become confusing for some people.

Gl with the rest of this Map

[Normal Love]

00:44:016 (2) - Slider Looks Ugly, consider changing
00:59:240 (4) - Same again
01:21:628 (1) - Slider Start too late. Move the begging to forward and keep the end in the same place!

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
dennischan

Feverie wrote:

[Sweet Love]

01:12:673 (1,1,1,1) - You may not want these all the be a new combo. It might become confusing for some people. (not really confusing...)

Gl with the rest of this Map

[Normal Love]

00:44:016 (2) - Slider Looks Ugly, consider changing (I think this looks nice)
00:59:240 (4) - Same again (changed)
01:21:628 (1) - Slider Start too late. Move the begging to forward and keep the end in the same place! (changed)

Good Luck!
Xiaolin
From my queue~ (I'm sorry that I'm late. T^T)
[General]
You finished easy(Sweet Love) ?
Combo colours are wrong. :c
But I'll give you the Combo Colours. c:
Combo Colours
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,255
Combo2 : 0,136,136
Combo3 : 191,191,0
Combo4 : 255,145,91
Combo5 : 128,64,64
Combo6 : 145,0,0
Combo7 : 124,73,3
[Sweet Love]
00:08:195 -1 revers arrow.
00:11:777 -Why spinner?
[Normal Love]
00:11:777 -Remove spinner and add random notes.
02:56:553 -Make the spinner small till 02:59:799
[Tough Love]
04:12:672 -Make the spinner small till 04:13:680

GL~
Bara-
Hi, here are the diffs with proper hitsounds, I think I didn't miss any, since there are no Finishes in the song, AFAIK

Get it here!
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