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The chin feels way too sharp and sticking out imo, and the lips feel overly thick, but that's only because I keep thinking it has to be anime-ish.

And yes that is much too skinny

Basically this.

Also, her hands are too large.
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Her arms are too long and stomach area is too small.
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Loginer wrote:
Could I get some honest critique on this? 4chan's telling me the proportions are too skinny, but I'd like a second opinion.

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Do you want a cartoony approach to it, or do you want her to actually look like a girl? Her torso looks more like a cylinder then an actual body, arms need to be 10-20% shorter, legs are not feminine. Its really weird and you should take a look at a real girl and perhaps take an approach that looks slightly more healthy and normal/real. I'd rather have a more realistic pippi then an anorexic twig pippi.
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Loginer wrote:
Could I get some honest critique on this? 4chan's telling me the proportions are too skinny, but I'd like a second opinion.


Definitely too skinny.

Arms are also a couple inches too long

There's a very uncanny-valley look to it, particularly with the clothing and skin texture.

The face also creeps me out. Possibly the shape of the mouth/jaw. It looks too narrow and distended. I'd suggest flushing it out a bit more, using models/images from video games as references.
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Her figure should be 2 heads wide, especially around her shoulders. I believe you have it around maybe a little more than 1 head wide but it's hard to tell from the angle. Her hands are too long and where her skirt ends is pretty much about the area that her crotch should be given the location of her tiny waist. Because her hips and thighs are not full enough, her legs are really skinny as a result and makes her resemble a little more like a trap than anything to me right now.

As for her facial features, I'd say move the mouth and nose up a little bit. It's up to you if you want to make the eyes a little smaller or prefer the really big Kanon-like eyes. Remember that the lips should be pushed a little further back than the nose or else she might possibly be confused with a chimpanzee. :(

- Wider shoulders and slightly more upper body mass (but not to the point of a manly figure, obv)
- Fuller hips (should bring out the butt figure as well and fill out the thighs more)
- Not as long/manly hands (NOT to be confused with smaller since you still need to stay in proportion with where a normal woman's arms should meet at the thigh)
- Bring the skirt down unless panty shots are your thing

Good job though. 3D modeling, especially manipulating polygons and such, can be pretty challenging. I'd recommend having bitmaps of a woman's figure (top, right, front) and setting them as the background in their respective camera views when you're modeling. I did this when I used to do 3D modeling as well, but for vehicles, and it works pretty well as a general guide.

tl;dr Feed her a little bit of American food
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Some of my work with osu mascot, pippy and other fanarts.
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should be the new pippi looks much better then the current one
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This is so Awesome :3 \m/
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boat wrote:
looks much better then the current one


that is the current one, as far as I can tell
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Then you quite clearly can't tell all that far.
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I can tell as far as the first 16 letters of the alphabet. That's over half of them. Good enough to pass
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Whats so wrong with the current one? Lack of ass...ets?
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big boobs would be bad character design for a dancer
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Woah wait a min, When did she become a dancer now?

Ohh forgot to add that assets are a good thing to have when taking the pole position if we're talking about "Dancing" XD
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I mean dancer in the cheerleader/pep-rally sense? I guess? Like the EBA or OTO doing their dances. Boobs just get in the way
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