baldrace wrote:

你好
from my queue 哈囉~!

easy

00:19:667 (2) 移到X304，Y212 后面两个slidder也要微调一下 好的

00:41:788 这个whistle 我觉得有点莫名 我也是
02:04:193 (3,4,1)大概是这种感觉 后面的slider向上弯一点 好的
02:18:813 (2)这个不用那么直，把尾端向右弯吧=w= 好的
03:11:788 (1)尾端的点移到X160，Y296 后面的稍微动了一下，可能需要调整2-3个slider 好的
03:22:610 (3)不好看啊，尾端到X188，Y280 好的

先看一下easy,吃饭了
okay~

hard

01:55:838(1) 尾端移到X400，Y148 或者干脆再往右歪一点 好的

03:13:307 这个whistle移到头部比较好？恩 先不換
01:01:534 去掉whistle ^
02:42:262 这边只加2的whistle是不是好一点好的


水平有限
只能找到那么多了

好歌好图

其实tag可以多加点

good luck
真是謝謝你啊!
:>!

pimpG wrote:

hi

m4m, hope its useful to you
hihi! it's very useful!
normal

thats my kind of normal diff <3
all looks on place, mostly hitsound sugestions
02:32:389 - two inherited points at the same time, its unrankeable issue. you must to remove one
fixed

1. 00:06:471 (1) - i hear cymbal at this tick, you should use finish instead of clap fixed
2. 00:07:610 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:09:509 - ^
4. 00:10:648 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:42:927 (1) - for the patterns you are using here, i think the clap at repeat is inconsistent, it sounds like we will hear this sound in every 2 or 4 beats since 00:43:307. unless you add this clap sound for the slider ticks of the next two sliders and/or adding circles to the empty white ticks using claps.
6. 00:52:041 (1) - i hear cymbal at this tick, you should use finish instead of clapfixed
7. 00:53:370 - ^
8. 01:19:383 - ^
9. 01:48:243 (3) - nazi. this slider shape is kinda random since you mostly used common slider shapes, make it a bit more like a " ~ ". its just my preference ofc. dont really have to fixed
10. 02:04:952 - same as 00:52:041 (1) - fixed
11. 02:06:281 - ^
12. 02:32:294 - ^
13. 02:38:370 - ^ lowering volume ofc fixed
14. 02:42:737 - ^
15. 02:52:041 (2) - remove clap at start. i hear no drum here, maybe use whistle fixed
16. 02:53:560 - finish maybe? fixed
17. 03:11:788 (1) - finish here, you added at 02:20:142 - and 01:07:231 (1) - fixed
18. 03:22:231 - finish maybe?fixed
19. 03:33:053 - ^
20. 03:34:383 - 03:34:762 - 03:35:142 - ^

hard

hard does not looks like to be even close to an insane, thats great!
02:32:389 - two inherited points at the same time, unrankeable issue .. you must to remove one
check what i said about finish in normal, i dont want to mention the same things again x.x fixed

1. 00:39:509 - here should be a clap. just like normal and insane, since its the same sound as 00:27:357 - 00:33:433 - 00:36:471 - . any reason to use whistle? fixed
   .......
2. 00:42:547 - missing clap. but i think i know what you wanted to do. fixed
   00:42:737 - having this tick empty sounds a bit wrong imo. its not so noticeable while playing, maybe its fine. just wanted to mention
   ....... yea i'll keep in mind
3. 00:53:370 (6) - nazi. its my own preferency, but i think this "~" shape does not looks good when its flipped horizontally. maybe try something like that http://puu.sh/2T13w.jpg fixed

insane

another clean diff. as spected from someone with 16 ranked beatmaps
same things as normal about finish

1. 00:06:471 - at normal, this tick is using clap, at hard and insane its empty. as i said before it would be better as finish.. fixed
2. 00:30:490 - please remove this note. there is nothing in the music, also this stream calls for a stack to 00:30:395 (4) - , please stack it to the circle at 00:30:585 - that would fit the pattern well following this unique characteristic in the song. yea this is actually intentional. I already know there's no sound there it's just that it plays smoother for me when I have a small stream here to lead into the next section
3. 03:10:648 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - spacing this stream like that makes me think that the two beats away (my eyes was reading it as something like this and it caused some misses) so i sugest you not space themyea this one is.. well I wanted to try something new so yea it's spaced like that lol

i guess thats it
looking forward to see this ranked. have my star. THANKS so much for detailed mod!! :>!

Rotte wrote:

Hi~ From m4m queue.
hihi Rotte!
[General]

1. Tick 1 is a good choice.

[Normal]
fixed

• Useless Green line

1. 00:18:623 - fixed
   
2. 00:42:832 - fixed
   
   
   
   Rhythm
   
   
3. None~
   
   
   Sound Effect
   
4. Fine.

[Hard]

• Useless Green line

1. 00:18:623 - fixed
   
2. 01:31:724 - fixed
   
   
   
   Rhythm
   
   
3. 00:07:231 (2) - ncfixed
   
4. 01:09:319 (7) - Using a 1/1 slider in this place can fit this music.fixed
   
   
   
   Sound Effect
   
   
5. 00:12:357 - Add a clap in the slider end?fixed
   

[Insane]

• Useless Green line

1. 00:18:623 - fixed
   
2. 00:42:832 - fixed
   
3. 01:31:724 - fixed
   
   
   
   Rhythm
   
   
4. 01:58:307 (1) - I recommend that this circle should be moved to 01:58:117 - ,it can fit this music.fixed
   
5. recommend01:57:737 (7,8) - 7 & 8 use a jump like this,and 01:58:307 - better block a beat
   
   
   Sound Effect
   
   
6. 00:20:712 (8) - This slider start can add s2-clap?And like this rhythm can add this sound effect.Like 01:33:623 (6) maybe not this one

Nice mapset!
:3
謝謝你啦!! !

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

Hi, MmC's mod. From PM.
hihi!
哇! 好快啊!
-Normal-

00:07:610 (2,3) - 對齊1(slider)的尾端 ? y 280 ok

00:20:142 (2,2) - 對齊2(slider)的尾端 ? y 220 ok

00:22:421 (2,3,1) - 這樣擺 ? ok

01:22:515 - 這邊這條綠線沒什麼用, 可以砍掉. ok

03:42:167 - 03:43:692 - 聽起來似乎這兩個地方才算完全結束, 也許可以改換為這兩個時間點作end. 喔 這我是故意的 因為我不想要spinner拉得太長

-finish-
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-Hard-

03:29:066 (6,7,8,1) -slider尾端與7,8,1的曲線可以更圓滑一些. ok

00:16:914 (4) - 這個紅點是..? 恩 有時候做slider我會用紅點因為比較直一點
01:56:408 (3) - 同上
02:00:205 (2,4) - 同上
00:12:167 (7) - 同上
00:12:547 (1,2) - 同上

01:22:515 - 這邊這條綠線沒什麼用, 可以砍掉. ok

01:35:902 (4) - 這個似乎沒放到clapfixed

-finish-
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-Insane-

01:22:515 - 這邊這條綠線沒什麼用, 可以砍掉.ok

01:49:762 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣擺 ?ok

02:22:610 (4,5,6) - 這樣擺 ? ok

02:23:180 (1,2,3,4) - 這樣擺 ? 這裡我重新擺了一下

-finish-
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Mod就到此結束
good song! (現在沒星 改天補射一顆>.<)
祝你好運 ♥

哇 真好! 不過沒事的 留著自己用吧! 不用刻意射星的
這麼快幫我mod.. 比我M4M的一些還不了債的還要快 真是神啊!
謝謝~!!