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MMzz

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MMzz 2013-07-26T17:22:46+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, August 06, 2013 at 4:22:40 PM

Artist: nao
Title: Dimension tripper!!!! (PV Ver.)
Source: Choujigen Game Neptune
Tags: compile heart opening
BPM: 188.2
Filesize: 2284kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:

Futsuu (4.47 stars, 248 notes)
Inner Oni (5 stars, 553 notes)
Kantan (3.69 stars, 188 notes)
Muzukashii (4.84 stars, 321 notes)
Oni (4.89 stars, 439 notes)

Download: nao - Dimension tripper!!!! (PV Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Inner Oni - 100%
Oni - 100%
Muzukashii - 100%
Futsuu - 100%
Kantan - 100%
Mods:
TKSalt
DakeDekaane
Frans Niko
Love
taiko_maniac1811
Sync
Loctav

Last edited by MMzz 2013-08-06T20:22:29+00:00, edited 9 times in total.

TKS

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TKS 2013-07-27T17:37:26+00:00

hi :3/

[Inner Oni]

HP:7 ? 8 is a little over.
00:14:909 (64) - k and 00:15:228 (67) - d ?
00:25:111 - ^
01:28:873 - ^
00:27:661 (152) - K i feel a little loud, but it is natural.
00:31:806 (172) - k ? vocal sound is stronk.
00:41:211 - kdddk or kdd k? kkd is i felt a little boring.
00:48:224 - check it => http://puu.sh/3N4Vm.jpg 00:49:500 (282) - i think the backsound is not stronk, so not need to D here...
01:04:085 - add k. sound of the snaredrum not hear a slight?　:3
01:14:287 - ^
01:17:395 (451) - D ?
01:24:489 - add k. empty is a little weird sound ;w;
01:29:989 (541) - K and 01:30:148 (542) - del ?

[Oni]

00:06:301 - this pattern? http://puu.sh/3N5AU.png if you use this pattern, please check other same part.
00:27:661 (125) - K
00:49:181 - add k ?
01:05:759 (297) - del for accent.

[Muzukashii]

bignotes is fun map. nice

[Futsuu]

00:07:736 (6) - del ? snaredrum is not stronk. and this sound is not important for Futsuu.
00:10:286 (13) - ^
00:17:938 (36) - ^
00:20:488 (43) - ^
01:21:700 (219) - ^
01:24:250 (226) - ^
00:25:270 (57) - => 00:25:111
01:29:032 (240) - => 01:28:873
00:27:342 (62) - => 00:27:183 this rhythm is a little confused for beginner.
00:46:471 (115) - del
01:04:324 (167) - => 01:04:484 ?
01:14:525 (197) - => 01:14:686

[Kantan]

00:27:342 (54) - same as Futsuu.
00:49:818 (95) - del
00:56:035 (109) - => 00:56:195

nice mapset :3
good luck!!

MMzz

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MMzz 2013-07-27T21:33:03+00:00

Added just about everything. Thank you!

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2013-07-30T04:19:35+00:00

Hi~

Mod as requested :3

[General]
In my opinion I think the only big drumroll (I don't know the correct term ;_;) should be the last one in all diffs, the previous doesn't have the intensity to fit with that size.

A thing that bothered me a bit in Futsuu and Kantan is the (----don----)(----kat----) building you use in some parts of the diffs, it's ok, but as the song doesn't differ too much in intensity in a part like: 00:29:096 - 00:33:559 - in Futsuu and 00:05:982 - 00:10:605 - in Kantan, I'd prefer to have a somehow repetitive but mixed pattern, just my opinion though.

[Kantan]
I felt the scroll speed too slow, and considering that the note density is quite high for a Kantan, beginners would feel a bit hurried/stressed due this, so it's better to use 1.20 at least, like Futsuu.

[Oni]
00:11:880 (35) - This part full of dons breaks a bit your previous buildiing basing kats on the guitar, so I think this would fit very nice as kat.
00:12:677 (40,41,42,43,44,45) - Following reasoning above, this part could need some changes too. You could switch the color of (41) and (45): resulting in this (just noticed is a bit similar to Inner Oni pattern lol):

Similar patterns later would need the same changes as above.
00:52:608 - I felt this part a bit empty, a don could make a nice ddd pattern to play here.
00:53:883 - As above, if you do, 00:54:122 (239) - could be changed for a don

Welp, Inner Oni is beyooooond my abilities, so I can't help much there, maybe it's just me, but I feel triples like 00:18:097 (87,88,89) sounds a bit random.

I hope it helps, I liked the Muzukashii, though I expected it a bit harder.
Good luck /o/

MMzz

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MMzz 2013-07-30T13:41:26+00:00

Changed up those hitsounds on the sliders and added those don triplets. Thank you!

I don't want to add any kats to the ddd d d d etc. It serves right to the music and the difficulty level I am pursuing.

Niko-nyan

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Niko-nyan 2013-08-01T07:05:00+00:00

hi

General
looks good

Kantan
i think this diff like a futsuu

Futsuu
00:08:214 (8) - change to k maybe? because the next part is k too
00:18:413 (40) - ^
00:37:863 - make sure the tail of slider finish at here
01:22:178 - change to k maybe? because the next part is k too

Muzu
01:08:150 - make sure the tail of slider finish at here maybe

Oni
00:37:863 - make sure the tail of slider finish at here and delete (162)

finally

so catch my *

MMzz

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MMzz 2013-08-02T01:14:00+00:00

Frans Niko wrote:
hi

General
looks good

Kantan
i think this diff like a futsuu

Futsuu
00:08:214 (8) - change to k maybe? because the next part is k too
00:18:413 (40) - ^
00:37:863 - make sure the tail of slider finish at here
01:22:178 - change to k maybe? because the next part is k too

Muzu
01:08:150 - make sure the tail of slider finish at here maybe

Oni
00:37:863 - make sure the tail of slider finish at here and delete (162)

finally so catch my *

Applied everything except for the slider changes in Futsuu and Oni.
Thanks!

Love

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Love 2013-08-03T02:33:43+00:00

Always making me mod your consistent maps :<

[Inner Oni]

01:30:068 - This feels empty, add a don here to have it blend with the triplets later and the extra tom here.

pls mitten, no suggestions either, feels too authentic D:

MMzz

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MMzz 2013-08-03T02:40:41+00:00

Love wrote:
Always making me mod your consistent maps :<

[Inner Oni]
01:30:068 - This feels empty, add a don here to have it blend with the triplets later and the extra tom here.
pls mitten, no suggestions either, feels too authentic D:

Added.

HOW DO YOU FIND THESE LITTLE THINGS.

Thanks.

lolcubes

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lolcubes 2013-08-03T02:43:23+00:00

what is this

Love

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Love 2013-08-03T02:43:50+00:00

es kawaii lolicubes

MMzz

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MMzz 2013-08-03T02:53:54+00:00

lolcubes wrote:
what is this

something you should mod.

/me runs

taiko_maniac1811

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taiko_maniac1811 2013-08-03T04:11:02+00:00

Here comes taiko M4M :3

MOD

[Kantan]

naisu :3

[Futsuu]

SV 1.3? 1.2 is a bit slow for a fast bpm song imo

00:39:298 (93) - delete? have a little break here

[Muzukashii]

00:12:518 (28,29,30,31,32) - like this > http://puu.sh/3SrF9.jpg plays better imo
00:15:058 (39) - move this to 00:15:228
00:15:546 (41) - delete? have a little break here
00:22:560 (69,70,71,72,73) - same as 00:12:518 pattern
00:25:270 (80) - move this to 00:25:429
00:25:748 (82) - delete? have a little break here
01:26:482 (306,307,308,309,310) - same as 00:12:518 pattern
01:29:032 (317) - move this to 01:29:191
01:29:510 (319) - delete? have a little break here

[Oni]

00:07:257 (11) - delete? have a little break here
00:09:808 (24) - ^
00:17:459 (58) - ^
00:20:010 (81) - ^
00:56:832 (255) - ^
01:21:221 (381) - ^
01:23:772 (394) - ^

[Inner Oni]

00:46:471 (268,269) - d k?
01:01:136 (348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355) - like this > http://puu.sh/3Sr1g.jpg plays better imo
01:11:338 (406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413) - ^
01:17:794 (455) - delete?

That's all from me :3
nao moe (//・ω・)っ＝＝＝＝＝

MMzz

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MMzz 2013-08-03T13:02:53+00:00

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:
Here comes taiko M4M :3

MOD
[Kantan]

naisu :3

[Futsuu]
SV 1.3? 1.2 is a bit slow for a fast bpm song imo

00:39:298 (93) - delete? have a little break here

[Muzukashii]

00:12:518 (28,29,30,31,32) - like this > http://puu.sh/3SrF9.jpg plays better imo
00:15:058 (39) - move this to 00:15:228
00:15:546 (41) - delete? have a little break here
00:22:560 (69,70,71,72,73) - same as 00:12:518 pattern
00:25:270 (80) - move this to 00:25:429
00:25:748 (82) - delete? have a little break here
01:26:482 (306,307,308,309,310) - same as 00:12:518 pattern
01:29:032 (317) - move this to 01:29:191
01:29:510 (319) - delete? have a little break here

[Oni]

00:07:257 (11) - delete? have a little break here
00:09:808 (24) - ^
00:17:459 (58) - ^
00:20:010 (81) - ^
00:56:832 (255) - ^
01:21:221 (381) - ^
01:23:772 (394) - ^

[Inner Oni]

00:46:471 (268,269) - d k?
01:01:136 (348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355) - like this > http://puu.sh/3Sr1g.jpg plays better imo
01:11:338 (406,407,408,409,410,411,412,413) - ^
01:17:794 (455) - delete?

That's all from me :3
nao moe (//・ω・)っ＝＝＝＝＝

Changed everything except for the break in the stream of Inner Oni.
No changes in the Oni, I don't think those breaks are really required.
Changed everything in Muzukashii and Futsuu except for the SV.

Thanks a bunch!

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Sync 2013-08-05T23:26:26+00:00

[Inner Oni]
00:31:009 (167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175) - You should rearrange this section a bit. Most importantly, there shouldn't be a note at 00:32:284 (175). I realize there is percussion there but the vocals are overpowering them by far. Feels elongated while playing. Instead, move that note over to the red tick at 00:32:443. Secondly, there should be a second kat after 00:31:327 (169), NOT 00:32:124 (174). Consider changing this.

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Sync 2013-08-05T23:30:42+00:00

DSFSDF

MMzz

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MMzz 2013-08-05T23:32:04+00:00