1. Clarity (4.78 stars, 477 notes)
2. Remedy (2.73 stars, 279 notes)

1. I would recommend the background image to be 1024x768 or1366x768 pixels. Although, it's not technically unrankable (see green text), but I still recommend to resize just to be on the safe side.
   
   Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).
   [Remedy]
   
   1. For the easiest difficulty on the map, I fully recommend to reduce the drain and overall difficulty to 4 or lower. The approach rate seem fine for the map, so I would leave it for now. Just be wary that other modders might recommend to reduce it or even map an easier difficulty (god forbid) for difficulty spread purposes.
   2. 00:41:293 (4,5) - For consistency purposes, I would remove these drum samples set on these notes since it doesn't really bring any emphasis to the music. Also, remove the sample drum set at 02:35:668 (5). The drum-finish at 00:39:418 (1) and 02:31:918 (1) is fine.
   3. 03:16:918 (1) - This is a pretty long spinner (please keep it). I like that you used the spinner to emphasize the increasing pitch of the music. For a better emphasis for this, I would end the spinner at 03:30:043 instead since the increasing pitch ends here and it also gives novice players more time to recover.
   Feedback: One thing I want to say about this difficulty are the hitsounds. Compare to your Clarity difficulty, this difficulty is somewhat difficult to know which instrument are you trying to emphasize. I would like to see if you can somehow rearrange some of your patterns in a way so that the hitsound patterns are similar to your Clarity difficulty.
   
   [Clarity]
   
   1. For a better competition, I would increase the overall difficulty to 7 or 8. When I was test playing the map, I scored a 100% accuracy!
   2. 04:01:918 (3) - A new combo would be suitable here, since it's a new musical section. Similar to what you did at 01:38:480 (1,2,1).
   3. 04:16:214 - 04:16:449 (6): This is optional, but maybe you could add two more circles at 04:16:214 and 04:16:449 (stacking with the previous slider) here to complete the vocal section.
   Feedback: This difficulty is very good! Excellent hitsounding, flow, and rhythm usage!
   
   I like this song and map. I hope it gets ranked soon. Good Luck!

MMzz wrote:

[Clarity]
00:15:043 (6) - I would say starting the combo here is a better idea for more clarity on the use of the anti-jump.
00:22:543 (6) - ^
00:30:043 (7) - ^ I think you get it by now so I'll stop pointing these out.
01:08:949 (7,8) - Why not make a 1/4 stack or something to bring out that drumroll in the music? It is a nice variation from the regular beat and stuff. But then again this only happens 1 time in the song, so for the sake of consistency it is ok to ignore, honestly.
02:49:964 (1,2) - This beat placement feels kinda awkward. If you swap the placement of these on the timeline you get something a bit nicer and interesting. http://puu.sh/3uQh5.jpg

I like this map.
Sick nasty.

xChippy wrote:

Yo~ :3
Mod request from in-game PM =w=
Sorry if my mod sucks =w= I'm still a noob modder =w= your mod is fineeee~ keep rockin'.

* No General issues to point.
All are just suggestions =w=
[Remedy]
00:47:855 (2,3) - Maybe shape (3) like this :3? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851464
00:51:136 (7) - ^ I don't see much of a difference? n to both of these~
01:00:980 (3) - nazi 1 grid down for alignment =w= direct copy/paste on this one
01:17:855 (2) - Maybe like this flows better imo? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851473 the slider is like this on purpose -- style/consistency reasons
01:31:918 (1) - Looks better this way imo :3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/851475 spacing is the issue I see with that combo
03:34:730 (6) - nazi 1 grid up to align =w= this is a direct copy/paste o_____O

Hitsounds
00:23:949 (3) - maybe a finish or whistle to the tail? nice. took all the suggestions below for this diff!
00:31:918 (6) - ^
01:00:980 (3) - ^
01:09:418 (1) - Add finish
01:35:902 (1) - Finish?
02:31:918 (1) - Add clap
03:31:918 (1) - Finish?

[Clarity]
01:30:511 (1) - NC? it's fine as-is. the rest of the combos follow place with consistency.
Nothing else =w=

Gogo nice mapset ^^ ~ <3
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jonathanlfj wrote:

huehuehue

dk replies

[General]
bg res but i cant find anything better so ok yeaaaaaaaah, about that.
maybe tag "electro house" since it is the genre of the song hmm.. will do.
also try this for the soft-finish (in calmer parts): http://puu.sh/3A2UF.wav will try this out and get back to this

[Remedy]
AR-1? mm, this AR seems good to me. i'll consider it if more people point it out.
00:33:324 (2) - shorten this to 00:33:793 and use a note at 00:34:027 sure!
00:35:668 (5) - NC yep
00:56:293 (3,4) - this may be a little difficult due to having inconsistent spacing and a bit anti-flow, maybe get rid of the repeat on 00:56:293 (3) and add a note at 00:57:230 for the transition I don't see how this is anti-flowy. will keep as-is.
01:13:168 (3) - NC yep
01:24:418 - this is actually a good place to start dumping soft claps, try it on the 2/4 white beat to contrast the whistles i'll look into this, but I like how it is now
01:35:902 (1) - i would end the spinner at 01:38:480 and add note at 01:39:418, mostly because newbies will be playing this diff and that gives more time to recover good catch, will do!
01:42:699 (5) - NC yep.
01:47:386 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm:

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tried it out, but didn't like it too much.
02:35:668 (5) - NC
02:42:699 (7,8) - this feels better to play if you replace it with a slider since there is no heavy beat at 02:43:168 tried this out, but didn't like it. sorry :p
02:59:808 (3) - missing whistle/finish? nice catch
03:01:918 - drag the break to start here woops
03:46:918 - claps again same remark as above
03:58:168 (1) - same as 01:35:902 (1) (add finish if you dont make the change) changed
04:05:199 (4) - NC yep
04:09:886 (1,2,3) - same as 01:47:386 (1,2,3) same as above~

[Clarity]
00:37:543 (7) - NC here instead to keep consistency with other anti jumps woop. done!
00:53:246 (6) - if you can lower this to maybe the center of the playfield, you will get a nice oval flow on 00:52:543 (5,6,7) holy crap, wouldn't of ever thought of this. nice catch!
00:55:355 (3,4) - try to blanket them (makes flow on 00:56:761 (5) better) hnnnnnnrg y-axis beauty
01:22:308 (5) - NC nice catch
01:40:355 (4) - perfectly center this >< wtf I could of sworn this was centered
01:50:902 (2) - lower this a bit for a zig zag flow on 01:50:199 (1,2,3,4) nice. done.
02:06:605 (5) - stack on 02:05:199 (1) but y-axis w/ 3?
02:09:418 (1,2,3) - aline this to x:48 y:268 with the straight flow of the anti-jump (and maybe manual stack this to prevent stack leniency shifting notes around) alright.
02:16:918 (5) - x:296 y:368 (you can shift 02:17:386 (1) with it) yeppers
02:29:105 (5) - ctrl+g? great catch.
02:50:902 (2) - this jump is really intense compared to the rest of them, shift this to somewhere on the y-axis to do that symmetry trick (if you do this also consider ctrl+g on 02:51:136 (3)) moved 2 to the center of the y-axis. didn't g 3 though.
03:42:230 (7) - make this symmetrical in the center intended to be unsymmetrical
04:14:339 (2,3,4) - how bout stack these on 04:14:339 (2,3,4) for that "reverse" effect? wat
04:16:449 (7) - add drum finish you got it
WHERE ARE THE STREAMS SORRY I HATE MAPPING STREAMS

well thats all, everything looks pretty handy ^_^ have a star and good luck~ <3

vipto wrote:

/appears

[Clarity]

OD +1? not sure about this tho 6 is fine to me. i'll consider if anyone else speaks up about it.

00:20:199 (1) - Move this one a little bit down to make a perfect lead in from 6 to 1 works with me.
00:22:074 (5) - Try something like this maybe? just a suggestion but i think it would play and look better what I did there is on purpose. I am reluctant to change it.

SPOILER

00:26:761 (5) - Move this up so the angle isnt that small (angle from leading in 4 to following the slider upwards) Would play better here since it's vertical the bigger angle here is on purpose, it doesn't really make much of a difference, or at all if you think about it.
00:45:511 (6,7,8,9) - changes to this pattern as follows: turn 6's curve to the other side. reverse 7. delete 8 and 9 to. extend 7 to a reverse slider to match does 4,5 in this combo not mean a thing to you?
the lyrics Like this you get a nice lead in from 6 to 7 and you match the lyrics better.

SPOILER

Like this maybe
00:55:355 (3,4) - blanket these into each other? i know this is kinda conventional but when you already put them like this you can go for the blankets 00:58:168 (1,2,3) - suggestion for this pattern (1 is still a reverse) these aren't blanketed on purpose. the emphasis on this map isn't blanketing.

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01:11:293 (5,6,7) - let's give this a nice touch that close sliders

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(pattern works perfectly. you can just adjust 8 and 9) does my style mean nothing to you?
01:25:355 (3) - move to X:164 y:309? going for the blanket which would fit really good right here works for me.
01:32:621 (2) - Wrong spacing a grid? okay.
01:46:918 (1) - Place it like this?

SPOILER

That would kill the kinda awkward flow. I don't see how this was awkward to begin with
02:04:730 (5) - switch the side of the curve for a nice lead in from 4 same as above
02:22:308 (5) - Why didnt you copymirror 02:20:433 (1) - here? just wondering lol should I?
02:49:261 (6) - turn it like this to give i a better lead in to the next pattern 4,6,1 are all oriented that way for a reason.

SPOILER

02:56:996 (7) - Give this a clean spacing. it's too far out fine to me
03:16:918 (1) - End the spinner here 03:29:574 - . then put a 1/1 slider on 03:30:043 - and make it a reverse to match the lyrics. should look like

SPOILER

make a nice pattern out of it would like to keep as-is
03:33:324 (4) - like this? it's like this on purpose

SPOILER

implying better flow into the next pattern
04:03:324 (4) - again, going for better flow have you ever heard of the concept symmiflow?

SPOILER

I hope that wasnt too nazi but i think you can get something very good out of this with these changes
None the less, very good diff!

It'd be nice if you could call me ingame for a mod on the other diff. I will make sure to mod it too!

This song made me shiver ughhgg

Have some stars ~

Rukario wrote:

[General]
- I say this like on most English songs, the countdown sounds pretty bad. I'd suggest to remove it. you got it.

[Remedy]
Tick Rate 2 maybe? y
00:14:808 (2) - Remove this finish please.
00:19:496 (3,5) - Remove these finishes please.
Actually, just look for finishes on red ticks. They sound awkward as hell.If you miss any, I'm sure DC will point them out later Uguu~ PLSSSS (we talked about this)
00:30:043 (5) - Move this one 1/2 tick forward and make the slider one 1/2 tick longer and keep the repeat. Sounds way better and shouldn't throw off new players. Adjust pattern accordingly.
00:56:293 (3,4) - Big jump for the easiest diff? wow, didn't even consider this
01:24:418 - Where are the claps here? You have them in the Clarity diff but not here? addeddddd
02:18:793 (4,5) - Jump in the easiest diff? Why? should be better now
02:31:918 (1) - Random Clap? nice catch
02:49:730 (5,6,7) - I feel like this stack is a bit too confusing for new players. fixed, a bit
03:01:918 - Start break here. sure
03:46:918 - No claps here again? There are in Clarity. added

[Clarity]
Same comment about finishes on red ticks.
01:53:480 (9) - I would change this so you have an 1/4 stream from 01:53:469 - to 01:53:949 - and starting a slider at the end of the stream aka like this. active WIP on this these two!
04:15:980 - I'd again suggest a 1/4 stream until 04:16:449 -