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Yano Anna - Shape My Story (TV Size)

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No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月24日 星期三 at 21:13:07

Artist: Yano Anna
Title: Shape My Story (TV Size)
Source: Stella Jogakuin Koutouka C3-bu
Tags: ステラ女学院高等科C³部 kz livetune
BPM: 162
Filesize: 15262kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.43 stars, 87 notes)
  2. Hard (4.83 stars, 191 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 296 notes)
  4. Normal (4.21 stars, 140 notes)
Download: Yano Anna - Shape My Story (TV Size)
Download: Yano Anna - Shape My Story (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#52 やのあんな - Shape My Story

kz!

Taiko : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/112299
Last edited by No_Gu , edited 6 times in total.
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
offset: 598
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
Hello, 谷子
as your request

真可惜最經典的表情被裁了

話說一聽就知道是kz的歌啊真是...

[General]
tags加個op opening唄:3

[Easy]
nope
[Hard]
  1. 實在沒甚麼問題啊....
  2. 01:20:962 (4) ctrl+G
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:814 因為鋼琴是滑音，還是原滑點好 http://puu.sh/3DeMn.jpg
    00:20:777 (3) ctrl+G 感覺不錯
    00:51:147 (2,4) 鋸齒狀好點 http://puu.sh/3DeTU.jpg
    01:15:406 (3) 跟vocal，因為背景音變小vocal很明顯 http://puu.sh/3DeW8.jpg
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:517 (6,7,8,1,2) 如果弄成反方向的五角形，然後把 00:02:443 (3) 移到五角形頂端的位置 x80, y156 看這樣如何? (其實原本就可以了只是建議)
  2. 00:20:406 (3) 這個應該是故意同向的，不過還是ctrl+G好點
  3. 00:50:962 (1,2,3,4) 我覺得這4個擺成正方型就好，因為下一個 00:52:073 (1) 出現的時候這4個已經不見了(看不出來是五角形)
    00:52:073 (1) 如果上面有改的話，這個 00:52:073 (1) 就擺到四方型中間吧，後面藍色slider的 (1) 就不用動了
  4. 01:03:462 (1,2,3) 這裡三連的外置擺成這樣 (跟後面 01:03:925 (6) 斜度一樣) http://puu.sh/3DeGa.jpg
  5. 01:07:999 (3,1,2,3,4,5) 雖然我很喜歡這個梗，不過這裡的次數有點多，我建議可以改變角度，大概像這種感覺 (位置隨便擺的,音效也沒弄)
    96,192,67999,2,0,L|176:144,1,88.000002685547,4|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    392,64,68369,2,0,L|312:112,1,88.000002685547,4|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    176,232,68740,2,0,L|216:152,1,88.000002685547
    304,32,69110,2,0,L|264:112,1,88.000002685547
    232,208,69480,2,0,L|232:120,1,88.000002685547
    232,32,69851,2,0,L|232:120,1,88.000002685547
  6. 01:23:554 (1,2,3,4) 還是別疊在一起比較好..
good luck (*ゝω・*)ノ
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
a32
From in-game req~



[General]
貌似没什么诶





[Easy]
  1. 00:08:369 (3) -
    这样似乎更好些?背景里有这个音



[Normal]
  1. 00:30:962 (3,4) - blanket?



[Hard]
Fine





[Insane]
  1. 00:02:814 (5) - 这样?
  2. 00:11:517 (5,6,7) - 不在一条直线上?
  3. 01:21:795 (4,5) - 打起来不舒服 建议删
    感觉vocal跟少了?



简直神麻婆啊 mod不出什么 扔颗star w
Kiiwa
928 posts
Joined January 2010
Kiiwa
<3

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:629 (4) - This notes position is wrong for 00:02:258 (2,4,5) - to be a triangle. Please move to X:224 Y:24
  2. 00:49:110 (1,3,6) - Not perfect again, I guess you don't care XD
  3. 01:08:370 (1,2) - Switch new combo between these notes.
  4. 01:13:925 (3,4,5,6,1) - Really can't understand this spacing from a design or rhythmical perspective, sorry. Maybe change it?

nothing else Dx
good map~!
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
[I]
  1. 00:49:851 (6,7,8) - 感覺能拉近些 因為才剛按完慢速段突然要反應spacing的變化也挺不容易的 (另外68包好點)
  2. 01:06:332 (3,4,5,6) - 1.4x比較有感
  3. 01:14:666 (1) - 聽音樂啊
  4. 01:15:777 (3,1) - 音樂裡有finish所以來個跳唄
    SPOILER
  5. 01:23:554 (1,2,3,4) - 不覺得無聊嗎 (
mintong89
3,695 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
ニーハオ~

[Insane]

00:21:332 (1) - 这个可以再弯点
SPOILER
00:23:740 (3) - stack在(1)应该会比较美观 然后再把 00:23:925 (4) - 拉远点
差不多是这样的 我乱放的
01:14:666 (1) - 这个note真心觉得不适合...1/2就可以了
01:23:554 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏丰富啊 只放4个note觉得很不好

[Hard]np~

[Normal]
AR 真心觉得慢...建议+1

[Easy]np~

找不到东西啊啊 Dx
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
Hi~原来是天才打枪少女
Black: just suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
None

[Insane]

  • 00:02:443 (3,4,5) –有点反flow
    00:22:814 (1) –觉得形状不好看，话说你怎么很多diff都摆这个滑条
    00:33:184 (1,2) –这两个并为一个长滑条
    00:34:295 (5,6,7) –三连好别扭，确定白线起？
    01:08:370 (1,2) –replace NC
    01:21:332 (3,4,5,1) –从3连打过度到1有点别扭，也是白线起没问题？01:22:443 (2) –这里没音啊
    01:22:999 (4,5,6,1) -^
    01:23:554 (1,2,3,4) –不要叠一起比倨傲好
    最后可以加个转盘

[Hard]

  • 01:15:221 (2,3) – 这两个交换
    01:22:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –这里节奏还是比较难抓，可能跟music会好点
    最后转盘

[Noraml]

  • 00:55:406 (1) –可以往下面来点

[Easy]
nice diff
Last edited by Fycho , edited 1 time in total.
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019
From in-game req

General
  • 绿线狂魔
    其实有一大堆unsnapped

Easy

Hitsounds
  • 为何两大段绿草里混入了空气 要不要把softwhistle当tick用啊
Arrangement & Design
  • Fine.

Normal

Hitsounds
  • Fine.
Arrangement & Design
  1. 01:08:740 (5) - 可以考虑一下和别的diff一样加个nc

Hard

Hitsounds
  1. 00:43:925 - 感觉空 normal hitnormal?
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:24:851 (2) - 没叠好 但是我建议动前面的slider00:23:740 (4) -
  2. 00:58:369 (1) - 和前面排成一条线

Insane

Hitsounds
  1. 00:08:369 - normal hitnormal
    绿草段的whistle听起来怪怪的
Arrangement & Design
  • 最后stack真是十分懒逼
  1. 00:02:629 (4,5) - 反flow 看起来屌炸
  2. 01:08:370 (1) - 感觉NC下错地方 应该放后面那个slider才是
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
hi o3o/

Mod request from PM

[General]

●Please uncheck the "Letterbox during breaks". Don't need~

[Easy]

●00:50:962 (1) - I don't prefer this in Easy diff. Are you sure you want to adopt this for a beginner?

[Normal]

●00:08:554 (4) - Spacing is narrow subtly. Do you want to fix it?
●01:07:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You put the slider somewhere. better~
●01:13:925 (2) - I prefer this. Please try to consider~　I think very good this.

[Hard]

●00:02:814 (4) - Add new combo? I think sound was changed.
●00:09:295 (6,7,1) - Don't overlap on the slider (5). Appearance will be better~
●00:09:480 (1) - Change whistle ⇒ soft-finish (start)? Fit to music. And, You are using a finish in Normal diff.
●00:24:851 (2) - Move to x:272 y:304? firmly overlap. This may be intentional...
●00:28:740 (1) - Move to x:392 y:216? ^
●00:35:777 (4) - Move to x:160 y:160. I think this is your mistake. I will make a beautiful triangle.
●00:49:110 (5,1) - How's this? This is put out very good sound.
●00:57:999 (4) - Ctrl+G? No reason in particular haha.
●01:26:332 (x) - Add circle? this is good sound~

[Insane]

●00:02:814 (5) - Same as Hard diff.
●00:02:814 (5) - Ctrl+G.. please. I think flow is not good.
●00:07:629 (3) - Changing the slider of shaped like 00:06:147 (5)?
●00:09:480 (1) - Same as Hard diff.
●00:20:406 (3) - Ctrl+G? This is a good flow.
●01:12:444 (5) - Move to x:256 y:192. firmly overlap?
●01:15:777 (3) - Ctrl+G? I prefer this~
●01:26:332 (x) - Same as hard diff.
●https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/872357 :D

That's all :3

good luck :)
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
SPOILER

Azure wrote:

[General]
tags加個op opening唄:3懒。。

Normal]
  1. 實在沒甚麼問題啊....
  2. 01:20:962 (4) ctrl+G改完DS就不对了啊。。
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:814 因為鋼琴是滑音，還是原滑點好 http://puu.sh/3DeMn.jpg 哦哦哦感觉不错
    00:20:777 (3) ctrl+G 感覺不錯我感觉原来的好点。。
    00:51:147 (2,4) 鋸齒狀好點 http://puu.sh/3DeTU.jpg单说的话是。。但是我后5和这个一条直线的啊
    01:15:406 (3) 跟vocal，因為背景音變小vocal很明顯 http://puu.sh/3DeW8.jpg有什么太大区别？。。不过还是改了
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:517 (6,7,8,1,2) 如果弄成反方向的五角形，然後把 00:02:443 (3) 移到五角形頂端的位置 x80, y156 看這樣如何? (其實原本就可以了只是建議)懒懒懒
  2. 00:20:406 (3) 這個應該是故意同向的，不過還是ctrl+G好點这里意图是端点跳。。正常来说点住头然后直接跳下一个头就OK了
  3. 00:50:962 (1,2,3,4) 我覺得這4個擺成正方型就好，因為下一個 00:52:073 (1) 出現的時候這4個已經不見了(看不出來是五角形)
    00:52:073 (1) 如果上面有改的話，這個 00:52:073 (1) 就擺到四方型中間吧，後面藍色slider的 (1) 就不用動了多少应该能看见，而且感觉这样比较有趣
  4. 01:03:462 (1,2,3) 這裡三連的外置擺成這樣 (跟後面 01:03:925 (6) 斜度一樣) http://puu.sh/3DeGa.jpg
  5. 01:07:999 (3,1,2,3,4,5) 雖然我很喜歡這個梗，不過這裡的次數有點多，我建議可以改變角度，大概像這種感覺 (位置隨便擺的,音效也沒弄)粘错时间了?..
  6. 01:23:554 (1,2,3,4) 還是別疊在一起比較好..容我考虑考虑。。反正挺多人提
good luck (*ゝω・*)ノ
SPOILER

a3272509123 wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:08:369 (3) -
    这样似乎更好些?背景里有这个音在后面1/1加了个note
[Normal]
  1. 00:30:962 (3,4) - blanket?略懒。
[Insane]
  1. 00:02:814 (5) - 这样?我这边确实flow不太好。。但是那边略难看
  2. 00:11:517 (5,6,7) - 不在一条直线上?这都发现了，好棒
  3. 01:21:795 (4,5) - 打起来不舒服 建议删这边音乐里有hit-hat，而且感觉节奏丰富点比较有趣
    感觉vocal跟少了?kz我一般跟曲子多
简直神麻婆啊 mod不出什么 扔颗star w
SPOILER

Kiiwa wrote:

<3

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:629 (4) - This notes position is wrong for 00:02:258 (2,4,5) - to be a triangle. Please move to X:224 Y:24nice
  2. 00:49:110 (1,3,6) - Not perfect again, I guess you don't care XDI care but I suck at doing this....
  3. 01:08:370 (1,2) - Switch new combo between these notes.my mistake
  4. 01:13:925 (3,4,5,6,1) - Really can't understand this spacing from a design or rhythmical perspective, sorry. Maybe change it?wan to make a progressive pattern

kiiwa pro.god of shapes www
SPOILER

Flask wrote:

[I]
  1. 00:49:851 (6,7,8) - 感覺能拉近些 因為才剛按完慢速段突然要反應spacing的變化也挺不容易的 (另外68包好點)可
  2. 01:06:332 (3,4,5,6) - 1.4x比較有感我也觉得远点好但是做的时候就没地方了只能这样
  3. 01:14:666 (1) - 聽音樂啊你自己听啊是3/4
  4. 01:15:777 (3,1) - 音樂裡有finish所以來個跳唄感觉效果不好。。
  5. 01:23:554 (1,2,3,4) - 不覺得無聊嗎 (这是惯例 (.
SPOILER

mintong89 wrote:

ニーハオ~

[Insane]

00:21:332 (1) - 这个可以再弯点 可以
00:23:740 (3) - stack在(1)应该会比较美观 然后再把 00:23:925 (4) - 拉远点 nice
01:14:666 (1) - 这个note真心觉得不适合...1/2就可以了钢琴是3/4
01:23:554 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏丰富啊 只放4个note觉得很不好懒B。。。
[Normal]
AR 真心觉得慢...建议+1刚好是我能DTHDHR打的程度。。
SPOILER

Fycho wrote:

[Insane]

  • 00:02:443 (3,4,5) –有点反flow确实是但是想不到好方法
    00:22:814 (1) –觉得形状不好看，话说你怎么很多diff都摆这个滑条我觉得还行啊就放了
    00:33:184 (1,2) –这两个并为一个长滑条感觉没啥意义。。
    00:34:295 (5,6,7) –三连好别扭，确定白线起？你听音乐有
    01:08:370 (1,2) –replace NC恩
    01:21:332 (3,4,5,1) –从3连打过度到1有点别扭，也是白线起没问题？01:22:443 (2) –这里没音啊仔细听啊，这个是hit-hat，下面那个音和00:34:295 (5,6,7) –的一样
    01:22:999 (4,5,6,1) -^
    01:23:554 (1,2,3,4) –不要叠一起比倨傲好懒。。
    最后可以加个转盘懒懒懒

[Hard]

  • 01:15:221 (2,3) – 这两个交换比较习惯跟钢琴
    01:22:443 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –这里节奏还是比较难抓，可能跟music会好点BGM里有鼓音啊。。
    最后转盘不想加

[Noraml]

  • 00:55:406 (1) –可以往下面来点可
SPOILER

fanzhen0019 wrote:

From in-game req

General
  • 绿线狂魔
    其实有一大堆unsnapped反正kiai没问题就OK。。

Easy

Hitsounds
  • 为何两大段绿草里混入了空气 要不要把softwhistle当tick用啊没太懂。。
Arrangement & Design
  • Fine.

Normal

Hitsounds
  • Fine.
Arrangement & Design
  1. 01:08:740 (5) - 可以考虑一下和别的diff一样加个nc意义不大不过也可

Hard

Hitsounds
  1. 00:43:925 - 感觉空 normal hitnormal?大鼓在下一个1/2上
Arrangement & Design
  1. 00:24:851 (2) - 没叠好 但是我建议动前面的slider00:23:740 (4) - 可
  2. 00:58:369 (1) - 和前面排成一条线不是一条线吗?哎还真不是一条线。。

Insane

Hitsounds
  1. 00:08:369 - normal hitnormal好评!
    绿草段的whistle听起来怪怪的
Arrangement & Design
  • 最后stack真是十分懒逼你懂我
  1. 00:02:629 (4,5) - 反flow 看起来屌炸确实。。不过咋改好看
  2. 01:08:370 (1) - 感觉NC下错地方 应该放后面那个slider才是对
SPOILER

-Gamu- wrote:

hi o3o/

Mod request from PM

[General]

●Please uncheck the "Letterbox during breaks". Don't need~ohh

[Easy]

●00:50:962 (1) - I don't prefer this in Easy diff. Are you sure you want to adopt this for a beginner?changed to 2 sliders，better now imo

[Normal]

●00:08:554 (4) - Spacing is narrow subtly. Do you want to fix it?fixed
●01:07:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You put the slider somewhere. better~for the patterns..don't want to change
●01:13:925 (2) - I prefer this. Please try to consider~　I think very good this.OK

[Hard]

●00:02:814 (4) - Add new combo? I think sound was changed.not necessary I think
●00:09:295 (6,7,1) - Don't overlap on the slider (5). Appearance will be better~ahh I think overlap here is good too
●00:09:480 (1) - Change whistle ⇒ soft-finish (start)? Fit to music. And, You are using a finish in Normal diff.changed to whislte in normal
●00:24:851 (2) - Move to x:272 y:304? firmly overlap. This may be intentional... k
●00:28:740 (1) - Move to x:392 y:216? ^^
●00:35:777 (4) - Move to x:160 y:160. I think this is your mistake. I will make a beautiful triangle.^
●00:49:110 (5,1) - How's this? This is put out very good sound. hmm..leave for now
●00:57:999 (4) - Ctrl+G? No reason in particular haha.for patterns...no
●01:26:332 (x) - Add circle? this is good sound~ahhh why here?

[Insane]

●00:02:814 (5) - Same as Hard diff.same
●00:02:814 (5) - Ctrl+G.. please. I think flow is not good.yeah..but I still don't think this is a good method to solve it
●00:07:629 (3) - Changing the slider of shaped like 00:06:147 (5)?I like the shape here
●00:09:480 (1) - Same as Hard diff.same
●00:20:406 (3) - Ctrl+G? This is a good flow.here I set a special jump.We just need to hit the head then jump to next head
●01:12:444 (5) - Move to x:256 y:192. firmly overlap?k
●01:15:777 (3) - Ctrl+G? I prefer this~ah no
●01:26:332 (x) - Same as hard diff.same
●https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/872357 :Dwww sugoi

That's all :3

good luck :)

Thank you guys.long time no reply...orz too tired

update
Horo
214 posts
Joined July 2011
Horo
I was going to try and make a mapset of this, but instead would you like a Taiko Muzukashii and Oni?
I really love this song, my favorite OP this season, good luck and let me know!
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Horo wrote:

I was going to try and make a mapset of this, but instead would you like a Taiko Muzukashii and Oni?
I really love this song, my favorite OP this season, good luck and let me know!
Sorry but I'm not going to add taiko for this...sorry
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
please rank ;)
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
[Insane]
00:30:591 (2) - 感觉这个应该放的更远一点吧？
SPOILER
00:31:332 (5,6,7,1) - 怎么都觉得这边5连比白线3连+1/2听得要顺耳一点
00:50:499 (8) - 这个滑音应该是在蓝线结束吧
01:12:074 (3) - 故意没叠好吗
01:14:666 (1) - 为什么你的slider都这么弯来了……建议为了和2对应改的稍微缓一点？顺便一提我觉得这里3/4有点小违和（虽然说我没资格说）不过为了强调一下头尾改normalhitnormal怎么样？
SPOILER
01:26:147 (3) - 也没必要一定要那么死板的直上去，可以考虑在弧度上稍微弯一点带点收的感觉
SPOILER

[Easy]
00:04:110 (1) - spinner后面的NC问题虽然说已经不要紧了不过看到还是改一下吧（其实我只是在凑字数）
No_Gu
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No_Gu

eveless wrote:

[Insane]
00:30:591 (2) - 感觉这个应该放的更远一点吧？恩可
00:31:332 (5,6,7,1) - 怎么都觉得这边5连比白线3连+1/2听得要顺耳一点那边音有点弱不过听着还不错
00:50:499 (8) - 这个滑音应该是在蓝线结束吧要说钢琴那个滑音的话我感觉应该是下个白线。。不过停这里目的1是有个军鼓2是insane的话稍微有点紧张感?..
01:12:074 (3) - 故意没叠好吗我这边也不知道怎么弄的。这一组的六边形和上一组的中间stack了之后这边又乱了。不清楚这么回事 懒 pass
01:14:666 (1) - 为什么你的slider都这么弯来了……建议为了和2对应改的稍微缓一点？顺便一提我觉得这里3/4有点小违和（虽然说我没资格说）不过为了强调一下头尾改normalhitnormal怎么样？形状改了 3/4的话你开25%听听钢琴这边是3/4 normalhitnormal加这边有点突兀的感觉，而且我也不太喜欢用音色不同的hitsound跟音乐
01:26:147 (3) - 也没必要一定要那么死板的直上去，可以考虑在弧度上稍微弯一点带点收的感觉饿姐maji艺术家!
SPOILER

[Easy]
00:04:110 (1) - spinner后面的NC问题虽然说已经不要紧了不过看到还是改一下吧（其实我只是在凑字数）恩
顺带看到CD封面了就换了张BG。。update
eveless
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eveless
ok
No_Gu
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Joined January 2011
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No_Gu

eveless wrote:

ok
饿姐好棒快让我prpr
Scorpiour
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Scorpiour
Ranked~~!!
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
Congratz! ^^
So fast~
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