1. Hard (4.79 stars, 311 notes)
2. Normal (3.23 stars, 164 notes)

Rewrite wrote:

[General]
use 1000 lead in? sure


[Normal]
OD+1 maybe better. I think current is enough

use some whistles maybe? only claps maybe boring 0 0 kinda dislike them in normal diff =3=


[Hard]
OD+1? yeah 6is enough in this song imo

00:53:285 (6) - maybe add a beat here? may think about this later

00:56:396 (6) - use finish instad of whistle? yeah maybe fine

01:31:952 (11) - use finish or clap here? sure

wcx19911123 wrote:

0.0

[General]
感觉offset=1502(-6)好点 k

[Normal]
01:17:952 (1,2,3,4) - 不弄六边形么0.0没想弄
01:31:728 (3) - unsnapped slider k
01:53:507 (1) - 这里blanket可以更好点 k
02:13:952 (5) - ^ k

[Hard]
00:17:285 (3) - ^ k
01:31:285 - 建议加NC，combo有点长而且正好spacing变了 k

这Hard的flow感觉有点微妙0.0..

jyc-Binggan wrote:

[general]
为何作图如此善良
[normal]
00:03:057 - 加note 改了一下
为何如此完美
[hard]
00:29:057 (6) - 换成note然后在00:29:279 - 加一个三连感觉好一些 感觉没太大必要
00:37:279 (1) - 建议在这放个小跳，这样好玩点，不然离前一个滑条太近了 稍微挪远了点不过这里空一个拍子额不会太远啊
00:51:501 - 加note，跟后面的电子音
00:53:057 - 去掉note，空一拍
00:53:279 - 加note，跟后面的电子音 这几个故意放空的
01:01:057 (8,9,10) - 这三个一组放个小跳跟后面叮叮叮的那个音啊 稍微动了一下


很好听的歌啊，祝rank

mintong89 wrote:

Mod from QQ

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
有些地方可以加这种clap音效 http://puu.sh/3gImO , 比如 00:08:168 (9) - 感觉没太大必要
Letterbox 去掉? 妹子的脚被遮住了 唔想想
话说感觉可以加SB... 做做也就是歌词 不知道做不做了因为歌词其实我也没很喜欢

[Hard]
AR-1? 虽然比较好玩但感觉对Hard 没问题就8了

00:05:279 - add a note, 感觉没加有点空虚感 唔不太喜欢
00:08:390 (10) - Drum的finish 好
00:29:390 (7) - 感觉直的会比较好好
01:01:501 (10) - +whistle好
01:35:279 - 这个可以用默认soft的clap好
01:38:390 (8,9) - 这个大丈夫? 没事

[Normal]

00:16:613 (2,3,4) - 这个不美, 感觉长形三角形会比较好看 唔感觉区别不大

SPOILER

good

GL~
又是个poor mod >v<

Megurine Luka wrote:

0.0占楼待编辑

妮妮I'm coming!

[G]

no, 除了音效感觉有点少以外ww 恩啊用的组简单的音效

[N]

00:22:835 (1) - +fin? 嗯
00:39:724 (4) - 感觉有点歪，是我的错觉么0.0 好像应该顺时针转一点？ 唔没觉得
01:04:168 (4) - 放在448 240 感觉是个更好的三角不过随意啦 唔这个弄走了blanket不好弄
01:04:613 (5) - 尾巴往里面收一点做个更好的包围01:05:946 (1) - 的0.0稍微动了下

[H]

00:14:835 (6,7,8,9) - 有点意外妮妮居然鬼畜了一小下 很简单啊
00:22:390 (6) - 好像这样好点 OK



感受到了妮妮的萌力

1. 01:18:390 (2,3) - i'd like to move the circle (2) onto x~330 y~363 and the next to x~429 y~350 for a symmetrical trapezoid.
2. 01:28:390 (3,4) - the blanket seems still not ideal for now. try to move the following notes (4,5) onto x~166 y~233?

Strawberry wrote:

[Normal]

1. 01:18:390 (2,3) - i'd like to move the circle (2) onto x~330 y~363 and the next to x~429 y~350 for a symmetrical trapezoid.
2. 01:28:390 (3,4) - the blanket seems still not ideal for now. try to move the following notes (4,5) onto x~166 y~233?

really not much to say. nice map.