1. Hard Style (4.96 stars, 274 notes)
2. Normal Style (4.49 stars, 139 notes)
3. Redesign Style (4.97 stars, 376 notes)
4. ztrot's Easy Style (1.84 stars, 98 notes)

supergarlic wrote:

that is way too hard

try not to use 1/4 snap that much

Vexed wrote:

supergarlic wrote:

that is way too hard

try not to use 1/4 snap that much

For your perusal. I hope you enjoy. Seriously, i hope you like it. :]

Teara wrote:

Vexed wrote:

supergarlic wrote:

that is way too hard

try not to use 1/4 snap that much

For your perusal. I hope you enjoy. Seriously, i hope you like it. :]

You asked me to play it and give my thoughts on it.

Well here it is

Overall impression: I loved most of it.

00:03:03 (4) - a newish player will almost always probably miss this < not supposed to be in a normal map IMO, but I like it lol This is a very easy note to hit though.
00:40:03 (4,5,6) - for a normal map, a little hard? ( on second thought, the short repeating sliders are also hard )
00:45:14 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - < this part doesnt follow the song to well for me, but this is just a personal opinion Hmm. I think it goes well. Fits with over style of the way the map, as in the original difficulty by Garlic was made.
01:19:47 (4) - < I don't like this slider, also another personal thing issue . That is a must have .



Hard Style, loved it the jumps, and the way the map is lay out is very nice, well done!

supergarlic wrote:

Vexed:
00:07:14 (1) - rather have no jumps for a normal >< Fixed.
00:10:47 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - its ok but why have tight spacing here I thought it looked better than the alternative. Ease of play. Clean look. This i believe, is also the only place i have made a stream of sorts with only half beats.
00:12:47 (1,2,3) - this sounds bad and is pretty dam hard for normalgoers to read these 1/4 repeats. Fixed.
00:24:70 (1,2,3) - no 3 consecutive 1/4 plox. I was so hopeing this would be ok. Out of the whole map, i really liked this the most for some reason. Fixed.
00:40:03 (4,5,6) - ^ Fixed.
00:43:92 (9) - spacing Fixed.
01:00:47 (1) - i guess this is ok but id rather not have jumps in a normal. Ty.
01:04:70 (2,3,4) - eww 3 consecutive 1/4's Fixed.
01:21:59 (4,5,6) - ^ Fixed.
01:24:59 (8,9) - move this all 1/4 forward Tried this, but it just doesn't seem right. Maybe take one more look at it?

lots of 1/4 sliders and overlapping sliders but no biggies (sort of) :]

supergarlic wrote:

you can do it i guess

i dislike your map sorry :<

Shinxyn wrote:

Anyways, I shall mod~! annoy you with a long post! (sorry!)

Vexed- @_@ its... hard to follow, probably cuz of the song
00:08:14 (4) - since this beat is on the 1/4 (blue tick) the clap that followed the whites ticks doesn't belong here!~ just remove? Done.
01:29:36 - I personally think the spinner could end at 01:29:36, since its silenced anyways (might wanna silence the spinning too) Done, kinda
Nazi-
00:13:36 (3) - painfully loud... coming from the soft sections before.. Fixed.
00:14:03 - lower the volume another tick or two please Nah.
00:42:70 (1) - I say remove this clap, the finish is fine on its own Can't, It's really not there to finish.
01:16:92 (5,6,7,1) - up a tick, so 5 aligns with 3, and 6,7 is under fading notes Done, but erm @ another part.
Redo the break~ Yes.
honestly, I don't think you need the claps at all for the map. :p

Hard- ~_~ the 1/4 beats are so confusing! its just the song though
erm... sorta Nazi if unless you meant to keep things like that-
00:32:14 (2,3,4,5,6) - move this back 1/4 to match the music better (or at least the stronger beat that stands out more)
^ to back that up, it sounds like 00:35:59 (1)'s combo
00:39:25 (6,1,2,3,4) - move this back 1/4 to match stronger points in music as well? it might mess up the design a bit, but going around in a circle a few times isn't that fun anyways?
01:21:80 - I think the volume drop was too much at once, maybe do the multiple volume things if you want
01:29:36 - same thing as Vexed

Redesign- Technically... fine, quite fun (though I can only play with test x_x)
Only suggestions thus far (since your not done)-
Increase overall diff by 1~ (fun fun)
Keep hitsounds minimal, the map+music doesn't need that much hitsounds it seems (then again, I'm not so creative with hitsounds as you are)
00:56:95 - lower volume by 2 ticks? (maybe add increasing volume effect!)

minyeob wrote:

[Vexed]
00:43:36 (3) ~ 00:54:92 (8)
How about this one?
[attachment=0:bf0f8]Oriental ST8 - Shoreline (supergarlic) [Vexed SoftServe].osu[/attachment:bf0f8]
I'm so sorry if this stuff didn't help you

[Redesigned]
00:44:50 (7,1,2)-> Make these 1/4 beat faster and stack with 00:44:17 (5,6)

Star! orz