1. Easy (2.58 stars, 266 notes)
2. Hard (4.83 stars, 521 notes)
3. Normal (4.24 stars, 353 notes)

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300,216,196072,1,2,0:0:0:0:

Xinely wrote:

00:09:072 (5) - remove finish?

HabiHolic wrote:

From My Queue

[Easy]
00:48:872 (1) - Remove NC okay
01:39:472 (4) - No No No No!! Not touch any notes slightly lowering the bar even placement score Unrankble LOL forgot about that note
01:42:672 (4) - Why Overlap? Arranged in different ways ok, slightly arranged
03:16:472 (1) - Remove NC 03:17:272 (2) - NC Here~ I'm doing NC every 2 white ticks, so no, but I understand your reasoning

[Normal]
00:25:872 (5) - 00:25:072 (3) - This is similar to the ctrl + g changed slightly D:
01:20:272 (1) - Remove NC already off D:

[Hard]

Good No Pick~

Good Map Star +1 thank you so much ;A;

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

My Mod

Easy

01:42:672 (5) - Correct y: 281 for perfect stacking. ok
02:32:472 (2,3) - How about: Make 3 like you did 1, Flip hor, Flip Vert, Rotate 33° - Looks better imo. okk

Click Me

02:41:272 (1) - Correct x: 272 haha ok
03:37:472 (3,1) - I suggest to change it here, to create a better Flow. Maybe just flip 3 H+V: suree

Click Me

Normal

00:33:472 - Add a Note here, you're missing the "Ka" in the lyrics. mmkay
00:39:272 (1) - Maybe Flip H, Flip V and Crtl + G? Would look nice imo yeah it does
01:23:872 (5) - I don't think this one is necessary, but if You like it, keep it. okk
01:51:672 (1) - How about a Finish Sound? already on the tail of 3
02:24:672 - Add a Note here, sounds good imo, and if you do, don't stack with the slider. ehh, will consider
02:44:072 (5,6,1) - NC to 5, not to 1, Lyrics start there. i'm going by stanza, so NC every 2 white ticks
03:08:272 (1,1) - The Note is a bit soon after the spinner, and is it supposed not to be in the middle? removed~
03:10:872 (2) - This would fit more with the lyrics if u shorten it to 03:11:072 - and reverse it. okayy
03:14:472 - Add a Note, you're missing the "Ki" in the Vocals here. kayy
03:17:872 (3) - Shorten to 03:18:272 - and add a Note at 03:18:472 - , better would be a Slider from 03:18:472 - to 03:18:672 -. sounds good
03:59:672 (1,1) - Again very soon after spinner. changed
04:10:872 (1) - Hear closely to this thing, I think you could shorten and reverse it in a way. dunno if I want to do 1/4 sliders in normal D;


Hard

00:15:872 (5) - Shorten and Reverse, or make some Buttons, because you miss the snap on 00:16:072 - ? i'm following background music here, not the snap
00:26:472 (1) - Correct x: 185. okk
01:08:072 (6) - Correct x for the ending of slider: 281, or just move 01:07:272 (4) - for perfect stack. okk
01:13:872 (8) - NC? Cause of the Trumpet starting and lyrics ending there. again, following stanzas here xD and I think the combo would be a bit short if i NCed here ):
01:16:872 (6) - Correct x: 214, y: 325 okk
01:24:872 (3,4) - 01:25:672 (5,6) - Remove this high spacing, it is very confusing. made spacing more equal
01:26:472 (7) - NC. following stanza
01:49:672 (7) - Correct x: 414. okk
02:17:872 (7) - NC for Trumpet? no, sorry D;
02:22:472 (2) - Correct x: 193, y: 133 o
02:27:272 (5) - Correct x: 244, y: 276 k
02:29:872 (6) - Correct y: 105 a
02:46:672 (6) - Correct x: 339 y
02:50:472 (7) - Correct x: 310 y
03:02:072 (5) - Correct y: 126 y

I think you see what I did with all these annoying Correct x, y thingies, it is about if you want to have "perfect" stacks, you gotta recheck, I gave you some examples up there, you can make perfect stacks, if you place a Note at the line after the Note you want to stack with, as you know, it automatically stacks perfect this way, then move the stacked note at the timeline. yess i know lol, I moved some notes manually though, that's why some are imperfect

That's it, you did good work on your map Good Luck!! thank you, and thanks for modding *u*

Smoothie wrote:

Heya~

From my modding queue

[Hard]

00:24:472 (4) - Ctrl+G? i'm a bit concerned that the hitburst from (2) might hide the repeat if I do that D: will consider though~


[Normal]

03:06:872 (1,1) - I recommend you to remove the last spinner and extend the first on to 03:10:072 removed and extended the first to an earlier time D:
03:53:872 (5) - That slider looks a bit crumbled :c Consider removing the mittle point on the slider~ stretched it out a bit, but I want it to stay curved lol

That's all~ Everything removed was fixed exactly how you suggested
Good luck! thank you! thanks for your mod~

1. 00:20:472 (1) - Move a bit to the right (spacing will be more accurate)
2. 01:14:872 (1) - Move last slider point 1 grid left and it will be more equal to next slider
3. 01:23:672 (3) - Mhm, this slider is pretty useless, remove it maybe? It will be a little break for noob players too :3
4. 03:25:672 (4) - Stack on 03:23:272 (2) - ?
6. 04:11:272 (1) - Make spinner end more silent?

1. 01:28:472 (2) - Try to copy (1) and rearrange the slider, so they will be more symmetrical
2. 04:11:272 (1) - Make spinner end more silent?

1. 00:09:072 (5,6,7) - Check (5)'s end, (6) and (7)'s start, you can do a prettier triangle
   SPOILER

   
2. 03:07:872 (1) - Replace with two beats, it will be better imo :3
4. 04:11:272 (1) - Same as Easy and Normal

Leader wrote:

Hello, M4M from my Modding Queue :3

[Easy]

1. 00:20:472 (1) - Move a bit to the right (spacing will be more accurate) sure
2. 01:14:872 (1) - Move last slider point 1 grid left and it will be more equal to next slider fixed
3. 01:23:672 (3) - Mhm, this slider is pretty useless, remove it maybe? It will be a little break for noob players too :3 agreed, but added a note where the end of the slider originally was
4. 03:25:672 (4) - Stack on 03:23:272 (2) - ? ok
6. 04:11:272 (1) - Make spinner end more silent? I think it's quiet enough, but i'll consider it

[Normal]

1. 01:28:472 (2) - Try to copy (1) and rearrange the slider, so they will be more symmetrical copied (2) to change (1) instead lol, it's easier that way ;_;
2. 04:11:272 (1) - Make spinner end more silent? same as in easy

[Hard]

1. 00:09:072 (5,6,7) - Check (5)'s end, (6) and (7)'s start, you can do a prettier triangle kaaay
   SPOILER

   
2. 03:07:872 (1) - Replace with two beats, it will be better imo :3 ehh, i'll think about it
4. 04:11:272 (1) - Same as Easy and Normal same as easy and normal

Good map, good luck thank you for modding!

jonathanlfj wrote:

from my modding queue
nice and calm song

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
you probably need an audio lead-in of 1000~1500ms, currently the map starts too sudden leaving less time for players to prepare okayy

[Easy]
00:21:472 (2) - move a bit left for a nice oval flow done
00:39:672 (1,2,3) - try to avoid immediate overlaps like this in Easy, due to the low AR and no stack leniency newbies are likely to be confused sounds reasonable, changed slider
02:14:872 (4) - blanket can look better here yess
02:55:872 (4) - add a finish on the slider end yeah
03:42:072 (1) - blanket can be improved here too kay
04:09:872 (1) - extend this to 04:11:072 sounds better imo what a long slider, ok haha

[Normal]
OD-1 fits better with this diff imo changed
00:48:072 (5) - add a finish on the slider end okk
01:43:472 (5,1) - you should manually stack this since in game play 01:43:472 (5) will appear to be improperly stacked due to stack leniency how2manual stack ;_; think i fixed it derrp
02:47:472 (5,1) - same as above same
02:57:272 (1) - add a finish on slider start already there, but okay
03:54:872 (1) - stack this at where 03:52:672 (3,4) was okayy
04:09:072 (3,4,5) - this rhythm plays better here imo: sounds good

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:22:072 (1) - extend this to 00:23:072 sinze thats when the saxophone halts uhh a bit iffy about it, I hear a beat in the bg D:
00:23:472 (1) - finish? yess
00:48:672 (8) - ^ ^
01:26:872 (8) - NC like 02:30:872 (1) oh yea, forgot
01:51:872 (5) - make this into a repeat slider to cover the drums at 01:52:072 didn't notice it, fixed
02:15:872 (2) - this slider is touching the hp bar (default skin), please lower it a bit changed
02:55:972 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - if you listen to this stream at 25% playback you will notice it is not in sync with the saxophone, so its best if you can use all sliders here to prevent players from mishitting the stream changed
03:20:272 (3) - how bout shorten this to 03:20:472 and start the stream there? this way it is easier to initiate the stream instead of having to start it in the middle of the 1/4 saxophone sounds (these are well synced so no issue with using circles) changed, had to make the stream distance a bit bigger so i wouldn't have to change the next couple sliders ;_;
03:47:472 (8,10) - not perfectly stacked darn, i thought i fixed them all ):
04:03:872 (5) - please put this slider into another direction, the hitburst from 04:02:672 (3) (or the slider itself) will cover the repeat arrow giving players less time to notice there is a repeat here ctrl+G'd the slider
04:10:872 (1) - how bout perfectly center this? okk

Really comfortable maps to play good luck in ranking~ sankyuu ^__^

Flower wrote:

Hi~

[General]
I like the map :3 I can't find many problems so I decide to do a short mod ty

[Hard]
00:04:072 - add whistle? sure i'm so bad at hitsounds ;_;
00:08:472 - ^ added
00:18:272 - ^ added
00:35:472 (6) - don't be overlapped by 4? fixed
00:38:472 (5) - ^ fixed
01:01:872 (1) - stack with 2, cause it reads better. I always get 50 with current patter xD sure, why not ^_^
01:06:272 (2) - blanket better fixed, i think
01:22:672 (4) - slider head don't be overlapped? i think i'll keep it how it is for now
01:32:272 (4,1) - I recommend this merging into one slider. but up to you i want to keep 4 and 1 separate, because 1 marks the start of the background music thing haha
01:48:272 (4) - slider head don't be overlapped? I like the way it is now, but I'll reconsider ;_;
02:05:872 (1) - stack with 2 i want to make the 2nd verse a bit harder than the first by not stacking i'll think about it though
02:36:272 (4,1) - I recommend this merging into one slider. but up to you same as above

[Normal]
00:23:672 (1,2,3) - ugly overlap changed it a bit
01:41:872 (3,5,1) - is this intended? regardless whether or not, I recommend not making the notes stacked or overlapped because hard to read. good point, changed
02:45:872 (3,5,1) - ^ same

[Easy]
00:18:272 - add whistle? added
01:20:872 (4) - don't be overlapped by 01:18:872 (2) - ? ok
03:55:672 (2,3) - blanket better done

Good luck~ thanks ^___^

1. Reduce OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 03:06:872 (1) - I think it would be better if you completely silence this spinner.
2. 04:01:272 (1) - Is the sliderwhistle on this slider intended? I kinda don't like it.

1. Reduce HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 00:48:072 (5) - New combo should go there, since the new section actually begins here, remove the next one afterwards.
2. 01:27:672 (1,2) - The stack here could be improved if you disable the grid snap.
3. 01:43:472 (5,1) - I guess you did a mistake here with stacking.
4. 02:31:672 (1,2) - The stack here could be improved if you disable the grid snap.
5. 02:47:472 (5,1) - I guess you did a mistake here with stacking.
6. 03:06:872 (1) - I think it would be better if you completely silence this spinner.

1. Reduce OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings.

1. 00:15:872 (5) - Maybe a new combo here would help since this is a jumpy pattern.
2. 00:22:072 (1) - This spinner feels too short even for a Hard difficulty.
3. 00:48:072 (7) - Same as Normal.
4. 01:52:472 (1) - This spinner feels too short even for a Hard difficulty.
5. 03:08:272 (1) - I think a long slider would fit more than a spinner here.
6. 03:21:072 (9) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change, also because otherwise it will be too long.

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~

1. Reduce OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings. fixed

1. 03:06:872 (1) - I think it would be better if you completely silence this spinner. silenced end of the slider
2. 04:01:272 (1) - Is the sliderwhistle on this slider intended? I kinda don't like it. was an accident, fixed

~Normal~

1. Reduce HP Drain by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings. okay

1. 00:48:072 (5) - New combo should go there, since the new section actually begins here, remove the next one afterwards. I'm doing a new combo every 2 white ticks, so I'll keep the NC where it is now unless more people suggest changing it
2. 01:27:672 (1,2) - The stack here could be improved if you disable the grid snap. tried my best ;_;
3. 01:43:472 (5,1) - I guess you did a mistake here with stacking. how2manual stack </3
4. 02:31:672 (1,2) - The stack here could be improved if you disable the grid snap. did my best haha
5. 02:47:472 (5,1) - I guess you did a mistake here with stacking. ^
6. 03:06:872 (1) - I think it would be better if you completely silence this spinner. silenced the end of slider

~Hard~

1. Reduce OD by 1 tick to balance with the difficulty settings. okay

1. 00:15:872 (5) - Maybe a new combo here would help since this is a jumpy pattern. will consider
2. 00:22:072 (1) - This spinner feels too short even for a Hard difficulty. lengthened it by 1/2
3. 00:48:072 (7) - Same as Normal. wll consider
4. 01:52:472 (1) - This spinner feels too short even for a Hard difficulty. mapped the section out
5. 03:08:272 (1) - I think a long slider would fit more than a spinner here. mapped it out
6. 03:21:072 (9) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change, also because otherwise it will be too long. makes sense, changed, and made consistent with other diffs

The end of each diff sounds a bit off to me, you might want to check that out. Really nice map! i'll take a look at it. Thanks!

1. Red - Unrankable
2. Purple - Highly recommended
3. Black - Just suggestion

• General

1. Unrankable check: Fine
2. Timing check: Fine
   
   Easy
3. 00:18:672 (2) - whistle in the beginning
4. 00:21:472 (2,3) - whistle
5. 00:32:072 - why don't you use green line to make a whistle here?
6. 00:32:472 - whistle move to 00:32:872 (3) -
7. 00:41:672 (2,3,4,1) -
   for a better looking

   
8. 01:06:072 (2) -
   change like this?

   
9. 02:33:472 (3) - delete whistle
   
   Normal
10. You use STR2 in Hard but STR1 in Normal, I think you can use STR2 in Normal too and make whistle suit the music better
11. 00:02:072 - whistle
12. 00:03:472 - ^
13. 00:04:072 - whistle move to 00:03:872 -
14. 00:05:272 - whistle
15. 00:06:672 - ^
16. 00:06:872 (5) - whistle move to 00:07:072 -
17. 00:10:272 - whistle
18. 00:15:072 - ^?
19. 00:15:472 - if you whistle at 00:15:072 - then here whistle too
20. 00:16:472 - whistle
21. 00:18:672 - ^
22. 01:07:472 (4) - move it a little left
23. 04:10:872 (1) - change to a 3/4 slider with two turning point?
    SPOILER

    
    
    Hard
24. 00:02:072 - to 00:10:272 - same as Normal
25. 00:15:872 (5) - NC?
26. 00:18:672 - whistle
27. 00:23:472 (1) - finish move to 00:23:672 -
28. 01:01:872 (1) - finish move to 01:02:072 -
29. 01:13:072 (6) - NC?
30. 01:24:872 (3) - move it to 232:192
31. 02:05:872 (1) - finish move to 02:06:072 -
32. 02:08:872 - missed whistle
33. 02:09:672 - ^
34. 02:09:272 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad looking
35. 03:45:872 (4) - move it to 176:116 then 03:46:472 (5,6) - to 100:88
36. 03:46:672 (6) - NC?
    
    Nice map, good luck~

OniJAM wrote:

Mod req from my queue~

1. Red - Unrankable
2. Purple - Highly recommended
3. Black - Just suggestion

• General

1. Unrankable check: Fine
2. Timing check: Fine
   
   Easy
3. 00:18:672 (2) - whistle in the beginning added
4. 00:21:472 (2,3) - whistle added
5. 00:32:072 - why don't you use green line to make a whistle here? added
6. 00:32:472 - whistle move to 00:32:872 (3) - done
7. 00:41:672 (2,3,4,1) -
   for a better looking

   
8. 01:06:072 (2) -
   change like this?

   
   done
9. 02:33:472 (3) - delete whistle done
   
   Normal
10. You use STR2 in Hard but STR1 in Normal, I think you can use STR2 in Normal too and make whistle suit the music better yea, might as well
11. 00:02:072 - whistle ok
12. 00:03:472 - ^ sounds odd
13. 00:04:072 - whistle move to 00:03:872 - k lol
14. 00:05:272 - whistle done
15. 00:06:672 - ^ ^
16. 00:06:872 (5) - whistle move to 00:07:072 - ^
17. 00:10:272 - whistle okk
18. 00:15:072 - ^? no, sorry D:
19. 00:15:472 - if you whistle at 00:15:072 - then here whistle too hmm, sounds a little odd
20. 00:16:472 - whistle not consistent with my whistle pattern
21. 00:18:672 - ^ already there
22. 01:07:472 (4) - move it a little left adjusted
23. 04:10:872 (1) - change to a 3/4 slider with two turning point? doing that for hard lol
    SPOILER

    
    
    Hard
24. 00:02:072 - to 00:10:272 - same as Normal ok
25. 00:15:872 (5) - NC? added
26. 00:18:672 - whistle done
27. 00:23:472 (1) - finish move to 00:23:672 - cymbals in the background, so no D:
28. 01:01:872 (1) - finish move to 01:02:072 - ^
29. 01:13:072 (6) - NC? no D: doing NC every 2 stanzas mostly
30. 01:24:872 (3) - move it to 232:192 kay
31. 02:05:872 (1) - finish move to 02:06:072 - cymbals are in the bg D:
32. 02:08:872 - missed whistle added
33. 02:09:672 - ^ ^
34. 02:09:272 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad looking messed up lol
35. 03:45:872 (4) - move it to 176:116 then 03:46:472 (5,6) - to 100:88
36. 03:46:672 (6) - NC? ehh will consider D:
    
    Nice map, good luck~ thaaanks~