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lkx_Shore
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年2月28日 at 19:06:46

Artist: Capcom Sound Team
Title: Cannon Ball
Source: Rockman Zero 3
Tags: GBA kapukong OMEGA Zero__Wind Game Boy Advance Megaman
BPM: 149.3
Filesize: 1715kb
Play Time: 01:06
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.19 stars, 64 notes)
  2. Hard (4.88 stars, 161 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 252 notes)
  4. Normal (3.87 stars, 83 notes)
  5. Zero's Extra (5 stars, 272 notes)
Download: Capcom Sound Team - Cannon Ball
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Rockman Zero 3 BGM
Change bg 2013/7/31
Zero's Extra by Zero__wind
Aniki MAD↓
bilibili
niconico
Let's go
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
这是什么
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

这是什么
GBA游戏洛克人zero3最终关卡bgm

音MAD请点击此处 http://www.bilibili.tv/video/av231450/

我小学时代玩的游戏
zero的剧情真是十分感人,上个月看到了那个音mad于是我就找了原曲想动工
White Lesbian
无视
00:10:387 (2) - 这也太别扭了好吗
00:22:846 (1) - 这个滑条吓我一大
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

White Lesbian wrote:

无视
00:10:387 (2) - 这也太别扭了好吗
00:22:846 (1) - 这个滑条吓我一大
那我也跳起来
Spring Roll
新手渣mod见谅,全是建议而已全是吐槽Orz


General
这个千本樱一样的前奏我真是。。
没有kiai time?感觉鬼畜的地方闪一闪挺爽的好,仔细端详了一会发现kiai闪了两下。。


Normal
00:03:556 (1,2) - 我感觉不是很好看/.\
这个Normal似乎没啥好说,要我用offset+1来凑数么?
回过头来补一句,这个NM实在是善良,好评如潮!


Hard
00:07:373 (3,4) - 哦草(看到后面我默默划掉了这句)
这是鬼畜向的Hard么?
00:14:406 (5) - 这个滑条1/2拍长就应该够了吧,3/4拍有种拖泥带水的感觉(既然这么鬼畜的话
00:17:621 (5) - 同上。。感觉甚至一个note都够了。。。
00:59:818 (1) - 从这里开始感觉已经超出Hard的范畴了
00:59:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 吓坏小朋友了怎么办啊!(因为很重要所以说两遍)



Shore
00:11:995 (4) - NC应该在这,连打可以考虑四个note一个NC
00:35:706 (1,1,1,1) - 这里可以考虑做个渐强啊,发现后面已经有渐强了真是ZZ
00:11:995 (4) - NC

本来还有一点的。。想想算了。新人给神麻婆mod图都会有很大的心理压力0 0想说什么又不敢说←这样的
因为想到可能只是这个麻婆形成了自己的style我不是很了解这样的感觉,就把好多吐槽都给删了
—————————————————————以上这段是我凑字数的——————————---————————

hope this help (help个屁啊
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Spring Roll wrote:

新手渣mod见谅,全是建议而已全是吐槽Orz


General
这个千本樱一样的前奏我真是。。全曲都是这个节奏所以非常烦恼怎么放梗....
没有kiai time?感觉鬼畜的地方闪一闪挺爽的好,仔细端详了一会发现kiai闪了两下。。 感觉这曲子没kiaitime吧?所以闪一闪就好


Normal
00:03:556 (1,2) - 我感觉不是很好看/.\ 唉我感觉还好
这个Normal似乎没啥好说,要我用offset+1来凑数么?
回过头来补一句,这个NM实在是善良,好评如潮!


Hard
00:07:373 (3,4) - 哦草(看到后面我默默划掉了这句)...
这是鬼畜向的Hard么?后面我想着既然要结尾了就做难点然后就摆成这样了
00:14:406 (5) - 这个滑条1/2拍长就应该够了吧,3/4拍有种拖泥带水的感觉(既然这么鬼畜的话 我感觉没问题..
00:17:621 (5) - 同上。。感觉甚至一个note都够了。。。
00:59:818 (1) - 从这里开始感觉已经超出Hard的范畴了
00:59:818 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 吓坏小朋友了怎么办啊!(因为很重要所以说两遍)不会的!嗯



Shore
00:11:995 (4) - NC应该在这,连打可以考虑四个note一个NC 我在那下nc是因为那开始变距离所以才下
00:35:706 (1,1,1,1) - 这里可以考虑做个渐强啊,发现后面已经有渐强了真是ZZ
00:11:995 (4) - NC 重复了唉

本来还有一点的。。想想算了。新人给神麻婆mod图都会有很大的心理压力0 0想说什么又不敢说←这样的
因为想到可能只是这个麻婆形成了自己的style我不是很了解这样的感觉,就把好多吐槽都给删了
—————————————————————以上这段是我凑字数的——————————---————————
其实我觉得mod的时候没必要有这种想法,反正都是挑错,你当不认识对方然后有什么不爽的全说出来,没不爽的地方就挑音效好了...

hope this help (help个屁啊
Thank you for your mod ;)
sjoy
我是给你凑MOD的(大雾)
EASY:
00:02:752 (4,5) - 分开吧
00:05:967 (4,5) - ^
00:09:182 (4,5) - ^
00:45:351 (4,5) -
NORAML:
00:42:939 (3) - 和00:42:136 (2) - 相切?
00:45:351 (3) - 和00:44:547 (2) - 相切?
00:59:014 (4) - N不要玩遮挡吧?
INSANE:
00:17:219 (4,5) - 对换一下时间轴?
00:39:825 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 移动过来一点?
01:02:028 (3) 和01:02:229 (4) - 分开摆?

感觉没什么问题阿
就这些吧祝1一周RANK :) 超过花花 :D
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

sjoy wrote:

我是给你凑MOD的(大雾)
EASY:
00:02:752 (4,5) - 分开吧 叠起来打击感好点
00:05:967 (4,5) - ^ 同,下面几个也是这样
00:09:182 (4,5) - ^
00:45:351 (4,5) -
NORAML:
00:42:939 (3) - 和00:42:136 (2) - 相切? 不了
00:45:351 (3) - 和00:44:547 (2) - 相切? 不了
00:59:014 (4) - N不要玩遮挡吧? 玩的时候读得清的
INSANE:
00:17:219 (4,5) - 对换一下时间轴? 现在这样和音乐符合点
00:39:825 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 移动过来一点? 好,然后我稍微改了点
01:02:028 (3) 和01:02:229 (4) - 分开摆?不了

感觉没什么问题阿
就这些吧祝1一周RANK :) 超过花花 :D
一周rank没可能
Chloe
[General]
  1. Source: Rockman Zero 3
    Artist: Capcom Sound Team
    Audio Lead-in 2000 to all diffs
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:378 (3) - blanket的有点丑 感觉你这是因为放不下了就这样了 建议调整下吧 太鲜明了
  2. 00:27:668 (5) - 这边节奏不是很好 建议这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864454 排列你自己排吧0.0
  3. 00:33:093 (2) - blanket?不过和现在一样都不是很好看0.0 另外这边DS1.4是不是有点大了?
  4. 00:33:696 (3) - 建议1/1
  5. 00:42:939 (3) - ^


[Hard]
  1. 00:43:643 (4) - 删!
  2. 01:00:421 (5) - 我觉得换成2个单点比较好
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:387 (2) - 略丑 考虑一下blanket?
  2. 00:12:196 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - 这可以考虑一下DS渐增
  3. 00:20:032 (2) - ctrl g
  4. 00:20:635 (4) - 看了一下跟后面音乐相同的地方节奏不一致 建议还是2个单点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864393
  5. 00:24:754 (2) - 感觉这个blanket没拉好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864399
  6. 00:30:783 (7) - 这个点加了感觉不是很好 建议删了然后这边 重排一下
  7. 00:31:586 (4) - 删了
  8. 00:33:093 (2,3,4) - 可以考虑换一下顺序 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864408
  9. 00:33:696 (5) - blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864415
  10. 00:35:706 (1,1,1,1) - 我觉得可以SV x 1.2/1.3/1.4/1.5
神mapper啊你为什么做的这么好我只能挑刺啊.

你是少女吗
Fycho
Hi~as your req.

Black: just suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
lead-in=1500,把countdown和letterbox去掉

[zero]

  • 1/4和1/2的间距最好注意下,好多很难读图
    00:04:359 (3,4,5,6) –有点反flow
    00:44:949 (6) –尾短向右弯
    00:46:757 (7,1) –靠近点
    00:50:474 (2,3) -^
    00:42:839 (3) –尾whistle

[shore]

  • 排列&节奏
    00:07:373 –这个音放在滑条尾略不舒服建议换成note
    00:08:177 -^后面不说了
    00:15:612 (2,1,2) –间距难读图
    00:51:781 (1,2) –间距可以大点
    音效
    00:07:172 (3) –滑条上的滑动whistle去掉
    00:45:351 (1) –折返处clap去掉
    00:26:864 (3) –滑条首尾+whistle
    00:33:294 (3,4) –whistle
    00:34:902 (3) –首whistle
    00:54:996 (1) –首whistle

[hard]

  • 排列&节奏
    00:00:341 (1,2) - 00:01:144 (3,4,1,2) - 1/4间距的排列起来最好错点开,别stack
    00:22:846 (1,2) –我觉得hard这样难
    01:03:033 (1,2) –良心
    01:03:837 (3) –往下放点01:04:038 (4) –也往下移,flow好点
    音效
    00:17:621 (5) –滑条首加个whistle
    00:19:229 (4) –^
    00:24:051 (5) –^
    00:25:659 (7) –^
    00:34:902 (3) –尾whistle
    00:35:304 (4) –首whistle
    00:50:776 (3) –尾whistle
    00:54:192 (4) –首whistle
    00:55:799 (4) –whistle
    00:57:407 (3) –首whistle

[normal]

  • 感觉难度和Hard差的太大,建议normal加难
    排列&节奏
    00:13:602 –加个1/2滑条
    00:20:434 (2) –拉到00:20:937
    00:22:042 (4) –尾拉到红线
    00:27:668 (4) –尾拉红线或者在红线+note
    00:29:075 –add note
    00:35:706 (1) –你也这么懒
    00:42:136 (2,3) –这两根滑条我认为应该是在蓝线结束,分别是00:42:638 –和00:43:442 –
    00:46:958 (1) –蓝线00:47:460 –结束
    00:48:566 (3,4) -^蓝线
    00:57:407 (2) -^
    00:57:407 (2) –缩短到白线保持音效一致

    音效
    00:18:023 (5) –首clap换成whistle
    00:22:846 (5,6) -^

[easy]

  • 感觉跟音跟的别扭
    00:10:789 (2) –上下两个控制点x坐标相同比较好
    00:16:416 (4) –折返点应该在蓝线00:16:717 –
    00:19:631 (1) –红线00:20:233 –结束
    00:20:836 –加note
    00:21:238 (2) –拉到00:21:841 –
    00:24:453 (6) -改为折返,折返点在00:25:056 –
    00:53:388 (1,3) –注意滑条美观,建议对称
    01:03:033 (6) –NC?

总觉得凌风大大的难度说的太少可又挑不出什么0.0
就这样了gl.
a32
好久好久以前的mod req~~~~
[General]
为什么我这bg右下角会有水印的...




[Easy]
  1. 00:27:869 - 少note?
  2. 00:34:299 - ^
  3. 00:37:313 - 全图唯一的normal-hitnormal...违和感满满啊 降一点音量用finish多好




[Normal]
  1. AR+1 HP+1?要不然和hard难度差太多了
  2. 00:00:341 (1,2) - 这两个slider应该对称比较好吧...
  3. 00:28:070 - whistle?
  4. 00:42:939 (3,1) - 包得不够好的感觉...
    整体还行但是细节问题不少...虽然是grid3下做的还是用grid4修一下细节吧...还有中间一段clap用的好莫名啊





[Hard]
  1. 00:09:182 (4) - 求别跳这么大....
  2. 00:17:018 (3,4,5) - 间距统一下吧...
  3. 00:22:846 (1,2) - 你确定这不是I里用的梗
  4. 00:28:673 (4,5) - Ctrl+G?感觉flow更好
  5. 00:32:290 (5) - 移开点比较好 现在被slider遮了难看
    简直人性




[Shore]
  1. 00:07:172 (3) - whistle只加在头尾就够了吧...body上应该不需要的
  2. 00:10:387 (2) - 顺时针旋转点?感觉flow会好点
  3. 00:18:023 (1,2) - 遮了太丑
  4. 00:20:032 (2,3) - 包得不够好;_;
  5. 00:25:056 (3) - 朝下移一格?> >
  6. 00:29:677 (2,3,4) - 间距好像没统一...
  7. 00:50:173 (1,2) - 太难读
    感觉比hard难不了多少orz




[Zero]
  1. 00:20:434 (4) - 左移两格?
  2. 00:37:112 (3) - whistle在这很难听啊
  3. 00:54:393 (4,5,6) - 向上移开点吧...碰到下面那个slider了
    这么正常的歌也能这么鬼畜 bdbf


射颗星 早日rank~
Zero__wind
间距微调了都
补了那个漏掉的哨子
其他的感觉还好啊=。=
Thx for mod~
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 40528
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Cannon Ball
TitleUnicode:Cannon Ball
Artist:Rockman Zero 3
ArtistUnicode:Rockman Zero 3
Creator:lkx_Shore
Version:Zero
Source:
Tags:GBA kapukong Capcom OMEGA
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Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Chloe wrote:

[General]
  1. Source: Rockman Zero 3
    Artist: Capcom Sound Team
    Audio Lead-in 2000 to all diffs
    all fix
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:378 (3) - blanket的有点丑 感觉你这是因为放不下了就这样了 建议调整下吧 太鲜明了 不是blanket,我本来就是想这么放而已...
  2. 00:27:668 (5) - 这边节奏不是很好 建议这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864454 排列你自己排吧0.0 改了,但是没按照说的改
  3. 00:33:093 (2) - blanket?不过和现在一样都不是很好看0.0 另外这边DS1.4是不是有点大了? fix
  4. 00:33:696 (3) - 建议1/1 no
  5. 00:42:939 (3) - ^ no


[Hard]
  1. 00:43:643 (4) - 删! ok
  2. 01:00:421 (5) - 我觉得换成2个单点比较好 no
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:387 (2) - 略丑 考虑一下blanket? fix
  2. 00:12:196 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - 这可以考虑一下DS渐增 我感觉现在这样就好
  3. 00:20:032 (2) - ctrl g no
  4. 00:20:635 (4) - 看了一下跟后面音乐相同的地方节奏不一致 建议还是2个单点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864393 fix
  5. 00:24:754 (2) - 感觉这个blanket没拉好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864399 fix
  6. 00:30:783 (7) - 这个点加了感觉不是很好 建议删了然后这边 重排一下 no
  7. 00:31:586 (4) - 删了 no,他这里本来就是4连
  8. 00:33:093 (2,3,4) - 可以考虑换一下顺序 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864408 fix
  9. 00:33:696 (5) - blanket http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/864415 fix
  10. 00:35:706 (1,1,1,1) - 我觉得可以SV x 1.2/1.3/1.4/1.5 算了
神mapper啊你为什么做的这么好我只能挑刺啊.

你是少女吗 不是
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Fycho wrote:

Hi~as your req.

Black: just suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
lead-in=1500,把countdown和letterbox去掉 fix

[shore]

  • 排列&节奏
    00:07:373 –这个音放在滑条尾略不舒服建议换成note fix
    00:08:177 -^后面不说了
    00:15:612 (2,1,2) –间距难读图
    00:51:781 (1,2) –间距可以大点 都没改
    音效
    00:07:172 (3) –滑条上的滑动whistle去掉 fix
    00:45:351 (1) –折返处clap去掉 no
    00:26:864 (3) –滑条首尾+whistle fix,下面的都是fix
    00:33:294 (3,4) –whistle
    00:34:902 (3) –首whistle
    00:54:996 (1) –首whistle

[hard]

  • 排列&节奏
    00:00:341 (1,2) - 00:01:144 (3,4,1,2) - 1/4间距的排列起来最好错点开,别stack 这样的话打图的时候自己拆开的
    00:22:846 (1,2) –我觉得hard这样难
    01:03:033 (1,2) –良心 上面的都没改
    01:03:837 (3) –往下放点01:04:038 (4) –也往下移,flow好点 fix
    音效
    00:17:621 (5) –滑条首加个whistle
    00:19:229 (4) –^
    00:24:051 (5) –^
    00:25:659 (7) –^
    00:34:902 (3) –尾whistle
    00:35:304 (4) –首whistle
    00:50:776 (3) –尾whistle
    00:54:192 (4) –首whistle
    00:55:799 (4) –whistle
    00:57:407 (3) –首whistle all fix

[normal]

  • 感觉难度和Hard差的太大,建议normal加难 其实我nm现在这样就好
    排列&节奏
    00:13:602 –加个1/2滑条
    00:20:434 (2) –拉到00:20:937 为啥,这没对上音啊
    00:22:042 (4) –尾拉到红线 感觉现在就好
    00:27:668 (4) –尾拉红线或者在红线+note 这滑条尾巴本来就在红线啊...
    00:29:075 –add note 唐突了点
    00:35:706 (1) –你也这么懒 对啊因为不知道放什么梗好了.-.
    00:42:136 (2,3) –这两根滑条我认为应该是在蓝线结束,分别是00:42:638 –和00:43:442 – 我感觉你喇叭出问题了..后面蓝线的都没改
    00:46:958 (1) –蓝线00:47:460 –结束
    00:48:566 (3,4) -^蓝线
    00:57:407 (2) -^
    00:57:407 (2) –缩短到白线保持音效一致 fix

    音效
    00:18:023 (5) –首clap换成whistle fix,下面的也fix
    00:22:846 (5,6) -^

[easy]

  • 感觉跟音跟的别扭 嗯我稍微改了点
    00:10:789 (2) –上下两个控制点x坐标相同比较好 fix
    00:16:416 (4) –折返点应该在蓝线00:16:717 – 这里没跟那段音
    00:19:631 (1) –红线00:20:233 –结束 fix
    00:20:836 –加note 改了,但不是加note而是换成了滑条
    00:21:238 (2) –拉到00:21:841 – fix
    00:24:453 (6) -改为折返,折返点在00:25:056 – fix
    00:53:388 (1,3) –注意滑条美观,建议对称 我感觉挺好.
    01:03:033 (6) –NC? 没必要

总觉得凌风大大的难度说的太少可又挑不出什么0.0
就这样了gl.
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

a3272509123 wrote:

好久好久以前的mod req~~~~
[General]
为什么我这bg右下角会有水印的... 咦...本来以为在洛克人吧的图册扒的就不会有水印的...好我去弄掉




[Easy]
  1. 00:27:869 - 少note?
  2. 00:34:299 - ^
  3. 00:37:313 - 全图唯一的normal-hitnormal...违和感满满啊 降一点音量用finish多好 all fix




[Normal]
  1. AR+1 HP+1?要不然和hard难度差太多了
  2. 00:00:341 (1,2) - 这两个slider应该对称比较好吧...
  3. 00:28:070 - whistle? 我后来改了一下,现在这没物件了
  4. 00:42:939 (3,1) - 包得不够好的感觉...
    整体还行但是细节问题不少...虽然是grid3下做的还是用grid4修一下细节吧...还有中间一段clap用的好莫名啊 all fix





[Hard]
  1. 00:09:182 (4) - 求别跳这么大.... fix
  2. 00:17:018 (3,4,5) - 间距统一下吧... fix
  3. 00:22:846 (1,2) - 你确定这不是I里用的梗 嗯....好吧这应该是看起来很难其实用在hard里没问题的(狡辩
  4. 00:28:673 (4,5) - Ctrl+G?感觉flow更好 fix
  5. 00:32:290 (5) - 移开点比较好 现在被slider遮了难看 fix
    简直人性




[Shore]
  1. 00:07:172 (3) - whistle只加在头尾就够了吧...body上应该不需要的 fix
  2. 00:10:387 (2) - 顺时针旋转点?感觉flow会好点 fix
  3. 00:18:023 (1,2) - 遮了太丑 fix
  4. 00:20:032 (2,3) - 包得不够好;_; fix
  5. 00:25:056 (3) - 朝下移一格?> > fix
  6. 00:29:677 (2,3,4) - 间距好像没统一... fix
  7. 00:50:173 (1,2) - 太难读 fix
    感觉比hard难不了多少orz 啊...是吗
射颗星 早日rank~ 好,谢谢
Hollow Wings
random mod 233
Zero
00:04:359 (3) - reverse
00:36:710 (1,2,3) - 个人建议这里排的整齐一点
00:45:351 (1,2) - 距离再大点
00:53:991 (3,6) - ^

没啥可说的233
Shore
好多blanket,有些没包好或者差了点点,你自己看看要不要改
00:00:642 (2,6) -
00:03:556 (1,2) -
00:04:661 (5,6) -
00:05:967 (2,3) -
00:07:976 (7,1) -
00:22:042 (2,1) -
00:44:547 (4,1) - 1包4没弄好
00:51:781 (1,2) -
01:03:033 (1,2,3) - 这段不blanket那滑条就拉平一点

00:07:072 (2) - 这个的w音效去掉
00:23:147 (2,3) - 这不排一直线么
01:06:248 (1) - 个人建议放到133.203

同样没啥好说的233
Hard
00:46:154 (2,1) - blanket

...
Normal
finish音效有点下的摸不准头脑
00:50:173 (1,2) - 拉远或者blanket

...
Easy
00:34:299 (2,3) - 这个stack对新人来说节奏感要求略高。。。

好多红线折返,下节奏好独特-。-

...你们都会做图
Topic Starter
lkx_Shore

Hollow Wings wrote:

random mod 233

Shore
好多blanket,有些没包好或者差了点点,你自己看看要不要改
00:00:642 (2,6) -
00:03:556 (1,2) -
00:04:661 (5,6) -
00:05:967 (2,3) -
00:07:976 (7,1) -
00:22:042 (2,1) -
00:44:547 (4,1) - 1包4没弄好
00:51:781 (1,2) -
01:03:033 (1,2,3) - 这段不blanket那滑条就拉平一点
一半改了一半没改

00:07:072 (2) - 这个的w音效去掉 fix
00:23:147 (2,3) - 这不排一直线么 不了,这里本来就是想让他排成三角
01:06:248 (1) - 个人建议放到133.203 fix

同样没啥好说的233
Hard
00:46:154 (2,1) - blanket 这个不是想blanket

...
Normal
finish音效有点下的摸不准头脑
00:50:173 (1,2) - 拉远或者blanket fix

...
Easy
00:34:299 (2,3) - 这个stack对新人来说节奏感要求略高。。。 od判定很松的

好多红线折返,下节奏好独特-。-

...你们都会做图
Thank you :D
Zero__wind

Hollow Wings wrote:

random mod 233
Zero
00:04:359 (3) - reverse 现在这样挺好
00:36:710 (1,2,3) - 个人建议这里排的整齐一点 弄了一下
00:45:351 (1,2) - 距离再大点 k
00:53:991 (3,6) - ^ k

没啥可说的233
R o r o
[Zero]
00:10:789 (4,5) - bad flow,很容易造成断尾miss
00:11:091 (5,6) - 同上
00:19:229 (5) - 拉好?
00:26:061 (1,2,3) - 太空了,前面这么激烈这里空了 一下玩起来不是很好,改成滑条吧,而且这里音效最好不要空着了,我感觉你放note的那几个地方都应该是得下音效的
00:32:491 (1,2,3) - ^
00:36:107 (2,3) - 为什么下2连
00:56:201 (6,1) - 太难读了,很容易miss
00:58:211 (1) - 拉好点?
01:02:028 (3,1,2,1,2,1) - 感觉像是乱来

[Shore]
AR+1?
00:07:072 - 这一段你是不是没梗了才这么下的节奏啊,下点2连滑条会死吗
00:58:512 (2) - 滑条尾巴加Whistle

[Hard]
00:03:556 (1) - 同insane
00:05:967 (3) - 改成一个倒钩状的?
00:30:481 (6) - flow不好,改弯他吧

[Normal]
00:01:144 (2) - 你自己看看这里
00:29:276 (1) - 头finish?
00:42:939 (3) - 改finish

[Easy]
节奏很莫名我感觉



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