1. Redo break.

1. 00:53:52 (7) - Suggestion: New combo?
2. 02:05:58 (5) - New combo.
3. 03:05:83 (1) - The bottom of this slider is off screen. Fix your slider.

1. 02:05:58 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Clapping overload, remove some of them
2. 03:05:84 (1) - Same thing with Normal
3. Redo most of your breaks.

1. Note: I had the offset go last so these possible fixes won't be out of place.
   Change your offset to 17,128 in all three difficulties, then resnap.

1. Also I fail to see the resemblance between the song and some of the skin.
   BG, at first I thought this was an anime song, lol. BG is fine though, it kind of resembles "moonlight" which is cool
   A character from Bobobo as the section-fail seems kind of weird but I guess it's... fine.
   Random penguins... AH I figured it out, they're dancing~ Awesome

tieff wrote:

Cool skin.
I got 17 118 on offset, but not sure about this. (Don't forget resnap all notes, if you accept my offset)
I suggest you use Slider Tick Rate 2.

You don't need to do this! I'm only give you suggestions.

[Easy]
Don't see any serious mistakes here.

[Normal]
Too smal circles for normal, I think.
00:17:11 (4) - Clap on end?
00:19:12 (9) - ^
00:20:38 (2) - Clap on return.
00:26:65 (7) - Clap.
00:27:66 (2) - ^
00:28:66 (4) - ^
00:29:67 (6) - Clap.
00:30:67 (8) - Clap.
00:31:17 (10) - Clap on second return.
00:36:19 (6) - New combo?
00:42:97 (8) - Clap on end?
00:45:74 (5) - Clap?
00:49:75 (5) - Clap.
00:51:76 (2) - ^
00:52:77 (5) - ^
00:53:52 (7) - Clap on end.
00:54:52 (9) - ^
00:55:53 (11) - Clap on return.
00:57:79 (3) - Clap.
01:07:83 (3) - ^
01:11:09 (10) - Clap on end.
01:21:89 (5) - Clap.
01:22:89 (9) - Clap on start.
01:23:90 (1) - Clap.
01:25:66 (5) - Clap on return.
01:26:66 (6) - Clap on return.
01:31:93 (2) - Clap.
01:32:94 (5) - ^
01:37:96 (3) - Clap.
01:38:46 (5) - Clap on end.
01:39:97 (2) - Clap.
01:45:24 (1) - Clap on end.
01:48:00 (2) - Clap.
01:53:52 (1) - Cool.
01:57:04 (1) - Whistle.
02:04:07 (1) - Same as above.
02:09:34 (1) - Clap on end.
02:11:10 (5) - Clap.
...
...
You get it? Listen drum.

[Hard]
Use claps like above. Just listen the drum and you get it.
00:58:16 (x) - Add a note?
No other problems.

Good job.
Star.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Easy~

1. Redo break.

Normal~

1. 00:53:52 (7) - Suggestion: New combo?
2. 02:05:58 (5) - New combo.
3. 03:05:83 (1) - The bottom of this slider is off screen. Fix your slider.

Hard~

1. 02:05:58 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Clapping overload, remove some of them
2. 03:05:84 (1) - Same thing with Normal
3. Redo most of your breaks.

Overall~

1. Note: I had the offset go last so these possible fixes won't be out of place.
   Change your offset to 17,128 in all three difficulties, then resnap.

___

Just me rambling~

1. Also I fail to see the resemblance between the song and some of the skin.
   BG, at first I thought this was an anime song, lol. BG is fine though, it kind of resembles "moonlight" which is cool
   A character from Bobobo as the section-fail seems kind of weird but I guess it's... fine.
   Random penguins... AH I figured it out, they're dancing~ Awesome

Well, nice job!
Have a star.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

for future reference, BAT arent supposed to mod anything with less than 8 star priority. i will however give you a quick impression on your difficulties and hey, if its favorable enough i might actually mod it.


[Easy]
not bad, you had a note hidden under a slider there and a couple places where the notes didnt really flow that well but its a pretty good map...enough to merit a star from me


[Normal]
01:05:08 (11) - kinda weird, popped out at me
generally putting large abstract slider art is a bad idea, also putting a finish at the end of musical phrases would sound cool here, map gets a bit boring cus its so long and those long sliders are kinda ugh.


[Hard]
first, watch your self-overlap in sliders its getting unreadable. also everything i said for Normal applies here.

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

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[Easy]:
00:35:95 (1) - Suggestion: Move 1 down on Grid Level 2?

[Normal]:
02:49:77 (1) - Can you perhaps clean this slider up a bit?
03:27:44 (1,2,3,4) - Finish overload...x_X
03:30:95 (1,2,3) - Same as above...

[Hard]:
01:50:02 (8) - Can you move this a little farther away than (7)?
02:26:17 (4) - Can you move this a little more upwards?

The map's pretty uneventful in [Easy] and [Normal]...Perhaps you can spruce some things up on [Easy] with hitsounds...? Not sure about [Normal], you can use the same things there...

You might want to clean up some of that slider art. It might be tough, but at least try sometime.

Trying to check the timing for [Normal] crashes osu!, by the way. ...Some division by zero error or something...

[Hard] and [Normal] seem to have inconsistent timings. [Hard]'s timing is the same as [Easy] though...

Star~

fufe wrote:

Nice song choice o3o

Fix timing tab. take out the 2nd timing point and push the offset back 4 full beats so your song will start after the offset.

I played through most of this without issues but my Mod-eye sees some things that could be cleaner. I dont think anything ive noted is a 'required' change. Do what you see fit

Normal
00:20:39 (2,3,4) - semi-naziSpacing.
00:40:97 (3) - semi-nazi spacing
00:56:54 (1,2) - doesnt agree with previous spacing.
01:03:57 (8,10) - pattern makes spacing issues- looks intentional tho so ok [didn't fix]
02:32:95 (10) - ^
01:06:08 (3,4,5) - nazi space- pls fix tho =x
02:49:77 (1) - i wasnt expecting this. I was looking to hit on the lyrics "Fine" instead of the bass thing. Maybe add a hit at 02:49:52. Also, Use Bezier slider? (shortcut 'd')
02:53:54 (5) - Bezier slider?
02:57:56 - same as above. maybe add a note here to be safe?
03:05:84 (1) - Bezier? =x
[attachment=0:82c18]screenshot011.png[/attachment:82c18]
*This is pattern is shorter on the timeline then your original.*

Hard- beware of nazimod eyes =x -treat these as observations and change the ones you want.
00:18:38 (8,9,10) - pattern inconsistently spaced.
00:32:44 (3,4,5) - ^
01:05:08 (2,3) - this has bigger spacing than the rest of your triple hits.
01:08:59 (1,2,3) - 01:09:60 (1,2,3) - they are slightly different.... dont bother changing imo. just saying.
01:49:77 (6,7,8) - pattern inconsistently spaced.
01:57:05 (1,2) - underspaced.
02:25:92 (2,3,4) - spacing
02:26:42 (5,6,7) - spacing..i think
03:05:84 (1) - bezier again? i can definately see the anchor points in play mode.

whymeman wrote:

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

[Easy] (Done)

Not sure what to say about the distance snap since I can't find the average in this difficulty. I don't think I can accurately mod with this kind of spacing.... But here are some noticable things:

00:14:11(X) - Isn't it abnormal to place a note behind the first offset?
00:51:52 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing her looks irregular to me.
00:57:04 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing difference between (2) and (3).
01:04:58 (3) - Almost bottomed out of the grid...
01:07:59 (2,3,4) - Spacing difference between (3) and (4).
01:09:09 (1,2,3,4,5) - The shape here is irregular. Make sure to get this evenly spaced.
01:24:66 (2,3,4,1) - The shape on this one looks a bit odd as well. Make sure to double check.
01:41:23 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Irregular shape/spacing.
01:48:26 (3,4,5,6) - Double check the spacing here. It doesn't seem right....

You might have to go and use distance snap for this map since the spacing seems a bit irregular.

[Normal] (Done)

00:14:11(X) - Isn't it abnormal to place a note behind the first offset?
00:21:39 (3,4,5,6,1) - The formation looks irregular here....
00:24:91 (4) - This could line up with the end of (3).
01:03:07 (7,8,9,10) - Not evenly lined up.
02:00:56 (1) - Bottomed out .
02:05:58 (1,2,3,4,5) - Irregular spacing here.
02:32:45 (9,10) - Interesting jump....
02:33:45 (1,2) - Looks a bit uneven together.
03:05:84 (1) - That's a LARGE heart shape...
03:32:45 (1) - I think the final spinner could use a finish. It sounds so.... unfinished?

The spacing here isn't as bad like [Easy], but still has to be checked on.

[Hard] (Done)

00:14:11(X) - Isn't it abnormal to place a note behind the first offset?
00:28:92 (5,6,7) - Irregular spacing.
00:35:95 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:41:23 (4) - Almost bottomed out...
01:25:16 (5,6) - The gap here is a bit irregular compared to most parts of the map.
01:27:67 (3,4,5) - Slightly irregular spacing.
01:32:19 (4,5,6,7,8) - The shape here doesn't look too good. The spacing is also a bit irregular here as well.
01:33:20 (8,1,2) - Slightly irregular spacing.
01:35:20 (5,6) - ^
01:35:71 (7,1) - ^ (More noticeable...)
01:53:53 (1) - Maybe the star can look a bit more neater?
01:56:04 (2) - Not even with the slider end.
01:59:06 (2) - Kinda bottomed out there...
02:05:58 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - You can slightly see the section where its uneven in this diagnal row.
02:19:89 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Irregular spacing.
02:31:44 (9,1) - ^
02:31:69 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:36:21 (3,4) - ^
02:37:22 (5,6) - ^
02:44:25 (2,1) - Guessing that's supposed to be a jump? It so, it feels a bit randomly placed....
02:51:28 (9,10) - Unevenly placed under the slider end.
03:30:78(X) - Though this may not really affect anything, the 1/2 BPM timing mark looks misplaced (its in 1/6's).
03:32:20 (1) - Maybe a finish here?

Sticky Note: Extra thing to point out. You're missing the Sorce and Tags for this map. Also, make sure to go back to check the spacing in all the maps. Any Irregular spacing can make the "pace" feel a bit unsteady and there might be more than what I posted, but I don't want to stretch the page with too much details. Though I do love the song with the whole theme and skin. Its acually cute :-3. I'll give this map a star, but make sure to check into those errors. I do have high hopes for this map and I know it will be ranked eventually.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Light modding:

Easy:
01:38:47 (5) - align with 4

Normal:
nothing

Hard:
03:05:84 (1) - I don;t like how this hits the hp bar

Pretty solid map. Star.

animask wrote:

[Easy]
Make make the offset at the start of the spinner? EDIT - Maybe use the same offset for all difficulties there too?
I think you should try using more claps in the song too.
00:55:54 (5) - Make take out the whistle on the 3rd repeat?
01:01:57 (4) - Align with 3?
01:04:08 (2) - Align with 1?
01:03:07 (7) - Align with 4?
Instead of saying to align stuff...you should try to make the patterns more clean based on how I told you to align those.
Same goes for all your beatmaps.

[Normal]
00:33:20 (1) - Whistle the 1st and 3rd repeat maybe? It sounds nice~
01:35:71 (9) - Maybe take out the clap on the 3rd repeat?
02:16:13 (1) - Add a Clap here
03:14:13 (1) - Make this timing section here softer
03:32:45 (1) - Maybe don't use a finish on this?

[Hard]
00:33:20 (1) - Whistle instead <- I think it sounds better as is.
00:33:45 (2) - No clap
00:33:70 (3) - Whistle instead
00:33:95 (4) - No clap
00:34:45 (5) - Whistle only the beginning of this slider...not the slider trail
00:35:45 (7) - only whistle the ending on this one?
00:42:74 (8) - Take out the whistle on only the start of the slider
00:55:54 (11) - Take out a few finishes in this slider
01:07:09 (9) - Whistle on the end and not beginning maybe?
01:35:71 (7) - Take out clap on start of slider
02:39:98 (11) - Less Finishes please
03:14:13 (1) - Lower volume for this timing section please
03:32:20 (1) - This spinner feels too loud

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