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ClariS - Luminous -movie MIX-

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No_Gu
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No_Gu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月14日 星期日 at 11:47:17

Artist: ClariS
Title: Luminous -movie MIX-
Source: Gekijouban Puella Magi Madoka Magica [Zenhen] Hajimari no Monogatari
Tags: 劇場版 魔法少女まどか☆マギカ [前編] 始まりの物語 Flask
BPM: 173
Filesize: 3782kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.1 stars, 72 notes)
  2. Flask's Normal (4.08 stars, 110 notes)
  3. Hard (4.73 stars, 181 notes)
  4. Insane (4.97 stars, 228 notes)
Download: ClariS - Luminous -movie MIX-
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#49

Normal - Flask
SB - Azure
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
思考
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
佔位 <3

交件ww
http://puu.sh/3gRPA
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No_Gu
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No_Gu

Azure wrote:

佔位 <3
www先谢了

EDIT:蛮不错的，谢谢了
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Hatori-kun
84 posts
Joined December 2012
Hatori-kun
<3 this song <33
Kotone
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Joined August 2008
Kotone
廢怯少年だぴぐ★マギカ
ts8zs
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ts8zs
占位
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
NoGu姐姐 (ｏ´艸｀ｏ)

[Easy]
  1. nice
[Flask's Normal]
  1. 00:54:184 (5) Drum-finish&clap
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:236 (1) as Insane
  2. 00:54:358 (4,5) Drum-finish
[Insane]
  1. 00:09:444 (2) slider's tail stick with 00:08:231 (3) head
  2. 00:21:410 (1) -whistle +finish (+green line (N:C2))
    00:24:184 (1) if you change that, remember +green line (S:C1) here
  3. 00:54:358 (3,4) add hitsound like 00:48:809 (5)
Good luck (ノε゜●)
Fycho
Global Moderator
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Fycho
mod占位。。。。AR3怎么什么沙发都抢不来抢我的0.0思考www...........
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
Mod from PM~

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
第二根红线没什么必要，最后根红线感觉也没什么必要0.0

[IS]

  • 00:09:444 (2) –形状可以弄对称点，再和前面的重叠好
    00:15:861 (1) –偷懒0.0差评
    00:54:184 (3) –滑条首尾均clap
    01:19:676 (1) –首whistle换成Finish
    01:23:491 (3,1) –交换NC
    最后大转盘结尾声很违和。音效可以小点或者换个

[HD]

  • 吐槽下星级
    00:09:617 (3) –这个尾unsnap
    00:37:710 –add note
    01:03:028 (1) –首改finish
    01:14:127 (1) -^
    01:17:421 (2) –尾改finish
    01:18:809 (2) -^
    01:21:583 (2) –首改finish，尾端clap
    大转盘同I

[F酱’NM]

  • 01:14:646 (2) –尾部unsnap，怎么都这样0.0？
    00:15:861 (3) -NC
    00:14:473 (2) –首whistle
    00:14:473 (2) –折返处drum finish
    00:40:832 (1) –首whistle
    00:43:606 (1) -^
    00:44:994 (3) –^
    00:46:381 (1) –^
    00:48:462 (4) -^
    00:53:317 (3) –whistle
    00:53:664 (4) –clap
    00:56:612 (4) –尾clap
    01:09:098 (5) -^
    01:21:583 (2) –折返处的whistle略违和啊0.0
    最后的转盘音效减小

[EZ]

  • 00:00:601 (1) –强烈建议左右改对称
    00:43:606 (1) –whistle
    00:44:994 (3) -^
    00:46:381 (1) -^
    00:47:768 (3,4) –这两个好别扭，坑新手吗;w;建议前面一个改单折返，后面一个改单折返并前移到白线，然后这里00:49:155 –加note加finish，原来两个finish都去掉
    00:50:543 (2) –whistle
    00:53:317 (3) –首whistle
    01:05:109 (4) –首whistle
    01:18:288 (3) –Finish
    大转盘音效见笑
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hi! From my queue special round~

[Easy]
00:43:606 (1) - add whistle for consistency 00:40:832 (1)
00:46:381 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:00:601 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe move them somewhere else? It's kind of boring

[Insane]
00:00:601 (1,2) Maybe replace them to slider? They are the same as hard
00:26:959 (1) - After this, put circles when you skip a white tick (I don't know how to explain)
SPOILER

Circle
Put a circle at:
00:27:653
00:28:346
00:29:040
00:30:427
00:31:121
00:31:814
00:32:508 to 00:34:936, put circles in all whites ticks

It speed up the beats and for me, it follows the music.

Good Luck and star!
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
黑: 随意可忽略
蓝: 请认真考虑
Red: 不符合规则

[Insane]

00:05:283 (2) - 可以再弯点...
00:07:364 (5) - NC & 00:07:537 (1) - 去掉, 这样感觉会比较清洁
00:09:444 (2) - (尾端) 希望可以和 00:08:231 (5) - 再靠近点或者stack
00:18:288 (1) - 前段+soft-hitwhistle 尾端+normal-hitnormal
00:26:959 - 虽然不懂但是感觉在这之后可以听到1/1的敲声. 希望你可以考虑放note下
01:04:762 (2) - 尾部可以移上点

nice

[Hard]

00:07:364 (3) - NC & 00:07:537 (1) - don't NC
00:18:288 (1) - 说了

找不出啥啦 =v=
GL~ stared!
Zero__wind
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Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
服气 写了一遍的mod被浏览器吃了

Insane
00:07:450 (6) - 可以不whistle
00:08:057 (2) - （131,261） ？
00:09:444 (2) - 头上可以换clap
00:42:913 (3) - 尾巴太高了碰血条
00:43:953 (3,5) - 或许避免overlap ？
00:53:664 (2) - 掉了finish
01:12:566 (1) - 这个有点奇怪的形状是因为太长了会碰到01:12:046 (3) - 么？
01:16:814 (7) - 不要whistle ？
01:22:450 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一起往下挪一些吧 上头太高了
01:27:653 (4) - 这个也一样往下来点儿 把 01:26:959 (2,3) - 的弧度调整一下就可以
01:31:120 (2,3,4) - 往下一点儿

Hard
00:09:617 (3) - 没记错的话这个头上不是应该drum finish的？
00:50:196 (3) - 打图角度考虑放到(296,64) 一带？
00:53:231 (5) - 不要whistle ？
01:04:762 (2) - 略微弯一点点？ 像 ） 这样

Normal
00:12:392 (5) - 不要再往上了嘛 尾巴锚点拉到（224,12）
00:42:913 (5) - 这个居然更高… 让其他东西给它腾出点空间嘛 http://puu.sh/3sx0K.jpg
01:21:063 (1) - 从前面的NC一致性来看这个NC似乎是不必要的
01:33:764 - F酱巨懒 绿线都不看的 这根要删掉 前面红线音量改成5%

Easy
00:47:768 (3,4) - 这么短的multi-reverse在最低难度不太好 建议改成 http://puu.sh/3sxaB.jpg
01:33:764 - 啊原来不是F酱巨懒是屁股巨懒 这根绿线要删掉 前面红线音量改成5%

That's all
Good luck

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Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Citrus
Hi~m4m
[General]
  • 00:15:861- 00:35:283 这一段完全可以再做点东西出来，1分40秒的歌空这么一大段不太合适
[Insane]
  • 00:00:601 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不摆个形状出来感觉有点浪费，而且和hard难度有点重复了
    SPOILER
    00:11:352 (3) - Ctrl+G感觉不错
    00:59:560 (2,3) - 这样比较有紧张感，毕竟马上就是kiai time了

[Hard]
  • 00:09:617 (3) - drum-finish
    00:50:369 (1) - Ctrl+Shift+R逆时针转5度
能力有限，只有这些了，祝早日rank～
Losertic
461 posts
Joined May 2012
Losertic
Hello! M4M.

it's a good voice...

Modding

General

  1. SB is hard to see move SB. up title. please.

Easy

  1. 00:13:086 (3,1) - Too hard. delete 3 note, move spin start at 00:13:086
  2. 00:20:716 (1,2) - create note? i want this note.
  3. 00:48:635 (4) - delete slider. create slider(no reverse. long slider.) start at 00:48:462
  4. 01:33:201 - create NC note.

Normal

  1. Check Distance.
  2. 00:20:716 (1,2) - create note? i want this note.
  3. 01:10:658 (1,1) - overlap.
  4. 01:14:646 (2) - object end not snapped!

Hard

  1. 00:00:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/843037 like this? (star) Monotonous.
  2. 00:14:647 - 00:35:283 - empty. // mixed note,break time.
  3. 00:53:317 (1) - delete NC // 00:54:011 (2) - NC

Insane

  1. 00:00:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/843037 like this? (star) Monotonous.
  2. 00:05:803 (3,1) - overlap
  3. 00:08:057 (2,3) - overlap.
  4. 00:14:647 - 00:35:283 - empty. // mixed note,break time.
  5. 00:36:323 (3,4,1) - overlap.change slightly
  6. 00:37:364 (3,5) - create note. (i heared vocal)
  7. 01:04:762 (2,3,4,5,6) - exactly star. like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/843049
  8. 01:20:368 (3) - move note. difficult see.
TrigonometrY
281 posts
Joined November 2011
TrigonometrY
Hi from your queue.

[Easy]
00:00:601 (1) - align the slider: http://puu.sh/3sAoi/f41258c960.jpg
88,160,601,2,0,B|120:128|128:88|128:88|256:176|384:88|384:88|392:128|424:160,1,440,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:06:150 (2) - make it more symmetrical. Move the last point of slider two grids left: http://puu.sh/3sAwR/0259f00642.jpg
00:10:311 (1,2,3) - I understand, you trying to follow DS, but their position looks a little randomly, also 00:13:086 (3) - is beyond the playfield: http://puu.sh/3sAGt/1b9edb63a9.jpg
I propose change their position: http://puu.sh/3sARW/091705283f.jpg
00:13:173 (1) - why is here whistle, but not finish?
I played all diffs and break in Easy and Normal seems to me too long, especially in short version of song. How about start from here 00:21:410 - or here 00:26:959 - ?
00:36:670 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer this rhythm, because slider, which begins from red tick may confuse in Easy: http://puu.sh/3sBjX/e4d7f360e8.jpg
00:54:011 (4) - maybe replace this slider with the previous? http://puu.sh/3sBqH/b8cc5c7eb9.jpg It will be better following the music.
[Flask's Normal]
Same about break.
00:05:456 (1) - nc
00:42:913 (5) - a little beyond the playfield: http://puu.sh/3sBCm/e725d38950.jpg. Rotate end of slider, like this: http://puu.sh/3sBEo/9f07cf22cc.jpg
00:47:768 (3) - maybe prolong it to red tick and put finish at end? http://puu.sh/3sBJ1/3dd9b2e44e.jpg
01:09:791 (6,1,1) - what do you think about this positions of sliders? http://puu.sh/3sBNb/ad91d4f1db.jpg
[Hard]
HP Drain +1 maybe?
00:00:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - I propose a little change: every next circle put 1 grid higher and to the left. Something like this:
http://puu.sh/3sC2r/fb4b430c91.jpg
00:21:236 (1) - don't understand, why there isn't previous slider. 00:21:236 - here is low beat, so I recommend replace it:
http://puu.sh/3sCoO/40b25c6998.jpg
[Insane]
00:02:855 (7) - maybe put it in centre? A little jump looks good with finish
00:21:236 (1) - same I've told you about Hard
00:54:184 (3) - replace it with two circles. It will be better following the drums.
01:33:678 (1) - 256;192?

Good luck!
No_Gu
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Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
updated thx
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
as your request

[Easy]
01:25:225 - 感觉换成finish好点

[Flask's Normal]
00:42:913 (5) - 可以换个方向避免遮HP bar
00:54:011 (5) - 这里直接挨到屏幕边了
01:37:493 - 建议这里小点声，太吓人了

[Hard]
00:21:236 - 感觉这里可以小点声0.0
01:09:444 - 这里感觉有点空，clap如何

[Insane]
HD可以+1
00:14:994 - 00:15:340 - 00:15:514 - 我觉得这里可以加点什么，跟鼓，顺便过度下
00:21:236 - 同Hard
00:59:560 (2,3) - I的话我觉得可以不必死跟，用1/4试试？
01:10:311 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 这个串感觉形状有点。。不太好看

再叫我吧
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
也是非常的op
中间那段给我做了 然后再来问我要一次mod
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[Hard]
01:09:444 - 这里感觉有点空，clap如何加了whistle

[Insane]
00:59:560 (2,3) - I的话我觉得可以不必死跟，用1/4试试？1/4的话感觉有点乱。。和音乐一重合

再叫我吧
没异议的都删了。thx

@Flower 我真是略懒。。。
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