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Minami Kuribayashi - ZERO!! (Short Size) [Taiko]

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qoot8123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018年2月20日 at 上午 09:05:23

Artist: Minami Kuribayashi
Title: ZERO!! (Short Size)
Source: はたらく魔王さま!
Tags: Opening WHITE FOX The Devil is a Part-Timer! Hataraku Maou-sama! はたらくまおうさま!
BPM: 182
Filesize: 3010kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.27 stars, 226 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (3.9 stars, 534 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.66 stars, 132 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.74 stars, 320 notes)
  5. Oni (3.49 stars, 418 notes)
Download: Minami Kuribayashi - ZERO!! (Short Size)
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Mp3 file and BG is from scanter's mapset

はたらく魔王さま! OP

Kantan 100% done
Futsuu 100% done
Muzukashii 100%done
Oni 100% done
Inner Oni 100% done
bossandy
神mapping speed 神mapper
JUDYDANNY
2nd~ >w< っ★
Dainesl
3rd, and this time with a mod post!

Kantan

00:57:033 - Maybe put a note here?

01:06:264 - ^

Futsuu

00:56:868 (112) - Maybe this would be better as a d?

01:06:264 (137) - Maybe this would be better as a k?

01:27:363 (1) - In my opinion this sounds better as a K but you can leave it as a D if you wish

Muzukashii

00:45:165 (173,174) - Maybe you could swap these two around?

01:05:934 (261,262) - ^

Oni

00:59:505 (296,297) - Maybe you could swap them around and then make the D a d?

01:15:330 (387,388) - Maybe you could make these two both d's?

Inner Oni

00:21:346 (113) - I don't know why but this seems better as a k

00:53:901 (314,315,316,317,318,319,320) - Maybe this could be kkkdkdk pattern since the kkk fits the sound more

01:25:055 (1) - Maybe this could be a k as well!

That's all I have to say, really. Really really nice mapset here! Hopefully it'll be ranked really soon :)
mingmichael
qoooooooooot >w<)b here your mods that you requested to me~

Kantan
  1. 00:57:527 (5) - move this mote 1/1 forward. to 00:57:198 -
  2. 01:06:429 - ; 01:07:747 - add dons at them all. i added they because to follow the beat there. if you didn't put any notes there, there's quite weird, because there's something missing notes there ;w;

Futsuu
  1. 00:33:791 (65) - kat here. i changed this to make it consistent like 00:39:066 (76) - which is kat << they have a same part of song
  2. 00:36:758 (71) - kat? because it's hear too monotonious d d d d d. so, i gave a variation note at the middle there, so it'll be d d k d d
  3. 00:45:659 (89) - kat? to make it same like the next note 00:47:308 (92,93,94) - d k d. so it'll be same pattern
  4. if i were you, i will use finisher at 00:50:604 (97,103) - , not at 00:51:923 (100) - . and changed 00:51:593 (99) - to be kat. but these are just suggestions XD
  5. 01:10:220 (147) - finisher here (big kat). because i saw you use finisher too at 00:59:670 (121) - . and i think, they have same part of song. but the different is at the first part, the sound becomes stronger. but at the second part, the sound becomes lower. but the still have a same part of song. so, how about use the same note (i mean use finisher too) there?
  6. 01:24:890 (1) - kat here? the vocal sound increases at here from 01:24:231 (1) - . but, if you want to follow the pattern like the previous part at 01:21:593 (171,1) - , you can ignore this. but, i suggest to use kat at 01:24:890 (1) - . much better~

Muzukashii
  1. 00:17:308 (59) - kat and 00:19:121 (67,68) - don kat here. i changed this to keep consistent with the beat. Same like the previous parts, that you use "kat" to follow the beat. look at here~ from 00:14:011 - until 00:19:451 - http://puu.sh/4iMAG.jpg
  2. 00:48:462 (187) - normal note and 00:50:604 (197) - finisher here << i changed it to make the better accents for the finisher sounds that you wanted to use. so the finishers are at 00:47:967 - ; 00:49:121 - ,and 00:50:604 - :D

Oni
  1. add dons at 00:04:945 - and 00:05:027 - << to follow the drums. you followed the drum right at there, didn't you? that's great~ but, the drum sounds start from 00:04:945 - , not at 00:05:110 - ;w;
  2. 00:17:308 (73) - kat here. the reason is almost same like muzukashii diff. it's to follow the beat sounds, like 00:12:692 (48,53,55,60,63) - which you used kats there to follow the beat~
  3. 00:19:121 (82,83) - don kat. the reason is same like ^
  4. 00:48:462 (233) - small note and 00:50:604 (246) - big note. the reason same like muzukashii diff :)
  5. 00:51:923 (251,253) - remove the finishers and change to be normal notes. because, there aren't any finisher or high pitch sounds there ;w; and it's not fit well use finisher too at there
  6. 00:53:984 (264) - move to 00:53:819 - and change to be kat. so it'll be kkk triplet there << give much stronger sound than you use a triplet at 00:53:901 (263,264,265) -
  7. 01:12:857 (376,377) - dons here? so it'll be ddk triplet there
  8. 01:23:571 (1) - finisher?

Inner Oni
  1. add dons at 00:04:945 - and 00:05:027 - . the reason is same like Oni. because the drum sounds start at 00:04:945 - , not at 00:05:110 -
  2. 00:16:154 (81) - kat here? because it has a same pitch sound (vocal sound) like 00:15:989 (80) -
  3. 00:17:143 (87,88) - don kat here. to follow the beat~ (kat is for the beat)
  4. 00:19:121 (101,102) - don kat. the reason is same like ^
  5. 00:26:868 (151) - finisher here? because the finsiher sound appears at here
  6. 00:31:896 - kat here and 00:31:978 - don << to follow the stream sound at that part. it's weird if you didn't put any notes there ;w; like something missing at there...
  7. 00:48:462 (282) - normal note and 00:50:604 (295) - finisher here. same like muzu and oni diff
  8. 00:52:253 (305) - remove finisher. there's no reason use finisher at here. same like Oni diff
  9. 00:53:407 (315,316,317) - GREAT~! XD good for inner diff~!
  10. 01:05:110 (408) - finisher here? the new part starts again at here.
  11. 01:17:060 (493) - kat here?
  12. 01:22:582 (3) - kat here? to make it consistent like the pattern there d d k k d d k k d d at 01:22:253 - until 01:23:736 - << using 1/2beat snap divisor to see the pattern

qoot is always the best D: XD
goodluck qoot~!! >w<)b
Topic Starter
qoot8123
Fixed some~
thanks for your mods! :)
HabiHolic
Konpaku Sariel
Oni
00:01:813 - k
00:05:192 - delete 00:05:522 - 00:05:687 - add d, 00:05:769 - d
00:08:736 - k
00:10:055 - add k
00:15:742 - add d
00:19:615 - 00:19:698 - add d, 00:19:780 - k
00:22:747 - d
00:30:330 - d
00:58:764 - d, 00:58:846 - move to 00:58:929 -
00:58:929 - k
01:00:000 - d
01:00:000 - d
01:17:473 - d
01:27:363 - K

Inner Oni
00:05:522 - 00:05:687 - add d, 00:05:769 - d
00:08:736 - k
00:42:527 - d
00:56:538 - d
00:57:363 - k
00:57:527 - d
01:27:363 - K
Topic Starter
qoot8123

Konpaku Sariel wrote:

Oni
00:01:813 - k
00:05:192 - delete 00:05:522 - 00:05:687 - add d, 00:05:769 - d
00:08:736 - k
00:10:055 - add k
00:15:742 - add d
00:19:615 - 00:19:698 - add d, 00:19:780 - k
00:22:747 - d
00:30:330 - d
00:58:764 - d, 00:58:846 - move to 00:58:929 -
00:58:929 - k
01:00:000 - d
01:00:000 - d
01:17:473 - d
01:27:363 - K

Inner Oni
00:05:522 - 00:05:687 - add d, 00:05:769 - d
00:08:736 - k
00:42:527 - d
00:56:538 - d
00:57:363 - k
00:57:527 - d
01:27:363 - K

fixed some~
thanks for mod~ :)
Nardoxyribonucleic
Mod request~

[Kantan]

00:29:505 (30) k ?
00:40:055 (41) k
00:46:648 (48) k ?

[Futsuu]

00:57:033 (114) d ?
01:07:582 (142) ^

[Muzukashii]

00:10:879 (32) move to 00:10:549 ?
00:36:758 (139) move to 00:36:593 - and use k ?
01:00:824 (240,241) k d ?

[Oni]

00:05:440 (16,17,18) kkd or dkd ?
00:46:648 (223) k ?
00:51:923 (252,253,254,255) k d k k (follow the vocal?)
01:12:857 (377,378,379) kkd ?

[Inner Oni]

00:20:275 (106) remove?
00:46:648 (267) k ?
00:50:110 (289) k ?
00:53:242 (312,313) d K ?
01:05:440 (409) k
01:20:357 add d ?

Good Luck qoot~ :D
Topic Starter
qoot8123

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Mod request~

[Kantan]

00:29:505 (30) k ?
00:40:055 (41) k
00:46:648 (48) k ?

[Futsuu]

00:57:033 (114) d ?
01:07:582 (142) ^

[Muzukashii]

00:10:879 (32) move to 00:10:549 ?
00:36:758 (139) move to 00:36:593 - and use k ?
01:00:824 (240,241) k d ?

[Oni]

00:05:440 (16,17,18) kkd or dkd ?
00:46:648 (223) k ?
00:51:923 (252,253,254,255) k d k k (follow the vocal?)
01:12:857 (377,378,379) kkd ?

[Inner Oni]

00:20:275 (106) remove?
00:46:648 (267) k ?
00:50:110 (289) k ?
00:53:242 (312,313) d K ?
01:05:440 (409) k
01:20:357 add d ?

Good Luck qoot~ :D

Thanks for your mod~ :)
DakeDekaane
Hi, sorry for late, but here's my mod c:

[General]
Nothing.

[Inner Oni]
01:12:363 (458,459,460) - How about making this a kkd pattern to fit with vocals as you've been doing in the difficulty.

[Oni]
00:10:797 (40) - How about moving this to 00:10:467 and making the new triple ddd, I think it feels better for drums.
00:53:242 - I'd suggest to use a rhythm like this, it matches better with the guitar and somehow could feel more natural due beginning in a downbeat.

01:26:703 - How about this? I feel a bit weird having to hit that triple before the big don, also it fits nicely.


[Muzukashii]
00:31:648 - How about adding a don here, it'd fit nicely with the bass.
00:46:154 (177) - Move this to 00:46:484? To keep consistency in your kat for this part.
00:51:923 (202) - How about moving this 1/2 earlier and using a kat instead, to match with vocals?

[Futsuu]
00:02:802 - You could add a don here to follow the drums better.
00:05:440 - And maybe add a kat here for same reason as above.
00:57:857 (116) - You could remove this, the parts of vocals would accentuat even more imo.
01:03:956 - Maybe a don here, using syncopation here would play nice for drums.
01:09:560 (147,148) - How about moving both 1/2 beat later, yes, they are on vocals, but having gaps like this in a Futsuu feels a bit weird as players
would expect uniform rhythms. Also you could add a note in 01:09:890 if you don't want to move them.

[Kantan]
01:00:989 - As you're following mostly vocals on kiai, you could add a note here, this 3 beats gap feels a bit weird.
01:26:868 (1) - How about moving this 1/2 later, it would fit better.

That'd be all from my part, nice mapset overall, good luck <:
Topic Starter
qoot8123

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, sorry for late, but here's my mod c:

[General]
Nothing.

[Inner Oni]
01:12:363 (458,459,460) - How about making this a kkd pattern to fit with vocals as you've been doing in the difficulty.

[Oni]
00:10:797 (40) - How about moving this to 00:10:467 and making the new triple ddd, I think it feels better for drums.
00:53:242 - I'd suggest to use a rhythm like this, it matches better with the guitar and somehow could feel more natural due beginning in a downbeat.

01:26:703 - How about this? I feel a bit weird having to hit that triple before the big don, also it fits nicely.


[Muzukashii]
00:31:648 - How about adding a don here, it'd fit nicely with the bass.
00:46:154 (177) - Move this to 00:46:484? To keep consistency in your kat for this part.
00:51:923 (202) - How about moving this 1/2 earlier and using a kat instead, to match with vocals?

[Futsuu]
00:02:802 - You could add a don here to follow the drums better.
00:05:440 - And maybe add a kat here for same reason as above.
00:57:857 (116) - You could remove this, the parts of vocals would accentuat even more imo.
01:03:956 - Maybe a don here, using syncopation here would play nice for drums.
01:09:560 (147,148) - How about moving both 1/2 beat later, yes, they are on vocals, but having gaps like this in a Futsuu feels a bit weird as players
would expect uniform rhythms. Also you could add a note in 01:09:890 if you don't want to move them.

[Kantan]
01:00:989 - As you're following mostly vocals on kiai, you could add a note here, this 3 beats gap feels a bit weird.
01:26:868 (1) - How about moving this 1/2 later, it would fit better.

That'd be all from my part, nice mapset overall, good luck <:
almost fixed~
thanks for your mod~ :)
KantoKun
Random mod~

[Kantan]


  • not thing

    need more note , take it 2 star

    so Nice Kantan!

[Futsuu]


  • 01:15:659 (162) - suggest : D

[Mukashiizu]


  • 00:03:626 (8) - remove
    00:26:044 (96) - move to 00:25:879 - ?
    00:35:110 (133) - d
    00:50:934 (198) - k
    00:01:813 (4) - over map

[Oni]


  • 00:01:813 (4) - over map
    00:03:626 (10,11) - stream here
    00:18:462 - add d
    00:53:407 - add note
    01:06:099 (338,339) - why 2 k ?
    01:24:890 (1) - if follow vocal , k

[Inner Oni]


  • 00:01:813 (4) - over map
    00:03:626 (10,11) - stream here
    00:05:027 - add d
    nice lol

nice map ;w;
GL
Topic Starter
qoot8123

kantokun wrote:

Random mod~

[Kantan]


  • not thing

    need more note , take it 2 star

    so Nice Kantan!

[Futsuu]


  • 01:15:659 (162) - suggest : D

[Mukashiizu]


  • 00:03:626 (8) - remove
    00:26:044 (96) - move to 00:25:879 - ?
    00:35:110 (133) - d
    00:50:934 (198) - k
    00:01:813 (4) - over map

[Oni]


  • 00:01:813 (4) - over map
    00:03:626 (10,11) - stream here
    00:18:462 - add d
    00:53:407 - add note
    01:06:099 (338,339) - why 2 k ?
    01:24:890 (1) - if follow vocal , k

[Inner Oni]


  • 00:01:813 (4) - over map
    00:03:626 (10,11) - stream here
    00:05:027 - add d
    nice lol

nice map ;w;
GL

fixed some~
thanks~ :D
mancuso_JM_
Hi! Sorry for the delay once again :(.. I was a bit busy with school lately

[General:]

  1. Tags: You can maybe add Opening here.
  2. Make sure to disable the Widescreen Support (in all diffs.). Because it is completely useless.
[Kantan:]

  1. 00:20:110 (19) - Use a kat here instead (? I think it'll make a better effect between vocals and the BGM.
  2. 00:20:934 (20) - Move this 1/1 back instead, vocals are acting here and drums sounds higher than 00:20:934 - definetly.
  3. 00:41:374 (42) - Move this one 1/1 back as well, and make this a kat instead. It'll remark the instrumental much better in my opinion (actually is not following anything really well I have to say)
  4. 01:00:495 (8) - Remove this note maybe (? I think a 4/1 rest moment here will be a good thing for new players, really.
  5. 01:07:747 (15,16,17) - Actually I think this pattern sounds a bit weird comparing with the music. You can maybe move (16) 1/1 back, or remove it entirely (in addition this pattern become repetitive, and as I said this don't remark the music really well).
  6. 01:23:571 (1) - Add a finisher here to remark the music change.
  7. 01:26:868 (1) - This sounds weird actually and it is not following the music in a very good way. I recommend you to move this one 1/2 forward, I think it won't be a complicated pattern for newbies, so you should try this.
- Not bad, but I think you could work a bit more in the structure of your patterns, actually those 2/1 3-plets becomes pretty repetitive and sometimes don't follow the music in a correct way.

[Futsuu:]

  1. 00:02:308 - 00:04:945 (x-x) - Try adding notes in these places, I find them coherent with the difficulty of the map and with the music ofc. Give it a try, please.
  2. 00:20:110 (39) - Hmm.. Maybe a finisher in this note it'll remark the vocals and drums at the same time.
  3. 00:30:165 (61) - Move this note 1/2 back and then add a note in 00:30:330 - . It'll follow the music on a better way definetly.
  4. 01:11:044 (154) - If I were you, I'd move this note 1/1 forward. I don't like a lot how it sounds where it is placed actually.
  5. 01:23:571 (1) - Finisher as I said you in Kantan (?
  6. 01:25:549 (3,4,5) - Use d d k instead, it'll follow better the higher and lower pitches in the music I think.
- You focused a lot on follow the 2-4 White ticks, for that reason you couldn't find a lot of rhythm variation. I think you should find some other variation, because actually those ''kats'' patterns become pretty repetitive.
Anyway, this diff. is not bad.


[Muzukashii:]

  1. 00:02:308 - 00:04:945 (x - x) - Try adding notes in these places as I told you in Futsuu, they'll follow the music in a good way. If I were you, I'd try using dons in this difficulty.
  2. 00:05:604 (11) - If you do the thing mentioned above, I think you can remove this note because it becomes a bit useless.
  3. 00:53:736 (x) - Add a don here, and make the following note a don too, for a better rhythmical pattern and flow.
  4. 00:54:890 (213,214,215,216) - Hmm.. this sounds a bit weird to me, try doing something like this instead
  5. 01:10:549 (279,280,281,282) - This pattern sounds weird as well, remove (279) and make a d d k in the following pattern for a better rhythm.
  6. 01:12:363 (287) - Use a don here instead, this kat sounds pretty high comparing it with the music.
  7. 01:23:571 (1) - You know.. Finisher (?
  8. 01:25:055 (x) - This sounds really empty, you're missing a note here I think. So, try adding a don please.
  9. 01:27:198 (1) - This note is not following the music in a good way, and provide a bad effect in the following big don. So, for a better sound effect, remove this note.
- I think sometimes the rhythm becomes weird.. but oh well. Try to check the things pointed out in my mod, and try to check the diff. in general to see if you can find some other ''weird'' rhythm.

[Oni:]

  1. 00:03:709 (x) - Add a don here (?
  2. 00:11:703 (43,44,45,46) - Use d k k d instead, definetly (44) sounds higher than (43) and (46).
  3. 00:15:659 (64,65,66,67) - I think you misplaced the 1/4 pattern here, because the sound over the blue tick is in 00:15:742 -. So, move (66) to this point instead.
  4. 00:19:615 (x) - Add a kat here to emphasize the drums.
  5. 00:59:341 (299,300) - k d instead (?
  6. 01:16:978 - 01:17:060 (x-x) - Listening to drums, I think a pair of dons are necessary. Give it a try please.
  7. 01:27:198 (2,3) - As I explained in Muzu, remove (2) and then use a big don in (3) instead of a big kat.
[Inner Oni:]

  1. 00:03:709 (x) - Add a don here, because the drum sound is really notable here.
  2. 00:05:027 (x) - (^)
  3. 01:22:582 (3) - Use a kat here instead.
  4. 01:23:571 (1) - Add a finisher here as I said in the other diffs.
  5. 01:27:115 (1,2,3) - Meh.. As I said before, remove (1,2) and use a big don in (3) instead.
Well, that's all.. I think Kantan, Futsuu and Muzu could imporve a bit more.
I think your other map is better than this one (maybe is just me xD).
Best of luck with this, qoot! :)
Topic Starter
qoot8123

mancuso_JM_ wrote:

Hi! Sorry for the delay once again :(.. I was a bit busy with school lately

[General:]

  1. Tags: You can maybe add Opening here.
  2. Make sure to disable the Widescreen Support (in all diffs.). Because it is completely useless.
[Kantan:]

  1. 00:20:110 (19) - Use a kat here instead (? I think it'll make a better effect between vocals and the BGM.
  2. 00:20:934 (20) - Move this 1/1 back instead, vocals are acting here and drums sounds higher than 00:20:934 - definetly.
  3. 00:41:374 (42) - Move this one 1/1 back as well, and make this a kat instead. It'll remark the instrumental much better in my opinion (actually is not following anything really well I have to say)
  4. 01:00:495 (8) - Remove this note maybe (? I think a 4/1 rest moment here will be a good thing for new players, really.
  5. 01:07:747 (15,16,17) - Actually I think this pattern sounds a bit weird comparing with the music. You can maybe move (16) 1/1 back, or remove it entirely (in addition this pattern become repetitive, and as I said this don't remark the music really well).
  6. 01:23:571 (1) - Add a finisher here to remark the music change.
  7. 01:26:868 (1) - This sounds weird actually and it is not following the music in a very good way. I recommend you to move this one 1/2 forward, I think it won't be a complicated pattern for newbies, so you should try this.
- Not bad, but I think you could work a bit more in the structure of your patterns, actually those 2/1 3-plets becomes pretty repetitive and sometimes don't follow the music in a correct way.

[Futsuu:]

  1. 00:02:308 - 00:04:945 (x-x) - Try adding notes in these places, I find them coherent with the difficulty of the map and with the music ofc. Give it a try, please.
  2. 00:20:110 (39) - Hmm.. Maybe a finisher in this note it'll remark the vocals and drums at the same time.
  3. 00:30:165 (61) - Move this note 1/2 back and then add a note in 00:30:330 - . It'll follow the music on a better way definetly.
  4. 01:11:044 (154) - If I were you, I'd move this note 1/1 forward. I don't like a lot how it sounds where it is placed actually.
  5. 01:23:571 (1) - Finisher as I said you in Kantan (?
  6. 01:25:549 (3,4,5) - Use d d k instead, it'll follow better the higher and lower pitches in the music I think.
- You focused a lot on follow the 2-4 White ticks, for that reason you couldn't find a lot of rhythm variation. I think you should find some other variation, because actually those ''kats'' patterns become pretty repetitive.
Anyway, this diff. is not bad.


[Muzukashii:]

  1. 00:02:308 - 00:04:945 (x - x) - Try adding notes in these places as I told you in Futsuu, they'll follow the music in a good way. If I were you, I'd try using dons in this difficulty.
  2. 00:05:604 (11) - If you do the thing mentioned above, I think you can remove this note because it becomes a bit useless.
  3. 00:53:736 (x) - Add a don here, and make the following note a don too, for a better rhythmical pattern and flow.
  4. 00:54:890 (213,214,215,216) - Hmm.. this sounds a bit weird to me, try doing something like this instead
  5. 01:10:549 (279,280,281,282) - This pattern sounds weird as well, remove (279) and make a d d k in the following pattern for a better rhythm.
  6. 01:12:363 (287) - Use a don here instead, this kat sounds pretty high comparing it with the music.
  7. 01:23:571 (1) - You know.. Finisher (?
  8. 01:25:055 (x) - This sounds really empty, you're missing a note here I think. So, try adding a don please.
  9. 01:27:198 (1) - This note is not following the music in a good way, and provide a bad effect in the following big don. So, for a better sound effect, remove this note.
- I think sometimes the rhythm becomes weird.. but oh well. Try to check the things pointed out in my mod, and try to check the diff. in general to see if you can find some other ''weird'' rhythm.

[Oni:]

  1. 00:03:709 (x) - Add a don here (?
  2. 00:11:703 (43,44,45,46) - Use d k k d instead, definetly (44) sounds higher than (43) and (46). i kept it,because 00:14:341 (59,60,61,62) - i mapped d d k d here
  3. 00:15:659 (64,65,66,67) - I think you misplaced the 1/4 pattern here, because the sound over the blue tick is in 00:15:742 -. So, move (66) to this point instead.
  4. 00:19:615 (x) - Add a kat here to emphasize the drums.
  5. 00:59:341 (299,300) - k d instead (?
  6. 01:16:978 - 01:17:060 (x-x) - Listening to drums, I think a pair of dons are necessary. Give it a try please.
  7. 01:27:198 (2,3) - As I explained in Muzu, remove (2) and then use a big don in (3) instead of a big kat.
[Inner Oni:]

  1. 00:03:709 (x) - Add a don here, because the drum sound is really notable here.
  2. 00:05:027 (x) - (^)
  3. 01:22:582 (3) - Use a kat here instead. also kept,because i follow the guitar sound
  4. 01:23:571 (1) - Add a finisher here as I said in the other diffs.
  5. 01:27:115 (1,2,3) - Meh.. As I said before, remove (1,2) and use a big don in (3) instead.
Well, that's all.. I think Kantan, Futsuu and Muzu could imporve a bit more.
I think your other map is better than this one (maybe is just me xD).
Best of luck with this, qoot! :)

I remapped muzu diff . and kantan diff, i'll try to add some patterns :)
Really thanks for your mod~ :)
-byakuya-
希望能ranked(超好聽的)
JUDYDANNY
Hi(´◉◞౪◟◉) Sorry to late :?

I cant't find the " ZERO!! (TV Size)


Should rename to ZERO!! (Short Size).
[Kantan]

  • I think 1/2 double seems not bad, It has enough rest.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:07:088 - change to normal to unify other diffs?
  2. About the part from 01:00:165 - to 01:04:121 - . Seems a little breaking spread colors, but Its not great. seems better as singlediff.
    Try to focus more vocal rhythm?
    1. 01:01:813 - how about move to 01:00:824 - ?
    2. 01:02:143 - change to don,and..↓
    3. 01:02:308 - how about move to 01:02:802 - and chagne to k?
  3. 01:05:440 - add don to unify the quantity with 00:54:890 - .
  4. 01:14:341 - add don?
  5. 01:16:154 - , 01:17:967 - (to avoid the long parttern) remove and 01:15:989 - add k, 01:16:319 - add k?
    • - I think you want to avoid the high quantity... but 4-beat is clear and seems airly with plays imo..
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:48:791 (91,92,93) - d-K-d is on purpose?
  2. 01:15:495 - remove...?
[Oni]
  1. 00:37:088 - change to don seems better with flow imo because 1st kkd appearance is kiai(latter half) and it works 1/2 rhythm well too.
  2. 00:39:231 - how about removing there? seems a bit busy with calmer imo.
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:18:874 - ,00:19:121 - add kat,don to make a consistent with 00:13:599 - ~ hihat?
  2. 00:26:456 - add...d? I was worried, but seems a bit bored 1/4 triple only there. try to add 5plet anywhere?
  3. 00:45:000 - change to kat to follow the snare variation and 00:44:835 - add don too? seems better with plays imo ww.
  4. 01:06:923 (392,393) - k seems better with vocal and accompaniment imo.
Call me back after solved them (¦3[___]
Topic Starter
qoot8123
@JUDYDANNY

Futsuu:

all fixed except 01:14:341 - because of vocal.

Muzu:

00:48:791 (91,92,93) -yes, but i will remove the finisher on 00:50:604 - (Including other difficulties)

Oni:

all fixed

Inner Oni:

all fixed

thanks for mod! :)
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