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Jeff Williams - Red Like Roses (feat. Casey Lee Williams)

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Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Flower
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年3月28日 at 6:29:43

Artist: Jeff Williams
Title: Red Like Roses (feat. Casey Lee Williams)
Source: RWBY
Tags: Theme song ruby red white black yellow trailer Rooster Teeth roosterteeth
BPM: 70
Filesize: 24089kb
Play Time: 03:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.52 stars, 287 notes)
  2. Normal (2.98 stars, 166 notes)
  3. Ruby (4.83 stars, 453 notes)
Download: Jeff Williams - Red Like Roses (feat. Casey Lee Williams)
Download: Jeff Williams - Red Like Roses (feat. Casey Lee Williams) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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女朋友叫我去买鸡蛋饼，走到半路她发了个短信给我：“不要辣。”然后我就回去了（醒醒你哪有女朋友
First trailer song from Rwby. Good song, with changing rhythm, which increases the difficulty of timing (and playing, of course).
MP3 and timing are stolen from this mapset
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Normal
Hard
Ruby
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Fun Fact: Ruby was 4.5 Stars in editor.
Fun Fact 2: I made this to beat Kazami Yuuka, who has unfortunately stopped making his first map.
Fun Fact 3: Rwby is now on Youtube and other sites. Hurry and watch it!
Fun Fact 4: The diffs had been called Lapis, Jade Star and Pure Ruby because I love Rozen Maiden.
Fun Fact 5: tsuka is 2b.
Last edited by Flower , edited 32 times in total.
Seyren Windsor
92 posts
Joined December 2011
Seyren Windsor
Hi!, i am not an expert mod at osu!, i am better at mania but while looking at your map i saw a note from 01:37:024 to 01:37:324 that in my opinion didn't fit very well, maybe it's just me

Also i heared the song and i just loved it, i would like to ask you if i can make a osu!mania map for it ^^, in any keys and difficulty, i can make from a 4k easy thing to an impossible 8k map

i hope this little help does something and let me know what you think ^^
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Flower

LKSeyren wrote:

Hi!, i am not an expert mod at osu!, i am better at mania but while looking at your map i saw a note from 01:37:024 to 01:37:324 that in my opinion didn't fit very well, maybe it's just me

Also i heared the song and i just loved it, i would like to ask you if i can make a osu!mania map for it ^^, in any keys and difficulty, i can make from a 4k easy thing to an impossible 8k map

i hope this little help does something and let me know what you think ^^
I agree with that this part does not fit but I'm afraid the part's bpm is very unstable.
I'd like to ave a GD but I maybe put this in pending in very few days. Sorry about that.
Azer
World Cup Organiser
1,107 posts
Joined December 2012
Azer
Timing check from #modreq.


Seyren Windsor
92 posts
Joined December 2011
Seyren Windsor

Flower wrote:

LKSeyren wrote:

Hi!, i am not an expert mod at osu!, i am better at mania but while looking at your map i saw a note from 01:37:024 to 01:37:324 that in my opinion didn't fit very well, maybe it's just me

Also i heared the song and i just loved it, i would like to ask you if i can make a osu!mania map for it ^^, in any keys and difficulty, i can make from a 4k easy thing to an impossible 8k map

i hope this little help does something and let me know what you think ^^
I agree with that this part does not fit but I'm afraid the part's bpm is very unstable.
I'd like to ave a GD but I maybe put this in pending in very few days. Sorry about that.
Oh no problem :), if you change your mind PM me and it will be done in a few hours
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
先把你的发出来再说
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Flower

qq944364487 wrote:

先把你的发出来再说
我有早发了

先射一波星
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
这真的要pending？
这怎么看都是要成为一代传说的艺术作品
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Sagisawa-Yukari



[General]
红色：必须遵守
蓝色：只是建议

[Lapis]
AR,OD-1
00:37:704 (3) - 再多加一次折返
01:05:347 (1) - 不结束在01:08:132 - ？
01:26:224 - add circle？
02:19:484 (1) - 滑条头finish？


[Jade Star]
OD+1，太容易SS了
01:17:374 (3) - 和前面的2太挤了下移一格
02:19:484 (1) - 滑条头finish？

[Pure Ruby]
01:30:574 (5) - 不和01:29:974 (3) - 完全重叠上么？
01:52:184 (3,4) - 3和4的位置换一下？
02:19:484 (1) - 我觉得这里还是要加个默认的finish
02:35:460 (10,11,12) - 怎么这三个间距感觉和前面岔开不一样了？另外combo数到12也太吓人了，这里也不是连打的地方，建议02:31:429 (6) - NC一下
03:02:588 (1) - 滑条头finish？总感觉少了什么

laopojiayou
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
DakeDekaane
Hi :3
Summoned here because M4M

[General]

[Lapis]
01:36:274 - How about doing this, actually your 3/2 slider sounds a bit weird

02:23:684 (2) - Maybe open the curve to the other side, it'd look better imo.

[Jade Star]
I enjoyed this so much.

[Pure Ruby]
00:54:632 (1) - I'd suggest to remove this note, it's a bit sudden as it is in 3/4.
Also I felt that some of the triples in the beginning (after the 70BPM part) you use are overmapped, but maybe it's just me.

This mapset looks so good, sorry for being short ;n;
Good luck o/
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Flower

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi :3
Summoned here because M4M

[General]

[Lapis]
01:36:274 - How about doing this, actually your 3/2 slider sounds a bit weird Hmm, I think there is some other problems rather than 3/4. Keep at the moment

02:23:684 (2) - Maybe open the curve to the other side, it'd look better imo. Good idea

[Jade Star]
I enjoyed this so much.

[Pure Ruby]
00:54:632 (1) - I'd suggest to remove this note, it's a bit sudden as it is in 3/4. I just follow the vocal
Also I felt that some of the triples in the beginning (after the 70BPM part) you use are overmapped, but maybe it's just me.

This mapset looks so good, sorry for being short ;n;
Good luck o/
Thank you~
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Rotte
整个谱面，喜欢音效，喜欢排版，不喜欢梗，
此kd只为排版和音效，


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最关键是什么都摸不出来
quantum-rose
quantum-rose
wpcap
简直神图 巨臂夫妻
根本没啥好摸的吗！
[General]
clap声有点大 建议改一下wav文件

[Jade]
01:41:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 音效听着好别扭
02:06:434 (2) - 粘上了


[pure]
00:34:275 (1,2) - 不太好看
00:41:132 (1) - 这也是 看着像8分休止符 建议画圆一点
00:53:132 (3) - 可以更扭的
02:26:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 建议NC一下，同一combo内加血很少

no kds plz
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi


Pure ruby

  1. 00:34:370 (1,2) - 不好看 建议重做
  2. 01:08:656 (1) - 能不能把sliderslide留下tick去了
  3. 01:30:675 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/949172
  4. 01:42:711 (1,2) - 这两个拉开
  5. 02:25:443 - add note(?
  6. 02:13:293 (4) - 用和1一样的形状比较好
  7. 02:37:296 - 在这里加一串
  8. 美丽
Jade star

  1. 02:10:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 为什么要这样233
  2. 我不会mod了
Lapis

  1. 好饿, 没什么问题, 我不mod了
  2. 不是lapis lazuli吗
  3. 然后我书一下啊难度星数的算法是只算第一个红线的BPM的, 就是70, 而你的主体是200BPM
  4. 结果就是你这个三星比普通的三星图要难不少, 四暗刻
最后祝你身体健康
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Flower

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi


Pure ruby

  1. 00:34:370 (1,2) - 不好看 建议重做 为毛要重做 我微调了一下 现在应该好一些
  2. 01:08:656 (1) - 能不能把sliderslide留下tick去了 我改成了很低的volume 不过不知道能不能rankable 我等bat来看
  3. 01:30:675 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/949172 您好这个是有概率的我故意藏起来的 反正能看见
  4. 01:42:711 (1,2) - 这两个拉开 移动了一点
  5. 02:25:443 - add note(? 跟前面统一 所以不加 加速的效果 感觉从最后再加比较好 比较友善
  6. 02:13:293 (4) - 用和1一样的形状比较好 改了这里要remap 我现在风格狂抄dear you 要是做的话就改不会去了
  7. 02:37:296 - 在这里加一串 先加了下试试 要是被喷了只好再改回去
  8. 美丽
Jade star

  1. 02:10:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 为什么要这样233 四暗刻 应该是x1.1的我忘记调绿线了
  2. 我不会mod了
Lapis

  1. 好饿, 没什么问题, 我不mod了
  2. 不是lapis lazuli吗
  3. 然后我书一下啊难度星数的算法是只算第一个红线的BPM的, 就是70, 而你的主体是200BPM
  4. 结果就是你这个三星比普通的三星图要难不少, 四暗刻
最后祝你身体健康
Thank you for modding~
Chloe
1,160 posts
Joined April 2011
Chloe
pure ruby

00:29:977 (4) - add
00:42:727 (3) - 00:42:834 (4) - add

00:48:084 (1) - 这边重音似乎没对上 timing有问题?

01:38:696 (3) - delete
01:38:847 (4) - add
02:13:218 (3) - delete
03:03:300 (3,4,5,6) - 换成3，6，4，5试试


no kds this post
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
自射狂人扶老二
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[Pure Ruby]
  1. 00:27:513 (1) - 这一段不加点Whistle吗?...或者弄一些很小声的clap
  2. 01:08:656 (1) - 其实在play的时候我看这朵花感觉右边肥了...
  3. 01:15:534 (1,2) - 嗯红线滑条打的时候没感觉一到edit界面就强迫症想改掉
  4. 01:16:134 (3) - 加个N：1clap？
  5. 01:37:261 - 这段最好就是取消01:37:113 (3) - 的尾巴clap
    然后不要漏掉01:37:261 -这个音，然后给这里的物件加clap
    另外我觉得
  6. 01:37:113 - 可以加个Whistle
  7. 01:53:493 (1) - 这个滑条尾的Whistle感觉可以去掉
  8. 02:09:693 (5) - 这一段全程都很紧凑，但这里我觉得这样放不太好了，稍微有点空
  9. 02:37:296 (4,5,6,7,8) - 以我的习惯来看，感觉0.2x好看点
[Jade Star]
  1. 02:15:093 (1) - 不暂停下来我还以为你没下东西,感觉这clap加了会听不出。不过问题不大
  2. 03:07:200 (4) - 感觉改成noet更合适
[Other]
  1. 傻了吧我也有star
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
hi :3
from ur req
all suggestions

[Lapis]

aibat
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
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00:50:656 (2) - may u up or down slider's end? it will look nicer, imo
01:01:799 (1,2) - may u change form these sliders?
01:20:184 (1) - 1-2 grid right?
01:58:893 (2,2) - may u up or down slider's end? it will look nicer, imo
02:22:293 (3) - ^
02:34:467 (1,2) - why not same form as 02:30:555 (1,2)?

[Jade Star]

aibat
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why so many summeric sliders at the beginning?
i know, u can make it more interesting
01:19:284 (1) - 2nd point - x:256, y:168

[Pure Ruby]

aibat
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01:08:656 (1) - THIS FLOWER ;W;
cool diff o.o
cool hs o.o

sorry
i can't find anything else ;_;
good luck, hana-san :о
N E K O
159 posts
Joined September 2010
N E K O
实在抱歉虽然昨天高高兴兴的接了mod req，今天兴高采烈的看了半天打了半天。
但是结局是我现在跪在椅子上不知所措.
实在摸不出东西，也没有什么更好的建议。
甚至连test play都只有一个字作为感想“好爽”

临帖涕零，不知所云。

唯一的一个建议是pure ruby难度里面的大量往返等距离的跳，可以试试看变距离以及移动的方向稍微往不同方向拉伸.
比如像frost常用的那种跳梗。感觉会更爽一点。
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