Nymph wrote:

[Insane]
01:45:255 (1) - 說實話這貨開25%聽都不在1/4上 還不如删了只要slider 233 是啊

沒啥好抓的啊 請允許我用悲傷的表情吐槽一下白婭在這BG里那殘念的表情 ORZ

S o a p wrote:

insane
01:09:545 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 这六个好像能对齐 故意的
03:20:134 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 你这图不对齐是个梗嘛._. 是的
02:42:016 - 其实这里好像可以map 不了

hard
01:45:340 (1) - 这里可以改成一个note，在红线上 不了


ez
01:09:545 (2) - 没对称 好的，改对称了

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Insane]
00:07:158 (3,4,5,6,1) - 感觉这个flow不是很好 我觉得还好吧
00:19:773 (1) - 为什么不弄成1/8的hold滑条然后接到大白线一个长滑条 不弄了，太复杂
00:54:716 (3) - 感觉没拉好 好的

[Hard]
03:22:180 (4,1) - note叠在滑条尾巴？ 什么意思，不过这里间距稍微坑一下下

[Normal]
00:37:840 (2) - 拉好?.. 好的
03:14:680 (1,2,3,4,5) - 倒是normal你就不一个个nc了?...至少要两个nc一下吧 NC spam

[Easy]
03:14:680 (1,2,3,4) - 同Normal

CloudSplash16 wrote:

As requested..
Mostly just suggestions, feel free to ignore stuff >< Things that I think are important are bold.

[Easy]
01:19:090 (4) - Add clap on head? ok
01:22:159 (3) - I think it's better not to curve this and use a red slider node instead. It goes well with the straight sliders before it. http://puu.sh/4qIm7.jpg Also at 02:38:522 (3) - ok
01:59:659 (3) - Move 4th slider point down a bit to make a nicer curve. Try (314,142)? ok
02:52:840 (1,2) - I would try to blanket this nicely. Though I guess it doesn't really matter >< ok
03:25:248 (4,1,2) - :/ this flow is weird to me. Maybe try: http://puu.sh/4qINk.jpg ok
03:50:134 (1,2,3) - The 3 consecutive offbeats is too hard for beginners imo. Try a simpler rhythm: http://puu.sh/4qIX9.jpg (I know this doesn't cover all the beats you originally had mapped, but I think this still follows the music reasonably well while being simple enough for beginners to play) no,I don't want to change this.Otherwise this easy is too easy

[Normal]
01:20:454 (1,2,3) - Better to not be linear. Try: http://puu.sh/4qJdG.jpg ? I don't think so
01:41:931 - Why mapped this part? I think it's better to be consistent with the other diffs. ok,unmapped this
02:18:749 (3,1) - Blanket maybe? ok
02:25:909 (2,3) - For flow, rotate (2) -10degrees and move to (236,274). Move (3) to (410,287).ok
03:09:204 (1,2) - Try not to have circle under end of slider like this in Normal diff.add NC instead

[Hard]
00:48:409 (5,1,2,3,4) - I think this would be more fun ^^: http://puu.sh/4qJPN.jpg Stack (1,3) (2,4) nice idea
01:11:590 (4,1) - These feel too close. My suggestion would be to select 01:11:931 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) and rotate 4 degrees then stack head of 01:11:931 (1) - with head of 01:11:079 (3) - I think this is ok
02:11:590 (3) - Since drum is strong here, I would make a jump by doing Ctrl+G No,flow will be worse
02:58:977 (2) - Ctrl+G. It's better to have jump between (2,1) than (1,2), because of accented drum don't chang this but move 1 to make a jump
Awesome

[Insane]
Widescreen support -> 1? ok
00:35:113 (1) - I think Ctrl+G works here too, since the series of jumps before the slider seem to have a counter-clockwise rotation feeling. Just my opinion >< no,I keep this
It seems like every time you make a new mapset, it's harder than your previous one xD xDDDD

Great map ^^
Good luck, and Star! Thank you~~

yf_bmp wrote:

Hiiiiiii
from in-game request
[Insane]
00:05:625 (4,5,6) - Ctrl+H? 感觉差不多
00:06:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 换成类似这样的遮挡?没什么意义啊，flow也一般

SPOILER

00:17:386 (1,2,3,4) - DS稍稍拉开? 故意坑坑的，没事这个spacing
00:54:204 (1,3) - blanket? 这是故意的
01:01:704 (3,4) - ^ 不了
01:21:818 (5,1) - Stack? 如果stack起来，打的时候看起来非常难看，那块凸出来的，你可以试试，所以就改成manaul stack了
01:41:761 - 01:45:341 - 可以拜些note 直接break感觉有点突然 作为掉血段也不错 不摆了没鼓点，掉血段良心？？
02:22:841 (1,2) - blanketok
02:23:693 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 赞一个
02:38:182 (5,1) - stack?
03:13:466 (2,3) - blanket?
03:16:043 (1,1) - finish 觉得吵降低音量试试 不了

[Hard]
00:02:215 (1) - 头clap 好的，漏音效和音效统一所有难度都check了
00:26:590 (3) - 尾clap
00:53:181 (2,3) - finish
01:40:227 (5,1) - 物件间距不好看 太近 放远了点
02:09:545 (2) - finish
02:10:227 (5) - 头finish
03:16:043 (1,1) -

[Easy]
00:04:943 (2) - clap
00:08:181 (3) - x:508 y:176 no
00:46:704 (3) - 尾finish
03:16:043 (2,4) -
03:41:270 (4) - 红点左移两格 好
03:50:986 (2) - 新手不容易掌握节奏 这还好

[Normal]
00:28:806 (2) - 改成一拍 这几个节奏的没改了
00:43:977 (5,6) - 弄成两拍滑条
00:46:704 (4,5) - ↑
00:46:874 (5) - 尾finish好
00:49:431 (4) - 改成单note好
01:14:659 (1,2,3) - 包好
01:53:181 (1) - 尾clap好
01:55:909 (1,2) - 1note + 一个1拍滑条?
01:54:204 (2,3) - blanket 好的
02:05:795 (5) - 单note 好的
02:10:227 (2) - 两拍折返 no
02:21:988 (4,1) - blanket 好
02:22:840 (1,2,3,4) - 看下间距? 间距可以啊
02:32:897 (3) - 提前半拍+延长半拍no
02:55:909 (2,3) - 处理好这两个好
03:12:272 (1) - 延长半拍no
03:16:043 (2,4) - 不加finish了
03:25:248 (1) - 折返处去掉finish不了，这个所有diff都这样
03:46:043 (3,4) - blanket 好的

有些物件可以摆出一定规律 这样还能更美观些 恩~

先这些了 祝好运~
mod有些仓促..

mtbbsben wrote:

From PM request My queue of Normal Mod

All the comments are suggestions.

[General]
神のみぞ知るセカイ is not the source? 这个没有来源，曲子是神知贺旋风管家合作单曲，没在动画里出现
发现BG里面总有一个人脸很残念 orz

[Insane]
00:54:204 (1,2,3,4) - This is better.这个就不blanket了，感觉不顺妈的我自己都没放好，你看得懂的
03:13:295 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 这里换了排列
01:38:693 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 前面1pc打的时候坑了我一把 现在还好吧
02:02:215 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 一波单点太疯狂 疯狂就疯狂吧;w;

[Hard]
00:23:863 (4) - 和00:24:204 (1) - 平行 觉得已经够平行了
02:53:352 (2) - 这个note我建议还是拿出来不要藏在下面我想知道理由，不过我觉得藏不藏没什么区别啊

[Normal]
00:50:454 (1,2,3,4,1) - 感觉奇怪反正就是奇怪 怎么奇怪了啊，我感觉不出来啊
03:16:043 (2,3,4) - 不NC么 不NC了，spam

[Easy]
03:16:043 (2,3,4) - ^，干脆放近一点么算了 近 有点坑新手啊