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Toraboruta-P - Kokoro [Taiko]

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Konpaku Sariel
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2018년 9월 21일 금요일 at 오후 4:16:40

Artist: Toraboruta-P
Title: Kokoro
Source: EXIT TUNES PRESENTS Vocalostar feat. 初音ミク
Tags: Vocaloid,Kagamine Rin,TravoltaP
BPM: 140
Filesize: 6966kb
Play Time: 04:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (1.91 stars, 504 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (4.8 stars, 1366 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.35 stars, 284 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.73 stars, 697 notes)
  5. Oni (3.21 stars, 1026 notes)
Download: Toraboruta-P - Kokoro
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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mod please!
Sanjenin Nagi
IRC Moding
14:09 Sanjenin Nagi: 01:27:419 (21) - finish
14:09 Sanjenin Nagi: 01:27:526 (22) - DEL
14:10 Konpaku Sariel: 오옹
14:10 Sanjenin Nagi: 01:28:062 (25) - del Clap sound and add finish
14:10 Sanjenin Nagi: 01:28:169 (26) - del
14:10 Sanjenin Nagi: 01:28:276 (26,27,28) - kkd
14:10 Sanjenin Nagi: 26~28은 선택사항
14:11 Sanjenin Nagi: 몰론 다 선택사항이지만.
14:11 Konpaku Sariel: 엌
14:11 Konpaku Sariel: 그부분 다음에 나오는 24빗 섞인 기차는 어때요?
14:12 Sanjenin Nagi: 01:34:919 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) -
14:12 Sanjenin Nagi: 안맞는거같음
14:12 Sanjenin Nagi: 하나줄이면 01:34:919 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) -
14:13 Konpaku Sariel: 음
14:13 Konpaku Sariel: 거기있는 24빗을 뺄까요?
14:13 Sanjenin Nagi: 24빗보다는
14:13 Sanjenin Nagi: 드럼에 맞추시려는거같은데
14:13 Sanjenin Nagi: 별로인거같음
14:13 Konpaku Sariel: 드럼말고 다른거에 맞춰요?
14:14 Sanjenin Nagi: 드럼에하실거면
14:14 Sanjenin Nagi: 저것보다는
14:16 Sanjenin Nagi: 아 그리고
14:16 Sanjenin Nagi: 사운드 100%안됨
14:17 Konpaku Sariel: ??
14:17 Konpaku Sariel: 좀 줄여야되요?
14:17 Sanjenin Nagi: 노말60% 소프트 80%
14:17 Sanjenin Nagi: 몰론 노말을 80%써도되긴하지만.
14:19 Konpaku Sariel: 음
14:19 Konpaku Sariel: 다른건 없어요?
14:19 Sanjenin Nagi: 계속 맞춰보는데
14:19 Sanjenin Nagi: 01:34:116 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) -
14:19 Sanjenin Nagi: 이거 그냥 별로임.
14:19 Sanjenin Nagi: 뭔가 살짝 때진느낌
14:20 Sanjenin Nagi: 지우고 다시 맞춰볼께요
14:20 Konpaku Sariel: 넹
14:21 Sanjenin Nagi: http://puu.sh/3U5Sx.jpg
14:21 Sanjenin Nagi: 01:34:116 (1) - 부터.
14:21 Sanjenin Nagi: 01:35:987 (22) -
14:22 Sanjenin Nagi: 그냥 추천만함.
14:22 Konpaku Sariel: 어 저거 32빗 아니에요?!
14:22 Sanjenin Nagi: 예?
14:22 Sanjenin Nagi: 1/8인데.
14:22 Konpaku Sariel: 아
14:22 Sanjenin Nagi: 1/4 1/8
14:22 Konpaku Sariel: 1/8 = 32빗
14:23 Sanjenin Nagi: 흠.
14:23 Sanjenin Nagi: 16빗이죠.
14:23 Konpaku Sariel: 음 근데 1/8 넣어도 랭크가 될까요?[-
14:23 Sanjenin Nagi: 노트 빈공간 노트 이게 8분음표 길이인데
14:23 Konpaku Sariel: ?
14:24 Sanjenin Nagi: 에이 칠수있어요
14:24 Konpaku Sariel: 엌
14:24 Konpaku Sariel: 일단 저 사진 저장해둬야겠다
14:25 Sanjenin Nagi: 그러니깐 선택사항이라니까염.
14:26 Konpaku Sariel: 혹시 모르니까요 ㅋㅋ
14:26 Sanjenin Nagi: 02:03:415 (1,2,3,4,5) -
14:26 Sanjenin Nagi: 지우는걸 권장
14:26 Sanjenin Nagi: 02:03:415 (1) - 부터가 바이올린 시작이라 조용해지는부분.
14:27 Sanjenin Nagi: 1부분을 D로
14:27 Sanjenin Nagi: d
14:27 Sanjenin Nagi: 빈공간은 알아서 넣으실 수 있을거라 생각
14:30 Sanjenin Nagi: 여기까지 oni
14:31 *Sanjenin Nagi is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/284158 Kagamine Rin - Kokoro [Muzukasii]]
14:32 Konpaku Sariel: 무즙은 고칠곳 많을듯 ㄷㄷ
14:32 Sanjenin Nagi: 01:13:705 (38,40,42) -
14:32 Sanjenin Nagi: K 추천
14:33 Konpaku Sariel: 큰 캇요?
14:33 Sanjenin Nagi: ㅇ
14:33 Sanjenin Nagi: 안하는게 나을거같기도하고
14:33 Sanjenin Nagi: 01:27:419 (38,42) -
14:33 Sanjenin Nagi: 여긴 K
14:33 Sanjenin Nagi: 01:34:062 (1) - del
14:36 Sanjenin Nagi: http://puu.sh/3U6mI.jpg
14:36 Sanjenin Nagi: 추천
14:36 Konpaku Sariel: 으음
14:36 Konpaku Sariel: bpm140이니까 5연타는 넣어도 괜찮겠죠?
14:37 Konpaku Sariel: 전에 bpm185짜리에 넣었다가 빼라는 모딩 들어온적이 ㅋㅋ
14:37 Konpaku Sariel: 근데 저곳이 어떤부분이에요?
14:37 Sanjenin Nagi: 삭제하란부분
14:37 Konpaku Sariel: 아항
14:37 Sanjenin Nagi: 01:34:276 (1) -
14:37 Sanjenin Nagi: 여기서부터시작
14:37 Sanjenin Nagi: 하지만 전 이너오니라
14:38 Sanjenin Nagi: 195에도 연타넣었음요.
14:38 Sanjenin Nagi: 히히히히.
14:38 Konpaku Sariel: 엌ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
14:38 Sanjenin Nagi: 제작자가 풀콤쳤으니
14:38 Sanjenin Nagi: 반박불가능
14:38 Konpaku Sariel: 아 오니 말고 무즙에서
14:38 Sanjenin Nagi: 무즙에서는
14:38 Sanjenin Nagi: ㄷㄷㅋ 같은건
14:38 Sanjenin Nagi: 넣죠
14:38 Sanjenin Nagi: ㄷㄷㄷㄷㅋ라거나.
14:38 Konpaku Sariel: 그정도는 넣어도 되요?
14:39 Sanjenin Nagi: 네 괜찮은걸로암
14:39 Konpaku Sariel: 오옹
14:40 Sanjenin Nagi: 02:36:629 (27,28,29,30) -
14:40 Sanjenin Nagi: 이런것도 넣어놓으시고선 뭘 안될것처럼 :>
14:40 Konpaku Sariel: ㅋㅋㅋㅋ
14:41 Sanjenin Nagi: 03:12:644 (69,70,71) -
14:41 Sanjenin Nagi: 별로좋지않음
14:41 Sanjenin Nagi: 03:12:751 (70) -
14:41 Konpaku Sariel: 슬라이드로 다 밀어버릴까요?
14:41 Sanjenin Nagi: 이걸없에시거나
14:41 Sanjenin Nagi: 슬라이드를없에서 노트를 넣으시거나
14:42 Konpaku Sariel: 아 밀어버리는건 그닥 안좋을듯
14:42 Sanjenin Nagi: 슬라이더를 없엘거면
14:42 Sanjenin Nagi: 03:12:858 (70) - K
14:42 Sanjenin Nagi: 03:13:287 (71) - D
14:42 Sanjenin Nagi: 03:13:706 (1) - finish
14:43 Sanjenin Nagi: 무즙끝
14:43 *Sanjenin Nagi is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/284079 Kagamine Rin - Kokoro [Fuutsu]]
14:43 Konpaku Sariel: 올ㅋ
14:45 Sanjenin Nagi: 칸탄 후츠우는 솔직히
14:45 Sanjenin Nagi: 다 거기서거기라
14:45 Sanjenin Nagi: 모딩할게 없을거라봄.
14:45 Konpaku Sariel: ㅋㅋㅋ
14:45 Konpaku Sariel: 간단은
14:45 Konpaku Sariel: 반인가
14:45 Konpaku Sariel: 거기까지만 만들고 나머지 짤라먹을생각인데
14:46 Sanjenin Nagi: 흠
14:46 Sanjenin Nagi: 모든곡의 끝나는부분은 같아야됩니다.
14:46 Konpaku Sariel: 으엌
14:46 Sanjenin Nagi: 라고 알고있고 실제로 나도한번 까인적이있었음.
14:46 Sanjenin Nagi: 겟난이라서뭐.
14:46 Konpaku Sariel: ㄷㄷ
14:46 Sanjenin Nagi: 칸탄을 빼버리고 이너오니를 만드셔도 되지않을까요
14:46 Konpaku Sariel: 엌
14:47 Sanjenin Nagi: =ura
14:47 Konpaku Sariel: 왠지 진짜 미친곡이 나올거같아서[-
14:47 Sanjenin Nagi: 까일만한요소는 다 넣어버리면 재밌을겁니다
14:47 Konpaku Sariel: 엌
14:47 Konpaku Sariel: 1/8 가득할거에요[-
14:47 Sanjenin Nagi: 제가 처음 겟난랭크된게
14:47 Sanjenin Nagi: sv1.6에서
14:47 Sanjenin Nagi: 마지막 키아이에
14:48 Sanjenin Nagi: 타이밍탭에 1.3x를 더했음
14:48 *Sanjenin Nagi is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/80414 Akita Neru - Gotya Gotya Uruse~!]
14:48 Sanjenin Nagi: 그게 이거.
14:48 Konpaku Sariel: 엌
14:48 Konpaku Sariel: 저...저거..!
Shino
마누라 태고 M4M 답신 이긴한데 시간이 많질 않아서 일단 간단만 모딩했습니다.
나중에 다른 난이도도 추가로 모딩해줄 수 있습니다만 그때는 쿠도스 주지 마세요.
★강력추천 / ☆추천 / ◇무시해도 오k

Kantan
☆00:11:991 - d (임팩트 없는게 곡 흐름에 더 좋을듯)
☆00:18:848 - d (^)
☆00:20:562 - d (^)
☆00:42:848 - d (그보다 간단에 큰놈 남용하는거 아닙니다)
◇01:09:419 - d
☆01:16:276 - add k
☆01:17:133 - d
☆01:19:705 - k
◇01:38:987 - k
★01:39:415 - d (여기 큰놈 넣을 곳 아닙니다)
☆01:46:272 (22,23) - slider? (01:47:129 까지)
★01:59:987 - d (아 진짜 ry)
☆02:02:558 (50,51) - k k
☆02:17:129 ~ 02:37:272 - 초반에 dkkk이 많은데 dkdk을 베이스로 해서 다시 찍어보세요 (패턴추천은 안함)
★02:43:718 (1) - d (02:44:146 에도 d 추가)

(2차 키아이 전반 1/4부분 너무해서 생략)

★03:59:571 - k
★04:00:428 (14,15) - 14는 k, 15는 제거

ps1. 오니에 1/6 빼시고 안 어울리는 곳에 엇박 남용 자제해주세요.
ps2. 태고는 구간 음량 똑같으면 노말이든 소프트든 다 똑같은데... (먼산)
toara_fict
Hi Sariel :3/
Mod for M4M
Mod
[General]
  1. D (Big don)
  2. d (don)
  3. K (Big kat)
  4. k (kat)
[Kantan]
  1. OD or HP 4 → 3 ?
  2. 01:03:419 (34) - k
  3. 01:23:562 (64) - Del
  4. 01:38:987 (10) - Del and 01:39:844 (11) - add d
  5. 02:24:415 (22) - Del
  6. 02:31:272 (36) - ^
  7. 02:47:575 (10) - ^
  8. 02:51:003 (7) - ^
  9. 03:01:289 (30) - ^
  10. 03:23:999 (9) - move to 03:25:071 (11) - and 03:25:285 (12) - d
    or move to 03:25:071 (11) - and 03:25:285 (12) - and 03:24:856 - 03:25:071 - 03:25:285 - k
  11. 04:02:142 (16) - Del
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:35:776 (25) - Del
  2. 00:59:776 (26) - d 00:59:991 (27) - k 01:00:205 (28) - Del
  3. 01:27:633 (14) - move to 01:27:848 (14) -
  4. 01:28:276 (16) - Del
  5. 01:42:629 (36) - ^
  6. 01:48:201 (55) - ^
  7. 01:49:915 (2) - ^
  8. 02:23:558 (76) - k
  9. 02:35:987 (23) - Del
  10. 02:48:000 (18) - d
  11. 02:53:143 (30) - ^
  12. 03:15:634 (10) - 03:17:777 (4) - 03:20:348 (14) - 03:23:777 (15) - 03:24:634 (18) - 03:33:634 (58) - Del
  13. 03:33:848 (58) - k
  14. 03:12:857 (3) - ~ 03:58:706 (50) - many 1/2 note (Hard...) Let a little easier!!!
[Muzukashii]
  1. OD5→4? ( So 923combo )
[Oni]
  1. none Great fun
GoodLuck >u<!
Niko-nyan
note : please redownload before 16 August 3:00 (GMT+0)
Kim Jin Seok
1/6관련 모딩은 채팅에서 해드렸고 아래는 패턴모딩입니다.

어디까지나 권장이니 너무 신경쓰지 않으셔도 됩니다~

[Oni]

03:46:809 (18) - 삭제
03:46:916 (19) - 캇
03:47:773 (24) - 캇

03:39:416 ~ 03:41:130 - ->
taiko_maniac1811
Taiko mod as requested by Sariel :3

MOD
  • [Kantan]
  1. 01:34:274 (1,2,3) - delete? simplify the flow
  2. 01:42:411 (14) - ^
  3. 03:33:844 (24) - ^
  4. 03:39:844 (36,38) - ^
  5. 03:43:273 (44) - ^
  6. 03:44:987 (48) - ^
  7. 03:47:559 (54) - ^
  8. 03:50:130 (60,62) - ^
  9. 03:53:559 (68,70) - ^
  10. 03:56:987 (6,8) - ^
  11. 04:00:416 (14) - ^

    [Futsuu]
  12. 01:35:131 (1,2,4) - delete these? make them more simpler, current pattern is quite hard
  13. 02:11:125 (32) - delete? have some little breaks here should be nice
  14. 02:12:840 (36) - ^
  15. 02:14:554 (40) - ^
  16. 02:20:768 (60,62) - ^
  17. 02:23:340 (70) - ^
  18. 02:27:625 (15,17) - ^
  19. 02:30:197 (25) - ^
  20. 02:35:125 (18) - ^
  21. 03:32:773 (21) - ^
  22. 04:05:987 (15) - ^

    [Muzukashii]
  23. 00:21:739 (51,55) - delete these 2, too long stream for a muzukashii, simplify them a little
  24. 01:03:417 (1) - d?
  25. 01:34:703 (5) - k? kkkkd is abit too harsh here
  26. 01:35:560 (11) - d? same as above reason
  27. 02:11:340 (32,34) - delete? simplify the flow a bit and plays nice
    02:13:483 (42) - ^
    02:14:768 (48,49) - ^
    02:16:911 (58) - ^
  28. 03:14:237 (4) - k? make it be an easier pattern coz kdk is pretty advance for a muzukashii
    03:15:094 (9) - ^
    03:15:052 (14) - ^
  29. 03:16:380 (17) - delete this to simplify the pattern
  30. 03:16:594 (19) - k? flows better
  31. 03:33:416 (31) - ^
  32. 04:06:309 (56) - delete this to simplify the stream

    [Oni]
  33. 00:21:417 (44,45) - dd? not suitable for kk here
    00:22:167 (51) - if above is done, change this to k? plays better imo
  34. 00:49:810 - add k? follows the violin better
  35. 01:08:024 (8) - k?
  36. 02:41:022 (1) - move this spinner to 02:41:129 start better here for the vocals
  37. 03:13:702 (12) - d? plays better with the drums
  38. 03:40:809 (23,24,25,26) - kkkd? plays better with the drums

That's all from me :3
good luck~
Evening
d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
">" = Change to

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

Oni
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

04:06:845 (32) - d > D | For a stronger finish

Can't find any problems except the last note x_x

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

Object isn't snapped! 01:39:408
Object isn't snapped! 03:12:961
Object isn't snapped! 03:13:175
Object isn't snapped! 03:13:282
Object isn't snapped! 03:13:389
Object isn't snapped! 03:13:497

Uninherited timing points (Red Lines) conflict with All diff.s

Title Check

No Problems

Muzu
Hit-Sound Check/Addition of Notes

01:39:411 (16,28) - d,D > k,K | High pitched vocal
01:53:125 (16) - ^
02:57:213 (34,36) - Swap | The violin pitch is going lower, use kats at the start and dons at the end
03:18:630 (29,30,31,32) - Ctrl + G | Use kats on red lines to create an upbeat feeling to the rhythm
03:37:702 (1) - d > k | This is to fit with the kats here 03:38:130 (3,5,7,9,11)

Smooth kat patterns overall, fitting use of kats and dons
A very nicely mapped Muzu in my opinion

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

00:08:562 (1) - Not snapped!
03:14:126 (3) - ^
Uninherited timing points conflict with Oni diff.

Title Check

No Problems

Futsuu

AiMod

Object isn't snapped! 00:08:562
Object isn't snapped! 01:35:989

Kantan

AiMod

Object isn't snapped! 03:13:705
Two timing points at the same time. 02:03:411
DarkDunskin
Hello here's my Mod~
Achtung Baby!

d = Don
k = Kat
D = Big Don
K = Big Kat
"->" = Change to

Dont be surprised your map is really long so my mod post will become really long too ^^"

[Oni]
SPOILER
    1. 00:18:844 (29) - D -> d
    2. 00:20:558 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,1) - I think kdddkddkkkddkdd D would be better
    3. 00:28:701 (9,10,11,12,13) - kdddd -> kdd D
    4. 00:31:272 (3) - D -> d
    5. 00:34:272 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,1) - Try this: D kkddk kkddkkd D
    6. 00:39:629 (22) - Delete Note, it would fit better to the vocals.
    7. 00:42:522 (38) - Delete Note.
    8. 00:49:058 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - Change to ddkkd D
    9. 00:53:343 (2) - Delete Note, like above.
    10. 00:59:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Change to D ddkdddkdddkdkdk
    11. 01:02:987 (24,25,26,27,1) - Change to kkd D
    12. 01:09:629 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - Change to kkddk D
    13. 01:16:487 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22) - Change to ddkkd D
    14. 01:23:344 (57,58,59,60,61,62,1) - Change to dkkkd D
    15. 01:28:915 (1) - Make the Spinner longer. Let it end at 01:33:843 -
    16. 01:34:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) - You need to make this more simple. Try to not use 1/6 notes here. I am not sure myself what to map here but I would suggest something like this: ddkdddkdddkdd D d D
    17. 01:42:844 (1) - d -> D
    18. 01:47:987 (32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,1) - Change to D ddkdddkkddkkd D
    19. 01:56:558 (1) - d -> D
    20. 02:01:272 (31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,1,2,3,4,5) - Change to kdk D ddkdddkdddkdk D kdd
    21. 02:09:200 (33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,1) - Change to ddkkddk d D
    22. 02:16:272 (16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - Change to kkddkkd D
    23. d -> D
    24. 02:37:915 (43) - Let the Slider start at 02:37:915 - and end at 02:38:986 - . Add a D at 02:37:700 - and delete 02:37:594 (42) - Look here
    25. 02:41:343 (1) - Let the Spinner Start at 02:41:343 - and end at 02:42:629 - . Add D at 02:41:129 - and at 02:42:843 -
    26. 03:12:634 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Change to ddkkkkkkk D
    27. 03:19:706 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25) - Change to kkddkkd D
    28. 03:25:706 (11,12) - Delete (12) change (11) from k -> D
    29. 03:27:206 (24,25,26) - Change to d D
    30. 03:33:420 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Change to kkddkdd D
    31. 03:39:420 (10,11) - Delete (11), Change (10) from d -> D
    32. 03:40:920 (23,24,25) - Change to d D
    33. 03:40:920 (23,24,25) - d -> D
    34. 03:53:134 (11,12,13) - Chante to D k
    35. 03:54:742 (23,24) - Delete (23) Change (24) to D
    36. 03:58:277 (1) - D -> d
    37. 04:05:134 (20) - d -> D
    38. 04:06:634 (30,31,32) - Change to k D
    You definitly need to work hard on your streams. Right now they dont seem to be well structured. Think of easier Patterns like ddkkddkk or ddkdddkdddk.
    If you do that and apply those Big Notes I mentioned, this Oni should get much better~

[Muzukashii]
SPOILER
    1. Set HP-Drain to 5
    2. 00:18:843 (40) - D -> d
    3. 00:21:950 (52) - Delete Note
    4. 00:22:272 (53) - d -> D
    5. 00:23:236 (58) - Delete Note
    6. 00:26:665 (14) - Delete Note
    7. 00:30:093 (30) - Delete Note
    8. 00:33:522 (14) - Delete Note
    9. 00:34:272 (16,17,18) - ddd -> D d
    10. 00:35:236 (22) - Delete Note
    11. 00:35:986 (1) - d -> D
    12. 00:42:522 (28) - Delete Note
    13. 00:59:986 (41) - d -> D
    14. 01:02:879 (57) - Delete Note
    15. 01:03:200 (58,59,1) - ddk -> d D
    16. 01:06:415 (11) - D -> d
    17. 01:10:272 (25) - k -> D
    18. 01:17:129 (1) - k -> D
    19. 01:23:986 (25) - k -> D
    20. 01:34:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This may be a little too hard. Better remove and replace with a Slider from 01:34:272 - to 01:35:772 -
    21. 01:35:986 (1) - d -> D
    22. 01:38:986 (15) - D -> d
    23. 01:45:843 (40) - D -> d
    24. 01:49:700 (1) - d -> D
    25. 01:52:700 (15) - D -> d
    26. 02:03:415 (46) - k -> D
    27. 02:06:843 (14) - D -> d
    28. 02:20:557 (14) - D -> d
    29. 02:27:414 (42) - D -> d
    30. 02:34:272 (16) - d -> D
    31. 02:51:440 (19) - D -> d
    32. 03:20:242 (37) - Delete Note
    33. 03:23:992 (18) - D -> d
    34. 03:28:384 (7) - Move Note to 03:28:492 -
    35. 03:39:420 (9) - k -> D
    36. 03:40:920 (15,16,17) - ddd -> d D
    37. 03:53:134 (25) - k -> D
    38. 04:05:134 (49) - d -> D
    39. 04:06:313 (56) - Delete Note
    Muzukashii is okay so far.

[Futsuu]
SPOILER
    1. Set HP-Drain to 5
    2. 00:34:272 (16) - d -> D
    3. 00:49:700 (1) - d -> D
    4. 00:59:986 (24) - d -> D
    5. 01:03:415 (36) - k -> D
    6. 01:10:272 (12) - k -> D
    7. 01:17:129 (8) - k -> D
    8. 01:23:986 (1) - k -> D
    9. 01:27:200 (12,13,14,15,16,17) - Why not dK dk dK?
    10. 01:35:986 (3) - d -> D
    11. 01:47:986 - Add D
    12. 01:49:700 (1) - Add D
    13. 02:03:415 (22) - k -> D
    14. 02:10:272 (31) - d -> D
    15. 02:17:129 (44) - d -> D
    16. 02:34:271 (14) - d -> D
    17. 02:58:297 (1) - d -> D
    18. 03:27:420 (1) - d -> D
    19. 03:39:420 (21) - k -> D
    20. 03:53:134 (6) - k -> D
    21. 04:05:134 (11) - d -> D

[Kantan]
SPOILER
    1. Set HP-Drain to 4
    2. Please Check AI-Mod. There are many unsnapped Objects!
    3. 00:34:272 (37) - d -> D
    4. 00:35:987 (41) - d -> D
    5. 00:57:629 (23) - Move to 00:57:415 -
    6. 00:59:987 (27) - d -> D
    7. 01:03:415 (33) - d -> D
    8. 01:10:272 (45) - d -> D
    9. 01:17:129 (58) - k -> D
    10. 01:23:987 (70) - k-> D
    11. 01:35:987 (1) - d -> D
    12. 01:49:699 (25) - k -> D
    13. 02:01:700 (45) - k -> D
    14. 02:10:273 (57) - d -> D
    15. 02:17:129 (70) - d -> D
    16. 02:23:987 (81) - d -> D
    17. 02:30:844 (92) - d -> D
    18. 02:34:272 (97) - d -> D
    19. 02:58:297 (33) - d -> D
    20. 03:25:706 (93) - k -> K
    21. 03:27:420 (94) - d -> D
    22. 03:39:420 (121) - d -> D
    23. 03:53:134 (152) - d -> D
    24. 04:01:706 (17) - d -> D
    25. 04:05:134 (24) - d -> D
    Definitly fix those unsnapped Notes!

So that's it~
Now go and work hard on your Map!
Get more mods and go for rank!
Good luck :3
Chiswell
oni
00:28:701 (9,10,11,12,13) - 이부분을 kdddd 말고 kd(dddd) 같이 1/6으로 바꾸는게 곡에도 맞고 더나을거같음
00:31:272 (3) - 큰노트 지우는게... 너무 어색한데들어가있다 큰노트 지우고 앞부분을 ddk으로 바꾸는것도 괜찮아보임
00:42:415 (38,39,40,41,42) - 이부분도 kkddd말고 kk(dddd)으로 바꾸는게 더곡에맞을듯
00:56:344 (19,20,1) - 이부분도 1/6
02:37:272 (39,40,41,42,43) - 서클 kkdd뒤에 바로 슬라이더가붙어있는데 이렇게하는건 별로좋지않아보임...일단 치기도 짜증나고ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ kkdd에서 마지막 동을 지워서 kkd 슬라 이렇게하는걸 추천
03:12:634 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 좀 단조로워보인다 ddkkddkkkkk 으로만바꿔도 좀덜단조로울듯 저거말고 딴패턴을 넣어도 좋음 근데 난 이기차는 동으로끝내고 d k ddk 이렇게 이어지는게 더 자연스러울거같음
Topic Starter
Konpaku Sariel

wzxxzw wrote:

oni
00:28:701 (9,10,11,12,13) - 이부분을 kdddd 말고 kd(dddd) 같이 1/6으로 바꾸는게 곡에도 맞고 더나을거같음
00:31:272 (3) - 큰노트 지우는게... 너무 어색한데들어가있다 큰노트 지우고 앞부분을 ddk으로 바꾸는것도 괜찮아보임
00:42:415 (38,39,40,41,42) - 이부분도 kkddd말고 kk(dddd)으로 바꾸는게 더곡에맞을듯
00:56:344 (19,20,1) - 이부분도 1/6
02:37:272 (39,40,41,42,43) - 서클 kkdd뒤에 바로 슬라이더가붙어있는데 이렇게하는건 별로좋지않아보임...일단 치기도 짜증나고ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ kkdd에서 마지막 동을 지워서 kkd 슬라 이렇게하는걸 추천
03:12:634 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 좀 단조로워보인다 ddkkddkkkkk 으로만바꿔도 좀덜단조로울듯 저거말고 딴패턴을 넣어도 좋음 근데 난 이기차는 동으로끝내고 d k ddk 이렇게 이어지는게 더 자연스러울거같음
어떻게 내가 원하는 모딩을 이렇게 잘 해줄수가 있지ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
Topic Starter
Konpaku Sariel

wzxxzw wrote:

oni
00:28:701 (9,10,11,12,13) - 이부분을 kdddd 말고 kd(dddd) 같이 1/6으로 바꾸는게 곡에도 맞고 더나을거같음
00:31:272 (3) - 큰노트 지우는게... 너무 어색한데들어가있다 큰노트 지우고 앞부분을 ddk으로 바꾸는것도 괜찮아보임
00:42:415 (38,39,40,41,42) - 이부분도 kkddd말고 kk(dddd)으로 바꾸는게 더곡에맞을듯
00:56:344 (19,20,1) - 이부분도 1/6
02:37:272 (39,40,41,42,43) - 서클 kkdd뒤에 바로 슬라이더가붙어있는데 이렇게하는건 별로좋지않아보임...일단 치기도 짜증나고ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ kkdd에서 마지막 동을 지워서 kkd 슬라 이렇게하는걸 추천
03:12:634 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 좀 단조로워보인다 ddkkddkkkkk 으로만바꿔도 좀덜단조로울듯 저거말고 딴패턴을 넣어도 좋음 근데 난 이기차는 동으로끝내고 d k ddk 이렇게 이어지는게 더 자연스러울거같음
정말 어떻게 내가 고민하고있던 부분을 딱 집어줄수가 있지 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 진짜로 고맙다
tetsutaro


[Peripheral]
:idea: Japanese metadata: トラボルタP and ココロ
:!: 02:44:577~ - Response is too light to provide self-correcting feedback (you can't hear for yourself what you did wrong)

[Notechart]
<Kantan> Perceived rating: 3★ Kantan
<Futsuu> Perceived rating: 7★ Futsuu = 4★ Muzukashii
<Muzukashii> Perceived rating: 6★ Muzukashii = 5★ Oni
<Oni> Perceived rating: 8★ Oni

:idea: Basically flawlessly fitting to the music. Especially <Oni> where there are places I cannot see the stream but I can play some half of it smoothly on.
:!: Only problem is the difficulty scheme, with <Futsuu> shot through the ceiling of Futsuu and landing to the area of Muzukashii.
:idea: Suggested renaming to make more sensible difficulty scheme:
<Futsuu> :arrow: Muzukashii; <Muzukashii> :arrow: Oni; <Oni> :arrow: Ura Oni
Then map a more "normal" Futsuu to fill the gap.
Good reference would be Dream Tide and Hikyou Sentai Urotander

Kyouren
Kagamine Rin in tags not source
Bye
01:34:053 ~ 01:34:803 ddddkkkk → ddkkddkk
1/6 (dddkkk) 나오기 전에 ddkkddkk 로 바꾸니까 뭔가 더 자연스러운 느낌

02:01:482 ~ 02:03:838 kdkkkkddddddddddkkddkkkdd → kdkkddkkdkkkddkkdkdkddkkd 동만 계속 있는게 단조로워서 바꿔봤어


03:26:129 ~ 03:27:415 kkkkkkkkkkkkd → ddkkddddkkkkd 위에와 같은 이유


그냥 내가 생각하기에 자연스러운걸로 바꾼거니까 굳이 적용 안해두 돼 :D
Akiyama Mizuki
으으으으으ㅡㅡㅇ으

Boredom
SPOILER
00:34:695 (34) - k
02:51:435 (17) - ^
02:56:149 (28) - d
04:00:415 (13) - k
04:00:844 (14) - d

Relaxedness
SPOILER
00:34:696 (56) - k
01:01:696 (53) - ^
01:38:338 (7) - d...?
01:39:410 (9) - ^
01:40:910 (13) - 필요없어 보이는 노트임
02:30:410 (113) - k
03:10:292 (61) - K
03:53:129 (162) - ^
04:05:129 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - 이 부분이 Cheeriness랑 같네요.. 그래도 하위 난이도인데요

Cheeriness
SPOILER
00:29:017 (1) - 뭐요? http://puu.sh/9euR3/3a223ef843.jpg
00:49:481 (71,72) - k
01:01:695 (113) - ^
01:05:553 (126,127) - k d
01:14:338 (24) - K
01:38:981 (12) - 여기에 K를 두기보다는 01:39:409 (13) - 이 노트에 두는게 나을듯
02:34:267 (14) - D는 부적절한듯
04:00:415 (33) - k

Agitation
SPOILER
00:21:838 (51,52) - d
00:29:017 (26) - k
01:41:017 - 노트 추가요
02:16:910 (58) - d
03:17:558 (98,99) - 03:17:451 - 로 옮기기요
04:05:987 (52,53,54,55,56,57) - 단조로움을 피하기 위해 kkddk d

Fearness
SPOILER
00:49:053 (228,229,230,231,232,233,234) - dddkkkd
01:34:053 (1,2) - 음악이 나오지도 않는 부분에 노트가 있네요
01:53:767 (138,139,140) - k k 아니면 kkk
02:01:267 (188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212) - kdkkkkddkdddkkddkkddkkkdd 패턴이 단조로워 좀 고쳐봤어요
03:25:701 (173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - kkkkkkkkddkdkdkkd ㅍㅌㅇ ㄷㅈㄹㅇㅅ ㅈ ㄱㅊㅂㅇㅇ

랭크시키세요 /o/ \o\ \o/
Topic Starter
Konpaku Sariel
고음을 표현하고 싶은데 그럴려고하니까 너무 단조롭고 고치자고 하니 고음이 안사는거같고..
ㅠㅠ
mliencheng
Bordom
00:41:981 d
01:03:410 K


Relaxedness
00:25:481 k
00:35:338 k
00:56:338 k
01:42:410 k
01:55:695 d
02:53:149 d


Cheeriness
01:01:053 k
03:00:006 d
03:20:344 k


Agitation
01:17:981 k
01:21:517 k
01:24:838 k
03:38:987 d
03:39:201 d
03:39:415 k


Fearness
00:21:945 k
00:28:803 k

Good map, not much to mod :)
Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi Konpaku Sariel, here comes a taiko mod as requested by you in my queue (M4M request).

  • [Boredom]

    Change slider velocity to 1.2 ? It is recommended to use SV=1.2 in Kantan.
  1. 00:18:839 (13,14) - swap notes to follow the vocal ? This could make the pattern less repetitive.
  2. 00:20:553 (15) - k if you change ^
  3. 00:32:553 (31,32) - k d , again for the vocal.
  4. 00:41:981 (45,46) - d k , ^
  5. 00:46:267 (6) - k , as the vocal pitch increases.
  6. 00:56:124 (21) - k , same as 00:42:410 (46) -
  7. 01:28:053 (66,67) - D D or D K would fit the vocal and the instrument better.
  8. 01:34:267 - add k and 01:35:124 - add d ? It seems to be lacking notes there.
  9. 01:47:981 (18) - maybe you can add finish for the stressed sound there.
  10. 02:36:839 (93,94) - k d would follow the vocal nicely.
  11. 03:20:987 (80,81) - d k if you want to follow the vocal there.
  12. 03:40:272 (115,116) - k d , ^
  13. 03:53:987 (142) - k , as the vocal pitch is high.
  • [Relaxedness]

    In order to be grammatically correct, rename this diff as "Relaxation" if you want?
  1. 00:18:839 (16) - k , same as Boredom
  2. 00:24:838 (29) - k for the high-pitched vocal ?
  3. 00:32:553 (50) - ^
  4. 00:47:553 (13,14,15) - d k k would match the vocal better imo.
  5. 00:48:624 (17,18) - change to k k if you change ^
  6. 01:28:053 (115,116) - same as Boredom
  7. 01:34:267 - add k and 01:35:124 - add d ? same as Boredom
  8. 01:47:981 (28) - same as Boredom
  9. 03:21:415 (86) - k for the high-pitched vocal ?
  10. 03:33:844 (114) - In order to be consistent to the previous 03:32:987 (111,112) - , change this to k
  11. 03:47:558 (148) - ^
  12. 03:54:415 (165) - k could fit the rhythm better imo.
  • [Cheeriness]

    Rename this diff as "Cheerfulness" if you want?
  1. 00:18:838 (37) - k , same as Boredom
  2. 00:24:838 (56) - k , same as Relaxedness
  3. 00:32:553 (12) - ^
  4. 01:14:338 (24) - D , as the vocal has a lower pitch than 01:13:695 (23,25) -
  5. 01:28:053 (13,14) - D D , following the vocal.
  6. 02:13:695 (33) - k for the high-pitched violin ?
  7. 03:39:415 (25) - add finish for the stressed sound ?
  8. 03:54:415 (8) - k , as it has a higher vocal pitch than 03:53:129 (5) -
  • [Agitation]
  1. 00:18:838 (40) - k , same as Boredom
  2. 00:24:838 (5,6) - kk could follow the vocal in a way better.
  3. 00:32:553 (9) - k for the high-pitched vocal.
  4. 00:35:553 (25,26) - k k to make a greater contrast to the previous dons.
  5. 00:55:267 (41,42) - k d could fit the rhythm well imo.
  6. 01:05:553 (8) - k would match the drop in vocal pitch better.
  7. 01:08:981 (19) - ^
  8. 01:19:267 (8) - ^
  9. 01:22:695 (19) - ^
  10. 01:24:624 (27) - k , in order to make the pattern consistent to 01:10:910 (28) -
  11. 02:13:695 (43) - k for the high-pitched violin ?
  12. 02:58:292 (39) - D , as dull sound occurs here.
  13. 03:39:415 (9) - same as Cheeriness
  • [Fearness]

    Rename this diff as "Fear" if you want?
  1. 02:13:695 (271) - k , same as Agitation
  2. 02:34:267 (374) - add finish for the stressed sound ?
  3. 02:47:149 (9) - k for the relatively high-pitched vocal ?
  4. 02:57:328 (35) - d could be better imo.
  5. 03:35:237 (241) - move to 03:35:451 - to fit the drum beats.
  6. 03:47:987 (329) - I think you missed a finish here ?
  7. 03:48:951 (335) - move to 03:49:165 - to fit the drum beats.
  8. 04:05:129 (439) - add finish
That's all and good luck~ :D
4_4
데에에에에에에에에에에에엥에ㅔ에ㅔ엥에ㅔ에에에에엥에ㅔ에에에에에에에에에ㅔㅇ에ㅔㅇ에에에

...쨌든
모딩은 오프셋 수정 전으로 했어
추천 오프셋 - 8575

Agitation
00:26:445 - 같은 패턴이 반복되다보니 조금 단조로워. 여기에 캇을 넣고
00:26:660 (14) - 얘를 지워도 괜찮을거 같아
00:33:303 - 여기도 동일하게. 단, 00:33:517 (15) 얘는 지우지 말고
00:35:553 (26,27) - k k
01:10:910 (28) - d
01:14:124 (40,41) - 음높낮이가 내려가니까 Ctrl+G
01:38:552 (14) - d 왜냐면 전체적 리듬인 k d k d 에 맞추기 위해
02:23:124 (24,26,27,28) - d kdd
02:36:624 (27,28,29,30) - 이거 뭐 어떻게 했으면 좋겠는데...
02:46:292 (7) - d
02:53:149 (23) - d
03:20:022 - d
03:30:308 - 여기에 k를 넣던지 해서 단조로움을 없애줬으면
03:38:129 (3,7) - d로 바꿔서 단조로움 제거
03:40:701 (12) - k
04:00:415 (28) - d

으으.. 역시 모딩 초심자라 힘드네 쩝
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