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Tamura Yukari - Fantastic future (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Konei
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 15. Juni 2013 at 11:29:09

Artist: Tamura Yukari
Title: Fantastic future (TV Size)
Source: Hentai Ouji to Warawanai Neko
Tags: op opening nich95 nichiyouki
BPM: 172
Filesize: 16110kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,72 stars, 99 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 353 notes)
  3. Nich's Hard (4,96 stars, 245 notes)
  4. Normal (4,4 stars, 140 notes)
Download: Tamura Yukari - Fantastic future (TV Size)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Insane: by me
Hard: by Nichiyouki
Normal: by me
Easy: by me
Loooctav
First! i can make normal?
Topic Starter
Konei
Ehh, sorry, already started on it ><
Dark_Ai
Loooctav
=3=
Topic Starter
Konei

Dark_Ai wrote:

Kawaii :3
Dark_Ai
ikr :3 hab dir ein Stern gegeben :D
Topic Starter
Konei

Dark_Ai wrote:

ikr :3 hab dir ein Stern gegeben :D
Arigatouuu! ></
Umi
hi from M4M queue, i'm a new modder, maybe useless mod for you '-'

- Good mapset, no problem :3

[Easy]
  • - 00:00:697 (1) - Remove NC, no ?
    - 00:14:302 (3) - symmetry
    - 01:27:906 - add a circle
[Normal]
  • - 00:03:488 (1) - reverse slider
    - 00:04:534 (2) - start the slider at - 00:04:185 -
    - 00:52:150 (3) - start at 00:52:325 -
    - 00:53:022 (4) - delete
    - 00:54:941 (3) - start at 00:55:115 -
    - 00:55:813 (4) - delete
    - 00:58:953 (5) - NC
    - 00:59:302 (1) - remove NC
    - 01:15:697 (2,3,4) - reverse slider instead of those circles
[Hard]

general : - Really good map, but too overmapped for a hard song, sound like an insane (just my opinion ^^), delete some triplet could be better :3

  • - OD 6
    - 00:00:697 (1) - Remove NC
    - 00:19:883 (3,2) - stack
    - 00:50:929 - to 00:59:302 - (slow part) delete all the triplet
    - i didn't find others things, the rest is really good.
[Insane]

general: your streams are too long, it's an insane,ok. But you puts stream where there are no need (maybe i'm wrong)
*It's just suggestion to shorten stream

  • - 00:00:697 (1) - remove NC
    - 00:09:505 (3,5) - delete*
    - 00:14:040 (5,7,9) - delete*
    - 00:20:232 (1) - remove NC
    - 00:20:929 (4) - NC
    - 00:21:017 (5,7) - delete*
    - 00:21:627 (1) - remove NC
    - 00:37:238 (2) - this note is not necessary
    - 00:53:197 - add a circle
    - 00:55:988 - same here, stack with 00:54:767 (3) -
    - 01:05:755 (1,2,3) - slider reverse better i think.
That's all, hope this mod will help u :3
Goog luck o/
Topic Starter
Konei

-Umi- wrote:

[Easy]
  • - 00:00:697 (1) - Remove NC, no ? Nope, since the clap should stay on it's own as it plays before the downbeat.
    - 00:14:302 (3) - symmetry Uh, I don't understand what you mean o.o Slider and pattern are symmetrical.
    - 01:27:906 - add a circle yep, also added one on 01:27:557
[Normal]
  • - 00:03:488 (1) - reverse slider I'll deny since only vocal plays here and I'm not following it in this part.
    - 00:04:534 (2) - start the slider at - 00:04:185 - Nope, follows bells and beat.
    - 00:52:150 (3) - start at 00:52:325 - Why? Follows beat and vocal on it's current position.
    - 00:53:022 (4) - delete Since upper was denied, nope.
    - 00:54:941 (3) - start at 00:55:115 - Same as above
    - 00:55:813 (4) - delete ^
    - 00:58:953 (5) - NC Would break consistency.
    - 00:59:302 (1) - remove NC ^
    - 01:15:697 (2,3,4) - reverse slider instead of those circles Would play weird, boring and would be irretating.
[Insane]

general: your streams are too long, it's an insane,ok. But you puts stream where there are no need (maybe i'm wrong)
*It's just suggestion to shorten stream Uhh, I don't think I overmapped somewhere lol.

  • - 00:00:697 (1) - remove NC Same reason as in Easy.
    - 00:09:505 (3,5) - delete* Beats are there the whole time :< So nope.
    - 00:14:040 (5,7,9) - delete* High tones can be heard for sure lol, so I'm keeping them.
    - 00:20:232 (1) - remove NC Would be breaking consistency.
    - 00:20:929 (4) - NC ^
    - 00:21:017 (5,7) - delete* Beats are playing.
    - 00:21:627 (1) - remove NC Nope, since this is an emphasize to the vocals.
    - 00:37:238 (2) - this note is not necessary I'll keep it for now since it emphasizes the "Na" vocal in my opinion.
    - 00:53:197 - add a circle No sound here, so nope.
    - 00:55:988 - same here, stack with 00:54:767 (3) - Same as above.
    - 01:05:755 (1,2,3) - slider reverse better i think. Naah, plays cool to me c:

Thanks for modding!
Hazuki Watora
Hi~ from your M4M queue but I'm novice for modding so this don't be helpful..

[Easy]

00:35:232 (2) - How about this ?

00:45:348 (1,2) - like this ?

01:00:348 (2) - How about this ?

01:05:929 - How about add a note and clap?

01:20:232 (1,2,3,4) - How about this ?


[Normal]

00:19:534 (4,5) - like this, 00:20:581 (1) - remove NC and 00:20:232 (5) - NC ?

01:16:046 (3,4,5) - How about slider,slider,slider,note like 01:21:627 (3,4,5,6) - ?

01:26:860 (1) - hmm...this isn't fit with rhythm I think. How about this ?


[Nich's Hard]

00:04:708 (5,6) - How about this ?

01:05:668 - add a note?


[Insane]

01:05:581 - 01:05:668 - How about add a note ?
Topic Starter
Konei

Hazuki Watora wrote:

Hi~ from your M4M queue but I'm novice for modding so this don't be helpful..

[Easy]

00:35:232 (2) - How about this ? nope, to keep rhythm steady.

00:45:348 (1,2) - like this Same ?

01:00:348 (2) - How about this Diff is currently not that easy, I dont want to make rhythm harder here. ?

01:05:929 - How about add a note and clap? Good idea, done.

01:20:232 (1,2,3,4) - How about this Uhm, I don't see a problem with current rhythm, so I'm keeping it. ?


[Normal]

00:19:534 (4,5) - like this, 00:20:581 (1) - remove NC and 00:20:232 (5) - NC ? Looks a bit weird to me, I prefer mine.

01:16:046 (3,4,5) - How about slider,slider,slider,note like 01:21:627 (3,4,5,6) - ? Ah, ok, looks cool, but would make rhythm to complex in my opinion.

01:26:860 (1) - hmm...this isn't fit with rhythm I think. How about this Cool, changed rhythm.?


[Insane]

01:05:581 - 01:05:668 - How about add a note ? Awesome idea, added.

Thanks for modding :>
RikiH_
Hi, m4m from your queue!

General

You should add a spinner somewhere in Hard and Insane

Easy

00:17:441 (1,2,3) - The spacing is really strange, I'd also apply a ctrl+g on the second slider, like this:
This is the code, I fixed the spacing and improved the blanket for you:
257,205,17441,6,0,P|290:274|414:283,1,200,4|4,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,200,18488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
313,108,18836,2,0,P|417:122|456:200,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:33:836 (4,1) - This balnket is meh, try this:
If you need the code contact me in-game, I'm lazy at the moment :V
00:47:092 (4) - Make something like this, or at least fix the second curve!
If you need the code blah blah blah

Nothing more

Normal

00:25:813 (1,2) - Try to rotate the slider 9° anticlockwise and then move the note to 256|112 to fix the spacing!

Nich's Hard

00:52:150 (4,5) - Too nazi, it's also unreadable because the player thinks that it's 1/1, reduce a bit the spacing
01:10:813 (2,3,4,1) - Uhm, I don't know how to explain. Just try this code and tell me if you like it
344,316,70813,2,0,P|384:320|427:310,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,204,71162,2,0,L|352:132,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,120,71511,2,0,L|248:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,316,71860,6,0,P|424:312|480:272,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Insane

00:03:488 (1) - This shape is odd...
00:10:115 (10) - Move to 70|56. This way the stream will look better
01:01:395 (4,6) - The pattern in asymmetrical, 01:01:395 (4) should be in 412|48 and 01:01:743 (6) should be in 444|152
01:15:697 (4,5) - This is a bit ugly, you should re-arrange the pattern this way (with the NC on 5)
If you need the code blah blah blah. (Don't remember to fix the spacing of the following notes)

________________________________________

I tried to do my best, I posted my map in your queue.
Anyways, take a star. Good luck for ranking :D
Nichiyouki

-Umi- wrote:

[Hard]

general : - Really good map, but too overmapped for a hard song, sound like an insane (just my opinion ^^), delete some triplet could be better :3 I think that it really hard for this diff xD but it certainly isn't harder than Insane diff. Anyway, I will fix only some note that overjump

  • - OD 6 fixed
    - 00:00:697 (1) - Remove NC nope
    - 00:19:883 (3,2) - stack nope, if a note is hidden in slider end, it will be able to cause the players confuse to read.
    - 00:50:929 - to 00:59:302 - (slow part) delete all the triplet umm... I will consider again if anyone mention, since I have no idea lol
    - i didn't find others things, the rest is really good. Thank you >w<

Hazuki Watora wrote:

[Nich's Hard]

00:04:708 (5,6) - How about this ? eh... It isn't different from the original :? but I guess that do you want to switch these notes? but I no change :P

01:05:668 - add a note? nope, I just want to triplet, not stream, since it will be cause too hard for this diff.

RikiH_ wrote:

General

You should add a spinner somewhere in Hard and Insane I don't like to add it on this diff (I have no idea to add it, too.)

Nich's Hard

00:52:150 (4,5) - Too nazi, it's also unreadable because the player thinks that it's 1/1, reduce a bit the spacing fixed
01:10:813 (2,3,4,1) - Uhm, I don't know how to explain. Just try this code and tell me if you like it Okay, I like it owo
344,316,70813,2,0,P|384:320|427:310,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,204,71162,2,0,L|352:132,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,120,71511,2,0,L|248:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,316,71860,6,0,P|424:312|480:272,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Thank you everyone for your mod :)

http://puu.sh/2KXma.osu

@Konei : Don't forget add me (nich95 and Nichiyouki) in the tags all diffs, too.
Topic Starter
Konei
Will look at RikiH_'s mod later, thanks.


RikiH_ wrote:

Hi, m4m from your queue!

General

You should add a spinner somewhere in Hard and Insane It's really hard to find a fitting spot in the harder difficultys, therefore, I'll think about it.

Easy

00:17:441 (1,2,3) - The spacing is really strange, I'd also apply a ctrl+g on the second slider, like this: Changed spacing but ctrl + G flows really akward here in my honest opinion.
This is the code, I fixed the spacing and improved the blanket for you:
257,205,17441,6,0,P|290:274|414:283,1,200,4|4,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,200,18488,1,8,0:0:0:0:
313,108,18836,2,0,P|417:122|456:200,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:33:836 (4,1) - This balnket is meh, try this: Improved blanket a bit.
If you need the code contact me in-game, I'm lazy at the moment :V
00:47:092 (4) - Make something like this, or at least fix the second curve! Changed curve.
If you need the code blah blah blah

Nothing more

Normal

00:25:813 (1,2) - Try to rotate the slider 9° anticlockwise and then move the note to 256|112 to fix the spacing! Spacing is fine.

Insane

00:03:488 (1) - This shape is odd... nope, it gives a cool up going flow.
00:10:115 (10) - Move to 70|56. This way the stream will look better Sure why not.
01:01:395 (4,6) - The pattern in asymmetrical, 01:01:395 (4) should be in 412|48 and 01:01:743 (6) should be in 444|152 Fixed.
01:15:697 (4,5) - This is a bit ugly, you should re-arrange the pattern this way (with the NC on 5) Current angles flow much better in my opinion.
If you need the code blah blah blah. (Don't remember to fix the spacing of the following notes)

________________________________________

I tried to do my best, I posted my map in your queue.
Anyways, take a star. Good luck for ranking :D

Thanks for your modding! :3
Sorarei
Making difficult
Topic Starter
Konei

Reikosaka wrote:

Making difficult
Err, I dont know what you understood, but I am looking for mods, not for difficultys since the mapset is completed :<
Also, I had a look on the difficulty and patterns a pretty messy and bad overlapping and there are absolutely no hitsounds.
So sorry if you misunderstood me lol, but I wasn't intending to add any more diffs to this mapset though.
AnreFM
llo, mod here~ :D
sorry if it doesn't help :o

  • Easy
  1. Well, all symmetrical and all good, but manage to find this; 00:12:712 - move slider tail to x:176 y:120, not quite symmetrical
  • Normal
  1. 00:22:325 (6) - hmm, i suggest not to stack here but to make another pattern with the notes :v
  2. 00:29:302 (1) - these two sliders aren't quite symmetrical lol move middle dot to x:320 y:208
  3. 00:29:825 (2) - ^ move the middle dot to x:368 y:116
  • Nich's Hard
  1. 00:02:441 (5) - seems better to move this to x:436 y:256 then move the slider tail to x:340 y:196 to stack
  • Insane
  1. 00:20:232 (1) - seems better to move it to x:460 y276 and then 00:20:407 (2) - move to x:392 y:196 to stack
  2. 00:46:220 (4) - make it more patternal like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735092
  3. 01:01:918 (7) - same as above, this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735093 maybe?
Guess that's all, sorry if my noob mod doesn't help :o
Well, good luck :D
Topic Starter
Konei

AnreFM wrote:

llo, mod here~ :D
sorry if it doesn't help :o

  • Easy
  1. Well, all symmetrical and all good, but manage to find this; 00:12:712 - move slider tail to x:176 y:120, not quite symmetrical It's fine like it is now in my opinion.
  • Normal
  1. 00:22:325 (6) - hmm, i suggest not to stack here but to make another pattern with the notes :v Ehh, can't imagine anything, could you suggest something?
  2. 00:29:302 (1) - these two sliders aren't quite symmetrical lol move middle dot to x:320 y:208 Looks fine to me, doesnt have to be perfectly symmetrical.
  3. 00:29:825 (2) - ^ move the middle dot to x:368 y:116 Same.
  • Insane
  1. 00:20:232 (1) - seems better to move it to x:460 y276 and then 00:20:407 (2) - move to x:392 y:196 to stack Plays boring in my opinion.
  2. 00:46:220 (4) - make it more patternal like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735092 Pattern is made to go up and down for flow o3o.
  3. 01:01:918 (7) - same as above, this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/735093 maybe? Hm, moved the circle a bit, but pattern was already like that lol.
Guess that's all, sorry if my noob mod doesn't help :o
Well, good luck :D

Thanks for modding ><'
Fushimi Rio
I modded yesterday but put off submitting until today. Sorry.

[Easy]
00:00:348 (1) - delete.
00:00:697 (1) - move the end to 00:01:395 - is better, I think. The shape is fine.
00:07:325 (2,3) - What about make a blanket?
144,212,7674,2,0,P|160:292|332:252,1,300,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
You need to move 00:09:069 (1) - after that.
00:21:627 (3) - how about move the end to 00:22:325 - and remove the reverse?
00:25:813 (1,1) - hard for easy players.

[Normal]
00:04:185 - add a note here.
00:09:767 (2,1) - spinner is a bit close.
00:19:883 (5) - rhythm is not fit. you don't have to put rhythm after slider placement.
http://puu.sh/2LVMa.jpg
my advice is to delete 00:22:325 (6) - and move the stuffs, then add a note stack to head of 00:19:883 (5) -
00:31:918 (2) - I prefer not to follow the vocal here. like 00:36:976 (1,2,3) -
01:06:278 (1,2,3) - blanket is not perfect. I'm not good at it so can't give codes.
01:25:813 (1,2,3,4,1) - seems hard to play.

[Hard]
00:04:708 (5,6) - just use a slider on ⑤ is fine.
00:22:674 (2) - reverse arrow is partly stacked.
00:25:988 (5) - delete and move 00:26:162 (6) - to x212 y300
00:53:633 (2) - delete

[Insane]
00:14:389 (9) - delete and move00:14:476 (9,10,1) - to x205 y318
00:28:342 (6,7,8) - delete
00:40:639 (4,5) - x60 y164; x168 y180
00:40:813 (3,4) - delete ④ and stack ③ to ②
00:59:999 (3,4) - change to a slider.
01:01:220 (3,4,5,6,7) - use the polygon plz
01:04:883 (9,1,2,3,4,5) -
just for a joke :)
01:11:511 (4) - move to x0 y324

Hope could help.
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